[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hi Jin
my advices will mainly contain the character to balance your diff

Click

1/2/3/4/5/6/7

[Alter Doppelganger]

00:01:540 (1540|5) - move to 2 wanted to keep the chord same as 00:01:112 (1112|4,1112|0,1112|6,1112|2,1112|5) - this one because the pitch is same
00:03:469 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5613477 looks good!
00:09:576 (9576|5) - move to 4 applied
00:17:505 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5613676 would be a bit hard to read with the SVs, so I'll keep it as is for now
00:29:076 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5613503 added
00:30:469 (30469|2,30683|2) - move to 2 moved!
00:36:308 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5613685 added
00:37:219 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5613691 changed
00:47:719 (47719|2) - move to 4 moved
00:43:326 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5613698 I would like to keep it as is because of the pitch
01:08:130 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5613726 I wanted to emphasize the trill here in the right hand section, so I kept the left & right hand separately
01:18:148 (78148|1,78148|2) - move to 5 and 6 same pitch as 01:17:719 (77719|1,77719|2) -
01:28:862 (88862|1) - move to 3 ? 01:28:648 (88648|0,88648|1,88755|1,88755|0,88862|1,88862|0,88969|0,88969|1) - wanted to keep these as consistent minijacks
01:30:790 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5613561 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5613598 want bdsm ? HAHA rip (but rearranged a little bit)
01:43:862 - add ln to 4 column, 01:44:076 - end here can't due to 7 notes ;w;
01:50:505 (110505|5) - 01:52:219 (112219|5) - and 01:53:933 (113933|5) - move to 5 moved
02:05:398 (125398|2) - move to 2 wanted to keep the [124] jacks going here
02:07:862 (127862|4) - move to 4 moved
02:08:398 (128398|3) - move to 5 same as 02:05:398 -

Good luck !

• Hi Mod Request
  
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1. Offset ::793
   [hard]
2. 01:11:505 (71505|6) - 01:11:826 (71826|6) - /01:13:005 (73005|4,73005|6) - 01:13:326 (73326|5,73326|3) -
   노트가 차이나는 이유가 뭐에요?
   
3. 01:14:290 - 노트 2개도 괜찮지않을까여
   
4. 02:14:505 - 노말이랑 비교해봤을때 노트수가 많네여
   노말에서 노트를 2개로 늘리거나 하나를 줄이거나 해야할거같아요
   
5. 02:15:362 - 02:16:219 - 02:17:076 - 02:17:933 - 02:18:362 - 02:21:790 -
   
   
   [insane]
   
6. 00:03:040 (3040|0,3255|0) - ctrl+h 슬럼걸리기 너무 쉬운거같은 패턴...이네여
   
7. 00:04:862 (4862|3) - 00:05:076 (5076|3) - 여기는 왜 노트가 1개인지 잘 모르겠어요
   분명 의도하신거같은데 뭘 의도하신건지..

BilliumMoto wrote:

[centre]Modding from:
[Insane]
01:00:148 (60148|4) - Stay with the LN scheme that you've established, the effect from 00:59:505 (59505|2) is here good idea
01:00:790 (60790|4) - ^ etc okies
01:04:433 (64433|4) - you could totally map the snares right before this lone note which doesn't seem to match anything except said snare added
01:32:183 (92183|0,92183|2) - LNs should go all the way to the end of the beat, make the gap smaller alright
01:32:933 (92933|0,92933|6,92933|4) - ^ same as above
the last note not being an LN, the fact that none of the drum bursts are mapped here even though players at this level can handle some of that, and the fact that there are no SVs, it's almost insulting lmao mm good point. I'll see what i can do with this difficulty

