Interlude- wrote:

Interlude's Modding Queue
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[SHD]
00:16:290 - If you intended to double any basses and snares, you are missing a note here. Add a note, maybe at 2. If it was intended, well, It is a SHD difficulty, so I personally think those who are already capable of handling this difficulty, can also handle those fast notes. My reason for this: SHD uses MX layering without any triples, if I go on to create the doubles at those areas, I'll be worried that it will end up like the original difficulty that I made prior to SHD, where there were countless handstreams that made it almost impossible for most people to pass

If you wish to follow my suggestion above, then here are few more

00:16:518 - At 4
00:16:746 - At 1
00:18:115 - At 1
00:19:939 - At 1
00:20:167 - At 4
00:20:396 - At 1
00:21:764 - At 1
00:23:589 - At 1
00:23:817 - At 3, and 00:24:045 - At 4. *Here, watch out for balance. You could always add a note, and re-pattern or variate
00:25:413 - At 1
00:27:238 - At 4
00:27:466 - At 3
00:27:694 - At 3
00:29:062 - At 1

01:22:923 - Here, you could delete one note. There's no sound to emphasize. Although it signals the highlight, still triple all of a sudden seems awkward for me. Applied. Same for SC
01:57:644 - I think there's a bass. Add a note at 4
02:05:751 - Same, a bass here This section is basically a slowdown of the kiai and the start, so seeing that it might break the consistency a little bit, I will go against it for now. I'll apply it if another mod tells me to. Same for the one above

-> Highlight section of the song 01:23:788 - goes off with 285 bpm, which is faster than the first jumpstream part. That's the reason why I did not suggest the same add-ons of notes as i did previously. It is a HARD and stamina-taking song and honestly I don't dare touching any further on those patterns

[SC]
00:35:220 (35220|1) - Delete, since you gave 5 single notes each same section Applied
01:12:281 (72281|1) - Delete to follow the pattern, and I didn't hear any bass here Applied
01:12:966 - This section seems very similar to SHD pattern. You could lower the difficulty here, maybe deleting a note each second and fourth pattern, like this. Changed

Maybe I'm done here, call me back if you want any further mod, or in case you didn't understand my mod.
Also, feel free to reject my mod, if you think it was not good enough.
Good luck!!!

Protastic101 wrote:

Hi, posting again to let you know I finished my mod that I should have finished long ago XD

Protastic101 wrote:

When I'm too lazy to open my queue, so I go to other people's queues to find maps XD Also, it's pretty late when I started this, so expect an incomplete mod until I get the chance to finish this (Friday or Saturday maybe?) Wait, was this song used in a MWC or something? It sounds familiar, but I like it

Weee, I'm done!

Column 1|2|3|4

Red: My notes on the change
Blank: Accepted

General

- So, if this is going for rank, you're going to need to make an Easy difficulty that's under 2* or nerf your current Normal one as this is unrankable atm. Perks of starting a mod and not finishing it until two days after.
- The timing. Ouch.
- Yeah, ok, so I just test played your Normal, and you definitely should make an Easy or find a GDer because of the 1/2 snaps in Normal at 263.077 bpm are probably way too difficult for a beginning player to hit.
- You should also add some stuff in your tags. Consider using this map as a reference for your metadata. The tags are just players that contributed to that map, since no one helped me in the making of this one I'm leaving it blank for now
- Lastly, why the audio lead in? There's stuff that can be mapped there (the steady 1/2 beat for example). Ah well. Timing it would probably be hell though wouldn't it? XD

EZ

Comments: Alright, basically my only problem with this diff was the note - LN combination that's basically the same as normal. At this tempo, I feel like it's just too fast for a beginner, and also the fact that most of it is on the same hand, like 01:37:472 (97472|1,97577|0,97893|2,98314|2,98419|3,98735|1) for example. I think I'd just extend the LN to encompass the note, remove the note, and call it good.
00:36:817 (36817|2,36931|0,37387|3) - Shift this down to 00:36:703 cause that's where the sound starts.
00:36:817 (36817|0,37273|3) - Also, this LN and the note I highlighted should end/be at 00:37:159
00:58:369 (58369|3,59281|0,60194|1) - I don't think overlapping LN's like these should be in an EZ difficulty. People at this level are still learning finger independence (even at 4k) and this will probably trip a lot of people up since they don't have the same ending points. I suggest ending 00:58:369 (58369|3) at 00:59:281 where the first LN starts.
01:02:018 (62018|2,62931|3,63843|1,64755|0,65667|2,66580|0,67492|1,69317|0,70229|1) - Etc, basically what I said above. I'd just touch their ends and starts together rather than have them overlap.
01:23:346 (83346|0) - Start this at 01:22:923 and end at the same place it ends at now.

NM

00:23:246 (23246|0) - I suggest moving this to 2 because I think it reads a little nicer since it's not in the same column as 00:23:474 (23474|0) only one beat later.
01:12:966 to 01:20:264 - This is probably me sounding (and probably acting) like one of those people who are like, "Ew, no, change your map because it doesn't fit my expectations" (I swear, that's never my intention) but I really don't recommend having triples in a Normal difficulty. I mean, I think it works just fine if it's only doubles in this section because I can't really hear anything that's accented in the music to warrant triples. Just my 2 cents.
01:22:064 (82064|2,82501|1) - Hm, why are these disconnected? It's the same musical phrase as 01:20:264 (80264|3,81176|0) so remove 01:22:501 (82501|1) and end 01:22:064 (82064|2) at 01:22:923
01:22:064 and 01:22:501 - Add notes? I guess it's just for the aesthetics since you have notes where 01:20:264 (80264|3,81176|0) begin, if above is rejected.
01:57:644 - Add a note here for the drum hit.
- Not much to find here. Well made NM diff.

