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Cita Citata - Meriang (Speed Up Ver.) [Taiko]

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Annadine

Hello! NM from modding queue~! PM
As requested
Gilak[]
  1. Suggestion aja nih, gimana kalo 00:11:473 (1) - pindahin ke kiri dikit, soalnya ini (2) susah amat readnya dempet gitu.
    pict
    4,5,1 jadi kayak triangle juga lah itu uneven tapi lmao
  2. Gue ga yakin sama long break ini. Kasihin spinner sampe 00:28:414 ato apa kek ):
  3. 00:40:591 (3,4,5) - Not ini kok mepet mas fort? Padahal triplet triplet lainnya di daerah situ udah agak lebih lebar semua ): Di note yang sama di 00:46:238 (3,4,5) - aja juga lebar lho.
  4. 00:46:238 (3,4,5) - tambahin curvenya di (4) mas fort?
  5. 01:08:297 (2,3,4,5) - susah readnya mas fort. Gimana kalo move 01:08:650 (4,5) - ke sini:
    img
    jadi garis lurus juga or sth
  6. 01:15:532 (3,4,5,6) - mas ini perbedaan letak 01:15:708 (4,6) - kok beda ya sama kayak 01:15:532 (3,5) - atau 01:14:297 (4,6) - gitu? Yang itu lebih mepet, padahal jump back & forth lainnya mayan konsisten pertambahan jaraknya(?)
  7. 01:17:826 (1,2,3) - & 01:19:238 (1,2,3) - juga beda tuh spacingnya
  8. 01:21:179 (4,5,6,7) - ini mah rectangle jump bukan square jump ;; cucah atuh mas aimnya.
Culit[]
  1. 00:12:002 (3,4) - fix blanket ;;;;)
  2. 00:25:591 (4) - remove NC? Di lagunya aja itu masih satu bait lah istilahnya ):
  3. Why nc here00:51:002 (1) - but not here 00:52:414 (4) - or here 00:56:650 (4) -?
  4. 01:11:826 (3,1) - fix blanket ;;;)
"Biasa aja" -lit120[]
  1. 00:39:708 (5) - NC
  2. 01:15:002 (5) - ^
  3. 01:17:473 (9,1) - fix blanket ;;;)
[]
Nishit goblom gue mau ulangan malah minta mod. Sampe gak ranked ranked awas ya lu gue rebus
Sori shitmod gue udah lama ga ngemod aha aha okegan
Raveille


Here we gooooooooooooooooooooooo

|1|2|3|4|

Easy
Nothing much, but here's something:
00:08:650 (8650|3,8650|0,8826|2) - can 00:08:826 (8826|2) - be moved to 4 since it is still the same sounds as the intro.
00:11:473 (11473|3,11650|1) - likewise for 00:11:650 (11650|1) -

Normal
00:08:650 (8650|0,8826|1) - 00:08:826 (8826|1) - to 1 cause intro consistency
01:16:767 (76767|0,76944|1) - 01:16:944 (76944|1) - to 1 cause it follows same pattern as 01:16:944 (76944|1) -

Hard
Pretty good tbh. Nice going Rizqy :)

Max
00:04:679 - this is probably intentional (after seeing the other diffs) but maybe you could add sounds to the percussion block?
00:16:238 (16238|2,16591|2,16767|2,16944|2,17120|2) - 3.47* means this part is a little...eh?
00:26:672 (26672|2,26848|1,27032|0) - are these purposely unsnapped?
00:27:730 (27730|2) - this one too. might be intentional, but snapping them still sounds right.
weird, the rest of the patterns are ok, only those 2 sections were unsnapped.

Also, for Standard would it be Fort's Greget instead of Greget? Just checking in case. I don't understand Indonesian so if he said that Greget was ok then IGNORE THIS PLZ :o

ok deez it good luck for rank cause this looks neat. 8-)
- Frontier -

Hi ~ From TH Modding Group



FC Gay PatZar /me runs
Plz Translate That diff name for me ;w;

[Gila]
00:14:826 (3) - I think make this slider same with 00:14:297 (1) is better

[Greget]
00:12:179 (4) - IMO ctrl+g better flow lmao

Sorry for a short mod ;w; Maths delete my brain :( And the rest of this map is "Good" !
good luck !!
Protastic101
This song's catchy, even though I have absolutely no idea what it's about, but anywayssssss.

Column 1|2|3|4

Ngeng?
[General]- Check AImod for the Mania diffs about preview time.
- OD for Easy is a little low for something with barely any LNs. Increase it to ~7.2?

[Easy]00:25:591 (25591|3,25591|2) - I feel like using a double on the release of an LN is kind of difficult for an Easy difficulty. Reduce it to a single note?

[Normal]00:12:355 (12355|3,12532|2) - Suggest moving to 2 and 1 respectively since the sound is the same alternating two notes.
00:19:767 (19767|2) - Move to 2 since this is a different pitch than 00:19:591 (19591|2)
00:18:797 - Add a note here for the synth like you did for the drums at 00:10:326 (10326|3)
00:30:532 - Add an LN here for the rising volume of the cymbal? End at 00:31:238 If accepted, column 1 would probably be the best choice, and just move 00:31:238 (31238|0) to 4.
00:35:473 (35473|0,35826|2,36179|1) - Make these doubles for the snare?
00:59:650 (59650|3,59826|0,60179|2,60532|1) - ^^
01:16:679 - Add note here for synth.
01:17:650 (77650|0) - Move to a different column since this is a different pitch than at 01:17:473 (77473|0)

[Zan's Hard]00:07:238 - Add a note here as the sound is the same as 00:04:414 (4414|3)

