1. "Eriri" NM - 4Key (1,91 stars, 1185 notes)
2. "Megumi" MX - 4Key (3,85 stars, 2515 notes)
3. "Utaha" HD - 4Key (3,13 stars, 1897 notes)

Minseo2000 wrote:

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Mod incoming!

MX as requested

Modding without hitsound.

00:00:459 - 00:01:488 - 00:01:488 - 00:01:488 - Shouldn't you add a note here cuz they all have a hi-hat sound just like 00:00:802 - 00:00:973 - 00:02:173 - 00:02:345 - ? It might be a good idea to keep the sounds mapped consistent (altho 00:00:973 - & 00:02:345 - are slightly louder). Same goes to other 1/2s in this section.
00:20:173 - Triple for cymbals? You mapped cymbals at 00:19:488 - and I don't think it'll have too much of a playability issue.
00:21:030 (21030|3,21030|1,21030|2,21202|0,21202|2,21202|1,21373|1,21373|2,21373|3) - Why do the kicks suddenly turn into triples? They were doubles just until a while ago.
00:22:230 - I'd suggest a triple or a quadruple for the loud crash/smash/<whatever loud sound I hear> but this is entirely optional.
Also, in the following section, I recommend adding a note for each 1/2 for the hi-hat similarly to what I said before.
00:23:259 (23259|2) - I can't tell what this LN is supposed to represent. As well as all the other LNs in this section.
00:31:830 - I thought kicks were doubles. Shouldn't this be a double too?
00:33:202 - I recommend a triple or a quadruple for the cymbal. But again, completely optional. Same goes to other cymbals after this.
00:42:116 - But I recommend noting this cymbal here for consistency since you mapped cymbals right at 00:41:430 - and there doesn't seem to be any playability issues even with a triple there. Or you can just remove a note at the cymbals.
00:42:973 (42973|1,42973|0,42973|2,43145|1,43145|3,43145|2,43316|2,43316|0,43316|1) - The same thing as the kicks I mentioned before. These should be doubles.
00:44:173 - Again, the section following this should either have a note for every hi-hat or no notes for hi-hats completely. It's important to keep things consistent. I'm going to stop mentioning this now.
00:52:402 (52402|2,53259|3,53430|3,53602|3) - This is somewhat uncomfortable. I have to hold with one finger while tapping twice and switching to hold with another all on the same hand.
01:05:773 - This sounds like an ordinary snare. Shouldn't this be a triple?
01:06:288 (66288|3,66459|2) - It's really hard to tell what sounds these notes are representing. Same goes for similar notes in this section.
01:26:688 (86688|2,86688|3,86688|0,86745|1,86802|2,86859|3,86916|0,86973|1,87030|2,87088|3,87145|0,87202|1,87259|2,87316|3,87373|0,87430|1,87488|3,87545|2,87602|1,87659|0,87716|3,87773|2,87830|1,87888|0) - Should be 1/4 kicks. I hear nothing that should justify the 1/8s. Maybe you can just put a 1/4 jumptrill from 01:26:688 - to 01:27:973 -
01:51:373 - ~ 02:07:830 - The short notes here seem really random to me. I recommend you to choose a few sounds to map and just map those selected sounds.
02:32:859 (152859|1,153030|1,153202|1,153373|1,153545|1) - I recommend you to move one of these.
02:34:916 - Triples?
02:35:259 - This is more worthy for a quadruple imo

I'll just say right now that when mapping (at least for osu!mania), it's generally a good idea to set a certain number of notes for each instruments present to make the chord sizes consistent for all sounds. So if you're making kicks doubles, keep them doubles for that section. If you're making snares triples, keep them triples for that section. The only times when chord sizes should change are when playability issues occur from this, or when you started mapping a different section (with a proper transition.)