[Alter Ego]
The monster eh, please get this ranked
00:09:362 (9362|4,9362|2) - space these LNs like you did 00:06:469 (6469|4) got it
00:10:701 (10701|3,10755|4,10808|5,10862|2,10862|0,10915|1,10915|3,10969|4,10969|2,11023|5,11023|3) - was going to complain about this but on second thought it's pretty cool oh wew
00:14:665 (14665|0) - lmao please tell me this is playable everything in this diff is playable ;w;
00:18:040 (18040|3) - ^ yup playable
00:22:540 (22540|4,22540|1,22648|0,22648|3) - same chords, same columns put it in the same column
00:35:505 (35505|6,35505|0) - LNs should end somewhere around 00:37:112 (37112|4) changed and rearranged
00:40:380 (40380|4,40380|3) - not hearing a concrete sound on these 1/4ths, meant to be dumpy? yup (and you can kinda hear the definite snap at 1/4 if you listen to it on a slow speed)
00:42:040 (42040|2) - short 1/4th LN because same sound as 00:42:148 (42148|0) applied
00:45:362 (45362|6,45362|5) - ghost you sure? at 25% sound i can hear those rolls ending here pretty clearly
00:55:648 (55648|2,55648|0,55648|1,55648|3) - kool dude nice meme ayy
01:00:148 (60148|0,60148|2,60148|1) - keep doing it here, even if only for a beat okies =w=
01:00:790 (60790|0,60790|3,60790|1,61005|2,61005|0,61005|3) - reduce the gaps between these LNs kk
01:08:130 (68130|5,68183|4,68237|5) - pretty sure these are ghosts you can hear those piano notes clearly
01:09:255 (69255|3) - not hearing this note should be audible at a slower speed :<
01:12:576 (72576|4,72630|3,72683|2) - or these you're right on this one, fixed
01:30:790 (90790|5) - kool dude ayy
02:07:326 (127326|2) - this isn't the only snare that sounds like this, there's one at 02:07:165 too, im sure there's more examples of stuff like this but i'm bad at reading these patterns I only put those layers for places where it's not very interrupted by the heavy 5 note chords :p
02:08:880 (128880|4,128880|3) - ayy you got this snare pattern right good job aa
02:13:058 (133058|4) - p sure snare is here and not 02:13:112 (133112|2) o0o time to add a note
I would like so see more bursts mapped in this ending stretch, otherwise it becomes a long stretch of 1/2s with some 1/4 stuff every now and then and it's not fitting of something as chaotic as this song you really wanna see players suffer don't you? huehuehue
02:19:969 (139969|1) - Extend this to 1/2? yup[/box]

Final impressions:
wtf i spend an hour and a half on this
please mod my map too i need it thank mr jonjon ok will do when i have time ' w'

Niks wrote:

• Hi Mod Request
  
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1. Offset ::793 사실 offset같은 경우는 5ms 범위 안에 있으면 크게 상관을 안하기 때문에 ㅠㅠ 이걸로 나둘게요
   [hard]
2. 01:11:505 (71505|6) - 01:11:826 (71826|6) - /01:13:005 (73005|4,73005|6) - 01:13:326 (73326|5,73326|3) -
   노트가 차이나는 이유가 뭐에요? 오옹 두개로 바꿨습니다
   
3. 01:14:290 - 노트 2개도 괜찮지않을까여 넵!
   
4. 02:14:505 - 노말이랑 비교해봤을때 노트수가 많네여
   노말에서 노트를 2개로 늘리거나 하나를 줄이거나 해야할거같아요 넵 줄였습니다
   
5. 02:15:362 - 02:16:219 - 02:17:076 - 02:17:933 - 02:18:362 - 02:21:790 -
   
   
   [insane]
   
6. 00:03:040 (3040|0,3255|0) - ctrl+h 슬럼걸리기 너무 쉬운거같은 패턴...이네여 바꿔봤습니다
   
7. 00:04:862 (4862|3) - 00:05:076 (5076|3) - 여기는 왜 노트가 1개인지 잘 모르겠어요
   분명 의도하신거같은데 뭘 의도하신건지.. 만들떄는 1노트로 해도 괜찮을거라 생각했는데 킥때문에 하나 더 넣어야 겠군요

움.. 못잡겠다

Wonki wrote:

