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Harada Hitomi - Kyoumei no True Force

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Ozato Fumika
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notice me pls!!!! >w<
Topic Starter
Kibbleru
benched
Meyrink
lol this song ! nicee map ! wow the 1/4s are real
lit120
wtf is this?

probably i'll do a GD for this (probably 6 or 5.8 or even above, idk) after my exams xd

Ohh well... GL m8 =w=/
AtHeoN
playtest


shitmiss/sliderbreaks ftw

I like this more than asphyxia's version. STARRRR DESU >.<
Shiny Spoon


Third mod in a row, L E T S G O

[Ex]

00:07:785 (5,1) - Awkward to play.

00:10:345 (1) - I may be stupid, but sliders shouldn't end on downbeats?

00:56:585 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These patterns feel a bit weird to play for me (its more objective tho, so its understandable to deny this)

01:17:065 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^

01:46:345 (1) - NC not needed here

[Final Thoughts]

Sorry for the short mod, I tried to find stuff that wasn't mostly debatable. Otherwise, its a solid map and I like it a lot, very fun, very amazing song. Something I'd probably map myself (if I wasn't lazy). I wish you luck on this getting ranked in the future!

Good luck!

- Spoon
Topic Starter
Kibbleru

Shiny Spoon wrote:



Third mod in a row, L E T S G O

[Ex]

00:07:785 (5,1) - Awkward to play. gave it some more space? just a bit but i'd like to keep the general structure

00:10:345 (1) - I may be stupid, but sliders shouldn't end on downbeats? uhm, most cases, yes, but i am following the instrumental here rather than the percussison

00:56:585 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These patterns feel a bit weird to play for me (its more objective tho, so its understandable to deny this)

01:17:065 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ im not sure >< they're just back and forth jumps lol.

01:46:345 (1) - NC not needed here oops yea

[Final Thoughts]

Sorry for the short mod, I tried to find stuff that wasn't mostly debatable. Otherwise, its a solid map and I like it a lot, very fun, very amazing song. Something I'd probably map myself (if I wasn't lazy). I wish you luck on this getting ranked in the future!

Good luck!

- Spoon
thx
Sylphi
Topic Starter
Kibbleru

Sylphi wrote:

<3
Mei
hihi

[Easy]
  1. 03:08:745 (1,2) - this 2 sliders sounds weird, just break here is fine

[Normal]
  1. too many NCs, i think you can two long white tick per NC
  2. 00:51:465 (1) - remove the whistle? it sounds weird for me
  3. 01:11:945 (1) - ^
  4. 01:45:065 (3,1) - remove this note? it is too hard for a normal
  5. 02:42:825 (1,2,3,4,1) - change spacving to 1.00x?
  6. 03:09:705 move break to here?


[Ex]
  1. 00:38:505 (1) - missed the vocal in the middle of slider. you might want to change it to a slider starts from 00:38:665
  2. 00:48:745 (3,4) - the clap here is kind annoying for me
  3. 01:06:825 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - pattern like this?
  4. 01:41:225 (1) - missed a vocal
  5. 01:44:745 (2) - ctrl+g gives better flow for me
  6. 03:48:585 (1,1) - imo this two NC are not necessary, you can remove them

almost are fine. good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Kibbleru

Mei wrote:

hihi

[Easy]
  1. 03:08:745 (1,2) - this 2 sliders sounds weird, just break here is fine

[Ex]
  1. 00:38:505 (1) - missed the vocal in the middle of slider. you might want to change it to a slider starts from 00:38:665 intentional to follow drum.
  2. 00:48:745 (3,4) - the clap here is kind annoying for me
  3. 01:06:825 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - pattern like this?
  4. 01:41:225 (1) - missed a vocal follow instrument sound.
  5. 01:44:745 (2) - ctrl+g gives better flow for me i want to be consistent with previous patterns.
  6. 03:48:585 (1,1) - imo this two NC are not necessary, you can remove them

almost are fine. good luck! :)
no comment is fix thanks :)
Rizia
http://puu.sh/pyzQs/89bee5b1f1.rar
im too lazzy to map last part lol
Topic Starter
Kibbleru

Rizia wrote:

http://puu.sh/pyzQs/89bee5b1f1.rar
im too lazzy to map last part lol
thanks c:
Miriko

Mei wrote:

[Normal]
  1. too many NCs, i think you can two long white tick per NC Okay~
  2. 00:51:465 (1) - remove the whistle? it sounds weird for me It feels empty though... :s Still, I'll try it.
  3. 01:11:945 (1) - ^ ^
  4. 01:45:065 (3,1) - remove this note? it is too hard for a normal But there's other similar patterns in the difficulty. o.o I'll keep it for now.
  5. 02:42:825 (1,2,3,4,1) - change spacving to 1.00x? Fixed! (I think. x3)
  6. 03:09:705 move break to here? Done!
Thank you for the mod and Kibboo for updating the combo colors~ >///<
Hiiiya!
osu file format v14

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Countdown: 1
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Title:Kyoumei no True Force
TitleUnicode:Kyoumei no True Force
Artist:Harada Hitomi
ArtistUnicode:Harada Hitomi
Creator:Kibbleru
Version:Vicky's Normal
Source:
Tags:
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ponpokorin
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Spaghetti
[ex]
  1. 00:07:785 (5) - moving this to the end of 1 plays p nic and would fit well with 00:09:225 (1,3) - id co nsider it
  2. 00:07:945 (1) - fix ur blanket -_ -
  3. 00:09:065 (2,1) - this movement is just so awkward and it breaks the flow of the pattern id stack it on 00:09:385 (2) - but the stack is kinda d too so idk pls fix
  4. 00:26:985 (4,2) - maybe move these towards eachother so they stack and make a pretty pattern? the overlap is p ugly and itll also help with the spacing of this 00:26:825 (3,4) - since i think its too small for the buildup
  5. 00:43:945 (2) - be careful with sv's here cuz this looks exactly like a kickslider and i misread it lol
  6. 01:20:905 (1) - maybe point 01:21:065 (2) - towards this so it looks nicer? same with 01:21:385 (3,4) -
  7. 01:37:065 (4) - ctrl g plays RLLY good and flows perfectly with the zigzag pattern 01:36:105 (1,2) - gives pls consider this
Topic Starter
Kibbleru

Spaghetti wrote:

[ex]
  1. 00:07:785 (5) - moving this to the end of 1 plays p nic and would fit well with 00:09:225 (1,3) - id co nsider it nah this is more consistetn with what ive been doing
  2. 00:07:945 (1) - fix ur blanket -_ -
  3. 00:09:065 (2,1) - this movement is just so awkward and it breaks the flow of the pattern id stack it on 00:09:385 (2) - but the stack is kinda d too so idk pls fix idunno how fix
  4. 00:26:985 (4,2) - maybe move these towards eachother so they stack and make a pretty pattern? the overlap is p ugly and itll also help with the spacing of this 00:26:825 (3,4) - since i think its too small for the buildup
  5. 00:43:945 (2) - be careful with sv's here cuz this looks exactly like a kickslider and i misread it lol lol i dont think thats realy much of a deal.
  6. 01:20:905 (1) - maybe point 01:21:065 (2) - towards this so it looks nicer? same with 01:21:385 (3,4) - i wana keep the stacking and blanket, not too necessary imo.
  7. 01:37:065 (4) - ctrl g plays RLLY good and flows perfectly with the zigzag pattern 01:36:105 (1,2) - gives pls consider this
no comment = fix ty
Doormat
zzzz shitty map coming through

http://puu.sh/pNoXt/762e237f67.zip

you might want to add source and tags. pretty sure you can figure that out on your own lol
Topic Starter
Kibbleru
whers me mums insane xd
Doormat

Kibbleru wrote:

whers me mums insane xd
TheMefisto
Hello~
M4M from your queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:12:265 - missing whistle?
  2. 03:05:865 (1) - I think, it sounds better, if you add repeat here instead of this circle 03:06:825 (2) -
  3. 04:12:745 (3,4) - 2/1 slider here would be better (or 1/1 repeat maybe), because now this slider 04:13:065 (4) - starts on really weak beat, so i think, you shouldn't do this clickable
[Vicky's Normal]
  1. 01:18:025 (4) - Make here 1/1 repeat slider to emphasize vocal
  2. 01:48:425 (2,3) -, 01:38:185 (2,3) - , 01:43:305 (2,3) - , 01:48:425 (2,3) - Don't know about 1/1 stacks on normal diff. Before this stacks, you stacked mostly 1/2 circles, so some new player would be missread this. I think, you should unstack 1/1 circles :C
  3. 02:54:985 (4,1,2) - This sounds a bit weird, maybe something like this would be better?
  4. 03:50:825 (1) - Isn't this recovery time for spinner is too low for normal diff?

