1. Easy (1,35 stars, 122 notes)
2. Hard (2,86 stars, 294 notes)
3. Insane (3,9 stars, 376 notes)
4. Normal (2,2 stars, 201 notes)

Chujitsu wrote:

I love MLP!

Insane

try to start it like this
00:05:778 (1) - change reversed slider to normal one 2\4
00:08:778 (7) - don't put it on end of slider on this difficulty and try don't do it in any song which you going to map~
00:08:178 (5) - new combo
~ I see in your map so many places where you should start new combo! Try to not make combo longer that 8-9
00:19:578 (8) - NC
00:24:828 (1) - try to make stream to 00:25:578 (2)
00:35:778 (5,6,7) - move them in one line
00:53:028 (6) - nc
01:14:478 (5) - nc
01:23:178 (3) - change to slider 2\4
01:38:778 (8) - change it to reversed slider 2\4

hard

00:05:778 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g
00:37:428 (4) - try to not start sliders from blue tick, it's almost always might starts from white tick or as alternative red
01:04:278 (3) - its bad idea to finish slider on blue tick ._.
01:14:328 (5) - nc
01:20:478 (7) - nc
02:00:978 (7) - nc
02:03:378 (14) - nc

normal

00:26:178 (4) - ctrl+g
01:06:678 (8) - nc
01:17:178 (8) - put here slider 2\4
01:22:578 (11) - nc
01:20:478 (7) - nc
01:39:978 (10) - nc

Well o,o I guess, you need more practice. Most of objects I can't understand because you trying to map music and then changing to vocal sounds OwO Some of objects placed on strange places on time line as for me >_<...Normal seems to me hard to play for beginers but the most right mapped of all 3 dif~ Hard dif remind me insane cuz of little streams and insane missing any streams ._. Sorry, I didn't wanted to sound rude >_< Good luck with mapping ^ , ^

Hobbes2 wrote:

randomly found this, and im always willing to mod mlp music sooo

[General]

Your background is too big, resize it to 1366 x 768 (or just scale it down so its smaller than that) done

You should make an Easy difficulty so that your map can get ranked. You need at least 1 difficulty (normal or easy) under 2 stars.

Consider adding a kiai time when you feel appropriate! you can find this in the timing window
I thought about it, but i haven't seen an apropriate part for a kiai time

[normal]

You have some distance issues in this, which you can't have in a normal. Check ctrl+shift+a (ai-mod) to see where those are and fix them)
fixed all dstance issues

00:10:578 (1,2,3) - Change this pattern, the overlap isn't desirable and the flow is weird (it's not a natural movement, esp, for new players)done
00:19:878 - There's a sound here, should map done
00:37:578 (2) - not sure why there's a huge slider here instead of just mapping it out. If you do choose to keep the slider reshape it since it's kinda ugly :<
I reshaped the slider
00:53:028 (9) - This slider doesnt need to be squished. i think this slider is better like that
01:14:478 (4,6) - move 6 so its not touching 4 done

[Hard]

00:06:380 (2) - apparently this wasnt snapped? fixed
00:19:878 - there's a sound here, should map done
00:37:278 (9) - New combo done
00:37:578 (10,11) - map this instead of having big sliders
01:26:459 - I don't understand this break the song is the same as before but you just randomly have a break? I get giving players a rest but it seems so random

[Insane]

00:24:828 (8) - new combo done
00:50:328 (5,6,7,8) - curve the sliders a bit maybe? looks kinda bland as is they're pretty short slider, so i don't think curving them change a lot

Can't really think of much else to say for this one :<

Good luck! Hope my mod helped.

Yanganof wrote:

Heyo~
from Queue

General

I think you should put "My little Pony" into Source field thats only if the song is from the show, not for fan music
Aimod says you should lower audiobitrate(?) should be good now
You should try to place more objects on the downbeats as they're usual strong beats within the rhythm

Keep watch of your sliderpoints, you got a whole load of unnecessary ones
Pointed them out only in Insane diff though

Easy

maybe lower AR to 3 done
00:20:478 (1,2,3) - this ist to hard for an easy map.
I think it's best if you replace it with one slider done
In General, in easy it's best to not have more than two hircircles in a row

00:25:578 (2,3,4) - something like this will be hard too,
but it fits the song perfectly... maybe you can find an easier pattern

