1. Chirality (6.34 stars, 1091 notes)

Hobbes2 wrote:

Each of two crystalline or other geometric forms that are mirror images of each other.

no mirrored shapes feels bad man

blizzardice wrote:

Hobbes2 wrote:

Each of two crystalline or other geometric forms that are mirror images of each other.

no mirrored shapes feels bad man

dude this isnt andrea xd

Monstrata wrote:

Can i bubble this already?

Smoothie World wrote:

Monstrata wrote:

Can i bubble this already?

I'll let you know when I've got a fair amount of mods A few of the sections I still want some feedback on regarding rhythm so we'll see how it ends up. Plus I want to hitsound and get a storyboard.

Hobbes2 wrote:

Each of two crystalline or other geometric forms that are mirror images of each other.

no mirrored shapes feels bad man

00:22:454 (1) - should start on the downbeat, right? slider was fixed already but the spinner is fine where it is

01:08:636 (2) - This note feels kind of dense with the surrounding objects, I suggest moving it to more near x:270 y:270 ish. I don't think this note needs to be stacked on 01:07:011 (6,7) i feel its fine to read and flows really well, and it blankets with the slider

01:19:720 (1,5) - rip blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5561314 dammit

01:31:986 (3,4) - space between these is thicker on the right than on the left ok fixed.

01:49:868 (7) - NC? nah no point for a 1 note nc

02:48:390 (1,2) - This blanket could be a little better, since the space is thicker on the left of the circle then directly on top of it fixed

03:41:075 (5) - should start on the downbeat, right? same as before. i think you meant to link the slider but you linked the spinner

04:19:720 (5) - NC? seems like usually there would be one here yup good call

04:44:843 (1) - Minor comment, a sharper turn for 04:48:095 - would be neat i think its pretty sharp but ill consider it

04:54:301 (1) - ^, but for 04:57:553 ok

Good luck!

• 00:01:100 (1) - silence spinner
  00:06:641 (2) - it sounds like most of these should start on 1/3 ticks but idk, this goes for basically this entire section and the latter one at around 3 mins
  00:11:149 (2,3) - follow bg noise here? the spinner would also have to land later on the red tick as well, imo the sounds are more potent than what you're following atm
  00:22:380 (1) - shouldn't this be a repeat slider? i hear something on the blue tick idk if im high
  00:27:553 (2,3) - these sliders should end on 1/4 not 1/3
  00:40:705 (1,2,3,4) - the note stream would be better as a repeat slider imo, pretty awkward transition from 1/3 to 1/4 immediately after but g
  00:44:548 (2) - nc?
  00:50:164 (7) - ^
  01:02:577 (1) - curve slider end a bit more so it looks c o o ler
  01:07:011 (6,7) - having a 1/2 stack is kind of weird after you have 1/4 stacks everywhere prior, maybe just make this a slow slider?
  01:16:469 (2,3) - ^ basically same thing here especially considering it's stacked 1/4 then 1/2 immediately after
  01:48:981 (3) - slider ends too early if you're following drum
  02:43:070 (1,2) - wouldn't it be better to follow the drum on the red tick here since it's more potent than the synth?
  02:48:242 (1) - if you want the perfect overlap moving to x:154 y:181 works pretty good t b h
  03:01:986 (1,2) - same thing as 02:43:070 (1,2)
  03:11:149 (2) - nc?
  03:21:494 (5) - curving the end here so this isnt here looks so much better tho
  03:29:769 (2,3) - same as 00:11:149 (2,3)
  03:37:454 (3) - nc to keep pattern you had consistent
  03:41:001 (5) - nc this as well for pattern consistency at the beginning
  03:43:070 (3) - doesnt really do anything but nc for sv change?
  04:06:715 (7) - nc? you did it 04:11:444 (1) - here so idk
  04:16:469 (1) - spinner should be quieter imo
  04:40:114 (1) - fast slider to slow slider transition here is kind of asking for sliderbreaks but idk how else to map this so i guess its ok?????
  04:44:843 (1,3,1) - sliderticks should be inaudible here as well as sliderends since there's really no noise on them, most of it is on the red or blue ticks
  04:59:031 (1,1) - ok tho silence both these spinners thx

