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Feint ft. Veela - Horizons

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TeeJoe
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Joined January 2014
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TeeJoe
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, May 4, 2019 at 7:24:59 PM

Artist: Feint ft. Veela
Title: Horizons
Tags: techno trance dnb drum and bass melodic melody electronic build off of the record off of my head
BPM: 172
Filesize: 7358kb
Play Time: 03:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Tell Me A Story (5.7 stars, 982 notes)
  2. Wey (5.93 stars, 946 notes)
Download: Feint ft. Veela - Horizons
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Build off of the record off of my head!

Wey
Last edited by TeeJoe , edited 282 times in total.
Veroxx
39 posts
Joined June 2014
Veroxx
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Mekki
1,793 posts
Joined November 2014
Mekki
Finished. o3o
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Feint - Horizons ft. Veela.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44941
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9999994

[Metadata]
Title:Horizons
TitleUnicode:Horizons
Artist:Feint ft. Veela
ArtistUnicode:Feint ft. Veela
Creator:TeeJoe
Version:Mk's Normal
Source:
Tags:techno trance melodic melody jump flow reading stream cockroach
BeatmapID:882798
BeatmapSetID:398338

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3.5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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JumpingFox
48 posts
Joined June 2014
JumpingFox
Normal Difficulty

Compose
Your objects are not snapped (03:23:311 , 03:25:055 , 03:27:497 , 03:29:241 , 03:31:683 , 03:34:125 , 03:36:218) also at begging there are a lot of circles missing during the offset you set (Time 00:00:290 - 00:22:615) almost 30 sec without any circles play some circles behind that or long ones the map should be full because of offset you set at begging does not quite match the circles its empty
Kiai
Your Kiai is longer than 1/3 cut it a bit or reduce it its too long
Slider Velocity
Slider Velocity is not 1,00 its on 1,40 during the kiai on 0.8 its on 1,50
SongSetup Difficulty
HP is too low it should be at least on 7 or 8 same goes for AR and OD and CS Your difficulty is way too low
SongSetup Audio
Audio is too loud whan i play map i only hear clicks of circles that can bother player consider too lower audio at least on 30 volume

450ms Reaction Difficulty

Compose
At begging there are a lot of circles missing during the offset you set (Time 00:00:290 - 00:22:615) almost 30 sec without any circles play some circles behind that or long ones the map should be full because of offset you set at begging does not quite match the circles its empty
Kiai
Your Kiai is longer than 1/3 cut it a bit or reduce it its too long
Slider Velocity
Slider Velocity is not 1,50 its on 1,40 during the kiai 0.8 its on 1.50
SongSetup Audio
Audio is too loud whan i play map i only hear clicks of circles that can bother player consider too lower audio at least on 30 volume

Tell me a story Difficulty

Compose
At begging there are a lot of circles missing during the offset you set (Time 00:00:290 - 00:22:615) almost 30 sec without any circles play some circles behind that or long ones the map should be full because of offset you set at begging does not quite match the circles its empty
SongSetup Audio
Audio is too loud whan i play map i only hear clicks of circles that can bother player consider too lower audio at least on 30 volume
Kiai
Your Kiai is longer than 1/3 cut it a bit or reduce it its too long
Slider Velocity
Slider Velocity is not 1,50 its on 1,40 during the kiai 0.8 its on 1.50

Thoughts on map how you mapped is actually ok but as you can see you have still few mistakes when i play map its solid i guess but in my opinion AR is a little bit too high well mapped it follows song and that is pretty much it fix that shoot some kudosu stars and maybe it will be qualify :D
lazygirl
506 posts
Joined February 2016
lazygirl
Love the music :P As for how the map looks:

Hard diff:
I think your stacking value is a bit high it doesn't look great in some places

00:39:740 (3,5) - Stacking issue maybe, I think it doesn't look really clean (not the stacking value though)
01:26:135 (3,1) - As I said with the value being too high, here it looks a bit weird imo
01:55:263 (2,4) - Again here
02:53:345 (1,4) - Here

Insane:
01:10:612 (4,6) - Again reduce the stacking value for stuff like here
02:50:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - this feels a little redundant, I'd change the last 4 notes up ^^

Tell Me A Story:

Just wow, love it a lot :D New favorite map of mine

Other than that, really really love it ^^ This deserves modding :)
Also don't take my suggestions for gold, I'm recent (like very recent) to mapping and I'm just stating my humble opinion ^^ Sorry if my suggestions are bad, I don't really think I'm well placed to correct this level of mapping :P

Anyways, this map is REALLY good and I'll wish you best of luck to get this ranked :D
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Ataraxia
Easy

Did the DS are costant (control shift a, check distance snap...)? On a easy, inconstant DS are unrankeable. fix all this

SV alteration is unrankeable to, fix this so !

Normal

Esses sliders estao muito rapidos para um normal, mas isso nao vem ao caso, o problema real é, por que isso?
alteracao de SV em normal é apenas "discutivel" mas recomendo fortemente deixar 1.0x para tudo.

Btw corriga as DS , Ai mod esta alertando varios DS quebrados la !

