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Hioka Natsumi & Yasumoto Hiroki feat.Kumaide-mura no Minasan

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09kami
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09kami
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年2月9日 at 12:38:53

Artist: Hioka Natsumi & Yasumoto Hiroki feat.Kumaide-mura no Minasan
Title: KUMAMIKO DANCING
Source: くまみこ
Tags: kumamiko anime ending TV size Girl Meets Bear Lily Bread Narcissu TT Mouse kawaiwkyik wkyik rizia
BPM: 165
Filesize: 4194kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (3.94 stars, 283 notes)
  2. Lily Bread's Normal (2.02 stars, 152 notes)
  3. Narcissu's Easy (1.56 stars, 120 notes)
  4. Tt's Hard (3.15 stars, 241 notes)
  5. wkyik's Insane (5.25 stars, 350 notes)
Download: Hioka Natsumi & Yasumoto Hiroki feat.Kumaide-mura no Minasan - KUMAMIKO DANCING
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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insane by me
Tt's Hard by TT Mouse
Lily Bread's Normal by Lily Bread
Narcissu's Easy by Narcissu
wkyik's Insane by Rizia
Last edited by 09kami , edited 34 times in total.
[Crz]Makii
450 posts
Joined November 2014
[Crz]Makii
NM
[Narcissu's Easy]

  • N标啊...考虑换个难度名？怕有人找刺(
    没看出啥问题...本来也不会摸EZ和NM
[Lily Bread's Normal]

  • 有些绿线好像没用...删掉
    顺便ar5好像低了一些，类似于01:17:420 (4,5,6,7,8) - 01:20:330 (4,5,6,7,1) - 都好难读啊。。
    01:02:875 - 01:03:784 - 这里不用空出来吧，前面有一个Break了...
    好像也摸不出来什么( 真的不会摸ez nm
[Tt's Hard]

  • 00:12:693 (2,3) - 这俩有重叠不大好看
    00:54:330 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - hard别出现连续3连比较好吧...2 3 4可以换折返
    good diff
[Insane]

  • stack0.3 我先报个警再说
    00:38:511 (1) - 取消NC
    00:54:330 (2) - 01:00:148 (2) - 这挡的太彻底了...不是3.9应该出现的吧
    01:27:239 (3,4,5) - ctrl+G,更顺一些，4和5叠
    我还是不建议3.93的图用stack0.3的配置，像这种00:15:239 (2,3,4,5) - 基本上没办法让玩这个难度的玩家读明白，stack后接跳由于是完全遮挡也是很不好打的。整个diff中大量的circle接滑条也不是很好打，太频繁很容易导致读图出问题然后爆炸
考，想着好好摸结果还是水摸了= =问题基本没啥
无耻求mu啊
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
绿线是复制音效的副产物，先不删，要是主难度改了音效，复制过来以后又会多出来绿线

一点也不难读

我就是要空出来

no change

09你还原的不太彻底耶...我把漏的一个圈补上了

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AudioFilename: KUMAMIKO DANCINGTV size.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 26693
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.2

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Title:KUMAMIKO DANCING
TitleUnicode:KUMAMIKO DANCING
Artist:Hioka Natsumi & Yasumoto Hiroki feat.Kumaide-mura no Minasan
ArtistUnicode:日岡なつみ & 安元洋貴 feat.熊出村のみなさん
Creator:09kami
Version:Lily Bread's Normal
Source:
Tags:kumamiko anime opening TV size Girl Meets Bear Lily Bread Narcissu TT Mouse
BeatmapID:947541
BeatmapSetID:440388

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09kami
828 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
09kami

Lily Bread wrote:

绿线是复制音效的副产物，先不删，要是主难度改了音效，复制过来以后又会多出来绿线

一点也不难读

我就是要空出来

no change

09你还原的不太彻底耶...我把漏的一个圈补上了

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09kami
828 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
09kami

[Crz]Sword wrote:

NM
[Narcissu's Easy]

  • N标啊...考虑换个难度名？怕有人找刺(
    没看出啥问题...本来也不会摸EZ和NM
[Lily Bread's Normal]

  • 有些绿线好像没用...删掉
    顺便ar5好像低了一些，类似于01:17:420 (4,5,6,7,8) - 01:20:330 (4,5,6,7,1) - 都好难读啊。。
    01:02:875 - 01:03:784 - 这里不用空出来吧，前面有一个Break了...
    好像也摸不出来什么( 真的不会摸ez nm
[Tt's Hard]

  • 00:12:693 (2,3) - 这俩有重叠不大好看
    00:54:330 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - hard别出现连续3连比较好吧...2 3 4可以换折返
    good diff
[Insane]

  • stack0.3 我先报个警再说
    00:38:511 (1) - 取消NC fixed√
    00:54:330 (2) - 01:00:148 (2) - 这挡的太彻底了...不是3.9应该出现的吧 fixed√
    01:27:239 (3,4,5) - ctrl+G,更顺一些，4和5叠 fixed√
    我还是不建议3.93的图用stack0.3的配置，像这种00:15:239 (2,3,4,5) - 基本上没办法让玩这个难度的玩家读明白，stack后接跳由于是完全遮挡也是很不好打的。整个diff中大量的circle接滑条也不是很好打，太频繁很容易导致读图出问题然后爆炸
SL不打算改
考，想着好好摸结果还是水摸了= =问题基本没啥
无耻求mu啊
Gyro Zeppeli
94 posts
Joined January 2014
Gyro Zeppeli
NM
辣鸡新人麻婆来水一波