끄젹여보러왔어여
이지 HP랑 OD 봐주세여! ?_? HP OD 7이 적당한 것 같아요
인센 2개겹칩니다! 인센이 2개여도 랭에 문제는 없어요 ~ (심지어 둘다 난이도명이 인센이여도 ㄱㅊ)

Hard

00:00:898 (898|4,1112|4) - 요게 은근히 치기힘드네요 http://puu.sh/q3dOn/0b3e3405ee.jpg 이렇게 해보는걸 추천합니다! 좋네요!
01:00:362 (60362|5,60362|0,60469|4,60576|0,60576|6,60683|5,60790|1,60790|0,60790|4,61005|2,61005|6,61005|5,61219|4,61219|0,61219|1) - 2성중반치고는 이부분이 너무 어려운거 같습니다 조정해주셨으면 하네여 약간 바꿔봤는데 많이는 안바뀌였습니다

7키는 4성부터는무리네여 그래도 열심히 찾아봤습니다!

ArcherLove wrote:

incoming modding easy diff

I will mod the extras after you and your gders updating

disclaimer : moving or adding means it is better playability for me to play OR it is just seems right on my mapping pointview - not just random "move here to x" kkk

Easy

00:05:933 (5933|3) - move to 3 -> 00:08:076 (8076|2) - move to 5 -> 00:08:933 (8933|4) - move to 3 -> 00:09:362 (9362|3) - move to 5 I think using middle columns are fine~
00:14:505 (14505|3) - move to 7 kk
00:23:076 (23076|3) - move to 3 for consistency with 00:20:505 (20505|4,21362|4) - that was because the pitch was same, it isn't same here
00:54:040 (54040|2,54040|4) - snap this to the white line after, easier to hit by beginner okies
00:58:219 (58219|3,58648|3,59076|3) - http://puu.sh/q3esb/d698b0e917.jpg did the minijack for pitch (it isn't so fast either so it should be fine)
01:02:505 (62505|5) - move to 1 these types of patterns should be fine for beginners
01:15:362 (75362|1) - move to 1 okies
01:23:505 (83505|4) - move to 7 same pitch as the note before
01:32:076 (92076|4) - m,ove to 3 same pitch as the note before and after
01:34:648 (94648|2) - move this -> 01:34:433 - sounds good
01:35:505 (95505|4) - move to 2 same pitch
01:39:362 (99362|0) - wat no shield on ez pls -> move to 2? moved to 3
01:43:326 (103326|4) - move to 7? pitchy pitchy
01:46:005 (106005|2) - move to 1 moved
01:47:729 - add to 7 -> 01:48:576 (108576|4) - move to 3 don't wanna introduce 1/2 snaps here and again due to pitch
01:50:076 (110076|2) - m,ove to 1
01:51:790 (111790|2) - move to 7
01:53:505 (113505|2) - move to 1
01:55:219 (115219|2) - move to 7 rejected these 4 suggestions to follow the percussion better (also not too hard to play)
02:04:648 (124648|6) - move to 3 alright
02:06:362 (126362|2) - ,pve tp 2 pitch
02:08:076 (128076|4) - move to 7 pitch!
02:12:790 (132790|3) - move to 5 moved