HD

Comments: From my test play, all I can say is, wow. This song's timing is an utter nightmare at the end (though not as much as Roze), but it was still well done. So yeah, I like it, even if I can't play some parts of it well lol.
00:14:352 to 00:14:580 - Add a simple 1/4 burst here for the drum roll sound? So something like this maybe
00:19:483 (19483|1,19597|0) - Control J? To avoid hitting 00:19:825 (19825|0) only a beat after 00:19:597 (19597|0)
00:35:904 to 00:36:132 - Missing 1/4 burst here? contradicts with the previous mod but okay then
00:50:843 - Make double for the drum kick here
00:54:492 - ^^
00:58:141 - ^^
01:07:036 - Missing a note here for the snare, so add and make it a double.
01:07:492 (67492|0) - I'm pretty sure this ends at 01:09:088 Well crud, I didn't point that out in the Normal diff, so you should probably apply this there too.
01:10:685 - Missing a note for the snare.

MX

Comments: Woahh, did metadata change? I swear, the diffs used to be named Normal and Hard, etc. Ah well. Also, I can't play 4* very well, so prepare for a crap mod. MX was initially the HD diff but became MX because I was so indecisive xD
00:16:290 - Make double for kick?
00:16:518 - ^^
00:16:746 - ^^
00:18:115 - ^^ And so on, I'll just stop here in case you purposely left these out. I am worried that it gets too overlayered and players have a hard time playing it if it was doubles, so I'll be rejecting it for now unless another mod tells me it's ok (also MX used SHD layering and they're almost identical in terms of doubles)
00:35:904 (35904|0,36132|2) - In between these notes should be a 1/4 burst. If you left it out because of 00:36:018 (36018|3,36018|2) I'd suggest removing one of those notes because there's only a kick, and no other accent to make it a double. (Well, it's a little bit louder, but at other parts with this same sound, you left the notes as singles). again, contradicts with the previous mod but okay
00:44:343 - Hi, missing note here? The rest of this section is 1/2 beat, this is the only place without a note on the red tick.
00:47:194 - Make double for kick.
00:50:843 - ^^
00:54:492 - ^^
00:58:141 - ^^
00:59:510 (59510|1,59510|0,61334|0,61334|3) - Not just these notes, but just some examples. I understand that these are doubles to accent the *slightly* louder drum sound, but I don't think it's loud enough to be made into a double, so remove one note from each set? Also, you only use a single note to represent them in places like at 01:06:352 and 01:04:071
01:05:439 - Make this a double though cause of the snare?
01:57:644 - Make this a double because of the drum sound.

I'm not good enough to mod SC or SHD lol.
Edit: So the metadata did get changed and you added a diff. Welp, great, my mod is probably void now XD. But I'ma mod EZ now cause I like EZ diffs.

1. I think EZ's catch is not good,00:14:580 - there is a strong rhythm,and I think It should be have a note,every 2/1 line to catch rhythm.
   Main rhythm is in every 2/1 line.
2. 00:29:176 - should be the LN start,and end in 00:29:632 - with a note.
3. I think this diff is not good,main problem is catching,hope to recatch.

1. I think bpm263's 1/2 is a little hard for NM diff,try to remove some double notes to make it easier,anyway,it's a perfect diff.

1. to notice,00:14:808 - every 2/1 line you catch 2 notes,I under
2. stand it,but in 00:43:773 - start you used 1/1 double notes(00:44:685 (44685|3,44685|1,44913|0,44913|2,45141|3,45141|0) -) to listen there, 00:45:141 (45141|3,45141|0) - is stronger than before,i think it needs 3 notes or remove before's double notes.
3. 01:01:106 - add a note here,every 2/1 lines catch 2 notes,and 01:05:667 - 01:08:404 - 01:12:966 - has same question
4. GOOD

1. to recheck your strong rhythm's catch.00:14:580 (14580|1,14580|3,14694|2,14808|3,14808|0,14808|1,14922|1,15036|2,15150|0,15150|1,15264|3,15264|2,15264|0) - 1/2 lines note set 2,1,3,1,1,2,3;
   but00:15:492 (15492|2,15492|0,15606|3,15720|1,15720|2,15720|0,15834|2,15948|1,15948|0,16062|3,16062|2,16176|0,16176|1,16176|3) - there is 2,1,3,1,2,2,3;plz make them to be same,and I think2,1,3,1,2,2,3 is more suitable.
2. 00:29:176 - there should be 3notes and 00:29:404 - there is double notes,it's more suit music,00:30:089 - and so on has this problem.
3. 00:35:790 - 00:36:474 - In MX I suggest don't miss these 1/4 rhythm,catch them plz.
4. 00:42:860 - 00:43:773 - not 1/3,it not suitable.maybe you can use some 1/6.
   recheck for a long time I think it's good,but 1/3 listened strange..
5. 00:45:369 - add a note,every drum you catched 2 notes but there not,00:49:018 - 00:52:667 - 00:56:317 - is same.
6. kiai's problem is same as first point.

1. it's a 4.72 map,and actually it's above 5 stars,so try to put some regular patterns.
2. to avoid 00:17:374 (17374|3,17431|0,17488|1,17545|2,17545|0) - too much these parttens,it's much harder than some patterns like 00:19:711 (19711|3,19768|2,19825|1,19825|0) - and Certainly is not suit for 4.72 stars.too hard map will get lower rating and players will compain it.
3. 00:42:860 (42860|3,42898|2,42936|1,42974|3,43012|2,43050|0,43088|1,43127|2,43165|1,43203|3,43241|0,43279|1,43317|3,43355|2,43393|3,43431|1,43469|0,43507|2,43545|3,43583|2,43621|0,43659|1,43697|3,43735|2,43773|3,43773|0) - these 1/6 is too hard,try to this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5112599
4. in your kiai,285bpm streams with those irregular parttens is confusing.it's too hard to play and will make player hate these map.
   it has same problem in SHD,you should use more regular patterns like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5112612 ,certainly need to fix to make them suit music,it is only a model,plz thinking more

[Crz]Sword wrote:

NM from my queue
[General]
there are some useless inherited lines,like 00:14:580 - 00:42:860 - and so on,plz delete them. Removed

[EZ]

1. I think EZ's catch is not good,00:14:580 - there is a strong rhythm,and I think It should be have a note,every 2/1 line to catch rhythm.
   Main rhythm is in every 2/1 line.
2. 00:29:176 - should be the LN start,and end in 00:29:632 - with a note.
3. I think this diff is not good,main problem is catching,hope to recatch.

yeah easy diffs are not my thing xd. I'll refine it when I have the time
Edit: That's the best I could do actually XD, my weakness in mapping is the easier stuff because a lot of factors are removed

[NM]

1. I think bpm263's 1/2 is a little hard for NM diff,try to remove some double notes to make it easier,anyway,it's a perfect diff.

