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Omoi - Snow Drive(01.23)

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Kroytz
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, July 24, 2017 at 9:06:47 PM

Artist: Omoi
Title: Snow Drive(01.23)
Tags: Vocaloid Hatsune Miku k2pudding Battle HappyRocket88 Anxient pkk Rumia MoeMoeKyunNN moph SnowNiNo_
BPM: 224
Filesize: 30857kb
Play Time: 03:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Anxient's Normal (2.48 stars, 443 notes)
  2. Arigatou (7.69 stars, 1207 notes)
  3. BHR's Easy (1.82 stars, 255 notes)
  4. Hard (3.39 stars, 676 notes)
  5. moph's Expert (5.77 stars, 1086 notes)
  6. NiNo's Expert (6.62 stars, 1293 notes)
  7. pk's Insane (4.65 stars, 876 notes)
  8. Rumi's Expert (5.43 stars, 968 notes)
Download: Omoi - Snow Drive(01.23)
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Timperjuncio
OMG the guy who told you the "Everlasting Memories" name is so good Kappa
Coin
Edgy poem for an edgy map

hehe
DO I, DO I, DO I
Have to listen to what
everyone says, at-least to
capture an idea. I've heard
of tedious reviewing, but
can it be raw. Can it dare
to be something other than
structured. Concise is one thing,
but is stress another. If I were
to free-flow like the rest
of the world, would it be bad?
You may say it's trash. But are children's books
the same to a certain degree. May it be long,
may it be short, may it be?
Why must there be an end, when your mind certainly
doesn't, or would you rather talk
of disqualify.
Booze
why are you trying to make a good looking 8* map are you insane
squirrelpascals
>insert poem here<
lmao

do u want another gd
xDololow
03:09:266 (1) - Maybe should add something like this. http://puu.sh/pSkm1.mp4 :? :? :? :?
Topic Starter
Kroytz

xDololow wrote:

03:09:266 (1) - Maybe should add something like this. http://puu.sh/pSkm1.mp4 :? :? :? :?
I appreciate the video ^^
I was gonna do a slider-art thingy there if I could but your idea also sounds good. For now it's a break until I'm more decisive.
Haruto
Hype 8*
Shiro
I want a diff too =( I've wanted to map this since I first heard it
Anxient


fuck
Topic Starter
Kroytz
Wait till you see how much it's worth with HR

Shiirn
how to completely fucking ignore the music and vocals and map practically and functionally random cross-screen 1/2s that change momentum and rotation at unpredictable points and in general is a bloody mess to look at. and that's just the kiai.



i hope you're banking on more than bullshit meme power to get this ranked, otherwise you might as well give up while you're ahead. The jump sections (all 20+ of them) need a complete do-over. I'm rather bored of seeing people map literally randomly placed jumps. At least have some basic concept of momentum or cursor positioning. And get a sense of rhythm, while you're at it.
Topic Starter
Kroytz
Rhythm in 2016 LUL
Yogurtt
you think i can slide in a gd? maybe for a 5.5-5.9 extra?
Topic Starter
Kroytz
No more room, soz
Kimitakari
Aww come on :c
Id like to CtB one
Yogurtt
;_;7
SynchroHD
If Mazzerin's death stream practice maps are getting ranked why shouldn't Kroytz' jump practice map also get ranked :) :)
phaZ
my shitty #33500 relax play
it had 4 weird jumps, but had problems at reading the last two troublesome. cool overdone map :D

and of course, Raikozen's Extra sounds too lame so you had no choice but to add "Tragic Love" /facepalm.
Osuology
I'm a big fan of your streamy maps but I can't get behind this one. Many patterns seem to have inconsistent flow, different kinds of flows for no reason. Beginning has NCs which don't really deserve to be there. Almost no sense of rhythm in jumps (that aren't in the chorus). Very poor choices of flow for sliders and spacing. Slider structure is inconsistent also. Jump patterns have ok sense of flow but you keep changing flow and it doesn't feel good to play at all (and is sloppily mapped)

You poor soul, you must have thought "if monstrata can qualify his alien I could probably get away with this"...

which you probably will knowing current standards... RIP osu beatmaps
- e - v - b-
After seeing you map this on stream I felt like a quick mod might be helpful!

