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Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Hakurei Yoru 2016-04-16T11:50:54+00:00

sahuang不对。
maimai的难度是easy basic advanced expert master
所以目前的难度名是正确的

buhei

567 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

buhei 2016-04-16T11:51:55+00:00

Hakurei Yoru wrote:
sahuang不对。
maimai的难度是easy basic advanced expert master
所以目前的难度名是正确的

AgeSheRi

55 posts

Joined May 2013

AgeSheRi 2016-05-08T05:24:00+00:00

expert

00:00:730 (2) - keyi nong ge fanxiang tu chu yixia zheli de jiezou

00:06:830 (2,3) - youdian jin shuai chuqu yidian haowan ->https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5104801

00:07:930 (7) - jiaodu youdian bu hao ->https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5104810

00:13:230 (2,3) - he qian mian yi yang haishi shuai chuqu yidian haowan ba ->https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5104814

00:21:530 (3) - tai wan le ruguo bu kou dian dongxi guai guai de, keyi buyao name wan

01:07:330 (1,2) - wei ba die yixia 4 huozhe 6 ba ,kan qi lai you dian ji.

01:22:130 (2) - zheli dou zhege jiaodu le buru bao yixia 01:21:730 (1) - de weiba

01:29:730 (1,2,3,4,1) - 1die dao 01:29:130 (1) - de weiba zenyang

01:36:830 (4) - zheli bu die shang yige ..ke neng ni shi guyi zhme nong de buguo ganjue mei biyao

01:53:730 (1,3) - dou diao ge tou hao xiang hao wan yi dian

mastre

00:00:530 (2) - houmian lanxian nong yige note zai weiba shangmian bei

00:02:030 (2,3,4,5) - zhege jiaodu jie de bu tai hao.. buru zhijie ba 00:02:130 (3) - die dao 2

00:05:730 (6) - wang xia mian qu yidian haowan 00:06:030 (7,8) - zhe ge jie de ye bu tai haowan ->https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5104860

00:06:430 (9) - ye wang xia mian qu yidian

00:08:930 (5) - ye wang xia mian qu yidan

00:39:930 (6) - ye wang xia mian qu yidiandian

00:44:930 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - zhe li wudi (zhe yi da duan dou haowan)

00:52:930 (1,2) - wang xia qu yidian buran ni zhege nc he niudong tuchu de shi 00:53:030 (2) - le. zheli yinggai tu chu 1 suo yi cong 1 kaishi niu

00:58:030 (2) - zheyang ye shi yizhong baifa ..danshi he ni zhengge tu fengge you yi dian weihe haishi wang 3shang mian kao yidian ba

00:59:330 (1,2) - wang shang mian qu yidian (tong shang yige geng) buguo zheli wang shang qu yidian you dian chou ni zai kankan za nong ba

01:06:930 (3,4) - zhezhong wo xihuan ~

01:22:030 (2,3) - you dian chou . he 01:21:730 (1) - de wei ba duicheng yitiaoxian zen me yang

01:30:830 (3,4,5,6) - zhe li bi shang yige yiyang de geng haowan yidian ,suoyi ni buru liangge difang dou zhme bai(a..dou sui ni)

01:37:330 (1) - NC bei

01:40:530 (1) - NC bei

xiao bu hei wudi

buhei

567 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

buhei 2016-05-08T05:53:59+00:00

NextNaix wrote:
mastre

00:00:530 (2) - houmian lanxian nong yige note zai weiba shangmian bei 可以

00:02:030 (2,3,4,5) - zhege jiaodu jie de bu tai hao.. buru zhijie ba 00:02:130 (3) - die dao 2 算了

00:05:730 (6) - wang xia mian qu yidian haowan 00:06:030 (7,8) - zhe ge jie de ye bu tai haowan ->https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5104860 好

00:06:430 (9) - ye wang xia mian qu yidian no

00:08:930 (5) - ye wang xia mian qu yidan no

00:39:930 (6) - ye wang xia mian qu yidiandian 行

00:44:930 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - zhe li wudi (zhe yi da duan dou haowan)

00:52:930 (1,2) - wang xia qu yidian buran ni zhege nc he niudong tuchu de shi 00:53:030 (2) - le. zheli yinggai tu chu 1 suo yi cong 1 kaishi niu 有道理不过我还是倾向于摆一个顺一点的直线