Normal

00:00:898 - add atr 3 or 2 -> 00:01:112 (1112|6,1326|6,1540|6) - ?? how about 7-6-5 or 7-5-3? pitch / not a fan of 1/2 snaps at the beginning
00:02:076 - add at 3 not really distinct enough to add a note here
00:02:826 - add at 6 no 1/2 snaps :<
00:03:255 (3255|0) - move to 7 pitch
00:05:076 (5076|4,5290|2) - move to 6-2 okay
00:08:505 (8505|5,8719|1) - move to 5-3 alright
00:16:219 (16219|5,16219|1) - move to 1-7 no due to same pitch
00:28:219 (28219|2) - move to 5 different sound with the note before same pitch as the note before
00:30:576 (30576|4) - move to 7 pitch
00:38:290 (38290|4) - move to 7 pitch!
00:41:719 (41719|4) - move to 1 moved to 7
00:43:755 (43755|1,43755|2) - move this -> 00:43:862 - better guessing for newbie alright
00:46:219 (46219|3,46433|3,46648|3) - move to 1-5-7? would like to keep them as jacks for pitch relevance
00:50:076 (50076|5) - move to 4? okay
01:11:290 (71290|0) - move to 3/7? consistency on the percussion (same sound)
01:13:112 (73112|2) - move to 1 also same percussion sound
01:14:719 (74719|1) - move to 6 same as above
01:32:076 (92076|2,92076|0) - move to 5-7 -> 01:32:505 (92505|0,92505|2) - move to 3-5 -> add more 01:32:933 (92933|0) - on 3 also kept for pitch
01:35:290 (95290|4) - move to 3 -> 01:35:719 (95719|2) - move to 1 I think the jacks are fine here, not too fast either
01:42:683 (102683|3) - move to 5 -> 01:43:326 (103326|3) - move to 3 moved
01:46:005 (106005|6,106005|0) - move to 2-6 kept for consistency on the percussion
01:53:505 (113505|1) - move to 4 rearranged a bit differently
02:12:790 (132790|1) - either move to 1 or 4 same pitch

Hard

00:24:148 (24148|3) - move to 6 ok
00:27:576 (27576|3) - move to 7 same pitch
00:46:219 (46219|2,46219|1) - move to 5-6 PITCH!
01:00:148 (60148|0,60576|0) - move to 2 nice suggestion!
01:02:719 (62719|3) - move to 3 same pitch

Insane

00:00:898 (898|0,898|3) - move this 1 collumn to the right? pitch
00:02:826 (2826|2,2826|4) - move to 5-7 pitch
00:03:576 (3576|6,3576|4,3683|6,3683|4) - http://puu.sh/q3gnB/1698942016.jpg kept for consistency on sound
00:28:219 (28219|2) - move to 5 PITCH
00:38:183 (38183|6,38183|5,38398|0,38398|1) - http://puu.sh/q3gun/822b894675.jpg kept for consistency on pitch
00:39:148 (39148|1,39148|5) - move to 3-5 ok this one is different so moved
02:00:576 (120576|3,120683|4,120790|5) - move this 1 collun to the right moved
02:07:112 (127112|2,127112|0,127112|1) - move tgo 3-4-5 pitch

(sorry AL, but most of your mods were rejected because they went against my idea of keeping the same pitch in the same column )
good luck!

Kim_GodSSI wrote:

9성 짜리 랭크 (앙)?

9성짜리

00:03:469 - ~00:03:790 - 이 부분 같은 음과 같은 박자 이니 똑같은 패턴으로 가시는게 좋아요 [ Ex) 3 5 7 x 3 연타 ] ㅋㅋㅋ 전에 누가 저걸 바꾸라고 해서 바꿨는데 결국엔 다시 바꾸게 되었네요

00:03:898 (3898|0,3951|1,4005|2,4058|0,4112|1,4165|2) - 롱노트 멜로디 따라가셨는데 밑에랑 위랑 똑같이 해주셔야지 안이상 합니다. 또한 너무 왼족으로 치우치셨어요 오른손 왼손 골구로 사용해주시면 더 높은 퀄리티가 날올 것 같습니다. 넵, 바꿔봤습니다

00:04:969 - 여기 부분 에 밑 패턴 이랑 따로 분리 시켜놓으셨는데 바로 밑에 있는 패턴 처럼 34 34 연달아 치는 패턴을 넣어주셔야 같이 어울려 집니다.


