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oki this is long ;w; ill try to mod all XD
GL
EDIT : increased the AR to 9.2, cuz you got tracing slider track style in some part =w=
oki this is long ;w; ill try to mod all XD
- [oky this is fking long...]
- 00:26:510 (5) - why not NC on here, you did it at 00:23:775 (1) - tho
- 00:31:980 (7) - NC here, cuz it seems like you NC on the start of every measure
- 00:35:057 (3,5) - not perfect stack
- 00:36:425 (2,4) - hmm why only here is 1/1 slider, felt inconsistent to me, the music here sound the same as 00:30:613 - 00:33:348 - 00:34:715 - , so why not change these 1/1 sliders to 1/2 instead?
- 00:54:202 - decreased the volume here, sound way too loud since there is no obvious sound to support this sliderend
- 01:22:237 (2,1) - is this not stack for propose ?
- 01:27:707 (3,4) - make the spacing 3>4 bigger to emphasized more on 4, just like what you did at 01:38:647 (3,4) -
- 01:52:664 (1,2) - not perfect stack
- 02:20:527 (2,3,4,5,6) - the original is kinda ugly since is overlap, why not put the stream here instead
- 02:32:834 (2,3,4,5,6) - make the spacing same as 02:32:150 (2,3,4,5,6) - or 02:31:467 (2,3,4,5,6) - for consistent
- 03:14:885 (2,3,4) - why dont just make this all stack, seems inconsistent to me tbh, cuz the spacing here was completely different
- 04:20:012 (1) - not necessary NC imo
- 05:47:533 (4,5) - although is fine but ill make the spacing bigger, cuz is better to play :3
- 05:52:832 (3) - is this kickslider for any propose ? felt inconsistent to me and this sound weird since even i slow down to 25% there was no sound i can hear at 05:52:918 -
- 06:03:773 (3) - same
- 06:15:909 (4,7,1) - not perfect stack
- 06:23:431 (1,3) - ^
- 06:38:473 (1,2,3) - the rhythm here should be like this
- 08:39:839 (7,1) - inconsistent spacing with 08:23:428 (4,1) - 08:24:797 (7,1) - 08:26:164 (7,1) - etc..
- 10:07:532 (4,5,6) - flow would be better if you ctrl + g imo
- 10:16:420 (1,2) - spacing here was different with 10:13:685 (1,2) - and 10:15:053 (1,2) -
- 11:17:360 - 11:28:300 - i think add a note here would sound perfect owo, like 11:34:881 (9,10,1) -
- 11:56:078 (1,2) - 11:56:762 (1,2) - i prefer ctrl + g at these 2 part, cuz the angle 11:55:907 (2,1,2) - and 11:56:591 (2,1,2) - is quite big and it's a bit hard to play for players
- 15:00:350 (1,2,3,4) - suggest to make the spacing bigger since the spacing is similar with 1/2
- 19:29:750 (1,5) - not perfect stack
- 19:42:570 (4,1) - ^
GL
EDIT : increased the AR to 9.2, cuz you got tracing slider track style in some part =w=