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Kondom Varuhuset - Kondomvaruhuset.se [Osu|CatchTheBeat]

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Firetruck
1,011 posts
Joined July 2015
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Firetruck
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 23 oktober 2017 at 18:37:40

Artist: Kondom Varuhuset
Title: Kondomvaruhuset.se
Tags: Mapper RyoKazuka - Magic Bomb - condom swedish svenska reklam ad advertisement commercial meme extended version
BPM: 125
Filesize: 1075kb
Play Time: 00:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Large Hard (2,6 stars, 103 notes)
  2. Mapper's XXL (3,82 stars, 131 notes)
  3. MBomb's Baby Rain (3,23 stars, 138 notes)
  4. Ryo's Medium Advanced (1,77 stars, 63 notes)
  5. Small Normal (1,5 stars, 47 notes)
Download: Kondom Varuhuset - Kondomvaruhuset.se
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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WARNING: Explicit Content 18+
1kr för 10 kondomer!

smh last time a swedish song got ranked was in 2012.. I WILL CHANGE THAt

by me
by RyoKazuka
by me
by Mapper
Last edited by Firetruck , edited 89 times in total.
headphonewearer
788 posts
Joined October 2014
headphonewearer
nice meme
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Artist:KondomVaruhuset
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Creator:Arizi
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Seaweed
359 posts
Joined November 2014
Seaweed
NM from queue. Hopefully i can get this condom song out of my head by modding other maps
[condom]
00:00:752 (3,4) - Too far from slider end, it's confusing
00:13:592 (3,4) - the time between these two is really short so I recommend moving the slider closer
00:16:112 (2,3) - ctrl g, for better flow
00:20:072 (2) - ^
ok i notice there's no kiai, I think you really should have one and I'd put it from 00:15:752 (1) to 00:23:192 (8)

[hard]
00:04:232 (2) - overlap
00:09:752 (4) - ^
00:11:912 (1) - I think this should be a straight slider instead and make it point a little higher
00:19:592 (1) - line it up with 00:19:352 (4)

[normal]
00:18:152 (2) - overlap
00:24:392 (2) - it goes out the screen. fix pls


[easy]
00:11:432 (1) - theres nothing to map here, instead of slider just put a circle where the end of the slider is
00:26:312 (1) - align with 00:25:832 (4) pls

[Beginner]
should be called Beginner collab
00:09:992 (2) - easy shouldn't have wub slider

Nice short map! Good luck!
headphonewearer
788 posts
Joined October 2014
headphonewearer
[condom]
00:00:752 (3,4) - Too far from slider end, it's confusing yeah fixed
00:13:592 (3,4) - the time between these two is really short so I recommend moving the slider closer fixed
00:16:112 (2,3) - ctrl g, for better flow makes it worse imo
00:20:072 (2) - ^ going for an inverted kickslider here :P
ok i notice there's no kiai, I think you really should have one and I'd put it from 00:15:752 (1) to 00:23:192 (8) i added kiai but ended it at 00:28:952

thanks for modding!

code
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Artist:KondomVaruhuset
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Source:Kondom.se
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Firetruck
1,011 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Firetruck

Seaweed wrote:

NM from queue. Hopefully i can get this condom song out of my head by modding other maps
[condom]
00:00:752 (3,4) - Too far from slider end, it's confusing
00:13:592 (3,4) - the time between these two is really short so I recommend moving the slider closer
00:16:112 (2,3) - ctrl g, for better flow
00:20:072 (2) - ^
ok i notice there's no kiai, I think you really should have one and I'd put it from 00:15:752 (1) to 00:23:192 (8)

[hard]
00:04:232 (2) - overlap
00:09:752 (4) - ^
00:11:912 (1) - I think this should be a straight slider instead and make it point a little higher
00:19:592 (1) - line it up with 00:19:352 (4)

[normal]
00:18:152 (2) - overlap
00:24:392 (2) - it goes out the screen. fix pls


[easy]
00:11:432 (1) - theres nothing to map here, instead of slider just put a circle where the end of the slider is
00:26:312 (1) - align with 00:25:832 (4) pls

[Beginner]
should be called Beginner collab
00:09:992 (2) - easy shouldn't have wub slider

Nice short map! Good luck!

ty, fixed it
headphonewearer
788 posts
Joined October 2014
headphonewearer
no kudosu xd hitsounds klara nu

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Lilyanna
1,918 posts
Joined March 2016
Lilyanna
BANG MOD from in game reqs
Easy

check aimod
00:27:752 (1) - spinner is not snapped and better end here imo 00:29:672 -
Normal

00:13:592 - imo dont ignore this strong beat
00:08:072 (1) - remove nc
00:08:552 (2) - nc here
00:10:472 (1) - remove nc
00:13:832 (1) - remove nc
00:19:112 (1) - remove nc
00:21:992 (1) - remove nc and swap nc here 00:22:952 (2) -
00:27:272 (1) - remove nc no need
00:27:992 (1) - why it ends at blue tick end it here 00:29:672 - sounds better to me
Hard