이런것 처럼요. 이 난이도는 layering에 비중을 크게 두었기 때문에 지금 쓰는 패턴이 pitch까지 고려해선 가장 좋은 패턴이라 생각합니다

00:05:933 - 이 부분 패턴 이렇게 해보면 어떨까요 ? 치기엔 편한 패턴이지만 layering/pitch를 고려했을 땐 지금 패턴이 더 알맞아요 ㅠ


00:07:380 - 1번 롱놋끝을 이쪽으로 해주세요. 넵

00:09:362 - 여기 롱노트 패턴 너무 가운대로 몰렸습니다. 1, 7번 줄도 같이 사용할 수 있으면 좋을것 같습니다. 가운데에 분포되어 있는 롱놋트 떼는 부분을 오른쪽 왼쪽 잘 조절하면서 해보세요 :3 롱놋은 그대로 나두되 단놋을 조금 편안하게 바꾸어봤습니다

00:14:398 (14398|6,14398|5) - 삭제 하는게 좋을것 같습니다. 6 7 약간 다르게 처리해봤습니다

00:14:665 - 롱노트 왜 섞여 있는지 모르겠어요 :ㅁ 차라리 그냥 단노트만 놓거나 롱노트 길이를 더 길게 해줘서 어떤 음에 넣었는지 알 수 있으면 좋겠네요. 이게 바이올린(?) string synth 소리를 강조하려고 롱놋을 넣은건데, 롱놋 길이를 더 길게 하는것도 나쁘지 않다고 생각합니다.

00:16:380 - 여기 밑에 있는 롱놋으로 한줄로 만드는게 맞는것 같습니다. 약간 바꿔봤습니다

00:17:505 - ~00:17:933 - 기계음이 밑으로 내려가는 소리에 맞춰서 단노트 넣어보는게 어떨까요? 이부분의 기계음이 스냅이 분명하지 않아서 그냥 변속으로 처리했습니다 ㅠ

00:30:362 - 이쪽 패턴 너무 왼쪽에 패턴이 치우쳐 졌습니다. 골고루 배치해 주세요 이게 원래 음정이랑 layering을 고려해서 이렇게 짰는데.. 일단 약간 바꾸어봤습니다

00:31:112 - 중간에 드럼소리로 한턴 멈추는 것 같은 음이 나옵니다. 그걸 따라서 쉬는 타임 만들어 주면 어떨까 합니다. 꽤 괜찮은 방법이라 생각합니다.


이런식으로

00:37:433 (37433|2) - 1로 움직이고, 00:37:433 (37433|5) - 7로 옮겨 주시구, 00:37:487 (37487|1) - 3으로 옮겨 주신 후, 00:37:540 (37540|6) - 없에 주시면 더 낫을것 같네요. 넵


00:38:612 - 이 부분


이런건 어떨까요 ? 일단 음악에선 두번째 1/4가 더 강조되기 때문에 그건 안바꿨지만, 형태는 님이 주신 패턴을 보고 만들어봤습니다

00:39:362 - 조금 무리 하신것 같아요. 주된 멜로디만 넣는걸 추천 합니다. 약간 수정해봤습니다

00:40:165 (40165|4,40165|2) - 여기 없에 주시고 패턴 다듬는걸 추천 합니다. 일단 노트 1개만 없애고 다듬어 봤습니다

00:49:433 (49433|3,49433|0,49433|5,49433|6,49433|1) - 이 부분 배치를 1 2 4 5 7 로 하는건 어떨까요 ? 밑 패턴이랑 같게 하는것도 나쁘지 않는것 같군요. 넵!

00:49:969 (49969|3) - 삭제 해주세요. 걸리적거리긴 하네요. 없앴습니다

00:52:326 (52326|6) - 롱노트 없는게 괜찮을것 같아요. 넵

00:53:183 - 이 부분


롱놋 없에주시고 이렇게 끝는게 괜찮을것 같아요. 괜찮은 패턴으로 바꾸어 보았습니다

00:55:648 - ~ 01:01:540 - 너무 왼쪽에다만 롱놋을 놓으셨는데 골구루 배치 해주세요. 이건 의도한거라 어쩔수 없네요 ㅠ

01:03:898 (63898|2) - 삭제 하면 어떤지 snare layering때문에 없애면 consistency에 문제가 됩니다

01:08:290 - 여기 왼쪽 패턴


이렇게 대칭 해서 놓는게 더 좋을것 같아요. 네 마음에 들어요!