00:58:030 (2) - zheyang ye shi yizhong baifa ..danshi he ni zhengge tu fengge you yi dian weihe haishi wang 3shang mian kao yidian ba 好

00:59:330 (1,2) - wang shang mian qu yidian (tong shang yige geng) buguo zheli wang shang qu yidian you dian chou ni zai kankan za nong ba 同之前

01:06:930 (3,4) - zhezhong wo xihuan ~

01:22:030 (2,3) - you dian chou . he 01:21:730 (1) - de wei ba duicheng yitiaoxian zen me yang 我拉直了

01:30:830 (3,4,5,6) - zhe li bi shang yige yiyang de geng haowan yidian ,suoyi ni buru liangge difang dou zhme bai(a..dou sui ni) 对称过去，星数变成5星了。厉害。

01:37:330 (1) - NC bei 行

01:40:530 (1) - NC bei 行

xiao bu hei wudi

VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,161 posts

Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2016-05-11T13:54:19+00:00

harder than 5

buhei

567 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

buhei 2016-05-11T14:59:42+00:00

VINXIS wrote:
harder than 5

anti–pp master buhei

Spaghetti

1,118 posts

Joined August 2014

Spaghetti 2016-05-15T07:01:34+00:00

mod for xilver boy

[general]

this is more for the entire mapset but you put the preview time on the one spot where the chorus is different, id consider putting it at 00:40:130 (1) - to represent the song better

[osu! champion]

be warned the map itself is rlly good so ima point out more aesthetic stuff cuz yeahj
00:00:530 (1) - idk if this nc was intentional but id remove it since u dont ever nc that pattern like that again in the rest of the map
00:03:330 (1,2,3) - this is just a point for the future but try to keep straight sliders less diagonal cuz it looks kinda shitty, stuff like 00:01:730 (1,2,3) - looks nice tho
00:08:930 (1) - inconsistent nc pls remove
00:14:330 (7) - ctrl ging this makes the flow from 7 to 1 leading into the verse a lot less jagged
00:18:530 (1) - inconsistent nc pls remove
00:20:930 (1,2) - id space this out more since the rest of you 1/2 is spaced out much larger, i almost misread this as 3/4
00:21:330 (2,3) - try to line up the curve of 3 with 2 better, this can be done by moving the 3rd anchor of the slider to 461|168
00:23:930 (1) - rotating this by 16 degrees clockwise around the selection center looks much better since 1 lines up with 10 better now
00:28:130 (1) - inconsistent nc pls remove
00:28:930 (3) - add nc on downbeat for consistency
00:33:730 (1) - rotate this by -18 degrees clockwise around the selection center for the same reason above
01:11:730 (7) - those slap bass notes tho, theyre so loud you cant ignore them with a slider pls
01:22:130 (2) - rotate by 19 degrees like last ones for same reason
01:23:330 (7) - add nc on downbeat for consistency
01:25:930 (1) - inconsistent nc pls remove
01:56:930 (1) - this is more personal preference but i think this would look nicer without the nc
01:58:930 (1) - silence end pls there's no other note here that need hitsounding emphasis
i mightve missed an nc on a downbeat or two so doublecheck for me boo

awesome song and awesome map, just try to focus more on aesthetics since you've learned how to properly map. look for diagonal sliders and make them a bit less diagonal™ and make sure slider paths line up with circles before/after them well (and also focus on blankets and incorporate them when necessary blah blah)

youve got mapping down man, just make them look nice and your maps will be perfect

VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,161 posts

Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2016-05-15T19:45:20+00:00

ok i mod 3 diffz

general

take out countdown and letterbox shit lo
bg resolution is ba d
u sud add audioleadin :0

yf

01:11:330 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - uneven spacing makes this look ugly lo http://puu.sh/oT1gw/f6ac511ee7.jpg use stacking view -__ -
nic complex rhythm tbh

xcserikr

ur diagonal sliderz r triggering me
00:18:530 (1,2,3,4,1) - tbh u cud just make a star lo
01:44:130 (1,1) - this is kinda weird cuz u deviate from the original rhythm uve eben using since lo i was expecting more of lik an increase in general spacing but yea

mastr

00:28:730 (1) - i thikn moving this to 405/86 or somewhere around there hasa better visual overlap than rn lo
01:17:330 (1,2) - i think u sud change this to circle so that all the circles r 1/6 and all teh sldiers r 1/4 Xdddd
cant paly the map but it sud be rlly ez for alternate players Xd