1. I'll preface this by saying this is probably one of your best maps to date, you've done a really good job with it and a lot of this mod will be nitpicking.
2. Add "Exit Tunes Academy" to the tags.
3. OD 9 seems really awkwardly high for some of the snaps required in this song, but that may just be me.
4. 00:06:641 (2) - Starts at 00:06:617 - 1/3rd snapped.
5. 00:07:824 (2) - 00:09:006 (2) - 00:16:099 (2) - 00:17:282 (2) - 00:18:464 (2) - ^
6. 00:10:558 (1,2,3) - Not a huge fan of how you didn't map the small ascending run in the background, mainly because your current rhythm seems random. I can't really figure out what the 3 is mapped to at all.
7. 00:20:508 - since you're mapping this sound now you should probably hit this note with the slider end or a circle or something.
8. 00:24:154 (1,2,1,2,1) - This is one of the patterns that plays really awkward to me. I think that 00:24:449 (1,2) - these should be nerfed slightly (spacing) as doing such sharp large fast jumps out of a spinner just feels clunky. Its also worth noting that they have equivalent spacing to parts in the kiai which is significantly more intense.
9. 00:27:553 (2,3) - Timing in this bit is somewhat sketchy, but just use the rhythm you used here 03:46:173 (2,3,4) - and nerf the spacing to compensate.
10. 00:31:838 (1,2,3) - This pattern just seems really meh to me, its not very visually appealing and its boring to play in respect to the similar patterns you've mapped til now.
11. 00:46:321 (1,1,2,3) - This felt really awkward to play, 1 > 1 is fine, but 1>2>3 felt really unnatural. Additionally, 00:46:986 - this noise seems to be similar to the 00:47:060 (1,2) - the blue ticks on these, so 00:46:912 (3) - may possibly be the beginning of that pattern, its worth considering changing it up a bit.
12. 00:51:641 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern felt better when I moved the 4 to stack on the slider end of 00:51:198 (3) - . If you do this I'd recommend changing 00:52:085 (5,6,7,8) - as well.
13. 00:53:710 (1) - Definitely think this would be nice as a 1/4 repeat slider with low SV. Doing so helps you keep the rhythm going back into the next part of the kiai.
14. 00:54:597 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is not straight whatsoever, like, make it straight or curved but having it teetering between the two just feels awk.
15. 00:56:075 (1,2,3) - Same point as above, just a slight nerf here would be nice.
16. 02:37:159 - 03:14:991 - Kiai time? Its pretty intense.
17. 03:11:149 (2) - NC?
18. 03:25:262 (1) - 03:26:444 (2) - 03:27:627 (2) - 1/3rd snapping again.
19. 03:29:178 (1,2,3) - Same point as I mentioned earlier.
20. 03:30:361 (1) - You silenced the spinner during the intro, you should silence it here.
21. 03:34:720 (2) - 03:35:902 (2) - 03:37:085 (2) - 1/3rd
22. 03:37:454 (3) - NC
23. 03:59:400 (2,3,4,5) - This feels claustrophobic and cluttered, move the 3,4,5 away from the slider to give it a slight jump and to help continue the movement you've had in this buildup section.
24. 04:30:952 (3) - NC
25. 04:30:952 (3) - through 04:35:385 (1) - feels so lackluster. This is the buildup for the end of the song essentially, and its the easiest part of the map. I'm really dissapointed here, map out the wubs, make it crazy, make it intense.
26. General note on ending sliders: Due to the definition of the term Enantiomorphs it would be worthwhile to make them symmetric in someway.
27. Overall its a super fun map, the final kiai is the most fun I've had playing a Camellia map in a while!