02:55:830 (175830|0,175830|3,175830|1,175888|2,175945|1,176002|0,176059|3,176116|2,176173|1,176230|0,176288|3,176345|2,176402|1,176459|0,176516|3,176573|2,176630|0,176688|1,176745|2,176802|3,176859|0,176916|1,176973|2,177030|3) - Should be 1/4, not 1/8.
03:20:516 - x0.5 is a bit too much... At least x0.7 pls?
03:32:859 - And this sudden drop in speed is too hard to predict. If you are going to do this, pls drop the speed earlier so that it'll be easier to read
03:35:430 (215430|0,215602|0) - And I had hell of a time hitting this with such a low speed
03:36:802 (216802|2,216973|2) - Same goes for this
03:40:916 (220916|3,221088|3) - And this...
03:42:459 - Pls nerf speed... x1.2 is probably too fast for alot of players.
03:46:230 (226230|3,226345|2,226573|1,226573|0,226916|3,227030|2,227259|1,227259|0) - The pattern is fine but the sudden vocal mapping baffled me. If you want to map vocals, you should've mapped them from the start of this section.
04:22:230 (262230|0,263945|1,264116|1) - Pls no .
04:27:716 - ~ 04:49:659 - To be honest, the chords here are way too big for the song. Please consider reducing the notes for those tom-tom-like sounds. Also, at parts like 04:42:802 - ~ 04:44:173 - and 04:46:916 - ~ 04:48:116 - You suddenly stopped mapping those tom-toms (or whatever I'm hearing every 1/2) and it feels somewhat awkward.

Whew, that took a while to write.
I have nothing much to say.

Good luck on ranking!

Pizza wrote:

Hai, delivery pizzamods datang /:v/

col 1234

Notes : Common snap buat mapping (especially electronic songs) itu 1/4, ngapain pake 1/6 >:U

MX

00:00:288 (288|1) - move to 4
00:00:630 (630|2) - move to 1
00:00:802 (802|1) - move to 4
00:01:830 (1830|3) - move to 2
00:02:002 (2002|1) - move to 4
00:02:173 (2173|2) - move to 2
00:02:859 - missing notes? bisa di add di 1 o/
00:03:716 (3716|0) - move to 2
00:03:888 (3888|2) - move to 1
00:04:745 (4745|2) - move to 2
00:04:916 (4916|3) - move to 3
00:05:088 (5088|2) - move to 2
00:05:259 (5259|1) - move to 4
00:05:602 - missing notes?
00:05:773 (5773|2) - move to 2 atau 4
00:06:288 (6288|0) - move to 3
00:07:316 (7316|0) - move to 3
00:07:488 (7488|2) - move to 1
00:08:345 - missing notes lagi?
00:08:516 (8516|2,8688|2,8859|2) - hindarin yang kayak gini aaaaaaaa

....... well kalo bisa hindarin mini jack gitu, soalnya unbalanced, buat part lain mungkin bisa ngikutin mod diatas

00:17:430 (17430|0,17430|2,17430|3,18802|0,18802|3,18802|1,19488|0,19488|2,19488|3) - ini kenapa tiga? suaranya sama kek kick biasa kok

00:21:545 (21545|1,21545|0,21602|3,21602|2,21659|0,21659|1,21716|2,21716|3,21773|0,21773|1) - pake 1/4 snap!

00:30:459 (30459|2,30630|2,30802|2) - not this again... kolom nya masih lega lho

00:32:688 (32688|2,32859|2,33030|2) - ^

00:39:373 (39373|0,39373|2,39373|3,40745|1,40745|3,40745|0) - kayak sebelumnya

00:43:488 (43488|3,43488|2,43545|0,43545|1,43602|2,43602|3,43659|1,43659|0,43716|2,43716|3) - 1/4!!!1!satu!siji!

01:02:859 (62859|2,62973|2) - 1/4!!!