  • [Narcissu's Easy]

    00:34:511 (4) - 做个弯的滑条？


    [Insane]
    00:11:966 (1) - 觉得这个滑条可放下面点这样顺手一些

    01:14:330 (5) - 不确定这个阶段的玩家能不能读到这个```

好像没什么问题啊```有点水...T T
09kami
828 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
09kami

Gyro Zeppeli wrote:

NM
辣鸡新人麻婆来水一波

  • [Narcissu's Easy]

    00:34:511 (4) - 做个弯的滑条？


    [Insane]
    00:11:966 (1) - 觉得这个滑条可放下面点这样顺手一些 fixed√

    01:14:330 (5) - 不确定这个阶段的玩家能不能读到这个``` 应该没问题吧

好像没什么问题啊```有点水...T T
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
m4m

General

  1. combo颜色呢？

Insane

  1. 00:14:148 (7) - 显然反向更好玩。
  2. 00:35:784 (2,3) - 这个跳太大了。。。差不多再2/3就好。。。
  3. 00:43:966 (1) - 碰血条。
  4. 00:52:693 (1,2,3) - 和00:53:420 (1,2,3) - note都分开咯，不然后面stream怎么混。
  5. 00:57:784 (4,1) - 这种1/1跳处理的不好，00:57:420 (3,4) - 这种1/2跳那么大，最蛋疼的就是见到这种无意中放出来的ds梗了，打起来难受的要命。
  6. 01:25:420 (2) - 建议反向，理由略。
  7. 正因为是简单的难度更应该认真做才对。。。很多跳柑橘还是欠考虑。。。

Tt's Hard

  1. 00:30:875 (1) - 碰血条。
  2. 00:40:875 (6) - ^.
  3. 01:01:057 (7,1) - 想办法弄大这个跳。
  4. 01:27:602 (8) - 这里应该nc。
  5. 总体质量不错，不过既然要搞规则排版，01:26:511 (5,6) - 这种blanket你就搞搞好呗，全图如此，自己在包的时候多注意点咯。

Lily Bread's Normal

  1. 00:46:511 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 低难度不要连续放那么多note，即使你觉得这是好梗，首先，这是normal。
  2. 00:52:693 (1) - 出界。
  3. 00:57:057 (3) - ^
  4. 总体没什么大问题，接下来就是考虑去思考如何在这种低难度也能做出比较好看的谱面这件事情了。。。

Narcissu's Easy

  1. 01:07:966 (2) - 出界。
听说这个番挺好看，然而已经一年没看新番了。。。

good luck
09kami
828 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
09kami

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

General

  1. combo颜色呢？ fixed√

Insane

  1. 00:14:148 (7) - 显然反向更好玩。 fixed√
  2. 00:35:784 (2,3) - 这个跳太大了。。。差不多再2/3就好。。。 fixed√
  3. 00:43:966 (1) - 碰血条。 fixed√
  4. 00:52:693 (1,2,3) - 和00:53:420 (1,2,3) - note都分开咯，不然后面stream怎么混。 fixed√
  5. 00:57:784 (4,1) - 这种1/1跳处理的不好，00:57:420 (3,4) - 这种1/2跳那么大，最蛋疼的就是见到这种无意中放出来的ds梗了，打起来难受的要命。 fixed√ 修改了下位置
  6. 01:25:420 (2) - 建议反向，理由略。 fixed√
  7. 正因为是简单的难度更应该认真做才对。。。很多跳柑橘还是欠考虑。。。

Tt's Hard

  1. 00:30:875 (1) - 碰血条。
  2. 00:40:875 (6) - ^.
  3. 01:01:057 (7,1) - 想办法弄大这个跳。
  4. 01:27:602 (8) - 这里应该nc。
  5. 总体质量不错，不过既然要搞规则排版，01:26:511 (5,6) - 这种blanket你就搞搞好呗，全图如此，自己在包的时候多注意点咯。

Lily Bread's Normal

  1. 00:46:511 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 低难度不要连续放那么多note，即使你觉得这是好梗，首先，这是normal。
  2. 00:52:693 (1) - 出界。
  3. 00:57:057 (3) - ^
  4. 总体没什么大问题，接下来就是考虑去思考如何在这种低难度也能做出比较好看的谱面这件事情了。。。

Narcissu's Easy

  1. 01:07:966 (2) - 出界。
听说这个番挺好看，然而已经一年没看新番了。。。

good luck
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m


Lily Bread's Normal

  1. 00:46:511 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 低难度不要连续放那么多note，即使你觉得这是好梗，首先，这是normal。
    //? 这个是1/1单点呀？没问题的吧？
  2. 00:52:693 (1) - 出界。
  3. 00:57:057 (3) - ^
    //这个算出界吗...总之改掉了
  4. 总体没什么大问题，接下来就是考虑去思考如何在这种低难度也能做出比较好看的谱面这件事情了。。。

听说这个番挺好看，然而已经一年没看新番了。。。

good luck
//thanks for mod
AgeSheRi
55 posts
Joined May 2013
AgeSheRi
insane
00:07:420 (5) - 这个辣条可以往右转90度 然后大概叠到00:08:330 (8) - 的位置。。这样flow好像比较顺。 而且00:08:330 (8) - 本来单独在那里和旁边几个NOTE看起来不怎么好看。叠一下稍微有点美观？大概

