ESTi - HELIX (Edit ver.) · forum

[Mahua]

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2016-06-23T03:51:08+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年1月12日 at 14:24:58

Artist: ESTi
Title: HELIX (Edit ver.)
Source: O2Jam Analog
Tags: O2JAM U LKs Zweib IamKwaN Flower SIN Official Productions DUB and bloody BASS
BPM: 175
Filesize: 14286kb
Play Time: 02:18
Difficulties Available:

BE'' (5.13 stars, 660 notes)
EZ'' (1.47 stars, 162 notes)
HD'' (3.13 stars, 359 notes)
IN'' (4.35 stars, 515 notes)
NM'' (2.07 stars, 206 notes)

Download: ESTi - HELIX (Edit ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Next Scene from the Original SIN Official Productions
Bad End

我煞笔
2016.10.5 mp3 change plz redownload
2016.8.3 hitsound change plz redownload
2016.8.23 bg change plz redownload

EZ'' by IamKwaN
NM'' by Zweib
HD'' by Flower

Last edited by [Mahua] 2017-01-12T06:26:29+00:00, edited 32 times in total.

z1085684963

327 posts

Joined August 2012

z1085684963 2016-07-01T17:13:45+00:00

hr

00:25:203 (4,5,6) - 不搞个弧度吗
00:29:146 (2,3) - 后面改成2个音比较好
00:46:460 (1) - 来个折角blantk
01:26:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 右边不够圆滑
02:14:403 (1) - 加个尖叫

音效最好要嗨的话就一路嗨到底

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2016-07-02T03:47:52+00:00

z1085684963 wrote:
hr

00:25:203 (4,5,6) - 不搞个弧度吗 ok
00:29:146 (2,3) - 后面改成2个音比较好
00:46:460 (1) - 来个折角blantk
01:26:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 右边不够圆滑
02:14:403 (1) - 加个尖叫

音效最好要嗨的话就一路嗨到底

懒改

Flower

1,723 posts

Joined August 2011

Flower 2016-07-04T13:29:31+00:00

什么乱78糟的

[HR]
01:15:946 - 不加个note？
00:13:717 - 00:30:174 - 想办法弄个拉拉人打call或者随便什么“嘿！嘿！嘿！”的音效叠在24白线上看看，音量不要太大。（实际上我更推荐2白线嘿，4白线哈，要是你能找到的话）
00:54:174 (1) - whistle改加到00:54:860 - 更好

[NM]
这很不normal，又有变间距又有奇怪节奏的，还居然有1/3，强烈建议增大间距做成hard
00:17:831 (1,2) - 间距有误
00:30:174 (1) - 很容易搞错，因为前面从来没有两个返回的，而且也没有停顿给人警告
00:37:717 (1,2,1) - 间距。吗的好像有点多，你自己检查吧，下不赘述
00:42:346 (1) - 前移1/2？自创节奏还是留到高难度

没了，自己看吧
等diff全了再找我一次

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2016-07-04T13:44:50+00:00

Flower wrote:
什么乱78糟的

[HR]
01:15:946 - 不加个note？不加
00:13:717 - 00:30:174 - 想办法弄个拉拉人打call或者随便什么“嘿！嘿！嘿！”的音效叠在24白线上看看，音量不要太大。（实际上我更推荐2白线嘿，4白线哈，要是你能找到的话）找不到这就很蛋疼了
00:54:174 (1) - whistle改加到00:54:860 - 更好 ok

[NM]
这很不normal，又有变间距又有奇怪节奏的，还居然有1/3，强烈建议增大间距做成hard
00:17:831 (1,2) - 间距有误可以改了
00:30:174 (1) - 很容易搞错，因为前面从来没有两个返回的，而且也没有停顿给人警告停顿
00:37:717 (1,2,1) - 间距。吗的好像有点多，你自己检查吧，下不赘述读图干净
00:42:346 (1) - 前移1/2？自创节奏还是留到高难度 ok

没了，自己看吧
等diff全了再找我一次

Sun Rainbow

1,382 posts

Joined January 2011

Sun Rainbow 2016-07-07T04:37:50+00:00

什么乱78糟的接着我的nazi mod
如何做简单和普通的难度？
节奏抓最突出最主要的音（最容易听到并记住的音）然后排列一路DS1.0过去越简单越好这样你的难度自然就降下来了

NM'

00:03:431 (2,3) - 这里我觉得滑条一个更好
00:04:803 (2) - 同上
因为这里是一个连过去的音嘛所以我觉得这里一个滑条过去更好点 normal这样听着有点奇怪……
其他相同的我省略了
00:11:317 - 不加个note？那么明显的音在
00:30:860 (2) - DS不对
00:34:974 (1) - Why NC???
同理省略一个颜色的note数太少
00:54:174 (1) - NC去掉加在00:55:203 (2) -
01:52:460 (1,2,3) - ？？？？？？？你在NM放这种东西？
01:54:403 (2,3,4) - ^
同理省略
02:13:717 (1) - dl nc

讲道理这秘制Lovelive SIF模式抓音即视感
难度对于NM也偏难甚至有点像简单Hard靠拢
我同意爱抚 remap或者改难度名实在不会做还是找人好了

其他难度摸不出来你加油了

Last edited by Sun Rainbow 2016-07-07T06:13:44+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2016-07-07T04:46:59+00:00

[HR'']
00:03:431 (1) - 尾巴消个音？音乐里并没有明显的音耶，而且作为这首开头节奏略复杂是不是不太合适呢
00:04:803 (1) - ^
00:06:174 (1) - ^
00:07:546 (1) - ^
00:10:288 (1) - ^
00:12:174 (4,1) - 完全叠一下？不然容易误读
00:16:117 (5,1) - 稍微近点？前后一致
00:29:146 (2,3) - 这节奏造的有点奇怪，联系前后看的话
00:33:431 (2) - 这个滑条好丑弯的好没根据
00:40:803 (3,4) - 突兀删了4也无妨
00:50:060 (5,6,7,8) - 这几个是不是加速点好一点
00:52:117 (1) - 这个位置有点尴尬和前面叠的也不怎么好，然后就是和2的关系也比较尴尬
00:57:946 (2) - 这节奏没根据突兀
01:03:431 (2) - 抄这个? 01:02:060 (2,3,4) -
01:09:603 (1) - 这个真突兀，前后也没用类似的梗
01:16:803 (1) - 。这里开始的钟声虽说是创意但是违和感有点强
01:16:803 (1,2) - 太开了
01:18:174 (1,2,3) - 这个段落就这三个用了减速还是有点违和要么后面的相同的地方也用减速
01:25:374 (2) - ?很不舒服
01:27:431 (3) - 这里推荐减速然后蓝线收尾
01:36:688 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这种unsnapped肯定干死，不如1/4，然后作为正五边形没摆好
01:38:746 (1) - 草泥马
01:43:888 (7,8) - 1/3?
01:44:488 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 肯定有overmap
02:00:003 (1,1) - 草泥马
01:52:117 (1,1,1) - snap错了
02:13:888 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 可以来点有意思的梗

