Shimamura Uzuki (CV:Ayaka Ohashi) - S(mile)ING! · forum

Vanillas

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-05-12T10:39:38+00:00

Arusamour wrote:
General
Prefere just standard difficulty names
Debut (1.47 stars, 144 notes) -> Easy
Regular (2.05 stars, 216 notes) -> Normal
Pro (3.06 stars, 303 notes) -> Hard
M@ster (4.31 stars, 459 notes) -> M@ster is fine.

As the song is from a rhythm game, and the diff names is also from that, so I'll keep the name.

Debut (1.47 stars, 144 notes)
Avoid sliders such as 00:11:722 (1) -, 00:14:419 (1) -, 00:22:509 (1) -, 00:35:992 (1) -, etc... They all have one thing in common and they are not done properly. Some of these sliders don't overlap circles, have 1 extra anchor points, wrong red anchors.
01:53:857 (1,2) - Space more, they are basically touching. Fixed
02:22:340 (3) - change to 7/2 slider. Fixed
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Regular (2.05 stars, 216 notes)
00:16:104 (4) - Replace with 3/2 slider [ofc, 00:16:610 (5) gets deleted]
00:18:464 (4) - Shorten to 1/1 slider, place another 1/1 on 00:18:969, place circle on 00:19:475. Fixed
00:25:879 (3,4,5,6) - Delete this whole section. Replace with
Fixed

Higher slider velocity is preferred due to the 1/2 slider spam. Personally, the 1/2 spam is messy and could be re-done in a cleaner way. sure it does, I'll try to remap it.

I don't know if you agree with most of what i've said, but if you do and still are confused, i can help you out irc.
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I don't want to mod the Insane zzz.

Your NM request from p/5040843/ is done

Thanks a lot for your modding!

MoeAsuka

302 posts

Joined October 2013

MoeAsuka 2016-05-13T10:44:12+00:00

骗个kd，顺便求个mu

[General]
音效有点大声，要不要调低一点音量？而且音效感觉也有点加的太多了，有点吵

[Regular]
02:11:722 - 漏了break

[Pro]
00:15:767 (1) - ctrl+H? 感觉跟后面几个物件联系紧密一点比较好
01:50:655 (4) - 跟后面统一，要么后面也加两个单点，要么删掉这个。当然我的建议是删掉
02:04:643 (4) - Hard尽量减少遮挡比较好吧，特别是滑条尾，可以往左移一点
02:11:722 - 别的难度这里都有个note，统一一下。当然我觉得这个地方放单点其实是有点奇怪的，用02:11:385 (4) - 开始的滑条怎么样？
02:17:284 (4) - 去掉滑条尾的clap，不舒服。红线上尽量少下音效

[M@ster]
00:31:104 (2,3,4,5,6) - 说实话我更喜欢2-4-6-3-5这样的flow，不过现在这样也没什么问题，看你爱好吧
02:11:722 (1) - 可以移到和4重合的位置，现在这样看着有点缺少联系

就是这些啦~顺带一提，今天的骗氪太丧心病狂了，然后我买google卡居然还大失败了...

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-05-13T12:29:24+00:00

MoeAsuka wrote:
骗个kd，顺便求个m

就是这些啦~顺带一提，今天的骗氪太丧心病狂了，然后我买google卡居然还大失败了...

已MU，先给个KD有空我在改（懒癌发作）。。。~~顺便我想了半天没想起来姥爷您是谁~~

MoeAsuka

302 posts

Joined October 2013

MoeAsuka 2016-05-13T15:46:56+00:00

Vanillas wrote:
MoeAsuka wrote:
骗个kd，顺便求个m

就是这些啦~顺带一提，今天的骗氪太丧心病狂了，然后我买google卡居然还大失败了...
已MU，先给个KD有空我在改（懒癌发作）。。。~~顺便我想了半天没想起来姥爷您是谁~~

就是mapping only群里面的啊...previously known as Asukasukisuki ，之前群名片一直没改过来QAQ

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-05-14T15:47:43+00:00

MoeAsuka wrote:
骗个kd，顺便求个mu

[General]
音效有点大声，要不要调低一点音量？而且音效感觉也有点加的太多了，有点吵音效貌似真没多加，声音大倒是，我考虑下用AU调低点

[Regular]
02:11:722 - 漏了break Fixed

[Pro]
00:15:767 (1) - ctrl+H? 感觉跟后面几个物件联系紧密一点比较好 Fixed
01:50:655 (4) - 跟后面统一，要么后面也加两个单点，要么删掉这个。当然我的建议是删掉 Fixed
02:04:643 (4) - Hard尽量减少遮挡比较好吧，特别是滑条尾，可以往左移一点感觉不太好看，我和1遮挡好了
02:11:722 - 别的难度这里都有个note，统一一下。当然我觉得这个地方放单点其实是有点奇怪的，用02:11:385 (4) - 开始的滑条怎么样？ Fixed
02:17:284 (4) - 去掉滑条尾的clap，不舒服。红线上尽量少下音效 Fixed

[M@ster]
00:31:104 (2,3,4,5,6) - 说实话我更喜欢2-4-6-3-5这样的flow，不过现在这样也没什么问题，看你爱好吧我自己打有点不舒服，先这样
02:11:722 (1) - 可以移到和4重合的位置，现在这样看着有点缺少联系没重合吧，错位了一下感觉好一点

就是这些啦~顺带一提，今天的骗氪太丧心病狂了，然后我买google卡居然还大失败了...

hyouri

390 posts

Joined June 2012

hyouri 2016-05-15T22:18:53+00:00

hello from modq

very nice storyboard!

