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Xinely
due snap problem was fixed and lot overmaps were removed in vert's diff. i have to reset the bubble again

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ZZHBOY
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Karen
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2016-07-06 18:47 Karen: 爱抚来飞图啊
2016-07-06 18:49 yf_bmp: AAAA
2016-07-06 18:49 yf_bmp: lai
2016-07-06 18:50 Karen: 嘛的看这图只有20fps,好累
2016-07-06 18:50 Karen: 随便水一点irc好累
2016-07-06 18:50 yf_bmp: ,
2016-07-06 18:50 Karen: 好了
2016-07-06 18:50 yf_bmp: 移除.osb
2016-07-06 18:51 Karen: .
2016-07-06 18:51 Karen: 02:07:790 (1,1,1) - 是不是可以滑条尾巴消音
2016-07-06 18:52 yf_bmp: 好
2016-07-06 18:52 Karen: 第二个kiai里也有这个
2016-07-06 18:52 yf_bmp: dong
2016-07-06 18:53 Karen: 额,没啥好说的
2016-07-06 18:54 yf_bmp: 额,没啥好说的
2016-07-06 18:54 yf_bmp: 那就次难度走起
2016-07-06 18:55 Karen: 你能帮她改?
2016-07-06 18:55 yf_bmp: 恩
2016-07-06 18:55 Karen: 01:01:098 (3,4,1) - 你有没有觉得这个很别扭啊
2016-07-06 18:56 Karen: 01:04:790 (3,4,1) - 这个不是直线也有点难看
2016-07-06 18:56 yf_bmp: 直线还好
2016-07-06 18:57 yf_bmp: 前面那个要不4爹在2头上
2016-07-06 18:57 Karen: 都可,就那个形状好奇怪
2016-07-06 18:57 yf_bmp: 突然发现后面的不直
2016-07-06 18:57 yf_bmp: 感觉直线还好
2016-07-06 18:57 Karen: ._.
2016-07-06 18:58 Karen: 01:17:714 (3,1,2) - 我觉得这个很不妥,容易误读
2016-07-06 18:58 yf_bmp: 他这图棱角分明 直线不是不行
2016-07-06 18:58 Karen: 12叠起来就好了
2016-07-06 18:58 Karen: 不是啊
2016-07-06 18:58 Karen: 我的意思是。。
2016-07-06 18:58 Karen: 那个直线
2016-07-06 18:58 Karen: 它。。。
2016-07-06 18:58 Karen: 歪了
2016-07-06 18:58 yf_bmp: 它
2016-07-06 18:58 yf_bmp: 哦
2016-07-06 18:58 yf_bmp: 我台哦好了
2016-07-06 18:58 yf_bmp: 调好了*
2016-07-06 18:59 yf_bmp: 后面这个 有人提了
2016-07-06 18:59 yf_bmp: 所以我还是改了
2016-07-06 18:59 Karen: 可
2016-07-06 18:59 Karen: 那后面类似的也叠上
2016-07-06 18:59 Karen: 前后一致
2016-07-06 18:59 Karen: 。。
2016-07-06 18:59 Karen: 好像有点多,那还是算了
2016-07-06 18:59 yf_bmp: 可是
2016-07-06 18:59 yf_bmp: 是这样的
2016-07-06 19:00 yf_bmp: 就这里跟了点电吉他
2016-07-06 19:00 yf_bmp: 所以容易五毒
2016-07-06 19:00 Karen: 好
2016-07-06 19:00 yf_bmp: 这图他就没完全叠起来d
2016-07-06 19:00 yf_bmp: 的
2016-07-06 19:00 yf_bmp: 妈的 卡的我输入法不好使了
2016-07-06 19:00 Karen: 妈的
2016-07-06 19:00 Karen: 妈的这学妹这么厉害,这图好棒啊
2016-07-06 19:08 yf_bmp: 刚才这个叠的改了
2016-07-06 19:09 Karen: 他说了
2016-07-06 19:10 yf_bmp: 前面那个
2016-07-06 19:10 yf_bmp: 他说就那样。。
2016-07-06 19:10 yf_bmp: 不改
2016-07-06 19:10 yf_bmp: 虽然我打的时候好像那里没断过
2016-07-06 19:10 Karen: 可
2016-07-06 19:22 Karen: 爱抚啊
2016-07-06 19:22 yf_bmp: 砸了
2016-07-06 19:22 yf_bmp: 咋了
2016-07-06 19:23 Karen: normal-sliderslide.wav 看看有没有用到
2016-07-06 19:23 Karen: 垃圾软件说unused
2016-07-06 19:23 yf_bmp: 是个问题
2016-07-06 19:23 yf_bmp: 我看看
2016-07-06 19:23 yf_bmp: 等等
2016-07-06 19:23 yf_bmp: 不用了
2016-07-06 19:23 yf_bmp: 我随便搞个地方让他被用到就行
2016-07-06 19:24 yf_bmp: 算了
2016-07-06 19:24 yf_bmp: tick太奇怪
2016-07-06 19:25 Karen: 。。
2016-07-06 19:25 Karen: 所以到底删了没
2016-07-06 19:25 yf_bmp: 删吧
2016-07-06 19:25 yf_bmp: 等等 在查
2016-07-06 19:25 Karen: 还有normal-hitclap delay成狗了
2016-07-06 19:25 Karen: http://puu.sh/pSaJB/cacbc252b6.wav 用这个
2016-07-06 19:29 yf_bmp: 真没用到好像
2016-07-06 19:29 yf_bmp: 剪
2016-07-06 19:29 yf_bmp: 挖 人格箭好了
2016-07-06 19:29 Karen: 挖
2016-07-06 19:30 Karen: 不知道滑条body加whistle跟slide有没有冲突
2016-07-06 19:30 yf_bmp: 应该没事
2016-07-06 19:30 yf_bmp: 我用的addition
2016-07-06 19:30 Karen: 可
2016-07-06 19:30 Karen: 那就
2016-07-06 19:30 yf_bmp: 就不会改slide的轨
2016-07-06 19:30 Karen: update