00:12:693 (2) - 这里感觉这么放美观？https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5073410

00:15:239 (2) - 这个好像不叠在一起会打起来带感一些 大概这样https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5073415

00:25:784 (1,2) - 也是有点不太好看 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5073419瞎摆一个大概做个参照

00:39:420 (6) - 这里一段新的节奏 这样做白线有点怪怪的 可以把6 移到5 然后白线开始弄一段梗

00:41:057 (1,2) - 00:42:511 (1,2) - 这一段直辣条有点枯燥 可以把2都拉弯？ 能看出来00:41:602 (2) - 是想重合前面一个辣条。。不过总体有点枯燥

00:43:784 (5,1) - 辣条弯度比较小。。有点半扣的感觉 可以稍微拉远一点 或者再弯一点

00:54:784 (5,6) - 这个和前面一个拉条拉开会好玩点的 5和6拉近一点点就可以了 如果是想和00:57:057 (1,2,3) - 对应的话。。那起码把00:54:511 (4,5,6) - 辣条尾巴和56连成一个直线 直辣条弄弯弧度的456连起来不好看

01:00:148 (2,3,4) - 这个三联角度不好。。一个是在这个图里突兀 一个是和上一个NOTE太近了。。

01:01:420 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这个不错 务必保留

01:05:784 (1,2,3,4) - 这个感觉没flow 可以把2弄到左下 3还是右边 近一点的位置 不过后面估计都得动。。有点麻烦 你自己取决一下吧= =

啊差不多。。只能看看排列 。。不太懂音效。。低难度也不太会了 就摸个这个难度吧
我也挺喜欢这个动画片，有点小H的 萝莉番 好棒棒的
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
N標應該沒有問題

fix all

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KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
KaedekaShizuru
[General]
确定是出自某部游戏、动画、电视剧、电影的曲目 必须填source
くまみこ
而且这首歌是ending 把tags里的opening删了
还是建议全部slider静音

[Insane]
00:28:693 (1,2,3,4) - 曲子处于升调 不建议反过缩小DS 至少跟00:27:966 (1,2,3,4) 同
00:29:420 (1) - 适当调整其与00:29:057 (3,4) 的间距 顺便我建议使用红锚点或者让弧度向slider中间靠，00:30:875 (1,2) 同 同时让这两个有一点blanket关系
00:34:511 (3) - 建议拆成四个circle小跳 至少也别搞多次往返
00:36:511 - 建议不要漏音
00:39:966 (1,2,3,4) - 我觉得把00:39:966 (1,2) 合成一个slider而把00:40:330 (3,4) 拆成4个circle做间距增大的跳比较合曲
00:43:784 (5,1) - 忍不住吐槽一下 超难看啊
00:45:420 (1) - 感觉一个slider带掉两个挺重的鼓点不太合适
01:10:148 (1) - CTRL+G
01:21:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 能不能跟01:18:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) 有那么一点不同啊
01:27:966 (1) - 拆成两个circle跳

[Hard]
00:45:420 - 你确定减速是从这里开始的吗？我怎么觉得应该从00:46:875 开始
others fine
不过我觉得KIAI的节奏可以多样化一点


[Normal]
00:49:784 (1) - 呃……我以为会跟00:47:602 (3) 叠一起 是手滑么
01:26:148 (3,4,1,2) - try this：http://puu.sh/oTU1J/37960036fe.jpg


[Easy]
01:27:966 (1) - move this NC to 01:27:602 (4)
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[Normal]
00:49:784 (1) - 呃……我以为会跟00:47:602 (3) 叠一起 是手滑么
//叠好了~

01:26:148 (3,4,1,2) - try this：http://puu.sh/oTU1J/37960036fe.jpg
//稍微动了一下，不过这里还是不要叠比较好，整个diff里只有1/2是叠起来的

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另外AImod怎么突然报了一堆DS问题..看了一下都是误报，无视了
silverZx
2 posts
Joined January 2016
silverZx
so hard. i think u should lower the hp drain
09kami
828 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
09kami

[Crz]Sword wrote:

NM
[Narcissu's Easy]

  • N标啊...考虑换个难度名？怕有人找刺( N标应该没问题
    没看出啥问题...本来也不会摸EZ和NM
[Lily Bread's Normal]

  • 有些绿线好像没用...删掉
    顺便ar5好像低了一些，类似于01:17:420 (4,5,6,7,8) - 01:20:330 (4,5,6,7,1) - 都好难读啊。。
    01:02:875 - 01:03:784 - 这里不用空出来吧，前面有一个Break了...
    好像也摸不出来什么( 真的不会摸ez nm
[Tt's Hard]

  • 00:12:693 (2,3) - 这俩有重叠不大好看
    00:54:330 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - hard别出现连续3连比较好吧...2 3 4可以换折返
    这两个地方我看了下 在hard里应该没什么问题
    good diff
[Insane]

  • stack0.3 我先报个警再说
    00:38:511 (1) - 取消NC
    00:54:330 (2) - 01:00:148 (2) - 这挡的太彻底了...不是3.9应该出现的吧
    01:27:239 (3,4,5) - ctrl+G,更顺一些，4和5叠
    我还是不建议3.93的图用stack0.3的配置，像这种00:15:239 (2,3,4,5) - 基本上没办法让玩这个难度的玩家读明白，stack后接跳由于是完全遮挡也是很不好打的。整个diff中大量的circle接滑条也不是很好打，太频繁很容易导致读图出问题然后爆炸
考，想着好好摸结果还是水摸了= =问题基本没啥
无耻求mu啊
09kami
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Gyro Zeppeli wrote:

NM
辣鸡新人麻婆来水一波

  • [Narcissu's Easy]

    00:34:511 (4) - 做个弯的滑条？ 这个滑条应该是00:33:784 (3) - 的复制粘贴


    [Insane]
    00:11:966 (1) - 觉得这个滑条可放下面点这样顺手一些

    01:14:330 (5) - 不确定这个阶段的玩家能不能读到这个```

好像没什么问题啊```有点水...T T
09kami
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Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

General

  1. combo颜色呢？

Insane

  1. 00:14:148 (7) - 显然反向更好玩。
  2. 00:35:784 (2,3) - 这个跳太大了。。。差不多再2/3就好。。。
  3. 00:43:966 (1) - 碰血条。
  4. 00:52:693 (1,2,3) - 和00:53:420 (1,2,3) - note都分开咯，不然后面stream怎么混。
  5. 00:57:784 (4,1) - 这种1/1跳处理的不好，00:57:420 (3,4) - 这种1/2跳那么大，最蛋疼的就是见到这种无意中放出来的ds梗了，打起来难受的要命。
  6. 01:25:420 (2) - 建议反向，理由略。
  7. 正因为是简单的难度更应该认真做才对。。。很多跳柑橘还是欠考虑。。。

Tt's Hard

  1. 00:30:875 (1) - 碰血条。 fixed√
  2. 00:40:875 (6) - ^. fixed√
  3. 01:01:057 (7,1) - 想办法弄大这个跳。 fixed√
  4. 01:27:602 (8) - 这里应该nc。 fixed√
  5. 总体质量不错，不过既然要搞规则排版，01:26:511 (5,6) - 这种blanket你就搞搞好呗，全图如此，自己在包的时候多注意点咯。

Lily Bread's Normal

  1. 00:46:511 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 低难度不要连续放那么多note，即使你觉得这是好梗，首先，这是normal。
  2. 00:52:693 (1) - 出界。
  3. 00:57:057 (3) - ^
  4. 总体没什么大问题，接下来就是考虑去思考如何在这种低难度也能做出比较好看的谱面这件事情了。。。

Narcissu's Easy

  1. 01:07:966 (2) - 出界。 [/color]
听说这个番挺好看，然而已经一年没看新番了。。。

good luck
09kami
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AgeSheRi wrote:

insane
00:07:420 (5) - 这个辣条可以往右转90度 然后大概叠到00:08:330 (8) - 的位置。。这样flow好像比较顺。 而且00:08:330 (8) - 本来单独在那里和旁边几个NOTE看起来不怎么好看。叠一下稍微有点美观？大概

00:12:693 (2) - 这里感觉这么放美观？https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5073410

00:15:239 (2) - 这个好像不叠在一起会打起来带感一些 大概这样https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5073415

00:25:784 (1,2) - 也是有点不太好看 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5073419瞎摆一个大概做个参照

00:39:420 (6) - 这里一段新的节奏 这样做白线有点怪怪的 可以把6 移到5 然后白线开始弄一段梗

00:41:057 (1,2) - 00:42:511 (1,2) - 这一段直辣条有点枯燥 可以把2都拉弯？ 能看出来00:41:602 (2) - 是想重合前面一个辣条。。不过总体有点枯燥

00:43:784 (5,1) - 辣条弯度比较小。。有点半扣的感觉 可以稍微拉远一点 或者再弯一点

00:54:784 (5,6) - 这个和前面一个拉条拉开会好玩点的 5和6拉近一点点就可以了 如果是想和00:57:057 (1,2,3) - 对应的话。。那起码把00:54:511 (4,5,6) - 辣条尾巴和56连成一个直线 直辣条弄弯弧度的456连起来不好看

01:00:148 (2,3,4) - 这个三联角度不好。。一个是在这个图里突兀 一个是和上一个NOTE太近了。。

01:01:420 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这个不错 务必保留

01:05:784 (1,2,3,4) - 这个感觉没flow 可以把2弄到左下 3还是右边 近一点的位置 不过后面估计都得动。。有点麻烦 你自己取决一下吧= =

啊差不多。。只能看看排列 。。不太懂音效。。低难度也不太会了 就摸个这个难度吧
我也挺喜欢这个动画片，有点小H的 萝莉番 好棒棒的
这个摸我记得改了 不过Post可能因为网络问题没回上来 印象中只改了两个地方 都是比较主观的flow问题 其他的基本没大碍就不改了
09kami
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KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[General]
确定是出自某部游戏、动画、电视剧、电影的曲目 必须填source
くまみこ
而且这首歌是ending 把tags里的opening删了 fixed√
还是建议全部slider静音 fixed√