[General]

Tag: "Smileing" this got me triggered holy xddddddddddd but seriously it should be Smiling that's what it's supposed to say when (mile) is removed, they can't just do "S(mil)ing".
Why is im@s2_bg_studio.png, im@s2_bg_studio_movie.png, im@s2_bg_theater_stage.png, Thanks.png not in /sb or /Image?
Source: アイドルマスターシンデレラガールズ
It should be in japanese, not english. You can put "The iDOLM@STER Cinderella Girls" in your tags.
Remove tags: "bandainamco" "346" "productions"
1. The production company and editor was Columbia Music Entertainment Japan.
2. If you are referring to the game, you can use tags "Namco" "Bandai" "Games" because they are the developers. Although I don't see why developer company has to be in tags, I wouldn't have it in there.
Artist: Shimamura Uzuki (CV: Ohashi Ayaka)
The romanization of her name is "Ayaka Ohashi". But if you go by pure translation from 大橋彩香 -> Oohashi Ayaka, it becomes wrong. It's vocally correct, but not literally.
And also add a space between Uzuki and (CV: because Shimamura Uzuki(CV: Ohashi Ayaka) looks ugly and is incorrect.
And also add tag "deresute" because that's the game

Sources

http://www.project-imas.com/
http://www.project-imas.com/wiki/Ayaka_Ohashi
http://www.project-imas.com/wiki/THE_ID ... mura_Uzuki
https://anidb.net/perl-bin/animedb.pl?s ... &aid=10585
probably more

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-05-16T05:52:02+00:00

Alveryn wrote:
hello from modq

very nice storyboard!

[General]
Tag: "Smileing" this got me triggered holy xddddddddddd but seriously it should be Smiling that's what it's supposed to say when (mile) is removed, they can't just do "S(mil)ing". LOL, Tags" Smileing" is just for searching... As you search S(mile)ING! it'll turn to smileing. So I wanna keep it for searching...
Why is im@s2_bg_studio.png, im@s2_bg_studio_movie.png, im@s2_bg_theater_stage.png, Thanks.png not in /sb or /Image? Ah...I'll fix them~
Source: アイドルマスターシンデレラガールズ OK, fixed~
It should be in japanese, not english. You can put "The iDOLM@STER Cinderella Girls" in your tags.
Remove tags: "bandainamco" "346" "productions" Ok ,I'll remove them~
1. The production company and editor was Columbia Music Entertainment Japan.
2. If you are referring to the game, you can use tags "Namco" "Bandai" "Games" because they are the developers. Although I don't see why developer company has to be in tags, I wouldn't have it in there.
Artist: Shimamura Uzuki (CV: Ohashi Ayaka) Fixed~
The romanization of her name is "Ayaka Ohashi". But if you go by pure translation from 大橋彩香 -> Oohashi Ayaka, it becomes wrong. It's vocally correct, but not literally.
And also add a space between Uzuki and (CV: because Shimamura Uzuki(CV: Ohashi Ayaka) looks ugly and is incorrect.
And also add tag "deresute" because that's the game
Fixed~

Sources
http://www.project-imas.com/
http://www.project-imas.com/wiki/Ayaka_Ohashi
http://www.project-imas.com/wiki/THE_ID ... mura_Uzuki
https://anidb.net/perl-bin/animedb.pl?s ... &aid=10585
probably more

Thanks a lot for metadata checking!! This really helped me a lot !!

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Setz 2016-05-17T00:40:46+00:00

hmm i really like this song, i am not sure if you would be willing to accept a GD at this point, but I would like to map maybe a more difficult insane than what you have.

let me know what you think

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2016-05-20T03:18:55+00:00

on the tags
smiling
not smileing
although that is the pun

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-05-20T03:48:44+00:00

Momoka wrote:
on the tags
smiling
not smileing
although that is the pun

Thanks a lot for this! But "smileing" is just for searching this beatmap, as if the key word is "S(mile)ING!" , it will turn into smileing automaticly and cannot find the beatmap if I do not add "smileing" to tags. I'll fix it if it's really a problem~

Anyway, thanks a lot~~

ariffleng

42 posts

Joined August 2014

ariffleng 2016-05-20T09:23:08+00:00

Hi! From your Vanillas' STD modding queue.
Oh man my mod's going to be extremely short if this is the map I'm gonna mod.