2016-07-06 19:03 Karen: 早上好
2016-07-06 19:03 Karen: 刚刚那个
2016-07-06 19:03 Karen: 怎么样啊
2016-07-06 19:04 Vert: 时间发一下我看看
2016-07-06 19:05 Karen: 01:17:714 (3,1,2) -
2016-07-06 19:05 Vert: 那就12叠?
2016-07-06 19:06 Vert: 我觉得可以
2016-07-06 19:07 Karen: 可以
2016-07-06 19:07 Vert: ok我和爱抚说了
2016-07-06 19:10 Karen: 02:47:482 (4,5) - 这似乎太远了
2016-07-06 19:10 Vert: 可以,那就往下放一点
2016-07-06 19:11 Karen: 02:48:405 (1,2) - 至少比这个近
2016-07-06 19:11 Vert: 恩
2016-07-06 19:12 Vert: 等一下啊
2016-07-06 19:12 Vert: 如果这个改了
2016-07-06 19:12 Vert: 02:55:328 (5) - 后面这个就难受了啊
2016-07-06 19:13 Karen: 02:48:405 (1,2) - 那就把这个弄远点
2016-07-06 19:13 Karen: 主要是这俩地方放一起怪怪的
2016-07-06 19:15 Vert: 恩
2016-07-06 19:15 Vert: 你看看群里我那个改法行不行
2016-07-06 19:20 Karen: 05:47:410 (4) - 这滑条尾没啥要跟的,感觉1/8就行了
2016-07-06 19:20 Karen: 都可都可
2016-07-06 19:21 Vert: 那就不改了233
2016-07-06 19:22 Karen: 那就美丽
2016-07-06 19:22 Karen: 你可以给爱抚了
2016-07-06 19:22 Vert: ok,其实都是他现场改的233
2016-07-06 19:22 Vert: 没什么大问题我告诉他怎么改就好了
2016-07-06 19:23 Karen: 好
2016-07-06 19:24 Vert: 那我先下了啊,L开始嘞
2016-07-06 19:25 Karen: 开始嘞
zyoi
Gratz阿愛扶姊姊!!!
sahuang
Vert: 那我先下了啊,L开始嘞
Satellite
Congrats :D
Topic Starter
yf_bmp
thx :3 you all
Kalibe
gratz! awesome storyboard :3
Sotarks
Kegare SwiftRage!!
GRATZ
Lyric
Perfect.
Xinely
2016-07-06 18:50 Karen: 嘛的看这图只有20fps,好累