01:42:078 (1) - start on downbeat, in easy it would be best to only map 1/4 of the rhythm,
in normal something between 1/4 and 2/4 and hard 2/4 done

00:04:578 (3) - bit more curved so it points towards the next one done

00:21:378 (4) - missing DS Snap done

00:54:228 (1) - set the start of the spinner on the downbeat done

00:58:578 (1) - remove this hitcircle to get a little break between spinner and following objects,
so that a new player can regain his orientation after spinning done

01:13:578 (1) - reverse this one for a better flow

01:48:978 (1) - ^same

01:51:378 (1) - this one seems to be ok, but maybe you should reverse it too

01:54:978 (2) - ^^same

changed all those patern for better flow

maybe you want to read these guides:
t/86329
https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941
these apply mostly to E/N/H maps,
on higher diffs it's getting more complex due to spacing and jumps.

I'll do the other stuff later on, gotta go now :/

EDIT: Here itcomes~.~

Normal

00:02:178 (3) - curve bit more to point at the next object done
00:08:178 (1) - less curved done
00:54:228 (1) - i think you should start this one at the downbeat i prefer having it start here on difficulty highter than easy
00:58:578 (1) - you can include this one, but i think it would
be better if you'd remove it seems better if i leave it
01:06:078 (7) - rotate this one a bit into direction of following hitcircle done
01:42:078 (1) - downbeat

Hard

when playing this diff something feels off:/

00:05:778 (1) - bit less curved done
00:06:378 (2) - bit more curved done
00:13:428 (2) - copy'n'paste the first one here done
00:28:278 (3) - rotate/curve more done
00:38:478 (3) - looks kinda weird changed it slightly
00:54:228 (1) - downbeat
01:04:278 (3) - curve this one a bit more done
01:40:128 (1,2,3) - move these three onto the white tick those seems correct to me
01:42:228 (1) - downbeat
01:44:628 (1,2,3) - move these on downbeat and remove third one (?) moved them, but kept the third one

Insane

00:09:978 (5) - move this one a bit right
00:12:378 (7) - stack this one
00:14:778 (7) - ^same
00:17:178 (7) - ^same
00:24:378 (7) - ^same
00:37:578 (5) - remove unnecessary sliderpoints, you should be able to get this with one
00:39:378 (9) - ^same
00:54:228 (1) - downbeat
01:06:378 (1) - ^^same
01:15:378 (5) - ^same
01:43:578 (4) - ^same
01:54:978 (6) - ^same
done all of those

gl with your map

Len wrote:

from q

General:

1. i think offset should be 978 done
2. what do you think about change the diff name easy to normal, normal to advanced or hard and Hard to Insane?

Easy:

1. 00:25:578 (2,3,4) - a bit hard
2. 00:26:178 (4,1,2,3,4) - this flow make me cut myself orz changed the pattern
3. 00:59:178 (1,2,3) - , 01:00:978 (1,2,3) - same as above. 01:04:578 (2,3,4) - and etc simplified most of them
4. 01:24:378 - ~ 01:36:378 - pls map this section ...... done for all diff
5. 01:59:778 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - so many notes;w; try to add sliders instead done

Normal:

1. 00:12:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - try to make easier! done
2. 00:26:178 (4) - this flow is just wtf http://puu.sh/plaBc/b0958212a0.jpg i think its better :d done
3. 00:53:028 (9) - THIS SLIDER IS UNRANKABLE I THINK, ISNT IT? fixed
4. 01:24:978 - same as easy, no need to add breaktime here!

and so on...

gl anyways

wajinshu wrote:

Q

Easy:

1. 00:02:178 (3) - Ctrl + H and like this http://puu.sh/pmGkK/929ab4334f.png done
2. 00:03:978 (2,3) - Maybe blanket?
3. 00:17:778 (3,4) - Bad flow maybe this? http://puu.sh/pmGtt/90a20e03a0.png done
4. 00:34:578 (1,2) - this blanket can be better changed it a little bit
5. 00:37:578 (2) - remove and http://puu.sh/pmIU7/8fe7893247.png i prefer it like that
6. 00:52:578 (2,3) - CTR + G imo rhytm better must be done
7. 01:04:878 (3) - 01:15:078 (3) - Its easy remove this and other... pls done