No kudo for this post

edit: se quizer, eu até faco um mega mod no resto da diff, eu so falei o pontos essenciais para ter um mapa rankeado

boa sorte !
TeeJoe
41 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
TeeJoe

lazyboy007 wrote:

Love the music :P As for how the map looks:

Hard diff:
I think your stacking value is a bit high it doesn't look great in some places

00:39:740 (3,5) - Stacking issue maybe, I think it doesn't look really clean (not the stacking value though)
01:26:135 (3,1) - As I said with the value being too high, here it looks a bit weird imo
01:55:263 (2,4) - Again here
02:53:345 (1,4) - Here

Insane:
01:10:612 (4,6) - Again reduce the stacking value for stuff like here
02:50:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - this feels a little redundant, I'd change the last 4 notes up ^^

Tell Me A Story:

Just wow, love it a lot :D New favorite map of mine

Other than that, really really love it ^^ This deserves modding :)
Also don't take my suggestions for gold, I'm recent (like very recent) to mapping and I'm just stating my humble opinion ^^ Sorry if my suggestions are bad, I don't really think I'm well placed to correct this level of mapping :P

Anyways, this map is REALLY good and I'll wish you best of luck to get this ranked :D
Thank you very much for modding :D
TeeJoe
41 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
TeeJoe

Ataraxia wrote:

Easy

Did the DS are costant (control shift a, check distance snap...)? On a easy, inconstant DS are unrankeable. fix all this

SV alteration is unrankeable to, fix this so !

Normal

Esses sliders estao muito rapidos para um normal, mas isso nao vem ao caso, o problema real é, por que isso?
alteracao de SV em normal é apenas "discutivel" mas recomendo fortemente deixar 1.0x para tudo.

Btw corriga as DS , Ai mod esta alertando varios DS quebrados la !

No kudo for this post

edit: se quizer, eu até faco um mega mod no resto da diff, eu so falei o pontos essenciais para ter um mapa rankeado

boa sorte !
Eu apreciaria muito um mod completo, só esse pequeno mod ja me ajudou. :D to no aguardo
igorsprite
623 posts
Joined September 2015
igorsprite
eu ia fazer um mod mas com vc aqui deu vergonha :oops:
AsyouSaidsir
71 posts
Joined April 2015
AsyouSaidsir
I love this map, it'll be awesome if it got ranked! :)

This is my first mod, so I am not very experienced, I couldn't find many mistake. But I hope it still helps. c:

  • GENERAL:
    - The tags should include the name of the GD's mapper, add KeyLo to the tags.
    - Why is cockroach in the tags? xP
  • KeyLo's Easy:
    - 02:08:694 (1) - Shouldn't the reverse arrow be on 02:10:089 ? It's hard to hear a note at 02:08:694 (1) . I suggest something like this:
    SPOILER

    or

  • Normal:
    I know this is still a WIP but I like to point out that all the sliders before 00:40:787 (1) end on one tick earlier than they should.
  • Hard:
    - 01:05:903 (5) - Add NC
    - 03:31:194 (1) - Remove NC.
    - 03:31:717 (1) - Add NC.
  • Insane:
    - 00:57:705 (2) - Change this circle to X: 125 and Y: 200, I think It looks better this way.
    - 02:39:740 (1) - Add NC? (Not sure, but I think it fits)
    - 02:40:263 (1) - ^
  • Tell Me A Story:
    - 00:21:252 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern feels a bit messy, I think it'll be better if you changed it to some other shape. (Below are some suggestions, but you can come up with your own)
    SPOILER



    (The 8th note is on top of the first one)
    You get the idea :>


    - 01:29:624 (1) ~ 01:51:949 (1) - I think a 22 second break is a bit too long for an advanced difficulty, maybe add some slider art to the piano notes? If you don't want to do that (although I think it's a good idea), you can add a spinner at 01:50:554 (1) to make the break shorter by two seconds.
TeeJoe
41 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
TeeJoe
Thank you AsyouSaidsir for the modding, just didnt take the normal and easy suggestions since i deleted both diffs, but the rest i did minor changes :D
lazygirl
506 posts
Joined February 2016
lazygirl
If the easy is still GD open i'll gladly map it :)
Plaudible
1,028 posts
Joined September 2015
Plaudible

lazyboy007 wrote:

If the easy is still GD open i'll gladly map it :)
Sorry dude, just did it! :( I think normal is still open though!
Plaudible
1,028 posts
Joined September 2015
Plaudible
Complete Easy GD

I wasn't sure what to hitsound in the beginning so play around with it if you want to. Please let me know if there's any parts you don't like and I'll change 'em :D

SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Feint - Horizons ft. Veela.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44973
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.32

[Metadata]
Title:Horizons
TitleUnicode:Horizons
Artist:Feint ft. Veela
ArtistUnicode:Feint ft. Veela
Creator:TeeJoe
Version:Plaudible's Easy
Source:
Tags:techno trance dnb drum and bass melodic melody jump flow reading stream cockroach
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.85
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,89824,110629
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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lazygirl
506 posts
Joined February 2016
lazygirl

