ginkiha - Borealis [Osu|Taiko] · forum

KASUM1

336 posts

Joined December 2013

KASUM1 2015-09-05T04:41:28+00:00

rip~!

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Ksardas

272 posts

Joined March 2015

Ksardas 2015-10-25T10:43:42+00:00

ᕕ( ˘ ³˘)ᕗ

Tenseki

803 posts

Joined November 2013

Tenseki 2015-12-21T14:01:39+00:00

wake up Aka

Fookiz

157 posts

Joined June 2014

Fookiz 2016-01-15T20:55:34+00:00

go

Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Log Off Now 2016-04-16T04:29:16+00:00

ITS BACK

Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Aka 2016-06-13T03:59:40+00:00

its indeed back, normal and easy diffs left but i don't feel like making them lol. need help

edit: decided :3

hyouri

390 posts

Joined June 2012

hyouri 2016-06-18T20:24:38+00:00

hi from modreqs

[General]

normal-sliderslide.wav
soft-sliderslide.wav
soft-sliderslide99.wav

All these are 0.32ms length, which is unrankable, if they have sound they must be at least 100ms long. If you want them silent they have to be silent 44byte hitsound. I'm giving you one here in the link, change it to the name of the *-sliderslide*.wav files that you should replace.
http://puu.sh/pxtU2/7cac7fe387.rar

~~iyasine_sk's Extreme~~[Oxy's]

Turn on Epilepsy warning.
00:19:289 (9) - NC
00:21:738 (7) - NC
00:36:126 (3) - NC
00:36:126 (3) - I think you should stack the because it's very confusing to play as this is very similar to the rest of the streams. Space it more or stack it, don't make it look like a stream bait

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Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Aka 2016-06-18T22:29:51+00:00

changed the hitsound files, thanks

i think you meant Oxy's diff, not iyasine & caren's :'D

hyouri

390 posts

Joined June 2012

hyouri 2016-06-18T22:39:54+00:00

yeah that was mistake -_

Grrum

886 posts

Joined November 2011

Grrum 2016-06-19T19:10:00+00:00

Hi. Here for M4M from your queue. Hope this helps!

Bakari's Easy

00:26:942 (1,3) – The distance between these is really close and doesn't look great. Can you make the DS 1.2 between these?

ryuu's Normal

00:00:004 (1) - and stacking 00:01:228 (1,2) – don't play well together imo. By starting with a slider, you're acknowledging ½ rhythm a lot, which makes the stack be easily read as ½ rhythm since there isn't an indication in the music to slow down. I think making 00:00:004 (1) – a circle feels nice since it gives a smoother introduction of the song to the player and lets 00:02:452 (1) – etc have more of the spotlight in the opening to the song. If you do make this change, make 00:04:901 (1) – a circle too.

00:08:269 (3,4) – Dont stack these to stay consistent with 00:03:371 (3,1) – (suggestion, make a triangle: http://puu.sh/pyrRF/196b2640a4.jpg)

00:27:861 (2,3) – This looks bad because it's not stacked right. Do +4y on (3)

00:29:391 (1,1) – I'm kind of worried about your DS being read incorrectly. Consider something like this http://puu.sh/pys62/9c10c43fb1.jpg

00:33:218 (1) – Consider switching to the harmony here for a less confusing rhythm (which stays consistent with the rhythm at 00:35:514 (1,2,3) - ): http://puu.sh/pysw3/a647301c98.jpg
00:38:116 (1) -

00:40:412 (1,2,3) – I didn't like this as much as 00:35:514 (1,2,3) - , so try using that rhythm instead to stay consistent.

00:41:636 (1) – Consider this: http://puu.sh/pysIn/7ac44ccdc9.jpg

00:45:463 (2) – This slider is inconsistent with how you've been mapping it previously in that you go with a completely different track of the song. Please stick to emphasizing the sharp note at 00:45:310 (1) – like you did at 00:35:514 (1,2,3) -

00:50:208 – The melody starts here doesn't it? It feels strange not to start this combo here.

00:56:330 (1,2) – stack up instead of down for better readability: http://puu.sh/pyt1Z/5928dcb51c.jpg

01:37:350 (4) – The piano gets pretty funky here (in that the pitch scales lower instead of scaling higher), so I think a cool slider art would look nice (you don't need to repeat the pattern since the sound doesn't repeat), like maybe: http://puu.sh/pytd4/43502fa0ea.jpg

Celsius's Hard

00:00:004 (1) – More of a personal thing than a rankability issue, but I like using long sliders and going with the violin to make this section calm. This would make the pacing nicer imo since 00:09:187 (4) – would start to raise the intensity nicely into the different section of music where the drums kick in.

00:45:310 (1,2) – Delete (2) make (1) a 1/1 slider since you're going with the melody in the combo before?

00:59:238 (2) – circle?

Insane

00:33:371 (1,2) – DS might be a little big, blanketing 00:32:912 (6,1) – might help

00:39:034 (6,2) – Can these be a little farther apart? They look too cramped

00:42:248 (4,5,1) – and 00:42:708 (1,2,3) – These patterns have the same flow, but the music is pretty different on each of these patterns (in that 00:43:167 (2) – is significantly higher pitched), so I strongly recommend not using repetition here. Especially since 00:41:942 (2,3,4) – has a somewhat similar feel, I really suggest exploring a different pattern to use at 00:42:708 (1,2,3) –

00:55:412 (7,8) – The DS felt a little small to me because slider leniency. By angling up 00:55:106 (5,6,7) - , you give yourself room to have 1.40 spacing between 00:55:412 (7,8) – like so: http://puu.sh/pywDj/5241b05d59.jpg

01:24:493 (5,6) – Consider a less aggressive drop off flow? http://puu.sh/pyxZN/b18fba9390.jpg

01:39:493 (9,1) – I think this should have bigger spacing relative to the other spacing in the combo like at 01:39:799 (2,3) - . By jumping into (1), you better distinguish 01:39:646 (1,2,3,4,5) – as a different group of notes, and the increase in base spacing is more clear and agreeable to the player. I don't want to make this pattern too intense, so you can decrease the spacing at 01:39:799 (2,3) – to ~1.5 or so. By using a polygon cirlce (since I think it could be structure nicer), I got something like this: http://puu.sh/pyxih/88c11372cb.jpg

01:40:106 (4) - missing hitsound?
01:43:779 (2) - ^
01:45:004 (6) - ^

01:48:983 (4) – NC?

Pretty fun, well structured map with nice patterns. Not much more to ask for.

Seitaku's Insane

00:00:004 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – imo, the last two beats in this measure are stronger than the first two beats in this section, so I'd like to see the jumps be into (5) and (6). The same is especially true for 00:01:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:28:779 (5) – Similarly, there's places like this where I think you under-emphasize the strong note here. I'd like to see a jump into some of these stronger notes, but I will try not to mention it anymore since I think we disagree on this. Msg me if you want more suggestions like this.

00:03:677 (1,2) – With slider leniency, this DS is very small. Consider not blanketing and instead increasing the DS.

00:10:106 (2) – Consider finding a custom hitwhistle that goes better with the song.

00:22:963 (5,4) – Stack (4) around (5)'s tail so that the DS emphasizes 00:23:881 (5) – more

00:28:473 (3,6) – This overlap doesn't look great because (2) fades too soon to recognize the symmetry of your overlap.

00:33:218 (2) – This felt weird to play. I'm not sure that I would use exactly .60x spacing on (2,3,4), but regardless, I can see the effect you're going for. I think this works a lot better if you introduce it with a jump of 2.50x like: http://puu.sh/pyvSw/3e1946bf14.jpg. This will clue the player in to approaching this pattern differently which will make the drop in spacing at (2,3,4) more clear and agreeable. Also, 2.50x is consistent with 00:33:677 (5,6) - .

