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Orangestar - Kimi no Yozora Shoukaihan

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kanor
924 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2020年2月11日 星期二 at 上午 11:19:20

Artist: Orangestar
Title: Kimi no Yozora Shoukaihan
Tags: ia vocaloid asu [_abhor_] -Sunflower- Hakurei Yoru Awaken アスノヨゾラ哨戒班 Lobelia Japanese lobelia sunflower
BPM: 185
Filesize: 5815kb
Play Time: 02:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2.67 stars, 317 notes)
  2. Awaken's Nekawa (6.05 stars, 850 notes)
  3. Insane (4.7 stars, 632 notes)
  4. Lobelia's Hard (3.63 stars, 507 notes)
  5. Normal (1.92 stars, 190 notes)
  6. sunflower's Insane (4.88 stars, 585 notes)
  7. Yoru's Extra (5.93 stars, 775 notes)
Download: Orangestar - Kimi no Yozora Shoukaihan
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#16 Ranked


君が笑う再会の夜空
Changed BG
Normal by me
Advanced by me
Abhor's Hard by Abhor
Insane by me
sunflower's Insane by - Sunflower -
Yoru's Extra by Hakurei Yoru
Awaken's Nekawa by Awaken
Hitsound by DreaM117er(Yoru's Diff by himsellf)
Last edited by kanor , edited 85 times in total.
ShigeruNinja
4 posts
Joined December 2015
ShigeruNinja
I like this map but I think the insane diff circle number should be 1-10. 200+ sometimes make it unreadable.

I hope this map will be rank :D
kanor
924 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

ShigeruNinja wrote:

I like this map but I think the insane diff circle number should be 1-10. 200+ sometimes make it unreadable.

I hope this map will be rank :D
yeahhhhhhh This map is under working(i forgot to new number ths Insane diff...so sorry!
Hope it can rank too!
Hakurei Yoru
688 posts
Joined September 2013
Hakurei Yoru
http://pan.baidu.com/share/link?shareid ... 2801957656

赶紧飞
X Light
456 posts
Joined August 2012
X Light

kanor wrote:

ShigeruNinja wrote:

I like this map but I think the insane diff circle number should be 1-10. 200+ sometimes make it unreadable.

I hope this map will be rank :D
yeahhhhhhh This map is under working(i forgot to new number ths Insane diff...so sorry!
Hope it can rank too!
为什么一个HK人和一个CN人要说英语呢...
_MiaoFUuU_
314 posts
Joined April 2014
_MiaoFUuU_

Timing

  1. 00:33:212 - 这条预览线插好
  2. 00:34:347 - 在这里插红线
  3. 01:17:319 - ↑
  4. 02:11:643 - ↑
  5. 02:31:913 - ↑

    估计NC和节奏都要改一下了
kanor
924 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

X Light wrote:

为什么一个HK人和一个CN人要说英语呢...
嗨呀，这是最气的.jpg
Yorita Yoshino
370 posts
Joined April 2014
Yorita Yoshino
[general]
看下AI
[insane]

  • 00:18:455 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 可以放得再有梗一点
    00:29:320 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 感觉应该按照同一个方向旋转？类似于00:28:347 (2,3,4) - 这种感觉的
    01:40:185 (4,5) - flow有点不对劲
    给人有点不敢塞的感觉，最后高潮也没大间距，像是略微放大间距的hard :?
[ana]