01:14:451 - 고스트 노트 인것 같은데 애매 하군요 일단은 나두어보고 나중에 더 생각해보겠습니다



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Feerum wrote:

Hey Jeanjean

Le Random Mod

NO. ARE YOU CRAZY. IT'S TIME TO STOP

No.. good luck .. xd

BilliumMoto wrote:

Modding from:

BilliumMoto's Mania Workshop


First Impressions:
Some music is very boring because it is repetitive. Nobody in their right mind will read a novel that is 200 pages of the same word over and over again.
This song is the opposite. It is 200 pages of complete gibberish.
I played your Insane first. It was the prime example of typical iJinJin mapping, nothing new or experimental, and had me wanting to kill myself halfway through because gibberish gets boring quickly.
I then watched Alter Ego, and was actually quite impressed at some of the patterns that were there. I'll point these out later.
However, for every single difficulty, the song is what mainly dictated the mapper's creativity. The mappers only chose to do interesting things because the song made it intuitive. There is nothing inherently creative anywhere in this mapset, and this is what I was looking for in my queue.

We do have a new champion for "dumbest map ever" if this gets ranked so whee, eat it -Kamikaze-

tl;dr gibberish song controls minds of mappers to make a beatmap to its will

I've already spent ten more hours modding than I bargained for this week so leggo

tinkerings inside

[Interlude's]
00:09:576 (9576|5,10005|5) - why are these triples and 00:09:790 (9790|2) not? Because they are basses, and marked points are snare drum
00:14:987 (14987|4,15040|3,15094|2) - There are actually no 1/4s here, this is a dumpy pattern The electric synth sound goes descending at 1/4 here, so those notes are quite legit. Other difficulties point them out as well
00:30:362 (30362|4,30362|5,30362|6) - I know you don't follow pitch relevance but these first four should be staggered while 00:30:790 (30790|1,30790|2,30790|0,30898|5,30898|4,30898|6) should be jacks Nice, applied
00:31:648 (31648|0,31969|1,32290|3,32612|5) - LNs should be shorter, happens many more times Seems legit, applied
01:33:362 (93362|3,93362|2,93362|4) - not understanding these staggered LN releases, if you did it just to look cool it doesn't really work because it doesn't fit anything in the music Well the holding piano sound does fit, and did not put it just for the coolness of the difficulty; however I could consider remaking this part.
01:52:648 (112648|5,112648|4,113076|2,113076|1,113505|5,113505|4) - all kicks, put in same columns, it's a really easy part, don't do that whole "alternating hands are cool" thing here. Fixed
01:49:326 (109326|0) - i don't understand this LN end, why is it so early? ??? Didn't get you here
Just like jakads's, check your drum timings on the final chorus Re-checked, and compared with Alter Ego diff.

Final impressions:
wtf i spend an hour and a half on this
please mod my map too i need it thank mr jonjon

ArcherLove wrote:

continue

[alter ego]

00:01:755 (1755|3,1969|3) - move to 2? different sound applied
00:03:362 (3362|1) - add 1 more note at 6 It used to be there but someone told me to delete it to emphasize the 3 note jack that comes right after :<
00:28:219 (28219|2) - move to 4? i know the chord is slightly different but still want to emphasize the same pitch on the melody
for this 00:32:933 (32933|4,32933|2,32933|3,32933|0,32933|6) - section SV how about this instead? 00:33:415 - change to 1 -> and 00:32:933 - change to 10 or 5 -> and then add 00:32:947 - (1/16) 0.5. It's a neat idea, but I think I prefer the current one more ;w;