Plaudible wrote:

lazyboy007 wrote:

If the easy is still GD open i'll gladly map it :)
Sorry dude, just did it! :( I think normal is still open though!
Oh ok :p well I'll do normal then haha
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Ataraxia
Eu vejo que você vai receber outras GD não é?

se for me da uma pokada quando terminar para eu moddar isso tudo

se tiver alguma diff pra min fazer vo fica felizasso de fazer essa musica é boa pra porra
LQss
12 posts
Joined November 2014
LQss
^^ HAI HAI ^^

gj so far :D
not interesting xD but https://osu.ppy.sh/b/348605 same BG :p

Tell me a story
02:07:279 - add a note here
02:11:465 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6016338
03:10:593 (2) - change position of this

Insane
02:11:465 (4,5,6,7,8) -https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6016449

KeyLo's Easy
Maybe if u make the cs bigger
01:56:116 - add something here
01:59:954 - ^
02:14:256 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6016622
02:12:861 - SPIN - 02:13:907 -
02:46:349 - 02:46:698 - 02:47:047 - (5) then a CS here 02:47:396 -
03:43:558 (1) - hmmm idk ;-;
gl for getting this ranked ! ;) :lol: :)
DigitoriiX
4 posts
Joined July 2013
DigitoriiX
Plaudible's Easy
SPOILER
Minor: 01:10:070 (5) - This slider has an awkwardly timed repeat, I would change this to something like:

Minor: 03:00:303 (4) - This slider should not have a whistle effect
Personal: 03:43:558 (1) - This spinner is pretty exhausting, even if it is at the end. I'd shorten it to 3-4 measures.

Normal: Looks good so far.

Hard
SPOILER
Minor: 01:29:605 - No reason to delay the beginning of this break time
Minor: 00:28:733 (2) - 00:34:314 (3) - 00:35:709 (3) - 00:52:454 (2) - 00:56:640 (3) - 01:52:454 (3) - 02:42:686 (3) - These kick sliders have notes too soon after them that makes them feel like one-repeat rather than three-repeat kick sliders. I broke combo on nearly every one of them when sightread playtesting. Here's some patterns that can replace them to feel more readable while staying appropriate for the difficulty level:

Insane
SPOILER
Minor: 02:46:523 (2) - The four sliders in the pattern just before this move in different directions but this one inconsistently overlaps the previous one.
Minor: 02:55:070 (3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern doesn't quite match the music. It should be moved to 02:55:244
Minor: 02:55:855 (5) - This circle specifically should be deleted to better match the music.
Personal: 00:26:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Difficult to read since the two traingles overlap but change direction halfway through. Given the difficulty you can probably keep it, but it would be easier to read if (5) and (6) were switched.

Tell Me A Story
SPOILER
Minor: 01:29:605 - No reason to delay the beginning of this break time
Plaudible
1,028 posts
Joined September 2015
Plaudible

DigitoriiX wrote:

Plaudible's Easy
SPOILER
Minor: 01:10:070 (5) - This slider has an awkwardly timed repeat, I would change this to something like:
done
Minor: 03:00:303 (4) - This slider should not have a whistle effect fixed
Personal: 03:43:558 (1) - This spinner is pretty exhausting, even if it is at the end. I'd shorten it to 3-4 measures. changed