  • 怎么没有kiai线
    00:18:455 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏不统一
    00:28:834 (1,2,3,4) - ^
    重复歌词的地方都有这个问题
    00:29:158 (2,3,4,5,6) - 跟比较大的背景音？
    00:46:347 (2,3,4,5,6) - 不知道为何感觉这个跳很奇怪
    00:54:617 (3) - 这里insane跟串吧
    01:56:725 (5,6,7,8) - ^
    02:30:617 (4,5,6) - ^
    02:06:131 (4) - 这个间距我报警了啊
    最后那段没细看，节奏好像有点问题
    然后
    00:01:104 (2,4) - 没包好
    00:10:671 (1,1) - ^
    01:47:969 (6,1) - ^
    00:14:401 (2,3,4,1,2) - 00:23:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:47:158 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:52:996 (5,1,2,3,4) - 00:55:590 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:56:807 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:58:185 (3,4,5,6,7) - 00:59:482 (3,4,5,6,7) - 01:10:023 (4,5,6,7,1) - 01:14:969 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 02:10:834 (2,3,4,5,6) - 02:13:590 (3,4,5,6,1) - 02:23:807 (7,8,9,10,1) -
    求求你五边形不要用手放............ :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: 左上角的作图里有一个添加多边形圆圈，这些地方都可以用
gl :)
Binguo
308 posts
Joined April 2015
Binguo
:lol:
[EASY]
00:07:924 (3) - 120bpm以上的歌 1/2的节奏在这个难度里面是不能用的
00:25:437 (4) - 应该向上 建议左上
00:39:545 (1) - 同第一条 相同的不提了
01:09:545 (3) - 请避免重叠
02:01:437 (4) - 和上面一样这个太反人类了(新人) 直接重叠都比这个好

[Abhor's Normal]
01:28:509 (2,3) - 这个看不明白

[Insane]
00:22:834 - 不管怎么这个节奏还是不要漏吧
00:55:104 (6) - 太近
01:22:509 (1,2,3,4) - 别和前一组重在一起把 不好看
01:47:320 (4,5,6) - 这个视觉间距怎么和↑面一样 建议换换
01:57:212 (5,6) - 这个挺.....不知道怎么表达反正改一下吧至少别这样贴住

[Awaken's Nekawa]
00:31:104 (3) - 这里就和前面保持一致吧
高难度不怎么会看就这样吧美丽
kanor
924 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

-ClariS- wrote:

[general]
看下AI
[insane]

  • 00:18:455 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 可以放得再有梗一点 改了一点，不知道算不算有梗（）
    00:29:320 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 感觉应该按照同一个方向旋转？类似于00:28:347 (2,3,4) - 这种感觉的 逆flow拉开DS强调一下kiai
    01:40:185 (4,5) - flow有点不对劲 类似同向滑条强调存在感啦....
    给人有点不敢塞的感觉，最后高潮也没大间距，像是略微放大间距的hard :?
本来想得就是比Hard难一点......毕竟我后面还有个in她塞得比我满.....

Binguo wrote:

:lol:
[EASY]
00:07:924 (3) - 120bpm以上的歌 1/2的节奏在这个难度里面是不能用的 这个地方还是觉得保留更舒服，毕竟曲子节奏是这么摆的
00:25:437 (4) - 应该向上 建议左上 感觉没什么必要，懒
00:39:545 (1) - 同第一条 相同的不提了 ^
01:09:545 (3) - 请避免重叠 我觉得这里就是要贴一点才好看.....
02:01:437 (4) - 和上面一样这个太反人类了(新人) 直接重叠都比这个好 ^


[Insane]
00:22:834 - 不管怎么这个节奏还是不要漏吧 fixed
00:55:104 (6) - 太近 fixed
01:22:509 (1,2,3,4) - 别和前一组重在一起把 不好看 fixed
01:47:320 (4,5,6) - 这个视觉间距怎么和↑面一样 建议换换 不是很懂这个是什么意思......
01:57:212 (5,6) - 这个挺.....不知道怎么表达反正改一下吧至少别这样贴住 好
- Angelia
118 posts
Joined August 2013
- Angelia

-ClariS- wrote:

[general]
看下AI
[insane]

  • 00:18:455 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 可以放得再有梗一点
    00:29:320 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 感觉应该按照同一个方向旋转？类似于00:28:347 (2,3,4) - 这种感觉的
    01:40:185 (4,5) - flow有点不对劲
    给人有点不敢塞的感觉，最后高潮也没大间距，像是略微放大间距的hard :?
[ana]