00:35:361 (6,1) – and 00:40:259 (6,1) – consider emphasizing these notes consistently in DS.

01:39:646 (4,5,6,7) – The previous notes have been building tension, and I feel like here is where the payoff comes in the music where it releases that tension with the pitch change on (4), so consider scaling this pattern up (by 1.7 as seen in the following) and give it a jump like maybe: http://puu.sh/pyveZ/2c6cb2aaed.jpg

Good luck!

SeaRasp

693 posts

Joined August 2014

SeaRasp 2016-06-19T19:49:51+00:00

Hi, M4M from your queue

Oxy

00:04:289 (3,4,5,6) - Shouldn'd the spacing be the other way around, from larger to smaller sense the pitch is getting higher ?
00:08:575 (1,2) - The spacing here should be bigger than here 00:08:881 (3,4) - Cause it's higher pitched.
00:11:330 (4,5) - Random huge spacing ?
00:27:248 (2,3) - ^
00:36:126 (1,2,3,4) - Now this, I thought was a stream when I played the map xD maybe at least you should NC to indicate that it isn't.
01:12:248 (1) - Is there a reason to change the SV here ? and the other sliders like that

Well that's all I can find here, really nice diff, very clean

caren_sk & iyasine

00:03:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Don't understand the spacing, I think you should start with a bigger spacing and then slowly making it smaller to match the pitch that is getting lower.
If you don't change it why not make this a perfect hexogon 00:03:371 (5,2,3,4,5,6) - would look better.
01:07:657 (2,4,6) - I would make this a pefect triangle
01:37:044 (1,2,3) - Larger spacing when lower pitch ?

Expert

00:31:534 (5,6,7,8) - Would look nicer if you made them all parallel or something, they look messy
01:30:310 (5,6,7,8) - ^
00:52:963 (1,1) - Why stack them here and not 00:51:432 (1,1) - ?
00:59:544 (4,5) - Unstack these they are both pretty strong notes so they should be emphasized
01:04:289 (4,5) - ^
00:55:871 (6) - Make this circle a kickslider to cover the blue tick note I think it's pretty important
01:00:769 (6) - ^ ... and others, I mean you covered it sometimes like 00:53:269 (1,1,1) - so why not do it to all ?
01:31:534 (5,6,7,8,1) - Make this curve a bit better pls it looks like (7) is sticking out
01:37:350 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Make this stream look more like a wave slider by making the curves a bit bigger, it's a bit too straight
01:50:207 (1) - NC for the finish

Ok I think that's it for me, I'm not the best modder but I hope it helped a bit !
Good Luck ..

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 2016-06-20T07:07:12+00:00

Hi ~ M4M Request

[general]
- when i checked on Osu folder i found "SB" folder ~,hmm did you want to make SB here? if you not ~ remove the SB folder and turn off widescreen support for all diff ~

[Easy]
00:25:718 (3,1) - overlap?
00:28:779 (2) - finish?
00:43:779 (4) - move to x:0 y:272 *for better placement
00:49:901 (2) - move to x:56 y:148 *^ same reason
01:40:106 (2) - move to x:288 y:28 *^

[Normal]
00:27:861 (2,3) - imperfect stack
00:28:779 (3) - finish
00:51:432 (1,3) - overlap
01:43:473 (1,2) - unstack

[Hard]
Kiai time?
00:15:769 - circle?
00:28:779 (3) - finish?
00:33:983 (3) - move to (420,160) for better flow
01:24:799 (2,1) - overlap
01:35:361 (4) - remove clap

[Hyper]
00:28:167 (6) - NC?
00:28:779 (8) - finish?
00:32:912 (5,7) - too close
00:35:820 (1,3) - ^
00:52:657 (7) - NC?
01:20:514 (4,1) - too close
01:31:840 (6) - NC?
01:37:963 (1) - why repeat slider? *its looks boring ~

[Insane]
00:13:167 (4) - ctrl j?
00:39:034 (6,2) - overlap
00:56:024 (9) - move the slider at 00:55:947 for better rhythm and same as 00:53:269 (6,7)
01:05:820 (4) - ^
01:41:024 (3,4) - imperfect stack

[Sekaitsu's insane]
Kiai time?
00:38:422 (2) - move to (128,56) for better placement

[Another]
00:02:606 (2) - i think 1/2 repeat slider is better ~
01:10:412 (1,2,3) - ctrl h?

Nice diff ~

Thats it ~ and GL ~
Take my star ~
and sorry for short mod and also my terrible english ;w;

Last edited by -NanoRIPE- 2016-06-20T07:08:24+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2016-06-20T07:07:21+00:00

pinataman

[ryuu's Normal]
00:00:004 (1) - and stacking 00:01:228 (1,2) – don't play well together imo. By starting with a slider, you're acknowledging ½ rhythm a lot, which makes the stack be easily read as ½ rhythm since there isn't an indication in the music to slow down. I think making 00:00:004 (1) – a circle feels nice since it gives a smoother introduction of the song to the player and lets 00:02:452 (1) – etc have more of the spotlight in the opening to the song. If you do make this change, make 00:04:901 (1) – a circle too. okay

00:08:269 (3,4) – Dont stack these to stay consistent with 00:03:371 (3,1) – (suggestion, make a triangle: http://puu.sh/pyrRF/196b2640a4.jpg) okay

00:27:861 (2,3) – This looks bad because it's not stacked right. Do +4y on (3) okay

00:29:391 (1,1) – I'm kind of worried about your DS being read incorrectly. Consider something like this http://puu.sh/pys62/9c10c43fb1.jpg i feel sad when i make it with ds

00:33:218 (1) – Consider switching to the harmony here for a less confusing rhythm (which stays consistent with the rhythm at 00:35:514 (1,2,3) - ): http://puu.sh/pysw3/a647301c98.jpg okay
00:38:116 (1) - okay

00:40:412 (1,2,3) – I didn't like this as much as 00:35:514 (1,2,3) - , so try using that rhythm instead to stay consistent.okay

00:41:636 (1) – Consider this: http://puu.sh/pysIn/7ac44ccdc9.jpg too much 1/2 sliders o:

00:45:463 (2) – This slider is inconsistent with how you've been mapping it previously in that you go with a completely different track of the song. Please stick to emphasizing the sharp note at 00:45:310 (1) – like you did at 00:35:514 (1,2,3) - there is different rhythm o:

00:50:208 – The melody starts here doesn't it? It feels strange not to start this combo here. okay

00:56:330 (1,2) – stack up instead of down for better readability: http://puu.sh/pyt1Z/5928dcb51c.jpg okay

01:37:350 (4) – The piano gets pretty funky here (in that the pitch scales lower instead of scaling higher), so I think a cool slider art would look nice (you don't need to repeat the pattern since the sound doesn't repeat), like maybe: http://puu.sh/pytd4/43502fa0ea.jpg okay!

thank u! very helpful
http://puu.sh/pzaQb/52efd22713.rar

-Kanzaki

889 posts

Joined June 2012

-Kanzaki 2016-06-20T14:20:44+00:00

hello from m4m queue

Oxy's master :

01:34:289 (1,2) - 01:35:820 (2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Considering this is as the hardest difficulty on the mapset these 1/3 parts are made with sliders and they are easy to play when compared with other extreme diffs. Others mapped with more circles almost full of circles. Even though your sliders are high spaced but still in general full of 1/3 taps are harder than jumping.

00:01:228 (1,1,1,1) - Maybe so gimmick but in general this part has more spacing than 00:06:126 (1,1,1,1)

00:07:350 (1,2,3) - Also on these 3 i would consider higher spacing since slider velocity is high and cursor movement of the part is fast if they don't have any specific reason to be this close..

