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m4m

Vert :
- 00:11:512 (1) - somehow idk why end in 1/4 here, if you want emphasis vocal at 00:12:178 - then why not for 00:20:676 - or 00:17:489 - ?
- 00:23:344 - 00:25:948 - somehow i think they will go nicely with circles + jumps
- 00:45:406 (3) - maybe ctrl+g, flow from the previous slider's tail to this slider head somehow isnt comfortable for me
- 00:46:560 (1) - 01:01:329 (1) - 01:14:252 - somehow kinda cry to see cymbal mapped with normal spacing
- 00:52:444 (2) - the drum isnt that strong, why map it with such as strong jump?
- 01:02:598 - maybe whistle here for emphasis violin
- 01:05:251 (2) - how about 148,112 for at least give a bit emphasis 01:05:367 (3) - for violin?
- 01:16:098 (1,2) - i do cry with the overlap
- 01:18:175 (2) - i think its better to perfectly stacked or no anti jump, due 01:17:714 (3,1) - 1/4 low spacing from this, a bit hard to read the anti jump for me
- 01:49:329 - ayy so much tears from me see cymbal mapped with tail
- 01:57:579 (6) - overmap
- 02:00:752 - 02:15:521 - 02:15:867 - 04:33:981 - 04:34:442 - finish is too strong for this, no cymbal
- 02:01:098 - same as above
- 02:01:733 (3) - if in 100% speed yes seems have sound but i dont hear nothing in 25% speed. not violin sound aa
- 02:04:098 - fit with drum sampleset soft addition finish
- 02:04:964 (6) - 02:09:579 (7) - 02:12:349 (5) - 02:16:503 (3) - 02:17:887 (5) - 04:20:192 (3) - 04:23:423 (6) - 04:29:942 (4) - 04:30:808 (5) - 04:34:962 (3) - 04:36:346 (5) - 04:47:423 (7) - 04:51:115 (6,3) - 04:52:962 (6) - 04:54:808 (6) - 05:05:885 (6) - 05:07:731 (5) - 05:09:578 (6) - overmap
- 02:18:867 - maybe finish, i hear such as strong music
- 02:20:483 (1) - claaaaaaaaaaaaaaaap, its drum
- 02:38:251 (1) - 02:45:636 (1) - 02:53:021 (1) - 02:56:713 (1) - any reason why nc here?
- 02:57:521 (4) - wrong snap, the slider should start at 02:57:482 - (1/3) since following guitar
- 03:27:174 (1) - why not make jump to emphasis the cymbal? anti jump feels really weird for me
- 03:53:019 - i need to cry once again, same as 01:49:329 -
- 04:07:789 - ^
- 04:37:327 - need finish aaa
- 05:41:942 (1) - that would be nice if there was a jump for emphasis the cymbal. maybe 232,64?

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yf :
- 00:26:170 (3) - i guess remove this? you follow vocals here ;_;
- 00:11:512 (1) - somehow same as vert. just curious why
- 00:38:368 (5) - maybe remove whistle and add sampleset drum instead, the music is drum. i was trapped i thought it was overmap lol
- 00:55:733 (5) - clearly overmap tho ;_;
- 01:09:810 (2) - ^
- 01:29:367 (2) - just my taste but for me i prefer ctrl+g for more natural flow
- 01:36:752 (2) - ^ if you agree
- 01:56:310 - somehow i feel meaningless for seeing 1/4 slider repeat here. no music aaaa
- 01:57:579 (6) - overmap for sure
- 02:03:348 (6) - ^
- 02:04:040 (3) - same overmap, if you dont want overmap, just move this to 02:02:483 (2) - where i can hear the violin
- 02:05:194 (2) - 02:11:426 (5) - 02:18:118 (6) - 02:18:810 (3) - 02:19:964 (2) - and etc triplets (for stuff not in guitar parts) i guess, overmap, not going to tell all since yes. i do hate overmaps orz :C
- 04:59:481 - not sure what is this but maybe bug. sometimes i dont hear the finish hitsound lel

三连方面 我又考虑了很多
To explain better, I have to use Chinese (runs

Xinely wrote:

m4m

Vert :
- 00:11:512 (1) - somehow idk why end in 1/4 here, if you want emphasis vocal at 00:12:178 - then why not for 00:20:676 - or 00:17:489 - ? 问题应该不大，不想改了（
- 00:23:344 - 00:25:948 - somehow i think they will go nicely with circles + jumps 这里应该是故意做成这样的，关系不大，不改了
- 00:45:406 (3) - maybe ctrl+g, flow from the previous slider's tail to this slider head somehow isnt comfortable for me 这个我试了下，flow方面应该还可以，然后这个地方三个滑条都是从中心出发的，也是依据，所以不改了
- 00:46:560 (1) - 01:01:329 (1) - 01:14:252 - somehow kinda cry to see cymbal mapped with normal spacing 我觉得不是不可以，毕竟这个bpm有点高，跟着ds做还是很常见的
- 00:52:444 (2) - the drum isnt that strong, why map it with such as strong jump? 这个应该就是ds作图法了（非flow），就是以视觉感受为主（况且这个间距不是很大，也不是连续的大间距），也和00:52:560 (3,4) - 类似，所以不改了
- 01:02:598 - maybe whistle here for emphasis violin yeaa
- 01:05:251 (2) - how about 148,112 for at least give a bit emphasis 01:05:367 (3) - for violin? 01:05:251 (2,3,4) - 这三个目前是组成等距DS的，按照你的位置，会破坏这里，然后问题不大，所以不改了
- 01:16:098 (1,2) - i do cry with the overlap 这个其实问题也不是很大，ar比较高，这种遮挡在打图的时候不是很影响读图，所以不改了
- 01:18:175 (2) - i think its better to perfectly stacked or no anti jump, due 01:17:714 (3,1) - 1/4 low spacing from this, a bit hard to read the anti jump for me 这里的话，可以说是和01:25:329 (1,2) - 对应，而且ar高，在打图的时候其实真的问题不大的
- 01:49:329 - ayy so much tears from me see cymbal mapped with tail 改成了whistle
- 01:57:579 (6) - overmap fixed
- 02:00:752 - 02:15:521 - 02:15:867 - 04:33:981 - 04:34:442 - finish is too strong for this, no cymbal fixed
- 02:01:098 - same as above fixed
- 02:01:733 (3) - if in 100% speed yes seems have sound but i dont hear nothing in 25% speed. not violin sound aa 这个我觉得可以保留，配合后面的1/3连打，恰好可以引出下一段，后面的也都是如此（况且100%感觉有的话加上去就也不违和啦）
- 02:04:098 - fit with drum sampleset soft addition finish
- 02:04:964 (6) - 02:09:579 (7) - 02:12:349 (5) - 02:16:503 (3) - 02:17:887 (5) - 04:20:192 (3) - 04:23:423 (6) - 04:29:942 (4) - 04:30:808 (5) - 04:34:962 (3) - 04:36:346 (5) - 04:47:423 (7) - 04:51:115 (6,3) - 04:52:962 (6) - 04:54:808 (6) - 05:05:885 (6) - 05:07:731 (5) - 05:09:578 (6) - overmap
02:16:503 (3) - 04:20:192 (3) - 04:34:962 (3) - 这三个没改，其他都改了
- 02:18:867 - maybe finish, i hear such as strong music fixed
- 02:20:483 (1) - claaaaaaaaaaaaaaaap, its drum OK
- 02:38:251 (1) - 02:45:636 (1) - 02:53:021 (1) - 02:56:713 (1) - any reason why nc here? fixed a lot ncs here
- 02:57:521 (4) - wrong snap, the slider should start at 02:57:482 - (1/3) since following guitar 用另一种改了
- 03:27:174 (1) - why not make jump to emphasis the cymbal? anti jump feels really weird for me这个问题不大，也不是说不可以这样，所以不改了
- 03:53:019 - i need to cry once again, same as 01:49:329 - 改了whistle
- 04:07:789 - ^ ^
- 04:37:327 - need finish aaa fixed
- 05:41:942 (1) - that would be nice if there was a jump for emphasis the cymbal. maybe 232,64? 按照你的坐标，会不好看，而这个mapper是以间距为主的，所以不改了（现在这个不是不行）

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yf :
- 00:26:170 (3) - i guess remove this? you follow vocals here ;_; 不是很想修，因为如果跟vocal滑条就会跨越红线，会麻烦，反正关系不大
- 00:11:512 (1) - somehow same as vert. just curious why okok fixed
- 00:38:368 (5) - maybe remove whistle and add sampleset drum instead, the music is drum. i was trapped i thought it was overmap lol fixed
- 00:55:733 (5) - clearly overmap tho ;_; fixed
- 01:09:810 (2) - ^ actually there is an 1/8 rhythm here, but 我想简化一下节奏 然后就做成了1/4
- 01:29:367 (2) - just my taste but for me i prefer ctrl+g for more natural flow 前面有了顺的flow，我这里想弄点不一样的
- 01:36:752 (2) - ^ if you agree 这里做成顺的了
- 01:56:310 - somehow i feel meaningless for seeing 1/4 slider repeat here. no music aaaa fixed here
- 01:57:579 (6) - overmap for sure Here it has a reasonable feeling on playing, and its rhythm is consistent with 02:12:290 (1) - 就是每段kiai的类似的地方我都是用这种节奏的，形成统一性，也是可以作为一个依据
- 02:03:348 (6) - ^ 理由同上，每段kiai的这些1/4位置基本都没变过（不是random overmap）
- 02:04:040 (3) - same overmap, if you dont want overmap, just move this to 02:02:483 (2) - where i can hear the violin 都是上面这些理由，而且其实260bpm的在滑条头上的1/4还是不难打的
- 02:05:194 (2) - 02:11:426 (5) - 02:18:118 (6) - 02:18:810 (3) - 02:19:964 (2) - and etc triplets (for stuff not in guitar parts) i guess, overmap, not going to tell all since yes. i do hate overmaps orz :C 上面说完了，我觉得还是比较合理的，最重要还是有依据，不是随意乱放的
- 04:59:481 - not sure what is this but maybe bug. sometimes i dont hear the finish hitsound lel bug

