mao130 wrote:

nice song

hope u will finished this map :3

Roley wrote:

This map. Needs. To Be. Ranked. Now. :3 [/williamshatner]

jericho2442 wrote:

Red: really need to check this out
Black: would be good to check this
(suggestion): just a suggestion what i think would make your map better

Overall:
hmmmm it might just be me, but the tag "zts" i see no point to, unless its something to do with the song xD zts is technically the composer. 07th expansion is the company of which this music is found. Yes I know it's not right but it's a lot more well known than the composer's tag.
(suggestion) it would be much more better if you made the strobe red for easy, blue for hard, and gold for insane, like the names incline , if you needed i could give you a hand with this and also clean your SB's code up into nice and tidy loops commands No thanks. Golden Butterflies are a large part of the story this piece comes from. Thanks for your offer though.

[Red Truth]
01:06:211 (1) - remove new combo so that you are consistant with the pattern you did for this before it done
(suggestion) 01:07:711 (2,3,4) - this part feels odd to the music, maybe think of a way what suits more, srry i cant help more over it though hm, I think it sounds fine. Changed hitsounds though.
01:27:211 (3) - new combo because i think the small combos suit this more, and also you have used smaller combos for the whole song upto this point so it looks abit odd
01:30:211 (5) - newcombo ^
01:55:336 (1) - maybe make this a down slider rather than a left slider, because it makes the note after kinda look like a half note Fixed
02:05:086 (2,3) - spacing, (3) needs to be closer to (2) Fixed
(suggestion) 02:10:711 (5) - newcombo done
(suggestion) 02:19:336 (4,5) - new combo on either of these done
if you do the above two, then go through the rest of the long combo part doing the same, while its not really needed i think it looks much better for a easy :p

02:54:211 (1,1,1,1,1) - cant you come up with something better for this part, its really boreing Fine, I'll remove. Darn you people not liking slow.

[Blue Truth]
(suggestion) 00:55:915 (5) - newcombo
(suggestion) could you not merge the 72,032 timing section into the 71,845 by half timing it, i see no negative effect to doing this Silent spinner end, silent, next note, sound.
01:24:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 16 combo xD new combo the (9) done
01:39:603 (6) - new combo to follow your pattern at 01:42:603 (1,2,3) then 01:42:603 (1,2) -remove newcombo on (1) and then add combo to (2). i think it looks much better that way, and also then follows thw pattern you are using from then on
01:52:915 (6) - new combo

02:54:228 (1,1,1,1,1) - again is there nothing better you could do :/

[Gold Truth]
the other maps have 3 combo colours, would it not be better to give this 3 too?

01:40:915 (5) - new combo to follow your own pattern, which your breaking xD

02:54:228 (1,1,1,1,1) - again the same as the other diffs

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well there great maps, just a few combo probs

great job and enjoy my star

Melpomena wrote:

great job! very beautiful map *___*
especially i liked Gold Truth - everything is so gold: sb, skin and that golden fountains *___*
the only thing that stands out is ordinary spin >_< is it possible to make some custom spin, also in gold colours?
if not, let it be, i like this map already the way it is now <3

James2250 wrote:

-What is the pink thing on the top of Maria's head? It's her Crown
-The offset on Red Truth is different than the other 2 difficulties , make them all the same and resnap Fixed
-Is 3 second audio lead-in needed? Not any more, Removed.
-I kind of expected a pause-overlay seeing as everything else is skinned but doesn't matter I had one, but I changed my mind and decided it looks better without one.
-I don't think countdown really fits but up to you Removed
-Odd place to end the kiai time, I would end it on the final note
-Settings say you have epilepsy warning on? I don't see it but is it needed? I thought so... it's rather flashy and all.

Red Truth:
For some reason I can't follow 00:24:211 - 00:48:586 easily like the rest of the map, it might just be me but I would think if I had problems following it a beginner would too, either wait for a second opinion or try and remap it so it is easier to play
02:00:211 (1) - this note sounds way too loud for the music, lower volume, the other kiai notes are fine (this one has clap + finish which makes it too loud)
02:34:336 (3) - new combo

Blue Truth:
00:42:228 (4) - new combo
00:43:165 (1) - remove new combo
I don't really like the notes like 01:21:790 (3,4,5,6,7,8) in this map as they look very clumped together but otherwise it looks nice, I would go through and spread all streams like that out slightly more. Spaced them a little further out. Still half speed, but a little more distance. Should make it easier to read.

Gold Truth:
00:42:228 (4) - new combo
01:06:228 (5) - new combo
01:06:790 (1) - remove new combo
01:56:478 (5) - stack on 2
01:59:478 (5) - don't have such random jumps It's as random as the entire 1/2 stream. That is to say, not random.
02:19:353 (9) - new combo

Nice use of color scheme
*star*