[Zan's Maximum]00:03:267 and 00:04:679 - Suggest adding notes for the drums.
00:04:061 (4061|0) - Move this to 3 since it's the same sound as 00:03:885 (3885|2)
00:04:591 (4591|2) - Remove, it's a ghost note. The drum doesn't hit until 00:04:679
00:06:885 (6885|0) - Move this to 2 so it's jacked with 00:06:708 (6708|1) since they're the same sound.
00:08:385 - Add a note here for that click sound?
00:13:150 - Add note here? It's fairly quiet, but I think it's kind of easy for a player to think that there'd be a short roll here due to the structure of the song.
00:16:944 - Add note in 1 to make this a double since it's a kick like the previous notes?
00:19:238 (19238|3,19238|2,19414|2,19414|3,19591|1,19591|0,19591|2,19767|1,19767|0) - You know what would be cool here? if you added 1/4 beat LNs to accent the trumpet. Something like this
00:26:672 (26672|2,26848|1,27032|0) - Snap these notes to 00:26:650 then 00:26:826 and 00:27:002 since it's like that in every other diff.
00:27:730 (27730|2) - Snap to 00:27:708 Did you get Ozzy's offset and forget to snap the notes? O.O
00:50:297 (50297|1,50297|0) - Reduce this to a single since it's not as heavy as the kicks?
00:51:708 (51708|2,51708|3) - ^^
01:00:355 (60355|2,60355|0) - Definitely needs to be a single. It's much quieter than the surrounding notes.
01:00:708 (60708|2,60708|3) - ^^

Day 9001, song still stuck in my head XD
Surono
hahalol hahalol, wu8

map ngeng
Ciyus Miapah

Annadine wrote:


Hello! NM from modding queue~! PM
As requested
Gilak[]
  1. Suggestion aja nih, gimana kalo 00:11:473 (1) - pindahin ke kiri dikit, soalnya ini (2) susah amat readnya dempet gitu.
    pict
    4,5,1 jadi kayak triangle juga lah itu uneven tapi lmao
  2. Gue ga yakin sama long break ini. Kasihin spinner sampe 00:28:414 ato apa kek ):
  3. 00:40:591 (3,4,5) - Not ini kok mepet mas fort? Padahal triplet triplet lainnya di daerah situ udah agak lebih lebar semua ): Di note yang sama di 00:46:238 (3,4,5) - aja juga lebar lho.
  4. 00:46:238 (3,4,5) - tambahin curvenya di (4) mas fort?
  5. 01:08:297 (2,3,4,5) - susah readnya mas fort. Gimana kalo move 01:08:650 (4,5) - ke sini:
    img
    jadi garis lurus juga or sth
  6. 01:15:532 (3,4,5,6) - mas ini perbedaan letak 01:15:708 (4,6) - kok beda ya sama kayak 01:15:532 (3,5) - atau 01:14:297 (4,6) - gitu? Yang itu lebih mepet, padahal jump back & forth lainnya mayan konsisten pertambahan jaraknya(?)
  7. 01:17:826 (1,2,3) - & 01:19:238 (1,2,3) - juga beda tuh spacingnya
  8. 01:21:179 (4,5,6,7) - ini mah rectangle jump bukan square jump ;; cucah atuh mas aimnya.
Culit[]
  1. 00:12:002 (3,4) - fix blanket ;;;;)
  2. 00:25:591 (4) - remove NC? Di lagunya aja itu masih satu bait lah istilahnya ):
  3. Why nc here00:51:002 (1) - but not here 00:52:414 (4) - or here 00:56:650 (4) -?
  4. 01:11:826 (3,1) - fix blanket ;;;)
"Biasa aja" -lit120[]
  1. 00:39:708 (5) - NC
  2. 01:15:002 (5) - ^
  3. 01:17:473 (9,1) - fix blanket ;;;)
[]
Nishit goblom gue mau ulangan malah minta mod. Sampe gak ranked ranked awas ya lu gue rebus
Sori shitmod gue udah lama ga ngemod aha aha okegan

- Frontier - wrote:

Hi ~ From TH Modding Group



FC Gay PatZar /me runs
Plz Translate That diff name for me ;w;

pay attention, please

Biasa = Standard
Sulit = Hard
Gila = Insane
Greget = Extra


[Gila]
00:14:826 (3) - I think make this slider same with 00:14:297 (1) is better

[Greget]
00:12:179 (4) - IMO ctrl+g better flow lmao

Sorry for a short mod ;w; Maths delete my brain :( And the rest of this map is "Good" !
good luck !!
fix all things here, thanks for mod :)
http://puu.sh/pfbv1/b89a7e4b1c.rar

@annadine ane ada sebagian mod yang di reject di diff gila tapi cuman dikit, soalnya ane pas kemarin" reply tapi gk ke post
Topic Starter
Nishizumi
updated std diffs

thank you guys

Edit : sorry for mania modders, i was deleted mania diffs. (reason on desc)
Shiny Spoon


So apparently I just finish modding a Fort map and go straight to another. W e w l a d

[Greget]

00:08:826 (2) - I feel this slider should end on the white tick instead of the blue.

00:11:650 (2) - ^

00:12:885 (1) - Should probably end on the red tick.

00:19:238 (5,6,7,8) - One awkward pause imo.

01:11:650 (5) - NC because pause

01:22:944 (5) - NC because pause

[Gila]

00:16:238 (3) - Slider feels so out of place. Mainly the pattern after it makes it feel that way.

01:11:650 (4) - NC the pause plz

01:22:944 (3) - ^

[Final Thoughts]

I'd add more, but im bad a insane mods, I did the best I coould. I wish you the best of luck

Good Luck!