[HD]

1. to notice,00:14:808 - every 2/1 line you catch 2 notes,I under
2. stand it,but in 00:43:773 - start you used 1/1 double notes(00:44:685 (44685|3,44685|1,44913|0,44913|2,45141|3,45141|0) -) to listen there, 00:45:141 (45141|3,45141|0) - is stronger than before,i think it needs 3 notes or remove before's double notes. Triples added
3. 01:01:106 - add a note here,every 2/1 lines catch 2 notes,and 01:05:667 - 01:08:404 - 01:12:966 - has same question Added
4. GOOD

I will finish MX SC SHD mods after 2 hours xD

[MX]

1. to recheck your strong rhythm's catch.00:14:580 (14580|1,14580|3,14694|2,14808|3,14808|0,14808|1,14922|1,15036|2,15150|0,15150|1,15264|3,15264|2,15264|0) - 1/2 lines note set 2,1,3,1,1,2,3;
   but00:15:492 (15492|2,15492|0,15606|3,15720|1,15720|2,15720|0,15834|2,15948|1,15948|0,16062|3,16062|2,16176|0,16176|1,16176|3) - there is 2,1,3,1,2,2,3;plz make them to be same,and I think2,1,3,1,2,2,3 is more suitable. i checked this, 00:15:948 (15948|1,15948|0) - has a stronger sound than 00:15:036 (15036|2) - so i would reject this
2. 00:29:176 - there should be 3notes and 00:29:404 - there is double notes,it's more suit music,00:30:089 - and so on has this problem. again, 00:30:089 - stronger sound here than 00:29:176 -
3. 00:35:790 - 00:36:474 - In MX I suggest don't miss these 1/4 rhythm,catch them plz. Did this in SC, not sure if I want to do it here so I'll ignore that for now
4. 00:42:860 - 00:43:773 - not 1/3,it not suitable.maybe you can use some 1/6.
   recheck for a long time I think it's good,but 1/3 listened strange..
5. 00:45:369 - add a note,every drum you catched 2 notes but there not,00:49:018 - 00:52:667 - 00:56:317 - is same. there isn't really a strong drum sound here... places like 00:50:843 - and 00:54:492 - are stronger than those so I added 2 notes, but for those, they're not strong enough
6. kiai's problem is same as first point.

[SC]

1. it's a 4.72 map,and actually it's above 5 stars,so try to put some regular patterns.
2. to avoid 00:17:374 (17374|3,17431|0,17488|1,17545|2,17545|0) - too much these parttens,it's much harder than some patterns like 00:19:711 (19711|3,19768|2,19825|1,19825|0) - and Certainly is not suit for 4.72 stars.too hard map will get lower rating and players will compain it.
3. 00:42:860 (42860|3,42898|2,42936|1,42974|3,43012|2,43050|0,43088|1,43127|2,43165|1,43203|3,43241|0,43279|1,43317|3,43355|2,43393|3,43431|1,43469|0,43507|2,43545|3,43583|2,43621|0,43659|1,43697|3,43735|2,43773|3,43773|0) - these 1/6 is too hard,try to this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5112599
4. in your kiai,285bpm streams with those irregular parttens is confusing.it's too hard to play and will make player hate these map.
   it has same problem in SHD,you should use more regular patterns like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5112612 ,certainly need to fix to make them suit music,it is only a model,plz thinking more

SC revised a little, but the streams are still pretty much broken to keep it challenging
SHD soon
Edit: oh god what have i done xD I'll probably not revise it too much because it deters a lot from my mapping style, I'll still keep a bit of it, just toned down a bit

Crazy map,gl!

hikikuman wrote:

Mod request from where.

Column
1 | 2 | 3 | 4

HD

make 00:35:904 - had same pattern like 00:33:167 - because thee pitch on them are same. try to compare hd and nm, for ex at here 00:33:167 - imo http://puu.sh/oOOqM/40cc79f32c.jpg but at 00:35:904 - imo http://puu.sh/oOOtw/9c4e6cf3ea.jpg
00:46:738 (46738|0) - move to 2
00:49:018 (49018|1,49474|2,49703|1,49703|3) - try to ctrl H for balance so the col 1 isn't empty
for me, pattern like this 00:58:597 (58597|0,58825|0) - isn't comfortable. try to re-arrange or use my suggestion at 00:58:141 - http://puu.sh/oOOLb/eb4e9bb710.png
01:02:703 (62703|3,62931|0) - ctrl G so you didn't stuck 3 note at col 1
as you can see, there's similar pattern at 01:20:264 - http://puu.sh/oOPHn/fd487de180.png try to re arrange this ln 01:20:264 (80264|0,81176|3) - like 01:22:064 (82064|0,82282|3,82501|0,82712|3,82923|0) -
01:53:098 (113098|3) - move to 3

NM

00:19:711 (19711|1) - move to 3 then 00:19:825 (19825|3) - to 2
00:23:018 (23018|1) - move to 4
00:29:176 (29176|3,29404|2,29518|3) - avoid pattern like this. it isn't comfortable to play. try to move 00:29:176 (29176|3) - to 2 or you can re arrange by yourself
00:47:194 - missing note
00:50:843 - 00:54:492 - 00:58:141 - 01:05:439 - 01:16:387 - also
01:22:923 (82923|3) - delete
02:05:749 - missing note

EZ

00:28:948 (28948|1,30317|2) - move 1x to right for balance so the col 4 didn't empty
00:34:422 (34422|0) - move to 2
i didn't to interesting for this pattern 00:36:018 (36018|0,36703|0,37159|3,37615|3,38071|0,38527|0) - , it's because this' easy. and i think 00:36:018 (36018|0,36703|0) - is too hard to play. try to move 00:36:703 (36703|0,37159|3,38071|0) - to 2, 3 and 2. or you can re arrange by yourself
01:00:650 (60650|0) - move to 4
01:07:948 (67948|0) - ^3
01:07:492 (67492|1,69088|1) - this' same like i told above. move 01:09:088 (69088|1) - to 3
01:37:893 (97893|2,98735|1) - ctrl H then 01:39:577 (99577|2) - move to 3
01:42:103 (102103|2,105051|1) - move 1x to left
01:47:156 (107156|0,108840|1) - ^1x to right

The song is not bad but i just feel it likes 2nd speedcore 300 lol. But, I like it:3 (generally pp rain). Good luck for your beatmap and have a nice day!

jukkaduei wrote:

JUKKADUEI

From NM Req.