Oh btw. My mods are entirely not an instruction for you to change your map down to every detail. My mods are all suggestions, which by means you can accept em or reject em altogether. It's your call.

General
Nothing to put here. Love your storyboard. Like seriously! Shimamu ftw~~!

Pro
00:33:127 - add note here perhaps?
02:18:969 - I'd love it if you put a note here. There's a silent double clap in the music background, so yeah.

M@ster
00:42:649 - Put a note here? Sounds good imo
01:02:789 - Put a note here? Sounds good imo
02:07:340 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - These overlaps really threw me off. Not asking you to change but yeah. Maybe cuz the combo colour
got camouflaged with the yellow background at this particular time.

Love the way you structured the map. It's already good as it is. Go for the ranking!

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-05-20T16:04:27+00:00

ariffleng wrote:
Hi! From your Vanillas' STD modding queue.
Oh man my mod's going to be extremely short if this is the map I'm gonna mod.
Oh btw. My mods are entirely not an instruction for you to change your map down to every detail. My mods are all suggestions, which by means you can accept em or reject em altogether. It's your call.

General
Nothing to put here. Love your storyboard. Like seriously! Shimamu ftw~~!

Pro
00:33:127 - add note here perhaps? Already added.
02:18:969 - I'd love it if you put a note here. There's a silent double clap in the music background, so yeah. Fixed~

M@ster
00:42:649 - Put a note here? Sounds good imo I hear nothing so I kept it.
01:02:789 - Put a note here? Sounds good imo Fixed~
02:07:340 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - These overlaps really threw me off. Not asking you to change but yeah. Maybe cuz the combo colour
got camouflaged with the yellow background at this particular time. Change combo color, maybe change these later, it surely not good

Love the way you structured the map. It's already good as it is. Go for the ranking!

Thanks a lot for modding! I'll mod back as soon as possible

Erasariel

24 posts

Joined June 2012

Erasariel 2016-05-22T06:02:08+00:00

Hi! Era here from your M4M queue. Pretty short mod as your mapset is really solid - kudos! I do have a couple suggestions and thoughts - hope they can be of use.

DEBUT
Solid map, only have one comment:

01:25:879 (1) and other sliders like this - I highly prefer minimizing or not using bezier points in Easy, and they look nicer too. See here and here for 01:28:576 (1). That said, OD is low enough for this not to matter gameplay-wise.

REGULAR
Once again - very solid map, no general suggestions. Have a couple thoughts:

01:57:565 (1,2,3,4) - This sequence doesn't really fit a slider-dominated Normal map. Try converting it to two half-tick sliders like so
01:59:587 (4,5) - How about shortening the slider to one tick and add a circle in the next white tick (see here)? It would highlight the high trilling sound at 02:00:261

PRO
Disclaimer - I had a hard time with this difficulty. Most of these thoughts can be filed as "git gud", but hopefully they can shed some light from my perspective as a 2.75*-3.25* player.

General thoughts: I'm not a fan of circles or short streams hidden behind slider ends, even on Hard. 00:59:924 (2,3,4,5) is fine, but I don't like 01:16:273 (3,4,5) at all. Try nudging the double circles a little off the slider end, maybe even put space between them like so.

00:10:205 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I had a pretty hard time with this segment. Part of it is I'm not that good with high DS circles, but the abrupt change of direction threw me off as well. Maybe consider decreasing the DS on 00:11:048 (1,2,3,4) to 1.5/1.4?

02:02:958 (5) - Why not rotate it clockwise so it flows a little better (see here)? I generally don't disrupt flow for the sake of difficulty, but it's also a 1rev slider with enough breathing room between it and the next beat so it doesn't really matter as much.

As detailed in the queue, I can't and didn't playtest and mod M@ster.

Overall, really solid work! Hope this mod helped and best of luck with ranking! <3

Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Maboyu 2016-05-22T07:30:44+00:00

[General]
Pro難度裡面的TAGS跟其他不一樣喔~~記得修改:3

[Debut]
00:22:509 (1) - 漏了clap?
00:51:834 (1) - remove這裡的NC?
00:51:834 (1,2) - 分開一點?DS已經有點小了..盡量避免觸碰~~
00:57:228 (2,3) - blanket
00:58:913 (1) - 這個尾巴remove Finish改換成 Clap?
01:02:621 (1,2) - remove這裡的NC?
01:02:621 (1,2) - 這排法有點不美觀看能不能修成這樣↓↓
http://puu.sh/p0GGA/3457d089f1.jpg
01:36:329 (3) - add Finish?
02:00:598 (4) - clap?
02:15:767 (1) - 尾巴clap?
02:16:441 (2) - ^
02:17:115 (3) - 折返的地方clap?
02:18:464 (1) - 尾巴clap?
02:19:138 (2) - ^
02:19:812 (3) - 折返的地方clap?
02:21:160 (1) - 尾巴clap?