  • 怎么没有kiai线 hit都还没来得及加
    00:18:455 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏不统一 √
    00:28:834 (1,2,3,4) - ^ √
    重复歌词的地方都有这个问题
    00:29:158 (2,3,4,5,6) - 跟比较大的背景音？√
    00:46:347 (2,3,4,5,6) - 不知道为何感觉这个跳很奇怪√
    00:54:617 (3) - 这里insane跟串吧√
    01:56:725 (5,6,7,8) - ^ √
    02:30:617 (4,5,6) - ^√
    02:06:131 (4) - 这个间距我报警了啊√
    最后那段没细看，节奏好像有点问题
    然后
    00:01:104 (2,4) - 没包好√
    00:10:671 (1,1) - ^√
    01:47:969 (6,1) - ^√
    00:14:401 (2,3,4,1,2) - 00:23:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:47:158 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:52:996 (5,1,2,3,4) - 00:55:590 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:56:807 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:58:185 (3,4,5,6,7) - 00:59:482 (3,4,5,6,7) - 01:10:023 (4,5,6,7,1) - 01:14:969 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 02:10:834 (2,3,4,5,6) - 02:13:590 (3,4,5,6,1) - 02:23:807 (7,8,9,10,1) -
    求求你五边形不要用手放............ :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: 左上角的作图里有一个添加多边形圆圈，这些地方都可以用
这里改了两处 原因是我不会用
gl :)

---------------------

苦涩 :(
领导我找不到BN飞图啊我真aji :(
Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia

Binguo wrote:

:lol:
[Abhor's Normal]
01:28:509 (2,3) - 这个看不明白这里跟的人声，我觉得人声过渡这里比较好
Gyro Zeppeli
94 posts
Joined January 2014
Gyro Zeppeli
水摸一波
Easy
01:18:617 - 不塞个break time？

Insane
00:14:401 (3,4,5) - 建议4换5

-Ana's Insane
00:07:752 (1,2,3,4,5) - 长得有点怪啊...稍微大点间距改改如何？

00:55:104 - 这段30%好像太小声了，40%-50%这样好一点，后面这个地方也大声点

02:11:158 (7,10) - 这两个稍微出来点

Yoru's Extra
00:34:185 (3) - 可以上去点

02:37:428 (1,2) - 觉得互换好点

阿瓦啃的摸不动，GG
起飞又是神图，GL
kanor
924 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Gyro Zeppeli wrote:

水摸一波
Easy
01:18:617 - 不塞个break time？好

Insane
00:14:401 (3,4,5) - 建议4换5 这里和前面的排列一样，4和5这样摆是为了强调小跳


起飞又是神图，GL
thx（ :)
pw384
2,286 posts
Joined January 2012
pw384
via forum pm

mod info:
Black: Suggestions.
Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.



[General]
  1. 码率320kbps是unrankable的，需要调整到小于等于192kbps


[Nekawa is Awaken backward]
  1. 00:07:266 (1,2,3,4) - lead-in部分间距没必要那么大吧
  2. 00:52:185 (6,7,1) - 这个钝角跳和第一个kiai的整体风格不搭配
  3. 01:14:563 (1) - 倒转方向更好玩！！！
  4. 01:31:590 (1,4) - {nazi} 弧度可以一致
  5. 01:39:374 (6) - NC，然后01:40:023 - 取消NC
  6. 01:46:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 根据音乐这里没有玩变距的必要
  7. 02:31:185 (1) - map掉比较好
  8. 02:47:320 (4,1,2,3) - 有点难打
  9. 02:50:563 - 这串连打到这里就应该停下了，所以我建议去掉02:50:644 (8) - 然后02:50:725 (9) - 做一个跳


[Yoru神的Extra]
  1. AR9就够用了
  2. 00:20:563 (3) - 和前面的7叠着略坑，间距还突然变小，所以放在1的上方要好一些
  3. 00:21:212 (1) - 移到x=352,y=64，这样的话00:21:212 (1,2,1) - 的直观感觉会比较顺畅
  4. 00:26:401 - 可以在下一个滑条的开头加上一个note
  5. 00:55:104 (1) - 这个slider最好调整速度到0.9x，拿来做一个过渡，不然00:55:915 (3) - 就太坑了。0.9x是这么来的：√((1.1^2+0.65^2)/2)=0.903
  6. nice diff