00:14:085 (3) - 00:14:238 (4) - 00:14:391 (5) - 00:14:544 (6) - Instead of the 5 stream there i putted slider kicks on these timestamps and followed piano instead i can tell you focused on drum n bass but making slider kicks also follows them too so you can follow both sounds this way.(i believe its piano) try it : http://puu.sh/pzqED/223fb82600.jpg

00:45:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - Misleading spacing between 1/2s they are closer than they should be. I can't really tell what is the reason of this spacing change in the music.

Extreme :

00:32:912 (7,1) - If you could make this stack on every stops : 00:35:514 (1,2) - 00:37:810 (6,1) - 00:38:422 (3,1) - 00:40:412 (1,2) - and more that would be awesome because when you stack on the stops you will give a better view for the player and better for reading. Also it gives a chance to player jump further after stops, anyway it seems cool too.

00:53:116 - Well i don't like you ignored this beat end the slider on here and put a circle at 00:53:192

00:53:881 (1) - 01:18:524 (2) - and there are more Shorten it by half and add reverse for not ignoring drum beat? Technically if you just reverse it it does the same job as you wanted.You hold the slider same amount of time again.

01:08:498 (5) - I can't hear what does this follows but even if it follows something it is bad for playing i would just delete it because right after the slider playing streams are not, kills your accuracy and plays bad, harder than usual streams. I only do them if they are super necessary and fitting when i map.

00:17:146 (1,2) - 00:42:708 (6,7) - Feasible blanket

You dont have a kiai time on insane diff while you have on expert btw.

I don't want to touch easier diff's i can't see anything important that it will effect the map if changed so i think they are fine

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2016-06-20T14:47:27+00:00

pinataman wrote:
Hi. Here for M4M from your queue. Hope this helps!

Celsius's Hard
00:00:004 (1) – More of a personal thing than a rankability issue, but I like using long sliders and going with the violin to make this section calm. This would make the pacing nicer imo since 00:09:187 (4) – would start to raise the intensity nicely into the different section of music where the drums kick in. personally I find the long slider sound weird for that part , the bell sound there sound much more noticeable here if i use long slider like 1/1 slider there it would make the next red tick sound weird to map something and also I don't want a small break there so lol I find my rhythm a bit more comfortable to play and can fit the calm section here

00:45:310 (1,2) – Delete (2) make (1) a 1/1 slider since you're going with the melody in the combo before? I try to use circle there becus i want to try emphasis 00:45:769 - so i make (3) clickable actually u can call some sort of variation in rhythm lol

00:59:238 (2) – circle? no I find slider a bit more consistent with 00:58:779 (1) -

Good luck!

thanks for the mods

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
[Hard]
Kiai time? :s yea lol cus I think everything part in the music sound intense and same xd
00:15:769 - circle? it make rhythm sound weird imo
00:28:779 (3) - finish? sure
00:33:983 (3) - move to (420,160) for better flow i don't think so
01:24:799 (2,1) - overlap i think it's fine , I don't think it really affect the gameplay much here
01:35:361 (4) - remove clap no , it sound good there for me

thanks for the mods

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osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: y9fwwxajxMsr.128.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 70947
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 19595,31840,41636,51432,61228,66126
DistanceSpacing: 0.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:Borealis
TitleUnicode:Borealis
Artist:ginkiha
ArtistUnicode:ginkiha
Creator:Aka
Version:Celsius' Hard
Source:SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags:ryuu Bakari BluOxy OzzyOzrock CelsiusLK seikatu iyasine caren_sk jomnhnk wendao2000 harez toybot
BeatmapID:759194
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.7
SliderMultiplier:1.42
SliderTickRate:2

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Nyan

1,455 posts

Joined September 2008

Nyan 2016-06-21T10:32:25+00:00

[Muzukashii]
00:29:391 (108) - (minor priority)replace with spinner or slider
01:40:412 (201) - add Finish
01:47:759 (239) - (minor priority) ddd ddd ddd ddd slide

[Oni]
00:23:116 - add a kat
00:29:391 (143) - (minor priority)replace with spinner or slider
01:47:758 (134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145) - (minor priority)replace with harder pattern

wendao

1,638 posts

Joined August 2012

wendao 2016-06-21T11:21:15+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
[Hyper]
00:28:167 (6) - NC? redo NC to whole diff, some fixed
00:28:779 (8) - finish? k
00:32:912 (5,7) - too close not very problematic, unless it's overlapped
00:35:820 (1,3) - ^ ^
00:52:657 (7) - NC? ^
01:20:514 (4,1) - too close ^
01:31:840 (6) - NC? ^
01:37:963 (1) - why repeat slider? *its looks boring ~ intentional, might change, depend on the situation

~~http://puu.sh/pAx2G.zip~~ (check below)

thanks

Last edited by wendao 2016-06-22T01:38:10+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Chihara Minori

1,235 posts

Joined December 2013

Chihara Minori 2016-06-21T13:51:44+00:00

Dancing Map \.w./

Normal

Normal:
• 00:08:575 (4) - dont overlap this, its not feel same with 00:06:432 (2) - and before
• 00:50:820 (2) - this prolly the one you looking for, and yeah its feel better http://puu.sh/pACut/b9bd265389.jpg
• 00:56:330 (1) - dont overlap
• 01:10:718 (2) - dont overlap this, this is a new start
• 01:24:187 (4) - hmm, the last pattern not stacked so do same for this one
• 01:47:759 (1) - perfect this blanket

Hard

Hard:
• 00:18:983 (3) - increase the curve
• 00:53:575 (3) - straight is fine imo, just incrrease the (4)
• 00:58:779 (1,2) - i feel something lost from this, so i prefer this rhytm http://puu.sh/pACQ5/e553f1a2d4.jpg. yes do same thing like (3,4), stack the (2) at start of (3)
• 01:07:657 (2) - blanket
• 01:14:391 (5) - light down curve is fine
• 01:15:922 (1) - the only angle slider i see on this map w
• 01:22:657 (4) - add light down curve slider
• 01:44:697 (3) - too much imo

Hyper

Hyper:
• 00:24:493 (1) - move it down a bit so it fully overlap end of last slider
• 00:28:167 (6) -NC
• 00:36:432 (4) - ctrl+g
• 00:42:401 (4,5) - ^, the square pattern not fit at that point
• 00:52:657 (7) - NC
• 01:09:799 - missing note
• 01:31:840 (6) - NC
• 01:37:963 (1) - nice slider .w.

Insane

Insane:
• 00:24:493 (1) - perfect the blanket
• 00:32:912 (6) - blanket
• 00:38:422 (6) - ^ slightt
• 00:39:799 (3,4) - switch place
• 00:47:606 (1) - slight blanket
• 00:51:126 (6) - stack instead
• 00:59:850 (6) - stack with (7) instead
• 01:37:044 (6,7) - switch place, it will increase step jump (3,4,5,6) better
• 01:41:177 (3,4) - not flow well with the song, maybe (4) to end of (2) slider

Icant do higher diffs /;w;\ *cry at corner*
There's my mod, good luck

wendao

1,638 posts

Joined August 2012

wendao 2016-06-22T01:37:33+00:00

eclipselotus wrote:
Hyper:
• 00:24:493 (1) - move it down a bit so it fully overlap end of last slider okie
• 00:28:167 (6) -NC fixed on previous mod
• 00:36:432 (4) - ctrl+g uhh no
• 00:42:401 (4,5) - ^, the square pattern not fit at that point do you have a better idea? coz' I don't think it's not that not fit at all
• 00:52:657 (7) - NC fixed on previous mod
• 01:09:799 - missing note nope, I followed the drum beat (or is it)
• 01:31:840 (6) - NC fixed on previous mod
• 01:37:963 (1) - nice slider .w. some say yes, and some say no

http://puu.sh/pBkJE.zip

Aka

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Topic Starter

Aka 2016-06-23T07:14:07+00:00

pinataman

pinataman wrote:
00:33:371 (1,2) – DS might be a little big, blanketing 00:32:912 (6,1) – might help k

00:39:034 (6,2) – Can these be a little farther apart? They look too cramped 00:39:034 (6) - has dissapeared at the moment when 00:39:493 (2) - appears, imo its pretty minor

00:42:248 (4,5,1) – and 00:42:708 (1,2,3) – These patterns have the same flow, but the music is pretty different on each of these patterns (in that 00:43:167 (2) – is significantly higher pitched), so I strongly recommend not using repetition here. Especially since 00:41:942 (2,3,4) – has a somewhat similar feel, I really suggest exploring a different pattern to use at 00:42:708 (1,2,3) – i like the flow here though i somehow get what you mean, any suggestions?