00:00:872 - make these clickable they r rly strong beat is better and kinda there is a beat on blue tick here 00:01:712 - so try this see if it works because it sound better for me
bang
00:03:272 - u skip ignore strong beat here x( try make it clickable u can trythis ( u dont have to just an example)
00:07:592 - u ignore another beat here while there is nothing on red tick here 00:07:832 - change to this and add claps
bang bang
00:26:552 (1) - remove nc
00:27:752 (1) - same thing about the spinner in normal and easy and all
cool cool song try not miss a beat on hard its rly short map try make every strong beat clickable for normal i hope i helped u with nc because some of them seemed not needed anyway overall i hope i helped take my stars
Good luck
Firetruck
1,011 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Firetruck

Lilyanna wrote:

BANG MOD from in game reqs i see wat u did there
Easy

check aimod
00:27:752 (1) - spinner is not snapped and better end here imo 00:29:672 - woops, fixed
Normal

00:13:592 - imo dont ignore this strong beat added a circle
00:08:072 (1) - remove nc
00:08:552 (2) - nc here
00:10:472 (1) - remove nc
00:13:832 (1) - remove nc
00:19:112 (1) - remove nc
00:21:992 (1) - remove nc and swap nc here 00:22:952 (2) -
00:27:272 (1) - remove nc no need fixed all ncs
00:27:992 (1) - why it ends at blue tick end it here 00:29:672 - sounds better to me If i end it there, the map will become unrankable since the map is really short. It has to be atleat 30 secounds to get ranked so ending it on the blue tick is the only option i have, it sounds really bad i know but i have no other option. ;P
Hard

00:00:872 - make these clickable they r rly strong beat is better and kinda there is a beat on blue tick here 00:01:712 - so try this see if it works because it sound better for me i agree, done!
bang
00:03:272 - u skip ignore strong beat here x( try make it clickable u can trythis ( u dont have to just an example) imo i like it as it is. :P
00:07:592 - u ignore another beat here while there is nothing on red tick here 00:07:832 - change to this and add claps done c:
bang bang
00:26:552 (1) - remove nc
00:27:752 (1) - same thing about the spinner in normal and easy and all same thing about spinner as before cx
cool cool song try not miss a beat on hard its rly short map try make every strong beat clickable for normal i hope i helped u with nc because some of them seemed not needed anyway overall i hope i helped take my stars
Good luck
thx!! BANG BANG BANG
I Must Decrease
908 posts
Joined June 2013
I Must Decrease
Quick IRC mod:

14:54 Xexxar: hi
14:54 Xexxar: what map
14:55 Pepsae: hello
14:55 Pepsae: u can choose between two
14:55 *Pepsae is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1011395 BTS - Save ME]
14:55 Xexxar: give me songs
14:55 Pepsae: or
14:55 *Pepsae is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1037112 KondomVaruhuset - Kondom.se]
14:55 Pepsae: or both
14:55 Pepsae: xD
14:55 Xexxar: gros
14:55 Pepsae: 30 sec
14:55 Xexxar: which is
14:55 Pepsae: the last one
14:55 Xexxar: sold
14:56 Pepsae: xD
14:56 Xexxar: what diff
14:56 *Xexxar is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1036586 KondomVaruhuset - Kondom.se [Hard]]
14:56 Pepsae: hard
14:56 Pepsae: :')
14:56 Xexxar: 14:22 *Xexxar is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1037415 Reol - Syrup [Chao5harlo's Sweet]]
14:56 Xexxar: 00:04:232 (2) -
14:56 Xexxar: this note
14:57 Xexxar: make it so its parallel
14:57 Xexxar: with the 4
14:57 Xexxar: v
14:57 Xexxar: http://puu.sh/qeg3j/e3050afb2a.jpg
14:57 Xexxar: 00:05:672 (1) -
14:57 Xexxar: awkward change in spacing
14:57 Xexxar: consider making this more even
14:58 Xexxar: 00:06:872 (3) - a bit strong a curve
14:58 Xexxar: looks out of place
14:58 Xexxar: 00:08:072 (1,2) - overlap these or make the spacing more intuitive of the rhythm change
14:58 Xexxar: 00:12:632 (3,4) - try to avoid overlaps like this
14:59 Xexxar: looks poorly thought out
14:59 Xexxar: n/p
14:59 *Xexxar is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1036586 KondomVaruhuset - Kondom.se [Hard]]
14:59 Xexxar: incase i didnt make it obvious
14:59 Xexxar: which diff i was on
14:59 Xexxar: 00:19:352 (4) - same issue of spacing
14:59 Xexxar: that i mentioned earlier
14:59 Xexxar: try to keep stuff like this more consistent
14:59 Xexxar: 00:20:792 (1,2) - same sitaution
14:59 Xexxar: it seems like you wnat ot keep constant spacing
15:00 Xexxar: but you're not
15:00 Xexxar: try using DS more since thats seems to be how your structure is intended to work
15:00 Xexxar: 00:23:432 (1,2) - a bit close in terms of visual distance
15:01 Xexxar: 00:24:392 (3,4,5) - make this triangle more even
15:01 Xexxar: 00:25:352 (1) - u might want to make this slider design a bit more consistent
15:01 Xexxar: the wave looks unclean
15:02 Xexxar: 00:27:752 (1) - this spinner is a bit lazy
15:02 Xexxar: rhythm could be extended and the slider could be overwriteen
15:02 Xexxar: Any questions
15:02 Pepsae: nope :')
15:02 Pepsae: thanks!
15:02 Xexxar: do you have anything else
15:02 Xexxar: you'd like quick feedback on
15:02 Xexxar: in terms
15:02 Xexxar: of this mapset
15:02 Pepsae: i think i'm good c:
15:02 Xexxar: kk
15:03 Pepsae: ty
15:03 Xexxar: I'll post the chat log
15:03 Xexxar: I hope it was helpful!
15:03 Pepsae: yeh
Lulu-
398 posts
Joined March 2014
Lulu-
very small irc mod
2016-07-26 14:21 Lulu-: gonna start with the hard diff
2016-07-26 14:21 Pepsae: yup
2016-07-26 14:21 Lulu-: 00:03:752 (1,2) - could look better
2016-07-26 14:22 Lulu-: same slider "problem" as last map
2016-07-26 14:22 Lulu-: too curvy for modern standards
2016-07-26 14:22 Lulu-: 00:09:032 (3,4) - you could make a blanket here
2016-07-26 14:23 Lulu-: 00:15:272 (3) - i wouldn't place this here because this breaks the cursor flow because of the break
2016-07-26 14:23 Lulu-: 00:16:232 (3) - put this right under 1, it's not quite there
2016-07-26 14:24 Lulu-: 00:22:232 (5,1) - move the stream a bit further away
2016-07-26 14:24 Lulu-: the spacing needs to be consisten
2016-07-26 14:24 Lulu-: t
2016-07-26 14:25 Lulu-: 00:23:432 (1,2) - this could look a bit better
2016-07-26 14:26 Lulu-: the rest looks fine to me
2016-07-26 14:26 Pepsae: kay ^^
2016-07-26 14:26 Lulu-: are you ready to move on yet?
2016-07-26 14:27 Pepsae: yup
2016-07-26 14:27 Lulu-: alright
2016-07-26 14:27 Lulu-: 00:03:752 (3) - this barely is in the playfield
2016-07-26 14:27 Lulu-: consider changing this
2016-07-26 14:28 Pepsae: wait which diff?
2016-07-26 14:28 Lulu-: normal
2016-07-26 14:28 Pepsae: kay
2016-07-26 14:29 Lulu-: 00:12:872 (2,3,4,5,6) - make this more round
2016-07-26 14:29 Lulu-: 00:17:672 (1,2) - fix this overlap
2016-07-26 14:30 Lulu-: this diff was pretty nice
2016-07-26 14:30 Lulu-: nothing much to change
Ciyus Miapah
3,011 posts
Joined June 2013
Ciyus Miapah
you need 30 seconds to rank your map, yours is 28 seconds, rip

the spinners should be end at 00:29:672 -
and well when you end on 00:30:032 - it still has drain 00:29 because the first note started in 00:00:152 -
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Xiaolin
I'm gonna love you forever if this got ranked.
Last edited by Xiaolin , edited 1 time in total.
Firetruck
1,011 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Firetruck

Fort wrote:

you need 30 seconds to rank your map, yours is 28 seconds, rip

the spinners should be end at 00:29:672 -
and well when you end on 00:30:032 - it still has drain 00:29 because the first note started in 00:00:152 -
fml fixed the length :^)
Last edited by Firetruck , edited 1 time in total.
Lilyanna
1,918 posts
Joined March 2016
Lilyanna
why im last one to know what the song is about ;_; still hate u
Firetruck
1,011 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Firetruck

Lilyanna wrote:

why im last one to know what the song is about ;_; still hate u

ily <3
headphonewearer
788 posts
Joined October 2014
headphonewearer
fort ily
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Xiaolin
Welp, just gonna make a new post for the mod.

General

  1. The mp3's bitrate is really high, and it affects the map, here's a new mp3 clicky.
  2. Fix the tags in havk's Condom, the creator of this diff's name is not in the tags. Also, remove Trashu and add Cokesae, if I'm right, her name changed, right?
  3. Suggest making the volume 10% or 5% at the end of the slider, because there's no sound at that part.