[NM'']
00:30:174 (1,2) - 肯定不行
00:49:031 (2,1) -
01:29:488 (5,1,2,3,1) - ???
01:32:746 (1,2,3,1) - ??
01:35:488 (1,2,3,1) - ?
你这绝对不是nm 要么re要么换难度名

美丽

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2016-07-07T06:54:24+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
[HR'']
00:03:431 (1) - 尾巴消个音？音乐里并没有明显的音耶，而且作为这首开头节奏略复杂是不是不太合适呢大概是我自己心中是这个节奏（（（不要打我
00:04:803 (1) - ^
00:06:174 (1) - ^
00:07:546 (1) - ^
00:10:288 (1) - ^
00:12:174 (4,1) - 完全叠一下？不然容易误读 ok
00:16:117 (5,1) - 稍微近点？前后一致 ok
00:29:146 (2,3) - 这节奏造的有点奇怪，联系前后看的话还好吧
00:33:431 (2) - 这个滑条好丑弯的好没根据那就copy前一个
00:40:803 (3,4) - 突兀删了4也无妨还好我是overmap惯犯
00:50:060 (5,6,7,8) - 这几个是不是加速点好一点不用吧
00:52:117 (1) - 这个位置有点尴尬和前面叠的也不怎么好，然后就是和2的关系也比较尴尬改了
00:57:946 (2) - 这节奏没根据突兀我用了三个这样的节奏你猜猜我都放哪了
01:03:431 (2) - 抄这个? 01:02:060 (2,3,4) - 猜一下啊
01:09:603 (1) - 这个真突兀，前后也没用类似的梗 nc了应该还好读（
01:16:803 (1) - 。这里开始的钟声虽说是创意但是违和感有点强果然又一个人吐槽这个了但是我还真找不到更好听的钟了
01:16:803 (1,2) - 太开了那我下一个note也放开点
01:18:174 (1,2,3) - 这个段落就这三个用了减速还是有点违和要么后面的相同的地方也用减速改了
01:25:374 (2) - ?很不舒服猜一下啊
01:27:431 (3) - 这里推荐减速然后蓝线收尾白线有音
01:36:688 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这种unsnapped肯定干死，不如1/4，然后作为正五边形没摆好改
01:38:746 (1) - 草泥马哈哈哈哈
01:43:888 (7,8) - 1/3? 前面就想这么放啊后面可以统一
01:44:488 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 肯定有overmap 对
02:00:003 (1,1) - 草泥马哈哈哈哈
01:52:117 (1,1,1) - snap错了 ok
02:13:888 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 可以来点有意思的梗我想安静的结束（（

[NM'']
00:30:174 (1,2) - 肯定不行
00:49:031 (2,1) -
01:29:488 (5,1,2,3,1) - ???
01:32:746 (1,2,3,1) - ??
01:35:488 (1,2,3,1) - ?
你这绝对不是nm 要么re要么换难度名
我问问色卡能不能做

美丽

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Zweib 2016-07-09T13:30:31+00:00

好像难了一点，看能不能将就吧0_0

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 13717
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:HELIX
TitleUnicode:HELIX
Artist:ESTi
ArtistUnicode:ESTi
Creator:[Mahua]
Version:123
Source:O2JAM U
Tags:buhei
BeatmapID:0
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[Difficulty]
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rui

1,388 posts

Joined February 2009

rui 2016-07-10T11:08:33+00:00

From IRC

[NM]

00:05:488 (1) - End of the slider 00:05:831 is better imo
00:12:346 (3) - http://puu.sh/pWCbn.jpg because I think start of the slider 00:13:031 is better
00:36:688 (4) - add clap? 00:33:946 (5) - same here
00:39:431 (4) - ^

[BE]

00:29:146 (2,3) - This part is not match a song. http://puu.sh/pWDDQ.jpg It is a normal rhythm, but it is better imo
00:52:460 (2) - I want to start slider part at 00:52:631. How about this? http://puu.sh/pWDX8.jpg
01:15:946 (2) - add note (278,168)? there is big sound.
01:38:403 (1) - OMG THIS HITSOUND LOL
01:39:774 (1,2,3) - add NC please.

Interesting hitsound so fun.

Good luck!

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Zweib 2016-07-10T15:19:12+00:00

rui wrote:
From IRC
[NM]
00:05:488 (1) - End of the slider 00:05:831 is better imo
00:12:346 (3) - http://puu.sh/pWCbn.jpg because I think start of the slider 00:13:031 is better
00:36:688 (4) - add clap? 00:33:946 (5) - same here
00:39:431 (4) - ^

all fixed, thanks!

code

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 137.HELIX.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 13717
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 50574,51260,125660
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:HELIX
TitleUnicode:HELIX
Artist:ESTi
ArtistUnicode:ESTi
Creator:[Mahua]
Version:NM''
Source:O2JAM U
Tags:Zweib
BeatmapID:1024135
BeatmapSetID:472589

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5.2
SliderMultiplier:1.00000000596046
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"HELIX.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
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2,58145,59176
2,60888,61918
2,63630,64661
2,66373,67404
2,69116,70147
2,71859,72890
2,74602,75633
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2016-07-11T15:06:16+00:00

音效幫我加下不會扭滑條了
媽的再要我扭請槍斃我

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Flower

1,723 posts

Joined August 2011

Flower 2016-07-13T13:33:37+00:00

懒得加音效了，你直接复制吧

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[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2016-07-13T14:15:21+00:00

rui wrote:
From IRC
[BE]
00:29:146 (2,3) - This part is not match a song. http://puu.sh/pWDDQ.jpg It is a normal rhythm, but it is better imo
00:52:460 (2) - I want to start slider part at 00:52:631. How about this? http://puu.sh/pWDX8.jpg
01:15:946 (2) - add note (278,168)? there is big sound.
01:38:403 (1) - OMG THIS HITSOUND LOL
01:39:774 (1,2,3) - add NC please.ok
Interesting hitsound so fun.

