[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:

marked.

NlHIL wrote:

NOVICE

00:27:770 - add? ok
00:38:056 - addwill break consistency with 00:27:085 -
00:38:742 - add? if for clap, i think it's not that audible
00:43:542 - add? rest part xD
00:43:970 - add? no

ADVANCED

01:00:685 - add too hard making this double maybe cuz of previous triple

EXHAUST

00:28:456 - 00:29:142 - 00:29:827 - 00:30:513 - and... add? no, just adding triples in the kiai part for the clap sound
01:00:685 - add will reconsider this

Hello World XD xD

Feerum wrote:

OH NICE
Its back!

ogogog Spam the BN's to get this Ranked! \:D/

Short Random Mod because something bothers me every time i play this song

From 01:06:513 - to 01:17:485 - Why not only follow the Piano? Some Notes looks random while play :/
When you follow Piano Only you should Delete following Notes:
01:07:542 (67542|0) - Delete. No Piano Sound.
01:07:885 - Add (for LN sound and Additional Piano)
01:09:256 - Add for Same reason
01:09:942 (69942|3) - Delete. No Piano Sound
01:10:285 (70285|0) - Delete. No Piano Sound
01:10:627 - Add same Reason like the First one.
01:12:685 (72685|2) - Delete. No Piano Sound
01:13:027 (73027|1) - Delete. No Piano Sound
01:13:370 - Add for Same reason like above.
01:14:399 (74399|0) - Delete. No Piano Sound.
01:14:742 - Add. Same Reason like above.
01:15:427 (75427|1) - Delete. No Piano Sound.
01:15:770 (75770|2) - Delete. No Piano sound. followed all except for this one, idk but im 100% sure that it has solid piano sound here

Please try it out. It plays really good when you follow only the Piano sound.
Should you accept this Please no Kudosu because i already Mod this once.

Ayy and now. gogo Rank

Edit: Oh i forgot to say. Should you accept this dont forget to fix the other diffs too!

Edit 2nd: OHSHIT. I already mention this all with my Mod xD But please rethink this. It plays really Strange it feels like you follow Random Sounds in this Part :cc

Marirose wrote:

bubbled
gl

Feerum wrote:

I told you! Nice. Almost there :D

Web Box wrote:

Hellu~ ^-^
I'm sorry, but I'm afraid I won't be of much help. This will be a really short mod, sorry. .__.

COLUMN: |0|1|2|3|


'NOVICE' is fine.

ADVANCED

This is the only thing that made me go "I guess that needs a little modding..?":
01:03:770 (63770|2,63770|1,63942|0,63942|3,64113|1,64113|2,64285|0,64285|3,64456|1,64456|2,64627|3,64627|0,64799|1,64799|2) - This is too long for that pattern. I guess, here 01:04:456 - you could do this: rearranged
01:07:199 - There's a sound here, you should add a note, preferably in column 2. i only followed piano sound same as below
01:09:942 - Same as the one above. Add one in column 0, or mess around with the 3 previous notes and place it in column 3.
01:39:427 (99427|2,99427|1,99599|0,99599|3,99770|2,99770|1,99942|0,99942|3,100113|2,100113|1,100285|0,100285|3,100456|2,100456|1) - First I suggested that you keep like half of the pattern and change it into another pattern, now let's change it up and add another pattern, like this one and then add half of the other one. rearranged

*cough* Sorry, I'm still in no place to talk about 4* maps.

I apologize for not being of much help. If I was then I'm glad ^-^

Good luck with your map! =^-^=

Cipse wrote:

Hello world! SoraGami

Here's a mod in return

NOVICE

The only thing I found was a slight inconsistency at 00:43:713 (43713|0,43799|3,44056|2) -, 01:19:370 (79370|0,79456|3,79713|1) - and 01:41:313 (101313|1,101399|3,101656|0) -. Basically, these three notes are mapping the percussion but there is another percussive sound that you didn't map at 00:43:970 -, 01:19:627 - and 01:41:570 - sorry, i only mapped only which sounds are strong and since it is normal diff and the easiest it is fine and i dont want to make all diffs to have similar structures

ADVANCED

I'd say that both 00:43:799 (43799|3) - and 00:44:056 (44056|0,44056|1) - have the same sound. Add a second note to 00:43:799 (43799|3) -. The same applies to 01:19:456 - and 01:41:399 - same with Normal diff
Also note that 00:21:856 - and 00:22:113 - have the same percussive sounds as the above group this one are different, that's why the notes are added because of the melody and the chimes while the one you mentioned above dont have so i only followed the strong sounds