Easy:

1. 00:24:828 (1) - in white tick pls done
2. 00:32:478 (2) - http://puu.sh/pmJcU/ffb09010a8.png done
3. 00:37:578 (2) - Same as easy but rhytm another i prefer it like that
4. 01:41:178 (4) - It can be more beautiful i like it like that
5. 01:45:378 (3) - http://puu.sh/pmJtb/9f66810c49.png done

gl~

nice_safaleen wrote:

from my modding queue

Other

- i think you should insert "My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic" in source field done
- Video file must be .avi file with no sound (not .mp4 file) fixed

Normal

00:24:978 (1) - NC
01:57:678 (6,7) - I think you should change position like this http://puu.sh/posjC/2b66f0f57e.jpg done
02:00:978 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/postr/53bbb57655.jpg done

Hard

01:09:978 (6,7) - blanket pls i prefer it like that
01:20:478 (1,2,3,4) - double tap is too hard for beginner I think change to slider I'm going to keep the double tap, i don't think it's too much for a hard difficulty
01:27:378 (1,2) - blanket pls done
01:47:928 (4,5) - change to slider
01:50:328 (4,5) - ^
01:52:728 (4,5) - ^

Insane

00:02:178 (7,8) - blanket pls done
01:08:928 (2,3) - be parallel done

I'm noob English pls forgive me

paydayzcool wrote:

Hi there Elirac,

This is a modding post from my queue.

Easy

00:04:578 (3) - Blanket error with 00:03:978 (2).
00:10:578 (1) - Blanket error with 00:11:778 (2).
00:27:378 (1) - Blanket error with 00:26:178 (3). none of these three are trying to be blanket sliders
00:30:978 (3) - Very slight but noticeable blanket error with 00:30:378 (2). fixed
00:37:578 (2) - Instead, maybe end this slider at 00:39:378? I prefer to have the slider last until the end of the vocals
01:13:578 (1) - Slight but noticeable blanket error with 01:14:778 (2). fixed
01:32:178 - This break here doesn't seem to fit with the song or the map. i think it fit
02:00:378 (3) - Slight but noticeable blanket error with 02:00:978 (1). fixed

Normal

CS 4 is a bit small for Normal diffs. Try 3 or 3.3 instead. i prefer to keep those CS
00:04:278 (4,5,6) - It is ok to have the triple before these notes, but changing these notes into a single slider seems like a better idea.i prefer to keep the circles
00:11:478 (2) - Slight but noticeable blanket error with 00:10:578 (1). This slider also shouldn't start on a red tick as it doesn't fit with the music. fixed
00:27:078 (1,2,3,4) - Try not to let these sliders overlap. fixed
00:37:578 (2) - As mentioned before in Easy diff, shorten this slider so that it ends on 00:39:378.
00:48:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Ouch, off timed area. Please remap, and don't use blue ticks. doesn't seems off timed to me, but i made a few change
00:59:478 (3,4) - In normal diffs, newer players will not be used to hitting the 4 straight after the 3. fixed
01:18:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Apologies, but it would better for you if you remapped this section. Use more longer sliders than circles and short sliders. made a few change on that section
01:32:178 - This break here doesn't seem to fit with the song or the map.
01:36:678 (1) - Remove this note as it jeopardizes newer players. i realy dont see how
01:47:478 (3,4) - In normal diffs, newer players will not be used to hitting the 4 straight after the 3. fixed

Hard

Whoah, calm down with ur circle size. Use CS 4 instead.
In short, have a look at this tutorial: t/55282
thanks for showing me this tutorial, i made a few change in the hard diff based on it.

Have a look at a few more new maps, and I'm sure you'll someday get the gist of mapping.

-paydayz

SherryCherry wrote:

hi

insane
00:07:278 (4) - ctrl+g for better flow done
00:26:178 (8,9,10) - can you reduce distance? done
00:26:778 (11) - a 1/2 slider instead since it fits the vocals and instruments a lot better done
00:29:178 (4) - ^ i prefer to leave it like that
01:00:228 (6,7,8) - This looks too uneven too i like it like that
01:50:028 (4,5,6,7) - it’s not a good idea to ignore snare sounds added a note
02:05:778 (5) - nc? don't think it's necessary

Good luck dude~

lazyboy007 wrote:

Bonjour de ma queue de mod.