[Doormat's Hard]
  1. 00:15:625 (1,2,3,4) - How about move this a bit higher (~ x:180, y:164) to increase spacing for first circle?
  2. 02:38:345 (3,4) - , 02:40:905 (3,4) - I think, 1/2 repeat slider here sounds better for vocal
  3. 03:34:185 (2,3) - This sounds not really good. How about this?
[Ex]
  1. 00:08:905 (1,2,1,2) - That's not what i expected, because movement here 00:09:065 (2,1) - fits not really good. Why not
  2. 01:18:345 (3,1,2,3) - Why spacing here so low? It's quite strange. Think it would be plays better, if you increase spacing a bit
  3. 02:15:625 (1,2,3) - Why you didn't increase spacing here like in previous kiai? .-.
  4. 03:07:625 (4) - You can increase SV here to emphasize guitar better (x1.25-1.5)
  5. 03:50:025 (2,3,4,5) - That's no reason to decrease spacing between 03:50:345 (4,5) - these sliders. You can try this

That's all i can find ( ._.)
Hope it helps you~
Doormat
@Mefisto only applied first suggestion; i think there's enough emphasis on the vocals at 02:38:345 (3,4) - and 02:40:905 (3,4) - to use circle + 1/2 slider, and i think the rhythm at 03:34:185 (2,3) - is fine since it sort of follows the synth in the background.

thanks for mod~ http://puu.sh/pVQ6P/666e52e384.zip
ProfessionalBox
Heyy! M4M as discussed

Easy

  1. OD2 is a bit low since it's a 1,8 easy. Maybe 2,5?
  2. 00:13:385 (3) - Ehh you can make this slider look better if the curves are more symmetrical
  3. 01:19:625 - I'd really like for this to be clickable
  4. 01:22:505 (2,4) - You could improve the blanket on this
  5. 01:24:745 - NC
  6. 01:26:025 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 01:56:585 (2) - This would feel much more natural if you were following the vocals instead of the beat. I suggest you move this to 01:56:745 - instead
  8. 01:59:145 (2) - ^
  9. 02:31:625 (3) - Lessen the curve on this to make the blanket with 02:32:585 (1) - look better!
  10. 03:00:745 (1,2) - blanket xd
  11. 03:32:745 (5) - NC
  12. 03:34:025 (1) - Remove NC
  13. 03:35:305 (4) - NC
  14. 03:37:225 (1) - Remove NC
  15. 03:37:865 (4) - NC
  16. 03:51:305 (2,3) - that blanket doe

Vicky's Normal

  1. 00:34:505 (5,1) - This overlap looks bad because they are just barely touching. You should try to make it so that they overlap more or won't overlap at all
  2. 00:38:505 (3) - I'd make this a circle and start the slider from 00:38:665 - ending it at 00:38:985 -
  3. 00:41:065 (3) - ^
  4. 00:45:225 (6,1) - Swap the NCs around
  5. 01:09:385 (1,2,3,4,5) - You ignore the vocals entirely here even though you have mapped to vocals so far and you continue to do so right afterwards. I suggest you change this part to follow the vocals aswell to be consistent
  6. 02:05:545 (1) - You can remove this NC since it serves no purpose
  7. 02:43:785 (4,5,6) - DS?
  8. 03:30:505 (2) - Consider NC here
  9. 03:53:545 (1) - There isn't enough recovery time after the spinner for this to be here

Doormat's Hard

  1. 00:43:145 (3,4) - This would look much better if the (4) was just a ctrl + h j
  2. 00:51:945 (2,1) - This isn't perfectly round and it's quite noticeable (this is what you want it to look like 02:10:025 (2,1) - )
  3. 01:42:025 (2,3) - 01:42:665 (1,2) - The spacing on these will fool most players here when sightreading, I suggest you reduce the spacing of 01:42:665 (1,2,3) - to make it easier to read
  4. 02:43:785 (4,1) - These aren't lined up properly and it looks a bit messy. I suggest you line these up properly so that they have the same angle
  5. 02:47:945 - 02:58:185 - This isn't a break in the easy or normal diffs so it seems a bit lazy having this break here especially since you have one right after this. Just my opinion though.

Rizia's Extra

  1. 00:27:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It's weird that this part has bigger spacing than 00:26:025 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Which should be more heavily emphasized with spacing. I suggest you flip the spacings of these around
  2. 01:04:265 (1,2) - I'd make the blanket better by adding more distance between these 2 and then making sure 01:04:745 (2,4) - is blanketed aswell
  3. 02:53:865 (1) - Unnecessary NC
  4. 02:54:665 (1) - ^
  5. 02:57:065 (1) - ^
  6. 02:59:785 (1) - ^
  7. I really liked the idea of those sv changes in the solo, nice job
  8. 03:36:425 (1,2) - This overlap looks really poor. You can easily fix this with spacing the (2) a bit above the slider
  9. 04:11:145 - Consider mapping the rest of it aswell since everyone else mapped it too, to be consistent


