MadaoX wrote:

[Normal]

- 00:12:326 (3) i think it will be better if you move it into 00:12:502 I don't think so.
- 00:28:032 (6) i think the slider must be 4/4, not 2/4 Added a circle.
- 00:38:620 (5) ^ No. Emphasize vocal here.
- 01:08:444 (2,3) delete the circle and move the slider into this ofset No.
- 01:08:973 (4) Add slider 2/4 here and delete the cirlce No.

[Hard]
- 01:01:385 (3,4) it looks weird, don't put it under the slider. I think it looks fine.

[Insane]

Note : for this difficult, it's an optional mods. It's up to you to change it or not All intentional overlaps.
- 00:24:502 (2) Don't put it under the other slider. it looks weird
- 00:32:267 (4) ^
- 01:03:502 (4) ^
- 01:05:797 (3) ^
- 01:31:561 (3) ^
- 01:32:973 (2) ^

Kagetsu wrote:

hi! from queue

[Insane]

1. you could have named this diff with a custom name lol I don't really think it's necessary. Insane is fine.
2. 00:26:797 - this works better to me... mainly because it follows the voice in a better way, and also, you did exactly the same rhythm at 00:49:385 - I find the drums more interesting here since it's a new, different rhythm.
3. 00:36:679 - maybe add a note here... i believe these jumps 00:36:326 (6,7) - are intended to follow piano, so why not map the last note of it? xd it kinda gives you a lack sensation without it D: It feels better empty for stronger emphasis on (7) where note is stronger in the song.
4. 00:41:797 (3,4) - the "problem" about these sliders is that the emphasis is on the redticks (slidertails, currently), i guess you can clearly hear "do" 00:41:620 - "ki" 00:41:973 - in those beats... they should be clickable because they're the most noticeable imo Of course I can hear it. But I don't want to emphasize those. Drum beats better to ground the beat leading into half-time section.
5. 00:47:620 - why ignore this beat D: Stronger emphasis on (3).
6. 00:56:444 - emphasis is on red tick xd No.
7. 01:04:032 (6,7) - this stack feels awkward, specially when 01:04:208 (7) - should have a lot of emphasis So what's wrong with using stack?
8. 01:19:119 (11) - overmapped ok
9. 01:20:091 (4,5,6) - this triplet is out of place, you should remove 01:20:179 (5) - and add a note here 01:20:002 - Fixed it.
10. from 01:23:973 - to 01:24:855 - you could fill with 1/4 notes, some kicksliders would fit nice imo, up to you tho No.
11. 01:25:738 (4,5,6) - this triplet is also out of place... it should be at 01:25:385 - works better to me Fixed.
12. 01:25:826 (5) - remove it xd
13. 01:32:267 (3,4) - quite high to be stacked ?
14. 01:33:944 (3) - overmapped... you could move it to 01:34:120 - tho No, thanks.

Wou wrote:

[General]

1. ' Widescreen Support ' are you use the storyboard? ok, I guess I can disable it.

[Insane]

1. 00:08:620 (1) - If you accept, start of this spinner is 00:07:738 - To follow vocal " La".. for me Applies as well to all difficulties Current one fits better, follows instrument.
2. 00:22:649 (9) - I think is good, if you remove this note. Then, change position note 1 to position note 2, then change position note 2 to position note 1, for example I want to cover that note in the song.
3. 00:27:855 - Add a note here please, for example No, I am emphasizing drums here.

MokouSmoke wrote:

is there a 192kbps version of this song? I couldn't find one. The download on the official site is 128kbps
[Insane]

1. 00:23:620 (6) - break into two notes? it would feel nicer if drum sound at 00:23:797 - was clickable. also, I think 00:23:620 (6) - should be whistle instead of clap Long slider is nicer imo. Gives stronger emphasis to the syncopated note. It is already whistle.
2. 00:30:679 (4,5) - spacing feels a little excessive Feels fine to me.
3. 00:37:738 - don't understand why you skipped this beat. you could just use lower spacing to reflect calmer melody here I wanted to bring out the drum at end of (2) more.
4. 01:19:914 (3,4,5) - would prefer if this was spaced out like 01:18:502 (5,6,7) - to represent change in vocal pitch I think it feels better to play as a stack.
5. 01:32:091 (2,3) - I think this deserves bigger spacing since change in vocal pitch and drums are both at (3). Yeah, made a bigger jump to emphasize (3).
6. 01:33:944 (3) - I know it's generally better to have triplet up to white tick, but there's no sound here and the drum triplet is at 01:34:120 - Tried it, but that feels really awkward to play. I like it better as it is, because it brings out the syncopation better.