[Regular]
00:56:891 (2) - clap?
01:00:935 (5) - 尾巴clap?
01:49:475 (1) - ^
01:57:565 (1,2,3,4) - 這4個有點難....換成一個長條?↓↓
http://puu.sh/p0Ler/4453b35608.jpg
01:59:250 (3) - clap
02:04:980 (3) - 折返+clap
02:05:992 (1) - 尾巴clap

[Pro]
00:23:183 (3) - 尾巴clap
00:37:677 (4) - nc?
00:41:722 (3) - 尾巴clap
01:16:947 (6) - nc
01:42:396 (2) - 尾巴clap
01:59:587 (4) - nc
02:01:947 (4) - ^
02:22:677 (1) - nc

只能MOD前3個難度XDD 不太會HARD以上的難度...QAQ請見諒，有問題再問我吧:3
圖做的不錯，不過有些地方都沒加clap感覺怪怪的，NC的話盡量平均一點~
這曲子好聽~~~當時玩手遊這曲子一直玩XD
nice song! 祝早日Rank~~~

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-05-22T11:26:31+00:00

Erasariel wrote:
Hi! Era here from your M4M queue. Pretty short mod as your mapset is really solid - kudos! I do have a couple suggestions and thoughts - hope they can be of use.

DEBUT
Solid map, only have one comment:

01:25:879 (1) and other sliders like this - I highly prefer minimizing or not using bezier points in Easy, and they look nicer too. See here and here for 01:28:576 (1). That said, OD is low enough for this not to matter gameplay-wise. Fixed~~

REGULAR
Once again - very solid map, no general suggestions. Have a couple thoughts:

01:57:565 (1,2,3,4) - This sequence doesn't really fit a slider-dominated Normal map. Try converting it to two half-tick sliders like so Fixed~
01:59:587 (4,5) - How about shortening the slider to one tick and add a circle in the next white tick (see here)? It would highlight the high trilling sound at 02:00:261 Fixed~

PRO
Disclaimer - I had a hard time with this difficulty. Most of these thoughts can be filed as "git gud", but hopefully they can shed some light from my perspective as a 2.75*-3.25* player.

General thoughts: I'm not a fan of circles or short streams hidden behind slider ends, even on Hard. 00:59:924 (2,3,4,5) is fine, but I don't like 01:16:273 (3,4,5) at all. Try nudging the double circles a little off the slider end, maybe even put space between them like so. Sure it does. Fixed~~

00:10:205 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I had a pretty hard time with this segment. Part of it is I'm not that good with high DS circles, but the abrupt change of direction threw me off as well. Maybe consider decreasing the DS on 00:11:048 (1,2,3,4) to 1.5/1.4? Ok~ Change to 1.5

02:02:958 (5) - Why not rotate it clockwise so it flows a little better (see here)? I generally don't disrupt flow for the sake of difficulty, but it's also a 1rev slider with enough breathing room between it and the next beat so it doesn't really matter as much.Fixed~

As detailed in the queue, I can't and didn't playtest and mod M@ster.

Overall, really solid work! Hope this mod helped and best of luck with ranking! <3

Thanks a lot for modding~~

I'll try to mod back ASAP!

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-05-22T11:27:01+00:00

AliomLoung wrote:
[General]
Pro難度裡面的TAGS跟其他不一樣喔~~記得修改:3 Fixed~

[Debut]
00:22:509 (1) - 漏了clap? Fixed~
00:51:834 (1) - remove這裡的NC? 前边是一个明显的重音，所以那个单独放NC了
00:51:834 (1,2) - 分開一點?DS已經有點小了..盡量避免觸碰~~ Fixed~
00:57:228 (2,3) - blanket 改了形状和位置
00:58:913 (1) - 這個尾巴remove Finish改換成 Clap? 4个难度的这里我都加的是FINISH 感觉还可以先不换了
01:02:621 (1,2) - remove這裡的NC? 和前面一样，重音我单独放了NC
01:02:621 (1,2) - 這排法有點不美觀看能不能修成這樣↓↓ Fixed~
http://puu.sh/p0GGA/3457d089f1.jpg
01:36:329 (3) - add Finish? 试了下感觉有点违和暂时没加
02:00:598 (4) - clap? Fixed~
02:15:767 (1) - 尾巴clap? Fixed~
02:16:441 (2) - ^ Fixed~
02:17:115 (3) - 折返的地方clap? Fixed~
02:18:464 (1) - 尾巴clap?Fixed~
02:19:138 (2) - ^Fixed~
02:19:812 (3) - 折返的地方clap?Fixed~
02:21:160 (1) - 尾巴clap?Fixed~

[Regular]
00:56:891 (2) - clap? Fixed~
01:00:935 (5) - 尾巴clap? Fixed~
01:49:475 (1) - ^ Fixed~
01:57:565 (1,2,3,4) - 這4個有點難....換成一個長條?↓↓ 换成了两个短条了
http://puu.sh/p0Ler/4453b35608.jpg
01:59:250 (3) - clap Fixed~
02:04:980 (3) - 折返+clap Fixed~
02:05:992 (1) - 尾巴clap Fixed~