Kibbae's sEX

  1. 00:11:945 (2,3) - Blanket pls
  2. 00:15:785 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make the sliderends have 20% volume , sounds much cooler
  3. 00:26:025 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
  4. 00:31:465 (3,5) - This is a so called nazi blanket, fix if you like
  5. 00:41:865 (3,4) - Blanket ;)
  6. 00:43:625 (5,1) - Not properly stacked
  7. 01:44:105 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - If you adjusted the volume of sliderends earlier then here too
  8. 01:46:825 (2,3) - Could blanket better
  9. 01:46:985 (3,5) - same tbh xd
  10. 01:46:985 (3,2) - such a well polished pattern eyy
  11. 01:56:265 (3,1) - Maybe stack (3)'s tail on the tail of (1)? Would look a bit better imo
  12. 02:53:065 (1) - Consider ctrl + g. It flows much better from 02:52:745 (1,2) - with it. Maybe readjust 02:53:385 (2) - if you do this but imo it works even without moving it
  13. 03:17:225 (7,1) - Stack on the tail?
  14. 03:53:225 (1,2,3,4) - I've let most of the blankets slip past since I feel like they aren't a part of your style in this map but this one hurts
  15. 04:29:065 (1,2,3) - This rhythm feels 10x better here

    This Ex was really fun to play well done :D!

That's it for the mod! Hope it helped and good luck :)
Doormat

ProfessionalBox wrote:

Heyy! M4M as discussed

Doormat's Hard

  1. 00:43:145 (3,4) - This would look much better if the (4) was just a ctrl + h j mm i prefer the slight angle deviation for the (4), but i'm open to changing this if more people think otherwise
  2. 00:51:945 (2,1) - This isn't perfectly round and it's quite noticeable (this is what you want it to look like 02:10:025 (2,1) - ) i think i got it now
  3. 01:42:025 (2,3) - 01:42:665 (1,2) - The spacing on these will fool most players here when sightreading, I suggest you reduce the spacing of 01:42:665 (1,2,3) - to make it easier to read decreased spacing by a bit
  4. 02:43:785 (4,1) - These aren't lined up properly and it looks a bit messy. I suggest you line these up properly so that they have the same angle made them parallel
  5. 02:47:945 - 02:58:185 - This isn't a break in the easy or normal diffs so it seems a bit lazy having this break here especially since you have one right after this. Just my opinion though. mm i was following rizia's lead in this case. i'll probably end up mapping the this section if more people bring this up though

I'll do the extras tomorrow when I wake up since I'm starting to lose my focus and some things might slip past my eyes.
thanks (i have too much time on my hands lol)~ @Kibb download this update instead zzz http://puu.sh/pW9ak/a6f9ab7663.zip
Topic Starter
Kibbleru

TheMefisto wrote:

Hello~
M4M from your queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:12:265 - missing whistle?
  2. 03:05:865 (1) - I think, it sounds better, if you add repeat here instead of this circle 03:06:825 (2) - circle for drums
  3. 04:12:745 (3,4) - 2/1 slider here would be better (or 1/1 repeat maybe), because now this slider 04:13:065 (4) - starts on really weak beat, so i think, you shouldn't do this clickable
[Ex]
  1. 00:08:905 (1,2,1,2) - That's not what i expected, because movement here 00:09:065 (2,1) - fits not really good. dont quite understand but i kinda want the paralell slidersWhy not
  2. 01:18:345 (3,1,2,3) - Why spacing here so low? It's quite strange. Think it would be plays better, if you increase spacing a bit
  3. 02:15:625 (1,2,3) - Why you didn't increase spacing here like in previous kiai? .-.
  4. 03:07:625 (4) - You can increase SV here to emphasize guitar better (x1.25-1.5) i want slow sv for the decreasing music kinda thing
  5. 03:50:025 (2,3,4,5) - That's no reason to decrease spacing between 03:50:345 (4,5) - these sliders. You can try this actually its to transfer from the high intensity of the kiai to the non kiai part.