01:03:202 (63202|2,63373|2,63545|2,63716|2,63888|2,64059|2,64230|2) - ga balance nih, re arrange ulang yha :3

01:16:916 (76916|1,76916|3,76916|2) - move 1 kolom ke kiri, 01:17:088 (77088|1) - pindah ke 4 , 01:17:259 (77259|3) - pindah ke 3

01:26:688 (86688|1,86688|0,86773|2,86773|3,86859|1,86859|0,86945|3,86945|2,87030|0,87030|1,87116|2,87202|3,87202|0,87288|2,87288|1,87373|0,87373|3,87459|1,87459|2,87545|0,87545|3,87630|1,87630|2,87716|0,87716|3,87802|2,87802|1,87888|0,87888|3,87973|1,87973|2) - 1/4!!1!

01:50:688 (110688|1,110688|0,110745|3,110745|2,110802|0,110802|1,110859|2,110859|3,110916|0,110916|1) - 1/4!!!1!

01:51:373 (111373|1,111373|2,111373|0,111373|3,111888|1,112402|2,112402|0,112402|3,112745|1,112745|3,113430|2,113430|0,114116|1,114116|2,114116|3,114973|0,114973|1,115316|2,115316|0,115488|2,115488|3,116002|1,116059|0,116116|3,116573|2,116573|1,116573|0,118802|3,118802|1) - ini dan seterusnya, drum dan kick nya bisa di layer juga lho, agak aneh dimainin kalo kayak gini

.. dan lain lain, problem nya sama semua kayak mod diatas, mungkin bisa selfmod :3 also bisa re snap lagi semua nya, pake 1/4!!!1!1!1siji!satu!!one

dan juga posisi note nya pastikan balance, jangan fokus ke kolom tertentu terus kolom lain jarang dipake.

sorry cuman bisa mod 1 diff, lagi agak sibuk soalnya aaasdasdasd, hopefully bisa membantu

Protastic101 wrote:

Hi, you've requested in the wrong queue because I took 8 days to get to your mod, welcome to all Mania modding queues.

Ayyy, mod time

[General]- Uncheck widescreen support in NM and HD.
- The difficulty gap between NM and HD is a bit high. I would highly consider adding an intermediate difficulty.
- If you're not keysounding your map, uncheck "samples match playback rate" under the audio section of MX.
- Increase HP and OD of HD to ~7.7 due to high notes with some LNs.
- Increase HP of NM to ~7 since 6 is normally too low and mashable for beginners.
- I believe the offset may actually be at 278, so consider listening to where the first beat is and try to find the correct offset.