Good luck!

Azure

771 posts

Joined November 2010

Azure 2016-07-16T04:47:21+00:00

I'm coming

[all]

現在kiai time 全部diffs不用統一了?

[NM'']

01:43:374 加note slider 往後拉少一拍
02:10:631 確定這個重音就這樣略過嗎? 你前面都有跟的說

[HD'']

01:21:603 clap 拿掉比較好

[IN'']

00:05:317 覺得可以拿掉
00:13:974，00:14:060 其實我覺得整張圖的這個都很彆扭... 有點意義不明
00:37:717 (5,6) ctrl+G 有點意思
00:52:974 (3,4,1,2) 排列調整一下感覺這樣比較順
01:42:517，01:48:003 這兩個1/3不跟到後面才跟感覺很怪啊..
而且後面跟的1/3下的是note還全是NC真很難讀，如果後面不改的話建議前面這兩個點改折返slider
02:12:174 這直接斷掉真的超級怪 02:12:346、02:12:688 不都還有那個效果音嘛你前面連續擺note的那個

[BE'']

00:11:660 (1,2,3,4) 這..我不知道該說啥
00:11:831 這slider開頭是完全沒有音樂的，真正有音樂的地方反而是slider的中心
講白了 00:11:660 - 00:12:346 真要跟那1/3的話應該要再加紅線測time 漸慢很明顯
00:12:003 的開頭也沒在音樂上 ... 你再看其他人怎麼說吧
00:32:060 (2) 這樣挺好的為甚麼要捏那麼醜
00:51:603，00:55:717，00:57:088 這是有音的
01:15:946 不跟? 下個note在 01:16:288 slider的頭上
02:14:403 下note spinner往後1/4

就這樣吧(´・ω・`)

ignorethis

osu! Alumni

1,885 posts

Joined August 2008

ignorethis 2016-07-17T15:56:36+00:00

<EZ>
00:34:288 (2) - 此处是不是多了一个音效因为00:37:031 (2) - 的开头没有
00:52:460 (2) - 这个slider要我说节奏其实不太好折返的地方在音乐中没有对应的音所以听着有些违和
01:59:317 (3) - 这个音效太突兀了

<NM>
01:43:374 (3) - 这个地方是你故意摆成这个节奏的吗？比较难预料
01:54:346 (3) - ^

<HD>
这个谱面24clap用太多了要不要考虑变一变hitsound
00:18:517 (3,4,5) - clap放红线感觉有些怪

<BE>
谱面里有的部分有外挂的钟声音效但是音高有点怪当然这要是你从bms里扒出来的那就当我没说
00:33:431 (2) - 此slider结尾的音效在谱面此段中只出现了一次所以要么后面也加上要么就把这个删掉
01:03:946 (3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 此段中我觉得默认soft-finish的选择不好可以考虑选个其他音效
01:16:117 (2,3,1,2) - ^
01:38:746 (1) - 这个尖叫声太山寨了...有一种城乡结合部的感觉
02:00:688 (1) - ^
02:14:403 (1) - 我觉得此处应该加一个note

gl

Hollow Wings

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Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2016-07-18T03:49:54+00:00

source: O2Jam Analog （注意大小写）

神tm炒冷饭，花花骨灰都没了

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2016-07-18T13:35:05+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
source: O2Jam Analog （注意大小写）

神tm炒冷饭，花花骨灰都没了

色卡懒得填我只能接坑他还觉得自己那个质量低

[Mahua]

702 posts

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[Mahua] 2016-07-18T14:36:37+00:00

ignorethis wrote:
<BE>
谱面里有的部分有外挂的钟声音效但是音高有点怪当然这要是你从bms里扒出来的那就当我没说 sin的那个钟声我直接拿过来了然后也是想弄个恐怖的氛围所以故意违和一点
00:33:431 (2) - 此slider结尾的音效在谱面此段中只出现了一次所以要么后面也加上要么就把这个删掉前面有一段妹子的喘息声啊这里我感觉应该放逃跑完流汗的音效
01:03:946 (3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 此段中我觉得默认soft-finish的选择不好可以考虑选个其他音效感觉暂时没这个听着爽……
01:16:117 (2,3,1,2) - ^ ^
01:38:746 (1) - 这个尖叫声太山寨了...有一种城乡结合部的感觉千年女王那个bms里的尖叫我不会处理;w;
02:00:688 (1) - ^ ^
02:14:403 (1) - 我觉得此处应该加一个note ok

gl

[Mahua]

702 posts

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[Mahua] 2016-07-18T14:57:09+00:00

Azure wrote:
I'm coming

[all]
現在kiai time 全部diffs不用統一了? 个人能统一就行好像具体看我的雪绒花

[IN'']
00:05:317 覺得可以拿掉 be我都这么放的……
00:13:974，00:14:060 其實我覺得整張圖的這個都很彆扭... 有點意義不明大概是3/4的过
00:37:717 (5,6) ctrl+G 有點意思不太好吧前面都是这个顺序来的
00:52:974 (3,4,1,2) 排列調整一下感覺這樣比較順不
01:42:517，01:48:003 這兩個1/3不跟到後面才跟感覺很怪啊.. 前面只跟synth
而且後面跟的1/3下的是note還全是NC真很難讀，如果後面不改的話建議前面這兩個點改折返slider 还好
02:12:174 這直接斷掉真的超級怪 02:12:346、02:12:688 不都還有那個效果音嘛你前面連續擺note的那個跟的synth
[BE'']
00:11:660 (1,2,3,4) 這..我不知道該說啥改了
00:11:831 這slider開頭是完全沒有音樂的，真正有音樂的地方反而是slider的中心
講白了 00:11:660 - 00:12:346 真要跟那1/3的話應該要再加紅線測time 漸慢很明顯
00:12:003 的開頭也沒在音樂上 ... 你再看其他人怎麼說吧
00:32:060 (2) 這樣挺好的為甚麼要捏那麼醜舒服
00:51:603，00:55:717，00:57:088 這是有音的 synth哭了不跟鼓
01:15:946 不跟? 下個note在 01:16:288 slider的頭上不跟
02:14:403 下note spinner往後1/4 ok
就這樣吧(´・ω・`)