[Pro]
00:23:183 (3) - 尾巴clap Fixed~
00:37:677 (4) - nc? 一句话暂时先不换了
00:41:722 (3) - 尾巴clap Fixed~
01:16:947 (6) - nc Fixed~
01:42:396 (2) - 尾巴clap Fixed~
01:59:587 (4) - ncFixed~
02:01:947 (4) - ^Fixed~
02:22:677 (1) - ncFixed~

只能MOD前3個難度XDD 不太會HARD以上的難度...QAQ請見諒，有問題再問我吧:3 没关系，本来是NM结果意外收获
圖做的不錯，不過有些地方都沒加clap感覺怪怪的，NC的話盡量平均一點~ hitsound 我一直硬伤，帮大忙了~
這曲子好聽~~~當時玩手遊這曲子一直玩XD
nice song! 祝早日Rank~~~

感谢摸图，尤其是Hitsound方面，自己漏了好多~~

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-05-27T06:20:08+00:00

heya, nm from my queue

[General]
i don't do SB so i don't know if this is true but apparently this is unrankable

[Debut]
00:12:733 (2,3) - blanket
00:22:509 (1) - isn't the sliderhead supposed to have a whistle?
00:24:868 (5,2) - arrange beats so these can overlap
00:29:924 (4,2) - move 2 down to prevent overlap
00:37:003 (2,3) - ctrl g rhythm and add note at 00:38:351
00:41:385 - shouldn't ignore this downbeat
01:09:025 (3) - don't miss downbeat. make it a slider + circle
01:36:666 - i don't think you should miss this loud piano sound
02:10:374 (4,5) - a bit close to each other. move forward a little to space

[Regular]
combo colours?
00:22:003 (2) - claps
00:47:115 (1) - mmm this isn't 2010. remove nc
00:52:171 (3,1) - blanket
00:52:509 - clap
00:52:846 - remove clap
00:53:183 (1) - claps
00:59:587 (3) - in easy this rhythm was 2 sliders to use 4 finishes. in normal you ignored the finishes here 00:59:587 - and here 00:59:924
01:04:643 - check claps to see they appear every 2 white ticks
01:08:351 (1) - finish since you had it on 01:07:003 (1,2) -
01:24:025 (3) - copy 01:21:329 (3) - hitsounds
01:25:037 (5,1) - blanket
01:34:306 - how come theres a break here when there isn't in easy. makes more sense for the break to be in easy
01:50:823 (3,1) - blanket
01:54:868 (5,1) - ^
02:00:935 (1,2,3) - finishes on all of these
02:09:025 (1,2) - blanket

[Pro]
00:14:924 (2) - clap
00:19:306 (3,4) - why make a sudden transition to map vocals? it's very hard to pick up on this change
00:31:947 (1) - density should keep increase so make this either 1/2 slider + circle or 1/2 reverse
00:59:587 - finish
00:59:924 - ^
01:07:509 (2) - add note. density should be high
01:14:756 (5) - can nc this
01:15:261 (1,2) - blanket
01:17:621 (3,1) - ^
01:19:138 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix this rhythm so it works better with the finishes. maybe http://puu.sh/p6Dib/ccb19a78c5.jpg
01:19:980 (4,1) - blanket
01:34:306 - should map
01:42:396 (2) - finishes on all beats
01:43:239 (1) - this should be a 1/1 slider that starts on big white tick
01:50:149 (2,3,4) - make some sort of pattern?
02:01:610 (3,1) - blanket
02:00:598 - u missed so many claps. check all 2nd ticks
02:04:980 (1) - i dont know why density is dropping so much here when its still kiai time

[M@ster]
remove skin preference or make it consistent with map
00:11:048 (7) - would be better if these were circles since its insane.
00:11:048 (7,8,9) - jumps are better than linear flow here
00:36:834 (4) - this doesn't feel like a good use of a reverse. the vocal comes in half way 00:37:003 - and should be clickable
00:47:115 (1) - remove nc
01:05:318 (4) - clap
01:14:250 (3,1,2) - linear flow with uneven spacing is weird. either change flow or make spacing the same
01:34:306 (1) - maappp pls
01:39:025 (2,3,4,5) - looks wonky, you should keep it straight
01:41:553 (4,5) - ctrl g rhythm
01:51:497 (5) - finish
02:11:385 (4,1) - remove overlap, keep spacing

hope this helped! gl with rank

Rukaru

829 posts

Joined April 2012

Rukaru 2016-05-29T02:47:09+00:00

wow another deresute map.

placeholder. I might be back.

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-05-29T06:36:13+00:00

Rukaru wrote:
wow another deresute map.
placeholder. I might be back.

I am playing "Battle girl high school" ~~

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-05-29T15:20:04+00:00

Pentori wrote:
heya, nm from my queue

[General]
i don't do SB so i don't know if this is true but apparently this is unrankable Thanks a lot for checking! I'll fix them later!