1. 00:10:558 (1) - sliderend 1/3 bwoi it sounds weird either way lol
2. 00:11:592 (3,1) - uhh i know there are some stupid rhythms here but you could map it as a normal triple and then a add a 1/3 repeat slider on the white tick... and after that the spinner
3. 00:22:380 (1) - noooo don't silence this with that 5% there is a sound on the sliderend. If you still wanna silence it then use something like ~20% to make it more audible than the others (actually this might be for fort)
4. 00:27:553 (2,3) - yo wat 00:32:282 (2,3) - aren't these the same lol? (FOR CONSISTENCY I RIDE)
5. 00:42:183 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't really know what you're mapping with these 1/4 things but w/e
6. 00:45:139 (1) - hm i don't really like how you accelerate spacing here just for a kick when the 1/4 sound you map doesn't change. You executed this better at 00:54:597 (1) - imo (which is kinda similar)
7. 00:49:572 (1) - wouldn't it make more sense to nc 00:49:277 (5) - this instead? similar sounds lo
8. 00:50:459 (3,4) - make these differ somehow lo (i'm just being a nazi at this point i'm sorry)
9. 00:51:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these aren't the same thing either
10. 00:56:518 (4) - nc plox
11. 01:13:809 (1,1,1,1) - pls consistency
12. 01:38:636 (1) - why this? sadface.jpg imo you should make the whole stream gradually rise in spacing or just not do this what you are currently doing lol
13. 01:40:705 (2,3) - imo this sound is so "unexpected" that it should have a clickable triple or normal triple or whatever it's called
14. 01:49:868 (7) - nc?
15. 01:54:301 (1) - this also feels like there is too big of an spacing acceleration here
16. 01:59:178 (7) - ctrl+g?
17. 02:16:912 (1) - my mind is telling me that the spinnerend should be clickable
18. 02:18:833 (2) - i also don't like how you stacked all these kicks under random stuff aaaaa
19. 02:33:021 (1) - tbh it kinda feels like the song doesn't really support these "streamjumps" or they feel weird for me at löeast. it does the spacing increase tho
20. 02:35:681 (3,1) - swapping nc's here would also feel more natural for me cause sounds. always nc'ing on the big white tick may not be the best solution
21. 03:02:479 (2,1) - wow this change in spacing
22. 03:21:494 (5) - this sliderend HAS (lol jk) to be clickable. but seriously that sound pls
23. 04:07:454 (3,4) - tbh i don't really hear the sound for this. Idk might be my headset but ye
24. 04:19:572 (3) - the drum sounds start here
25. 04:30:952 (1) - hm well yea i can see why you would do this but then again this feels seriously undermapped. you definitely knew that everyone would point this out
26. 05:03:907 (1) - hoyl silence spinnerend

Maakkeli wrote:

hei!!!!!!!

uh dunno how i found myself here it's 3am here

song that the rlc guy mapped

1. 00:10:558 (1) - sliderend 1/3 bwoi it sounds weird either way lol what
2. 00:11:592 (3,1) - uhh i know there are some stupid rhythms here but you could map it as a normal triple and then a add a 1/3 repeat slider on the white tick... and after that the spinner tried
3. 00:22:380 (1) - noooo don't silence this with that 5% there is a sound on the sliderend. If you still wanna silence it then use something like ~20% to make it more audible than the others (actually this might be for fort) ok
4. 00:27:553 (2,3) - yo wat 00:32:282 (2,3) - aren't these the same lol? (FOR CONSISTENCY I RIDE) what
5. 00:42:183 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't really know what you're mapping with these 1/4 things but w/e percussion
6. 00:45:139 (1) - hm i don't really like how you accelerate spacing here just for a kick when the 1/4 sound you map doesn't change. You executed this better at 00:54:597 (1) - imo (which is kinda similar) it plays well
7. 00:49:572 (1) - wouldn't it make more sense to nc 00:49:277 (5) - this instead? similar sounds lo downbeat
8. 00:50:459 (3,4) - make these differ somehow lo (i'm just being a nazi at this point i'm sorry) why
9. 00:51:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these aren't the same thing either yes they are
10. 00:56:518 (4) - nc plox why
11. 01:13:809 (1,1,1,1) - pls consistency ???
12. 01:38:636 (1) - why this? sadface.jpg imo you should make the whole stream gradually rise in spacing or just not do this what you are currently doing lol no, this plays better
13. 01:40:705 (2,3) - imo this sound is so "unexpected" that it should have a clickable triple or normal triple or whatever it's called its fine. it isnt supposed to be easy to read
14. 01:49:868 (7) - nc? k
15. 01:54:301 (1) - this also feels like there is too big of an spacing acceleration here its fine
16. 01:59:178 (7) - ctrl+g? why
17. 02:16:912 (1) - my mind is telling me that the spinnerend should be clickable nope, cuts off with the rise
18. 02:18:833 (2) - i also don't like how you stacked all these kicks under random stuff aaaaa what
19. 02:33:021 (1) - tbh it kinda feels like the song doesn't really support these "streamjumps" or they feel weird for me at löeast. it does the spacing increase tho downbeats
20. 02:35:681 (3,1) - swapping nc's here would also feel more natural for me cause sounds. always nc'ing on the big white tick may not be the best solution true
21. 03:02:479 (2,1) - wow this change in spacing its fine. 0% of players have missed here
22. 03:21:494 (5) - this sliderend HAS (lol jk) to be clickable. but seriously that sound pls similar to the earlier spinner
23. 04:07:454 (3,4) - tbh i don't really hear the sound for this. Idk might be my headset but ye its your headset
24. 04:19:572 (3) - the drum sounds start here they dont tho
25. 04:30:952 (1) - hm well yea i can see why you would do this but then again this feels seriously undermapped. you definitely knew that everyone would point this out i didnt know that everyone would point it out. kevin did the same thing. i am NOT changing this. stop pointing it out. its to emphasize the percussion jesus christ
26. 05:03:907 (1) - hoyl silence spinnerend hitsounding isnt done