[Insane]
00:28:693 (1,2,3,4) - 曲子处于升调 不建议反过缩小DS 至少跟00:27:966 (1,2,3,4) 同 噗 这个地方我解释下 这里是榻榻米做的SB音效段 原曲这个地方虽然音调也是升高 但音量是递减的 所以我才缩小了DS
00:29:420 (1) - 适当调整其与00:29:057 (3,4) 的间距 顺便我建议使用红锚点或者让弧度向slider中间靠 fixed√，00:30:875 (1,2) 同 同时让这两个有一点blanket关系 这个为啥要有blanket 这里只是复制粘贴啊
00:34:511 (3) - 建议拆成四个circle小跳 至少也别搞多次往返 不
00:36:511 - 建议不要漏音 这个地方是故意漏的 因为前面那个圈我想跟人声 所以放的大跳 后面虽然有声 但因为前面那段大跳 并且人声的消失 所以这里选择性忽略还有个原始是给玩家有一个大跳后的休息段 虽然才有个大跳 但在这个难度里或许就算是一个大跳 后面放一个休息段能让新手玩家稍微感受下善良
00:39:966 (1,2,3,4) - 我觉得把00:39:966 (1,2) 合成一个slider而把00:40:330 (3,4) 拆成4个circle做间距增大的跳比较合曲 关于这里 我的解释是前面两个Note是男性的人声 后面两个滑条是女性的声音 为了区分出来才这样放的
00:43:784 (5,1) - 忍不住吐槽一下 超难看啊 no blanket pls
00:45:420 (1) - 感觉一个slider带掉两个挺重的鼓点不太合适 保留看法 看飞球怎么说
01:10:148 (1) - CTRL+G 这个地方不用啊 因为是同一个折角方向走的
01:21:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 能不能跟01:18:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) 有那么一点不同啊 这里是故意留的梗
01:27:966 (1) - 拆成两个circle跳 fixed√

[Hard]
00:45:420 - 你确定减速是从这里开始的吗？我怎么觉得应该从00:46:875 开始 从我的角度来看 榻榻米应该是想从这个比较突出的笛声开始减速 应该没问题
others fine
不过我觉得KIAI的节奏可以多样化一点


[Normal]
00:49:784 (1) - 呃……我以为会跟00:47:602 (3) 叠一起 是手滑么
01:26:148 (3,4,1,2) - try this：http://puu.sh/oTU1J/37960036fe.jpg


[Easy]
01:27:966 (1) - move this NC to 01:27:602 (4) fixed√
Fycho
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[General]
  1. 统一所有难度widescreen support;
  2. soft-hitfinish.wav似乎并没有用到;
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:602 (3,1,1) - 这三个滑条组合起来看起来不是很美观，http://puu.sh/poLfk/d3d07cb5b0.jpg;
  2. 00:34:511 (3) - 换成单折返+一个circle/两个非折返会比现在好点，双折返坑读图;
  3. 01:11:239 (5) - 离前面的太近，建议0.8/0.9x的间距;
  4. 01:25:420 - 滑条头可以加finish，配合着曲子里的cymbal音;
  5. 01:26:148 - 01:26:511 - 01:26:875 - ^;
[Tt's Hard]
  1. 00:00:330 (1) - 头上加默认的soft finish;
  2. 00:09:057 (1,2) - 这里为什么不用正常间距1.3x？跟周围一比一个1.7x很奇葩;
  3. 01:13:057 (1) - 略丑，建议换种形状比如http://puu.sh/poLGX/bad868c64c.jpg;
[Lily Bread's Normal]
  1. 00:27:784 (3,4) - 平行下，现在看着很随机很乱;
  2. 00:46:511 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 正六边形？看起来位置比较随机，是个大概的位置; 个人还认为Normal连续这么多的1/1circle对Normal来说不是很友好，建议00:46:875 (1,2,3,4) - 合并为两个1/1的滑条;
  3. 01:23:784 (5) - 头上clap;
  4. 01:25:420 (2,3,4) - 这边所有白线可加finish随曲;
  5. 这个难度里有些弯曲比较厉害的滑条看起来不是很美观，比如00:06:875 (3) - 00:28:693 (5) - 建议缩小弯曲程度; 另外00:11:966 (1) - 00:12:693 (3,4) - 另外这些保持相同的弯曲程度看起来会更neat;
[Narcissu's Easy]
  1. 01:24:693 (1,2,3,1,1) - 这边KIAI结束，间距可以回到1.1x;
  2. 01:25:420 (2) - 01:26:148 - 可以加finish;
我觉的Normal需要在细节美观上下点功夫，先这样吧GL~
Lily Bread
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Lily Bread's Normal
◾00:27:784 (3,4) - 平行下，现在看着很随机很乱;
//好

◾00:46:511 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 正六边形？看起来位置比较随机，是个大概的位置; 个人还认为Normal连续这么多的1/1circle对Normal来说不是很友好，建议00:46:875 (1,2,3,4) - 合并为两个1/1的滑条;
//这个真不想动。怎么听都应该是9个圈，没必要硬做成滑条

◾01:23:784 (5) - 头上clap;
//好

◾01:25:420 (2,3,4) - 这边所有白线可加finish随曲;
//好

◾这个难度里有些弯曲比较厉害的滑条看起来不是很美观，比如00:06:875 (3) - 00:28:693 (5) - 建议缩小弯曲程度; 另外00:11:966 (1) - 00:12:693 (3,4) - 另外这些保持相同的弯曲程度看起来会更neat;
//这个算喜好问题吗？我从来都是重新拉滑条，如果所有滑条都长得一样的话我觉得太单调了
09kami
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Fycho wrote:

[General]
  1. 统一所有难度widescreen support; fixed√
  2. soft-hitfinish.wav似乎并没有用到;
fixed√