ey baybee heres da updet
osu file format v14

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260,144,149605,2,0,P|196:120|176:80,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,32,150303,2,0,L|132:204,1,170
116,272,151349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,288,151698,2,0,P|80:340|128:348,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,328,152396,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,256,152744,2,0,P|212:200|232:176,2,85,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,312,153791,2,0,P|304:316|336:292,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,332,154489,2,0,P|396:280|352:232,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,204,155186,2,4,P|388:176|332:192,1,85,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,100,155884,2,4,P|300:136|288:176,1,85,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,204,156582,6,0,B|172:196|172:196|140:156,2,127.5,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,124,157977,2,0,B|292:132|292:132|321:168,2,127.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,92,159372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,48,159721,2,0,L|304:56,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,112,160419,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,188,160768,2,0,P|332:264|344:288,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,244,161465,2,0,P|348:344|284:328,1,170
256,288,162512,2,0,P|276:272|344:272,2,85,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,224,163558,5,0,0:0:0:0:
172,160,163907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,96,164256,2,0,L|204:32,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,52,164954,2,0,B|308:92|308:92|312:132|312:132|352:176,2,127.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,20,166349,2,0,B|380:60|380:60|384:100|384:100|424:144,2,127.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,52,167744,2,0,B|224:100|160:120|160:120|160:176,1,170
200,224,168791,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,248,169140,2,0,P|180:296|240:288,2,127.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,172,170535,6,0,P|132:120|152:80,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,140,171233,2,0,P|232:104|268:88,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,164,171930,2,0,P|324:164|360:180,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,236,172628,2,0,P|344:268|356:312,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,308,173326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,304,173675,2,0,L|128:236,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,224,174372,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,172,174721,2,0,P|148:124|180:108,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,156,175419,2,0,P|284:124|288:76,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,28,176116,6,0,L|360:196,1,170
344,264,177163,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,312,177512,6,0,P|220:288|184:296,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,280,178209,2,0,P|104:248|88:204,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,136,178907,1,4,0:0:0:0:
360,312,180303,2,0,B|264:292|232:292|232:292|220:272|216:264|216:264|188:288|168:292|124:300|80:256|88:208,1,340
164,208,183093,6,0,P|140:160|92:136,2,85,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,280,184140,2,0,P|212:316|260:336,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,260,184837,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,192,185186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,124,185535,2,0,L|280:60,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,186233,2,0,P|124:72|104:48,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,16,186930,2,0,L|144:172,1,170,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,244,187977,2,0,P|180:236|212:200,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,152,188675,6,0,L|340:184,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,104,189372,2,0,L|428:136,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,160,190070,1,2,0:0:0:0:
476,236,190419,2,0,B|436:292|436:292|384:292,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,368,191116,2,0,P|352:332|372:232,2,170,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,292,192861,2,0,P|424:232|392:188,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,180,193558,2,0,P|276:232|272:264,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,228,194256,6,0,L|136:152,2,85,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,296,195303,2,0,P|176:300|144:280,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,236,196000,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,164,196349,2,0,P|180:108|176:84,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,24,197047,2,0,L|264:176,1,170
328,188,198093,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,240,198442,2,0,B|332:312|476:236|396:120|356:116,1,255,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,108,199837,2,4,P|216:112|192:92,1,85,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,56,200535,2,4,P|100:52|68:80,1,85,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,120,201233,6,0,B|136:208|136:208|92:268,2,127.5,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,132,202628,2,0,P|196:72|64:144,1,255,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,120,204023,6,0,P|132:176|120:208,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,256,204721,2,0,P|56:316|80:360,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,300,205419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,252,205768,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,204,206116,2,0,L|376:180,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,264,206814,6,0,P|408:204|296:124,1,255,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,106,208209,2,0,P|169:93|153:50,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,11,208907,2,0,L|105:126,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
39,99,209605,2,0,P|79:160|147:161,2,127.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
114,87,211000,2,0,P|186:109|201:197,1,170
144,244,212047,1,8,0:0:0:0:
199,296,212396,6,0,P|245:330|281:333,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,255,213093,2,0,P|309:264|341:292,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,295,213791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
403,219,214140,2,0,B|402:177|402:177|361:122,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,202,214837,1,8,0:0:0:0:
341,277,215186,2,0,B|248:306|248:306|186:292,2,127.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,229,216582,2,0,P|398:167|353:126,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,202,217279,2,0,L|236:231,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,236,217977,5,0,0:0:0:0:
125,173,218326,2,0,P|103:121|111:85,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,119,219023,2,0,L|281:89,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,30,219721,2,0,P|334:78|334:117,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,175,220419,1,8,0:0:0:0:
233,188,220768,2,0,P|322:251|355:238,2,127.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,111,222163,2,4,P|185:124|161:162,1,85,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,223,222861,1,4,0:0:0:0:
197,287,223209,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,223558,12,4,227744,0:0:0:0:
TeeJoe
41 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
TeeJoe
Thank you for the mod :D Changes done
Elzy
291 posts
Joined December 2015
Elzy
Heres my small mod
These are all my opinions, but some you should fix and should consider ;p
Easy
00:55:419 (2) - Off Screen i would fix this
AIMod - Uninherited timing points conflict with Hard diff. again i would fix this some how
AIMod - This mapset at least 1 Easy/Normal diff - < wut, only thing could be is your easy diff is to high in rating.
01:28:209 (1) - i don't know what's wrong with the hitsounds here but they are very loud and sound muffy
02:35:186 (5) - same here
02:58:907 (3) - sammmmmeee
03:19:837 (8) - boop
03:42:163 (7) - sloop
idk maybe its just the volume you have at 95/100 I DUUUNT KNUU

Hard
00:30:303 - i would recommend adding a note here, does not break the flow of the song and the beatmap. plus there's just a werid pause there when there's no note there =\
AIMod - Uninherited timing points conflict with Hard diff. again i would fix this some how
AIMod - This mapset at least 1 Easy/Normal diff -
this was the only thing i could recommend knowing i could not find many problems or suggestions to give you (maybe cause people beat me to it ;-;)

Insane
01:57:686 - maybe add a note here. keeps the flow going and not to hard at the same time
AIMod - Uninherited timing points conflict with Hard diff. again i would fix this some how
AIMod - This mapset at least 1 Easy/Normal diff -
etc.

but i would figure out that volume hitsounds thing :p!
Good Luck & Happy Mapping!
Daoski
201 posts
Joined August 2014
Daoski
hi, might as well go hard for 1 kudosu

Tell Me A Story

spacing:
00:26:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:32:396 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - shouldn't the distance spacing between each pair of notes follow the increase in the music accordingly?? just seems odd especially when the increase in distance spacing is only changing on notes 5-8, and not including 1-4... even tho it should be increasing from 1-8


00:37:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ... inconsistent with the jumps stated above since there are no changes in distance spacing between circles at all now ...