Column |1|2|3|4|

EZ

01:50:736 - Delete this note Done

NM

00:16:062 - Delete this note
00:17:887 - ^
00:19:711 - ^
00:21:536 - ^
00:23:360 - ^
00:25:185 - ^
00:27:010 - ^
00:28:834 - ^

I think I'll just leave them there

HD

HD is fine

MX

MX is fine

SC

00:28:777 - Move to column 1
00:28:834 - Move to column 3
01:52:173 - Move to column 1
01:52:227 - Move to column 3

All accepted

SHD

SHD is fine

Good luck with your beatmap

Nivrad00 wrote:

From Nivrad00's Mania Queue

Whew this'll be a beast if it gets ranked

box

EZ
Got nothing

NM
00:51:983 - it seems a bit intuitive to stop putting jacks after this point. Wouldn't it be better if the difficulty increased as the song progressed? I'll add a few more jacks then

In the higher diffs when I say "double for kick," some of them may be pretty hard to hear, but I believe they exist because it would be consistent in the drum sequencing.

HD
00:47:194 - double for kick?
01:12:966 - same below
01:16:387
01:20:036
00:49:703 - triple for snare

MX
01:12:738 - double for kick
01:16:387 - same below
01:20:036
02:05:751
01:38:630 - this map seems to have trouble deciding whether this pattern should have a single or double! You may want to make it consistent. I think most of the time it's a double, so I've listed below the places where there are singles instead: Reduced to singles instead
01:41:998
01:43:682
01:45:366
01:47:051
01:48:735
01:50:419

SC
00:35:220 - should be a single based on your previous layering
00:40:694 - same
00:55:860 - double for kick

SHD
00:42:860 - it seems like this stream is easier in SHD than it is in SC
00:57:685 - double for kick
00:58:141 - same below
01:01:790
02:05:751

As simple as this map is, I'm not experienced enough at 4k to comment on the actual patterning. Good luck though!

Ochasan wrote:

hi~

sorry fo took long request~ busy for another time when i am going to work -_-

here my mod

MOD

HD
for HD, i wanna tell you that note on 1/4 snap is simple but please make them easier for read because this is Hard difficulty

just that (lmao, is too good)

MX
00:07:282 to 00:10:018 add a note for white snap don't understand why I should do this because the beats are not strong at the start
02:06:023 add a note same, the note doesn't represent any sound
for jack i am not sure to mod, ask another modder when can mod then

SC
please make stairs with 1/4 snap for easier reading, like the empress stairs don't really appeal to me at all, so I might only do a few to make it more readable
SHD
same too, but add a bass in 1/4 like tokyo teddy bear

sorry for mod, i just can take it
on my own this map can be harder in MX to SHD it's coll

PnX wrote:

1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Nice and Solid map~

Mod

1. Some suggestion : This is all position that have to be double and it will loop all over the stream in this mapset
   00:14:580 - 00:14:808 - 00:15:150 - 00:15:264 - 00:15:492 - 00:15:720 - 00:15:948 - 00:16:062 - 00:16:176 - 00:16:290 - 00:16:404 - 00:16:518 - 00:16:632 - 00:16:746 - 00:16:974 - 00:17:089 - 00:17:317 - 00:17:545 - 00:17:773 - 00:17:887 - 00:18:001 - 00:18:115 - 00:18:229 - 00:18:457 - 00:18:799 - 00:18:913 - 00:19:141 - 00:19:369 - 00:19:597 - 00:19:711 - 00:19:825 - 00:19:939 - 00:20:053 - 00:20:167 - 00:20:281 - 00:20:396 - 00:20:624 - 00:20:738 - 00:20:966 - 00:21:194 - 00:21:422 - 00:21:536 - 00:21:650 -
   On my observation, some of it didn't doubled. So, change it

For SHD? Oh god... I'm worried that it would be too hard for players to play with that kind of density, seeing that it happened in the original difficulty... but since this is the second mod that suggested this I'll go ahead and do it, and see what's the outcome of it

But I'm actually scared of the 285bpm section... With the extra layering on it the chart looks very brutal...

Other diff seems to be fine. Take a star~

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi o/
NM req from my queue, Sorry for late ;w;

[General]

BG is not fine, its should be 1366x768 or 1280x720

there's an std Version of this map and ranked. maybe you can took the BG from there. alright, i'll change it
(Dunno if you notice this one yet, I downloaded this map since you requesting on my queue xD, so i thought you already changed this)

1|2|3|4

SPOILER

[SHD]

I dont think HP 9 is suitable tho, considering this diff is a "jumpstream fest" xD. you could make it least same as SC or 8,7 yep, 9 is very harsh, but I don't really want to have people mash the stream so I'll just use 8.7
[SC]

00:35:562 - maybe you could make the stream like this:

just my personal opinion. you decide

00:42:860 - stream here seems more harder to read than SHD. maybe make this kinda easier?


01:22:923 (82923|0) - pretty sure this shouldnt be here. SHD only have two notes for this

[MX]

01:07:492 (67492|3) - LN should end at - 01:09:088 - due to the noise you were follow still continue.

01:22:923 (82923|3) - delete, compare with SHD.

[HD]

01:09:088 (69088|2) - move to right one column, avoid triple stacking ( - 01:08:632 (68632|2,68860|2,69088|2) - )

01:20:036 (80036|2) - move to 1. avoid triple stacking too


[NM]

01:00:194 (60194|1) - should end at - 01:01:790 -

01:07:492 (67492|1) - also this ^

01:19:808 (79808|3) - move to 1 (personal opinion to make it more-well spreaded-notes, i guess :> )

[EZ]

00:14:580 - maybe you could add one note here, so the players could get the kick rhythm more properly afterwards. well, the kick is kinda louder too.

