[Pochiko]
00:16:109 (1,2) - can improve blanket by much
00:17:826 (4) - wouldn't a long slider fit well here to follow the extended sound?
00:26:108 (1,2) - should probably unstack, this movement killer isn't very comfortable, where you have a lot of movement before and after so it just seems out of place
00:36:108 (1,2) -
00:32:826 (4,5,6,7) - this spacing tho, seems too much for me, you lose all emphasis for 00:32:514 (2,1) -
00:33:920 (2,3,4,5,6) - similar problem with beat emphasis, you have a very strong beat at 00:34:233 (3) - but it's spaced very little in comparison to 00:34:389 (4) - which is a much weaker beat
01:21:108 (1,2) - they are spaced too close for comfort, it's similar situation when you stacked before, breaking momentum here aswell
02:10:152 - unsnapped slider start
02:13:295 (6,1) - inconsistant spacing with 00:57:045 (6,1) -
03:27:045 (6,1) - this one is ok because more intense
02:29:076 (9) - same like 00:17:826 (4) -
03:00:796 (1,2,3,4,1) - reducing spacing like this here is pretty random, music stays the same
most important thing I found here is a lot of overmap stuff like 00:12:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - if you would listen closely you'd hear a lot of your blue ticks don't belong to be in the music here and the rhythm is different than you implied with those kick sliders. the way you made the rhythm in the insane diff is good so I suggest using something like that.
notable mentions of overmap: 00:23:061 (2) - 00:25:404 (4) - 00:30:873 (10) - 00:35:092 (3,6) - 01:01:029 (2) - and so on
little overmap is ok, but not so severely, the music already has a lot of places where you can put 1/4s and you should use that instead of putting it where it doesn't belong with the music
[Expert]
00:12:358 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I guess this will apply to most of your diffs
00:17:826 (4) - same as pochiko and most likely all other diffs
01:12:826 (4) -
00:21:108 (1,2) - fix blanket, if that's what you tried
00:24:623 (4) - like it's starting to look similar like pochiko diff with these overmaps, you can just use it on a drum sounds that is nearby like this one 00:24:779 -
00:25:092 (2,4) -
01:30:092 (3,6) -
00:35:092 (2,4) - I suppose I'll stop looking for these, but it's an issue you will want to look into
in most of the diffs looks like it's just the two hardest diffs
00:37:983 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - the music gets calmer but the spacing gets holy big
01:58:139 (2,4) - for aesthetics aligning and spacing those the same as 01:57:983 (1,3) - will look better
02:20:170 (3,4) - delete these? or atleast space less, those are really WEAK sounds but spaced with the rest of the patern
02:38:920 (1) - NC?
02:41:576 (2,3,1) - something happened to your spacing here, it's very small comparing to everything else
02:58:295 (5,1) - flow is weird
[Extra]
00:09:858 (1,2,3) - flow
01:34:233 (1,2) - lul, you made them diagonal now, when you had symmetry at 01:32:358 (1,2,1,2) - , so make them like 01:33:608 (1,2) -
01:42:514 (2,3) - rather inconsistant spacing if you look at 01:41:889 (6,7) -
01:46:420 (2,3,4) - flow like that doesn't work that well imo
01:46:889 (4,5,6) - also rather sharp and uncomforatble angle into that stream here
02:22:358 (1,2,3,4,1) - will look better if blanket
02:39:233 (3) - spliting this into two 1/4 sliders would be cool with the drums
[Insane]
01:10:951 (5,1) - emphasis tho, should space much more and/or lessen the spacing of before but I think increasing this is better
01:21:108 (1,2) - flow
01:49:232 (6,7) - you broke something here, two objects on one tick
01:49:857 (12,1) -
02:13:451 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm suprised you didn't use paterns like these in the higher diffs, maybe you should give it a go?
02:39:701 (1) - this whole section you have close to no emphasis on downbeat 02:40:951 (5,1) - 02:43:451 (5,1) - 02:44:701 (5,1) - etc. it's almost consistant now, but could definetely try adding pressure for the downbeat
03:24:701 (5) - nc
03:40:952 (1) - emphasis
03:42:201 (1) -
[Hard]
01:54:858 - end spinner here - that's where the sound ends that follows it
02:40:326 (3,4) - flow
03:30:951 (5) - nc
[Normal]
00:28:295 (5) - that stack is barely visible because autostacking puts in a bit to the bottom right, you might want to manual stack it so it's not hidden underneat the slider body
01:48:608 (3,4,5) - might be too dificult for beginners but oh well it fits... on the other hand you can do 1/2 slider into a circle and same for 01:49:233 (5,6) -
http://puu.sh/pcH2Z/cfa084889f.jpg , additionally it's not very consistant as it is, same sound but only one of them has that 3 1/2 in a row
ok so 03:01:733 (1) - this part focuses a lot on 1/3 and mapping stuff on 1/3 now would be weird for beginners to play, so when you snapped stuff on white ticks it was ok, but then you reached 03:13:451 (4,5,6) - which now has incorect snapping. I'd suggest stick with white ticks here, because vocals at some places are 1/3 but you snapped wrongly to 1/4
I'll just lis parts of incorect snapping:
03:12:826 (2,4) -
03:13:764 (5) -
03:15:951 (5) - [Easy]
I'd suggest you stick with lower lenght of combos, you often nc only every 4 downbeat which is looong
that's it I guess, main thing was wrong snaps in normal and overmapps in expert and pochiko
Good luck!