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2016-07-20T04:33:57+00:00

ignorethis wrote:
00:52:460 (2) - 这个slider要我说节奏其实不太好折返的地方在音乐中没有对应的音所以听着有些违和跟的地鼓啊
01:59:317 (3) - 这个音效太突兀了這邊沒音效啊

另外那條拿走了clap
謝謝一個腦哥哥

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457,162,100803,2,0,P|455:124|447:82,1,81.6,10|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
393,19,101488,6,0,P|428:0|474:2,2,81.6,4|2|8,0:0|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,76,102517,2,0,P|294:79|253:58,1,81.6,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,20,103546,2,0,L|103:101,1,81.6,8|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
149,168,104231,5,4,0:0:0:0:
225,197,104574,2,0,P|266:185|306:186,1,81.6,2|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,266,105260,1,2,0:2:0:0:
244,295,105603,2,0,P|203:283|163:284,1,81.6,4|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
100,334,106288,2,0,P|83:297|88:258,1,81.6,8|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
132,188,106974,6,0,B|212:172|212:172|292:188,1,163.2,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,240,108003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,235,108347,2,0,P|437:194|457:160,1,81.6,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
507,95,109031,2,0,P|506:54|486:20,1,81.6,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,7,109717,6,0,P|363:10|323:8,2,81.6,8|2|8,0:0|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
485,19,110745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
482,100,111088,2,0,L|476:184,1,81.6,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,233,111774,2,0,L|418:317,1,81.6,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,319,112460,6,0,L|330:237,2,81.6,8|2|8,0:0|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,353,113488,2,0,P|221:350|184:331,1,81.6,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,186,114517,2,0,L|112:104,1,81.6,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,47,115202,5,8,0:0:0:0:
249,60,115545,2,0,L|330:51,1,81.6,2|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,130,116231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,143,116574,2,0,L|187:134,1,81.6,8|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
111,104,117259,2,0,L|96:188,1,81.6,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
101,266,117945,6,0,B|133:281|172:261|172:261|170:312|214:340,1,163.2,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,267,118974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,337,119317,2,0,B|342:312|340:261|340:261|379:281|411:266,2,163.2,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,267,121031,6,0,B|259:202|312:182|312:182|348:173|383:189|383:189|408:183,2,204,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,338,122746,2,0,P|176:303|172:253,1,102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,172,123431,5,0,0:0:0:0:
153,93,123774,2,0,B|108:112|108:112|87:162|87:162|46:127|46:127|-2:131,2,204,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,111,125489,2,0,P|280:118|332:109,1,102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,48,126174,5,4,0:0:0:0:
448,102,126517,2,0,P|503:169|420:179,2,204,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,48,128232,2,0,P|338:54|286:46,1,102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,22,128917,5,0,0:0:0:0:
138,65,129260,2,0,B|101:93|56:80|56:80|74:111|57:153|57:153|63:195,2,204,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,22,130975,2,0,P|254:12|312:35,1,102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,86,131660,6,0,B|399:88|437:71|437:71|480:66|512:80,2,153,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,110,133031,2,0,L|270:210,1,102,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,271,133717,2,0,L|339:371,1,102,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,134403,12,0,138517,0:0:0:0:

Usami Sumireko

16 posts

Joined December 2012

Usami Sumireko 2016-07-20T17:16:12+00:00

TAG里可以把DUB and bloody BASS写上
BG清晰度可以更高一点.具体你再找个图或者自己P一下就好了.如果你是故意模糊的当我没说
[IN'']
00:31:546 - 可以加一个note在00:31:717 (1)上
01:08:574 (1) - 包7吗
02:11:746 - 没用的话这些线删了吧
02:10:974 (1) - 四方完了之后接的地方打起来真别扭...
[BE'']
00:43:888 01:19:203 - unnecessary control point
00:30:860 (1) - 初见挺痛苦的.既然不是高潮那么可以试试稍微摆的容易读一点
由于难的地方你都NCNCNC了回血很快所以HP可以高一点.

水摸结束www

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2016-07-21T02:31:59+00:00

Usami Sumireko wrote:
TAG里可以把DUB and bloody BASS写上 ok
BG清晰度可以更高一点.具体你再找个图或者自己P一下就好了.如果你是故意模糊的当我没说反正你们都直接黑屏
[IN'']
00:31:546 - 可以加一个note在00:31:717 (1)上 no
01:08:574 (1) - 包7吗 ok
02:11:746 - 没用的话这些线删了吧 ok
02:10:974 (1) - 四方完了之后接的地方打起来真别扭... ok
[BE'']
00:43:888 01:19:203 - unnecessary control point 没懂
00:30:860 (1) - 初见挺痛苦的.既然不是高潮那么可以试试稍微摆的容易读一点 no
由于难的地方你都NCNCNC了回血很快所以HP可以高一点. ok

水摸结束www

DJMax

112 posts

Joined March 2015

DJMax 2016-07-23T02:04:32+00:00

m4m
EZ
01:54:346 - 这地方感觉漏掉不太好
NM
00:03:431 (2) - 前后ds怎么差了0.1
00:06:174 (2) - ↑
00:30:174 (1) - 弯的不好看，建议后面的弯曲和前面的角度一致
00:57:603 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这段的难度太低了，建议稍微填满一点
HD
00:09:603 (3) - 不用ds不太好
00:11:660 (2) - 这种和后面的容易对玩家造成误读
00:17:488 (4) - ds
00:18:174 (2) - ds
00:21:603 (4) - 这个太明显不是同样的间距，不过对称挺好看，不知道别人会不会说
感觉你这个难度可以当insane了，很多ds都没定

就这样吧，HD难度很多ds都没跟，到底是不是hard啊

Flower

1,723 posts

Joined August 2011

Flower 2016-07-23T08:51:02+00:00

Dynamix wrote:
HD
00:09:603 (3) - 不用ds不太好
00:11:660 (2) - 这种和后面的容易对玩家造成误读
00:17:488 (4) - ds
00:18:174 (2) - ds
00:21:603 (4) - 这个太明显不是同样的间距，不过对称挺好看，不知道别人会不会说
感觉你这个难度可以当insane了，很多ds都没定