00:55:412 (7,8) – The DS felt a little small to me because slider leniency. By angling up 00:55:106 (5,6,7) - , you give yourself room to have 1.40 spacing between 00:55:412 (7,8) – like so: http://puu.sh/pywDj/5241b05d59.jpg tried to replicate

01:24:493 (5,6) – Consider a less aggressive drop off flow? http://puu.sh/pyxZN/b18fba9390.jpg naah, its supposed to cramped and 01:23:881 (3,4) - visually matching to 01:24:493 (5,6) - =v=

01:39:493 (9,1) – I think this should have bigger spacing relative to the other spacing in the combo like at 01:39:799 (2,3) - . By jumping into (1), you better distinguish 01:39:646 (1,2,3,4,5) – as a different group of notes, and the increase in base spacing is more clear and agreeable to the player. I don't want to make this pattern too intense, so you can decrease the spacing at 01:39:799 (2,3) – to ~1.5 or so. By using a polygon cirlce (since I think it could be structure nicer), I got something like this: http://puu.sh/pyxih/88c11372cb.jpg tried to change it a bit

01:40:106 (4) - missing hitsound?
01:43:779 (2) - ^
01:45:004 (6) - ^

01:48:983 (4) – NC?
all above done

Pretty fun, well structured map with nice patterns. Not much more to ask for. thank you

-NanoRIPE-

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
[Insane]
00:13:167 (4) - ctrl j? i like this bouncing feel here o:
00:39:034 (6,2) - overlap 00:39:034 (6) - has dissapeared at the moment when 00:39:493 (2) - appears, imo its pretty minor
00:56:024 (9) - move the slider at 00:55:947 for better rhythm and same as 00:53:269 (6,7)
01:05:820 (4) - ^the piano notes here are emphasized more in this part, i don't think it's a good idea here
01:41:024 (3,4) - imperfect stack lmao

eclipselotus

eclipselotus wrote:
Insane:
• 00:24:493 (1) - perfect the blanket it's already in the middle :^(
• 00:32:912 (6) - blanket k
• 00:38:422 (6) - ^ slightt its kkkkkkkkkk
• 00:39:799 (3,4) - switch place reason? it's a pattern im using in this and another of my diffs and i think the flow is pretty nice there
• 00:47:606 (1) - slight blanket @_@
• 00:51:126 (6) - stack instead reeeasoooonnn? this place is asking for a jump imo
• 00:59:850 (6) - stack with (7) instead reeeasoooooooooon? cause i wanted this pattern to go up and 01:00:004 (7,8) - from here down, due to inotonation change
• 01:37:044 (6,7) - switch place, it will increase step jump (3,4,5,6) better new 5,6 would have an insane DS, any suggestion? D:
• 01:41:177 (3,4) - not flow well with the song, maybe (4) to end of (2) slider o, i like this! fine

-Kanzaki wrote:
You dont have a kiai time on insane diff while you have on expert btw. removed from expert diff

SeaRasp

SeaRasp wrote:
00:31:534 (5,6,7,8) - Would look nicer if you made them all parallel or something, they look messy
01:30:310 (5,6,7,8) - ^ thst's the point! D:
00:52:963 (1,1) - Why stack them here and not 00:51:432 (1,1) - ? for variety, i guess? o.o and because of lack of space 8D
00:59:544 (4,5) - Unstack these they are both pretty strong notes so they should be emphasized well, tried
01:04:289 (4,5) - ^ any suggestions on pattern?
00:55:871 (6) - Make this circle a kickslider to cover the blue tick note I think it's pretty important
01:00:769 (6) - ^ ... and others, I mean you covered it sometimes like 00:53:269 (1,1,1) - so why not do it to all ? because the piano sounds are more noticeable here, i'd like not to cover everything but only the main ones
01:31:534 (5,6,7,8,1) - Make this curve a bit better pls it looks like (7) is sticking out tried
01:37:350 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Make this stream look more like a wave slider by making the curves a bit bigger, it's a bit too straight yeah, it's a bit too straight but i think it's better to make an easy curve to prevent players from missing some notes or smth, the rhythm has changed there back to 1/4 and i'd better do something simple instead D:
01:50:207 (1) - NC for the finish i had NC here initially though removed later. still not sure about this place

thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks

Grrum

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Grrum 2016-06-23T23:45:57+00:00

pinataman wrote:
00:42:248 (4,5,1) – and 00:42:708 (1,2,3) –i like the flow here, though i somehow get what you mean, any suggestions?

Certainly. No kudosu obviously.

After reinspecting the pattern, I agree with you that the 00:42:708 (1,2,3,4) – flow is very nice, so I'll try changing the pattern before it at 00:41:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - . Notice that in my suggestions, I moved the jump into (4) instead of into (3), which I think fits the melody a little better. To achieve these patterns, you'll have to do Ctrl + H on all objects in the map at and after 00:42:708 (1) - .

Option 1

This is the option I would take. Notice that 00:41:636 (1,2,3,5) - form a structured diamond which is why the (3,4) jump is a bit big.

Option 2a:

If you go deeper like in 2b, you might be able to preserve the original NC and not have to do the Ctrl + H thing

Option 3:

00:40:718 (2,3,4,5,6,7)– Was moved upwards to make room, and the 1/1 pause allows for this. The (3,4) jump is big only to keep the 90 degree orientations for each beat, but this can be changed if this is too big for you. You're left with 00:42:708 (1) – being misplaced even after the flipping, so this would require some additional work.

The fourth option would be to keep what you have, and a fifth option would be to make your own.

Also, I'll throw this picture out there for you to reconsider 00:39:034 (6,2) -

The extra room is easy to achieve by doing a 5 degree rotation on 00:39:493 (2) - and 00:39:187 (1) - and then rotating/ adjusting 00:39:799 (3,4) – to compensate. Yeah it's minor, but sometimes these little things help.

SeaRasp

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Joined August 2014

SeaRasp 2016-06-24T20:21:14+00:00

01:04:289 (4,5) - ^ any suggestions on pattern?