[Hard]

1. 00:29:973 (2) - break into 1/2 slider+ 1/1 slider? it sounds empty to miss drum sounds at 00:30:149 - Nah, I prefer to bring out the offbeat vocals.
2. 01:20:267 (1,2) - swap NC? so it's like 00:26:620 (3,1) - ? ok

[Normal]

1. 01:11:444 (3,4,5) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/njs14/f79c4096e6.jpg so 01:12:149 - has same pattern as 01:12:855 - like in your other diffs

[Easy]

1. 00:27:149 (3) - gap feels empty, make this into 1/1 slider? No.
2. 01:11:444 (2) - maybe consider changing this into two circles to capture drums and vocals at 01:11:797 - I don't think it would be too hard for beginners to hit. No, I like slider better.

mostly just suggestions, mapset is already polished. good luck!

Tedda wrote:

Easy
Keep the DS throughout the whole difficulty. lol it's only off by 0.03x, but fixed.
00:33:820 (1) - if the sound starts on the big white tick, then move the slider to the big white tick and ends on the red tick. Vocal rhythm more interesting here.
01:10:703 - you missed the drum/cymbal sound here, so you could maybe do a rhythm like this instead: I think it's not intuitive enough for the player that way. I want to stick with the vocals here to make the rhythm obvious for beginners.

Normal
Unsnapped object here: Fixed.
00:59:409 (1) - Because of the drum/bass sound here, i think that ctrl+j would be more suitable for that. I disagree.

Hard
00:33:997 - missing note here. No.

Asahina Momoko wrote:

yehaj lamo yehaj

Easy

1. 00:58:173 (3,4) - idk stack in this diff is rankable but put 00:58:173 (3) - at 456/352 and apart them are newbie friendly xd ok, changed it.
2. 01:47:409 (1) - remove reverse and put 1/2 slider at 01:48:467 - to emphasize finale? I think 3/2 beat spacing there will be a bit hard to follow because there is no sound in between to help the player stay on beat.

Normal

1. 00:38:585 (5,6) - this rhythm is also good to play Changed it.
   
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Hard

1. you mainly follow vocal but 00:47:585 - is ignored and it'd be better to do something i think, how about these? I prefer my rhythm to give stronger emphasis to drum there... I think it's more important.
   
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Insane

1. 00:32:232 (4) - 01:03:467 (4) - 01:31:526 (3) - are those overlaps really needed? o.o They're not needed, but I don't think it's a problem. Changed the third one to stack.
2. 01:30:467 (1) - to make arrow more visible move a bit like this? Ok.
   
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good luck on this and your desire!!
-.-

pkhg wrote:

[Easy]

• 
  
  dont hitsound to drums if you arent following them. right now is kinda a clap here and there which sounds bad. goes for normal too I think it's ok to keep hitsound where the match the music.

1. 00:25:879 - add a circle or make (1) a 1/1 slider No, I'm strictly following drum here.
2. 00:27:114 (3,4) - that gap feels weird you can do something more vocal oriented instead of skipping everything to hit that snare. you arent following the drums in the next sections
3. 00:31:526 - circle maybe Makes awkward rhythm to play imo.
4. 00:33:820 (1,2) - this doesnt play good imo. maybe http://puu.sh/pixyx/7d3fb948e8.jpg
5. 01:07:879 (1) - the middle tick is covered by the tail Adjusted the shape.

[Hard]

1. 00:26:762 (1,2,3) - idk exactly what are you following like you follow vocals for most of the map and suddenly this I want to follow the rhythm that is more interesting, so in this case, I follow drums.
2. 00:47:232 (2,3,4) - this plays weird imo I think it's ok. I want to emphasize drum here.
3. 01:17:056 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - idk if its safe to have two almost consecutive triplets idk

[Insane]

1. 00:14:056 - the 1/8 starts from here. the rest is 1/2 http://puu.sh/piyM4/3f9139c47b.jpg ok, fixed it.
2. 00:47:232 (2,3,4) - same as hard

i suck gl

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi. from my queue

[Easy]

00:27:644 - 00:31:526 - Note? cuz vocal emphasis. Keep the first one, change second one.
01:12:114 - 01:12:820 - sound is big. i think change better for clap. Changed.

[Normal]

00:50:585 (6) - add repeat? Added.
01:48:644 - finish? I don't think it's needed.

[Hard]

00:56:938 (2,3) - Ctrl+G is better flow rhythm imo. Changed rhythm.
01:48:644 (2) - sugguest. I prefer stack here.

SPOILER

[Insane]

Notting,

Good Luck!

Electoz wrote:

Hi

[Easy]

1. 00:27:467 - Map sth here to follow vocal? You already have a 3/2 spacing on 00:30:291 (4,5) so I think it wouldn't hurt to have another one here. I think it's fine. I like this rhythm better, as it brings out the drum more.
2. 00:31:526 (5,1) - Swap NC? Fixed.
3. 00:41:056 - 01:40:350 - 01:43:173 - Add whistle? Added.