- Spoon
Yasora
is that okay double ajep ajep in tags? xd
Surono
maybe one of them changed to ajeb instead? lol its like indonesian and indonesia
Haruto
As Requested sorry for the delay ><

[General]
  1. Uncheck Widescreen Support on the following diffs
    1. Standard Diffs :v
  2. Nishit goblom tagsnya conflicting sama std diffs lmao
[Biasa aja]Circle Sizenya dinaikkin dong Fort, ini current SR mepet banget sama 2.00 lol dan ini juga lowest diff, easier dikit kan bisa ;) probably CS 3.3 would help so there'll be a gap between Biasa dan Sulit
  1. 00:11:473 (1) - mungkin ini bisa dipendekkan ke 00:12:002 - terus ditambahi repeat, tapi kalo jadi 1/2 00:12:532 (2) - ini dihapus. ya gpp sih menurut gw, daripada skip downbeat 00:12:885 - disini? imo aneh sih lol tapi terserah fort aja ww
  2. 00:16:414 (5,1,2) - flownya gaje imo. tiba2 dari straight langsung diagonal, mungkin bisa coba path/rhythm way yg lain?
  3. 00:19:591 (5,6,1) - can be stacked to reduce the diff's density
  4. 00:25:591 - diff lain breaknya dikasi jeda sampe 00:27:002 - kenapa diff biasa ga fort?
  5. 00:36:885 (1,2,3) - minor fix, rhythm waynya bisa lebih lurus jadi visually lebih rapi ;)
  6. 00:42:532 (1,3) - gatau ya cuma menurut gw aja wkwk overlapnya menurut gw aneh coba seperti ini
    keliatan lebih rapi jadinya lol
  7. 00:46:061 (2,3) - dibuat blanket aja mungkin?
  8. 00:49:591 - hasemeleh kiainya dense banget :o coba remove beberapa 1/2 note jadi densitynya bisa berkurang, toh ini juga lowest diff kecuali kalo lu mau buat diff "mudah" jadi lu gaperlu remove 1/2 notesnya lol
  9. 00:55:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - flownya sedikit aneh, especially 00:59:297 (6,7) - , yg sebelumnya diagonalic gitu, yg ini ga jadi kurang konsisten imo lol
  10. 01:00:885 (1) - ctrl+j? lebih enak flownya imo
  11. 01:17:826 - 01:21:708 - hasemeleh ini dense juga :o bingung saia mz fort

    Gw kurang yakin sih sama rhythm choice lu, maksudnya pattern 1/2nya, lowest diff ga harus se-dense ini imo :cry:
[Cucah (2)]
  1. 00:13:767 (4,5) - sudden jump is weird lol, daripada jump disitu mending jump dari 00:14:120 (5) - ke 00:14:297 (1) - for emphasize ;) since 00:14:297 - is a strong beat gw rekomendasikan banget buat jumpnya dari 5>1 daripada 4>5 lol
  2. 00:19:414 (5,6,7) - visually, spacing didnt look the same. mungkin disamain? biar lebih enak diliat lol seakan2 gw liatnya kayak 1,3x spacing terutama di 00:19:414 (5,6) - lol
  3. 00:41:120 (1,2) - minor blanket fix
  4. 00:45:002 (4,1) - same
  5. 00:56:650 (4,5) - fort :( ini sumpah visual gameplaynya aneh banget, kalo 00:57:179 (5) - slider 1/1 panjang aja gpp jadi keliatan bagus :( maybe do something like blanket would help
  6. 00:58:591 (2) - ctrl+g flows much better imo
  7. 01:00:002 (2,3,4) - wah ini dense banget buat diff hard. maz ini masih diff hard ga usah buat yg cucah2 :( jump paling ngga ya sliderjump aja cukup buat diff hard kalo note jump mah terlalu dense :o consider to reduce them pls
  8. 01:10:238 (3,4) - minor adjustment. rhythm waynya bisa lebih lurus ;)

    mungkin itu aja sih, doublecheck spacing jumpnya fort. beberapa part ada yg terlalu dense gitu
[]
ntar gw lanjut malam lol poke aja gw maz nishit
will rank this when im a bn ;)) /plak
Froskya
Hi!~ NM from my queue :D
Biasa

  1. 00:35:473 (1) - amateurs can not see one more repeat, cut
  2. 00:51:002 (3,4,5) - this pattern can looks better ( see at 00:49:591 (1,2,3) )
  3. 00:52:414 (5) - NC
  4. 00:58:061 (5) - ^
  5. 01:15:002 (5) - ^
  6. 01:02:297 (1) - delete NC
  7. 01:05:120 (1) - ^
  8. 01:07:944 (1) - ^

Sulit

  1. 00:04:414 (1,1) - delete NC
  2. 00:03:532 (2) - move some right (1px)
  3. 00:06:355 (2) - ^ left ^
  4. 00:26:174 - delete break move
  5. 00:57:179 (5) - this slider can looks better
  6. 00:54:885 (5) - add clap

Good Luck~ Rank that, please *~* :)
Ciyus Miapah

Shiny Spoon wrote:



So apparently I just finish modding a Fort map and go straight to another. W e w l a d

[Greget]

00:08:826 (2) - I feel this slider should end on the white tick instead of the blue. no for variety

00:11:650 (2) - ^

00:12:885 (1) - Should probably end on the red tick. why?

00:19:238 (5,6,7,8) - One awkward pause imo. it's stack

01:11:650 (5) - NC because pause

01:22:944 (5) - NC because pause

[Gila]

00:16:238 (3) - Slider feels so out of place. Mainly the pattern after it makes it feel that way. hmmmm, it's okay i don't see any problem there

01:11:650 (4) - NC the pause plz

01:22:944 (3) - ^

[Final Thoughts]

I'd add more, but im bad a insane mods, I did the best I coould. I wish you the best of luck

Good Luck!