    Beginner Collab
    1. Why is the spacing different between the objects? Like 00:00:392 (1,2) - these two seem far from each other. And in 00:08:072 (1,2) - the two objects are close to each other.
    2. 00:13:823 (4,1) - IMO, the slider shape of these two objects, I suggest making them less curvier.
    3. 00:19:592 (4) - The red tick is hard to notice in this slider, I suggest doing something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5711315
    4. 00:21:512 (5,1) - Maybe make a blanket here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5711325

    Cokesae's Easy
    1. There're some issues in spacing in this diff as well. Like in 00:04:232 (4,1) - these two are too close. And in 00:18:632 (3,1) - they're far from each other.
    2. 00:13:352 (1) - I don't think a red tick is needed in this slider, I suggest removing it.
    3. 00:17:672 (2) - This slider is too high, it's touching the HP bar. Please move it down, it's hard for easy players to read it.
    4. 00:22:952 (3,1) - Blanket could be improved by moving (3) to x:342 y:213

    Normal
    1. Err.. Don't you think 1.40 SV is too fast for normal? I suggest making it 1.10
    2. 00:12:872 (2,3,4,5,6) - This honestly looks hard for normal players. I suggest re-mapping this part, or try this rhythm http://i.imgur.com/xZWbOYC.jpg
    3. 00:27:992 (1) - The spinner here is too close to the previous object, move the spinner to 00:28:232 and spinner end to 00:31:112

    Hard
    1. 00:01:112 (3) - Just a suggestion, make this slider like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5711449
    2. 00:03:752 (1) - If you didn't notice, this slider's reverse arrow is touching the HP bar, IIRC it's unrankable, please move it down a bit.
    3. 00:08:552 (2) - Remove the previous NC and add an NC here, to keep the NC's consistent in all diffs.
    4. 00:09:032 (3,4) - IMO, this looks weird, suggest making (4) less curvy.
    5. 00:15:272 (3) - Just like I said, it's touching the HP bar, move it down.
    6. 00:22:472 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think a stream is needed in this part, suggest re-mapping this part.

    havkz's Condom
    1. 00:00:392 (2,3,4) - (3) and (4) look hard to read, maybe move them like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5711507
    2. 00:05:192 (4,5,6) - ^
headphonewearer
788 posts
Joined October 2014
headphonewearer

Lapis Aoki wrote:

havkz's Condom
  1. 00:00:392 (2,3,4) - (3) and (4) look hard to read, maybe move them like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5711507 oops! my bad, fixed
  2. 00:05:192 (4,5,6) - ^ ^


Thanks for modding!

code
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 15272
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Kondom.se
TitleUnicode:Kondom.se
Artist:KondomVaruhuset
ArtistUnicode:KondomVaruhuset
Creator:Pepsae
Version:havkz's Condom
Source:Kondom.se
Tags:Kondom swedish svenska Trashu Reklam Ad havkz
BeatmapID:1037112
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:7.4
ApproachRate:8.7
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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11912,-100,4,2,0,75,0,0
15752,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,75,0,1
28952,-166.666666666667,4,2,0,75,0,0
29672,-166.666666666667,4,2,0,40,0,0


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Combo3 : 160,11,172
Combo4 : 182,1,105
Combo5 : 255,191,251
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Firetruck
1,011 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Firetruck

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Welp, just gonna make a new post for the mod.

General

  1. The mp3's bitrate is really high, and it affects the map, here's a new mp3 clicky.
  2. Fix the tags in havk's Condom, the creator of this diff's name is not in the tags. Also, remove Trashu and add Cokesae, if I'm right, her name changed, right?
  3. Suggest making the volume 10% or 5% at the end of the slider, because there's no sound at that part. i'm guessing you mean't the spinner

    Beginner Collab
    1. Why is the spacing different between the objects? Like 00:00:392 (1,2) - these two seem far from each other. And in 00:08:072 (1,2) - the two objects are close to each other.
    2. 00:13:823 (4,1) - IMO, the slider shape of these two objects, I suggest making them less curvier.
    3. 00:19:592 (4) - The red tick is hard to notice in this slider, I suggest doing something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5711315
    4. 00:21:512 (5,1) - Maybe make a blanket here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5711325
    fixed everything here

    Cokesae's Easy
    1. There're some issues in spacing in this diff as well. Like in 00:04:232 (4,1) - these two are too close. And in 00:18:632 (3,1) - they're far from each other.
    2. 00:13:352 (1) - I don't think a red tick is needed in this slider, I suggest removing it.
    3. 00:17:672 (2) - This slider is too high, it's touching the HP bar. Please move it down, it's hard for easy players to read it.
    4. 00:22:952 (3,1) - Blanket could be improved by moving (3) to x:342 y:213
    fixed everything here as well