JIN BILLIUMMOTO IS RIGHT YOU SHOULD ONLY MAP X DIFF D:


also jin, mod over the top please ,w,) will do~
the easier diff is priority (and extra diff if you still have time after)

thanks and good luck

BilliumMoto wrote:

tinkerings inside

Only watched through these, here are the more obvious things that stood out to me:
[Jakads's]
01:08:130 (68130|4,68183|2,68237|4) - ghost notes eh you can hear piano trill
01:10:862 (70862|6) - why only an LN when you map every other reasonable burst in the song? this one isn't that fast. map gets too dirty if I put 1/8 there :/ I've tried it
01:52:648 (112648|5,112648|4,113076|3,113076|2,113505|4,113505|5) - these are all kicks, put them in the same columns for variety
02:06:630 (126630|2,126630|1,126683|6,126683|0,126683|3,126737|4,126737|5) - snares are not at 1/4, they are at 1/8
02:08:773 (128773|5,128773|6,128987|2) - ghost notes, listen carefully for the rhythm of the snare here eh I can hear it clearly
02:19:005 (139005|3,139040|4,139076|5,139112|6,139165|3,139165|4) - there is no way this is the right rhythm but it is tho
02:20:612 (140612|3,140826|2,141040|1,141255|0) - I'm not hearing these 1/2s it's like lower piano sound, you can hear it

Another Lie wrote:

ET Ijinjin x Blocko. This mod may or may not dissapoint you, but in game that "player" are different (pro or not).
In real world, players / people must help each other.
I humbly present my mod as requested for pro mapper & player

Insane

00:22:540 (22540|4,22648|4) - this may a bit "akward" (since these note are same sound 00:20:826 (20826|2,20933|3) - ) you may re-arrange that jack nahh, the pitch that you've highlited is Eb-F, but the one you specified as "awkward" are both G, so they deserve a minijack
the same problem that bother me 02:00:255 (120255|2,120362|2) - same reason like above same as above
00:44:933 (44933|6,45040|4,45148|6) - may i ask what are these notes? why not make it balance like the left one?
from my vision, it looks like "unbalanced". These are for the percussion, while the right hand side deals with the synth notes

Alter Ego

00:40:326 (40326|6,40326|5,40380|3,40380|4) - could you make it chords? in my vision, it will be easier to play also that "unbalanced placement" fair point, fixed

Hard

These area 00:31:648 - until here 00:35:183 - why won't you make it LN? in my opinion: it will be better to play & those area are long tune right?
00:50:505 (50505|0,50505|6,50933|0,50933|2,51362|2,51362|4) - same like above applied both

Nice map, that makes me shoot some stars

pporse wrote:

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EYA- wrote:

Hi! NM request from PELMESHKI queue
I really like your map and hope u will rank it

Alter Ego <3

00:01:755 - how about this? http://puu.sh/q6Nb9/bcb60302d4.jpg I kept the current pattern because 00:01:755 (1755|2,1755|5,1755|3,1755|0,1755|6,1969|6,1969|3,1969|5,1969|0,1969|2,2076|3,2076|2,2076|6,2076|0,2076|5) - these sounds are the same pitch, and the second one is only slightly different

00:04:862 - add not to 2 col? This breaks the consistency :< the percussion sound is layered as 3 notes and the synth is layered as 2 notes

00:31:005 - http://puu.sh/q6NZs/f56ec99ed2.jpg applied

00:35:987 - http://puu.sh/q6O3g/66f9ef448c.jpg try this streams? rearranged

Alter ago diff is the example of perfect mapping and pattern knowledge | art of perfection

Eternalie wrote:

Dadon modsu

mod

colllumn = 1/2/3/4/5/6/7
[Easy]
00:15:790 (15790|1) - add 1/1 LN I don't think it really fits with only this part being an LN because the next parts aren't mapped at all. Consider it like a break after a short bang!
00:16:005 (16005|4) - add a note okay~
it gives a cool and simple enough flow I think
00:20:505 (20505|4) - move to 6 ? (next note isn't same pitch) nice catch!
00:44:290 (44290|3) - add note to 4 , actually the whole thing is tricky to catch up I think the current density is enough, no need to add another note for emphasis here ;n;
01:47:719 (107719|5) - add note to 6 (the instru you are following have a sound here) I rejected the idea of adding a note here to keep this difficulty simplistic, but I guess it's alright
[Normal]
00:02:076 (2076|0) - Add note to 1 I kinda think it's a weird spot to emphasize stuff with 2 note layering, especially considering that everything else here was snapped with a single note
00:44:719 (44719|0) - add another note ? cymbal sound Usually don't layer sounds like this on easier difficulties unless they are of considerable intensity compared to the rest of the music
00:51:576 (51576|3) - shouldn't this LN start at he white line earlier ? I guess it works better this way
[Hard]
00:23:505 (23505|2) - Move to 5 for pitch good catch!
00:34:219 (34219|1,34219|3) - Maybe move 1 collumn to the right side, (patterns are fine tho so mah) Did this for the pitch
01:21:862 (81862|4,81862|2) - is thoose snaps normal ? owo yup! 1/3 snaps o/