[MX]00:23:773 to 00:24:802 - I'd suggest a single note 1/2 jack throughout this duration due to the repetitive beeping noises heard in the music.
00:29:259 to 00:30:288 - ^^ It just adds some originality to the map since the kick - snare structure you have going has already become somewhat repetitive, to no fault of your own.
00:31:602 (31602|0,31716|1) - Hi, this isn't 1/3, it's 1/2, so 00:31:602 (31602|0) needs to be at 00:31:659 and no one likes 00:31:716 (31716|1) so you can just remove that.
00:48:630 - Make this a triple for the snare to remain consistent with how you've been mapping kicks and snares.
00:50:002 - ^^
00:53:602 (53602|3,53773|1,53945|2,54116|0,54288|1) - I feel that these shouldn't actually be LNs, or if they are, they should only be 1/4 since their sound is rather short and isn't sustained.
00:54:630 and 00:54:802 and 00:54:973 - Whereas the above doesn't need LNs, this part is the opposite in that the synth is held out for 1/2 beat for each of the times I listed, and it's pretty audible, so I would highly consider adding 1/2 LNs in this.
00:55:145 - Add another note here for the crash to make a triple?
00:57:888 - ^^
00:59:430 (59430|3,59430|2,59773|0,59773|2,60116|1,60116|3,60230|2,60230|0) - These are more likely to be 3/8 long rather than 1/3.
00:59:430 (59430|3,59430|2) - Also, since the above few notes after this chord are LNs, turn these into LNs to remain consistent since these notes are the same kind of sound as 00:59:773 (59773|0,59773|2)
01:00:230 (60230|2,60230|0,60402|2,60402|0,60402|3) - These for sure need to be moved up to 01:00:288 because your snapping is currently wrong.
01:07:659 - Add a note here. It sounds like there's a muted kick here, which is pretty much the same sound as 01:08:688 (68688|2)
01:11:773 - Add note, same sound as 01:11:945 (71945|2)
01:17:088 - Needs to be a triple for the crash to remain consistent.
01:19:830 - ^^
01:27:116 (87116|2) - Ohhh, this is a nice way to transition between 1/4 kicks.
01:51:373 - For this section, why not also map to the stuttered vocals? It would prove to be a bit more of a challenge than LN jumps, but that's up to you, since this section is fine structurally, albeit with a few errors I'm about to point out. Wait, actually, why did you completely drop the drums? I mean, a single note for the kick and a double for the snare would have worked due to confined space, but without the drums, this section feels pretty empty.
01:52:745 (112745|1,112745|3) - Either extend these LNs to begin at 01:52:402 and remove 01:52:402 (112402|2) or make 01:52:402 (112402|2) end at 01:53:430 because these are the same sustained synth, which means having two notes makes no musical sense.
01:55:316 (115316|0,115488|2) - Combine these LNs into one since their sound is the same.
01:55:488 (115488|2) - Ends at 01:56:002 but I can tell you're trying to represent that slurred note so maybe try something like this. I tried to do a roll, but there's really no room for it, and I moved a few notes around to get the LNs to fit but to no avail. Tbh, I'd probably just start 01:56:088 (116088|3) at 01:56:002
02:00:802 (120802|3,120888|1,120888|2) - This double is unnecessary since there's no accent on it; just the slurred note. As for the single note, I dunno, I just highlighted it.
01:59:259 (119259|0,119259|1) - Also, end these at easy to guess approximations. Ending them in 1/6 makes no sense since this song uses absolutely no compound timing, at least so far. All the notes are straight.
02:34:916 - Dude, did you just copy + paste this section from the previous one? The notes are pretty much the exact same placement. At least control H it or something to look different, or even better, just rearrange the notes to different positions since it's bland to play the exact same literal placement of notes maybe a minute or so after you just did that earlier in the song. Well, since I'm pretty much convinced you copy and pasted it, stuff I said above applies here too.
03:30:116 (210116|1,210116|2,210116|0) - Make one of these LNs start at 03:30:802 and end at 03:31:488 to represent the backwards buildup. Also, the start of this chord is no heavier than the previous LN jumps.
03:32:859 to 03:40:916 - All of the 1/2 notes here need to be removed because they're all ghost notes. There's absolutely no 1/2 rhythm playing in the background to warrant the notes. They're just put there to prevent the section from being too easy, but having an easy section in a hard difficulty isn't a bad thing, so just leave it to the few LNs mapped here instead.
03:41:088 (221088|2,221088|0,221088|1,221088|3) - These all need to end 1/2 beat earlier since all the sounds stop at 03:42:116 and the rest if reverb.
04:27:716 - Everything before this was just basically a copy and paste of the beginning, so whatever I said about the beginning applies there too. Anyways, here to the end is a far calmer part, yet you map it just as densely as the kiai's, which tend to be the most dense part of a song. Basically, what I'm saying here is to nerf the chord stream at the end, because it simply doesn't fit with the music. The music isn't heavy or accented, which means this section should reflect that, and be a simple and fairly easy (compared to the rest of the map) section to end the song with. Basically, what I'm saying is reduce the doubles to single notes for the normal synth in the background, and reduce triples to doubles to represent the piano chord.