gud diffz

Xilver15

Former osu! Champion: 2015

510 posts

Joined August 2013

Xilver15 2016-05-18T02:55:30+00:00

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Last edited by Xilver15 2019-08-15T21:33:31+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

buhei

567 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

buhei 2016-05-21T09:31:06+00:00

VINXIS wrote:
ok i mod 3 diffz
general
take out countdown and letterbox shit lo k
bg resolution is ba d ?
u sud add audioleadin :0 no need

mastr
00:28:730 (1) - i thikn moving this to 405/86 or somewhere around there hasa better visual overlap than rn lo moved a bit
01:17:330 (1,2) - i think u sud change this to circle so that all the circles r 1/6 and all teh sldiers r 1/4 Xdddd no need to change, i made them due to the music.
cant paly the map but it sud be rlly ez for alternate players Xd

gud diffz

thx for your modding!

-shikaco-

50 posts

Joined April 2014

-shikaco- 2016-06-14T04:22:44+00:00

[General]
试了下加这个音效之后十分的happy，尤其是主难度 http://pan.baidu.com/s/1geF2kcb 真的happy 我怎么这么天才
专家难度感觉好无聊啊。。

[Advanced]
00:41:330 (4) - 左上移一下

[Master]
00:20:130 (1,2,3,4,1) - 00:32:930 (1,2,3,4,1) - 有点突然，刻意放梗的感觉
00:26:530 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个间距处理不好看，不如NC分开干脆点
00:41:530 (2) - 上移靠右一点
00:46:630 (2) - 右移，逆时针15°
总体很好看，good luck!

buhei

567 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

buhei 2016-06-14T04:34:47+00:00

-shikaco- wrote:
[General]
试了下加这个音效之后十分的happy，尤其是主难度 http://pan.baidu.com/s/1geF2kcb 真的happy 我怎么这么天才 ? 往哪加
专家难度感觉好无聊啊。。

[Master]
00:20:130 (1,2,3,4,1) - 00:32:930 (1,2,3,4,1) - 有点突然，刻意放梗的感觉 no
00:26:530 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个间距处理不好看，不如NC分开干脆点 k
00:41:530 (2) - 上移靠右一点 k
00:46:630 (2) - 右移，逆时针15° no
总体很好看，good luck!

thx!

roshan117

144 posts

Joined April 2016

roshan117 2016-06-15T21:11:49+00:00

Easy

00:16:930 (4) - Make both of the hitsounds on both ends the same, as it sounds out of place when they are different.

ZZH's Basic

00:00:130 (1,2) - Switch the positions of these (make slider 1 on top, slider 2 at the bottom), it feels awkward the way it is
00:06:530 (1) - Don't nc here
00:11:330 (1) - Don't nc here
00:27:730 (4) - DO NC HERE, DON'T NC 00:27:930 (1)
00:51:330 (1) - DON'T NC HERE
00:52:330 (3) - NC HERE
00:52:930 (1) - DON'T NC HERE
00:53:730 (2) - NC HERE
00:54:530 (1) - DON'T NC HERE
00:55:330 (2) - NC HERE
00:56:130 (1) - DON'T NC HERE
00:59:330 (1) - DON'T NC HERE
01:00:130 (2) - NC HERE
01:00:930 (1) - DON'T NC HERE
01:01:730 (2) - NC HERE
01:02:530 (1) - DON'T NC HERE
01:03:330 (2) - NC HERE
01:04:130 (1) - DON'T NC HERE
01:05:730 (1) - DON'T NC HERE
01:12:130 (1) - DON'T NC HERE
01:24:930 (1) - DON'T NC HERE
01:27:930 (1) - DON'T NC HERE
01:29:330 (1) - DON'T NC HERE
01:29:930 (2) - NC HERE

Overall

Both of the difficulties I modded were mapped very solid, except the basic difficulty startted new combos (nc) when not necessary. I hope my modding has helped progress this beatmap, and I loved the song.