00:43:773 - add one note. kick

01:12:966 - add. you dont want to make it looks like an std convert, right? consider the end of the LN in mania specific doesnt have a "slider-end-hit"

01:23:346 - make an LN starting here -> then end the LN here and add one note on col 2 - 01:23:788 - . gives better approaches for newbie players

This one is kinda pretty solid map, nice job ><b I was expecting you were came from stepmania community or such xD
Good luck furthermore

KcHecKa wrote:

osu!mania 4K mod from KcHecKa
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Overall:
Wow, nice Hit sounds hahahahahaha
I personally prefer the slower version of this song... js js
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SC:
00:14:637 to 00:29:176 For this stream section, the jumps seem a bit
"oddly" placed, but I understand why you did it. the bpm is like high so
yeah yeah whatever, this section is great!!

00:42:860 using 1/6 ehh? I guess this is acceptable here.

00:46:342 apparently the beat doesnt stop.. strange..

00:58:369 to 01:12:966 omg this section is so clean <3

01:23:788 can you spell dense? XD
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SHD:
Pretty much the same as for SC, I see that you've added more jumps
as a way to make it more difficult so thats good. As well as
"overlapping" notes such as 01:07:948 (67948|2,67948|3,67948|0,68062|0) - yep, jacks for increased difficulty ;D

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Notes:
yeah this is honestly a well done map, can't really give actual "move this move that"
tips. Good job on the streams. Very "am bish us" for you to map such high BPM song.. GG

1. from 00:14:580 to 00:29:176 you're using jumstream... so,
   
2. 00:15:492 (15492|0,15549|1,15663|0,15720|1,15834|0,15891|1,16005|0,16062|1) - this one, i'm really confused if it's is a jumpstream or a trill
   so i suggest this pattern from 00:15:378 until what image shows.
   
   
   
3. 00:19:084 (19084|3,19141|2,19255|3,19312|2,19426|3,19483|2,19597|3,19654|2,19768|3,19825|2) - this one too... ^
   so i suggest this pattern from 00:19:255 until what image shows.
   

1. i think you should add one note here 00:11:159 - 00:11:159 - 00:11:615 - 00:11:843 - 00:12:071 - 00:12:299 - 00:12:527 - 00:12:755 - 00:12:983 - 00:13:211 - 00:13:439 - 00:13:667 - 00:13:896 - 00:14:124

Please update your post threat in my mod queue after you check my mod.

Feel to reject all my suggestions if you don't like and i really like the hitsound and
i hope it will rank ASAP so goodluck to your beatmap

Shiro-neechan wrote:

Hello there! NM request from my queue and sorry for almost 1 month delay!

Here we go!

4k P A T T E R N - | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[SHD]

1. from 00:14:580 to 00:29:176 you're using jumstream... so,
   
2. 00:15:492 (15492|0,15549|1,15663|0,15720|1,15834|0,15891|1,16005|0,16062|1) - this one, i'm really confused if it's is a jumpstream or a trill
   so i suggest this pattern from 00:15:378 until what image shows.
   
   
   
3. 00:19:084 (19084|3,19141|2,19255|3,19312|2,19426|3,19483|2,19597|3,19654|2,19768|3,19825|2) - this one too... ^
   so i suggest this pattern from 00:19:255 until what image shows.
   

[MX]

1. i think you should add one note here 00:11:159 - 00:11:159 - 00:11:615 - 00:11:843 - 00:12:071 - 00:12:299 - 00:12:527 - 00:12:755 - 00:12:983 - 00:13:211 - 00:13:439 - 00:13:667 - 00:13:896 - 00:14:124

Please update your post threat in my mod queue after you check my mod.

Feel to reject all my suggestions if you don't like and i really like the hitsound and
i hope it will rank ASAP so goodluck to your beatmap

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

Hotaru's Mania Modding KueKue

Hii There owo

Kolom
1|2|3|4

[EZ]
00:16:632 (16632|1) - Move to 4 It Will Be More ballance

[HD]
00:27:352 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5355007
00:33:167 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5355009 nah, i'll keep the current ones
01:22:282 (82282|3) - move to 3???
01:22:501 (82501|0) - move to 2???

[MX]
00:48:904 (48904|1,49018|2) - CTRL + J.. More Good
00:52:211 (52211|1,52211|3,52325|2,52439|3,52439|1,52439|0,52553|2) - Re arrange..repeatitive for me
00:53:466 (53466|2) - move to 2?? More ballance
01:07:150 (67150|3,67264|2) - CTRL + J... More ballance
01:09:887 (69887|1) - move to 1??
01:17:185 (77185|3,77299|2) - CTRL + J? Not Good For Me ;<

That's all my mod owo..
Sorry I can't help too Much.. My eyes Is Damaged Right now :">
Overall looks Great
Good Luck! owo)/

TvSize225 wrote:

M4M from my Moding Queue
Nomenclature
[0|1|2|3]
Speed of Link
EZ

SPOILER

00:58:369 - You should follow pitch relevance here, since Easy doesn't have a lot to work with, having cues is one of the most important point imo, for example, instead of 00:58:369 (58369|3,58825|1,59281|0,59738|2,60194|1,60650|3,61562|2,61790|0,62018|2) - you could divide the first one in two to follow the music and change the notes in order to follow pitch relevance and adapt the drum in consequences ex: 00:58:369 (58369|3,58825|1,58825|0,59281|2,59852|0,60194|1,60650|3,61562|2,61790|3,62018|2) - and follow something similar for the whole part I can't see your editor links on my side, so you're gonna have to use screenshots
01:09:317 - The sudden switch of LN for the back ground lead instead of the main theme and main theme coming back here as LN 01:10:229 - comes pretty out of nowhere, either make that final part using two LN over another but with the drum and all, it'll be a bit hard to play for an EZ diff, or you can continue doing what you were doing in the rest of the part.
01:20:264 (80264|0,81176|3,82064|2) - not sure I'm following what you're doing here, there isn't a specific entry at 01:21:176 - that justify that LN in my opinion, if it's just the arpeggio switching, it should be the other LN switching to this, not both of them superposing.
01:37:261 - 01:50:736 - this whole part makes no sens, the pattern is identical through the whole part so I'll use one as an example:
01:37:472 (97472|0,97893|1) - currently, the LN makes no sens, if you're following the drumline, the it should start a beat earlier 01:37:261 - if you're trying to follow the drum roll, it start on the red tick here 01:37:577 - , the appergio would have more emphasis if you kept them from the beginning to the end of the bar, even would say two bar, you could also do something like this 01:37:261 (97261|0,97366|1,97472|2,97577|0,97893|1) - it would be much more interesting to play and it would follow the whole drum line but might be a bit hard for a EZ diff. I can't see your editor links so I'll just assume that the LNs should start at the red lines
otherwise, it's pretty basic and nice to play for an easy, pay attention to which voice you want to give a priority and maybe a bit more attention to pitch relevance.