Basically, the only thing you truly need to take out of this mod is the fact that in Mania, Copy + Paste is not your friend It leads to a repetitive map that isn't fun to play and rather unintuitive. I'd know this since I finished a full mod on a map that was only copy and pasted patterns from the beginning. I assure you it was 4 minutes of boring hell. So do try to rearrange your notes to make them different from other sections in terms of placement, while keeping the general structure the same.

Ok, thanks, bye, sorry for only one diff and being 9 days late.

Suzuko-P wrote:

Hi! From M4M p/5172358 (I'd a lots of homework so I'll post this first)
I'm going to say that,i'm already finish your mod and computer is automaticlly shut down lol (lucky that it's a little mod)
Feel free to reject my mod,or not give kudosu (but it's very long mod for 2nd mod of me lol) *nvm that.So Let's Start!!

"Eriri" NM

First,You should make a double note to all time that have a cymbals. (except 1/4 beat)
Next,arrange your note for hand balance (if possible) because many novice players sometimes confuse with 2 note in one column of 1/4or1/2 beat.But anyway,I don't want to break your own pattern so I'll only write it
Oh,it's Drum and Bass with long lead melody,so it's your choice to make a this diff to LN map or make it a 1/2 double&single note with rarely LN.
Also,don't forget to add Kiai Mode

Column : 1|2|3|4

Offset : I think it's too fast (290 it's my suggestion)
00:17:088 (17088|0,17088|1) - delete one note
00:17:345 (17345|3) - arrange a note to 1/2 beat
00:17:688 (17688|1,17688|0) - ^ and delete one note
00:18:459 (18459|3,18459|2,19145|2,19145|3) - make it single note per 1/2 beat
00:19:488 to 00:20:688 - Pattern Suggest : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5425773
00:31:573 (31573|1,31745|2) - Ghost note,delete it
00:39:030 (39030|2,39030|3) - delete one note
00:39:288 (39288|0) - arrange it to 1/2 beat
00:39:630 (39630|2,39630|3) - ^ and delete one note
00:40:402 (40402|0,40402|1,41088|0,41088|1) - ^
00:52:745 (52745|1,52745|3,52745|0) - I recommended don't use triple note on NM Diff,so delete one of it
00:53:430 (53430|2,53430|0) - Overmapped,it just a snare,so delete one of it
01:00:116 to 01:03:373 - Pattern Suggest : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5425871
01:03:373 to 01:05:773 - Pattern Suggest : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5425901 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5425911
01:06:630 (66630|0,66630|1,66802|3,66802|2) - Make them single note
01:08:002 (68002|2,68002|3,68173|1,68173|0) - ^
01:09:373 (69373|2,69373|3,69545|2,69545|3) - ^
01:10:745 (70745|1,70745|0,70916|0,70916|1) - ^
01:12:116 (72116|0,72116|2,72288|2,72288|0) - ^