Général:

Le blanket sur tes maps n'est pas bon. Ca fait tjr plus beau quand les sliders ont des formes bien rondes qui s'allignent parfaitement autour d'autres sliders ou cercles. Un bon exemple de map qui fait ca super bien si tu veux une référence serait xi - Ascension to Heaven. Dans l'intro tu le vois très bien.

Aussi, à mon avis renomme la "Hard" "Advanced" et la "Insane" "Hard". La dernière diff est trop simple pour être qualifiée d'insane.

Easy:

00:37:578 (2) - remplace par un spinner je trouve que le slidder va mieux
00:51:378 (4,1) - NC sur le 4 pas le 1 fait
00:59:178 (1) - je mettrais une note sur le tick d'avant trop près du spinner pour les joueur débutant
01:31:578 (2) - aucune raison de faire une pause ici, la musique ne se calme pas par rapport à avant
01:41:178 (3) - forme du slider un peu étrange modifié

Le flow est correct, on sent bien que la map fait bouger le curseur dans une direction spécifique. Les sliders ont des formes un peu ennuyante et peu de blanket, ca pourrait être amélioré ^^

Normal:

00:09:078 (2,3) - meilleur alignement serait plus beau fait
00:37:578 (2) - spinner
01:31:578 (4) - break sans raison
01:36:978 (2) - tu pourrais NC ici, c'est la que le beat commence, et deux NC d'affilés n'est pas un gros problème
01:39:378 (9) - ca ca doit NC par contre, le suivant n'a pas de raison d'être un début de combo fait
01:41:178 (4) - forme pas trop bonne

Hard:

L'espacement des streams et des triplets (donc de toutes les notes en 1/4) est trop haut pour la diff ^^ reduit l'espacement des 1/4

00:38:478 (3) - spinner, en plus ce slider n'est pas clean :p
01:31:578 (4) - pas de pause
01:52:728 (4,5) - BEAUCOUP trop de spacing, le reste ca allait mais ca c'est dur a lire et a jouer Corrigé
01:54:678 (3,4,5,6) - ce pattern aussi est très violent pour la diff Corrigé

Insane:

Pas trop fan du CS 5, je préfère 4, voire max 4,5, mais c'est ton choix

00:17:778 (1,2,3,4,5) - pour faire ce genre de pattern faudrait mettre l'ar à 9, la on voit difficilement ce qui se passe, d'ailleurs toute la map passe mieux en ar 9 ^^ la map est trop lente pour ar9 et je trouve ce pattern lisibleavec ar7.5
00:54:228 (1) - vu la difficulté vaudrait mieux mapper qqch de plus intéressant ici fait
00:59:478 (3,4,5) - mal aligné
01:31:578 (4) - la pause sans raison

Bon globalement il y a encore bcp d'erreurs, mais étant donné que c'est seulement ta deuxième map, c'est vraiment pas si mal. (personnellement ce que j'ai fait en deuxième map c'était l'horreur donc bref). Enfin voilà, je te souhaite beaucoup de chance dans ton mapping futur

Elirac wrote:

Merci pour le mod.

Insane

1. 00:17:778 (1,2,3,4,5) - considering the way u mapped the rest of the song and the sr , this the only hard part in ur map and can be hard to read because of such slow AR , so nerf it
2. 00:26:778 - this sound is louder than 00:26:478 - so make the louder sound clickable
3. 00:27:378 - make the downbeat clickable
4. 00:39:378 (9) - nc
5. 01:11:328 (2,3,4) - same spacing between 1/2's and 1/4's ? not a good idea
6. 01:17:178 - there a loud snare sound on this tick , i wonder why u didnt add a circle here
7. 01:32:178 - do u mind explaining why this part wasnt mapped?