    Normal
    1. Err.. Don't you think 1.40 SV is too fast for normal? I suggest making it 1.10 it's supposed to get a bit faster in normal, so i think this is good. if more people point this out, i'll change it. c:
    2. 00:12:872 (2,3,4,5,6) - This honestly looks hard for normal players. I suggest re-mapping this part, or try this rhythm http://i.imgur.com/xZWbOYC.jpg
    3. 00:27:992 (1) - The spinner here is too close to the previous object, move the spinner to 00:28:232 and spinner end to 00:31:112
    done

    Hard
    1. 00:01:112 (3) - Just a suggestion, make this slider like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5711449 [looks good cx
    2. 00:03:752 (1) - If you didn't notice, this slider's reverse arrow is touching the HP bar, IIRC it's unrankable, please move it down a bit.
    3. 00:08:552 (2) - Remove the previous NC and add an NC here, to keep the NC's consistent in all diffs.
    4. 00:09:032 (3,4) - IMO, this looks weird, suggest making (4) less curvy.
    5. 00:15:272 (3) - Just like I said, it's touching the HP bar, move it down. fixed it all
    6. 00:22:472 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think a stream is needed in this part, suggest re-mapping this part.
    i feel like the diff atleast need one stream, so it gets a bit challenging. if more people point this out as well i'll change it c:

    havkz's Condom
    1. 00:00:392 (2,3,4) - (3) and (4) look hard to read, maybe move them like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5711507
    2. 00:05:192 (4,5,6) - ^
thx c:
Spork Lover
722 posts
Joined October 2013
Spork Lover
Hej, jeg vil gerne have et kondom! :^))))

(Trying to give this mod a "BN"-ish mindset (For BN application test practice >.<), so please help me by responding with a decent explanation as to why you agree/disagree to my suggestions :3 Thanks <3)

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General


The Widescreen support is inconsistent (As an example, it's not on in Racist's Easy, but is on in the beginner), either have it on on all diffs or don't have it at all :)

Consider adding "Commercial" and "Condom" to the tags, not everyone is Swedish :^)

Kondom.se might be the place it's from, but according to the ranking criteria, websites do NOT count as a source, please remove it from the source :)

The rest seems on point, so I think that part's good to go. (The spinner not following sound is probably gonna be discussed, but be stubborn, thank :^))



Beginner Collab

It doesn't really make sense that the HP is higher than on the Easy, reduce it to 2 or 2,5 plz :3 <3

00:02:348 (2,1) - Some blankets that could look better would be stuff like this, since it's basically the only easy-to-make aesthetic in a beginner
00:06:188 (2,3,1) - Small DS inconsistency, you should especially move the 1 a bit closer.
00:18:668 (3,4) - There's more :3
^ Look into every non-1x DS in this map :3
00:27:308 - Add a circle here and start the spinner on 00:28:268 - (End it on the same spot) It feels a bit odd not to add that extra note don't ya think? ;o

Final thoughts on Beginner:
Look into EVERY DS inconsistency (even if it's by like 0,05x) and change it, and consider easy-to-make blankets like the first one :)

Racist's Easy

00:06:188 (3,4) - Aesthetically, it looks a bit weird that these are not a "Ctrl+J" type pattern.
00:11:948 (2) - To follow the NC-per-measure thing you've been doing, NC this as well.
00:13:388 (1,2) - Odd emphasis since the slider end is on the downbeat at 00:13:868 -... consider a 4-way reverse from 00:13:868 - to 00:15:308 - or something else to mix it up, let yer imagination go wild yo (Basically just make sure that beat is clickable)
00:15:788 (3,1) - Switch NC, since the 3 is on the downbeat.
00:17:708 (2) - DS inconsistency

Final thoughts on Easy:
Like on the Beginner, fix the DS inconsistencies that vary by more than 0,05x (There are quite a few!), and try to fix the emphasis issue stated if you agree :)

Normal

00:04:268 - A lot of downbeats are skipped, like this one, where it's not clickable; It adds odd flow and feels weird while playing, consider changing this and other similar ones (Seems consistent in the way you're doing it, but in some cases it throws the players off a lot more than it should)
00:08:108 (4) - NC for pre-measure emphasis
00:23:948 (1) - Remove NC, I don't really feel like it serves a purpose (If anything it makes the stack harder)
00:27:308 (4) - NC? Downbeat op :3

Final thoughts on Normal:
Some NC inconsistencies, that you should look into (There are probably more that I didn't spot), and some downbeat issues :)

