From my queue~
General
-For future reference I think you should use a faster slider velocity. The sliders are really short and it doesn't look as nice as it could be (especially for Normal). Also, try different slider shapes other than Vs, curves, and straights. I think waves would make a nice addition for this song.
Normal
-Some of the NCs look pretty disconnected (flow-wise) from the previous combos.
00:08:721 (3,1,2,3) - I think this would look nicer if you blanket the slider around 1
00:21:701 (1,2,1) - good spot for blanket
00:27:759 (4,1) - curve slider down so that it flows better into 1
00:30:644 (1,2) - make a copy of 1 then flip/rotate it
00:31:509 (2,3,4) - watch DS, turn off grid snap (I recommend not using grid snap unless you need perfect symmetry and DS wont be noticeable)
00:34:394 (1,2) - flow doesn’t look good
01:12:471 (2,1,2) - try eliminate overlap
01:20:548 (2,3) - I think it would look better if you curve the slider less so that it flows better
01:21:125 (3,1,2) - I think it would flow better if you move the circles down more
Hard
00:00:932 (4) - I think this would look better if you moved it to the right and curved up more
00:03:528 (2,3) - blanket
00:08:432 (2,3) - improve blanket
00:09:586 (1) - how about making the slider face the opposite direction?
00:15:932 (4) - you can also blanket the spinner
00:20:259 (2,3) - improve blanket
00:22:567 (7,1) - I think this jump is too big
00:33:528 (1,2) - blanket
00:55:740 (1,3) - I think you should use the 1/4 beat pattern for both of these
Hope this helps, good luck!
General
-For future reference I think you should use a faster slider velocity. The sliders are really short and it doesn't look as nice as it could be (especially for Normal). Also, try different slider shapes other than Vs, curves, and straights. I think waves would make a nice addition for this song.
Normal
-Some of the NCs look pretty disconnected (flow-wise) from the previous combos.
00:08:721 (3,1,2,3) - I think this would look nicer if you blanket the slider around 1
00:21:701 (1,2,1) - good spot for blanket
00:27:759 (4,1) - curve slider down so that it flows better into 1
00:30:644 (1,2) - make a copy of 1 then flip/rotate it
00:31:509 (2,3,4) - watch DS, turn off grid snap (I recommend not using grid snap unless you need perfect symmetry and DS wont be noticeable)
00:34:394 (1,2) - flow doesn’t look good
01:12:471 (2,1,2) - try eliminate overlap
01:20:548 (2,3) - I think it would look better if you curve the slider less so that it flows better
01:21:125 (3,1,2) - I think it would flow better if you move the circles down more
Hard
00:00:932 (4) - I think this would look better if you moved it to the right and curved up more
00:03:528 (2,3) - blanket
00:08:432 (2,3) - improve blanket
00:09:586 (1) - how about making the slider face the opposite direction?
00:15:932 (4) - you can also blanket the spinner
00:20:259 (2,3) - improve blanket
00:22:567 (7,1) - I think this jump is too big
00:33:528 (1,2) - blanket
00:55:740 (1,3) - I think you should use the 1/4 beat pattern for both of these
Hope this helps, good luck!