- Spoon

Haruto wrote:

As Requested sorry for the delay ><

[General]
  1. Uncheck Widescreen Support on the following diffs
    1. Standard Diffs :v
  2. Nishit goblom tagsnya conflicting sama std diffs lmao
[Biasa aja]Circle Sizenya dinaikkin dong Fort, ini current SR mepet banget sama 2.00 lol dan ini juga lowest diff, easier dikit kan bisa ;) probably CS 3.3 would help so there'll be a gap between Biasa dan Sulit
  1. 00:11:473 (1) - mungkin ini bisa dipendekkan ke 00:12:002 - terus ditambahi repeat, tapi kalo jadi 1/2 00:12:532 (2) - ini dihapus. ya gpp sih menurut gw, daripada skip downbeat 00:12:885 - disini? imo aneh sih lol tapi terserah fort aja ww jadi elu mau apaan sih? :V
  2. 00:16:414 (5,1,2) - flownya gaje imo. tiba2 dari straight langsung diagonal, mungkin bisa coba path/rhythm way yg lain? 00:17:120 (1,2,3,4) - assasin creed
  3. 00:19:591 (5,6,1) - can be stacked to reduce the diff's density hidup harus konsisten, itu sidik 1.0x gk perlu di nerf
  4. 00:25:591 - diff lain breaknya dikasi jeda sampe 00:27:002 - kenapa diff biasa ga fort? oh
  5. 00:36:885 (1,2,3) - minor fix, rhythm waynya bisa lebih lurus jadi visually lebih rapi ;) rhythm way nya bisa lebih lurus? *bengong, teu ngarti aing
  6. 00:42:532 (1,3) - gatau ya cuma menurut gw aja wkwk overlapnya menurut gw aneh coba seperti ini
    keliatan lebih rapi jadinya lol
  7. 00:46:061 (2,3) - dibuat blanket aja mungkin? kalau gamau gimana hayoh? :^)
  8. 00:49:591 - hasemeleh kiainya dense banget :o coba remove beberapa 1/2 note jadi densitynya bisa berkurang, toh ini juga lowest diff kecuali kalo lu mau buat diff "mudah" jadi lu gaperlu remove 1/2 notesnya lol pls ini udah paling gampang, namanya juga diff biasa, jadi gk terlalu gampang sama gk terlalu susah
  9. 00:55:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - flownya sedikit aneh, especially 00:59:297 (6,7) - , yg sebelumnya diagonalic gitu, yg ini ga jadi kurang konsisten imo lol 10/10 antique pattern
  10. 01:00:885 (1) - ctrl+j? lebih enak flownya imo kek, 01:00:179 (8,1) - kurang nendang ke sini
  11. 01:17:826 - 01:21:708 - hasemeleh ini dense juga :o bingung saia mz fort nerf

    Gw kurang yakin sih sama rhythm choice lu, maksudnya pattern 1/2nya, lowest diff ga harus se-dense ini imo :cry:
[Cucah (2)]
  1. 00:13:767 (4,5) - sudden jump is weird lol, daripada jump disitu mending jump dari 00:14:120 (5) - ke 00:14:297 (1) - for emphasize ;) since 00:14:297 - is a strong beat gw rekomendasikan banget buat jumpnya dari 5>1 daripada 4>5 lol anjir ini bhs kek rujak, ya lah
  2. 00:19:414 (5,6,7) - visually, spacing didnt look the same. mungkin disamain? biar lebih enak diliat lol seakan2 gw liatnya kayak 1,3x spacing terutama di 00:19:414 (5,6) - lol
  3. 00:41:120 (1,2) - minor blanket fix
  4. 00:45:002 (4,1) - same meni kudu nukieu oge
  5. 00:56:650 (4,5) - fort :( ini sumpah visual gameplaynya aneh banget, kalo 00:57:179 (5) - slider 1/1 panjang aja gpp jadi keliatan bagus :( maybe do something like blanket would help NotLikeThis
  6. 00:58:591 (2) - ctrl+g flows much better imo gw pengennya jump jadi suka" gw lah :V
  7. 01:00:002 (2,3,4) - wah ini dense banget buat diff hard. maz ini masih diff hard ga usah buat yg cucah2 :( jump paling ngga ya sliderjump aja cukup buat diff hard kalo note jump mah terlalu dense :o consider to reduce them pls
  8. 01:10:238 (3,4) - minor adjustment. rhythm waynya bisa lebih lurus ;)

    mungkin itu aja sih, doublecheck spacing jumpnya fort. beberapa part ada yg terlalu dense gitu
[]
ntar gw lanjut malam lol poke aja gw maz nishit
will rank this when im a bn ;)) /plak

Revialink wrote:

Hi!~ NM from my queue :D
Biasa

  1. 00:35:473 (1) - amateurs can not see one more repeat, cut pls it's not for newbie
  2. 00:51:002 (3,4,5) - this pattern can looks better ( see at 00:49:591 (1,2,3) ) i assume 00:50:826 (2,3,4,5,6) - as creepy star pattern
  3. 00:52:414 (5) - NC
  4. 00:58:061 (5) - ^
  5. 01:15:002 (5) - ^
  6. 01:02:297 (1) - delete NC
  7. 01:05:120 (1) - ^
  8. 01:07:944 (1) - ^ i put custom NC setting so it's okay

Sulit

  1. 00:04:414 (1,1) - delete NC
  2. 00:03:532 (2) - move some right (1px)
  3. 00:06:355 (2) - ^ left ^
  4. 00:26:174 - delete break move kek
  5. 00:57:179 (5) - this slider can looks better
  6. 00:54:885 (5) - add clap

Good Luck~ Rank that, please *~* :)
kekness - Ardiemerde 2016
http://puu.sh/pM0NN/bb835e0ee2.rar
Topic Starter
Nishizumi
updated
Surono
"kekness" -Ardiemerde

buru cari penanda fine diff buat takonya nish oo when, .
Ardiemerde

Surono wrote:

"kekness" -Ardiemerde

buru cari penanda fine diff buat takonya nish oo when, .
yeeee
Volta
in taiko diffs, it didn't appear in aimod but apparently many notes are unsnapped by less than 0.01 ms. this cause some trouble like at 00:36:885 - and 01:00:885 - in Sur's Oni (notes didn't follow the SV)

also, there is audio preview point conflict with std diffs probably caused by offset change
Topic Starter
Nishizumi
fixed all
Surono
bedug cecede, mending main pb blekskuet
OzzyOzrock
Ok, after checking the diffs, I realized that the problem is that there is no real linear spread. Kantan to Futsuu is really close, Muzukashii has a few spots where it's too complicated compared to Futsuu, and the weird part is that some parts of Muzukashii have good spread with only one of the Onis, because Surono mapped some parts easy, that are mapped harder in the Oni.