Hard

00:00:428 (1,2,3) - The emphasis here would be slider to slider to note, since you go on the off-beat with the slider the way you're doing it now, which flows oddly imo
00:03:068 (4,1,2) - There's a weird overlap on 2 and 4, and also, the notes before 4 are overmapping imo, since they don't really follow the music all too well (Maybe a slider from 00:02:348 (1) - to 00:02:708 -, a note on 00:02:828 - (Which you have atm)
00:05:708 (1,2) - Switch NC, 2 is on the downbeat, and following the pattern with NC's here doesn't really fit imo
00:07:388 (4) - Maybe follow the "double clap" sound and make a note on 7:388 and start the slider on 00:07:628 - ?
00:22:028 (4,5,1) - Consider giving this a turn, so the flow isn't linear.
00:24:908 (5,6,1) - Odd transition, linear + lower spacing near the end is odd to play for a typical Hard player, consider a small change :)

Final thoughts on Hard gigglez, kondom, hard, gigglez:
I feel that this diff has a few pretty messy sections that would benefit from some tiny reworks. (I explained stuff like awkward overlaps and overmapping, look into this over the entire diff and try to self-mod a few parts :))

havkz's Condom

Got nothing of importance here, nice job :)

Final thoughts on all:
On lower diffs, fix the DS issues, and fix emphasis issues on Hard/normal, and get some more mods and you should be able to push this forward ^^ Good luck <3
Firetruck
1,011 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Firetruck

Spork Lover wrote:

Hej, jeg vil gerne have et kondom! :^))))

(Trying to give this mod a "BN"-ish mindset (For BN application test practice >.<), so please help me by responding with a decent explanation as to why you agree/disagree to my suggestions :3 Thanks <3)

COLOURS:
Color coding:
Color coding
Unrankable if unchanged
Normal Suggestion/Comment
Strong Suggestion

General


The Widescreen support is inconsistent (As an example, it's not on in Racist's Easy, but is on in the beginner), either have it on on all diffs or don't have it at all :)

Consider adding "Commercial" and "Condom" to the tags, not everyone is Swedish :^) what are you talking about everyone speaks swedish (jk), got that now :p

Kondom.se might be the place it's from, but according to the ranking criteria, websites do NOT count as a source, please remove it from the source :) thanks for telling me! c:

The rest seems on point, so I think that part's good to go. (The spinner not following sound is probably gonna be discussed, but be stubborn, thank :^))
oh i will


Beginner Collab

It doesn't really make sense that the HP is higher than on the Easy, reduce it to 2 or 2,5 plz :3 <3 woops forgot that, ty for reminding me

00:02:348 (2,1) - Some blankets that could look better would be stuff like this, since it's basically the only easy-to-make aesthetic in a beginner
00:06:188 (2,3,1) - Small DS inconsistency, you should especially move the 1 a bit closer.
00:18:668 (3,4) - There's more :3
^ Look into every non-1x DS in this map :3 fixed all DS in the map.. i think, just poke me if i forgots something
00:27:308 - Add a circle here and start the spinner on 00:28:268 - (End it on the same spot) It feels a bit odd not to add that extra note don't ya think? ;o it sounds much better like that, i totally agree. done

Final thoughts on Beginner:
Look into EVERY DS inconsistency (even if it's by like 0,05x) and change it, and consider easy-to-make blankets like the first one :) im not good when it comes to blankets lol but i'll try. thanks ;P

Racist's Easy

00:06:188 (3,4) - Aesthetically, it looks a bit weird that these are not a "Ctrl+J" type pattern. uhh i didn't understand this lol pls help
00:11:948 (2) - To follow the NC-per-measure thing you've been doing, NC this as well. done
00:13:388 (1,2) - Odd emphasis since the slider end is on the downbeat at 00:13:868 -... consider a 4-way reverse from 00:13:868 - to 00:15:308 - or something else to mix it up, let yer imagination go wild yo (Basically just make sure that beat is clickable) so i tried something out based on your suggestions. check it out and tell meh what you think of it :p
00:15:788 (3,1) - Switch NC, since the 3 is on the downbeat. done
00:17:708 (2) - DS inconsistency fixed i think

Final thoughts on Easy:
Like on the Beginner, fix the DS inconsistencies that vary by more than 0,05x (There are quite a few!), and try to fix the emphasis issue stated if you agree :) yup ;P i think i fixed the DS, if not poke meh so i can fix it

Normal

00:04:268 - A lot of downbeats are skipped, like this one, where it's not clickable; It adds odd flow and feels weird while playing, consider changing this and other similar ones (Seems consistent in the way you're doing it, but in some cases it throws the players off a lot more than it should) [color=80FF00]i added a circle. i don't really know if that was what you were suggesting and if i just made it worse pls tell me[/color]
00:08:108 (4) - NC for pre-measure emphasis
00:23:948 (1) - Remove NC, I don't really feel like it serves a purpose (If anything it makes the stack harder)
00:27:308 (4) - NC? Downbeat op :3 fixed all NC stuffs .3.

