hey! m4m
[General]
i don't think you're using soft-hitfinish so you should remove that
[Normal]
clean diff. a bit of inconsistent hitsounds here and there tho.
00:12:012 (1) - from the way ur hitsounding shouldn't 00:12:762 (2) - have the whistle instead of 00:12:012 (1)
00:59:512 (1) - the way u hitsounded these was with a whistle on the end, instead of whistles on both start and end. i dont see the need to deviate from this as beginners will get the response they anticipate when playing the map.
01:11:512 (1,3) - ^ whistle on slider end instead of start
01:22:512 (3,4,1) - you could make this a triangle so the overlap between 01:23:262 (4,1) - is more apparent and flow is slightly improved
01:31:512 (3) - this slider shouldn't be hitsounded. see 01:28:512 (3) - 01:34:512 (3) - as examples
01:40:512 (2) - i think you missed a sound on the 1/2. i guess its ok to miss this but you could easily make this a 1/2 slider to include it
[Hard]
seems u copied hitsounds over. maybe apply my suggestions to other diffs too if you agree with them
01:11:012 (3,4,1) - u should rearrange this so the slider flows into the next
http://puu.sh/qkCDt/36a15aef57.jpg01:20:262 (2,3) - maybe ctrl + g this rhythm as the vocals are starting on the sliders end
01:32:262 (2,3) - ^
[INORI]
00:48:512 (3,1) - i honestly think ds is too much here. the vocal should be emphasised the most 00:49:512 (1) - yet you mapped the buildup with more ds
01:45:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i dont think u should use jumps as big in a calmer part of the song :/
01:47:012 (3,4) - and this jump seems way to large too
gl!