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Hello~

Insane

1. 00:17:778 (1,2,3,4,5) - considering the way u mapped the rest of the song and the sr , this the only hard part in ur map and can be hard to read because of such slow AR , so nerf it i will think about it
2. 00:26:778 - this sound is louder than 00:26:478 - so make the louder sound clickable done
3. 00:27:378 - make the downbeat clickable i think it work better whith the sliders like that
4. 00:39:378 (9) - nc done
5. 01:11:328 (2,3,4) - same spacing between 1/2's and 1/4's ? not a good idea there's one beat beetween the two notes, i don't think players will be confused
6. 01:17:178 - there a loud snare sound on this tick , i wonder why u didnt add a circle here fixed
7. 01:32:178 - do u mind explaining why this part wasnt mapped? it give a small break to the player and make a better transition beetween two parts of the songs ( mapping on one set of vocals before the break and on another after and the transition is too suden without this break imo

well this map needs ALOT of improvement rhythm-wise and pattern-wise

gl anyways

1. Check the AImod

Neku okazaki wrote:

[Easy]
00:02:178 (3) - You can move it to x:104 y:196 done
00:03:978 (2,3) - You can do this better: done

00:06:378 (2,3) - Try to do other thing, this is too ugly done
00:06:978 (3,4) - Try to do this better too: done

00:10:578 (1,2) - Blanket here again done
00:17:778 (3,4) - done
00:26:178 (3,1) - Flow here, move to x:345 y:116 changed the flow of this pattern, but not like that
00:27:978 (2,3,4) - If you change the last point, reacomode this
00:58:578 - Notable sound, finish the spinner here 00:56:178 - and you can map this: 00:58:578 - done
01:06:378 (1,2) - Blanket done
Map from 01:32:178 - to 01:36:378 - why do you dont map this part? i thinks it's good to have a break here, it's not really interesting to map and it make a better transition to the rest of the map
01:42:378 (1,1) - The circle is too close from the slider, this is unrankeable, you can delethe the circle 01:44:778 (1) - fixed
01:50:178 (4,5) - Blanket here done

[Normal]

1. Check the AImod done

wtf, remap this part 00:48:978 (1) - 00:53:778 - tried a new thing for this part
Like the easy: 01:32:178 - 01:36:378 -

Try to do a check on this diff

[Hard]
00:36:678 - Notable sound, finish the slider here and put a circle next to this done

-5 Mins-

sdafsf wrote:

pony why

Insane

id recommend circle size 4.5 at maxi prefer to keep cs5
00:00:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - if you start of that quick you should keep the pace. every thing after this is mapped much thinner. so consider nerfing this or buffing the rest. the beginning is basically mapped at 200bpm while the rest is 100 i buff the rest of the map, so it doesn't stand out too much
00:04:278 (4,5) - if you are mapping at slow pace (100bpm) make this a long slider. right now its a kickslider which is really unfitting i think it work
00:11:928 (6) - this slider makes me think the actual bpm is 200bpm because sliders dont start on blue ticks. please change it. 100bpm is wrong this is definitely not a 200 bpm song
this doesnt mean you have to remap everything though. its just formality
00:12:978 (1) - this beat is not in the music it doesn't sound right if i remove it
00:14:028 (5,6) - dont make this slider parallel to the x-axis make it point to 5 done
00:15:378 (1,2,3) - this is some 2009 shit. its kinda ugly and doesnt fit the pace you mapped before. just stack them or line them up done
00:17:778 (1,2,3,4,5) - wow this mapptern is something for at least 4*. you mapped the song so slow before this. please change it done
00:18:678 (6,7,1) - in this section there is so much going on! map some more sliders
00:20:178 (5) - nc done
00:20:178 - in this section you mapped only the vocals. dont do that its no longer 2010 map the music too!
00:22:278 - this beat is a major exaple for what you didnt map everthough you should
i redone most of the map whith this and other point made by other moders, it should be way better now
00:27:678 (2,3) - these sliders dont fit together. within a combo make it so the sliders work well together done
00:28:278 (3,4) - you are missing out on so many beat you could map
00:29:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make a prettier pattern changed the patern
im sorry but im done with this song lol
just for some general tips and what i have noticed in your map. your map is very inconsitent in difficulty some parts play like ~4* and some play like ~2*. please try to keep a certain level of difficutly. also your map feels very awkward to play since you only mapped vocals. if you look at popular maps these days you will notice that only the strongest vocals are mapped while the rest of the map is focused on intruments (mainly drum/guitar) and on FLOW. i recommend you trying to learn from this map and not expecting to rank it. its pretty decent for a second beatmap you really have potential but noone ranks his first maps . try looking at ranked maps and figure out what they do and learn from it. GL!