+1

And also grats yf :3
shigurin
GREAT :D
Misure
偶像
Athrun
The storyboard is beautiful!
Nezzar
[Renatic]
02:29:713 (5,6,1,2) - 02:37:098 (5,6,1,2) - 打起來有點怪啊難道只有我一個嗎QAQ
Topic Starter
yf_bmp
还好吧,不怎么影响质量 也没触犯rank底线 就是难了点罢了
It's OK and reasonable enough
Nezzar
不是難的問題(那個1/2單指怎看都是最簡單的地方) 是感覺只有3拍最後一拍拍空的感覺((
不過應該沒什麼問題吧(

edit 聽了下好像真的有一拍 是我錯了QAQ
CoLouRed GlaZeE
很喜欢aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Chewin
STORYBOARDDDD AAAAA <333 10/10
Kite
Hey there!

I was excited to see a map of this song being ranked, sadly the Twin-Renatic diff suffers from 3/4 slider abuse, random triplet overmapping and wrongly snapped streams during the solo, which makes it difficult for me to like the map.
Vert's diff seems solid but some of the slider to jump pattern transitions feel awkward, still fun though.

Anyways grats on the rank~ the mapset is pretty neat and I hope others will find it more enjoyable.
Great storyboard btw!
Topic Starter
yf_bmp
Thx for comment

Actually the triples are not random and optional, which is same as 3/4 sliders using becoz I make them on the same (or similar) places and become them to a system.

In solo part, I adjust to 25% speed and checked the snap, and I think they are right

Yea someone may hate some patterns i know but i know someone might like them, so I made an sb to try to make the whole map better.

The beatmap does not satisfying to me in fact, according to my standard, becoz the patterns are too simple (But ok to rank). Maybe I make this one more interesting, The map will be much harder. But I wish tops can gain some pp on it
Thx again. This is my 1st map which is like this. And also it's the laat one.
Kite
No worries, I was just putting my opinion to words.
Fundamentally there is nothing wrong with this map.
The reason why I referred to the triplets being random is that there is no supporting instrument in the music hence it's randomly overmapped, but you are right with your reasoning that if you overmap consistently it becomes less random.
There's also nothing wrong with using 3/4 sliders the way you did, it's just a personal dislike that I have because often they play and sound weird which disrupts the general pace of a map.

I hope you don't feel discouraged, this being your first map in this fashion is nothing to be ashamed of.. afterall you learn a lot from using new methods.
Generally speaking the map is fine, has a nice layout, interesting patterns and sliders.
The things I pointed out are just personal distastes.

Good luck~

Edit:
Forgot to mention;
03:14:251 (1,2,3,4) - and 03:15:635 (1,2,3,4) - sound like they should be 1/3 snap instead
03:24:405 (1,2,3,4) - is correctly snapped with 1/4
Listening to 25% playback rate on such high bpm still makes it difficult to hear out the correct snapping, so it's easy to make mistakes on such parts.
I am not even sure myself with this, but it sounds more appropriate to me.
Topic Starter
yf_bmp
LOL yes thx but I really said something sincerely from my heart, but not only because of u.

edit: hard to snap yea I made them with 1/3 before but someone want to have some 1/4 streams so I resnapped.
Chewin
I want to give a personal opinion too, if possible xP

I honestly think the map has been well mapped even with all those 3/4.
I tried to map this song already in the past (you can check, it's in my grave list) and I can 100% confirm that it's a pain in the ass to get some ideas on mapping an high bpm like that for a song like this. So nothing, good job, it's a good map, I can feel you.
Topic Starter
yf_bmp
Chewin I appreciated your map before I made this one and thought that was one of the best one in the graveyard maps .
Xinely
oh i just noticed its ranked

grats for the real yf and enjoy, i really like with your sb and map there <3
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