From my Q!
I see you've been increasing the OD of each diff by 2 but the hard,right now is like: Easy 3, Normal 5, Hard 6 and Insane 8
Should't be better? : EZ: 3.5 NM: 5 HR: 6.5 IN: 8 ?
In other words, Ez + 0.5 OD and HR + 0.5 OD for a difference of 1.5+ OD on each diff.
-Remove "Clasroom crisis" in the tags, as is already in the source
-Add "Karen" and "Clara" to the tags!
00:15:093 - Note here and:
00:15:308 - Note here, don't ignore the voice here when you're mapping it later, also, a simple 2 notes stack to slider plays well.
00:17:879 (2,1) - Stack 1 tail with 2 head
00:21:522 (1) - In my opinion, a new combo should go here, specially when is such a weird looking slider and the it fits the song because the change of stream to hold up.
00:34:808 - This should be a note, it plays MUCH better than just a the ending of the reverse arrow, you could add a bit of DS seeing as the voice is stronger than the rest of the part, shame to not use it for a note
00:39:522 (1,2,3,4) - This could play better if 00:21:522 (1) - was a slider and 00:21:522 (1) - and 00:21:522 (1) - notes, like this:
This way you're using in a more efficient the voice
00:43:593 - Missing a note here, it keeps the player moving and it follows the voice
01:05:022 (5,1) - get rid of these 2 silent sliders, they don't play well and they are not properly following the voice, try 01:05:022 - this being a note and 01:05:236 - slider here and another note 01:05:665 - here, like this:
From to 01:18:736 (5,1) - same theory here, these 2 silent sliders are not good to play because the strong beat is in the tail, and even the voice start
delete them and do this:
01:18:736 - Note here
01:18:950 - 01:19:165 - Slider here
01:19:379 - Note here.
It plays much more intuitive
Rest of the map looks awesome! also I really like how clean your map looks!
00:03:522 - No reason for new combo to be here, if anything, I would:
00:04:165 - New Combo here, yes, red tick, but you could use it as a way to make emphasis on the stop 00:03:950 - here and also, it looks good!
00:07:808 (1) - Remove new combo, yes, there is an addition to the strong beat, but is still the same kind of sound as the sliderbefore it
00:09:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you're gonna go with this, first of all, good luck, second, reduce the DS, the music is not as strong here (well the background is, but NOT the sound used for the stream)
00:23:665 (7,8,1) - What are you exactly using as base for this MASSIVE DS here? try listening this compared to 00:25:379 (7,8,1) - , this second segment has a stronger voice than the first one, and is still ALMOST the same DS, try reducing overall the DS of 00:23:665 (7,8,1) - because doesn't make sense for it to be so large when nothing is happening.
01:06:522 (4,1,2) - try removing this for:
01:06:522 - note
01:06:736 - Note (silent slider plays kinda... awful)
01:06:950 - 01:07:165 - Slider here (using the voice as base)
01:11:879 (7,2) - Stack slider tail with 7
01:23:665 (2,3) - Higher DS, the last note is on a really strong sound, you could go a bit "crazier" here (just don'tgo TOO crazy tho xD)
Really good map , fun to plays besides those silent sliders and stuff, but still, I can totally see it ranked <3
See ya! (sorry if a link or time copy doesn't work, I'm rusty)