SPOILER
  • Everlasting Memories
1.the jump from 00:44:891 (2) - to 00:45:025 (3) - feels really awkward to play and I feel like 00:44:891 (2) - should be moved slightly to the right (around x:108 maybe?)
2.nc on 00:47:034 (2) - instead of 00:46:766 (1) - to make it more consistent?
3. 01:10:873 (5) - NC and stack on top of 01:11:007 (6) -
4. 01:11:141 (7) - stacked on top of 01:11:275 (8) -
5. 01:11:945 (5,6,7,8) - same as above
6. 01:44:087 (3) - nc?
7. (IMO) 01:52:391 (3) - nc 01:52:659 (5) - nc 01:52:927 (7,8) - ctrl+g and nc on 01:52:927 (7) - makes this feel better to play
8. 02:04:712 (1) - keep in the same combo as 02:04:445 (5) -
9. same thing as before for 02:07:659 (5,6,7,8) - 02:08:730 (5,6,7,8) - 02:09:802 (5,6,7,8) - and 02:11:945 (5,6,7,8) -
10. not necessary but nc on 02:15:293 (7) - and put 02:15:695 (1) - in the same combo for consistency
11. 02:43:016 (3) - nc
12. 03:51:587 (3) - nc
13. stack 02:43:016 (3) - 02:44:891 (5,6) - 02:45:695 (5,6) - and 02:46:498 (5,6) -

That's all for that diff!

  • Raikozen's Tragic Love Extra
1. 00:22:141 (1,1,2,1,2,1) - keep in one combo
2. not necessary but nc on 00:49:596 (4) - for consistency
3. 00:59:373 (1,1,2,3) - keep in one combo
4. 01:18:123 (3) - nc or keep 01:18:391 (1,2,1,2) - in one combo for consistency
5. 01:39:820 (5) - nc?
6. 02:09:820 (5) - nc?
7. keep 02:39:015 (1,2,1,2,3) - in one combo?
8. 03:31:650 (6,1,2,3,4) - in one combo for consistency
9. 03:32:855 (1,2,3,1,2) - same as above
10. 03:56:427 (1,2) - same as above
11. 04:00:713 (2) - nc?

Sorry if the mod isn't of highest quality! I'm fairly new to it
Spaghetti
I honestly don't see how you'll make it through this one. The random constant cross-screen 1/2 doesn't make for a good, non-jump practice map, and doesn't compliment the music at all. Ascension was a beautiful, difficult map that made sense with the song, but this can be put behind any 224 BPM hyped up song and fit fine with adjustments in form. (Don't get me started on the random 3/4 either I just don't get that)
_Hou
holy 50 favorites already...
Moar 8* impossible diffs?
DygnitarZ
Raikozen diff is just right, i love his maps so much and this one for rank is perfect overall. I think everlasting memories diff is nice but needs to be better at some point, however stream parts are brilliant and satysfying to watch. Just my first feelings when i saw this difficulties first in editor. GL (:
-sandAI
So far before i attempt at a NM for this....

Noob opinions
The only thing I would say is to increase Raikozen's HP drain. If it's by .5 or 1 point, it will make it much harder of a map. At least I believe at this point it's easy enough to spam through the streams and hit only half the jumps to stay alive. It was ez pass ;(

Also for Everlasting Memories (why not eternal reminiscence D;), the map is difficult, yes, and that's how it should be. The first 3 Kiai's are spaced out equally in difficulties as 7.07*, then 7.12*, then 7.36*. While the last kiai is 7.92*. The song suggests this should be as it is, and that's fine. By personal opinion I think the 3rd Kiai should be a little bit more difficult, somewhere around 7.45*, so the buildup is a bit more even (I guess? idk). Another thing to note is that the 3rd Kiai has 10 less circles than the first two, but similar Slider count, maybe that can be used to increase the difficulty?

Again just opinions I'll probably mod this when some more maps get added.

Take a star <3
Skill
this map is really good :o
SnowNiNo_
obviously i win XD
*me runs
Shad0w1and
...
Feb
if raikozens diff stays the way it is, you will have a horrible spread, with the gders listed.
Vivyanne
the race of ranking highest starrating map is on

literally
burstlimit2
How are you planning to ranks this? It is overmapped as hell
Like seriously, for example 03:26:811 and until the end are just a bunch of notes placed randomly cross the screen lol
Nickoloui
Have a star ~
Alyseka
Just a few passing comments for top diff. If useless don't kds.

Firstly, AR 9.8? Why not just 10? If anything, it would help readability.

00:39:735 (8,1,2) - That's a rather sharp turn. I don't think the music calls for it either. A smaller curve, like the ones before this one, would fit better.