Basically, it's hard to see a linear spread, so you should talk with PatZar and make it a little more neat!
PatZar
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Meriang.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49600
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 2.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.700002

[Metadata]
Title:Meriang (Speed Up Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Meriang (Speed Up Ver.)
Artist:Cita Citata
ArtistUnicode:Cita Citata
Creator:Nishizumi
Version:Gen's Muzukashii
Source:
Tags:indonesia indonesian dangdut koplo ajep ajep cut short version Surono Genocide PatZar Rizqy Zan_-
BeatmapID:911720
BeatmapSetID:415751

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,75
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Topic Starter
Nishizumi
updated

looks like no big changes for muzu and futsuu
patzar said if he reduce 1/4 mostly it would be almost similar as futsuu

hope you understand it :)
Surono
eidt

BCD!11! NGNTTTDD!!!!!!!1
Volta
clearing my list.

[Kantan]
00:16:414 - tambah k supaya konsisten dengan outro? (01:14:297 - )
00:22:061 - tambah d ^

00:36:179 - tambah k sebenernya masih bisa biar konsisten sama sebelum2nya (e.g: 00:33:355 - ) dan transisi ke section selanjutnya lebih mulus

[Futsuu]
00:19:944 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - ini gak diinvert warnanya?
01:19:944 (187,188,189) - d d k

[Oni]
00:01:591 (1) - ada suara sih tp rasanya spinner ini gak perlu. hapus? atau suara spinner bisa dikecilin sekitar 20%
00:08:297 (14,15,16,17) - gw sbnernya masih gak suka sama SV di 1/3 ini :c lebih mudah dilihat kalau dihapus


itu aja sih, maap telat.
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

Volta wrote:

clearing my list.

[Kantan]
00:16:414 - tambah k supaya konsisten dengan outro? (01:14:297 - ) sengaja gw bikin kosong karena buat di part akhir aja biar "sedikit" lebih susah
00:22:061 - tambah d ^ ^

00:36:179 - tambah k sebenernya masih bisa biar konsisten sama sebelum2nya (e.g: 00:33:355 - ) dan transisi ke section selanjutnya lebih mulus oh well

[Futsuu]
00:19:944 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - ini gak diinvert warnanya? oiya
01:19:944 (187,188,189) - d d k sure

[Oni]
00:01:591 (1) - ada suara sih tp rasanya spinner ini gak perlu. hapus? atau suara spinner bisa dikecilin sekitar 20% nah gw dari awal juga mau ngurangin itu volume spinnernya, tapi bingung gimana `-`deleted for best choice
00:08:297 (14,15,16,17) - gw sbnernya masih gak suka sama SV di 1/3 ini :c lebih mudah dilihat kalau dihapus tbh emang susah diliat sih kalo bagi orang awam :< but this looks more aesthetic


itu aja sih, maap telat.
thank you volta

selfmod : decreased volume to 70% in quiet part and sv kantan to 1.30
Volta
taiko diffs are fine. Muzu has a bit different style but i'm okay with it. but idk about standard, so putting don icon for now

Don'd!
Topic Starter
Nishizumi
thanks volta :)

MR OZZY WHERE ARE YOU
Ayyri
yoyoyoyoyoyoyoyoyo

Fix this so I can mod the Standard set. Thank you!

No guest mapper should have more difficulties in the mapset than the creator, all modes together.
Topic Starter
Nishizumi
hmmmmmmmmmm ok

will change oni to inner oni, and make an oni (easier than surono's)

dem ;;

edit : YE IT'S DONE :<
Volta
lol. call me again after std diffs are checked
Ayyri
hi tank and volta

[General]
  1. I know that, I personally had no idea what the difficulty names meant until I asked Nishizumi. So it possibly would be good if you changed the difficulties to English, like you have in your other set. But keep the last difficulty name as Greget.
  2. The kiai could be turned off at 00:59:473 - and turned back on at 01:00:885 - if you wanted a small break in it.
[Biasa]
  1. 00:46:061 - and 00:46:767 - This could be a nice blanket.
Relatively solid difficulty.

[Sulit]
  1. Rather than a normal, this difficulty feels a bit like an Advanced. Considering that you have jumps like 00:11:120 - and 00:11:473 - / 00:46:414 - and 00:46:591 - / 00:54:355 - and 00:54:532 - . These seem a bit big for a Normal difficulty, like I said. As well as the density is quite a bit more than in the Biasa difficulty.
Please correct me if I'm wrong about what was intended here. ;;

[Gila]
  1. 00:07:591 - This reverse slider feels a bit out of place with how you previously mapped this rhythm at 00:04:767 -.
  2. 00:19:238 - and 00:19:591 - For a Hard, this jump is a bit big, make it a somewhat smaller.
  3. 00:24:708 -, 00:25:061 -, and 00:25:591 - Same issue as above.
  4. 01:11:120 - and 01:11:297 - ^
  5. 01:11:826 - and 01:12:179 - ^
  6. 01:13:238 - and 01:13:591 - ^
  7. 01:14:297 - and 01:14:473 - ^
  8. 01:15:708 - and 01:15:885 - ^
  9. 01:18:532 - and 01:18:885 - ^
  10. 01:20:297 - and 01:20:650 - ^
  11. 01:21:708 - and 01:22:061 - ^
  12. 01:23:120 - and 01:23:297 - ^
My main issue with this difficulty was that it felt too hard for the difficulty that it was aimed at being. In which case, this felt more like an Insane in some parts, like I pointed out.