就这样吧，HD难度很多ds都没跟，到底是不是hard啊

麻花说我说话太臭了，我改一下
看了一下似乎没有特意为了spread改难度和spacing的必要，而这些距离变化都在目前玩hard的人的能力范围内，也足够读懂，同时相比之下这些跳比后面的连续1/2单点容易得多。所以我决定不改。

Last edited by Flower 2016-07-23T09:09:52+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Hakurei Yoru 2016-07-23T08:59:11+00:00

这音效吓得我腿都软了

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2016-07-23T09:01:22+00:00

Flower wrote:
Dynamix wrote:
HD
00:09:603 (3) - 不用ds不太好
00:11:660 (2) - 这种和后面的容易对玩家造成误读
00:17:488 (4) - ds
00:18:174 (2) - ds
00:21:603 (4) - 这个太明显不是同样的间距，不过对称挺好看，不知道别人会不会说
感觉你这个难度可以当insane了，很多ds都没定

就这样吧，HD难度很多ds都没跟，到底是不是hard啊
light insane现在都叫hard了，本来星数限制在3.75以下就可以符合rank标准了，我这个可是2012年标准的hard，那时候的hard单点都有瞎几把跳的了，我这都只是滑条跳一跳。AR7.5下面preview之前的那段读起来还是比较容易的，别的就更不用说了
仔细玩一下就能发现实际上最难的部分是滑条上叠note，这对玩家来说类似一种急停再急行，这种看起来跳的当1/1打就行了
麻花原来的normal还有瞎几把1/3呢，看来我是不是应该也加一点
话说的可能比较冲，先说声对不住，不过核心论点就是难度比较符合当前的大势所趋

我草泥马怎么把我之前那个有瞎几把1/3说出去了能不能不剧透

-N a n a k o-

503 posts

Joined February 2012

-N a n a k o- 2016-07-23T17:33:00+00:00

尖叫的hitsound有夠可怕, 特別是在晚上的時候聽到這htisound, waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

[BE'']
00:11:888 (1,1) - 挺想知道這裏為何要疊著
00:43:717 (2,1) - 這裏疊著好像有點怪怪的
00:47:831 (2,2) - 藍2長條頭不疊著紅2長條尾?
00:56:060 (1,1) - 特意不疊著?
02:05:317 (2,2) - ^
01:24:003 (2,3) - 這裏距離突然減少了, 玩得不太舒服

[IN'']
00:52:803 - 這裏可以多放一個Note, 而且玩的時候也玩得怪怪的, 因為之前都是沒漏拍子
01:27:431 (8) - 這滑條尾沒對好前面的連打

[HD'']
00:09:603 (3) - 感覺這條滑條太斜了
00:24:346 (5,6,1) - 怎不把00:24:346 (5) - 也疊在一起, 個人覺得這樣才比較配合音樂
00:52:117 (2,1) - 我找不出來要疊的原因OAO
00:53:488 (1) - 既然之前是用1.7x, 怎麼突然要轉DS啊
01:50:403 (2) - 個人覺得這條用回01:49:717 (1) - 這條長條的pattern比較美觀
02:04:803 (3) - 感覺這裏DS跳得太突然了

[NM'']
00:19:031 (6) - 不弄成水平線?
00:27:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 不太建議圈圈內的數字超過6
01:20:403 (3,4) - 特意的?
01:59:317 (3) - Normal的Reverse不可以超過1個 (某BN說的)

Good Luck!

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2016-07-24T01:25:06+00:00

-N a n a k o- wrote:
尖叫的hitsound有夠可怕, 特別是在晚上的時候聽到這htisound, waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

[BE'']
00:11:888 (1,1) - 挺想知道這裏為何要疊著因为没空间了
00:43:717 (2,1) - 這裏疊著好像有點怪怪的不改
00:47:831 (2,2) - 藍2長條頭不疊著紅2長條尾? 对
00:56:060 (1,1) - 特意不疊著? 对
02:05:317 (2,2) - ^ fix
01:24:003 (2,3) - 這裏距離突然減少了, 玩得不太舒服那就不舒服

[IN'']
00:52:803 - 這裏可以多放一個Note, 而且玩的時候也玩得怪怪的, 因為之前都是沒漏拍子有个东西叫synth
01:27:431 (8) - 這滑條尾沒對好前面的連打 ok

Good Luck!

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2016-07-24T17:33:30+00:00

骏马
00:35:317 (3,1) - flow不太舒服吧最好把1调一下形状？
00:57:603 (1) - 尾巴不要那么高？撞血条不太好看

猪师傅
00:28:974 (6) - 建议把这个删掉然后从00:29:146 - 起个1/2 slider 现在这段节奏太长了有点难
00:53:146 (3) - 有点难建议换成circle
01:30:003 (6) - 建议删掉这个circle然后unstack 还有01:32:746 (6) -
01:59:317 (3) - 连续折返的1/2也是低难度不推荐的最好换一下