NM

SPOILER

00:58:385 - Try to follow pitch relevance like explained in last diff.
In this diff, that sums it up, aside from pitch relevance, I think everything's good, like you got a nice finger balance, I would think some part would be a bit too hard for a normal diff like this one 01:37:261 - but it's acceptable, I'm pretty sure !

HD

SPOILER

00:58:369 - same as other diff, pitch relevance, but this one is a lot closer.
01:23:790 - Here, you only put emphasis on the snare by putting a double, but I think base drum sound is strong enough to earn a double, this might be tricky to map and to play but this is only my opinion. it's already been done?
01:37:261 - I love this part finger balance, it plays well.
01:50:735 - same as 01:23:790 - I think double for the bass drum would be nice too same ^
pretty solid overall

MX

SPOILER

00:58:369 - Pitch relevance.
01:12:966 - in this part I think some mini jack could be avoided, in order to have more balance and so that it would be more ergonomic to play, sometime, even though it's 4 stars, it plays like a 5.1 ish here's some examples:
01:13:422 (73422|3,73422|1,73422|2,73536|1) - change the 1 after the triple to a 0
01:14:106 (74106|0,74106|1,74220|3,74334|2,74334|3,74334|0,74448|1) - something like this instead 01:14:106 (74106|0,74106|3,74220|1,74334|2,74334|3,74334|0,74448|1) - makes more sens, play way better and follow the direction of your stream.
01:15:132 (75132|3,75246|1,75246|0,75246|2,75360|1,75474|3,75588|0) - to 01:15:132 (75132|2,75246|1,75246|0,75246|3,75360|2,75474|1,75588|0) -
01:16:273 (76273|2) - use a 1 instead.
01:17:869 (77869|1,77983|3,77983|2,77983|0,78097|2,78211|3,78325|1) - to something like this 01:17:869 (77869|3,77983|1,77983|2,77983|0,78097|3,78211|2,78325|1) - took me a while to find out what you did, but use screenshots next time because I can't see your links
01:19:010 (79010|1,79124|2) - use 2 and 3 instead of 1 and 2
01:19:922 (79922|2) - use 1
this could be applied to the rest of the song earlier and later, try to avoid mini-jack, especially with this tempo, it's way harder than the song should be, on harder diff could be considered. I'll still stick minijacks at the end so that the song gets harder towards the end, but I'll take the suggestions
aside from that, this diff is neat.

Overall, nice map, pay a certain attention to pitch relevance and avoid using ghost notes(you've only did it on EZ) the last two diffs are good, the last one is crazy hard but I think it was the intention, so aside from probably investing a 5 hours on the last one on finding better and optimal finger balance to ease it a bit, I think they are rankable. I like a stairs map, feels good every once in a while, If you have any questions about my mods, don't hesitate !

Abraxos wrote:

not a lot of people seem to dare to touch SHD

General

1. BPM and Offset : ( ✓ ) i dont feel like checking thoroughly
2. Aimod : ( ✓ )
3. Kiai : ( ✓ )
4. Metadata : ( ✓ )
5. Hitsound : ( ✓ )
6. Video : ( ✓ )

unless you want to make a storyboard disable widescreen support in all diffs

speed of meme

hope you remember what i said i was gonna peek at

before i continue i would wanna say that all my image suggestions; esp the js ones; are for reference only (which mean i cant guarantee theyll fit properly in the js). i dont wanna actually change the whole js section because of how tight the streams can be.

00:14:694 (14694|0,14751|1,14808|0) - dont think starting transition would warrant something like this, 00:14:808 (14808|0,14865|3) - crtl-h this

00:15:150 (15150|2,15207|3,15264|2,15378|3,15435|2,15492|3) - pretty sure you could do something else here; i mean these things get real annoying real fast so its best if you could clean them up

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try to spread the stacks onto each hand

00:15:948 (15948|3,15948|2,16005|0,16062|3,16062|1,16119|2,16176|1,16176|0) - youre stuck in a loop of this sequence huh

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for that 2323 thing i was thinking of having that at the transition of the music itself; you dont really have to stick to this pattern too tightly but the original one you had is a little bit too repetitive so yeah

00:16:860 (16860|3,16917|2,17031|2,17089|3,17203|2,17260|3,17374|2,17431|3,17545|2,17602|3) - whyd you keep the right like this

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00:17:773 (17773|3,17773|2,17830|1,17887|2,17887|0,17944|3) - you seem to like this pattern a lot

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maybe you like those mickey mouse head things in the 2|3 column but still

going along side ^, you could move the load of 00:18:628 (18628|1) - or maybe the whole pattern around that note a little onto the right hand because its kinda empty there dont you think

00:18:799 (18799|1,18913|1,19027|1) - please dont do this mang, i mean its things like these that make the chart a little less polished. pretty simple fix, 00:19:027 (19027|1,19141|0,19198|1) - flip this

00:19:825 (19825|3,19939|3,20053|3) - having these stacks in dense jss' like these are a big no-no. 00:20:053 (20053|3,20110|2) - crtl-g

00:20:510 (20510|1,20624|1,20738|1) - orz 00:20:738 (20738|1,20795|0) - crtl-g

00:20:852 (20852|3,20909|2,20966|3,21023|1,21080|2,21137|1,21194|2) - dont seem to understand the effect youre going for here

img

00:21:593 (21593|0,21650|1,21707|0,21764|1,21764|2,21821|3,21878|2) - same thing as before, i dont see why the left hand must handle that thrill thing you placed