[Greget]
  1. 00:07:502 - Change the sampleset from soft, to normal on this slider tail. Sounds weird that it's not the same as the first time this rhythm happens at 00:04:679 - .
  2. 00:08:120 - Why leave this unmapped? It sounds empty without a beat here when you mapped it at 00:05:473 - .
  3. If you're going to have 00:18:532 - and 00:18:797 - so far apart, I'd recommend Ctrl+G'ing 00:18:532 - so it's easier to read that it's a 1/4 pattern, rather than a 1/2 pattern.
  4. 00:20:120 - and 00:20:297 - I'd move these closer together, based on the above point.
  5. 00:21:532 - and 00:21:708 - Same as above.
  6. 00:22:944 - and 00:23:120 - ^
  7. 00:36:885 - , 00:37:150 - , and 00:37:238 - ^
  8. 00:38:297 - , 00:38:561 - , and 00:38:650 - ^
  9. 00:55:238 - and 00:55:591 - Move 00:55:591 - closer to the tail of 00:55:238 - to stay more consistent with this type of pattern 00:08:826 - and 00:09:179 - .
  10. 00:56:650 - and 00:57:002 - ^
  11. 01:16:414 - , 01:16:679 - , and 01:16:767 - Similar issue as 00:18:532 -.
This difficulty feels like the jumps are too wide in some areas, based on what the song gives you. But the rhythm itself is pretty good.

[Oni]
  1. Change the HP/OD to fix a bit better between the Muzukashii and other Oni.
  2. 00:07:591 - / 00:07:767 - / 00:07:944 - One of these should be k. d d d sounds a bit too monotone for what is being given in the background here.
  3. 00:31:150 - A note could be added here so the 1/4 rhythm here stands out over the 1/2 in this section.
  4. 00:55:414 - Change to d. Has relatively the same pitch as 00:55:238 - .
  5. 01:11:297 - Could be changed to k to be more consistent with 00:48:708 - .
  6. 01:22:855 - Add a note to follow the melody a bit better here.
Good luck. ;w;7
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

Ayyri wrote:

hi tank and volta

[General]
  1. I know that, I personally had no idea what the difficulty names meant until I asked Nishizumi. So it possibly would be good if you changed the difficulties to English, like you have in your other set. But keep the last difficulty name as Greget. i leave it up to u fort
  2. The kiai could be turned off at 00:59:473 - and turned back on at 01:00:885 - if you wanted a small break in it. i'll consider it, but it seem well. keep this for a while
[Oni]
  1. Change the HP/OD to fix a bit better between the Muzukashii and other Oni. that's not problem by similar hp/od with muzu since this is easier oni. maybe i'll change the hp to 5.5 but let's see it later x_x
  2. 00:07:591 - / 00:07:767 - / 00:07:944 - One of these should be k. d d d sounds a bit too monotone for what is being given in the background here. b-but...the background says monotone, it's like what i did in inner
  3. 00:31:150 - A note could be added here so the 1/4 rhythm here stands out over the 1/2 in this section. it's unnecessary to put 1/4 in slowest part, even inner didn't do it
  4. 00:55:414 - Change to d. Has relatively the same pitch as 00:55:238 - . i'm focusing on structured pattern here
  5. 01:11:297 - Could be changed to k to be more consistent with 00:48:708 - . 01:11:120 (327,328) - i put k d to repeat these 1/2 with 01:11:650 (329,330) - they're sounds similar as (329,330)
  6. 01:22:855 - Add a note to follow the melody a bit better here. i think it didn't need :/
Good luck. ;w;7
thank you ayyri :)
i'll try to call fort :/ huffff
Surono

Nishizumi wrote:

MR OZZY WHERE ARE YOU

Ayyri wrote:

hi tank and volta
tank u

Nishizumi wrote:

i'll try to call fort :/ huffff
mpus, wait for eternity.tatusjin V:
Mekki
[General]
  1. I can't really understand what your diff names mean and this is unrankable as it doesnt seems to have none relation to the song (Maybe those are indonesian difficulty names?). Anyways, it should be changed to something that can be recognized like the default difficulty names, with the exception of Greget diff, of course.
  2. 01:00:179 (6) - Why you didnt remove the kiai here and added here 01:00:885 (1) - again?
  3. 00:25:591 (4) - Is there any reason for letting the break extended like that in all diffs?
[Biasa]
  1. As the lowest diff of the set, I would recommend you nerfing your 1/1's in kiai, as they would be more friendly to beginners, thus, they would fit with the rest of the map.
    00:49:591 (1) - You could turn all those 3/2 sliders in 1/1 and remove the 1/2 so the rhythm would still be intuitive and easier, or you could remove 00:50:826 (2) - 00:52:238 (4) - and keep (6), and do that to all the other patterns like that.
  2. 00:24:179 (1,2) - Swap NC's between them to follow your 2 downbeats comboing pattern. So NC would be on (2) instead of (1).
  3. 00:35:473 (1) - Can be a little tricky to beginners so I would recommend you thinking in something more appropriate like a 1/1 with reverse and then a note.
  4. 00:46:061 (2,3) - Would be cleaner if you do a blanket of (2) and (3), something like that: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6026482
  5. 00:49:591 (1) - Your comboing starts to get pretty weird here! You were following something like 2 downbeats to NC which means a 2 stanzas pattern but on kiai you let your NCs pretty inconsistent through the notes. 00:52:414 (1) - You'd have to add a NC here then here 00:58:061 (5) - and so on...
  6. 00:55:238 (1,2,3,4,5) - This flow seems unfriendly to beginners though, the way they have to move their cursor makes a weird and a hard gameplay for they, I would recommend doing some more natural movements there, or follow my suggestion above of nerfing the 1/2's, so you would delete (2) and (4).
Doesn't seems bad, but I'd check your comboing after kiai as they are inconsistent and also I'd try to make the diff easier as it is the lowest one.

[Sulit]
  1. I would like to express myself about your jumps in the kiai, they feels to overdone for a Hard diff and you should really nerf some of them. Gila diff is already doing the work of the jumps and you have to keep in mind that you need to make a great gap with Normal. You don't need to remove all the jumps but for sure replacing some of them to sliders jumps or making them smaller would help a lot.
  2. 00:07:237 (1) - This NC seems unexpected here, as you didnt make the same here 00:04:414 (5).
  3. 00:48:179 (1,2,3) - You could try doing something that would flow greater here, maybe something like that: http://puu.sh/r1k5k/8cd984c2a9.jpg
  4. 00:52:414 (4) - There should be a NC here to keep a consistency with your whole diff, also you added here too 00:49:591 (1). NOTE: 00:56:650 (4) - same here.
  5. 01:00:532 (5) - Why is the SV different here? I don't see any reasons in the song for you do that.
Apart from the huge jumps in the kiai, it is a pretty clean and cute diff!