log for other diffs

00:10 *Zero__wind is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1027412 ESTi - HELIX [HD'']]
00:10 Zero__wind: 00:27:431 (1) - 头上需要个finish吧
00:12 Zero__wind: 00:33:431 (2,2) - 为什么不平行
00:13 Zero__wind: 00:45:603 (6) - 和前面00:44:746 (2,3,5) - 对比的话尾巴上应该加个soft whistle
00:14 Zero__wind: 后面00:48:517 (7) - 类似的都同理
00:18 Zero__wind: 因为01:40:631 (4,5,6) - 这个三连的关系考虑在01:51:603 - 这里也起三连
00:19 *Zero__wind is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1029043 ESTi - HELIX [IN'']]
00:19 Zero__wind: 00:08:917 (1,1,1) - 这都没变速为什么要那么多NC
00:20 Zero__wind: 00:12:003 (1) - 和00:12:688 (1,1) - 这些NC我觉得也没必要
00:37 [Mahua]: 大概是适应bediff的梗
00:38 Zero__wind: 感觉不变速加一堆NC不太必要
00:38 Zero__wind: 反而让人觉得是不是要变速了
00:38 [Mahua]: 反正没打算让他们只打一遍（
00:39 Zero__wind: 00:17:660 (6,1) - 这里 1上面有finish的离这么近感觉很不舒服
00:39 Zero__wind: 放远点吧
00:39 Zero__wind: 后面有几个类似的
00:39 [Mahua]: 好
00:40 Zero__wind: 00:39:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个梗感觉突然比前面的难了好多建议别离那么远
00:40 Zero__wind: 往中间靠拢一点的意思
00:41 [Mahua]: 那就不用改那个离得近的梗了感觉重复好多地方应该很多人都能打
00:41 Zero__wind: 哦哦
00:42 Zero__wind: 00:51:431 (1,2) - 不是很明白这个是怎么摆的反正从各种意义上看着都很歪
00:42 [Mahua]: 00:39:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个不黑可以打啊他鼠标还有一点抽风的问题
00:42 [Mahua]: 00:51:431 (1) - 直接按ds来的（
00:42 Zero__wind: 反正感觉不太好看
00:43 [Mahua]: 别的地方一开ez打就很不清楚啊
00:43 Zero__wind: 00:39:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个我不是说它本身很难主要是和前面00:34:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:37:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 音乐没什么变化的情况下突然变得有点难感觉有点奇怪
00:44 [Mahua]: 那我想想怎么改
00:47 [Mahua]: http://puu.sh/qcQ5h/04ee69c0ef.jpg
00:47 [Mahua]: ok？
00:47 Zero__wind: http://puu.sh/qcQ6m/4a016dd095.jpg
00:47 Zero__wind: 我想的是这样的
00:48 Zero__wind: 就是1 3 5是个1.0x的等边三角形
00:48 [Mahua]: 有点不太干净的感觉……
00:49 Zero__wind: 只是示意图= =
00:49 Zero__wind: 反正你看着改吧
00:50 Zero__wind: 01:05:831 (1) - 头上音效美丽
00:51 Zero__wind: 大概加个finish吧
00:52 Zero__wind: 01:36:688 (5) - 这个肯定应该1/4啊
00:52 [Mahua]: 我好像be那个diff这里就没加……
00:52 Zero__wind: 01:05:831 (1) - 我觉得头上可以soft finish
00:52 Zero__wind: normal的也可以好歹是4个小节一个
00:52 [Mahua]: http://puu.sh/qcQm8/f3cf4772f9.jpg
00:52 [Mahua]: ok？
00:52 Zero__wind: 靠谱
00:53 [Mahua]: 01:36:688 (5) - 这里我跟的是synth啊……
00:53 [Mahua]: 明显不想跟鼓……
00:54 Zero__wind: 那不是1/2吗
00:54 Zero__wind: 我怎么都听不出1/3
00:54 Zero__wind: 不过我耳机比较辣鸡
00:54 Zero__wind: 仅供参考
00:55 [Mahua]: 算了还是1/4
00:55 [Mahua]: 我感觉应该是后面是1/3
00:55 Zero__wind: 02:12:517 (4) - 这里节奏突然放缓了考虑NC一个
00:55 Zero__wind: 然后还有看aimod 有两个unsnap
00:56 [Mahua]: 可以
00:59 Zero__wind: 01:28:117 (2,3,4) - 这个地方感觉flow有点别扭 3的位置比较奇怪
01:00 [Mahua]: 打起来还可以
01:02 Zero__wind: 试试弄成类似这样？http://puu.sh/qcQNT/0f3db82e95.jpg
01:02 Zero__wind: 感觉现在2到3的那个角度还是有点卡
01:02 Zero__wind: 不过我也没想出什么很好的办法
01:02 [Mahua]: 01:36:688 (5) - 这里前面是1/2 后面是1/3
01:03 Zero__wind: 哦
01:04 [Mahua]: 01:28:460 (4,5,6) - 这个位置应该和前面几个小节同时选中算比较干净的一个位置了吧
01:05 Zero__wind: 嗯还可以
01:05 [Mahua]: 01:36:688 (5) -
01:05 [Mahua]: 这里想不出办法了
01:07 [Mahua]: 跟synth大概就要拆成两个
01:07 [Mahua]: 断了……
01:08 Zero__wind: 那样的话是要拆
01:08 Zero__wind: 打了一遍BE呗音效炸哭了
01:08 [Mahua]: 算了跟鼓1/4
01:09 [Mahua]: 那个是故意的（
01:12 *Zero__wind is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1009768 ESTi - HELIX [BE'']]
01:12 Zero__wind: 00:36:174 (2,3) - 不是很懂这个二连感觉很random
01:13 [Mahua]: 强调作用
01:13 [Mahua]: 也是想和前面的那个part有区别
01:14 Zero__wind: 或许可以考虑在别的哪个地方再用一次
01:14 Zero__wind: 因为那边好像就一个有点奇怪
01:15 [Mahua]: 00:29:146 (2,3) -
01:15 [Mahua]: 嗯（
01:16 Zero__wind: 00:56:060 (1,1) - 这个故意不叠好？
01:16 [Mahua]: 对
01:16 [Mahua]: 这个怕有读图问题
01:17 Zero__wind: 00:58:288 - 不加个circle？
01:17 [Mahua]: 后面有两个这样的节奏啊
01:18 Zero__wind: 嗯看到了
01:18 Zero__wind: 就是觉得有点怪
01:18 Zero__wind: 也不是什么大问题
01:18 [Mahua]: 感觉那个bass跟起来很有感觉（就是能不能听到就是另一回事了
01:20 [Mahua]: 01:36:688 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这个就让他1/6吧反正最高难度就当表上弦的声音了（
01:21 Zero__wind: 01:25:374 (2) - 这个就实在是有点不对劲
01:21 Zero__wind: 完全就串了轨
01:21 [Mahua]: （
01:22 [Mahua]: 转下一part了嘛（心虚
01:22 Zero__wind: 并没有到转的时候啊orz
01:23 Zero__wind: 感觉还是像前面几个小节一样继续跟
01:23 Zero__wind: 01:43:888 (7,8) - 这个应该是有问题了听一下应该是1/3
01:28 [Mahua]: 有点纠结
01:28 Zero__wind: 02:10:288 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这个梗实在是……好嗨远
01:28 Zero__wind: 刚才打的时候感觉自己他妈飞了起来
01:28 [Mahua]: 这里要是跟1/3就是跟了但是1/4就有点自创鼓的感觉
01:29 Zero__wind: 嗯反正那一段里别的地方听过去都还比较令人信服就那一个地方怪怪的
01:29 [Mahua]: 02:10:288 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里之前我自己是能打的
01:30 [Mahua]: 萨米打的时候也说可以
01:30 Zero__wind: 尾杀感人
01:30 Zero__wind: 02:12:517 (1,1,1) - 这个NC我比较懵逼
01:30 [Mahua]: （
01:30 Zero__wind: 我觉得02:12:517 (1) - 和02:12:860 (1) - 还是不加
01:30 [Mahua]: 让他们背图去
01:31 [Mahua]: 最后这几个nc是回血用的（
01:31 Zero__wind: 然后也没什么了吧
01:32 Zero__wind: 好了我去po了
01:32 [Mahua]: 好