VINXIS

Featured Artist

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Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2016-06-17T04:49:10+00:00

CAN YOU REALLY PLAY A 5-STAR MAP?

quaternary

320 posts

Joined February 2013

quaternary 2016-06-17T16:58:56+00:00

can you really play a 5.01 star map

ncuh

185 posts

Joined July 2013

ncuh 2016-06-22T06:58:36+00:00

NM request from my queue

MASTER

00:00:430 - there's should be note I guess
00:08:930 (5,6) - better swap it
00:10:130 (2) - not sure about that. I think there's should 1/4 slider or just a tap
00:11:730 (3) - 1/4 slider+tap is better following music
00:18:130 (2,3,4,5,6) - that's not looking good imo
00:20:330 (2) - 00:20:730 (4) - ctrl+g?
00:24:830 - note?
00:33:130 (2,4) - same as 00:20:330 (2) - 00:20:730 (4) -
00:35:330 (1) - same as 00:10:130 (2) -
00:44:530 (1,2) - same. 1/8 sliders will be again, gonna stop speak about it. Just I don't rly like it
01:00:530 (1) - ctrl+g?
01:06:930 (3,4) - hm. I thought 3 is slider lol. Some players mught be confuced. Mb move some away?
01:08:930 (1,2) - same^
01:10:130 (3,4) - ^
01:10:530 (1,2) - ^ Ok, I stop it
01:14:530 (1,2,3) - that's not rly fun imo
I'm not playing maps like this, so it's hard for me to say much, sorry

buhei

567 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

buhei 2016-06-22T11:01:51+00:00

M1k0 wrote:
NM request from my queue
MASTER
00:00:430 - there's should be note I guess not necessary
00:08:930 (5,6) - better swap it ^
00:10:130 (2) - not sure about that. I think there's should 1/4 slider or just a tap it's to emphasize the beat
00:11:730 (3) - 1/4 slider+tap is better following music can't find the difference
00:18:130 (2,3,4,5,6) - that's not looking good imo k
00:20:330 (2) - 00:20:730 (4) - ctrl+g? k
00:24:830 - note? no need
00:33:130 (2,4) - same as 00:20:330 (2) - 00:20:730 (4) - k
00:35:330 (1) - same as 00:10:130 (2) - same
00:44:530 (1,2) - same. 1/8 sliders will be again, gonna stop speak about it. Just I don't rly like it ^
01:00:530 (1) - ctrl+g? all the 1/8 sliders are like this
01:06:930 (3,4) - hm. I thought 3 is slider lol. Some players mught be confuced. Mb move some away? readable
01:08:930 (1,2) - same^ ^
01:10:130 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:10:530 (1,2) - ^ Ok, I stop it ^ lol it can be read the second or third time a player play it
01:14:530 (1,2,3) - that's not rly fun imo will wait for others' opinion
I'm not playing maps like this, so it's hard for me to say much, sorry

thx for modding

Chalwa

1,105 posts

Joined August 2014

Chalwa 2016-06-27T08:14:18+00:00

Hello!
Mod from my queue!

GENERAL

Look at AiMod on XILVER'S EXPERT diff

EASY

00:08:930 (2) - move it a bit to left, cause imo it looks better
00:21:730 (2) - ^
00:29:730 (4,1) - blanket improve
00:40:130 - What do you think about start here kiai time??
00:41:730 (3) - Ctrl + J??
01:05:731 - End kiai time here if u will make it
01:44:130 - Start kiai time too here!

ZZH'S BASIC

00:06:130 (3,1) - Blanket improve
00:12:130 (2,1) - ^
00:40:130 - The same as EASY diff
01:05:730 - ^
01:16:130 (3) - Copy 01:15:730 (2) and ctrl + J

01:18:530 (1) - Ctrl + H cuz overlap
01:56:730 (1) - End this slider at x:312 y:224

YF'S ADVANCED

00:17:530 (4,1) - Imo you can blanket it

00:18:530 (3,4) - Blanket improve
00:40:130 - The same like EASY and BASIC
01:05:730 - ^^
01:16:930 (1,2,3) - Imo it's overmapped. 1/4 sliders are better
01:42:130 (5) - End slider at x:51 y:351

END!
This map is pretty well

GOOD LUCK!!!
Give me a star pls : D

Arusamour

424 posts

Joined April 2014

Arusamour 2016-06-27T10:33:32+00:00

Xilver's EXPERT (4.47 stars, 568 notes)

00:07:230 (4,5) - as the trumpets get louder, i think so should the spacing. what do you think of something like this?:
00:43:930 (3) - space more, to like x:143 y:162 or something. you did the same thing 00:50:330 (3) - because second time around, the trumpet part is more emphasised in the song. idk if youu get me
01:58:930 (1) - shorten to to red tick instead of blue because it fits rhythm better