[-Ana's Insane]
  1. 00:31:915 (1) - 加一下new combo
  2. 00:23:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - 相对平和的地方不适合大间距，这里直接按照五边形的画法就可以了
  3. 00:34:347 - kiai应该从这里开始（根据instrument来判断）
  4. 01:04:185 (1) - 没blanket好
  5. 01:06:779 (1) - 最好换一种滑条样式，前后的滑条都没有棱角而这个有棱有角，不太搭配
  6. 01:32:077 (3) - blanket
  7. 01:40:996 (1,2,3,4,5) - 个人意见是这里不太适合摆连打。要摆的话把间距缩小一点
  8. 02:07:752 (2,3) - blanket
  9. 02:10:509 - kiai
  10. 02:18:131 (4,5,6) - 这个节奏非常别扭，5没有跟任何的轨
  11. 02:31:104 - 连打到此就应该结束，所以要把02:31:185 (12) - 删掉然后前后做一个小跳
  12. 02:32:401 (5,2) - blanket
  13. 02:36:293 (3,4) - blanket
  14. 音效没下完啊


[Insane]
  1. 00:09:698 (1,3) - 没叠好
  2. 00:16:185 (1) - 最好不要忽略掉00:16:347 - 的音
  3. 00:22:509 (2,3) - 没叠好
  4. 00:53:158 (4,1,2) - 五角星里突然来一个直线小跳有点坑
  5. 01:20:077 (2,4) - 贴得太紧了 不美观
  6. 01:23:482 (4,1) - 01:25:752 (3,4) - 这两组note在距离上是一样的，但是时间间隔却不同，个人感觉有点别扭
  7. 01:23:807 (1,2) - blanket
  8. 01:32:563 - 漏了Sampleset Normal音效
  9. 02:09:861 (5) - 减速滑条加NC


[Abhor's Normal]
  1. 00:10:185 (5,6) - 这里的时间间隔是3/2拍，而此前的所有stack了滑条的circle与前一个物件的间距都是1/1拍，在Normal里很容易引起误读，尽量避免
  2. 02:10:509 - 加Kiai


    这个难度我不仔细摸了，指出几个问题：
    第一个问题比较重要。二、三是后话了

  3. 一是跟轨的问题，00:11:158 - 之前以及kiai的开始到00:53:320 - 很明显只跟人声，而在00:53:644 (1,2) - 处却跟了鼓，把00:53:807 - 00:54:131 - 的人声忽略了。这样跳换音轨对Normal玩家很不友好，而且听上去也会很别扭、音效也加不好。01:32:563 (3) - 也是同理。

  4. 二是排版的问题。现在全图是按转圈圈的方式铺开的（可以看一看00:55:104 - 01:15:698 - ，这段比较典型，一连转了若干圈逆时针）。这样的flow导致排版就显得集中于中心而放不开、空间利用度低、打着也缺乏一定的趣味性。

  5. 三是滑条样式的选择。全图的滑条样式感觉比较随便，虽然大部分对于flow的实现到位，但滑条前后在直观上却没有紧密地联系在一起，以02:40:996 (5,1,2,3,4) - 为例，瞬间让人产生滑条4的样式选择并没有经过仔细考虑的感觉。


美丽
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Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
M4M

[General]
MP3码率太高...另外这曲子似乎有几个1/3还是1/6的样子，没仔细听

[Easy]
00:39:050 (3,1) - 在easy里不太好吧...我觉得这个BPM的easy应该避免1/2 gap，而且你不止用了一处..有点危险

01:56:239 (3,4,1) - 避开了所有的vocal，但是这几个鼓点也不是很明显呀...跟鼓点的话试试这样，一连串的1/4鼓点用一个长滑条来表示
http://puu.sh/qyHlR/d3b6071708.jpg
光标在 - 01:56:888 -

[Insane]
00:16:185 (1) - 呃？这个长滑条直接把finish盖过去了，肯定会被吐槽的..
http://puu.sh/qyHvG/82f82c8071.jpg
至少也要这样：
http://puu.sh/qyHxW/beb8cd0b62.jpg

00:55:023 - 听起来这里是七连的，感觉漏了个圈

02:31:023 - 跟上面类似，而且这个后面跟转盘之间的间隔和 - 00:55:023 - 的不一样

[-Ana's Insane]
00:16:185 (1) - 跟上面一个难度类似，不建议用长滑条把finish盖过去

01:41:807 (7) - ^

00:29:158 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 听起来全部偏移了1/2的样子
http://puu.sh/qyI6A/14b7cfeb15.jpg
光标在 - 00:29:158 - ，这里跟电吉他比较好

00:53:644 (8,9,10) - 这鼓点很适合做成1/2圈的跳

02:35:320 (8,9) - 8是不是应该是1/2滑条..