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2016-07-25T08:44:25+00:00

Dynamix:
01:54:346 - 这地方感觉漏掉不太好沒辦法啊 1/2圓圈接滑條對於EZ來說太難了

01:
00:35:317 (3,1) - flow不太舒服吧最好把1调一下形状？ hao
00:57:603 (1) - 尾巴不要那么高？撞血条不太好看好吧

一圈boom了麻花

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VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,161 posts

Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2016-07-25T13:08:47+00:00

geenral

ez nm hd all hav an unsnappd objec t
u sud clean up ur hitsoundz,
hitsounds wit delay, under 100ms length, unused hitsoundz, not .wav hitsoundz etc + ther making ur osz big,
is it allowd 2 hav sv variety in ez/nm diffz? / / ?

EZ

01:19:546 (1,2) - BRE%TGFLESRGSC this blanket, , , ,

nm

01:22:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - id use the rhythm at 01:16:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - instead because then the rhythm alternates evry nc Xd

hd

00:24:346 (5,6) - ctrlg wud b bettr 2 emphasise the slidr
00:43:546 (1) - th rhythm is weird esp. consdiering the sliderend is ona big whit tik :L
00:52:117 (2) - y isnt the nc here
01:49:717 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - rip combo consistncy.. take the nc off of 01:54:346 (1) -

ins

00:04:803 (1,2) - the circle is off from slidertail direction
00:11:660 (1,1) - id raise sv for these so they visually look bigger than the 1/4 sliders
00:45:431 (2,3,4) - u sud give much mor space between 2 and 3 cuz of the htisound and snare emphasis : /
00:51:946 (3,2) - sud do a custom stak (try moving 00:52:460 (2) - to x:213 y:280)
00:54:860 - ur 1/2 stacks and 1/4 stacks that start on blu tiks r REALLY bad for playing.. u sud change them visually so ppl can tel which r 1/4 and which r 1/2 + possibly changing the rhythm in general (i think if u do 01:00:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - before 00:54:860 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - , tht wud be better for the player :0)
01:58:974 (4,1) - stacking wud play better cuz of 1/1 spacing
02:10:631 (3,4,1) - ????????????????? the spacing ebtwen 3 and 4 is huge but 4 and 1 is rlly small,, 1 is also a very emphasized note :/
02:11:660 (1) - rip fix slider length plz,.

bE

00:12:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - wud recommend ncing evry 5th note so its lik 1234123412341234
00:31:546 (1) - nc this it plays/reads much better :/
00:42:431 (1,2) - WTF BLUE TIK NC switch ncs plz -_
00:47:831 (2,2) - overlap looks kind of messy, ,
00:58:288 - sud add a circle here :L
01:03:774 - here 2.. and in any other place like this :-0
01:12:603 (1,2) - blue tick nc............. plz fix.
01:26:317 (1) - tbh remove nc,, add circle at 01:26:231 - and nc 01:26:403 (2) - cuz ur missing the sound at the red tick and blue tick ncs r bad,.
01:36:688 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - the star/5 note pattern sud start where 01:36:803 (1) - is cuz of the overlap..
01:48:346 (1,1) - this is the only time u stak..

g

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

[Mahua] 2016-07-25T14:33:34+00:00

VINXIS wrote:
geenral
ez nm hd all hav an unsnappd objec t
u sud clean up ur hitsoundz, ok
hitsounds wit delay, under 100ms length, unused hitsoundz, not .wav hitsoundz etc + ther making ur osz big, ok
is it allowd 2 hav sv variety in ez/nm diffz? / / ?
ins
00:04:803 (1,2) - the circle is off from slidertail direction ok
00:11:660 (1,1) - id raise sv for these so they visually look bigger than the 1/4 sliders cuz look well
00:45:431 (2,3,4) - u sud give much mor space between 2 and 3 cuz of the htisound and snare emphasis : / have same part
00:51:946 (3,2) - sud do a custom stak (try moving 00:52:460 (2) - to x:213 y:280) 00:49:031 (2) - i stak it
00:54:860 - ur 1/2 stacks and 1/4 stacks that start on blu tiks r REALLY bad for playing.. u sud change them visually so ppl can tel which r 1/4 and which r 1/2 + possibly changing the rhythm in general (i think if u do 01:00:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - before 00:54:860 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - , tht wud be better for the player :0) i dont think so
01:58:974 (4,1) - stacking wud play better cuz of 1/1 spacing slow to go to kiai(
02:10:631 (3,4,1) - ????????????????? the spacing ebtwen 3 and 4 is huge but 4 and 1 is rlly small,, 1 is also a very emphasized note :/ have same part
02:11:660 (1) - rip fix slider length plz,. ok
bE
00:12:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - wud recommend ncing evry 5th note so its lik 1234123412341234 dont want change
00:31:546 (1) - nc this it plays/reads much better :/ look bad
00:42:431 (1,2) - WTF BLUE TIK NC switch ncs plz -_ ok
00:47:831 (2,2) - overlap looks kind of messy, , ez to move
00:58:288 - sud add a circle here :L synth track
01:03:774 - here 2.. and in any other place like this :-0 ^
01:12:603 (1,2) - blue tick nc............. plz fix. ok
01:26:317 (1) - tbh remove nc,, add circle at 01:26:231 - and nc 01:26:403 (2) - cuz ur missing the sound at the red tick and blue tick ncs r bad,. look bad than now
01:36:688 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - the star/5 note pattern sud start where 01:36:803 (1) - is cuz of the overlap.. no change
01:48:346 (1,1) - this is the only time u stak.. yes only this time
g

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Zweib 2016-07-25T16:07:04+00:00

"Azure"

[NM'']

01:43:374 加note slider 往後拉少一拍
不拉
02:10:631 確定這個重音就這樣略過嗎? 你前面都有跟的說看看别人怎么说

"ignorethis"