Try this maybe ? : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5464631

TicClick

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TicClick 2016-06-26T10:55:25+00:00

[All difficulties]
These who have kiai section placed in the end of the map, you probably want to add a flash here 01:40:412

00:09:493 + 00:09:646 - use normal hits with soft additions

[Oxy's Master]

00:21:356 - according to music, there should be a note
00:54:187 (3,4) - why the low spacing? I suggest either reversing it or moving farther to the left
01:30:004 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - uhh... I assume you wanted soft additions, not normal ones
01:35:514 (1) - should most likely end on a brown (1/3) tick instead of a blue one

[iyasine_sk's Extreme]
caren_sk

00:07:350 (1) - why did you overstretch it? feels random
01:30:310 (1,2,3,4) - this is a pain in the ass, compared to a usual placement (re: Oxy's Master, 01:30:310 (5,6,7,8) )

iyasine

00:33:677 (4) - would remove this note to create a nice stop
00:38:575 (5) - and this one too, althought it's unlikely you'll follow my suggestion here
00:51:432 (1,2) - uhh, the spacing is kind of tricky.. makes one wanna hit the slider earlier than necessary

[Эксперт]

00:56:942 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - идк, как-то это с трудом воспринимается, возможно, стоит попробовать поэкспериментировать с уплотнением, но, скорей всего (скорей всего), дело в том, что 00:57:248 (6) - закрывает концом звук, то есть это на самом деле должно быть https://tc.s-ul.eu/9h9f38NB.png
01:02:070 (1) - аналогично ↑ (да, теперь я могу сказать точно, что это из-за закрытого звука, потому что те же 01:03:065 (1,1,1,2,1) - пробиваются на ура)
01:42:248 (1,1) - наверное, лучше опять сделать 1/2 + 1/2 + ноту (всё вплотную), чем это
01:44:697 (1,1) - ↑

[toybot's Another]
following Aka, you probably want to eliminate the kiai in the same manner she did on Expert

01:39:646 (1) - it would be better if you swapped it with 01:39:493 (2) on the timeline (slider first, note second)

[Seikatu's Insane]

00:31:764 (6) - я бы выкинул и продлил 00:31:534 (5) по причине удобства
01:11:024 (1,2) - мне https://tc.s-ul.eu/92457chI.png (с паузой после) больше нравится
01:36:942 (2,3) - будет интуитивней, если ты поменяешь их местами (слайдер → нота), тогда и 01:37:248 (4) можно будет отогнать от следующего слайдера

[Insane]

00:01:840 (7,8) - я о таком обычно никогда не говорю, но тут косо (несимметрично)
00:27:555 (3,4) - ↑ тут тоже
01:11:024 (1) - уххх, я бы его продлил на четверть, он нуждается в этом
01:30:004 - тут вряд ли нужен фонтан
01:35:514 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - возможно, 3, 4 и 7 стоит сделать такими же (с учётом дальнейших перестановок), как 01:34:595 (2), потому что на фоне очень много всего происходит, и мне кажется странным, что тут идут сплошные 1/2

[wendao's Hyper]

00:16:534 (8) - is more comfortable when reversed (you can neglect the spacing)
00:46:993 (2) - ↑
01:09:187 (2) - don't you want to extend it by 1/4, or at least place a note after?
01:31:075 (2,3,4) - it follows music worse than https://tc.s-ul.eu/70Zlf61O.png does
01:37:963 (1) - I can guess you made this due to lack of free space, but it may be troubling to follow, given that the next note is only 1/2 apart from it
01:43:396 (3) - this note is unnecessary and would sit better at 01:44:009 between two sliders

[Celsius' Hard]

00:09:799 - due to the kick you use in hitsounding, the whole difficulty sounds louder than the rest of the set; how about lowering the volume to 65%?
00:36:738 (1) / 00:37:963 (1) and so on — all these finishes don't really fit the ongoing music, why don't you change it to idontknowwhat, a soft whistle, maybe?
00:45:769 (3) - feels more intuitive if you start it on a white tick 00:45:922
00:59:391 (2) - I like it more when it's https://tc.s-ul.eu/B1KngHNO.png
01:12:248 (1) / 01:15:922 (1) — random finishes again
01:32:988 (5) - plays better if you move it to 01:32:682
01:34:289 (1,2) - please snap repeats of these to 1/3
01:37:044 (2,3) - mind increasing the spacing so that there's no confusion?

[ryuu's Normal]
как и на харде, начало, а также середина типа 00:35:514 (1,1) изобилует случайными финишами. а ещё на твоём месте я бы последовал за Акой и стёр первый киаи, а вместе с ним — и второй, который почему-то начинается в середине уже музыкально интенсивной части и имеет в центре фонтан безо всякого на то повода

00:35:973 (2,3) - я бы делал так, чтобы все нажатия попадали на сильные биты: https://tc.s-ul.eu/2t6uf6iO.png. По этой же причине 00:42:095 (2,3,4) лучше
превратить в https://tc.s-ul.eu/hnutfOF2.png
00:40:871 (2,3) / 00:46:993 (2,3,4) / 01:18:830 (2,3,4) / ↑
01:10:412 (2,3) - для меня https://tc.s-ul.eu/OCYqzhVb.png — лучшее решение

[Bakari's Easy]
и опять финиши, это вы все так мягкие свистки заменяете, что ли?

00:04:901 (4) - нк должно быть тут, а не дальше, и на 00:07:350 (2) тоже
01:11:024 (1) - на конце хлопок пропущен, но вообще говоря, странные хс, почему-то откуда-то N всплыл (свистки более или менее, но хлопки (хотя бы хлопки) я из S бы взял, как минимум из-за спама ими, который происходит на 01:25:718 (1,2,3,4,1,2) )
01:34:289 (1) - хлопок на начале лишний
01:45:310 (1,2,3,1) - и тут тоже спам, почему не использовать нормалхиты из N, которые звучат глухо, а не так резко?

вот такие дела, y'all are cuties, and, apart from a few severe rhythm (and hitsounding, too! *smirks*) mistakes, this is production-ready!

Aka

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Topic Starter

Aka 2016-06-26T13:08:33+00:00

вааааааааай, спасибище ./.

Iceskulls

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Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2016-06-26T14:51:27+00:00

eclipselotus wrote:
Hard
Hard:
• 00:18:983 (3) - increase the curve ok
• 00:53:575 (3) - straight is fine imo, just incrrease the (4) no current fit more imo
• 00:58:779 (1,2) - i feel something lost from this, so i prefer this rhytm http://puu.sh/pACQ5/e553f1a2d4.jpg. yes do same thing like (3,4), stack the (2) at start of (3) fixed on my own
• 01:07:657 (2) - blanket wh but there is no blanket
• 01:14:391 (5) - light down curve is fine i don't think so
• 01:15:922 (1) - the only angle slider i see on this map w yea why not?
• 01:22:657 (4) - add light down curve slider no
• 01:44:697 (3) - too much imo i think it's fine to play

There's my mod, good luck

TicClick wrote:
[All difficulties]
These who have kiai section placed in the end of the map, you probably want to add a flash here 01:40:412
00:09:493 + 00:09:646 - use normal hits with soft additions ok
[Celsius' Hard]
00:09:799 - due to the kick you use in hitsounding, the whole difficulty sounds louder than the rest of the set; how about lowering the volume to 65%? yea
00:36:738 (1) / 00:37:963 (1) and so on — all these finishes don't really fit the ongoing music, why don't you change it to idontknowwhat, a soft whistle, maybe? ok
00:45:769 (3) - feels more intuitive if you start it on a white tick 00:45:922 fixed
00:59:391 (2) - I like it more when it's https://tc.s-ul.eu/B1KngHNO.png changed to my own
01:12:248 (1) / 01:15:922 (1) — random finishes again ok
01:32:988 (5) - plays better if you move it to 01:32:682 yea
01:34:289 (1,2) - please snap repeats of these to 1/3 o
01:37:044 (2,3) - mind increasing the spacing so that there's no confusion? sure
y'all are cuties, and, apart from a few severe rhythm (and hitsounding, too! *smirks*) mistakes, this is production-ready!

thanks for the mods guys

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ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2016-06-26T18:32:40+00:00

-NanoRIPE-

[Normal]
00:27:861 (2,3) - imperfect stack okay
00:28:779 (3) - finish okay
00:51:432 (1,3) - overlap okay
01:43:473 (1,2) - unstack okay

eclipselotus

[Normal]
• 00:08:575 (4) - dont overlap this, its not feel same with 00:06:432 (2) - and before okay
• 00:50:820 (2) - this prolly the one you looking for, and yeah its feel better http://puu.sh/pACut/b9bd265389.jpg i like my shape ;_;
• 00:56:330 (1) - dont overlap and i want leave it as it is
• 01:10:718 (2) - dont overlap this, this is a new start 01:11:024 (1) - this is new start o:
• 01:24:187 (4) - hmm, the last pattern not stacked so do same for this one this will be hard to play
• 01:47:759 (1) - perfect this blanket okay