That's all i can find ( ._.)
Hope it helps you~

ProfessionalBox wrote:

Heyy! M4M as discussed

Easy

  1. OD2 is a bit low since it's a 1,8 easy. Maybe 2,5?
  2. 00:13:385 (3) - Ehh you can make this slider look better if the curves are more symmetrical
  3. 01:19:625 - I'd really like for this to be clickable cant really do that without having to use 1/2 or some weird rhythm :( id rather sacrafice clickability then having to use some wonky rhythms
  4. 01:22:505 (2,4) - You could improve the blanket on this
  5. 01:24:745 - NC
  6. 01:26:025 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 01:56:585 (2) - This would feel much more natural if you were following the vocals instead of the beat. I suggest you move this to 01:56:745 - instead sorry following drums is just kinda my thing. it sounds more natural to me ><
  8. 01:59:145 (2) - ^
  9. 02:31:625 (3) - Lessen the curve on this to make the blanket with 02:32:585 (1) - look better!
  10. 03:00:745 (1,2) - blanket xd
  11. 03:32:745 (5) - NC
  12. 03:34:025 (1) - Remove NC
  13. 03:35:305 (4) - NC
  14. 03:37:225 (1) - Remove NC
  15. 03:37:865 (4) - NC
  16. 03:51:305 (2,3) - that blanket doe

Kibbae's sEX

  1. 00:11:945 (2,3) - Blanket pls
  2. 00:15:785 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make the sliderends have 20% volume , sounds much cooler kill me xD making me add 90 green lines ;w;
  3. 00:26:025 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
  4. 00:31:465 (3,5) - This is a so called nazi blanket, fix if you like
  5. 00:41:865 (3,4) - Blanket ;)
  6. 00:43:625 (5,1) - Not properly stacked
  7. 01:44:105 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - If you adjusted the volume of sliderends earlier then here too
  8. 01:46:825 (2,3) - Could blanket better
  9. 01:46:985 (3,5) - same tbh xd
  10. 01:46:985 (3,2) - such a well polished pattern eyy
  11. 01:56:265 (3,1) - Maybe stack (3)'s tail on the tail of (1)? Would look a bit better imo
  12. 02:53:065 (1) - Consider ctrl + g. It flows much better from 02:52:745 (1,2) - with it. Maybe readjust 02:53:385 (2) - if you do this but imo it works even without moving it i dont really want the jump to be that large here
  13. 03:17:225 (7,1) - Stack on the tail? nic
  14. 03:53:225 (1,2,3,4) - I've let most of the blankets slip past since I feel like they aren't a part of your style in this map but this one hurts
  15. 04:29:065 (1,2,3) - This rhythm feels 10x better here i like the gap between it feels nice as a finale kind of thing imo.

    This Ex was really fun to play well done :D!

I'll do the extras tomorrow when I wake up since I'm starting to lose my focus and some things might slip past my eyes.

no comment = fixed or did something else
TicClick
p/5298262

You may want to disable countdown and letterbox during breaks for the whole mapset.
[Ex]
haha HP 6
  1. 00:01:545 - inherited and uninherited timing points with different volume levels (same goes for Insane)
  2. 01:21:065 (2,4) and 01:23:625 (2,4) - I'd appreciate if you mapped vocals with these, would be more intuitive; see also 02:39:145 (2,4) / 02:41:705 (2,4) -
  3. 01:47:625 (5,6,1) - not sure if a triplet is a good idea, perhaps change to a short slider and a note?
  4. 01:50:185 (5,6,1) - ↑
  5. 01:56:585 (1) - could use a note and a slider here for vocals
  6. 04:10:825 (1) - I'd shorten it by 1/4th of a beat and add a note afterwards
Despite the fact I can hear all these sounds you mapped with triplets, I still think they're unnecessary to map due to dominant vocals and strong half beat rhythm; couldn't really enjoy the whole difficulty because I had to mash the triplets during kiai sections too often without a significant reason.

[Rizia's Extra]
Are you sure you don't want to add normal hits during 00:06:665 ~ 00:16:905?
  1. 00:03:785 (3) - changing it to a half beat slider and a note would improve the rhythm
  2. 00:05:865 (3) - feels better if started from the white tick 00:06:025 -
  3. 01:29:225 (2,3), and 02:47:305 (2,3), and 02:53:065 (1), and 02:57:545 (1), and 02:58:185 (1), and 04:10:505 (2,3) - please silence their tails so that they produce no sound
  4. 02:16:105 (2) - I'd reverse it for a better movement between 02:15:945 (1,2) -
  5. 02:39:945 (3) - again, I'd replace it with a short slider + note and something else to fill the gap just because it covers 02:40:265 - and 02:40:585 -
I like it!