EXHAUST

Change 00:12:256 (12256|1,12256|0) - to a single note. You've been using doubles for the bass only - it seems weird to see doubles here when the music is similar to that at 00:12:170 -, 00:12:085 -, 00:11:913 -, etc someone has told me, there's nothing special if i only map 2 notes in every 1/1, and when i hear it in 25% playback, the sounds are actually have melody so i try to add it and when i test it, it plays actually better

Similar occurances

Note that making these changes will cause the SR to drop from 3.92 to 3.81

00:12:427 (12427|1,12427|0) -
00:13:627 (13627|3,13627|0) -
00:13:799 (13799|0,13799|3) -
00:14:999 (14999|3,14999|2) -
00:15:170 (15170|3,15170|2) -
00:17:742 (17742|0,17742|1) -
00:17:913 (17913|0,17913|1) -
00:19:113 (19113|3,19113|0) -
00:19:285 (19285|0,19285|3) -

01:42:770 (102770|1,102770|0) -
01:42:942 (102942|0,102942|1) -
01:44:142 (104142|1,104142|3) -
01:44:313 (104313|3,104313|1) -
01:45:513 (105513|2,105513|3) -
01:45:685 (105685|2,105685|3) -
01:48:256 (108256|2,108256|3) -
01:48:427 (108427|3,108427|2) -
01:49:627 (109627|3,109627|0) -
01:49:799 (109799|3,109799|0) -

Isn't the patterning of 01:28:456 (88456|3,88456|0,88627|2,88627|1,88799|0,88799|3,88970|2,88970|1,89142|0,89142|3,89313|2,89313|1,89485|0,89485|3) - slightly boring? My comfortable "S" range is about 3* but even then that pattern is a bit easy. Also, you've used a different pattern between 01:03:770 - and 01:04:627 - then, later, 01:39:427 - and 01:40:285 -, which has a similar bass occuring every 1/2 beat well, okay repatterned xD

The last thing, maybe take out 01:53:142 (113142|0) -. I don't think the sound is strong enough to justify three notes and I think that a simple {0+2,1+3,0+2} feels nice to play, even if they aren't all the same types of notes. Also, I doubt that keeping 01:53:142 (113142|0) - is going to make someone miss/get a 200 ehh, it actually plays really nice, and double LNs at the end gives this diff feel more like an EXH diff

__

Very fun beatmap to play and mod - even if I can't play EXHAUST well Thanks xD
If I recall correctly, I think this is the shortest mod I've ever given - there's almost no inconsistencies at all and everything is comfortable to play. Good luck

jukkaduei wrote:

Hello from M4M

Column |0|1|2|3|

NOVICE

Great diff
01:23:999 (83999|2) - Move to column 1 for balance it's already balance, if i move it it will be unbalance with the next note and i actually have a pattern basis for that
01:26:399 (86399|3) - Move this note to column 2 and move 01:26:742 (86742|0) - to column 3 for balance ok

ADVANCED

Perfect diff I can't find a defect

EXHAUST

Perfect diff too

Good luck with your beatmap

Ochasan wrote:

M4M as you can see

MOD

ADVANCED
01:31:199 mka SV here? i dont want SV D:
00:07:627 make this part to 1/4 snap note which is part of the song i dont hear anything here in 25% playback
for 1/4 part i recommed you to change it into a variable part <3

EXHAUST
00:12:685 for that part i want a recommendation like this example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5399331 applies also to the other part oh god fixed <3

what just that? damn, this is a map this is hard to mod because there is another mod fix
sorry

wow i made the shortest of the experience mod me ._ .

you know i am having trouble finding what is lacking in your map, so the results only this . This has been very good for mod
oh something i want to tell you, can you request an hitsound to other custom hitsounding, this is great if there hitsound here i will just fix the hitsound myself

thanks!!! good luck with your map . hope this be a ranked soon

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

search BN to bubble this
then i can qualify this good things

but your metadata seems weird lol, please ask QAT first

• 
  [General]