01:13:488 (73488|1,73488|3,73659|3,73659|1) - ^
01:14:345 (74345|0,74345|3,74859|2,74859|1,75030|2,75030|1) - ^
01:15:716 (75716|2,75716|3,76059|0,76059|1,76402|0,76402|1) - ^
01:23:173 (83173|3,83516|1,83516|0) - arrange it to 1/2 beat
01:26:688 (86688|3,86859|2,87030|1,87202|0,87373|3,87545|2,87716|1,87888|0) - It's nm diff,so I think LN (with single note) is not bad like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5426887 or like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5426900
01:31:659 (91659|2,91830|3,92002|2,92173|0,92516|0,92688|1,92859|3) - Don't put notes for follow melody of vocal or another that is not a drum (because your pattern is follow the drum sound in all section) so think and make it a new one
01:38:773 (98773|1,98945|2) - Ghost note like the first one (same pattern),and it's hard for novice player because it's quick 1/4 that's not continue the stair (jump note)
01:42:630 (102630|2,102802|3,102973|2,103145|1,103488|0,103659|1,103830|2) - Don't put notes for follow melody of vocal or another that is not a drum (because your pattern is follow the drum sound in all section) so think and make it a new one
01:46:488 (106488|3,106830|1,106830|0) - arrange it to 1/2 beat
01:51:373 (111373|0) - should end at 01:52:059
01:51:888 (111888|1,112402|2) - it's same key sound so delete 01:52:402 (112402|2) and make 01:51:888 (111888|1) longer from 01:52:059 (from previous LN suggest) to 01:53:430
01:55:488 (115488|3) - move to column 2 for key pitch
01:56:088 (116088|1) - move to column 4 ^
01:59:259 (119259|1) - this should end at 02:00:802
02:00:973 (120973|3) - this should start at 02:00:802 (from previous LN suggest)
02:02:345 (122345|0,122859|1,123288|2) - same as previous LN suggest
02:04:402 (124402|0,124402|1) - Overmapped,delete it one
02:05:945 (125945|2,125945|1) - ^
02:06:288 (126288|0) - this should end at 02:07:145
02:07:830 (127830|2) - arrange it to 1/1 beat
02:21:888 (141888|0,141888|3,141888|1) - don't use triple notes like last recommended
02:22:573 (142573|0,142573|2) - delete one note
I choose to skip to 03:23:259 because it's same pattern as i mod
03:23:259 (203259|3) - move to column 1 for pitch key
03:26:002 (206002|0,206002|1) - Overmapped,delete one note
03:28:745 (208745|2,208745|3) - ^
03:30:116 (210116|1) - same pitch key delete it,and make a previous LN more longer to 03:31:488
03:32:859 to 03:42:288 - OMG,it's so overmapped.Delete it all and make a LN (I think a long trill it's hard for novice player also)
03:43:488 (223488|3,223488|0,223488|2) - It's clap sound,so delete one or two note(s)
04:27:716 to 04:49:488 - It's end and last part of song (and also low sound) I think it should be a LN with 1/1 beat note.