Well, that';s probably all that's worth noting, and sorry for the delay.
Topic Starter
Kibbleru
sorry i misclicked deny kds
Topic Starter
Kibbleru

TicClick wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5298262

You may want to disable countdown and letterbox during breaks for the whole mapset.
[Ex]
haha HP 6 lol somebody complained about it :( maybe ill raise it to 6.5
  1. 00:01:545 - inherited and uninherited timing points with different volume levels (same goes for Insane) k
  2. 01:21:065 (2,4) and 01:23:625 (2,4) - I'd appreciate if you mapped vocals with these, would be more intuitive; see also 02:39:145 (2,4) / 02:41:705 (2,4) - the thought process behind it was- dominant note with circle and filler sounds with the slider.
  3. 01:47:625 (5,6,1) - not sure if a triplet is a good idea, perhaps change to a short slider and a note? it was intended to be a more weaker version of 00:11:465 (3,4) - hence the triple
  4. 01:50:185 (5,6,1) - ↑
  5. 01:56:585 (1) - could use a note and a slider here for vocals i was more intended on mapping the instruments at that part
  6. 04:10:825 (1) - I'd shorten it by 1/4th of a beat and add a note afterwards good point. yeah
Despite the fact I can hear all these sounds you mapped with triplets, I still think they're unnecessary to map due to dominant vocals and strong half beat rhythm; couldn't really enjoy the whole difficulty because I had to mash the triplets during kiai sections too often without a significant reason. i was kinda experimenting with mapping to the feel of the song instead of to clearly audible beats. the triplets are there to increase the intensity of the song with the kiais.

[Rizia's Extra]
Are you sure you don't want to add normal hits during 00:06:665 ~ 00:16:905?
  1. 00:03:785 (3) - changing it to a half beat slider and a note would improve the rhythm
  2. 00:05:865 (3) - feels better if started from the white tick 00:06:025 -
  3. 01:29:225 (2,3), and 02:47:305 (2,3), and 02:53:065 (1), and 02:57:545 (1), and 02:58:185 (1), and 04:10:505 (2,3) - please silence their tails so that they produce no sound
  4. 02:16:105 (2) - I'd reverse it for a better movement between 02:15:945 (1,2) -
  5. 02:39:945 (3) - again, I'd replace it with a short slider + note and something else to fill the gap just because it covers 02:40:265 - and 02:40:585 -
I like it!

Well, that';s probably all that's worth noting, and sorry for the delay.
thanks for the mod! ill get back to ur map soon
Heanday
I love this on Ex : 01:06:825 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - :D

Well done !
Topic Starter
Kibbleru

Heanday wrote:

I love this on Ex : 01:06:825 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - :D

Well done !
c:
VINXIS
yea wots up
scanter
http://puu.sh/qhncT/1ced52d35d.zip map is here. we'll have a look hitsound.
Topic Starter
Kibbleru
updated. i just copied hitsounds if thats ok with u ^
Frostings
wow what happened to cutebbleru
Doormat

Frostings wrote:

wow what happened to cutebbleru
he's entered his edgy phase
Elira
m4m thanks dad
[Ex]
  1. 00:41:865 (3,4,2) - stack 4 on the tail of 3
  2. 00:41:865 (3,4,2) - fix the blanket with 2 and 3
  3. 01:08:745 (1,2,3,4) - PLS..
  4. 01:21:865 (1,3) - personally I think you should blanket with 01:22:185 (1) - like http://puu.sh/qhT6s/2e15aec51b.jpg looks a lot nicer imo
  5. 01:56:265 (3,1) - probably better to stack 3 on the tail of 1, the overlap looks really bad imo
  6. 02:09:545 (1) - this slider shape really triggers me for some reason http://puu.sh/qhTw7/5bac8ef6b9.jpg
  7. 02:21:545 (3,3) - I feel like you should stack these, for me the current spacing isnt really necessary
  8. 02:26:825 (1,2,3,4) - NICE ONE..
  9. 02:42:825 (1,4) - blanket is off a little xd
  10. 02:46:665 (3,1) - maybe stack on the tail of 1?
[Rizia]
  1. 02:53:385 (1,1) - fix the blanket some
pretty much everything other diffs look fine imo
Topic Starter
Kibbleru

Doormat wrote:

Frostings wrote:

wow what happened to cutebbleru
he's entered his edgy phase
:I
CaffeAmericano
Hi, M4M from your q~

General

  • From randing criteria: “ For collaboration mapsets, the uploader should take part in all collab difficulties.” doesn’t that mean Momoais’ Insane isn’t rankable, or am I misunderstanding something?
Easy

  • 00:09:225 (1,2) - Maybe repeat slider would work better since 1) 3/2 beat little too confusing for easy. I know there are many other 3/2 beats, but they are mostly sliders, so more lenient timing window:3 Repeat slider would work well with vocal too imo.