你在kiai自己加的三连太乱，希望能做得有结构一点

[Awaken's Nekawa]
00:44:725 (1) - 感觉这个减速不合曲，kiai开始的这个重音没理由减速，后面的类似

太可怕，摸不动

gl
kanor
924 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Lily Bread wrote:

M4M

[General]
MP3码率太高...另外这曲子似乎有几个1/3还是1/6的样子，没仔细听

[Easy]
00:39:050 (3,1) - 在easy里不太好吧...我觉得这个BPM的easy应该避免1/2 gap，而且你不止用了一处..有点危险 主要是曲子的重音被提前了，那个音必须压到，怎么做都避开不了1/2干脆就这么摆了......

01:56:239 (3,4,1) - 避开了所有的vocal，但是这几个鼓点也不是很明显呀...跟鼓点的话试试这样，一连串的1/4鼓点用一个长滑条来表示
http://puu.sh/qyHlR/d3b6071708.jpg
光标在 - 01:56:888 - 感觉差不多，1.5难度感觉差不多了，再降点难度有点危险，干脆先保留吧

[Insane]
00:16:185 (1) - 呃？这个长滑条直接把finish盖过去了，肯定会被吐槽的..
http://puu.sh/qyHvG/82f82c8071.jpg
至少也要这样：
http://puu.sh/qyHxW/beb8cd0b62.jpg OK

00:55:023 - 听起来这里是七连的，感觉漏了个圈 改了

02:31:023 - 跟上面类似，而且这个后面跟转盘之间的间隔和 - 00:55:023 - 的不一样 fixed



gl
THX for 摸得！ :)
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
明天过来摸吧。今天活动室被占用了，现在的桌板活摇活甩的，打图简直了。。。（我不会告诉你我刚刚打红白的diff只有69.66%的acc= =，都快失去摸的信心了。。）
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
或者把easy的名字改成normal，normal改成advanced就行了（
四维相应稍微提高一点
[Crz]Makii
450 posts
Joined November 2014
[Crz]Makii
xixi
[Easy]
  1. 00:07:104 (2,3) - 有点别扭,试试这个 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5834090 2和3 不要有竖直位移
  2. 00:48:779 (2) - 前面跟了一些1/2 vocal,这不跟就感觉很奇怪。拉到前面红线然后延长1/2不错
  3. 01:21:212 (1) - 。我是觉得没必要 这样也可以吧 都行
  4. 01:34:185 (1,2) - 这个overlap不大好,前面都没盖来盖去的
  5. 02:07:915 - 转盘完全可以这时候开始的，前面可以多做一点。
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:050 (5,1) - 00:04:347 (5,1) - 考虑到你这么放了几个地方，00:05:320 (3,1) - 这里就应该增大间距，要不然别人又以为1/2。 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5834131
  2. 01:25:915 (4) - NC下吧，显示变了节奏
  3. 02:09:861 (5) - 变速NC
[Ana]
  1. hp6好一些
  2. 00:08:401 (5) - NC考虑？
  3. 00:26:239 (1,2,3,4) - 间距小一点好，这里节奏还是比较轻
  4. 00:26:725 (4) - NC，节奏变重了
    妈呀，怎么都不愿意下多NC，我看到圈数字上10就害怕
  5. 00:55:104 - 我考。好像直接听不见音效了，这不大好吧
  6. 01:56:725 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2) - 这个 感觉是Extra的东西，01:57:536 (1,2) - 有点太远了，近一些比较好
  7. 02:10:509 (5) - NC，这么大个重音不NC。。。
  8. 02:44:807 (8,9) - 这个拆分 报警的节奏 建议拉近
  9. 02:46:834 (1,2,3) - 这里都overmap了吧，感觉很不好
md 最近都没时间碰电脑 抱歉只摸三个难度啦
kanor
924 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