[Gila]
  1. 00:52:061 (4) - I would make (4) look like (3) just for a great aesthetic.
  2. 00:53:826 (1) - How about making this slider 1/2 and then add a note at 00:54:091 (2)? It would make a greater pattern imo!
  3. 01:00:532 (6) - Why is the SV different here? I don't see any reasons in the song for you do that.
Seems good, not modding Greget cause I suck at 5* diffs. Good Luck!
PatZar
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Surono

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Ciyus Miapah

Ayyri wrote:

hi tank and volta

[General]
  1. I know that, I personally had no idea what the difficulty names meant until I asked Nishizumi. So it possibly would be good if you changed the difficulties to English, like you have in your other set. But keep the last difficulty name as Greget. when i see some spanish song has Spanish diff, that's a motivation for me to create indonesian lang diffname
  2. The kiai could be turned off at 00:59:473 - and turned back on at 01:00:885 - if you wanted a small break in it. well that's not my taste of style, kinda too short and inconsistent (especially for lower diffs)

    note:
    Biasa : Normal
    Sulit : Hard
    Gila : Insane
    Greget : Extra
[Biasa]
  1. 00:46:061 - and 00:46:767 - This could be a nice blanket. lol, too hard out of bonds


Relatively solid difficulty.

[Sulit]
  1. Rather than a normal, this difficulty feels a bit like an Advanced. Considering that you have jumps like 00:11:120 - and 00:11:473 - / 00:46:414 - and 00:46:591 - / 00:54:355 - and 00:54:532 - . These seem a bit big for a Normal difficulty, like I said. As well as the density is quite a bit more than in the Biasa difficulty.
Please correct me if I'm wrong about what was intended here. ;;

[Gila]
  1. 00:07:591 - This reverse slider feels a bit out of place with how you previously mapped this rhythm at 00:04:767 -.
  2. 00:19:238 - and 00:19:591 - For a Hard, this jump is a bit big, make it a somewhat smaller.
  3. 00:24:708 -, 00:25:061 -, and 00:25:591 - Same issue as above.
  4. 01:11:120 - and 01:11:297 - ^
  5. 01:11:826 - and 01:12:179 - ^
  6. 01:13:238 - and 01:13:591 - ^
  7. 01:14:297 - and 01:14:473 - ^
  8. 01:15:708 - and 01:15:885 - ^
  9. 01:18:532 - and 01:18:885 - ^
  10. 01:20:297 - and 01:20:650 - ^
  11. 01:21:708 - and 01:22:061 - ^
  12. 01:23:120 - and 01:23:297 - ^

    well these jumps are necessarily for insane diff, no problem here
    and the diff spike is kinda large, well atleast greget diff is harder than this for extra diff
My main issue with this difficulty was that it felt too hard for the difficulty that it was aimed at being. In which case, this felt more like an Insane in some parts, like I pointed out.

[Greget]
  1. 00:07:502 - Change the sampleset from soft, to normal on this slider tail. Sounds weird that it's not the same as the first time this rhythm happens at 00:04:679 - . there is no sound there, yeah i agree with you but with that condition i cant hitsound that one
  2. 00:08:120 - Why leave this unmapped? It sounds empty without a beat here when you mapped it at 00:05:473 - . oops
  3. If you're going to have 00:18:532 - and 00:18:797 - so far apart, I'd recommend Ctrl+G'ing 00:18:532 - so it's easier to read that it's a 1/4 pattern, rather than a 1/2 pattern. that kinda transition for next patterning, more jumps probably
  4. 00:20:120 - and 00:20:297 - I'd move these closer together, based on the above point.
  5. 00:21:532 - and 00:21:708 - Same as above.
  6. 00:22:944 - and 00:23:120 - ^
  7. 00:36:885 - , 00:37:150 - , and 00:37:238 - ^
  8. 00:38:297 - , 00:38:561 - , and 00:38:650 - ^
  9. 00:55:238 - and 00:55:591 - Move 00:55:591 - closer to the tail of 00:55:238 - to stay more consistent with this type of pattern 00:08:826 - and 00:09:179 - . that kinda in intro when i put that on ending
  10. 00:56:650 - and 00:57:002 - ^
  11. 01:16:414 - , 01:16:679 - , and 01:16:767 - Similar issue as 00:18:532 -. keep in mind it's extra diff ~


This difficulty feels like the jumps are too wide in some areas, based on what the song gives you. But the rhythm itself is pretty good. yeah for extra diff, extra diff

[Oni]
  1. Change the HP/OD to fix a bit better between the Muzukashii and other Oni.
  2. 00:07:591 - / 00:07:767 - / 00:07:944 - One of these should be k. d d d sounds a bit too monotone for what is being given in the background here.
  3. 00:31:150 - A note could be added here so the 1/4 rhythm here stands out over the 1/2 in this section.
  4. 00:55:414 - Change to d. Has relatively the same pitch as 00:55:238 - .
  5. 01:11:297 - Could be changed to k to be more consistent with 00:48:708 - .
  6. 01:22:855 - Add a note to follow the melody a bit better here.
Good luck. ;w;7
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Monstrata
Greget

00:08:297 (6) - This is just 3/8. Overmapping this to 1/8 sounds really unnecessary ;c.
00:19:414 (6,7) - I think its better to space them out. Theres a pitch change so I don't think a stack is as appropriate here.
00:37:150 (2,3) - Okay, these 1/4 jumps are just not appropriate imo xP. You don't use anything like this in kiai and these are so difficult to land because you need to move your cursor at 1/4 a beat instead of the usual 1/2. It's also not the same as kicksliders because you can still click on 1/2 rhythms using kicksliders.
00:38:561 (2,3) - ^
00:41:385 (2,3) - 00:42:797 (2,3) -00:44:208 (2,3) - ^ Theyre just not appropriate imo xP.
00:48:444 (2,3) - Here It's still not good, I would space them closer together so people don't confuse them for 1/2, but at least here there's a more unique drum sound. Still, I'd prefer if you didn't use this kind of technique for the map xP.
01:12:885 (6,7) - You're quite inconsistent about when you stack and 01:14:297 (5,6) - when you dont 01:16:061 (2,1) - etc... 01:17:297 (7,8) - etc... Those all occur at the same location on the measure, but theres' not rhythm to their stacking/jump. You should keep this consistent, or just map them to jumps cuz imo if theres a change in pitch or if theres a snare landing there, a jump emphasizes the change better :P.