    00:22:985 - I feel bit uncomfortable about missing this beat, since every bass at white ticks are covered in this part. In later part, 01:39:785 - is covered too (although not clickable)

    00:42:505 (1,2) - Consider changing this to one slider for same reason about 3/2 beats. You used a slider 02:00:585 (1) - too, so I guess it’s not that important to make 00:42:825 - clickable?

    00:53:385 (3,4,1) - I don’t think I saw any other 3 consecutive circles (each 1 beat apart) in the map. I think it’s great challenge for the target audience :3 Beside, 2nd ( 02:11:465 (3,1) - ) and 3rd ( 03:34:025 (3,4,5) - ) kiai do not have 3 circles for the corresponding part. I think converting two of 00:53:385 (3,4,1) - into a slider will be more consistent.

    03:35:145 - Some interesting instrument & strong vocal here. Maybe this ( http://puu.sh/qi2g6/c3c2a427d5.jpg ) might work better?

Ex

  • 00:31:465 (3,4) - These look uncomfortably close to being stacked, but they are not

    00:47:785 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I guess you’re following instrument here, but wouldn’t it be nice to differentiate 00:48:105 (1,2,1,2) - form 00:47:785 (1,2) - to acknowledge vocal’s existence ?xD maybe gradually increasing DS will work

    ^02:06:185 (1,2,1,2) -

    01:27:785 (1) - 02:45:865 (1,2) - 03:48:585 (1) - Only second kiai is different rhythm. I guess both works, but I thought I’d point out since I don’t hear big difference in music, and you’ve mostly used same rhythm in kiai unless music changed

    01:41:385 - I’m grumpy that this vocal sound is buried in the slider tick. It sounds much stronger than 01:41:225 - and 01:41:545 -

    00:05:385 (2) - 02:03:625 (3,1) -02:24:585 (8,2) -02:39:465 (3,1) - Idk if this actually is an issue.. But stacks are off by few pixels (I’ve been seeing a lot of these lately, maybe something’s wrong with my editor)

    02:42:825 (1,2) - blanket is off

    02:47:625 (1) - 03:50:345 (4) - NC inconsistency?

    03:34:025 (2) - NC here instead of 03:33:705 (1) - would be more consistent with first and second kiai


    03:39:145 (3,1) -
Rizia

  • 00:55:145 (1,3) - stack maybe?

    02:17:225 (1) - I think this might be the only place where you buried strong vocal sound in the middle of the slider. Since the map follows the vocal very well, I thought I’d point out :3

    02:21:705 (4) - NC maybe?

    02:21:225 - Maybe this should be clickable as well, since you made 01:03:145 - clickable. I don’t think there’s big difference between these two

    02:31:945 (5) - 01:13:865 (1) - NC inconsistency 02:47:625 (1) -

    01:03:625 (1) - (beside the downbeats)I think you like to place NC when there’s flow break/jump pattern change. Since 01:03:145 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - doesn’t seem to have neither, I am not sure if this NC fits into the scheme you’re using.

    02:47:945 (4) - NC

    Momoka & Anais

    00:13:865 (3) - 01:29:065 (5) - consider adding NC for easier reading

    [ 00:47:945 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - 02:06:025 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - ] [ 00:57:545 (1) - 02:15:625 (4,5) - ] [ 01:00:265 (6) - 02:18:345 (1) - ] [ 01:02:825 (7) - 02:20:905 (1) - ] Inconsistent NC? Or maybe it’s because it’s collab :/

    01:07:785 (4) - NC for downbeat?
lovely mapset. Good luck!
byfar
ex

00:37:865 (2,3) - you should revise this rhythm into something else to make the white tick clickable http://puu.sh/qi9mQ/8545b67cef.jpg
00:40:425 (2,3) - ^

01:10:665 (1) - i know it's tempting to keep the long 1/1 slider for the aesthetics, but please adjust the rhythm, in which there currently exists vocal emphasis, accordingly in a fashion that allows the white tick to be clickable
01:18:985 (1,1,1) - i think you should increase the sv or lower the spacing here; the lacking sv does not warrant this extent of 3/4 spacing, especially in the current context of this portion where you have 2 measures of triplets and 1/2 jumps.
01:38:025 (3) - consider converting this into 2 1/2 cirlces. you probably already know the reason why.