*****for these jumps either just go with no change in distance spacing or do the change in spacing similar to this 01:05:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - because those are poorly placed and thought out imo*****

00:29:082 (6,7,8) - why such a random increase in spacing compared to the former part: 00:24:023 (1,2,3,4) -

00:48:791 (5,1,2) - very random change of spacing compared to the rest of that specific combo section... please reconsider making it consistent

*optional* 00:55:419 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - maybe shorten the distance between these 2 streams... thats a little unreasonable imo

01:05:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this becomes more playable if u rotate this by something like 90-120 degrees counterclockwise because it completes a triangle made by these circles: 01:05:709 (8,1,2) -

01:28:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - please add newcombos accordingly here please.. what is that lmao

02:00:651 (1) - new combo please

02:05:361 (2) - should be just a circle.. slider end does not attach to any music

02:05:884 (1,2) - making this into a repeating slider is much more playable especially since it is a very apparent slow section of the song

02:08:500 (3) - this circle does not need to exist... aren't you matching the vocals for this part lmao

02:10:244 (2) - since we're approaching the beginning of the next chorus, up the intensity consistently by making this into a slider with the sliderend at the nearest white tick pls

02:12:337 (2,3,4) - make a triangle please, more easy to play and read.

02:54:372 (5,6,1) - this is extremely abrupt increase in spacing for these sliders compared to all other instances in the song... please dont troll me lol ^^

03:24:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 03:29:605 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 03:35:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 03:40:768 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - tone these jumps down a little bit to match the pacing of the song.. especially since these jumps can also easily fit in the other choruses that have higher intensity... we're nearing the end of the song the map shouldn't be getting more cancerous xd

the ending kiai section should in general be toned down... why is it more intense than the other 2 kiai sections.. music is decreasing in intensity after the 2nd kiai and even after that, any increases in intensity should be very minimal... not 8*mapping friendly... k?

aesthetics
00:25:942 (2,3) - ugly overlap.. please fix

00:33:791 (1,2) - separate these more so they dont overlap... ugly

00:42:686 (3,5) - OVERLAP.... SEPARATE lul

00:48:616 (4,1) - very unplayable overlap... please considering moving the 1 circle away from it please because hiding a new combo like that is dumb imo

00:51:930 (1) - lol slider with a troll direction good stuff please flip vertically please so the arc can point to the next circle for better reading plus it matches with the curvature of the stream: 00:52:454 (3,4,5,6,7) - if u do so please change that

00:57:686 (2,4) - very ugly overlap... u expect 50k rank players to read that with ease?? either overlap the sliderstart circle to hitcircle #2 or dont do it at all

01:03:093 (1,4) - ugly overlap separate these two specifically for appearance purposes please

01:05:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is the only instance of back and forth jumps in the ENTIRE map... very ugly and hard to transition from the jump section before to this set of jumps.. please reconsider changing it

01:07:279 (1,2) - please place the 2 circle somewhere closer to the center alignment of the slider like x:32 y:92, and not near the sliderstart circle... looks ugly and bad

01:11:814 (1,1) - why do these new combos exist when this circle: 01:11:291 (4) - didnt have it ...

01:13:209 (2,3,4,5,1) - placement of these sliders triggers me but u dont have to change it because whatever lol

01:17:396 (1,1,1,1,1) - what are the purpose of these new combos... theres no music attached to these notes to justify newcombo and high spacing...

01:28:558 (3,4,5) - reconsider not overlapping these jumps please... pretty troll

01:56:465 (2,3) - separate these two more

01:57:512 (1,3) - separate...

01:58:907 (1,2,3) - don't make these overlap... looks very bad

02:16:000 (3) - this overlapping with this stream here: 02:15:303 (5,6,7,8,1) - very bad, please separate

02:17:570 (4) - same overlapping issue as above with this stream: 02:16:698 (6,7,8,9,1) - separate please

02:18:965 (4) - same overlapping as above... with this stream here: 02:19:489 (8,9,10,11,1) -

***maybe these suggestions are unreasonable but they just look so rough and messy imo, i think it makes it look like an unrankable map***

02:29:430 (8,2) - separate these two please

02:37:628 (7,2) - i suggest not to overlap these , even though there are other instances that do this... this specific part should not have an overlap

02:38:326 (3) - you overlap this slider on top of this stream here: 02:39:023 (7,8,9,10,1) - ... really dont overlap like this lol

02:40:942 (2,5) - idk if this is a habit but u should really stop overlapping sliders like this lol i dont like them

02:43:733 (2,4) - separate these 2... thats some ugly overlapping

02:45:303 (2,3) - again, dont overlap this single note with a stream here: 02:44:605 (5,6,7,8,1) -

03:15:303 (7,1) - overlapping again, please separate

03:29:605 (1,2) - separate these two a little bit, to look similar to this 03:30:128 (3,4) -

03:42:163 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - dude are you skystar or something... nearly fullscreen side to side jumps??? cmon man u dont overmap something like that when the music has proper rises and falls for you to map accurately to especially when the ending of the song is not matching that intensity, as i've pointed out in the spacing section of this mod!!!!

