hihi. nm from
queuelol that previous modder
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[General]
seems good
[Easy]
00:26:246 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:27:641 (1,2,1) - i reckon you should space this out horizontally for flow. this gives you more room to work with and allows you to avoid the slider head overlaps with 00:29:037 (1,1) - if you move 00:30:432 (1) - so that it flows downwards from 00:29:735 (2) -
http://puu.sh/ph4Et/60ec1ca2eb.jpg01:20:665 (1,2,3) - triangle?
01:25:548 (3) - pretty sure this should be 1/1 to end on the same sound that 01:24:676 (2) - ended on
[Normal]
00:16:479 (2) - you followed the guitar here i assume? well theres another guitar strum that you missed which made the rhythm feel hollow. maybe try something like
http://puu.sh/ph4Wt/bbd517d581.jpg00:34:618 (1) - move this down so it flows in a pentagon shape
00:36:711 (2) - so here you followed this sound but you ignored the one starting on 00:36:188 . <- you should include that one
01:09:502 (1) - use the same slider as 01:08:107 (4) -
01:24:676 (1,2,3,4) - something like this would work a whole lot better.
http://puu.sh/ph5ca/cab277c80c.jpg[Hard]
00:17:002 (4,5) - same as what i said in normal where you ignored the guitar
00:36:014 (1,2) - swap ncs. the variance would be nice to indicate the difference in music
00:37:409 (3) - i would much rather this be 2 circles since you did it here 00:36:188 (2,3,4,5) -
00:48:397 (6,1) - the spacing here should be larger than 00:48:572 (1,2) - not the other way around
00:55:548 (1,2) - ctrl g rhythm. suits vocals better
00:59:560 (5,1) - make this a 1/1 slider to achieve consistency with 01:00:955 (1) -
01:13:514 (6,1) - same as what i said earlier about spacing
01:15:083 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - rhythm is bad tbh. try a variance of
http://puu.sh/ph5xa/de4ee32c73.jpg01:18:397 (2,3,4,1) - ^ 01:18:397 (2) - should be deleted and 01:18:572 (3,4) - shifted back a 1/2 tick 01:19:269 (1) - should be a 1/1 slider
[Insane]
00:11:246 - this beat should be clickable and belongs to 00:11:421 (4)
00:17:002 (4,5) - guitar
00:23:804 (2) - 2 circles represents this better since 00:23:455 (1) - is a held guitar note
00:25:025 (2,3) - ctrl g rhythm
00:45:781 (1) - 2 circles
00:46:130 (2,3) - ctrl g rhythm
00:46:653 (4,5) - ^
00:59:386 (4,1,2) - change this to how you did it here 01:00:955 (1) -
http://puu.sh/ph61V/cf5c975a60.jpg01:03:921 (1,2,3) - these are wonky
01:15:083 (1,2,3,4,5) - the rhythm isn't quite represented correctly here again. check hard for what i said and apply it so that it works
Pentori wrote:
01:15:083 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - rhythm is bad tbh. try a variance of http://puu.sh/ph5xa/de4ee32c73.jpg
01:21:188 (2,3,4,1,2) - try rework this rhythm too. save sliders for held vocals
01:25:200 (4,5,6) - this isn't a triplet
01:25:374 (6) - the slider end should be clickable.
here is the main rhythm:
listen to it and try to create variations of it. don't add notes that don't belong there and make sure the important beats are clickable.
[Extra]
not gonna mod the extra because you used a similar rhythm so you can probably look it over yourself and change things up instead of me repeating things. also make sure you fix parts like 00:10:723 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - and 01:24:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
hope this helped! gl with rank