01:31:766 (1,2,3,4) - These notes shouldn't be here. The stream starts at 01:32:034 (5) -

And now the spacing.

On the first chorus it isn't awful, but on the second and the last it starts to get a bit hectic. You could argue that the music calls for the spacing but idk. I would get A LOT more opinions on the final few sections by top players. The spacing will most likely need to be toned down quite a bit, because as much as cross-screen jumps are fun , they are terrible for playability.

Also, why no sliders from 03:56:409 (1) - onwards? If you want to make one last final jump section, make it the last 8 notes or something.

Enough rambling from a player who can't play the map, gl with mapset.
SadBoi42
Arieeru called, he wanted his map back... pls at least use own ideas -.-
WORSTPOLACKEU

[Haruka-Chan] wrote:

Arieeru called, he wanted his map back... pls at least use own ideas -.-
What the fuck do you even mean
jeanbernard8865

WORSTPOLACKEU wrote:

[Haruka-Chan] wrote:

Arieeru called, he wanted his map back... pls at least use own ideas -.-
What the fuck do you even mean
Probably saw the beginning and nothing else, or can't make the difference between taking inspiration from rhythm and straight out copy-pasting patterns ( which isn't even a bad thing to begin with as long as it's done reasonably, and Kroytz was more than reasonable in taking ideas from arieeru ). Also obviously wasn't there during the 8+ hours stream he spent making the map.
Anxient
god save us all

im not touching the other diffs. i have ptsd now

Everlasting Memories
00:03:408 (1) - why NC fam
00:25:358 (1,3) - blanket lol
00:27:233 (1,2) - i seriously thing ctrl+g this would play better, since you already had this sort of 00:26:429 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - flow. 00:27:500 (1) - also helps with flow break on here?
00:43:572 (1) - 00:43:706 - :C dont ignore this
00:45:715 (1) - this one as well. maybe do dis? http://puu.sh/rkYEE/304a07a488.jpg
00:49:331 (4,5) - ctrl g. coz 00:49:465 - part of the song is more emphasized (drum kick), so i think a more contrast(I CANT ENGLISH) jump is more appropriate
01:00:447 (1) - why NC tho
01:01:384 (5) - NC? coz new section? also to indicate sudden slowdown
01:12:768 (3,5,6,7,8) - youre not gonna antijump this? ;p
01:18:393 (3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/rkYNY/c9b7de6e94.jpg imo this is more memorable coz it looks neater and seems super fast.
01:23:215 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - surprised you didnt go for skystar jumps (ladder jumps, see kneesocks)
01:35:000 (1) - here comes that bad idea oshit wadddup http://puu.sh/rkZ1O/c30cb7a671.jpg
01:35:804 (1) - i suggest ctrl g coz imo it plays alot better (more circle flow). also improves impact for the next note. i hope you understand what i mean
01:37:545 (2,3,4,5,6) - try to make this more similar to the star of david. by that i mean make it more neater .
https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/4/49/Star_of_David.svg/2000px-Star_of_David.svg.png
01:44:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - stab me with a spoon but some jumps here seem placed at random. or just plain messy, or i dont know how jumps are placed anymore.
01:59:643 (1) - ctrl g? seems to play better imo. to fix the spacing problem, 01:59:911 (2) - try placing (2) http://puu.sh/rkZpt/f68eccfa8e.jpg
02:09:822 (5,6,7,8) - if this is gonna stay as an antijump, i hope you fixed the problem i mentioned earlier in this mod. of course, making this a back and forth is also an option.
02:25:358 (1) - i suggest scaling this down to a 1/2 coz 02:25:491 - theres a beat here that you ignored :c
02:31:786 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - see if NCing 02:32:054 (4,7,10) - helps with visuals? http://puu.sh/rkZxK/bf78a5770b.jpg
02:33:393 (9) - surprised you didnt NC this
02:33:929 (1,1) - fIX STACKK
02:43:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - prETTY
02:56:161 (5,6) - i think making a jump instead of 1/4 sliders would be better since the 1/4s in here arent that hearable (to me). maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/rkZEK/a71786f099.jpg
03:47:121 - wow you play screenjumps but not this poor beat? ;c just put them on top itll be fiiinehttp://puu.sh/rkZJe/d4757eef56.jpg
03:55:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - crescendo says hi
04:00:715 (1) - make this note more notable pls lol. make it louder?

ekS DEE
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