<NM>
01:43:374 (3) - 这个地方是你故意摆成这个节奏的吗？比较难预料都是滑条应该还好吧
01:54:346 (3) - ^

"VINXIS"

nm

01:22:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - id use the rhythm at 01:16:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - instead because then the rhythm alternates evry nc Xd seems it doesn't make much difference lol

"Dynamix"

NM
00:03:431 (2) - 前后ds怎么差了0.1 没有啊 0.01
00:06:174 (2) - ↑
00:30:174 (1) - 弯的不好看，建议后面的弯曲和前面的角度一致是说不对称吗，修了一下
00:57:603 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这段的难度太低了，建议稍微填满一点不改了

"-N a n a k o-"

[NM'']
00:19:031 (6) - 不弄成水平線? 修了
00:27:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 不太建議圈圈內的數字超過6 我是觉得没到二位数就不影响美观吧
01:20:403 (3,4) - 特意的? fix
01:59:317 (3) - Normal的Reverse不可以超過1個 (某BN說的) 改了

"Zero__wind"

猪师傅
00:28:974 (6) - 建议把这个删掉然后从00:29:146 - 起个1/2 slider 现在这段节奏太长了有点难全stack了，再说难打你哦
00:53:146 (3) - 有点难建议换成circle 滑条更好混吧感觉区别不大
01:30:003 (6) - 建议删掉这个circle然后unstack 还有01:32:746 (6) - 不太想改
01:59:317 (3) - 连续折返的1/2也是低难度不推荐的最好换一下改了

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Hollow Wings

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Hollow Wings 2016-07-25T16:51:28+00:00

m4m

BE''

00:53:488 (1,2,3,4) - 突然小跳感觉好憋屈，顺序改2413好了。
01:36:688 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这段没有明显snap的音，估计会被挑。
01:51:431 (2) - 跳太大了，反向吧。
整个图的1/4连打，三连就不说了，有些长串也是基本上啥都没跟。有些wub音其实是随机的，用1/4混过去感觉不太好。。。我为什么用lks的remix就是为了避免这个问题。。。其他么，类似于第一条mod的ds憋屈的地方貌似还有挺多，虽然不影响打击感就是了。。。

IN''

00:57:603 (1,2,3) - 对于这个梗，我个人认为把00:57:946 (2) - stack在00:57:603 (1) - 更能够配合00:56:488 (2,3,4) - 的感觉一点。。。不知道为何，你看着办吧，后同。
02:12:174 (3) - 这个也是同理，感觉stack在02:12:517 (1) - 上比较有感觉。
排成这种类型的图感觉就很不错了。。。

HD''

00:31:717 (1) - 反向更好些。
00:55:203 (1,2,3) - 这里可能就需要体现一个节奏对称的概念了，这个节奏实在是undermap了太多，导致之后的部分节奏丰富就显得呼应不足。。。最好再来一组相同节奏的来平衡一下，不然是有点难受的特别是对于这种动次打次曲。

NM''

00:13:717 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 如今的社区对N难度出现这种复杂节奏是表示不给过的态度的，建议简化节奏，也就是说不要gap不同的节奏混杂在一起。01:16:803 (1) - 开始同理。01:53:488 (2,3) - 这种也是。
你这N的break比E还多啊，估计会被挑。

EZ''

00:18:860 (5) - E难度还是尽量不要搞1/2折返。

全diff set的1/4和最高难度建议一样。。。总之我是不太推荐各种形式的overmap，自己拿捏好了。。。

good luck

[Mahua]

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[Mahua] 2016-07-25T17:10:15+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
m4m

BE''
00:53:488 (1,2,3,4) - 突然小跳感觉好憋屈，顺序改2413好了。就让他沉稳的移动吧这里我个人感觉是应该这种排列
01:36:688 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这段没有明显snap的音，估计会被挑。当后面的chain音（
01:51:431 (2) - 跳太大了，反向吧。 ok
整个图的1/4连打，三连就不说了，有些长串也是基本上啥都没跟。有些wub音其实是随机的，用1/4混过去感觉不太好。。。我为什么用lks的remix就是为了避免这个问题。。。其他么，类似于第一条mod的ds憋屈的地方貌似还有挺多，虽然不影响打击感就是了。。。

我想做出有故事性的效果啊开始就是吸血鬼第一次出现第一次惊慌逃脱喘息更小心的逃脱后面的尖叫代表了被发现的心情最后的kiai是第二次袭击大概这种感觉
这毕竟是sin的续作啊总要有点故事性的对吧
IN''
00:57:603 (1,2,3) - 对于这个梗，我个人认为把00:57:946 (2) - stack在00:57:603 (1) - 更能够配合00:56:488 (2,3,4) - 的感觉一点。。。不知道为何，你看着办吧，后同。 ok
02:12:174 (3) - 这个也是同理，感觉stack在02:12:517 (1) - 上比较有感觉。 ok
排成这种类型的图感觉就很不错了。。。
全diff set的1/4和最高难度建议一样。。。总之我是不太推荐各种形式的overmap，自己拿捏好了。。。

good luck

ak74

236 posts

Joined November 2011

ak74 2016-07-25T17:59:26+00:00

来摸了
[General]
有些没用的绿线好像是得去掉的
EZ难度的00:43:888 - 这里有kiai然而其它没有，我觉得这个应该没事吧

[EZ'']
首先点开Aimod
01:57:259 (5) - 物件结尾没对齐

[NM'']
好

[HD'']
01:05:831 - 和 01:16:803 - 这两根绿线好像没用啊
00:55:203 (1,2,3) - 这里的节奏比后面的类似地方的节奏要简单，感觉有点怪，我推荐和01:08:574 (1,2,3,4) - 或者 01:14:060 (1,2,3) - 啥的保持一致

[IN'']
00:24:003 (4) - 按照前面的，这个可以NC
02:10:974 (1,2) - 这个离前面是不是太近了
02:13:803 - 这个绿线位置有点诡异啊。。。虽然好像没啥大碍

[BE'']
00:33:431 (2) - 这个音效有点突兀的
01:19:203 - 这条绿线好像也没用。。。 00:43:888 (1) - 这根不知道有没有用啊，去掉好像也没事
00:57:946 (2) - 滑条结尾这里的音并不明显，在这停顿我是觉得没啥问题，但是后面白线再加个circle也许会更爽吧（也更普通），后面还有几个类似的地方也一样
这其实可以直接找狗rank了，我是摸不出啥了

水摸完毕
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