[Insane]
  1. 00:11:602 (3,1,1) - 这三个滑条组合起来看起来不是很美观，http://puu.sh/poLfk/d3d07cb5b0.jpg; fixed√
  2. 00:34:511 (3) - 换成单折返+一个circle/两个非折返会比现在好点，双折返坑读图; fixed√
  3. 01:11:239 (5) - 离前面的太近，建议0.8/0.9x的间距; fixed√
  4. 01:25:420 - 滑条头可以加finish，配合着曲子里的cymbal音; fixed√
  5. 01:26:148 - 01:26:511 - 01:26:875 - ^;
fixed√

[Tt's Hard]
  1. 00:00:330 (1) - 头上加默认的soft finish; fixed√
  2. 00:09:057 (1,2) - 这里为什么不用正常间距1.3x？跟周围一比一个1.7x很奇葩; fixed√
  3. 01:13:057 (1) - 略丑，建议换种形状比如http://puu.sh/poLGX/bad868c64c.jpg;
fixed√

[Lily Bread's Normal]
  1. 00:27:784 (3,4) - 平行下，现在看着很随机很乱;
  2. 00:46:511 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 正六边形？看起来位置比较随机，是个大概的位置; 个人还认为Normal连续这么多的1/1circle对Normal来说不是很友好，建议00:46:875 (1,2,3,4) - 合并为两个1/1的滑条;
  3. 01:23:784 (5) - 头上clap;
  4. 01:25:420 (2,3,4) - 这边所有白线可加finish随曲;
  5. 这个难度里有些弯曲比较厉害的滑条看起来不是很美观，比如00:06:875 (3) - 00:28:693 (5) - 建议缩小弯曲程度; 另外00:11:966 (1) - 00:12:693 (3,4) - 另外这些保持相同的弯曲程度看起来会更neat;
[Narcissu's Easy]
  1. 01:24:693 (1,2,3,1,1) - 这边KIAI结束，间距可以回到1.1x; fixed√
  2. 01:25:420 (2) - 01:26:148 - 可以加finish;
fixed√

我觉的Normal需要在细节美观上下点功夫，先这样吧GL~
感谢
Lily Bread
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Lily Bread
那9个圈我改成了一个转盘，开头的转盘我就删掉了
Fycho
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Bubbled!
ZZHBOY
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ZZHBOY
DO NOT QUALIFY THIS MAP until ensuring those ogg files can be used for hitsounds.
Fycho
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Using ogg hitsounds disobeys current ranking criterias. Until we get further comfirmation that the rule is outdated and not applied, your shouldn't use them for rank.

Edit: ogg hs are not supported now.
09kami
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Fycho wrote:

Using ogg hitsiounds disobeys current rank criterias. Until we get further comfirmation that the rule is outdated and not applied, your shouldn't use them for rank.
fixed√
ogg hitsiounds → wav hitsiounds
Narcissu
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Narcissu
咋不喊我改图呢= =

静流说的那个NC 也帮我移到白线后面吧
09kami
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Narcissu wrote:

咋不喊我改图呢= =

静流说的那个NC 也帮我移到白线后面吧
确认了下 应该是水仙搞忘了 之前说忙让我帮改摸
还有静流那个地方NC之前是下了的 但飞球IRC时让我把那个NC去掉了
ZZHBOY
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...来看看吧
[Easy]
00:46:875 (1,2,3,4) - 可以包好点
[Normal]
00:06:875 (3,4) - 好丑啊
00:11:966 (1,3,4) - 这种地方复制粘贴然后翻转下好看的多
01:15:057 (5,6,7) - 这里几个连续三个1/2 那些红线开始的滑条感觉不太好 可以试试这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5498819
[Hard]
00:10:875 (6) - 弧度弄小点
00:30:511 (4) - 也是^
00:43:239 (3) - 这里去跟那些1/2的音啊 用1/1的滑条带过去感觉不好
00:54:330 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 别放连续的1/4 这里比I都难按了 简化下
01:07:057 - 01:09:966 - 还有几个类似的地方我觉得完全没必要空着 放个圈还连续点
01:17:239 - 也是建议加个圈
[Insane]
00:11:966 (1,1,2) - 明明1/2的地方有鼓 强行去放3/4跟人声又何必
00:20:511 (8,9) - 节奏换下 那个滑条尾巴的地方有点蛋疼
00:25:784 (1) - 也是有1/2音的 别随手就是一个3/4 没什么意思
00:32:330 (5) - 类似这种地方我觉得完全可以和前面离远点啊...
00:37:420 (3,4,5) - 这里flow太蛋疼了 可以考虑改下排列
00:41:602 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:43:602 (4,5,1) - 这种完全可以包好看点啊
01:18:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:21:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这么懒的...?=.=
01:26:511 (1,2) - 太远了 2和01:26:330 (5) - 叠一下就可以了

:)
09kami
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ZZHBOY wrote:

...来看看吧
[Easy]
00:46:875 (1,2,3,4) - 可以包好点 fixed√ 不过感觉改了后好像还是看不出什么区别 思考
[Normal]
00:06:875 (3,4) - 好丑啊
00:11:966 (1,3,4) - 这种地方复制粘贴然后翻转下好看的多
01:15:057 (5,6,7) - 这里几个连续三个1/2 那些红线开始的滑条感觉不太好 可以试试这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5498819
[Hard]
00:10:875 (6) - 弧度弄小点 fixed√
00:30:511 (4) - 也是^ fixed√
00:43:239 (3) - 这里去跟那些1/2的音啊 用1/1的滑条带过去感觉不好 fixed√
00:54:330 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 别放连续的1/4 这里比I都难按了 简化下 fixed√
01:07:057 - 01:09:966 - 还有几个类似的地方我觉得完全没必要空着 放个圈还连续点 fixed√ 01:14:330 - 这个地方我感觉感觉这段节奏 可以当做DIAI的休息段 所以这里没加
01:17:239 - 也是建议加个圈 fixed√
[Insane]
00:11:966 (1,1,2) - 明明1/2的地方有鼓 强行去放3/4跟人声又何必 00:12:148 - 这个音我感觉可以不跟 因为声音很轻 比人声要轻很多 00:12:511 - 这里改了跟鼓声
00:20:511 (8,9) - 节奏换下 那个滑条尾巴的地方有点蛋疼 fixed√
00:25:784 (1) - 也是有1/2音的 别随手就是一个3/4 没什么意思 fixed√
00:32:330 (5) - 类似这种地方我觉得完全可以和前面离远点啊... fixed√
00:37:420 (3,4,5) - 这里flow太蛋疼了 可以考虑改下排列 fixed√
00:41:602 (2,3,4,5) - ^ 这里我感觉没必要改啊 也不卡手 而且00:41:966 (3,4,5,1) - 和00:43:057 (2,3,4,5) - 同一类型的
00:43:602 (4,5,1) - 这种完全可以包好看点啊 其实这个地方开着DS挺难选位置包00:43:784 (5) - 的 考虑了下 我还是把00:43:966 (1) - 移到了右边
01:18:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:21:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这么懒的...?=.= 这个地方其实也不算偷懒吧 我只是想在最后摆一个稍微不同的梗 这里正好两段节奏重复的 于是就有了这个单点
01:26:511 (1,2) - 太远了 2和01:26:330 (5) - 叠一下就可以了 fixed√

:)
:) :)
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
Normal
00:06:875 (3,4) - 好丑啊
//这..感觉没什么问题呀

00:11:966 (1,3,4) - 这种地方复制粘贴然后翻转下好看的多
//上面也提到过了，这样做你会觉得好看但是我会觉得很单调

01:15:057 (5,6,7) - 这里几个连续三个1/2 那些红线开始的滑条感觉不太好 可以试试这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5498819
/*
我觉得你这样放很奇怪..要改的话大概也是这样
http://puu.sh/pK9iz/24c55ac6e6.jpg
不过这样又跟前面太像了..为了区别，还是算了
*/
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
nb
Squichu
1,013 posts
Joined November 2012
Squichu
hey there! :3
from my queue--

General
  1. drum-hitwhistle.was has a 6ms delay, any delay higher than 5ms is unrankable, so please fix that
Narcissu's Easy
  1. 00:17:784 - to 00:27:966 - you're using Normal sampleset and it's the only one with audible sliderslide, how about silencing it to be consistent throughout the diff?
  2. 00:26:511 (5) - consider adding NC here and remove on 00:27:966 (1) - to match your NC pattern, would also be consistent with 00:49:784 (1,2) -
Lily Bread's Normal
  1. nothing to complain about except for the beginning? All other diffs start at 00:00:330 - , only this one 6 seconds later, which doesn't make any sense to me. :c Why didn't you map them?
Tt's Hard
  1. NCs in the beginning are inconsistent with the rest of the diff, how about adding them at 00:07:420 (4) - and 00:10:693 (5) - ?
    also at 00:33:602 (4) - and 01:02:875 (5) -
Insane
  1. there are a few similar patterns like 00:04:693 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:16:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:27:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:51:239 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:18:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:21:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:23:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - but Ncs are different everywhere, how about making them consistent?
  2. 00:34:511 (3,4) - should be 4 circles too, imo, cause it's the exact same rhythm as all of the ones mentioned ^
  3. 00:39:420 (6) - similar here, sound on the downbeat and the 1/2 afterwards should be circles,no? same for 00:40:330 (3,4) -
  4. 00:44:511 (2,1) - hmh, I like the pattern and slowdown is okaaay, but the only way players can tell there is a slowdown on (1) is the slidertick, which is well covered by the previous slider, consider re-arranging this so it's better visible?
  5. 01:16:511 (1) - any reason for NC here? remove
  6. 01:18:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:21:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why exact same placemente? Plays pretty boring, imo. s: Consider changing one of the patterns to make this more interesting to play
hmh, overall the set looks okay to me, but personally I don't agree with all of the SV changes in the highest diff. They don't seem to go well with the music at all times, especially this slowdown 00:44:511 (2,1) -.. the SV changes from 1.25 to 0.75 while the music barely changes.. and stuff like that seems too exaggerated. Maybe these things were addressed before, but I can't read any of the prev mods, so.. yup. s:

I'm not popping the bubble since technically everything (except for the hitsound delay) is fine, but I won't qualify it either because it doesn't meet my personal quality standard. Sorry. x:
And best of luck!
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
Lily Bread's Normal
◾nothing to complain about except for the beginning? All other diffs start at 00:00:330 - , only this one 6 seconds later, which doesn't make any sense to me. :c Why didn't you map them?