[Debut]
00:12:733 (2,3) - blanket Fixed
00:22:509 (1) - isn't the sliderhead supposed to have a whistle? Forgot to change, fixed~
00:24:868 (5,2) - arrange beats so these can overlap fixed
00:29:924 (4,2) - move 2 down to prevent overlap stack with 4
00:37:003 (2,3) - ctrl g rhythm and add note at 00:38:351 nice ~
00:41:385 - shouldn't ignore this downbeat temporaryly keep it, I'll change if someone also point it out
01:09:025 (3) - don't miss downbeat. make it a slider + circle fixed
01:36:666 - i don't think you should miss this loud piano sound fixed
02:10:374 (4,5) - a bit close to each other. move forward a little to space fixed

[Regular]
combo colours? fixed
00:22:003 (2) - claps fixed
00:47:115 (1) - mmm this isn't 2010. remove nc fixed
00:52:171 (3,1) - blanket fixed
00:52:509 - clap fixed
00:52:846 - remove clap fixed
00:53:183 (1) - claps fixed
00:59:587 (3) - in easy this rhythm was 2 sliders to use 4 finishes. in normal you ignored the finishes here 00:59:587 - and here 00:59:924 fixed
01:04:643 - check claps to see they appear every 2 white ticks fixed
01:08:351 (1) - finish since you had it on 01:07:003 (1,2) - fixed
01:24:025 (3) - copy 01:21:329 (3) - hitsounds fixed
01:25:037 (5,1) - blanket fixed
01:34:306 - how come theres a break here when there isn't in easy. makes more sense for the break to be in easy I decided to remove this part in Easy
01:50:823 (3,1) - blanket fixed
01:54:868 (5,1) - ^ fixed
02:00:935 (1,2,3) - finishes on all of these fixed
02:09:025 (1,2) - blanket fixed

[Pro]
00:14:924 (2) - clap fixed
00:19:306 (3,4) - why make a sudden transition to map vocals? it's very hard to pick up on this change fixed
00:31:947 (1) - density should keep increase so make this either 1/2 slider + circle or 1/2 reverse Ctrl + G 2 and 3
00:59:587 - finish fixed
00:59:924 - ^ fixed
01:07:509 (2) - add note. density should be high fixed
01:14:756 (5) - can nc this fixed
01:15:261 (1,2) - blanket fixed
01:17:621 (3,1) - ^ fixed
01:19:138 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix this rhythm so it works better with the finishes. maybe http://puu.sh/p6Dib/ccb19a78c5.jpg Nice~
01:19:980 (4,1) - blanket fixed
01:34:306 - should map As I removed this part in Easy, I'll keep this break
01:42:396 (2) - finishes on all beats fixed
01:43:239 (1) - this should be a 1/1 slider that starts on big white tick fixed
01:50:149 (2,3,4) - make some sort of pattern?
02:01:610 (3,1) - blanket fixed
02:00:598 - u missed so many claps. check all 2nd ticks all fixed
02:04:980 (1) - i dont know why density is dropping so much here when its still kiai time add some note in this part

[M@ster]
remove skin preference or make it consistent with map fixed
00:11:048 (7) - would be better if these were circles since its insane. fixed
00:11:048 (7,8,9) - jumps are better than linear flow here fixed
00:36:834 (4) - this doesn't feel like a good use of a reverse. the vocal comes in half way 00:37:003 - and should be clickable fixed
00:47:115 (1) - remove nc fixed
01:05:318 (4) - clap fixed
01:14:250 (3,1,2) - linear flow with uneven spacing is weird. either change flow or make spacing the same change flow
01:34:306 (1) - maappp pls um...I just wanna a break time here to have a rest XD
01:39:025 (2,3,4,5) - looks wonky, you should keep it straight fixed
01:41:553 (4,5) - ctrl g rhythm fixed
01:51:497 (5) - finish fixed
02:11:385 (4,1) - remove overlap, keep spacing fixed

hope this helped! gl with rank

Thank you very much for modding~

Konge

238 posts

Joined November 2012

Konge 2016-05-30T08:07:12+00:00

Hi! M4M request from my queue. 没什么事就先摸了

没什么大问题,就水一发吧
SB挺好看

[General]