[Crz]Sword wrote:

xixi
[Easy]
  1. 00:07:104 (2,3) - 有点别扭,试试这个 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5834090 2和3 不要有竖直位移 感觉差不多哦，不改啦
  2. 00:48:779 (2) - 前面跟了一些1/2 vocal,这不跟就感觉很奇怪。拉到前面红线然后延长1/2不错 因为easy里1/2的地方我只放了重音提前的地方，其他的地方不敢放......毕竟是esay
  3. 01:21:212 (1) - 。我是觉得没必要 这样也可以吧 都 那就不改了
  4. 01:34:185 (1,2) - 这个overlap不大好,前面都没盖来盖去的 为了组成三角XD
  5. 02:07:915 - 转盘完全可以这时候开始的，前面可以多做一点。
猴√
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:050 (5,1) - 00:04:347 (5,1) - 考虑到你这么放了几个地方，00:05:320 (3,1) - 这里就应该增大间距，要不然别人又以为1/2。 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5834131 OK
  2. 01:25:915 (4) - NC下吧，显示变了节奏 √
  3. 02:09:861 (5) - 变速NC
可

md 最近都没时间碰电脑 抱歉只摸三个难度啦
谢谢大保健丫丫 :)
Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia

384059043 wrote:

via forum pm


[Abhor's Normal]
  1. 00:10:185 (5,6) - 这里的时间间隔是3/2拍，而此前的所有stack了滑条的circle与前一个物件的间距都是1/1拍，在Normal里很容易引起误读，尽量避免
  2. 02:10:509 - 加Kiai


    这个难度我不仔细摸了，指出几个问题：
    第一个问题比较重要。二、三是后话了

  3. 一是跟轨的问题，00:11:158 - 之前以及kiai的开始到00:53:320 - 很明显只跟人声，而在00:53:644 (1,2) - 处却跟了鼓，把00:53:807 - 00:54:131 - 的人声忽略了。这样跳换音轨对Normal玩家很不友好，而且听上去也会很别扭、音效也加不好。01:32:563 (3) - 也是同理。

  4. 二是排版的问题。现在全图是按转圈圈的方式铺开的（可以看一看00:55:104 - 01:15:698 - ，这段比较典型，一连转了若干圈逆时针）。这样的flow导致排版就显得集中于中心而放不开、空间利用度低、打着也缺乏一定的趣味性。

  5. 三是滑条样式的选择。全图的滑条样式感觉比较随便，虽然大部分对于flow的实现到位，但滑条前后在直观上却没有紧密地联系在一起，以02:40:996 (5,1,2,3,4) - 为例，瞬间让人产生滑条4的样式选择并没有经过仔细考虑的感觉。


美丽
我会慢慢改的，因为我以前做NORMAL都在对鼓，第一次碰到这种人声鼓很多错开来的，有点不知所措，导致就作混乱了QWQ真的这曲子NORMAL做起来不太友好，然后很多鼓点强的让我没办法忽视


先这样QWQ这个曲子我着实不是很会做，如果实在不行建议你删掉它
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66,184,139915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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kanor
924 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

384059043 wrote:

via forum pm

mod info:
Black: Suggestions.
Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.



[General]
  1. 码率320kbps是unrankable的，需要调整到小于等于192kbps


[Insane]
  1. 00:09:698 (1,3) - 没叠好 fixed
  2. 00:16:185 (1) - 最好不要忽略掉00:16:347 - 的音 fixed
  3. 00:22:509 (2,3) - 没叠好 fixed
  4. 00:53:158 (4,1,2) - 五角星里突然来一个直线小跳有点坑 感觉还好吧.....感觉挺爽的，不想改......
  5. 01:20:077 (2,4) - 贴得太紧了 不美观 fixed
  6. 01:23:482 (4,1) - 01:25:752 (3,4) - 这两组note在距离上是一样的，但是时间间隔却不同，个人感觉有点别扭 恩，统一了一下DS
  7. 01:23:807 (1,2) - blanket fixed
  8. 01:32:563 - 漏了Sampleset Normal音效 fixed
  9. 02:09:861 (5) - 减速滑条加NC
fixed
THX 384 god
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
迟到了。

Awaken

  1. 00:21:698 - 00:26:239 - 这里有几次将音量切换到5%，然而并没有对应物件。大概这几个圈都是1/2滑条改来的？删去多余的绿线吧。
  2. 00:34:023 (2) - 删掉怎么样？这里没鼓点。
  3. 02:46:185 (5,6,7) - 节奏上，按照当前的音效的话，我觉得可以把5和6两根滑条拆成单点，搞成一个五连，最后用短滑收尾。这样听起来比较搭，也比较爽。