*CHANGE. THIS. lel*

sry for being a bit rough with this mod but honestly this diff isn't quite ready yet as there are many technical issues to be looked at and modified

lul ill add more when i have time
Daoski
201 posts
Joined August 2014
Daoski
lul
Bandison
82 posts
Joined May 2016
Bandison
#modreqs
Plaudible's Easy
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!111!!!!!!!11111211 Too small circles. Change CS to 3.
Normal
Better change name to 'Advanced'.
Dang, I want this to be ranked. Seriously.
youtune3
192 posts
Joined May 2015
youtune3
[Easy]
02:03:093 - idk why but i feel like a break should go here
02:59:256 - 03:02:744: why unmapped (besides 1 slider)

[Might As Well Be Advanced]
00:24:896 (2,3) - feels like a note could go here
00:30:826 (3,1) - ^
00:31:523 (2) - remove note
00:34:663 (2,3) - add note
00:55:419 (5,6) - feels to hard for a normal
01:10:000 (5,6) - ^
01:55:942 (4) - remove note
02:03:093 - idk why but i feel like a break should go here
02:19:140 (5,6,7) - feels to hard for a normal
02:24:721 (5,6) - ^
02:30:303 (5,6,7) - ^
02:35:361 (4,5,6,7) - ^
02:41:465 (5,6) - ^
02:44:256 (2,3,4) - ^
02:47:047 (5,6) - ^
02:54:547 (3,1,2) - ^
02:57:686 (4,5,6,7) - ^
03:21:756 (2,3,4) - ^
03:26:116 (5,6) -03:27:337 (2,3,4) - ^
03:34:489 - 03:42:337: ^

[Hard]
Looks Alright
Other Than 02:03:093 - idk why but i feel like a break should go here

[Insane]
00:48:965 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - these jumps feel to hard for this difficulty
01:04:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - monstrata plz
02:03:093 - idk why but i feel like a break should go here
02:33:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - jumps plz
02:39:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - monstrata why do you keep collabing and making triangles ;-;-;-;
03:14:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
03:24:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - difficult jumps for someone who might just now be getting to do this difficulty
03:29:605 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^
03:40:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

[Tell Me A Story]
(Better Diff Name [Dawn]) jkjk
02:03:093 - idk why but i feel like a break should go here
02:17:047 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - looks a little odd
02:28:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:33:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:50:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:58:558 (7,8) - feel a little to far apart
03:35:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - looks a little odd
(not the best at modding high sr difficulties)
TeeJoe
41 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
TeeJoe

YDoku wrote:

SPOILER
[Easy]
02:03:093 - idk why but i feel like a break should go here
02:59:256 - 03:02:744: why unmapped (besides 1 slider)

[Might As Well Be Advanced]
00:24:896 (2,3) - feels like a note could go here Fixed
00:30:826 (3,1) - ^ Fixed
00:31:523 (2) - remove note Fixed
00:34:663 (2,3) - add note Fixed
00:55:419 (5,6) - feels to hard for a normal Fixed
01:10:000 (5,6) - ^ Fixed
01:55:942 (4) - remove note Fixed
02:03:093 - idk why but i feel like a break should go here
02:19:140 (5,6,7) - feels to hard for a normal Fixed
02:24:721 (5,6) - ^ Fixed
02:30:303 (5,6,7) - ^ Fixed
02:35:361 (4,5,6,7) - ^ Fixed
02:41:465 (5,6) - ^ Fixed
02:44:256 (2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
02:47:047 (5,6) - ^ Fixed
02:54:547 (3,1,2) - ^ Fixed
02:57:686 (4,5,6,7) - ^ Fixed
03:21:756 (2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
03:26:116 (5,6) -03:27:337 (2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
03:34:489 - 03:42:337: ^ Fixed

[Hard]
Looks Alright
Other Than 02:03:093 - idk why but i feel like a break should go here

[Insane]
00:48:965 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - these jumps feel to hard for this difficulty Makes sense, Fixed xD
01:04:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - monstrata plz Fixed
02:03:093 - idk why but i feel like a break should go here I think the map has enough breaks and don't need more since the first one is big enough
02:33:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - jumps plz Fixed
02:39:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - monstrata why do you keep collabing and making triangles ;-;-;-; Fixed
03:14:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ Fixed
03:24:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - difficult jumps for someone who might just now be getting to do this difficulty Fixed
03:29:605 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
03:40:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ Fixed

[Tell Me A Story]
(Better Diff Name [Dawn]) jkjk
02:03:093 - idk why but i feel like a break should go here Same as the insanel
02:17:047 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - looks a little odd Improved the jumps shape, fixed
02:28:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^ Can't see anything odd here, the jumps are not confusing and i think it fits the difficulty
02:33:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ same
02:50:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^ same
02:58:558 (7,8) - feel a little to far apart Fixed
03:35:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - looks a little odd same
(not the best at modding high sr difficulties)

Thx for the mod :D fixes done
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Screwdrivers
40 posts
Joined December 2013
Screwdrivers
awesome mapset dude

Tell Me A Story:

Sliders like 01:07:279 (1) look pretty bad and out of place (to me), but otherwise this diff seems great