Final thoughts on Normal:
Some NC inconsistencies, that you should look into (There are probably more that I didn't spot), and some downbeat issues :) thanks! i think i fixed everything, if not then yeh the usual poke meh xD

Hard

00:00:428 (1,2,3) - The emphasis here would be slider to slider to note, since you go on the off-beat with the slider the way you're doing it now, which flows oddly imo i agree on that, fixed it cx
00:03:068 (4,1,2) - There's a weird overlap on 2 and 4, and also, the notes before 4 are overmapping imo, since they don't really follow the music all too well (Maybe a slider from 00:02:348 (1) - to 00:02:708 -, a note on 00:02:828 - (Which you have atm) agreed, done doen odnenenene c:
00:05:708 (1,2) - Switch NC, 2 is on the downbeat, and following the pattern with NC's here doesn't really fit imo added a NC on 00:06:188
00:07:388 (4) - Maybe follow the "double clap" sound and make a note on 7:388 and start the slider on 00:07:628 - ? yup, done
00:22:028 (4,5,1) - Consider giving this a turn, so the flow isn't linear. done
00:24:908 (5,6,1) - Odd transition, linear + lower spacing near the end is odd to play for a typical Hard player, consider a small change :) changed it up ;P no more triangle

Final thoughts on Hard gigglez, kondom, hard, gigglez: heeeheee
I feel that this diff has a few pretty messy sections that would benefit from some tiny reworks. (I explained stuff like awkward overlaps and overmapping, look into this over the entire diff and try to self-mod a few parts :)) i did my best ;P thanks!

havkz's Condom

Got nothing of importance here, nice job :)

Final thoughts on all:
On lower diffs, fix the DS issues, and fix emphasis issues on Hard/normal, and get some more mods and you should be able to push this forward ^^ Good luck <3
thanks alot for this mod, it really helped me ;P just realised i don't think i dis-agreed on anything
Spork Lover
722 posts
Joined October 2013
Spork Lover
DON'T GIVE KUDO FOR THIS ONE :)

Recheck:
- Made NC super consistent
- Fixed an extra emphasis issue (+ giving advice on normal with the emphasis, 'cause it's consistent, but doesn't really flow)
- Clearing up confusion with a few of the previous suggestions
- Added Epilepsy Warning to all diffs

Glad I could help :)
sexy scandi recheck :^)))
23:45 Firetruck: updated the map and responded to your mod .3. i don
23:45 Firetruck: i don't think i dis agreed on anything
23:45 Firetruck: lol
23:46 Spork Lover: Lel nice :D
23:46 Firetruck: xD
23:46 Firetruck: also thanks alot for the mod
23:46 Firetruck: cuz it helped me alot
23:48 Spork Lover: I'll re-check here
23:48 Spork Lover: 00:11:948 (3) -
23:48 Spork Lover: NC this on Beginner
23:48 Spork Lover: actually no
23:48 Spork Lover: 1 sec
23:48 Spork Lover: 00:04:268 (1) - Remove this one
23:48 Spork Lover: Follow every 2nd measure
23:49 Spork Lover: Yup, just 4:268 remove
23:49 Spork Lover: Is only NC inconsistency now on Beginner
23:49 Firetruck: kai kai .3
23:50 Spork Lover: On Racist's Easy, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5715550
23:50 Spork Lover: This is what I meant
23:51 Firetruck: ooooooh
23:51 Firetruck: thanks xD
23:52 Spork Lover: DS is fine on both diffs now
23:52 Spork Lover: nice fixes :3
23:52 Firetruck: ty ;3;
23:52 Firetruck: i forgot to remove the sources lol woops
23:52 Spork Lover: Happens :D
23:53 Firetruck: yeah xD
23:53 Spork Lover: 00:04:268 (4) - Start with a slider here instead
23:53 Spork Lover: 00:05:228 - And make THIS a singletap
23:53 Spork Lover: (On normal)
23:54 Firetruck: ooooo
23:54 Firetruck: okay
23:55 Spork Lover: 00:13:628 (4) - When you see downbeats (Big white ticks) on slider ends
23:55 Spork Lover: You should consider making it clickable for everything
23:55 Spork Lover: Unless it's part of your style
23:55 Spork Lover: If you're not aware of it, consider a change :3
23:56 Firetruck: okaii ;w;
23:56 Spork Lover: I mean making the downbeat clickable
23:56 Spork Lover: **
23:56 Spork Lover: NC's seem fine on noraml
23:56 Firetruck: woo
23:57 Spork Lover: 00:14:348 (5) - Maybe NC this but not sure
23:57 Spork Lover: 00:19:628 (4,1,3) - Remove NC on the 1, add nc on 4 and 3
23:57 Spork Lover: (I lied apparently lol)
23:57 Firetruck: xD
23:57 Spork Lover: 00:23:948 (1) - You didn't remove this NC from the suggestion
23:58 Spork Lover: :^)))
23:58 Firetruck: woops
23:58 Spork Lover: 00:00:428 (1) - There's a clap on the slider end which I feel should be on
23:58 Spork Lover: 00:00:908 -
23:59 Spork Lover: 00:01:388 (1) - And a finish that is wrong
23:59 Spork Lover: I think you forgot to redo hitsounds
23:59 Spork Lover: (Hard diff)
23:59 Spork Lover: For that little section
00:00 Spork Lover: Apart from that hard seems aight
00:00 Firetruck: ooo
00:00 Firetruck: kay kay
00:00 Firetruck: xD
00:00 Spork Lover: Also
00:00 Spork Lover: Epilepsy warning
00:00 Spork Lover: ^^
00:00 Firetruck: fml i forgot again
00:01 Spork Lover: Happens
00:01 Spork Lover: :D
00:01 Firetruck: xD
00:01 Spork Lover: I'll savelog and add it (DON'T GIVE KUDOSU FOR THE NEXT POST :^))
headphonewearer
788 posts
Joined October 2014
headphonewearer