红白：看来看去，感觉如果我来挑你的刺，多半会把神图搞得不神了的。。

Ana

  1. 01:04:996 (5,6) - 这里明显是三声鼓嘛，干嘛不直接拆成单点呢？
  2. 02:02:077 (1,2,1,2,3) - 这几个物件的组合感觉有点过难。同一个地方，这个摆的比红白diff里那个还难接。。建议把间距缩小到3.0x到3.2x，这个样子。
  3. 02:45:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3) - 建议这样下节奏：（图）
  4. 02:50:563 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这里既没跟到乐器也没跟到鼓啊。。。跟乐器的话应该拿滑条头去压贝斯的音，跟鼓点就是一个串了。

Kanor's Insane

  1. 01:11:401 (3) - 这个物件明显没安对地方吧。。。往后放1/4排。
  2. 01:11:401 (3,4) - 建议ctrl+G
    看着有种亲切的感觉，有些习惯跟我有点接近。

如果你觉得没啥帮助，这篇就不算m4m好了。祝你好运
kanor
924 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Adol Christin wrote:

Kanor's Insane

  1. 01:11:401 (3) - 这个物件明显没安对地方吧。。。往后放1/4排。 啊这里是按错了QWQ，改了
  2. 01:11:401 (3,4) - 建议ctrl+G 好
    看着有种亲切的感觉，有些习惯跟我有点接近。

如果你觉得没啥帮助，这篇就不算m4m好了。祝你好运
THX for mod，link给我吧 :)
Pravaris
6 posts
Joined August 2016
Pravaris

Kanor's Insane


  1. 02:12:779 (5) - I noticed you place a clap at every snare hit and there's one missing here
  2. 02:36:779 (2) - Cymbal crash in the song here, maybe add a hit sound like Finish?
  3. 02:37:428 (2) to 02:41:320 (5) - Snare hit here so I think there should be a clap sound
  4. 02:41:969 - 02:43:266 including inside the slider 02:43:266 - Every 2 beats starting from 02:41:969 has a snare hit, maybe add a clap sound?
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin

kanor wrote:

THX for mod，link给我吧 :)
暂时没图。。。待我做完一张了一定回来找你。
Prophecy
1,794 posts
Joined December 2013
Prophecy
勾搭大佬 射一个星
-C O N T R A L-
143 posts
Joined October 2015
-C O N T R A L-
Mod from my Queue~
Awaken's Nekawa
00:21:050 (7,8,9) - Maybe place them more randomly like this
click
00:52:185 (6,3) - Fix blanket (Maybe with the 00:51:536 (2) - )
00:54:617 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Just a suggestion but maybe a curved stream? Or something else?
01:05:969 (3,1) - Maybe blanket
01:14:239 (6,1) - ^
01:48:131 (7,8) - Maybe move them a bit more down and let the 01:47:482 (3) - Slider lap over like u did here 01:47:644 (4,6) -
01:48:131 (7,1) - Fix blanket
Why do you use here stacks (01:57:536 (1,2,1,2) - ) and make here streches (02:00:131 (1,2,1,2) - ) That makes no sense because the beat is not changing, nothing special. Make 01:57:536 (1,2,1,2) - to streches.
02:15:536 (1,2) - Its not recommended to use Kicksliders after Normal sliders. You can use a kickslider and then a normal slider but not like this, its weird for the player.
02:18:942 (6,8) - Blanket

I just modded the Custom diff because its late and im kinda tired. Hope its okey :) Love the song, good luck with your Mapset!
kanor
924 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Pravaris wrote:

Kanor's Insane


  1. 02:12:779 (5) - I noticed you place a clap at every snare hit and there's one missing here fixed
  2. 02:36:779 (2) - Cymbal crash in the song here, maybe add a hit sound like Finish? fixed
  3. 02:37:428 (2) to 02:41:320 (5) - Snare hit here so I think there should be a clap sound fixed
  4. 02:41:969 - 02:43:266 including inside the slider 02:43:266 - Every 2 beats starting from 02:41:969 has a snare hit, maybe add a clap sound?OK
THX for mod!><
Hakurei Yoru
688 posts
Joined September 2013
Hakurei Yoru
让不让人体会改摸的乐趣了
09kami
828 posts
Joined August 2010
09kami