Insane:

00:42:163 (1) - i think it'd play better if this slider ended on the red tick
00:43:384 (5) - maybe space this more to look better
02:12:337 (5,6,7) - a reverse slider would be more fitting

Hard:

00:43:035 (2,3,4) - I think a reverse slider should be here too
00:53:849 (2,3) - aaaaa these look so ugly, maybe ctrl+h (2) and move (3) so that they're not touching
00:59:954 (3) - though im not a big fan of this pattern overall, i think ctrl+j on this slider would make it look better if u keep it
03:42:163 (1,2,3,4) - just wanted to say that I really like this

im actually really glad someone mapped the full version of this song, have some stars <3
TeeJoe
41 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
TeeJoe

Screwdrivers wrote:

SPOILER
awesome mapset dude

Tell Me A Story:

Sliders like 01:07:279 (1) look pretty bad and out of place (to me), but otherwise this diff seems great For some reason I agree with that XD, I reshaped all of them

Insane:

00:42:163 (1) - i think it'd play better if this slider ended on the red tick Fixed
00:43:384 (5) - maybe space this more to look better I don't think so, since the song gets more calm right before the chorus, so making it more spaced wouldn't fit imo
02:12:337 (5,6,7) - a reverse slider would be more fitting Fixed

Hard:

00:43:035 (2,3,4) - I think a reverse slider should be here too Fixed
00:53:849 (2,3) - aaaaa these look so ugly, maybe ctrl+h (2) and move (3) so that they're not touching Fixed
00:59:954 (3) - though im not a big fan of this pattern overall, i think ctrl+j on this slider would make it look better if u keep it Fixed, remade all the sliders on that part
03:42:163 (1,2,3,4) - just wanted to say that I really like this :D

im actually really glad someone mapped the full version of this song, have some stars <3
Thank you so so much for the mod and for the stars :D I really appreciate that and that helps me a lot
MouseEasy
1,391 posts
Joined April 2012
MouseEasy
mod mais estético mesmo, a jogabilidade ta massa

Tell Me A Story

00:23:675 (8) - Alinha o começo desse slider com o começo desse outro 00:22:628 (1) -
00:35:535 (2) - Coloca em cima dessa 00:34:401 (4) -
00:34:837 (8,1) - faz blanketzinho
00:35:884 (4,5,6) - Troca esse triple de lugar e tempo, poe ele no lugar dessa nota 00:35:709 (3) - Exemplo1 Exemplo2
01:07:279 (1,2) - levanta um pouco mais essa nota 01:07:803 (2) -, ela ficou em cima do slider. Exemplo
01:58:384 (4) - move pra baixo, deixa assim
01:58:907 (1,2,3) - podia deixar esse slider alinhado com essa nota 01:59:779 (3) - , e fazer essa nota 01:59:779 (3) - com um blanket no sliderzão 01:58:907 (1) - Exemplo
02:00:303 (1,1) - Pode pegar essa nota e slider e jogar um pouco pra baixo, fazendo um ) junto com esse slider 01:59:954 (4) - Exemplo
02:01:175 (2) - Depois talvez um blanket com essa nota (não é necessario)
TeeJoe
41 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
TeeJoe

MouseEasy wrote:

SPOILER
mod mais estético mesmo, a jogabilidade ta massa

Tell Me A Story

00:23:675 (8) - Alinha o começo desse slider com o começo desse outro 00:22:628 (1) -
00:35:535 (2) - Coloca em cima dessa 00:34:401 (4) -
00:34:837 (8,1) - faz blanketzinho
00:35:884 (4,5,6) - Troca esse triple de lugar e tempo, poe ele no lugar dessa nota 00:35:709 (3) - Exemplo1 Exemplo2
01:07:279 (1,2) - levanta um pouco mais essa nota 01:07:803 (2) -, ela ficou em cima do slider. Exemplo
01:58:384 (4) - move pra baixo, deixa assim
01:58:907 (1,2,3) - podia deixar esse slider alinhado com essa nota 01:59:779 (3) - , e fazer essa nota 01:59:779 (3) - com um blanket no sliderzão 01:58:907 (1) - Exemplo
02:00:303 (1,1) - Pode pegar essa nota e slider e jogar um pouco pra baixo, fazendo um ) junto com esse slider 01:59:954 (4) - Exemplo
02:01:175 (2) - Depois talvez um blanket com essa nota (não é necessario)
Velho valeu pelo mod :D fez eu reparar em varios bagulho q eu n tinha percebido antes
Seolv
847 posts
Joined March 2016
Seolv
hello
my mod ^^

Easy
00:21:930 (2) - Not very comfortable position for new players tbh.
00:24:023 (3) - Try moving it little bit to the right and downwards
00:25:419 (5) - Overlaps are very confusing for new players. Try to avoid those.
00:29:605 (5) - Overlap.
00:32:744 (2) - Overlap
00:35:186 (1) - Try moving it little bit downwards it feels very weird.
00:39:372 (2) - Overlap.
00:40:768 (4) - ^
00:40:768 (4) - Why spinner there? Delete spinner and instead put some sliders and circles.
00:58:558 (5) - Overlap.
01:18:442 (1) - This removes constant beat in the song which is made out of circles and sliders. With this long slider it feels weird because there isn't any change in the beat. Fix that.
00:55:419 (2) - Object's end is off screen.
03:24:023 (1) - Overlap.