Gila

00:03:532 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Man, honestly the movement should be from red > white ticks. But instead, you are stacking every white tick under a red tick, like 00:04:414 (1) - , so the player doesn't actually move on a strong beat.
00:06:355 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^Same problem here.

Sulit

00:04:414 (5) - NC or remove NC from 00:07:237 (1) - for consistency.
00:46:414 (4,5,1) - Jump should be from 5>1 imo. And besides, this is a really big jump honestly, considering your spacing so far. It's the same visual spacing as 00:47:826 (3,1) - but here its 1/1 xP
00:48:179 (1,2,3) - Going from last point, these also resemble 1/1 spacings because of how 00:47:826 (3,1) - is spaced, so definitely make these slider jumps a bit smaller so players can better recognize these are 1/2.
01:00:002 (2,3,4) - Back/forth jumps are really confusing imo. Can you do something else here.
01:07:591 (4,1) - Really big jump out of nowhere. You don't emphasize downbeats with a jump this big elsewhere. Compare it with like 01:09:002 (4,1) - or 01:10:591 (5,1) -

Biasa

00:49:591 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really big combo's. Make them smaller? NC on 00:52:414 (5) - at least. If not every slider.
00:55:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:00:885 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Etc... Your NC pattern suddenly becomes every measure, so try and make this consistent in your kiai.
01:10:767 (4) - Could NC here too since the drum is more unique,
01:12:179 - Etc... onward, NC pattern again starts to shift and isn't regular.

This diff needs a NC rework basically because its really inconsistent. Not hard to fix though.

[]

I'll see how Fort responds to the issues I pointed out first.
Ciyus Miapah

Monstrata wrote:

Greget

00:08:297 (6) - This is just 3/8. Overmapping this to 1/8 sounds really unnecessary ;c. soft sample changed
00:19:414 (6,7) - I think its better to space them out. Theres a pitch change so I don't think a stack is as appropriate here. i like stack there, and the pitch looks okay with it
00:37:150 (2,3) - Okay, these 1/4 jumps are just not appropriate imo xP. You don't use anything like this in kiai and these are so difficult to land because you need to move your cursor at 1/4 a beat instead of the usual 1/2. It's also not the same as kicksliders because you can still click on 1/2 rhythms using kicksliders.
00:38:561 (2,3) - ^
00:41:385 (2,3) - 00:42:797 (2,3) -00:44:208 (2,3) - ^ Theyre just not appropriate imo xP.
00:48:444 (2,3) - Here It's still not good, I would space them closer together so people don't confuse them for 1/2, but at least here there's a more unique drum sound. Still, I'd prefer if you didn't use this kind of technique for the map xP. that's all is how to aim, im not mapping in general way, that's it. yeah you feel inapropriate and i feel normal for it
01:12:885 (6,7) - You're quite inconsistent about when you stack and 01:14:297 (5,6) - when you dont 01:16:061 (2,1) - etc... 01:17:297 (7,8) - etc... Those all occur at the same location on the measure, but theres' not rhythm to their stacking/jump. You should keep this consistent, or just map them to jumps cuz imo if theres a change in pitch or if theres a snare landing there, a jump emphasizes the change better :P. this is extra diff, so i put 01:16:414 (2,3,4,5) - pattern and add that stack, i want different pattern for transition that's it

Gila

00:03:532 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Man, honestly the movement should be from red > white ticks. But instead, you are stacking every white tick under a red tick, like 00:04:414 (1) - , so the player doesn't actually move on a strong beat. but player move in white tick right? like move from white to red is strong beat for me, like triples
00:06:355 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^Same problem here. same answer

Sulit

00:04:414 (5) - NC or remove NC from 00:07:237 (1) - for consistency.
00:46:414 (4,5,1) - Jump should be from 5>1 imo. And besides, this is a really big jump honestly, considering your spacing so far. It's the same visual spacing as 00:47:826 (3,1) - but here its 1/1 xP atleast player have short time to stop cursor movement on that way and for that 1/1 it's right, it's 1/1
00:48:179 (1,2,3) - Going from last point, these also resemble 1/1 spacings because of how 00:47:826 (3,1) - is spaced, so definitely make these slider jumps a bit smaller so players can better recognize these are 1/2. ok
01:00:002 (2,3,4) - Back/forth jumps are really confusing imo. Can you do something else here. nah, not for DT players
01:07:591 (4,1) - Really big jump out of nowhere. You don't emphasize downbeats with a jump this big elsewhere. Compare it with like 01:09:002 (4,1) - or 01:10:591 (5,1) - ok

Biasa

00:49:591 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really big combo's. Make them smaller? NC on 00:52:414 (5) - at least. If not every slider.
00:55:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:00:885 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Etc... Your NC pattern suddenly becomes every measure, so try and make this consistent in your kiai. nah i can expect some good thing here
01:10:767 (4) - Could NC here too since the drum is more unique,
01:12:179 - Etc... onward, NC pattern again starts to shift and isn't regular. ok

This diff needs a NC rework basically because its really inconsistent. Not hard to fix though. looks like i have custom NC setting on these diff, dont worry

[]

I'll see how Fort responds to the issues I pointed out first.
im dont have any much complains with these map, even the jumps are Tested and it's fine quality

yeh, who dont like jump like that pls dont play ya haha
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