Spork Lover wrote:

havkz's Condom

Got nothing of importance here, nice job :)
idk if it's necessary to respond but i'll do it anyway :P thanks!
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Secretpipe


Where am I wtf?

[General]

  1. I don't get the use of the grey-combo colour tbh but tell me , I'm interested
[Beginner Collab]

  1. 00:19:628 (4) - Be careful , your spacin' is a bit higher than it should be! (even if noone noticed that lol)
  2. 00:21:548 (5) - The transition with 00:19:628 (4) - didn't feel smooth at all because of the opposite direction of the sliders. Maybe you can change it in order to get a better flow?
[RCT's Easy]

  1. 00:03:308 (3,4) - The flow between these two objects could be better overall. Here's a lil screen which sum up my opinion (yes me) about it! :
    Green should be followed and Red is the issue !
  2. 00:06:188 (3,4) - Same reason here aswell but I'm way lazy to edit a pic with my poor editin skillz
  3. 00:08:108 (1,2) - Same aswell! a beginner should be easily guided to play the map and the fact that you made these kind of transitions make it weird.
  4. 00:13:868 (5) - Usin' more than a Repeat Arrow in an Easy isn't forbidden but it's way not suggested for the reason than it can be one reason of a bad pattern readin for a beginner.
  5. 00:16:748 (3,4) - Same thing about the transition here ! Also , if you tried to blanket, it's ruined!
  6. 00:21:548 (1) - Maybe reduce the curve here? Looks not neat so far.
  7. 00:27:308 (2) - That objecct is unrankable since it touches the Lifebar
[Normal]

  1. 00:00:428 (1) - you could maybe have done a better transition here! Here's an idea! Leave it or take it~
  2. 00:02:348 (1,2) - Why are you breakin' the flow here aswell? It's another way to misread for a beginner ;~;
  3. 00:04:268 (4) - That slidershape looks rushed and unneat tbh. You should change/improve it!
  4. 00:06:668 (4) - Stackin' notes isn't suggested aswell since it'd a way of thinkin' to press the note faster and can lead to a misread from the player.
  5. 00:08:588 (2) - Same here.
  6. 00:11:948 (1) - that sliderwave could have been much better
  7. 00:14:828 (2) - Same aswell.
  8. 00:22:988 (1) - Same.
[Hard]

  1. 00:01:388 (1) - Remove the NC here , it's not needed.
  2. 00:06:188 (1) - Same here lol
  3. 00:11:948 (1,2,3,4,1) - Addin' some curves wouldn't hurt to save the flow here ;_;
  4. 00:14:348 (2) - As I mentionned before , these kind of sliderwaves feel rushed imo and they should be fixed
  5. 00:16:268 (3) - That slider is unrankable since it's overlappin the Lifebar
  6. 00:18:668 (1,2,3) - Ok so what is the use of that triple actually? It doesn't cover anything and feels overmapped right now
  7. 00:22:508 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same here. The vocal goes ham but the stream doesn't suit for the vocal chops here.
[havkz's condom]

  1. You should change that diffname since it contains some pegi 18 words and it'll be considered as "offensive for the community" so yeh
  2. 00:13:988 (4,5,6,7) - Same as previously mentionned , if you take a listen with 0% hs volume , you'll understand that this stream doesn't fit with the song and is considered as overmapped!
  3. 00:16:148 (2) - Same here
  4. 00:18:068 (2) - Same aswell
  5. 00:23:948 (2,3,4) - He's just sayin' "hmmm" why are you mappin a triple on that location?
  6. 00:25:748 (2) - Overmapped aswell
  7. 00:28:988 - In my opinion that beat should have been mapped since it's a strong sound and your spiner should start at 00:29:228 -


Hope any of these helped! Good luck
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