Normal
00:21:233 (1,2,3,4) - Weird flow. Instead put two sliders.
00:24:023 (1) - Change of direction isn't comfortable in Easy and Normal. Keep the flow same direction the slider is pointing at. At least try to.
00:26:116 (2,1) - There it is again.
00:32:396 (1,2,1) - This spacing is different from previous few sliders. Try using DS.
00:35:535 (1,2) - Too big pause between beats.
In this diff beat isn't constant and there are lots of pauses between the two beats.
00:40:768 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This is an example of what I said above.
00:45:651 (2,3,4) - Kinda looks like stream. Change that.
00:47:744 (1,2,3,4) - Another example.
00:58:209 (2,3,4) - Looks like little stream again. Fix.
It's basically like that whole map. Non constant beat than notes sticked together like streams.
01:07:279 (1,2,1,2,3) - Again with bigger pauses.
Try getting a GD for this diff.
03:03:093 (1,2) - Bad flow.
03:04:489 (1) - Bad flow.

Hard
00:22:977 (3) - No, too big spacing. Put on Distance Snap.
I won't even say how bad this diff is tbh but even I was like that long ago :D
00:45:826 (4) - Overlap.
00:46:000 (5,1) - Uncomfortable flow again.
Basically try watching this and it will help you a lot

Insane
00:24:023 (1) - Uncomfortable flow.
00:25:244 (8) - Try moving it somewhere else making a jump instead.
00:32:919 (4,5,6,7,8) - Diffs with random jumps are hardly getting ranked. Please consider that :3
Everything else seems fin but the jumps. Try and turn on Distance Snap while making them.

Tell me a story
This whole diff seems a bit messy and the jumps are pretty random too. As I said in your Insane please try to keep your jumps and your diffs neater. Thanks and good luck.
TeeJoe
41 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
TeeJoe

[ L u k a s ] wrote:

SPOILER
hello
my mod ^^

Easy
00:21:930 (2) - Not very comfortable position for new players tbh.
00:24:023 (3) - Try moving it little bit to the right and downwards
00:25:419 (5) - Overlaps are very confusing for new players. Try to avoid those.
00:29:605 (5) - Overlap.
00:32:744 (2) - Overlap
00:35:186 (1) - Try moving it little bit downwards it feels very weird.
00:39:372 (2) - Overlap.
00:40:768 (4) - ^
00:40:768 (4) - Why spinner there? Delete spinner and instead put some sliders and circles.
00:58:558 (5) - Overlap.
01:18:442 (1) - This removes constant beat in the song which is made out of circles and sliders. With this long slider it feels weird because there isn't any change in the beat. Fix that.
00:55:419 (2) - Object's end is off screen.
03:24:023 (1) - Overlap.

Normal
00:21:233 (1,2,3,4) - Weird flow. Instead put two sliders.
00:24:023 (1) - Change of direction isn't comfortable in Easy and Normal. Keep the flow same direction the slider is pointing at. At least try to.
00:26:116 (2,1) - There it is again.
00:32:396 (1,2,1) - This spacing is different from previous few sliders. Try using DS.
00:35:535 (1,2) - Too big pause between beats.
In this diff beat isn't constant and there are lots of pauses between the two beats.
00:40:768 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This is an example of what I said above.
00:45:651 (2,3,4) - Kinda looks like stream. Change that.
00:47:744 (1,2,3,4) - Another example.
00:58:209 (2,3,4) - Looks like little stream again. Fix.
It's basically like that whole map. Non constant beat than notes sticked together like streams.
01:07:279 (1,2,1,2,3) - Again with bigger pauses.
Try getting a GD for this diff.
03:03:093 (1,2) - Bad flow.
03:04:489 (1) - Bad flow.

Hard
00:22:977 (3) - No, too big spacing. Put on Distance Snap.
I won't even say how bad this diff is tbh but even I was like that long ago :D
00:45:826 (4) - Overlap.
00:46:000 (5,1) - Uncomfortable flow again.
Basically try watching this and it will help you a lot

Insane
00:24:023 (1) - Uncomfortable flow.
00:25:244 (8) - Try moving it somewhere else making a jump instead.
00:32:919 (4,5,6,7,8) - Diffs with random jumps are hardly getting ranked. Please consider that :3
Everything else seems fin but the jumps. Try and turn on Distance Snap while making them.

Tell me a story
This whole diff seems a bit messy and the jumps are pretty random too. As I said in your Insane please try to keep your jumps and your diffs neater. Thanks and good luck.
Fun fact: I never turn off distance snap while mapping.
A little advice for you, just mod what you know about.
Btw, that normal mod was the only useful part of your 'whole' mod. Thanks for that anyway, it was kinda helpful since I haven't tried to map none so far.

I wont reply anything related to this, so don't even waste your time
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