TicClick

[ryuu's Normal]
как и на харде, начало, а также середина типа 00:35:514 (1,1) изобилует случайными финишами. а ещё на твоём месте я бы последовал за Акой и стёр первый киаи, а вместе с ним — и второй, который почему-то начинается в середине уже музыкально интенсивной части и имеет в центре фонтан безо всякого на то повода я люблю софт-финиши. но кое-где убрала, окей. и с киайями что-то снова напутала

00:35:973 (2,3) - я бы делал так, чтобы все нажатия попадали на сильные биты: https://tc.s-ul.eu/2t6uf6iO.png. По этой же причине 00:42:095 (2,3,4) лучше превратить в https://tc.s-ul.eu/hnutfOF2.png хорошо
00:40:871 (2,3) / 00:46:993 (2,3,4) / 01:18:830 (2,3,4) / ↑ хорошо
01:10:412 (2,3) - для меня https://tc.s-ul.eu/OCYqzhVb.png — лучшее решение хорошо

thank u all!

http://puu.sh/pGRwm/a0644ea2f1.rar

Seikatu

333 posts

Joined January 2011

Seikatu 2016-06-26T21:14:42+00:00

pinataman

pinataman wrote:
00:00:004 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – imo, the last two beats in this measure are stronger than the first two beats in this section, so I'd like to see the jumps be into (5) and (6). The same is especially true for 00:01:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:28:779 (5) – Similarly, there's places like this where I think you under-emphasize the strong note here. I'd like to see a jump into some of these stronger notes, but I will try not to mention it anymore since I think we disagree on this. Msg me if you want more suggestions like this. I'd not change this now to keep map consistent, because i mapped this about a year ago or so and i don't think i can keep same style if i'll remap this part. But i think i can do it later if it will be needed.

00:03:677 (1,2) – With slider leniency, this DS is very small. Consider not blanketing and instead increasing the DS. men, it's ok

00:10:106 (2) – Consider finding a custom hitwhistle that goes better with the song. I like normal whistles

00:22:963 (5,4) – Stack (4) around (5)'s tail so that the DS emphasizes 00:23:881 (5) – more Yep, done

00:28:473 (3,6) – This overlap doesn't look great because (2) fades too soon to recognize the symmetry of your overlap. This wasn't made for overlap

00:33:218 (2) – This felt weird to play. I'm not sure that I would use exactly .60x spacing on (2,3,4), but regardless, I can see the effect you're going for. I think this works a lot better if you introduce it with a jump of 2.50x like: http://puu.sh/pyvSw/3e1946bf14.jpg. This will clue the player in to approaching this pattern differently which will make the drop in spacing at (2,3,4) more clear and agreeable. Also, 2.50x is consistent with 00:33:677 (5,6) - . Stacked note with later object, so it's 2.2 now

00:35:361 (6,1) – and 00:40:259 (6,1) – consider emphasizing these notes consistently in DS. Naa, it's ok as it is

01:39:646 (4,5,6,7) – The previous notes have been building tension, and I feel like here is where the payoff comes in the music where it releases that tension with the pitch change on (4), so consider scaling this pattern up (by 1.7 as seen in the following) and give it a jump like maybe: http://puu.sh/pyveZ/2c6cb2aaed.jpg Idea is good, but i don't feel like i need this here

-NanoRIPE-

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
[Sekaitsu's insane]
Kiai time? Yep
00:38:422 (2) - move to (128,56) for better placement moved it differently

Тик

TicClick wrote:
[Seikatu's Insane]
00:31:764 (6) - я бы выкинул и продлил 00:31:534 (5) по причине удобства Да
01:11:024 (1,2) - мне https://tc.s-ul.eu/92457chI.png (с паузой после) больше нравится В карте не так много таких конструкций (если вообще есть) так что пожалуй нет.
01:36:942 (2,3) - будет интуитивней, если ты поменяешь их местами (слайдер → нота), тогда и 01:37:248 (4) можно будет отогнать от следующего слайдера Да!

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169,286,92452,2,0,P|126:297|77:284,1,87.5,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
36,228,92682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,228,92759,2,0,L|43:139,1,87.5,2|0,1:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,74,93065,5,6,0:2:0:0:
171,66,93141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,63,93218,1,2,0:0:0:0:
214,64,93294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,70,93371,1,2,1:0:0:0:
256,78,93447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
277,82,93524,1,2,0:0:0:0:
299,78,93600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,71,93677,5,2,0:1:0:0:
344,93,93754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,121,93830,1,2,0:0:0:0:
365,153,93907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
362,185,93983,1,2,1:2:0:0:
351,216,94060,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,242,94136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
305,262,94213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
273,270,94289,6,0,L|212:277,2,58.3333333333333,2|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,327,94595,2,0,L|400:334,2,58.3333333333333,2|0|0,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,357,94901,2,0,L|124:372,2,131.25,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
339,327,95514,6,0,P|351:292|367:269,1,58.3333333333333,6|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,217,95718,1,2,0:0:0:0:
429,217,95820,2,0,L|489:223,2,58.3333333333333,2|0|2,1:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,193,96126,1,2,0:1:0:0:
328,168,96228,1,0,0:0:0:0:
321,139,96330,1,2,0:0:0:0:
323,109,96432,2,0,P|329:83|347:53,2,58.3333333333333,0|0|2,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,148,96738,6,0,P|217:157|188:158,1,58.3333333333333,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,132,96942,1,2,0:0:0:0:
66,210,97044,2,0,P|69:246|82:275,1,58.3333333333333,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,327,97248,1,2,0:0:0:0:
225,316,97350,2,0,P|247:316|269:313,3,43.75,0|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,321,97657,2,0,P|308:311|327:299,3,43.75,2|0|0|0,1:1|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,298,97963,5,4,0:2:0:0:
403,178,98116,1,2,0:0:0:0:
273,192,98269,1,2,1:0:0:0:
412,256,98422,1,6,0:2:0:0:
400,103,98575,1,2,0:1:0:0:
356,97,98728,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,91,98881,1,6,1:2:0:0:
268,85,99034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,146,99187,5,6,0:2:0:0:
251,237,99340,1,2,0:0:0:0:
223,154,99493,1,0,1:0:0:0:
91,231,99646,1,6,0:0:0:0:
99,273,99799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,315,99952,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,358,100106,1,6,1:2:0:0:
239,312,100259,1,0,1:0:0:0:
362,357,100412,6,0,P|407:361|453:340,1,87.5,4|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,280,100718,1,2,1:0:0:0:
373,200,100871,1,2,0:0:0:0:
265,274,101024,2,0,P|218:285|171:274,1,87.5,2|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,231,101330,1,2,1:2:0:0:
220,177,101483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,159,101560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,139,101636,6,0,P|250:97|243:52,1,87.5,2|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,185,101942,2,0,P|321:226|346:264,1,87.5,0|2,1:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
426,298,102248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,190,102401,1,2,0:0:0:0:
305,330,102555,2,0,L|217:324,1,87.5,2|0,1:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,231,102861,6,0,B|140:227|140:227|196:240|196:240|255:235,1,157.499995193482,6|2,0:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
327,198,103320,1,2,0:0:0:0:
378,127,103473,2,0,P|392:84|390:43,1,87.5,2|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
437,188,103779,2,0,P|442:232|461:269,1,87.5,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,208,104085,6,0,B|308:191|308:191|182:199,1,157.499995193482,2|0,0:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
294,281,104544,1,2,0:1:0:0:
370,324,104697,2,0,P|413:328|454:316,1,87.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,215,105004,2,0,L|462:74,1,131.25,2|0,1:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,84,105310,6,0,P|417:66|372:69,1,87.5,6|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,119,105616,1,0,1:1:0:0:
320,136,105769,1,6,0:0:0:0:
176,53,105922,2,0,L|88:59,1,87.5,0|2,1:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,64,106228,1,6,1:2:0:0:
127,151,106381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,170,106458,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,189,106534,6,0,L|139:278,1,87.5,6|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,369,106840,1,0,1:0:0:0:
229,282,106993,1,6,0:2:0:0:
338,174,107146,1,0,1:0:0:0:
330,261,107299,1,2,0:0:0:0:
431,314,107452,2,0,L|422:220,1,87.5,6|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,92,107759,5,6,1:2:0:0:
328,83,107835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,78,107912,1,2,0:0:0:0:
285,78,107988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,84,108065,1,0,1:0:0:0:
244,93,108141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,107,108218,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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204,143,108371,5,2,1:2:0:0:
218,159,108447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,179,108524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,201,108600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,222,108677,1,6,1:2:0:0:
218,243,108754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
210,263,108830,1,0,0:1:0:0:
207,284,108907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,306,108983,5,2,0:2:0:0:
256,192,109060,12,4,110208,0:1:0:0:

wendao

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Joined August 2012

wendao 2016-06-27T00:54:23+00:00

fixed everything, iirc

http://puu.sh/pGC2B.zip

Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Aka 2016-06-28T19:44:42+00:00

Bakari said i can apply stuff for him

pinataman

pinataman wrote:
00:26:942 (1,3) – The distance between these is really close and doesn't look great. Can you make the DS 1.2 between these? 00:26:942 (1) - has already disappeared when 00:28:779 (3) - comes out, so i don't think it's that necessary

-NanoRIPE-

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
[Easy]
00:25:718 (3,1) - overlap? not really lol but moved a bit
00:28:779 (2) - finish? im afraid it would feel pretty bad to place it on slider's end D:
00:43:779 (4) - move to x:0 y:272 *for better placement the current placement produces some variety for movement, it wasn't meant to move the cursor straight to (1) :<
00:49:901 (2) - move to x:56 y:148 *^ same reason (2) is placed smoothly by the (1)'s curve, why would it be worse? :c
01:40:106 (2) - move to x:288 y:28 *^ same as 3rd reply

also replying to your line from "general": the SB is for iyasine & caren_sk's diff, check it out

Тик@ все фиксед/будет фиксед. хсы я копировала из харда цельсиуса и не усмотрела момент с жутким нормал семплсетом. заменила на мягкий

коробочка для моих дифф

TicClick wrote:
[All difficulties]
These who have kiai section placed in the end of the map, you probably want to add a flash here 01:40:412 сделано!
00:09:493 + 00:09:646 - use normal hits with soft additions сделано!
[Insane]
00:01:840 (7,8) - я о таком обычно никогда не говорю, но тут косо (несимметрично) пошаманила
00:27:555 (3,4) - ↑ тут тоже тут тоже пошаманила
01:11:024 (1) - уххх, я бы его продлил на четверть, он нуждается в этом da
01:30:004 - тут вряд ли нужен фонтан пожалуй
01:35:514 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - возможно, 3, 4 и 7 стоит сделать такими же (с учётом дальнейших перестановок), как 01:34:595 (2), потому что на фоне очень много всего происходит, и мне кажется странным, что тут идут сплошные 1/2 когда-нибудь да
[Эксперт] а почему он единственный по-русски
00:56:942 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - идк, как-то это с трудом воспринимается, возможно, стоит попробовать поэкспериментировать с уплотнением, но, скорей всего (скорей всего), дело в том, что 00:57:248 (6) - закрывает концом звук, то есть это на самом деле должно быть https://tc.s-ul.eu/9h9f38NB.png что-нибудь придумаю, но потом :с
01:02:070 (1) - аналогично ↑ (да, теперь я могу сказать точно, что это из-за закрытого звука, потому что те же 01:03:065 (1,1,1,2,1) - пробиваются на ура)
01:42:248 (1,1) - наверное, лучше опять сделать 1/2 + 1/2 + ноту (всё вплотную), чем это
01:44:697 (1,1) - ↑ поразмышляю на досуге, но скорее всего da
вот такие дела, y'all are cuties, net ti and, apart from a few severe rhythm (and hitsounding, too! *smirks*) mistakes, this is production-ready!

upd:

SeaRasp wrote:
01:04:289 (4,5) - ^ any suggestions on pattern?

Try this maybe ? : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5464631

also done with one difference

toybot

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Joined June 2013

toybot 2016-07-03T04:45:27+00:00

thank u!! https://0paste.com/8691.txt

Smallwu

572 posts

Joined April 2013

Smallwu 2016-07-03T10:04:47+00:00

Hi, mod from my queue

Taiko General

Turn off "Enable Custom Colours" and "Widescreen Support"
Taiko don't need them

jom's Muzukashii

00:36:585 (130) - d

00:37:044 (131,132,133) - k d k

00:38:422 (134,135,136,137,138) - d k d k k

Move 00:52:810 (183) to 00:52:657 - Because 00:52:810 no any highlight sound, and there is "Dong" sound in 00:52:657

Move 00:57:708 (201) to 00:57:555 - Because 00:57:708 no any highlight sound, and there is "Ding" sound in 00:57:555

01:01:228 (1) - D is better I think

01:39:799 (197,198) - d d

jom's Oni

01:01:228 (8) - K

01:02:988 (8) - Delete it or move it to 01:02:912 - Because 01:02:988 no sound

01:04:213 (18) - Delete it or move it to 01:04:136 - Because 01:04:213 no sound

01:20:208 (155,156,157,158,159) - d k d d k ~~Just I want xP~~

01:35:667 - Add ddk d Because the piano

Ozzy's Inner Oni

No Problem, good job :3

GL with Rank！

Grrum

886 posts

Joined November 2011

Grrum 2016-07-05T18:24:10+00:00

Continuation of my mod since I was really impressed by your mod. No kudosu.

[General]

Some of the difficulties aren't consistent with where the kiai should be.

[wendao's hyper]

00:22:657 (3) – and 00:23:575 (2) – I personally find the ends of these sliders at 00:22:963 – and 00:23:881 – to be strong notes in the melody and would have made these clickable. Consider a rhythm like this for this section: http://puu.sh/pQku9/dd035b32de.jpg

00:46:993 (2,3) – Consider this? http://puu.sh/pNMwy/c6a42209c7.jpg

01:07:963 (3,4) – There's some notes in the harmony here that denote a change in the music, so I don't think using repetition in your flow is very expressive of this, so consider a flow change, like maybe http://puu.sh/pNMDb/a0f5a551b7.jpg

[toybot's Another]

00:01:228 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) – This is a lot of ½ rhythm at a fair DS which is kind of intense. I have no problem with this alone, but the fact that there is no mirrored pattern in the next four measures at 00:06:126 (1) – makes your introduction have an odd pacing curve (in that this pattern feels too hard relative to the rest of it). While making 00:01:228 (1) – into a 1/1 slider could be worthwhile, I don't think I'll be able to convince you of that, so instead let me try weakening a different part of this pattern. At 00:01:840 (1) - , the pitch starts to fall, so making the spacing descend like so might have an interesting effect while reducing the intensity of the section overall to make the emphasis fall at better moments within the first eight measures: http://puu.sh/pQdmz/499bd32659.jpg

00:21:279 (3,4,5) – Consider this for the rhythm (and for the others in this section): http://puu.sh/pQdAk/1c2c73a7ef.jpg (I'm making this suggestion because I'm missing your intention behind it, which is my fault, but still a problem for me and other similar players)

01:12:248 (6) – I strongly recommend this and all others like it be a ½ slider. I agree this should be restful, but I think you're going too far. This is an overall strong section of the song after all.