MASTER (5.01 stars, 678 notes)

00:04:230 (2,3,4,5) - this part of the stream is weird to read/play. since 00:04:230 (2) - is hiding so close to 00:03:930 (3,4) - . i'd prefer placing 00:04:230 (2) somewhere aroudn x:281 y:41 and adjusting the rest with a curvier stream, like so:
00:05:330 (4,5,6,7,8) - i think a little more rigid movements in between the sliders would be nice. like moving 00:05:730 (6) - to x:480 y:302 and moving 00:06:030 (7) - more to the left x:442 y:117.
00:11:730 (3,4,5) - messy/hard werid read especially on 00:12:429 (6,7) -. i would not make these sliders touch the circle. and on 00:12:429 (6,7), try something like this:

buhei

567 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

buhei 2016-07-05T11:24:48+00:00

Chalwa wrote:
Hello!
Mod from my queue!
GENERAL
Look at AiMod on XILVER'S EXPERT diff
k
EASY
00:08:930 (2) - move it a bit to left, cause imo it looks better didnt find the difference
00:21:730 (2) - ^ ^
00:29:730 (4,1) - blanket improve k
00:40:130 - What do you think about start here kiai time?? no
00:41:730 (3) - Ctrl + J?? no need
01:05:731 - End kiai time here if u will make it no
01:44:130 - Start kiai time too here! ^

Arusamour wrote:
MASTER (5.01 stars, 678 notes)

00:04:230 (2,3,4,5) - this part of the stream is weird to read/play. since 00:04:230 (2) - is hiding so close to 00:03:930 (3,4) - . i'd prefer placing 00:04:230 (2) somewhere aroudn x:281 y:41 and adjusting the rest with a curvier stream, like so: the bpm is low enough to allow players to handle this part
00:05:330 (4,5,6,7,8) - i think a little more rigid movements in between the sliders would be nice. like moving 00:05:730 (6) - to x:480 y:302 and moving 00:06:030 (7) - more to the left x:442 y:117. k
00:11:730 (3,4,5) - messy/hard werid read especially on 00:12:429 (6,7) -. i would not make these sliders touch the circle. and on 00:12:429 (6,7), try something like this: not unreadable

thx for modding!

Xilver15

Former osu! Champion: 2015

510 posts

Joined August 2013

Xilver15 2016-07-06T02:46:50+00:00

Arusamour wrote:
Xilver's EXPERT (4.47 stars, 568 notes)

00:07:230 (4,5) - as the trumpets get louder, i think so should the spacing. what do you think of something like this?:
okie
00:43:930 (3) - space more, to like x:143 y:162 or something. you did the same thing 00:50:330 (3) - because second time around, the trumpet part is more emphasised in the song. idk if youu get me okie
01:58:930 (1) - shorten to to red tick instead of blue because it fits rhythm better disagree, you can hear the beats through all of the sliders

AgeSheRi

buhei translated his mod for me, thank you very much!

expert

00:00:730 (2) - CTRL G - no, i like the pattern it does right now (how it's linear)

00:06:830 (2,3) - make them further https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5104801 done

00:07:930 (7) - angle isn't good https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5104810 done

00:13:230 (2,3) - make them further https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5104814 done

00:21:530 (3) - make it less of a curve i increased curve of all of the other sliders

01:07:330 (1,2) - move down - done

01:22:130 (2) - blanket done

01:29:730 (1,2,3,4,1) - stack to tail of 1 the idea was to unstack them to make it more readable

01:36:830 (4) - stack with 1 ^

01:53:730 (1,3) - ctrl g changed pattern

thank you! http://puu.sh/pRSwN/8ed60fba5b.osu

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2016-07-06T10:40:16+00:00

fixed some, thanks for mod

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Get Happy.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 104130
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Get Happy
TitleUnicode:Get Happy
Artist:Jimmy Weckl
ArtistUnicode:Jimmy Weckl
Creator:buhei
Version:ZZH's BASIC
Source:maimai
Tags:maimaiゴージャス★つめあわせBOX ZZHBOY yf_bmp Xilver
BeatmapID:793254
BeatmapSetID:359580

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Get Happy.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
130,400,4,2,1,30,1,0
1730,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
40130,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
65730,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
77330,-100,4,2,1,47,0,0
77730,-100,4,2,1,36,0,0
78130,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0
78530,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 122,227,96
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 242,227,43
Combo4 : 255,128,64