Good Luck

AetherKeys wrote:

Suzuko-P wrote:

Hi! From M4M p/5172358 (I'd a lots of homework so I'll post this first)
I'm going to say that,i'm already finish your mod and computer is automaticlly shut down lol (lucky that it's a little mod)
Feel free to reject my mod,or not give kudosu (but it's very long mod for 2nd mod of me lol) *nvm that.So Let's Start!!

"Eriri" NM

First,You should make a double note to all time that have a cymbals. (except 1/4 beat)
Next,arrange your note for hand balance (if possible) because many novice players sometimes confuse with 2 note in one column of 1/4or1/2 beat.But anyway,I don't want to break your own pattern so I'll only write it
Oh,it's Drum and Bass with long lead melody,so it's your choice to make a this diff to LN map or make it a 1/2 double&single note with rarely LN.
Also,don't forget to add Kiai Mode

Column : 1|2|3|4

Offset : I think it's too fast (290 it's my suggestion)
00:17:088 (17088|0,17088|1) - delete one note
00:17:345 (17345|3) - arrange a note to 1/2 beat i still confuse :/
00:17:688 (17688|1,17688|0) - ^ and delete one note
00:18:459 (18459|3,18459|2,19145|2,19145|3) - make it single note per 1/2 beat i will take this , and re arrange all DnB make it consistant
00:19:488 to 00:20:688 - Pattern Suggest : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5425773 rejected
00:31:573 (31573|1,31745|2) - Ghost note,delete it done
00:39:030 (39030|2,39030|3) - delete one note
00:39:288 (39288|0) - arrange it to 1/2 beat
00:39:630 (39630|2,39630|3) - ^ and delete one note
00:40:402 (40402|0,40402|1,41088|0,41088|1) - ^
00:52:745 (52745|1,52745|3,52745|0) - I recommended don't use triple note on NM Diff,so delete one of it
00:53:430 (53430|2,53430|0) - Overmapped,it just a snare,so delete one of it
01:00:116 to 01:03:373 - Pattern Suggest : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5425871
01:03:373 to 01:05:773 - Pattern Suggest : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5425901 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5425911
01:06:630 (66630|0,66630|1,66802|3,66802|2) - Make them single note
01:08:002 (68002|2,68002|3,68173|1,68173|0) - ^
01:09:373 (69373|2,69373|3,69545|2,69545|3) - ^
01:10:745 (70745|1,70745|0,70916|0,70916|1) - ^
01:12:116 (72116|0,72116|2,72288|2,72288|0) - ^
01:13:488 (73488|1,73488|3,73659|3,73659|1) - ^
01:14:345 (74345|0,74345|3,74859|2,74859|1,75030|2,75030|1) - ^
01:15:716 (75716|2,75716|3,76059|0,76059|1,76402|0,76402|1) - ^
01:23:173 (83173|3,83516|1,83516|0) - arrange it to 1/2 beat
01:26:688 (86688|3,86859|2,87030|1,87202|0,87373|3,87545|2,87716|1,87888|0) - It's nm diff,so I think LN (with single note) is not bad like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5426887 or like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5426900
01:31:659 (91659|2,91830|3,92002|2,92173|0,92516|0,92688|1,92859|3) - Don't put notes for follow melody of vocal or another that is not a drum (because your pattern is follow the drum sound in all section) so think and make it a new one
01:38:773 (98773|1,98945|2) - Ghost note like the first one (same pattern),and it's hard for novice player because it's quick 1/4 that's not continue the stair (jump note)
01:42:630 (102630|2,102802|3,102973|2,103145|1,103488|0,103659|1,103830|2) - Don't put notes for follow melody of vocal or another that is not a drum (because your pattern is follow the drum sound in all section) so think and make it a new one
01:46:488 (106488|3,106830|1,106830|0) - arrange it to 1/2 beat
01:51:373 (111373|0) - should end at 01:52:059
01:51:888 (111888|1,112402|2) - it's same key sound so delete 01:52:402 (112402|2) and make 01:51:888 (111888|1) longer from 01:52:059 (from previous LN suggest) to 01:53:430
01:55:488 (115488|3) - move to column 2 for key pitch
01:56:088 (116088|1) - move to column 4 ^
01:59:259 (119259|1) - this should end at 02:00:802
02:00:973 (120973|3) - this should start at 02:00:802 (from previous LN suggest)
02:02:345 (122345|0,122859|1,123288|2) - same as previous LN suggest
02:04:402 (124402|0,124402|1) - Overmapped,delete it one
02:05:945 (125945|2,125945|1) - ^
02:06:288 (126288|0) - this should end at 02:07:145
02:07:830 (127830|2) - arrange it to 1/1 beat
02:21:888 (141888|0,141888|3,141888|1) - don't use triple notes like last recommended
02:22:573 (142573|0,142573|2) - delete one note
I choose to skip to 03:23:259 because it's same pattern as i mod
03:23:259 (203259|3) - move to column 1 for pitch key
03:26:002 (206002|0,206002|1) - Overmapped,delete one note
03:28:745 (208745|2,208745|3) - ^
03:30:116 (210116|1) - same pitch key delete it,and make a previous LN more longer to 03:31:488
03:32:859 to 03:42:288 - OMG,it's so overmapped.Delete it all and make a LN (I think a long trill it's hard for novice player also)
03:43:488 (223488|3,223488|0,223488|2) - It's clap sound,so delete one or two note(s)
04:27:716 to 04:49:488 - It's end and last part of song (and also low sound) I think it should be a LN with 1/1 beat note.
i will re arange pattern later , but almost all of mod applied , your suggestion is.. i will consider it too

Good Luck

Ohh , thanks for mod , im a bit busy right now , i think ill need 3days or more to reply your mod..
Sorry it'll took a such long delay , i checking this via cellphone , i will apply your mod later.
And sorry for bad english :3