感觉缺了很多音效的样子首先低难度的clap音有很多都没下,如果有音效需要下在滑条上可以用slidertick解决,必要时可以使用tick2
然后就是没有whistle,有也是默认的那个非常轻的,在重音上没有音效是不好的其实你抄一下GD的音效就可以了,whistle可以用他的
[Debut]
感觉DS稍微有点小,不过无伤大雅
00:40:037 - 空着有点不舒服
00:51:160 - 00:51:497 - ^
01:01:947 - 01:02:284 - ^
02:18:127 - ^
02:20:823 - ^
NC Nazi
00:49:138 (3) - NC
01:02:621 (1) - 取消NC
01:09:700 (4) - NC
01:45:767 (1) - 取消NC
01:47:115 (3) - NC
01:49:475 (1) - 取消NC
01:50:149 (2) - NC
01:51:497 (1) - 取消NC
01:53:857 (1) - 取消NC
01:55:205 (4) - NC
01:56:216 (1) - 取消NC
02:04:643 (1) - 取消NC
02:05:992 (3) - NC
02:08:351 (1) - 取消NC
02:09:025 (2) - NC[Regular]
00:20:992 (1,2,3,1) - 虽然全程DS但我觉得这个梗还是不应该出现在N难度里,后面也有类似的梗,请斟酌一下
[Pro]
Fine
[M@ster]
既然已经是I了那么除非真的没有音否则节奏应该尽量下满的 GD就可以作为参考
00:03:127 (6) - 这个改成SV稍慢的1/1滑条如何?
00:12:733 (4) - 改成1/2滑条
00:14:082 (4) - ^
00:26:216 (5,1,2) - 这里节奏下的有点不妥我的下法是删掉00:26:216 (5,2) - 00:26:553 (1) - 提前到00:26:385 - , 00:26:216 - 加Note
00:26:891 - 加1/2滑条
图
00:55:879 (5) - 改成1/2滑条
01:15:767 (3,1) - 这俩离得有点太近了
01:16:862 - 漏音
02:23:857 - 这里应该加个Note然后和02:24:194 (1) - 弄个Anti-jump
[Setz's M@ster+]
wow pp mapu (ฅ´ω`ฅ)
00:22:509 (1) - I think a winding slider is better here
00:43:407 (1) - blanket could be better
00:57:902 (2,3) - this stack is not really good
01:04:812 (2) - I think this should be a little left because it looks like a failed blanket with01:04:306 (1) - now
Good map and I have nothing else to say

就这样了, good luck

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Setz 2016-05-30T08:28:31+00:00

I cant quote your post for some reason... so I will just respond here.

I prefer straight slider, its my style really, i know people dont like how they look, but it plays fine.
The stack is fine, perfectly readable by the target audience of this diff.
The stream is not supposed to blanket
and I moved the circle to the left like you said.

thanks for the mod!

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Konge

238 posts

Joined November 2012

Konge 2016-05-30T08:50:38+00:00

Setz wrote:

I cant quote your post for some reason... so I will just respond here.

I prefer straight slider, its my style really, i know people dont like how they look, but it plays fine.
The stack is fine, perfectly readable by the target audience of this diff.
The stream is not supposed to blanket
and I moved the circle to the left like you said.

thanks for the mod!

SPOILER

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Title:S(mile)ING!
TitleUnicode:S(mile)ING!
Artist:Shimamura Uzuki (CV:Ayaka Ohashi)
ArtistUnicode:島村 卯月 (CV:大橋 彩香)
Creator:Vanillas
Version:Setz's M@ster+
Source:アイドルマスター シンデレラガールズ
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I can't edit it myself...

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-05-30T10:26:44+00:00

Hi! M4M request from my queue. 没什么事就先摸了没法回复。。。一脸懵逼
没什么大问题,就水一发吧

SB挺好看

General
感觉缺了很多音效的样子首先低难度的clap音有很多都没下,如果有音效需要下在滑条上可以用slidertick解决,必要时可以使用tick2
然后就是没有whistle,有也是默认的那个非常轻的,在重音上没有音效是不好的其实你抄一下GD的音效就可以了,whistle可以用他的

Debut
感觉DS稍微有点小,不过无伤大雅
00:40:037 - 空着有点不舒服加了~
00:51:160 - 00:51:497 - ^ 加了~
01:01:947 - 01:02:284 - ^ 加了~
02:18:127 - ^ 加了~
02:20:823 - ^ 加了~
NC Nazi all fixed
00:49:138 (3) - NC
01:02:621 (1) - 取消NC
01:09:700 (4) - NC
01:45:767 (1) - 取消NC
01:47:115 (3) - NC
01:49:475 (1) - 取消NC
01:50:149 (2) - NC
01:51:497 (1) - 取消NC
01:53:857 (1) - 取消NC
01:55:205 (4) - NC
01:56:216 (1) - 取消NC
02:04:643 (1) - 取消NC
02:05:992 (3) - NC
02:08:351 (1) - 取消NC
02:09:025 (2) - NC

Regular
00:20:992 (1,2,3,1) - 虽然全程DS但我觉得这个梗还是不应该出现在N难度里,后面也有类似的梗,请斟酌一下感觉还好，这里有点刻意放的难度吧，要不难度有点上不去了，先Keep

Pro
Fine

M@ster
既然已经是I了那么除非真的没有音否则节奏应该尽量下满的 GD就可以作为参考之前摸图的时候有说过Overmap所以去掉了一堆，我考虑下
00:03:127 (6) - 这个改成SV稍慢的1/1滑条如何? 不是太喜欢这样突然变速，我在后边加了个Note
00:12:733 (4) - 改成1/2滑条好~
00:14:082 (4) - ^ 好~
00:26:216 (5,1,2) - 这里节奏下的有点不妥我的下法是删掉00:26:216 (5,2) - 00:26:553 (1) - 提前到00:26:385 - , 00:26:216 - 加Note 好~
00:26:891 - 加1/2滑条我想了下还是加了两个Note
图
00:55:879 (5) - 改成1/2滑条好~
01:15:767 (3,1) - 这俩离得有点太近了改了~
01:16:862 - 漏音加了
02:23:857 - 这里应该加个Note然后和02:24:194 (1) - 弄个Anti-jump 已改~

就这样了, good luck

感谢摸图~~今天网抽的莫名其妙所有的图都下不了。。。VPN也不行，我尽量今天把你的图摸完Orz

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-06-01T03:42:32+00:00

Nice

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2016-06-01T07:25:02+00:00

Hi for m4m.