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if you really like the thrill thing you could just have it in the middle for both hands to handle

00:22:391 (22391|3,22448|2,22505|3,22562|2,22562|1,22619|0,22676|1) - same as above, will not mention suggestion. goes alongside 00:22:106 (22106|2,22163|3,22220|2,22391|3,22448|2,22505|3,22562|2) -

00:23:531 (23531|3,23589|2,23589|1,23646|3,23703|0,23703|2,23760|1,23817|0,23817|3,23874|2,23931|3,23931|1,23988|0,24045|1,24045|2) - i mean you seem to have a liking for these sorts of patterns you know what i mean? its really weird that youd want to have all these thrill things you know; it isnt really comfortable to play them on 263bpm in a js

img

00:24:216 (24216|2,24273|1,24330|2,24387|1,24501|2,24558|1,24615|2,24672|1) - same as above

00:24:843 (24843|2,24900|3,24957|2,25014|0,25071|1,25128|0) - would like to re-iterate the fact that i dont understand why you chose to have such rough patterning in this js section. 00:24:957 (24957|2,25014|0) - crtl-g

00:25:413 (25413|1,25470|2,25527|1,25584|2) - i guess this is alright onlf if you fix the other thrill things above i mentioned above

00:27:523 (27523|2,27580|3,27637|2,27694|3) - would be alright if you were to balance this out on the other hand, otherwise try to not make this thrill

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00:28:720 (28720|2,28777|3,28834|2,28834|1,28891|0,28948|3,28948|1,29005|2,29062|0,29062|3,29119|1,29176|0) - i wouldnt want to exit this js like this; the thrills make it seem real rough and it kinda props me up for much denser things but then youd drop chords so

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you could just have js like this ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

00:31:001 (31001|2,31115|3,31115|2,31229|3,31343|2,31400|3) - try not to throw everything on one hand, move 00:31:115 (31115|3) - to 1

00:31:457 (31457|0,31514|1,31571|0) - dont see any reason for you to make a stack for this section, refer to 00:29:518 (29518|3,29575|1,29632|0,29689|2,29746|1,29746|3) - and relevant sections. 00:31:571 (31571|0) - move to 4

00:32:141 (32141|1,32255|1) - pretty sure you didnt intersect the two sections like this. also 00:32:369 (32369|3,32426|2,32483|3) - .
00:32:255 (32255|1) - move to 3, 00:32:483 (32483|3) - move to 2

ill stop mentioning the 00:33:281 (33281|1,33338|0,33396|1) - things

00:35:448 (35448|1,35448|3,35562|3,35562|0,35619|1,35676|0) - feels like you could transit better here

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tried to keep the streams as smooth as possible, i jack things better with my middle finger anyway :V

00:37:843 (37843|1,37957|0,37957|1,38071|0) - hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

00:39:211 (39211|3,39325|3,39439|3) - is this a mistake

00:42:860 - first off, this 1/6 is tighter than my butthole on glory days. secondly, 00:43:355 (43355|2,43431|2) - pls try not to have these jacks. its things like 00:42:860 (42860|1,42898|2,42936|0,42974|1,43088|2,43127|1,43165|3,43203|2) - these that disallow for much smoother rolls, and the effect of it is amplified because this song is on 263 bpm.

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just use something like this, it allows for rolling things without stagger

00:58:825 (58825|2,58939|2) - these stacks, what are they good for? thing is i dont really see much merit in having these snare things have these stacks. having them on the synths makes much more sense to me, cuz of how itd stutter for 1/2 tick when it shifts in pitch. which is a real nice effect to follow. applies for the whole section

01:22:064 (82064|1,82064|3,82282|0,82282|2,82501|3,82501|1,82712|0,82712|2,82923|3,82923|1) - dont see why you would stop the 1/4 notes

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ho boy time for the speed up

01:24:209 (84209|2,84261|3,84314|0,84314|2,84366|1,84419|0,84472|1) - this thing gets 100 times worse on 285 bpm, you can argue that the balance is sorta there but thing is it isnt smooth nor fun to meet with this sort of pattern on such a high bpm. 01:24:314 (84314|2,84366|1) - crtl-g

01:24:577 (84577|0,84630|1,84682|0,84735|2,84787|1,84840|2) - you can definitely do better than this.

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was thinking of keeping the stack thing because of the music shifting pitch there

01:25:051 (85051|2,85103|1,85156|2,85209|1,85314|2,85366|1,85419|2,85472|1,85577|2,85630|1,85682|2) - welp

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kept that thing at the start, rest are re-arranged up

01:25:787 (85787|0,85787|1,85840|2,85893|3,85945|2,85998|0,85998|1) - if i didnt fix this with the above screenshot, please try to re-arrange this. left hand is a little too relaxed innit

01:26:261 (86261|0,86314|1,86366|0) - tend not to do this, i mean its alright but it wears on you esp. on 285
01:26:998 (86998|2,87051|3,87103|2,87156|3) - you know the drill

screenshot is for above two things

01:27:945 (87945|3,87998|2,88051|3,88209|2,88261|3,88314|2,88419|3,88472|2,88524|3) - ive got a sinking feeling youve been copy pasting things; either way this pattern is way too unforgiving on the right

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pretty sure this doesnt fit within the whole thing, it causes the later js to kink up. leaving this for reference

01:28:419 - i mean you can do better than this can you, this stream is just littered with those things

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this one is confirmed to fit, changes are made all the way up to the highlighted note.