01:40:105 (1,2,3,4,1) - not sure what you're trying to follow in this section? you ignore a strong instrumental beat there 01:38:185 - and then skip the vocal emphasis over here. 01:41:385 -

01:55:945 (2,3,1) - ^ not exactly sure what you're following here either. 01:56:105 - 01:56:745 - these should be clickable
04:11:145 (1,2) - swap rhythm?

rizia

01:17:225 - 01:17:705 - triplet?
02:39:945 (3) - questionable repeat

rhythm seems bland for a 5 1/2 star


mok ok

01:08:585 (6,1) - triplet pls
01:37:385 (1) - hitsound missing
02:57:545 (3,4) - potential reading hazard

door


00:06:665 (1,2,3,4) - potential reading hazard

00:16:905 (1,2,3,4) - density is too high, consider lightening up the rhythm to contrast with the chorus. compare to this 01:34:985 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) -

vicky

00:46:665 (3,4,5,1) - part may be a bit too intense

01:01:545 - keep it consistent with 00:59:785 (2,3,4) - additionally, newer players would most likely follow the vocals, so placing the start of the slider over here may be more optimal in this scenario

03:30:985 (3) - delete this note, it seems a bit excessive

04:10:505 (5,6) - potential reading hazard for newer players

easy

00:18:825 (4) - hitsound
00:20:745 (3) - ^

nice i love this diff
SnowNiNo_
m4m

  • [Ex]
  1. 00:08:425 (2,3) - i dont prefer stack here, cuz 00:08:745 (3) - is actually clear and strong, makes more sense to separate them
  2. 00:11:145 (1) - unnecessary nc imo, the instrument isnt that strong ti emphasized, beside i would nc on 00:11:465 (3) - instead
  3. 00:28:425 (2) - i would nc on here cuz the music change here, if you rly want to nc on 00:28:265 (1) - then ill say make 00:28:265 (1,2) - a 1/1 slider makes more sense cuz you are nc on vocal
  4. 00:31:945 (4,5,6,1) - imo change 00:31:945 (4) - to 2 notes to make here a stream would be more fit to the music and the rhythm
  5. 00:31:465 (3,4) - not stacking for intentional lol?
  6. 00:34:825 (1) - this should get more emphasized
  7. 00:36:265 (2,3) - is the node rly necessary =w=?
  8. 00:37:865 (2,3) - 01:55:945 (2,3) - i would make here a note and a 1/1 slider, cuz there isnt an obviously sound at 00:38:185 - and there was a clear snare at 00:38:025 - ,and 2 1/2 sliders isnt rly fit the vocal here either :\
  9. 00:59:145 (3) - i would stack with 00:58:505 (6) - to make the flow more smoother
  10. 01:00:265 (4,4,4,4) - nc these for consistent, same as 02:18:345 (4,4,4,4) -
  11. 02:03:625 (3,1) - stack plz
  12. 02:50:345 (3) - this would cause misread for sure, cuz is similar with 02:50:025 (1,2) - and there isnt a nc, player would play this as a 1/4 kick either, and i would make 02:50:505 - clickable, same 02:55:465 (3) - 03:00:585 (3) - 03:05:865 (1) - (lol you nc here)
  13. 01:28:265 (2) - 02:46:345 (1) - 04:09:545 (1) - arrange the nc usage
  14. 01:28:745 (1) - 02:46:825 (1) - 04:10:025 (4) - ^
  15. 04:20:745 (4) - 04:21:225 (3) - make 4 a kick and 3 a notes for consistent with 00:15:785 - 01:44:105 -
  • [Rizia's Extra]
  1. 00:25:865 (1) - dont need to nc here, just like Ex diff
  2. 00:44:905 (1) - this sound defenitly need more emphasized, current spacing is too small
  3. 01:14:345 (1,5) - not stacking for intentional lol?
  4. 01:34:985 (3) - NC here cuz the music change
  5. 02:01:865 (1,2) - 02:02:825 (4,1) - is rly weird here cuz you stack at 1/1 and not stack at 02:02:185 (2,3,4) - and stack again at 1/2... i would make 02:01:865 (1,2) - unstack so this part would be easier to read
  6. 02:57:545 (1,2) - mute the sliderend, sound weird cuz there is no sound at 3/4
  7. 03:34:025 - the NC spac here seems inconsistent to me, cuz you didnt do the same thing at the previous kiai 02:10:825 - and 00:52:745 -
  8. 04:11:145 - lol not mapping after xd?
  • [Momoais' Insane]
  1. 01:08:905 (2) - NC on here instead cuz here is where the instrument need to emphasized
  2. 01:18:985 (1,1,1) - spacing bigger maybe? is similar to 1/2, might cause misread
  3. 01:54:985 (5) - NC for emphasized
  4. 02:01:225 (1) - unnecessary nc
  5. 02:37:065 (1,1,1) - same here
  6. 03:05:865 - the rhythm here should be like this
  7. 03:39:785 (1,1,1) - same lol
  8. 03:42:665 (3) - make it straight for symmetry
k, gl
map for m4m : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/476595
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