[Normal]

1. 00:42:114 (6,1) - 1.2 DS here but idk if it's intentional so I'm mentioning this just in case. It's the same distance. Lower SV makes the distance spacing number higher.
2. 00:53:762 - Add a circle here? To me this beat here is just the same as 00:50:938 . I want to push more emphasis on the syncopated vocal here.
3. 01:12:114 (1) - Any reason for putting NC here? Since you put one on every 2 downbeats. Readability, and also because this part feels like a separate idea from the previous four beats.
4. 01:17:938 (5) - Add whistle? Added.

[Hard]

1. 00:17:232 - Add a circle here for consistency with 00:17:938 (4) ? No.

Yeah sry for a short mod but hope this helps anyways~

Aihuro wrote:

Hey Little! NM from my queue.

Easy:

1. 00:18:467 (3,2) - Mm. . looks kinda messy with this overlap here and I know it's hard to avoid it. Maybe try something like this instead: The overlap is not visible during gameplay.http://puu.sh/pydk2/b8f92073cc.jpg You don't have to change much if you do this if you are lazy like me .
2. 00:21:291 (2,2) - Maybe stack them? No.
3. 00:25:526 - I don't really get why you leave open spaces like this one and then over here: 00:28:350 - you don't. (Also, only my imo so it doesn't really matter of course) but I think a nice 1/1 slider would fit perfect. This is just how the song feels to me.
4. 00:39:644 (1) - I'm trying to figure out something that would fit better, I'm not sure if you would like this but what is he harsh to try. Just do something like this instead:http://puu.sh/pydDX/0aa999ff17.jpg I prefer the current rhythm to emphasize vocals.
5. 01:47:409 (1) - This is kinda of a tricky one, eh. I tried my best so that you can end a note on that last beat. So maybe you can try something like this instead: http://puu.sh/pydWs/17e847ac9c.jpg I like my rhythm better.
6. Other than that, very decent diff! I really love your mapping style.

Normal:

1. 00:32:938 (5) - I strongly suggest still my own opinion to add a note here. At the moment it sounds empty. I'm staying on the offbeat vocals here, and don't want too much rhythmic density since this part is relatively calm.
2. 00:40:173 (2) - Maybe end this slider here instead: 00:39:291 (7) - . Since you kinda missed an important beat there with that 1/1 slider. It's just much more fun to play if you don't miss the beats. That beat is weak, and not important.
3. 00:41:585 (5) - Okay, see here, there is no important beat, so this time it's okay to use a 1/1. I'm not saying it's wrong what you did, I personally just don't like when you don't map a beat.
4. 00:44:938 - Etto. . it's not an easy. . so I don't understand that gaping there. I suggest you add a note there, since you did with all the others. Gap there gives better emphasis to the start of the next phrase, and helps with the half-time feel.
5. 00:54:997 (3,4) - Would be nice if you can make them look similar. It's fine.
6. 00:58:350 - This really doesn't matter if you change it or not, but I think I hear a noise there. . maybe you can add a note there. Really, I can also just be stupid, lol. Gap to emphasize syncopation.
7. 01:28:879 (3) - Why not try something like this instead: http://puu.sh/pyeHT/ceb4579603.jpg My reason is that you missed an important beat again. So I tried finding a better pattern. Prefer to just emphasize vocal here.
8. Also a very good diff! Gj.

Hard:

1. Very nice diff!

Really nice mapset, wish I could mod Insanes
Good Luck!

Sonnyc wrote:

~General~

1. Consider using some slidertick hitsounds. Several hitsounds in the low diff remains empty since the selected rhythms doesn't contain a drum, which felt less interesting. I think this is fine without slidertick hitsounds. Many of the notes in Easy do have hitsounds on them, and I think that it's enough that it doesn't feel empty. I also don't want too many extra sounds where there are no circles or sliderhead/end.

~Easy~

1. 00:57:291 (2,4) - I won't recommend using such edgy overlaps for the easiest difficulty. More than half of the slider path of (4) is covered by (2). This isn't beginner-friendly. Changed this part to avoid the overlap.
2. 01:48:644 - This is the only difficulty that isn't ending at here, and I think it is pretty awkward to end this diff at 01:48:467 while there is an additional sound following. Instead of using a reverse slider at the end, consider using a long slider that ends here. Personally, I don't think it's weird to end there, but changed to long slider.

~Hard~

1. 01:00:644 (1,2) - It feels awkward to have a close spacing in this clap sound for the sake of blanket. It feels quite natural to me.

~Insane~

1. 00:43:879 (1,2,3) - According to the distance snapping, these seem to have a similar spacing, but in terms of visuals, it is quite unbalanced. I think you can make an adjustment here yourself. Fixed.
2. 00:49:350 (1,2) - Personally the scale of this jump felt a liiitle exaggerated. Feels ok to me. Slider end gives enough room to move there comfortably.
3. 01:14:232 (3,4,5,6,1) - Since there was little flow change here, the spacing really feels unbalanced. You can compare with 01:25:526 (3,4,5,6,1). Oh, and it seems the rhythm somehow is inconsistent. According to the music, the triple fits better at 01:14:320 instead 01:14:497. Changed it.

Fine map.