01:37:963 (1) – I like that this is a ¼ slider to go with the piano here, but I'm puzzled why 01:39:187 (1) – isn't a ¼ slider to continue with what the piano is doing since there isn't a strong auditory clue to assert the harmony that you've mapped over this melody. If you're going to acknowledge the piano/melody (which I think you should), I think you need to commit to it. I think the measure at 01:39:187 (1) – ought to be restful in order to set up the stronger measure at 01:39:646 (1) - , so use really small spacing here, and then you can use clockwise flow on 01:39:646 (1) – to contrast with 01:37:963 (1) – like so: http://puu.sh/pQeLL/517d614c5a.jpg --------- http://puu.sh/pQeTb/89f8348ae7.jpg

[Expert]

00:07:811 (3,4) – The pacing of this introduction section into the chorus feels odd due to this much ½ rhythm and high spacing leading into the long slider at 00:10:259 (3) – and 00:11:483 (5) - . These two factors make the first section of the song more challenging and more intense than this second section of the song, and that's not the way I interpret this since the beginning is using fewer and calmer instruments. So consider scaling down the first section and making 00:10:259 (3) – into a slightly more intense rhythm like: http://puu.sh/pQfQq/dcff8106a9.jpg. I can see why you want the long slider to provide rest,

00:25:565 (6,1) – Try not to go downwards into (1) since this continues the same V flow from before which doesn't seem to fit the music to me. Try using a less sharp angle like: http://puu.sh/pQfQq/dcff8106a9.jpg

00:32:912 (7,1) – and 00:33:524 (3,1) – These anti-jumps set a really strong precedence for the rest of this section. The inconsistency with the patterns at 00:37:810 (6,1) – , 00:45:310 (1,2) - , etc is really noticeable and slightly disruptive, so I recommend getting rid of the anti-jumps on 00:32:912 (7,1) – or making 00:37:810 (6,1) – into anti-jumps

00:50:361 – Even though it's kind of quiet, there is a note here in the melody, so having a 1/1 pause here feels like undermapping this. You can use low DS or even make (1) a slider, but do at least experiment with these before rejecting.

01:39:799 (5) – I don't think it's worth it to abandon the piano here since this is the climax of this melody, so you want to lean into the piano as much as you can here to reap the rewards of following it. Try making this all ½ circles with big jumps.

[iyasine_sk's Extreme]

00:06:662 (3) – How much enjoyment do you get out of this ¼ circle, and how much enjoyment do you lose by not following the melody by having it? This is an overall calm section of the song, and I personally think you lose more by having it since the melody is doing a great job of introducing the song that you don't need to try to give extra excitement with this.

00:32:912 (2,1) – I'm not a big fan of how you did this 1/1 pause since it reads like ½ rhythm which can be justified by the new harmony on 00:33:065 - , but I'm not the target audience anyway.

01:12:248 (1) – Consider having this be a ½ slider since I think a circle is overdoing how much rest should be here.

01:39:799 (3) - I don't think it's worth it to abandon the piano here since this is the climax of this melody, so you want to lean into the piano as much as you can here to reap the rewards of following it. Try making this ½ circles with big jumps, which goes really nicely with the sliders before it that provide enough rest to set you up for a strong moment like big jumps.

[Oxy's Master]

00:06:738 (1) – There is a very noticeable pitch change here in the melody which is a pretty big change in the intensity of the song here, so I think the pattern can be more expressive here if you change the DS and/or flow. Suggestion: http://puu.sh/pQix2/7b67cd106b.jpg
00:01:228 (1,1,1,1) – This place is similar, so try using symmetry for this one like: http://puu.sh/pQiG3/a3bc455d04.jpg

01:15:616 (3) – This note is kind of strong, consider increasing the DS into it?

01:30:004 (1) – Normal-whistle doesn't sound nice to me, consider using soft-whistle even if that means you have to make it a custom hitsound

01:39:799 (5) – I don't think it's worth it to abandon the piano here since this is the climax of this melody, so you want to lean into the piano as much as you can here to reap the rewards of following it. Try making this all ½ circles with big jumps.

Nice set overall, good luck!

wendao

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Joined August 2012

wendao 2016-07-06T04:29:05+00:00

pinataman wrote:
Continuation of my mod since I was really impressed by your mod. No kudosu.

[General]

Some of the difficulties aren't consistent with where the kiai should be. it's okay to have different kiai for gd

[wendao's hyper]

00:22:657 (3) – and 00:23:575 (2) – I personally find the ends of these sliders at 00:22:963 – and 00:23:881 – to be strong notes in the melody and would have made these clickable. Consider a rhythm like this for this section: http://puu.sh/pQku9/dd035b32de.jpg done in another way, and also remapped some part

00:46:993 (2,3) – Consider this? http://puu.sh/pNMwy/c6a42209c7.jpg I guess no

01:07:963 (3,4) – There's some notes in the harmony here that denote a change in the music, so I don't think using repetition in your flow is very expressive of this, so consider a flow change, like maybe http://puu.sh/pNMDb/a0f5a551b7.jpg I'll consider it

thanks ~~http://puu.sh/pRThh.zip pls don't update, forgot to fix the hitsound, and I don't have access to computer atm~~

http://puu.sh/pT9Tf.zip done

TicClick

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TicClick 2016-07-10T18:13:33+00:00

я проверил, и всё хорошо! мне, правда, ещё в голову пришло 00:41:636 (1) - на эксперте реверснуть

Aka

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Topic Starter

Aka 2016-11-08T05:19:43+00:00

eets not dead yet somehow

allein

Beatmap Nominator

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allein 2016-11-11T15:37:34+00:00

yea

VINXIS

Featured Artist

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Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2017-01-03T15:08:00+00:00

yea

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

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Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2017-02-27T11:20:55+00:00

Is it time?

Aka

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Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Aka 2017-02-27T16:18:25+00:00

well im trying to get taiko mods but i feel like im doing it wrong -__-

Snowy Heat

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Joined December 2011

Snowy Heat 2017-02-28T18:44:31+00:00

привет, бАка
удачки с ранком и лови звездочку

random ~~not really~~ taiko mod

jom's Muzukashii

mod

Nice diff, love it. But I think you should turn up the volume of hitsounds on both of your diffs.

00:20:055 (64) - well, i here a clap sound here, maybe switch to k?

00:21:126 (70) - since the pitch of this note is almost as high as previous k, switch to k? also sounds better i think

00:24:952 (89) - the pitch is higher here than on the other dons before, switch to k?

00:37:044 (131) - same pitch as the next note, switch to k.

00:39:493 (139) - for me this sounds better with k but d will still be good.

00:46:381 (160) - ^.

jom's Oni

mod

Nice diff too.

00:19:901 (85,90) - i hear clap sounds under this dons you mapped, maybe better switch them to k?

00:24:952 (115) - higher pitch here, switch to k better.

00:26:024 (122) - ^.

00:31:534 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - i just think that this 1/6 part is too much for this oni but i won't complain about this; just that ozzy's inner contains similar thing here and maybe oni players could use less tension than having same things on the both diffs.

00:33:983 (23,25) - ctrl + g since the first note has higher pitch and the second doesn't.

00:34:595 (26) - drum sound here and higher pitch, switch to k.

00:36:432 (36,49,57) - ^.

01:19:595 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159) - for me this sounds kinda strange but plays more ok than sounds; maybe better map this as kkd kkk kkddk instead of this? fits a lot better here for me.

01:20:667 (160) - high pitch here, k will work much better.

01:21:126 (162) - drum sound here, k will be better.

01:21:432 (164) - and this has lower pitch, switch to d.

01:49:978 (152) - for me works better with removing this.

Ozzy's Inner Oni is good for me on easier parts but it's too hard for me to mod streams because i can't test them properly.

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