//hmm..it's intro, so i think spacing it is ok.
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu

ZZHBOY wrote:

...来看看吧
[Easy]
00:46:875 (1,2,3,4) - 可以包好点……fix
zz mod

Squichu wrote:

hey there! :3
from my queue--

General
Narcissu's Easy
  1. 00:17:784 - to 00:27:966 - you're using Normal sampleset and it's the only one with audible sliderslide, how about silencing it to be consistent throughout the diff?……Hitsound not by me Orz …… but i think here should be soft, fix
  2. 00:26:511 (5) - consider adding NC here and remove on 00:27:966 (1) - to match your NC pattern, would also be consistent with 00:49:784 (1,2) - ……fix
nice mod thx

SPOILER
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:KUMAMIKO DANCING
Artist:Hioka Natsumi & Yasumoto Hiroki feat.Kumaide-mura no Minasan
ArtistUnicode:日岡なつみ＆安元洋貴 feat.熊出村のみなさん
Creator:09kami
Version:Narcissu's Easy
Source:くまみこ
Tags:kumamiko anime ending TV size Girl Meets Bear Lily Bread Narcissu TT Mouse
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Bara-
11,955 posts
Joined April 2013
Bara-
Let's see

[General]

Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
drum-hitwhistle.wav This one has a complete silence at the start, the others have a really low sound, so consider fixing them. I'll pop the bubble for this sound
drum-hitwhistle3.wav
drum-hitwhistle4.wav
drum-hitwhistle5.wav
drum-hitwhistle6.wav
drum-hitwhistle8.wav
drum-hitwhistle9.wav
normal-hitclap2.wav

[Narcissu]
00:26:511 (5) - Why does this not have an NC, while 00:49:784 (1) - does have one?
00:27:966 (1) - Why does this have an NC, while 00:51:239 (2) - doesn't have one?
01:26:148 (3) - Make it 2/1 to follow the vocals better
Nice diff

[lily bread]
Consider adding a spinner at the start, like easy
Nice diff

[Tt]
00:01:420 (2,1) - Why are these 2 stacked, while the others all seem to go down?
00:04:693 (2) - Add an NC, as it's a large change in music
00:04:693 (2,3,4,5) - These sliders look very cramped, please make them less cramped by reducing their curve
00:06:875 (3,4) - Blanket is off (a bit)
00:10:693 (5,6,7) - Blanket is off (quite a lot)
00:14:875 (1,2,3) - Pretty bad blanket, please fix
00:17:784 - What's the point of the SV change?
00:25:693 (4) - This is a triplet, which doesn't appear in Insane. Remove this, Hard shouldn't be more complex than Insane
00:43:602 (4,1) - What's the point of this? It's a rather wonky overlap, and actually only makes it look worse... Why not blanket (1) arouns (4)'s tail?
00:45:420 - This SV change is really not noticable at all, since it's so sudden, and there are no sliderticks which allow for reading them
00:54:693 (3,4,5) - This pattern is such an overkill. The fact that there is a 1/4 right before this makes it even harder. Please make it a 1/4 slider
00:57:057 (1,2,3,4) - Similar issue. You you have to deal with a jump from a circle (which, as opposed to sliders, is not lenient at all)
00:57:420 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern looks rather weird, due to strange back and forth movement. Why not try something as a triangle?
00:59:966 (1,2,3,4) - Similar issue as 2 above
01:15:966 (1,3) - Well rip blanket
01:17:420 (5) - Nc please, so it indicates a jump
01:20:330 (5) - Why does this not have increased spacing, while 01:17:420 (5) does?

Uhh, this diff needs a lot more work. The polishing is really low; the blankets are off, overlaps etc.
The NCing feels weird, and some spacing makes no sense. You also need to make sure no parts are harder than Insane, since Insane>Hard>Normal>easy

[Insane]
00:11:966 (1) - What's the point of this slowdown + extended slider? I think just a circle would work better
00:15:239 (2) - Why is this stacked with 00:15:420 (3,4) - ? Don't they have different sounds? (2) follows vocals, (3,4) follow the drums, so they should be seperated from eachother. Having (3,4) stacked is fine though, just not on (2)
00:17:602 (8,1) - This stack really makes it lose emphasis, please space them
00:18:148 (2,3) - Blanket please
00:19:602 (5,7) - Please make them symmetrical
00:19:602 (5,8) - Please fix this overlap
00:22:875 (1) - Why does this get a NC? It feels rather weird to have a random 3 combo, while the NCs used to follow the vocals
00:27:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It increases in pitch, so why does the spacing get lower? 00:04:693 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - At least made sense in this matter
00:32:693 (1,1) - The stack/overlap is pretty bad. Please align them properly
00:34:511 (3,4,1) - The stack makes this pattern play really weird. Move (4) to 487:192 please
00:43:966 (1,2) - Why not Make (2) a perfect symmetrical slider, based on (1) (Ctrl HJ)
00:45:420 (1) - This slowdown is really awkward, it doesn;t even make sense based on the music
01:01:420 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part plays and looks rather awkward. Especially the jump from 01:01:057 (7) - makes it play really awkward
01:16:511 (1) - What's the point of this NC? Remove it, since it's not a significant sound or downbeat
01:21:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Sorry to tell you, but this plays absolutely terrible. The music has a solid rhythm which you seem to ignore, by having a full singletap pattern with a few random stacks. Please listen carfully to the music and redo this part. If you stack (1,2) and (5,6) of both parts, it seems to follow the music much better!
01:27:602 (5) - Nc, since this sound stands on itself, and has nothing to do with the rest of this combo

Uh yeah, this diff also needs quite the work. It lacks polishing, and quite some stacks really feel awkward

Even though I popped, don't call me back. I popped over an unrankable issue (the hitsound delay), not over anything quality related

Anyways, good luck!!
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