1. Song Setup & Metadata
   Song setup has no problem and also metadata is fine
2. Audio & Hitsounds
   128kbps audio, okay fine . . . and not contains any delayed hitsound (+5ms) and all of hitsound is above 100ms
   but your clap have too much blank spot in the end part http://puu.sh/pOBwQ/d09e44a4ed.png here is my fix http://puu.sh/pOByp/3e372e1013.wav
   and your cymbal a little bit delayed, fixed here http://puu.sh/pOBBD/35ab285974.wav
   also, your soft-hitnormal is too low, that's not enough to give a feedback when you pressing a note . . . here is the better version http://puu.sh/pOBFW/b3f6acb5a8.wav
   and more importantly . . . all of your clap sample volume is too low (30%), please raise it to around 60%
3. BPM & Timing
   all fine
4. Background
   1366x768 (16:9) screen . . . good
   
   |1|2|3|4|
   
   [NOVICE]
5. 00:05:313 (5313|3) - a little weird if you start that LN on red lines . . . i would like suggest you to snap that on this timing 00:05:485 - since the bass or whatever it's name is actually start on that
6. 00:36:856 (36856|3,37027|3) - highly recommended to moveing this patter to 3rd column, since pressing that kind of sound is more fit with your index finger . . . here is my suggestion http://puu.sh/pOBYJ/e3c4d01211.jpg
7. 00:37:542 - until 00:38:913 - actually this pattern is more fun to press http://puu.sh/pOC7h/f3b617eb1d.jpg since the kick sound is already same, and also you can break the flow on this 00:38:913 - since they are different flow with 00:39:085 (39085|0,39256|1,39427|2,39599|1,39770|0) -
   
   [ADVANCED]
8. 00:07:285 - add a note ? i think you just missing an important sound in here (you know la)
9. 00:16:799 - same reason as above . . . please respect this special synth sound, just feel odd here if you leave that important sound
10. 00:11:656 - reduce a note here . . . i think that sound is not loud enough to give 3 notes in here, eve in your EXHAUST, you only use 2 note for this time
11. 00:17:142 - yea, i think it's no need to be 3 notes ^ not really loud
12. 01:36:685 (96685|2) - well, this LN is just feel weird to be pressed, because it doesn't follows vocal properly . . . highly recommended you to use the same way like EXHAUST diff, it's good enough i think
13. 00:50:056 - same reason as above ^
14. 01:42:770 - 01:42:942 - 01:44:142 - 01:44:313 - and so on . . . if i be you, i will keep to map those 1/4 synth for closing part owo)
    
    [EXHAUST]
15. 00:05:313 (5313|3) - this LN have a same issue like on your NOVICE diff
16. 00:10:456 - i think this LN's would be more fit if you following the vocal sound http://puu.sh/pOCLG/113fc7dd43.jpg
17. 00:38:742 - just add a note here . . . the clap impact is more louder than this part 00:38:056 -
18. 00:54:170 (54170|0,54256|1) - delete ths notes, i think it's good if you can give a some break for this part (according to the song pace) and also, this sound is more important to be given with a note 00:54:599 - try to be fair with some sound when you mapping it
19. 00:55:199 - actually this part is loud enough to be mapped with double trill http://puu.sh/pOD5G/09b4862054.jpg please try to make some difference with your ADVANCED diff
20. 00:59:999 - how about to try this one http://puu.sh/pOD9c/bed09a3a53.jpg its more easy readable and more fit i think
21. 01:19:885 (79885|1) - move to first column . . . no need to explain more, i know you can understand it :3
22. start on here 01:20:227 - until here 01:28:456 - would be more great and also more fit for this last diff if you map the 1/4 synth sound too . . . come on this is the last diff, why you keep to map those boring kick sound while you can map freely those beautiful synth sound
23. 01:35:656 - same pattern suggestion like on 00:59:999 -
24. 01:50:313 (110313|2,110399|2) - damn, this mini jack while you pressing a double was really a cancer XD please remove it

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Qualify Check

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• 
  [General]

1. Song Setup & Metadata
   Song setup has no problem and also metadata is fine
2. Audio & Hitsounds
   128kbps audio, okay fine . . . and not contains any delayed hitsound (+5ms) and all of hitsound is above 100ms
   but your clap have too much blank spot in the end part http://puu.sh/pOBwQ/d09e44a4ed.png here is my fix http://puu.sh/pOByp/3e372e1013.wav
   and your cymbal a little bit delayed, fixed here http://puu.sh/pOBBD/35ab285974.wav
   also, your soft-hitnormal is too low, that's not enough to give a feedback when you pressing a note . . . here is the better version http://puu.sh/pOBFW/b3f6acb5a8.wav ohh Thanks for the fix :3
   and more importantly . . . all of your clap sample volume is too low (30%), please raise it to around 60% 50 instead, 60 is too loud and 40 for 01:20:227 - until here 01:28:456 because it is too loud also xD
3. BPM & Timing
   all fine
4. Background
   1366x768 (16:9) screen . . . good
   