overmap改了很多（vert的难度），谢谢摸！

due snap problem was fixed and lot overmaps were removed in vert's diff. i have to reset the bubble again

#1

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Gratz阿愛扶姊姊！！！

Vert: 那我先下了啊，L开始嘞

Congrats

thx :3 you all

gratz! awesome storyboard :3

Kegare SwiftRage!!
GRATZ

Perfect.

2016-07-06 18:50 Karen: 嘛的看这图只有20fps，好累

+1

And also grats yf :3

GREAT

偶像

The storyboard is beautiful!

[Renatic]
02:29:713 (5,6,1,2) - 02:37:098 (5,6,1,2) - 打起來有點怪啊難道只有我一個嗎QAQ

还好吧，不怎么影响质量 也没触犯rank底线 就是难了点罢了
It's OK and reasonable enough

不是難的問題(那個1/2單指怎看都是最簡單的地方) 是感覺只有3拍最後一拍拍空的感覺((
不過應該沒什麼問題吧(

edit 聽了下好像真的有一拍 是我錯了QAQ

很喜欢aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

STORYBOARDDDD AAAAA <333 10/10

Hey there!

I was excited to see a map of this song being ranked, sadly the Twin-Renatic diff suffers from 3/4 slider abuse, random triplet overmapping and wrongly snapped streams during the solo, which makes it difficult for me to like the map.
Vert's diff seems solid but some of the slider to jump pattern transitions feel awkward, still fun though.

Anyways grats on the rank~ the mapset is pretty neat and I hope others will find it more enjoyable.
Great storyboard btw!

Thx for comment

Actually the triples are not random and optional, which is same as 3/4 sliders using becoz I make them on the same (or similar) places and become them to a system.

In solo part, I adjust to 25% speed and checked the snap, and I think they are right

Yea someone may hate some patterns i know but i know someone might like them, so I made an sb to try to make the whole map better.

The beatmap does not satisfying to me in fact, according to my standard, becoz the patterns are too simple (But ok to rank). Maybe I make this one more interesting, The map will be much harder. But I wish tops can gain some pp on it
Thx again. This is my 1st map which is like this. And also it's the laat one.

No worries, I was just putting my opinion to words.
Fundamentally there is nothing wrong with this map.
The reason why I referred to the triplets being random is that there is no supporting instrument in the music hence it's randomly overmapped, but you are right with your reasoning that if you overmap consistently it becomes less random.
There's also nothing wrong with using 3/4 sliders the way you did, it's just a personal dislike that I have because often they play and sound weird which disrupts the general pace of a map.

I hope you don't feel discouraged, this being your first map in this fashion is nothing to be ashamed of.. afterall you learn a lot from using new methods.
Generally speaking the map is fine, has a nice layout, interesting patterns and sliders.
The things I pointed out are just personal distastes.

Good luck~

Edit:
Forgot to mention;
03:14:251 (1,2,3,4) - and 03:15:635 (1,2,3,4) - sound like they should be 1/3 snap instead
03:24:405 (1,2,3,4) - is correctly snapped with 1/4
Listening to 25% playback rate on such high bpm still makes it difficult to hear out the correct snapping, so it's easy to make mistakes on such parts.
I am not even sure myself with this, but it sounds more appropriate to me.

LOL yes thx but I really said something sincerely from my heart, but not only because of u.

edit: hard to snap yea I made them with 1/3 before but someone want to have some 1/4 streams so I resnapped.

I want to give a personal opinion too, if possible xP

I honestly think the map has been well mapped even with all those 3/4.
I tried to map this song already in the past (you can check, it's in my grave list) and I can 100% confirm that it's a pain in the ass to get some ideas on mapping an high bpm like that for a song like this. So nothing, good job, it's a good map, I can feel you.

Chewin I appreciated your map before I made this one and thought that was one of the best one in the graveyard maps .

oh i just noticed its ranked

grats for the real yf and enjoy, i really like with your sb and map there <3