not sure whether i can bring something in really
but lets see
period blood
00:06:043 (1) - why dont u make this a returning slider as well, should be able to put more emphasis on the piano that this is probs mapped to
00:15:181 (2,3,4) - idk if possible but maybe you can make these look a bit like this so it'll look just that little bit nicer
00:28:284 (2,3) - why isn't this stacked normally now seems weird to me
00:32:939 (1,2) - imo these shouldnt be stacked as the rest of the section hasnt got anything stacked either
00:43:112 (1) - maybe remove NC, it seems not needed at all, not sure about 00:43:284 (1) - either
00:56:560 (2) - o god whistle on slider body isnt there anything else you can do ;w; (counts for others as well)
01:02:077 (2,3) - why not stack em!
01:04:836 (2,3) - uh this blanket is a bit off
01:15:871 (1,1,1) - NCs may be removed here, no SV change or other sound to indicate it too, it's mapped to the exact same sound yaknow
01:17:595 (1,1,1) - same for these
01:20:698 (6) - idk feels better when u use ctrl+g imo
01:54:319 (1,2) - with these sounds I'd expect more of a SV increase instead of decrease, think about it
02:00:181 (1) - remove NC no new sound!
02:01:215 (1,2,3,4) - wouldnt make this increase this much tbh, i get the emphasis but it doesnt need to be harder than blue zenith + hr
02:03:974 (2) - ctrl+g to lead it better to 02:04:146 (3) -
02:17:422 (1) - tihs slider breaks the circular flow you had first ;w; maybe change shape or at least ctrl+g it
02:25:008 (1,2,3) - we need different spacing between (1,2) because these different rythms will make it very hard to read otherwise
02:46:388 (1,2) - you can make this a little like this so the note isn't completely hidden ;w;
02:58:629 (4) - nah double negative flow is a no go so ctrl+g
03:17:595 (1) - s a m e ass before
03:49:836 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why is the spacing of the stream lower while the sound only gets stronger???
04:00:353 (1) - you got it
04:18:457 (1,2,3,4) - i dont believe this has to be this hard of a spacing, scaling it down 0,9x would be nice
05:18:112 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - every slider has another SV right? you can NC all of these
for the rest just repetitive errors u can fix urself tbh
map is anyhow fun to play! it looks nice too
gl with this map!
but lets see
period blood
00:06:043 (1) - why dont u make this a returning slider as well, should be able to put more emphasis on the piano that this is probs mapped to
00:15:181 (2,3,4) - idk if possible but maybe you can make these look a bit like this so it'll look just that little bit nicer
00:28:284 (2,3) - why isn't this stacked normally now seems weird to me
00:32:939 (1,2) - imo these shouldnt be stacked as the rest of the section hasnt got anything stacked either
00:43:112 (1) - maybe remove NC, it seems not needed at all, not sure about 00:43:284 (1) - either
00:56:560 (2) - o god whistle on slider body isnt there anything else you can do ;w; (counts for others as well)
01:02:077 (2,3) - why not stack em!
01:04:836 (2,3) - uh this blanket is a bit off
01:15:871 (1,1,1) - NCs may be removed here, no SV change or other sound to indicate it too, it's mapped to the exact same sound yaknow
01:17:595 (1,1,1) - same for these
01:20:698 (6) - idk feels better when u use ctrl+g imo
01:54:319 (1,2) - with these sounds I'd expect more of a SV increase instead of decrease, think about it
02:00:181 (1) - remove NC no new sound!
02:01:215 (1,2,3,4) - wouldnt make this increase this much tbh, i get the emphasis but it doesnt need to be harder than blue zenith + hr
02:03:974 (2) - ctrl+g to lead it better to 02:04:146 (3) -
02:17:422 (1) - tihs slider breaks the circular flow you had first ;w; maybe change shape or at least ctrl+g it
02:25:008 (1,2,3) - we need different spacing between (1,2) because these different rythms will make it very hard to read otherwise
02:46:388 (1,2) - you can make this a little like this so the note isn't completely hidden ;w;
02:58:629 (4) - nah double negative flow is a no go so ctrl+g
03:17:595 (1) - s a m e ass before
03:49:836 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why is the spacing of the stream lower while the sound only gets stronger???
04:00:353 (1) - you got it
04:18:457 (1,2,3,4) - i dont believe this has to be this hard of a spacing, scaling it down 0,9x would be nice
05:18:112 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - every slider has another SV right? you can NC all of these
for the rest just repetitive errors u can fix urself tbh
map is anyhow fun to play! it looks nice too
gl with this map!