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80,104,111730,2,0,L|56:174,1,60,8|2,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
35,201,112130,6,0,P|32:273|40:329,1,120,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
132,339,112930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,301,113130,2,0,L|234:304,1,60,10|10,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
263,279,113530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,283,113730,6,0,P|381:291|457:269,1,120,4|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
470,195,114530,2,0,L|459:59,1,120,0|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
377,27,115330,5,4,0:0:0:0:
281,34,115730,2,0,L|220:46,1,60,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,82,116130,2,0,P|196:173|214:210,1,120,4|0,0:3|1:2,0:0:0:0:
245,227,116730,6,0,L|325:207,1,60,2|4,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
381,156,117330,2,0,P|445:244|255:302,1,360,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,227,118930,5,6,0:1:0:0:

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2016-07-24T12:46:17+00:00

[zzh]
00:57:730 (1) - 這個有點空
http://puu.sh/qcFgp/d9945716fb.jpg

[easy]
00:36:930 (1,3) - 最低難度有這程度的stack會危險

[Xilver's EXPERT]
01:58:930 (1) - stop at 01:59:130 - like master diff

其他應該ok

buhei

567 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

buhei 2016-07-24T14:36:12+00:00

贼贼爱去叫我帮他改

Rizia wrote:
[zzh]
00:57:730 (1) - 這個有點空 done
http://puu.sh/qcFgp/d9945716fb.jpg

[easy]
00:36:930 (1,3) - 最低難度有這程度的stack會危險 done

Xilver15

Former osu! Champion: 2015

510 posts

Joined August 2013

Xilver15 2016-07-25T11:30:57+00:00

@Rizia: Fixed c: thank you for mod

http://puu.sh/qdKos/ecd8571238.osu

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2016-07-26T18:57:27+00:00

bub

rs_fadeaway

264 posts

Joined May 2010

rs_fadeaway 2016-07-29T15:21:51+00:00

hao

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2016-08-22T15:41:52+00:00

Just some complaints.
My personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General

MASTER is with kiai but EASY not.

EASY

00:14:530 (1,3) - 讲道理别在easy里面摆overlap了
00:51:330 (1) - remove nc
01:08:930 (1,3) -

ZZH's BASIC

不用STANDARD或者MEDIUM吗？BASIC是和EASY一样的难度的意思吧

Xilver's EXPERT

00:06:830 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the rhythm choice make me feel quite weird when playing... imo it's better to follow the drum beat here
00:13:230 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:22:530 (5) - nc

讲真，是个好图
不过user rating估计高不到哪里去

buhei

567 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

buhei 2016-08-29T12:18:31+00:00

Koiyuki wrote:
Just some complaints.
My personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General
MASTER is with kiai but EASY not. 低难度都没有应该没事吧
EASY
00:14:530 (1,3) - 讲道理别在easy里面摆overlap了不好改了感觉不会很影响读图就这样吧
00:51:330 (1) - remove nc ok
01:08:930 (1,3) - ???
ZZH's BASIC
不用STANDARD或者MEDIUM吗？BASIC是和EASY一样的难度的意思吧这是maimai的难度名，对的
Xilver's EXPERT
00:06:830 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the rhythm choice make me feel quite weird when playing... imo it's better to follow the drum beat here
00:13:230 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:22:530 (5) - nc
讲真，是个好图
不过user rating估计高不到哪里去

Xilver15

Former osu! Champion: 2015

510 posts

Joined August 2013

Xilver15 2016-08-29T12:39:08+00:00

Xilver's EXPERT
00:06:830 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the rhythm choice make me feel quite weird when playing... imo it's better to follow the drum beat here disagree, i think the trumpets are stronger than the drums so it’s best to follow them, i did change the pattern a little bit to account for easier readablility though.
00:13:230 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ same as before
00:22:530 (5) - nc done

thanks! http://puu.sh/qSwi6/57651d1c01.osu

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2016-08-29T16:14:35+00:00

easy有哪里不好改的，00:16:130 (3) - 放1的头都比现在好，01:08:930 (1,3) - 也一样

and xilver's extreme 00:22:530 (5) - you havent nc it... well buhei plz help him fix this

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2016-08-30T16:09:09+00:00

给他哈啤

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-08-30T22:05:49+00:00

吊

Iolite

219 posts