uh äh ask me if you didn't quite understand something i'm going to sleep

CyberX wrote:

for M4M request
[box=Chirality]00:27:553 (2,3) - nefr the gap here why
00:32:282 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:43:366 (1,2,3,4) - make it more closer why
00:44:548 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Imo you emphasize too much here i dont think i do. emphasizing percussion and rising intensity
01:36:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - they are all the same sound, make it consistent no they dont, building intensity
01:49:942 - Spinner start here why
02:10:558 (5) - i believe you can make this slider mote attractive i dont think i can. it adds variety.
02:31:247 (1,2,3,4) - Imo the flow is kidda broken here it flows fine
03:16:765 (4) - its not symmetry if you look right side is slightly longer then left im aware. looks better that way imo
03:46:173 (2,3) - neft the gap why
04:49:572 (3) - well, i just dont really like this shape , imo you better fix[ what about it bothers you/box]

Thanks~

Didn't accept your map yet in my queue, so you didn't read the rules and modded before I accepted you. Can't promise I'll mod your map.

1. It looks like you didn't use normal hitsounds custom 1 (normal-hitclap.wav, normal-hitnormal.wav, normal-hitwhistle.wav, normal-sliderslide.wav) If you didn't plan to use them you should delete them.
2. 00:11:050 - 00:11:937 - This sections supposed to be 1/3 instead of 1/4, just like the other part, this problem also exist at 00:20:016 (1,2), 03:29:178 - 03:30:508, and 03:38:636 - 03:39:228
3. 01:19:942 (2,3,4,5) - I think it'll be much more readable if you horizontally flipped this, that's just my opinion though

1. consider add Mathematics into tags lolz anyway remove Academy since it is released in Exit Tunes instead of Exit Tunes Academy if not mistaken
2. would suggest to rename your diff since it's th e same name as the other song Chirality idk tbh
3. 00:10:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - they are actually 1/3's, in which you had already discovered it in 00:20:607 (3,4,5) - same goes to 00:20:016 (1,2) - 03:38:636 (1,2) - 03:29:178 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and the timeframe is something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5757680
4. 00:21:198 (5) - 03:39:819 (5) - someone pointed this out before though. there ofc has sound but it's not from the xylophone(?) note so rather reduce the reverse by one
5. 00:22:380 (1) - 03:41:001 (1) - soudns like 1/3 since 1/4 is quite off
6. 00:24:154 (1,2) - still as mentioned b4, 00:24:375 (2) - should land around 00:24:351 - so yah. my suggestion is different though, consider to merge 00:24:154 (1,2) - as a slider and 00:24:449 (1,2) - can be still kept since it maps to the percussion. same to 03:42:774 (1,2) -
7. 00:52:085 (5) - nc?
8. 01:11:149 (3,1,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5757845
9. 04:30:952 - until 04:35:090 - soooo why for the density change like it doesnt represent any reduced intensity or slowdowns im dumb
10. 04:49:572 (3) - extend to 04:54:006 - though
11. 04:40:114 (1) - could be made into 16/1 slider sincce the break is kinda awkward // place a spinner here