◘ I feel like the bright yellow cc doesn't fit the bg as much as it could
combo colors are supposed to be based off of the main colors of main sequence stars• 00:03:179 - Shouldn't there be a circle here? You put circles at the same kind of note throughout the intro.
• 00:43:524 (2) - Why isn't this spaced like 00:42:317 (3,4,1) - etc?
fixed• 00:57:662 (5,6,7,8) - I don't feel like the song is intense enough for these jumps yet.
was adding emphasis to the build up• 00:59:731 (6) - nc here to stay consistent with your future combo lengths
fixed• 01:04:386 (3,5) - correct blanket
fixed• 01:06:283 (1) - remove nc, ladder jump doesn't feel applicable here
fixed• 01:13:697 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move 2 down to correct blanket
fixed• 01:14:386 (7,8,1) - and 01:14:042 (3,2) - make these so they dont touch
fixed• 01:09:386 - Starting on the first drops, your circle/slider combination feels pretty random. You make more important beats, such as snares for example, go underrated (for example, this snare on the sliderend should be clickable: 01:13:697 (2) - ) Here at 01:25:938 (3,4,5,6,7) - you put reason behind your sliders by making them coincide with the plucks, so I recommend you use that rhythm or at the very least use consistency in your overall rhythm here, and don't neglect any important beats
was trying to continue with the 3/2 parts• 01:11:800 - 01:22:662 (7) - Miss an important beat here. Make a kickslider transition into a circle?
part of the stream• 01:11:973 (1) - move nc to 01:12:145 (2)
would make the jumps look MUCH worse• 01:17:490 (1) - ^^ You make this nc error throughout the map, but as an example you do this correctly at 04:35:766 (3,4,1) -
^• 01:18:180 (1,2,3) - it feels weird how you start following the plucks here specifically, suddenly transtioning from this jump pattern at 01:17:662 - there should be a slider on that timestamp imo
trying to add diversity• 01:20:938 - missed a slider?
^• 01:27:317 (1) - move down more? no reason to put farther away from 7
fixed• 01:48:007 - starting here, i feel that this spacing is too large; i dont feel much intensity here
there's still tension that hasn't been released from the previous stream, and they're technically smaller spaced then the stream jumps• 02:09:214 (4) - mispositioned from stream
was giving a small curve• 02:14:214 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacing error; the visual gap between objects is the same in 02:14:214 (1,2) - and 02:15:076 (4,1) - with the same intensity, yet they have different gaps in the timeline.
was giving an art vibe because the song slowed down• 02:31:628 (1) - move nc to 02:32:145 - ?
fixed• 03:21:800 - from here, im not a big fan of using the spinners again. It feel's repetitive from the intro at the beginning and is already drawn out.
with hr the hp drain would be too high• 03:43:869 - From here, why do you use circles instead of kicksliders like at 00:25:248 - ? The music in both feels the same
would be overmapped• 04:05:852 (1,2) - overmapped triple, there are no noticable notes behind these circles and it just shocks the player
replaced with kick slider• 04:06:628 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - the pattern itself is okay, but it just kind of bugs me how you treat more important notes like 04:06:972 - and 04:07:662 - with the same importance as the rest in the pattern.
would be hard to fit a slider in here• Refer back to my comment at 01:09:386 - for the second drop, except this time consider the piano notes; they feel stronger and less passive than the plucks
keeping consistency with pattern at the begining • 04:16:628 (1,2) - make 'em not touch
isn't really noticeable• 04:19:042 (4,5,6) - refer to spacing comment at 02:14:214 (1,2,3,4,1) -
trying to keep the blanket• 04:27:489 - nothing here?
no note at this part• 04:26:628 (1,2,1,1,2) - If your going to group the notes like this, the sliders should go side by side in groups of two, so you can use the 4/4 kick as emphasis, giving more reasoning behind your spacing
fixed• 04:28:524 (3,5) - these feel close together
fixed• 04:36:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same comment as 04:06:628 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) -
see above• 04:41:283 (5,1) - feels close together
trying to transition smoothly• 05:00:765 (7) - Don't you usually put nc's on these?
fixed• 05:05:421 (1,2,3) - Same spacing comment as 02:14:214 (1,2,3,4,1) - here you can just move 1 back farther to the left tho
it isn't really noticeable with jumps• 05:25:593 - make it clickable
fixed why were some of them ok then? It shouldn't be such a big deal then, but I guess I have to re-learn a ton 
• There's a note at 05:31:627 - but you put nothing there. Theres no note at 05:32:145 - and you put a circle there?? I would move the circle back to that red tick for the first 2 circle-slider patterns (the last one sounds fine)
fixed• 05:34:214 (1) - I don't understand why you choose to compliment this white noise with much more character then the ambiance you have going throughout the track, especially at points like 03:43:869 -
i end with slider art personally, and the white noise is much louder than the previous
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