01:30:314 (90314|2,90366|3,90419|2,90472|3) - i dont feel like giving you everything so ill have to ask you to fix this yourself (im lazy too but eh)

01:31:366 (91366|1,91419|3) - crtl-g

01:31:472 (91472|0,91577|0,91682|0) - is this a mistake or

01:31:945 (91945|1,91998|2,91998|0,92051|1,92103|0,92103|3,92156|2,92209|3,92209|1,92261|2) - this is _alri-ght but i wouldnt want you to have this in 285 bpm streams

01:33:314 (93314|1,93419|1,93524|1) - is this another mistake or

01:33:682 (93682|2,93682|1,93735|0,93787|3,93787|1,93840|2,93893|0,93893|3,93945|1,93998|0,94051|2,94103|3,94103|1,94156|2) - i dont really feel like repeating what i said again so

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ive screenshotted a lot of my suggestions already, i hope you could pick something up from them to apply yourself

01:34:314 (94314|3,94419|3,94419|2,94524|2) - try not to do this, right hand is a little adsbdfshdgshioeqrvh

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dk if this causes any kinks to form above, please be careful

01:35:156 (95156|3,95209|2,95261|3,95366|2,95419|3,95472|2,95577|3,95630|2,95682|3,95735|2) - at this point im half convinced that you are copy pasting things; either way i wont suggest anything for this. try to apply some of the things ive shown to you above, rather than having these thrill things be literally everywhere you could most definitely always find an alternative.

01:37:051 (97051|0,97156|0,97261|0) - hhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

01:37:735 (97735|1,97787|0,97840|1,97893|0) - dont have much to say, just look at my suggestion first

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ill not be posting as much for this section, im sure this is enough to tell you how you should re-arrange the notes. ill just point things out and put hhhhhhhh for relevant sections

01:38:524 (98524|1,98577|0,98630|1,98682|0) - hhhhhhhhhh

01:38:998 (98998|3,99051|2,99103|3,99156|2) - hhhhhhhhhh

01:39:893 (99893|1,99945|2,99998|1,100051|2) - you know, you could most definitely have these sorts of things for those relevant sections, just please do not overuse them.

01:40:524 (100524|2,100577|3,100630|2,100735|3,100787|2,100840|3,101156|2,101209|3,101261|2) - notice how in this section only the right hand gets the thrills? do you see how this pattern is a little too wonky now? ill try to change things up here for your reference

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you see those stacky things highlighted? yeah theyre now on both hands. try to make something like this when youre reviewing this chart

01:44:735 (104735|3,104787|2,104840|3,104840|0,104893|1,104945|0) - orz, you could definitely have something better here

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was really hard to reconcile things, maybe you could expand on my suggestion here

man ill be repeating myself over and over again if i keep on looking, ill just hhhh things that need re-arranging and you do them yourself

01:46:945 (106945|3,106998|2,107051|3,107051|1,107103|0,107156|1) - guess this could do better
01:47:893 (107893|2,107893|1,107945|0,107998|3,107998|1,108051|2,108103|3) - same^
01:48:630 (108630|3,108682|2,108735|3,108840|2,108893|3,108945|2) - could clean this up a little
01:50:261 (110261|2,110314|3,110366|2,110419|3) - hhhhhhhhhh

welp im real tired right now, i dont feel like editing the ending either

the main thing youd need to look out for is how seemingly every js seems to hold some form of thrill thing one way or the other.

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imo the second pattern definitely looks much more cleaner to play than the first one.

other than that, youre pretty consistent on the layering which is something i like

pardon if i seemingly blow up some of the pattern issues, its just given the backdrop of your streams in general everything seems to kinda look awkward in a sense.

hope my mod helped

good luck with rank~

Wonki wrote:

hi
NM request

EZ

change OD 6.5~6.8 It is EZ

shd

00:29:404 - , 00:29:860 - , 00:30:317 - , 00:30:773 - , 00:31:229 - , etc.. it's ok to 3note because of kick sound I'm worried it wouldn't become very playable to I'll reject this
except00:35:790 - , 00:36:246 -
01:22:923 - ~ 01:23:788 - LN? uh, nah...

it is difficult to find mod one..
perfect map! take a star

Evening wrote:

SHD

Well first things first, this is not too fun to play through, mostly due to how the 1/2 jacks are regulated here:
For example:
01:36:945 (96945|1,97051|1,97051|0,97156|0,97261|0,97366|1,97472|1) - well the last 2 notes are not too bad since one of them can be approximated by a trill but the first 5 notes can be taken as a straight 142.5 jack and there's a trill at the end which is pretty annoying to play'
01:24:419 (84419|2,84524|2,84735|3,84840|3) - Not too sure why you would have jacks here, 01:27:209 (87209|0,87314|0) - similarly, at this bpm, 1/2 jacks are quite noticeable and rather annoying if they appear out of no where to induce random difficulty

Secondly, because of the jacks I've mentioned before, the transitions in and out of jumpstreams felt rather weird, taking this "roll" for example:
01:29:156 (89156|1,89209|2,89314|3,89366|2) - to time this correctly is quite ass and the main problem here is that I have to transition into a 1/3 roll from a 1/4 roll then transition back to a 1/4, as for the suggestion I would strongly recommend to make the simpler streams/non-jumpstream sections a bit smoother (so basically have streams "linked" together)

Taking another example so as to further illustrate what I'm suggesting here is: 01:27:156 (87156|3,87156|1,87209|0,87261|2,87314|0,87366|3,87366|1,87419|2,87472|0,87524|3,87577|1,87630|0) - The main problem here is that if you would to break down the pattern here to the left and right hand you can see that they have really unorthodox rhythms attached to them and at 285 bpm.

I felt that there weren't any "accurate" difficulty curves with respect to the song itself but i guess it is what it is when it comes to d'n'b technical mapping

Not really a big fan of the charting style here, the jumpstreams don't flow too well and it really ticks me off but I wouldn't shun the fact that I might have been slightly influenced by eze's chart since I played that quite a fair bit

Might want to consider some other BN in this case unless you plan to make everything much smoother to play

Evening wrote:

Just going to add more comments here since I asked eze to look through this chart too:

Eze:

00:29:518 - I guess for rhythm like this he can use generally trilly/split rolly (e.g. 2414[12]) bursts instead of what he has, little point of deviating pattern-wise
1/6 run feels kinda bleh but I think my left hand just sucks
01:27:156 - to 01:27:998 - odd chunk of 4321 roll bias
01:40:051 - 34/43 to minitrill creates a notable amount of rigidity
01:42:735 - don't think I've seen this pattern used (or of a similar variant) in this chart until this point, and again it's to no rhythm whatsoever so it's better to change this
other than that like... it's actually hard to pinpoint anything overly bad about it
I can see what ryuki is doing with some of the occasional trills/flams but like... it's not consistent
patterns generally feel random