   |1|2|3|4|
   
   [NOVICE]
5. 00:05:313 (5313|3) - a little weird if you start that LN on red lines . . . i would like suggest you to snap that on this timing 00:05:485 - since the bass or whatever it's name is actually start on that umm.. i can really hear that it start on 00:37:885 (37885|1) even on 25 playback or even playing it in 100%, i want to ensure it with you
6. 00:36:856 (36856|3,37027|3) - highly recommended to moveing this patter to 3rd column, since pressing that kind of sound is more fit with your index finger . . . here is my suggestion http://puu.sh/pOBYJ/e3c4d01211.jpg ohh okay~
7. 00:37:542 - until 00:38:913 - actually this pattern is more fun to press http://puu.sh/pOC7h/f3b617eb1d.jpg since the kick sound is already same, and also you can break the flow on this 00:38:913 - since they are different flow with 00:39:085 (39085|0,39256|1,39427|2,39599|1,39770|0) - ok will try~
   
   [ADVANCED]
8. 00:07:285 - add a note ? i think you just missing an important sound in here (you know la) because i thought these 00:07:113 (7113|2,7199|1,7199|0,7370|2) - will give a fun flow because of the more obvious sound there, but okay will add xD
9. 00:16:799 - same reason as above . . . please respect this special synth sound, just feel odd here if you leave that important sound okay~ also rearranged
10. 00:11:656 - reduce a note here . . . i think that sound is not loud enough to give 3 notes in here, eve in your EXHAUST, you only use 2 note for this time it is for cymbals, the reason it is only 2 note on exh because lack of column xD and also for balance purposes
11. 00:17:142 - yea, i think it's no need to be 3 notes ^ not really loud ^
12. 01:36:685 (96685|2) - well, this LN is just feel weird to be pressed, because it doesn't follows vocal properly . . . highly recommended you to use the same way like EXHAUST diff, it's good enough i think for difference in difficulties but will change it anyway xD
13. 00:50:056 - same reason as above ^ ^
14. 01:42:770 - 01:42:942 - 01:44:142 - 01:44:313 - and so on . . . if i be you, i will keep to map those 1/4 synth for closing part owo) okay will try, it's fun but i think it outclass the other diffs it feels like it became hard with the rest, but i save a backup file for this one just incase xD
    
    [EXHAUST]
15. 00:05:313 (5313|3) - this LN have a same issue like on your NOVICE diff same with nov
16. 00:10:456 - i think this LN's would be more fit if you following the vocal sound http://puu.sh/pOCLG/113fc7dd43.jpg ill stick with the current one, i feel more better when it follows pitch both vocals and synth
17. 00:38:742 - just add a note here . . . the clap impact is more louder than this part 00:38:056 - it balance the flow to nice~
18. 00:54:170 (54170|0,54256|1) - delete ths notes, i think it's good if you can give a some break for this part (according to the song pace) and also, this sound is more important to be given with a note 00:54:599 - try to be fair with some sound when you mapping it okay but i will not add here 00:54:599 - it feels weird for me
19. 00:55:199 - actually this part is loud enough to be mapped with double trill http://puu.sh/pOD5G/09b4862054.jpg please try to make some difference with your ADVANCED diff owo will make it like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5528267 double trill doesnt fits
20. 00:59:999 - how about to try this one http://puu.sh/pOD9c/bed09a3a53.jpg its more easy readable and more fit i think will stick with the old
21. 01:19:885 (79885|1) - move to first column . . . no need to explain more, i know you can understand it :3 okay xD
22. start on here 01:20:227 - until here 01:28:456 - would be more great and also more fit for this last diff if you map the 1/4 synth sound too . . . come on this is the last diff, why you keep to map those boring kick sound while you can map freely those beautiful synth sound okay~ now try this xD idk if it is good for others
23. 01:35:656 - same pattern suggestion like on 00:59:999 - repatterned instead
24. 01:50:313 (110313|2,110399|2) - damn, this mini jack while you pressing a double was really a cancer XD please remove it welp xD okay~

call me back then ~
maybe this need a re-check after you change those hitsound sample volume

Feerum wrote:

Oh my god finally.
How often i had to remind you to rank this map finally.

FINALLY.
Grats Sora <3

Rivals_7 wrote:

Gratz sora

Marianne when xD