Not so long mod , but eh , hope it can help abit atleast , Good luck jET jET

Mechanizen wrote:

Can you put the video in it? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xx3QSxV4ZKQ

Virtue- wrote:

Virtue's Mania Modding Queue

Things that you need to know :

1. this mod contains of suggestions, something that need to be fixed, and my opinions
2. if your map still need to be fixed, just req in my queue

General

Title/Artist : OK!
Song : OK!
BPM/Offset : OK!
BG/Video : OK!
Hitsounds : OK!

Easy

No problem here

Normal

00:00:791 (791|3,1112|6,1326|6,1540|6,1755|0,2290|4,2505|6,2719|3,3040|0,3255|0) - i kinda don't get here.... maybe like this will do? :/ added some notes similar to your rhythmic structure
00:07:862 (7862|2,8076|5,8290|1,8505|4,8719|2,8933|5,9148|1) - how about this? looks good
00:33:576 (33576|4,33576|0) - there are 2 crash that you skip it, u can add it and do something like this decided to add one note for each of those parts
00:34:219 (34219|0,34219|4,34540|1,34540|5,34862|2,34862|6,35183|1,35183|5,35505|0,35505|4,37648|2,37648|6) - ctrl h keeping this for now

Hard

00:00:791 (791|0,791|2,898|6,898|4,1112|2,1112|0,1326|0,1326|2,1540|0,1540|2,1755|0,1755|2,1862|4,1969|2,2076|6,2076|4,2290|1,2290|2,2505|4,2505|5,2719|4,2719|6,2826|0,2826|2,3040|4,3040|6,3255|4,3255|6,3469|5,3576|3,3683|1) - is this and this will do? :/ rearranged slightly differently
01:13:112 (73112|3,73112|1) - move left
01:13:326 (73326|3,73326|5) - move right applied both
02:19:862 (139862|0,140076|2,140290|4,140505|6,140719|1,140933|3,141148|5) - try this I want to keep the current pattern for pitch

-END OF MOD-

SCORES

92 / 100

sorry for the short mod, i can't mod Insane+ diffs in 7k (newbie in 7k)
good luck for your map, CAN'T WAIT THIS MAP GET RANKED >w<)

PS : the SV's are crazy enough, well that's evening that we know

Lenfried- wrote:

o boi

two hardest diffs are waaay beyond me

Im very happy with how Interlude's diff turned out and i did check it with no personal issues

A few personal issues with Insane:
00:51:576 - what what what? No i just can't. This could be much better in terms of difficulty. Not fan of diff drops like that :V good point, I've beefed up this part quite a bit
A lack of SV's is also a personal issue, it's an Insane diff and there should be at least a few SVs here and there, slowjams should be enough will try to add some SVs in the near future

no kds but you have my favorite and my support

LastExceed wrote:

Shouldn't the song be called "Doppelgänger" instead of "Doppelganger" ? At least thats how the german word is written... (you can write the ä with alt+132 or simply replace it with ae)
anyway nice beatmap, stay crazy and get this ranked

sankansuki wrote:

random mod here

alter ego

not sure if already mentioned but at 00:55:005 - 01:01:540 maybe ctrl h that, because the audio is on the right side while notes are on the left.
just something i saw unless my headphone is fucked, then dw

LastExceed wrote:

Would you accept 4k GDs?