Pentori wrote:

heya

[Insane]
00:02:178 (7,8) - stack as this is a 1/2 rhythm and will confuse players since you originally had 1/4 rhythms done
00:04:278 (4,5) - flow is strange here. try point the slider to the next note i prefer to keep it like that
00:11:178 (4,5) - make this a slider. 3/4 rhythm gaps are awkward to play i prefer to keep it like that
00:13:578 (4,5) - same for the rest of these tbh
00:33:378 (5,6,7) - flow is also quite awkward here. try introduce angles into your play, sth like http://puu.sh/qobNk/5ae7eee117.jpg changed the patern
00:37:578 (1,2,3,4) - not quite sure what ure following here. try follow the 1/4 drums
00:54:228 (1) - spinner doesnt feel good here because you are missing drum beats i think it fit better
so like u should try look at other mappers patterns and rhythms and analyse why they do it so that u can try it in ur own maps. ur mostly mapping like the old style maps where beats are just placed in curves or lines and it gets quite boring to play. u should try jumps and anti-flow to make your map more interesting

S A V E R Y wrote:

Bonjour! From my queue.
NM

[General]
Disable Countdown done

01:32:178 - Breaktime i don't know what you mean

Image here

[Normal]
00:57:378 (1) - This spinner is unrankable. done

Fix like this?

01:42:078 (1) - ▲ done
01:15:378 (5,6) - Fix the slider... done

[Hard]
00:30:378 (3) - Move to 159, 166 done
00:38:478 (4) - Is this slider instrumental? It's too confuse.
00:54:228 (1) - Move to 00:54:378, end to 00:56:178 i think it's better like that

[Insane]
00:07:278 (4) - Rotate (2˚, Clockwise, Selection Centre) done
00:54:228 (1) - Move to 00:54:378, end to 00:56:178

• General

1. this song have much 1/6 beat. listen carefully and try to fix them. or replacing them.
2. bg need to 16:9 or 4:3 ratio. (resolution >> 1366*768 or 1024*768) fix it for rank c:

• Normal

1. 00:04:878 (5,6) - keep distance for dont confuse when play.
2. 00:13:578 (6,7) - listen more carefully there is strong sound in 00:14:028 here. so try to fix like this >> http://puu.sh/r5mOJ/541618bb93.jpg
3. 00:16:728 (3,1,3) - 1/4 repeat beats on normal.. umm i dont think its nice for normal diff.
4. 00:26:178 (4) - ^ (same as above)
5. 00:27:678 (2,3) - dont overlap like those close rhythm objects on normal. it can give confuse when play.
6. 00:32:478 (2) - it same as other 1/4 repeat sliders. make it just 1/2 slider you dont need to take full rhythm for easy/normal just emphasize only strong beat.
7. 00:36:978 (1,2) - dont use like this (3/4) timeline for normal. better to make 00:36:978 (1) - this to single note.

• Hard

1. 00:22:878 (2,3) - i dont think this placement nice for hard diff. try to avoid overlap them.
2. if you make for vocal, i dont think 00:36:978 (1) - this need to new combo.
3. 00:50:328 (5,6,7,8) - i think this more fit to music http://puu.sh/r5mtt/77fd320969.jpg
4. 01:17:778 (8) - so pity that you ignored this downbeat.
5. 01:27:678 (2,3) - same as first mod on hard.

• Insane

1. 00:02:328 - feels weird because of there is empty.
2. 00:10:301 - fix your timline. its unsnapped
3. 00:11:178 (4,5,6) - like those objects, its better to using like this >> http://puu.sh/r5kFs/a0ce9de4cb.png for make better to play.
4. 00:24:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think, 00:25:128 - this vocal bit off for here. how about make them like >> http://puu.sh/r5lgP/b74ed24070.jpg ?
5. 00:38:178 (2,3) - listen (2)'s tail. i think that part is clickable. so.. i think this is better for that part >> http://puu.sh/r5lXt/a9b5e9afdd.jpg
6. 00:50:928 (9,10) - try to avoid overlap them.
7. 01:00:378 (2) - kinda feels uncomfortable when play. try to place like this >> [url]https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6052106
8. better to make 01:21:978 (6,7) - them to 1/2 slider same as like 01:23:178 (11) - this. because 01:22:278 (7) - this sound so weak than (6)'s vocal.[/url]