09kami wrote:

form HW群

煤油下CB颜色
Audio file bitrate is too high.
audio.mp3 320kbps
Difficulties end time is not consistent:
00:41:644 - Hard
02:36:293 - Easy
02:51:860 - Abhor's Normal
02:52:671 - -Ana's Insane
02:52:671 - Insane
02:52:509 - Yoru's Extra
02:52:671 - Awaken's Nekawa

[Awaken's Nekawa]
有两根很诡异的绿线
Timings:
00:11:158
02:10:509

Ranking Criteria - Timing

No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.

[Yoru's Extra]

02:18:131 - 这根绿线没对齐时间轴

AIMOD里有6个没对齐时间轴的滑条结尾
02:16:420 - Slider end
02:16:582 - Slider end
02:16:744 - Slider end
02:51:471 - Slider end
02:51:633 - Slider end
02:51:795 - Slider end

[-Ana's Insane]

00:00:780 - 开头的红线和绿线必须处于同样的音效组

懒 就这样吧
- Angelia
118 posts
Joined August 2013
- Angelia

09kami wrote:

09kami wrote:

form HW群

煤油下CB颜色
Audio file bitrate is too high.
audio.mp3 320kbps
Difficulties end time is not consistent:
00:41:644 - Hard
02:36:293 - Easy
02:51:860 - Abhor's Normal
02:52:671 - -Ana's Insane
02:52:671 - Insane
02:52:509 - Yoru's Extra
02:52:671 - Awaken's Nekawa

[Awaken's Nekawa]
有两根很诡异的绿线
Timings:
00:11:158
02:10:509

Ranking Criteria - Timing

No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.

[Yoru's Extra]

02:18:131 - 这根绿线没对齐时间轴

AIMOD里有6个没对齐时间轴的滑条结尾
02:16:420 - Slider end
02:16:582 - Slider end
02:16:744 - Slider end
02:51:471 - Slider end
02:51:633 - Slider end
02:51:795 - Slider end

[-Ana's Insane]

00:00:780 - 开头的红线和绿线必须处于同样的音效组 (√)

懒 就这样吧
- Angelia
118 posts
Joined August 2013
- Angelia

[Crz]Sword wrote:

xixi
[Easy]
  1. 00:07:104 (2,3) - 有点别扭,试试这个 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5834090 2和3 不要有竖直位移
  2. 00:48:779 (2) - 前面跟了一些1/2 vocal,这不跟就感觉很奇怪。拉到前面红线然后延长1/2不错
  3. 01:21:212 (1) - 。我是觉得没必要 这样也可以吧 都行
  4. 01:34:185 (1,2) - 这个overlap不大好,前面都没盖来盖去的
  5. 02:07:915 - 转盘完全可以这时候开始的，前面可以多做一点。
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:050 (5,1) - 00:04:347 (5,1) - 考虑到你这么放了几个地方，00:05:320 (3,1) - 这里就应该增大间距，要不然别人又以为1/2。 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5834131
  2. 01:25:915 (4) - NC下吧，显示变了节奏
  3. 02:09:861 (5) - 变速NC
[Ana]
  1. hp6好一些
  2. 00:08:401 (5) - NC考虑？√
  3. 00:26:239 (1,2,3,4) - 间距小一点好，这里节奏还是比较轻√
  4. 00:26:725 (4) - NC，节奏变重了√
    妈呀，怎么都不愿意下多NC，我看到圈数字上10就害怕
  5. 00:55:104 - 我考。好像直接听不见音效了，这不大好吧
  6. 01:56:725 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2) - 这个 感觉是Extra的东西，01:57:536 (1,2) - 有点太远了，近一些比较好
  7. 02:10:509 (5) - NC，这么大个重音不NC。。。
  8. 02:44:807 (8,9) - 这个拆分 报警的节奏 建议拉近
  9. 02:46:834 (1,2,3) - 这里都overmap了吧，感觉很不好
√
md 最近都没时间碰电脑 抱歉只摸三个难度啦
改(re)的一干二净 我都不知道以前是什么样子了
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