[General]
What's your intention about your diff's name? I prefer Easy Normal Hard Insane is better..../

[Debut(Easy)]
00:14:082 (4,1) - blanket miss
00:15:767 (3,4) - This flow is hard to play for beginner players. Imo, this flow could be better for play.
00:21:834 (3,1) - ^ I can't understand why you broke the flow. my suggestion
00:32:284 (3,4) - ^
00:46:778 (1,2) - This pattern could be difficult, Because this pattern is little bit curved.
00:51:160 (2) - this 1/2 is hard in Easy.01:01:947 (2) - this is. too.
00:51:834 (1,2) - I prefer this rhythm.
01:29:924 (3,1) - 2/3 rhythm circle is hard, too. I recommend this
02:19:138 (2,4) - why you overlapped this? it is bad to see and hard to read.
02:21:834 (2,3) - use this rhythm

[regular(normal)]
00:22:003 (2,3) - It is hard to play. 00:22:003 (2) - reverse this.
00:29:250 (3,4) - don't break flow. my suggestion
01:20:823 (2,3) - I don't know why you made this rhythm. try this
01:23:520 (2,3) - ^
01:25:037 (5,1) - blanket miss.
01:30:935 - this vocal is end at 01:31:947 - . how about make a slider?
02:03:127 (6,7) - rhythm is good, but 02:03:295 (7) - is not strong. make a slider at 6.

[pro(hard)]
00:22:003 (4,1) - why you stacked them? It is hard to play, you didn't use stack like this. don't stack.
00:29:587 (3,4) - ^
00:32:958 (4,5,6,1) - triple and jump? it's verrrrrry hard.don't make triple and make reverse slider.
01:14:756 (1) - Is NC necessary?
01:16:273 (3,4,5) - flowbreak. make this.
01:20:992 (2,4) - stack.
01:50:149 (2,3) - I could.'t read because of flow. I think, 01:50:149 (2) - after this slider, 01:50:823 (3) - Its tail sould be head. how about ctrl G at 3?

[M@ster(Insane)]
00:10:205 (1) - remove NC.
00:10:374 (3) - NC
00:16:441 (4,5) - awkward stack. don't stack it..
00:18:127 (4) - If you do ctrl g at this slider, map's flow could be better.
00:44:082 (5) - NC and 00:43:744 (1) - remove NC
00:55:711 (4,5) - this flow is very difficult. you should put 00:55:879 (5) - other way.
01:40:542 (4) - stack at 1's tail.
01:51:497 (5) - NC
02:07:340 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - OMG. This overlap pattern is very hard to read. I can't read them. Could you change into other pattern?

Good luck

-Irina Avaron-

-Irina Avaron- 2016-06-04T04:22:57+00:00

前面DALAO基本摸得都差不多了，没啥摸的xD
[General]
SB不错（羡慕曲子也很不错
[M@ster]
其实也没什么改的有点个人建议：
00:41:722 (1,2,3,4,5) - 3改到2的位置（间距听起来要加大一些
00:55:542 (3,4,5) - 4,5位置换一下比较舒服
01:06:666 (4,5) - 位置换一些舒服一点（间距改完会变很大
02:02:958 (5,6,7,8) - 滑条改成跳好一些位置也有点难受
01:59:419 (4) - 这个NOTE一下子就让光标定住了顺着FLOW往下走吧

其他没什么能摸的了
祝起飞

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-06-04T12:51:44+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
Hi for m4m.

[General]
What's your intention about your diff's name? I prefer Easy Normal Hard Insane is better..../ May not change, see this :http://puu.sh/pgnD1/b0ea38a526.jpg

[Debut(Easy)]
00:14:082 (4,1) - blanket miss Fixed
00:15:767 (3,4) - This flow is hard to play for beginner players. Imo, this flow could be better for play. Ok, nice~
00:21:834 (3,1) - ^ I can't understand why you broke the flow. my suggestion Done
00:32:284 (3,4) - ^ Keep here
00:46:778 (1,2) - This pattern could be difficult, Because this pattern is little bit curved. Kept here.
00:51:160 (2) - this 1/2 is hard in Easy.01:01:947 (2) - this is. too. I'll change them if they are unrankble~, now just kept
00:51:834 (1,2) - I prefer this rhythm. Ok, nice~
01:29:924 (3,1) - 2/3 rhythm circle is hard, too. I recommend this No, I wanna make the finish clickable
02:19:138 (2,4) - why you overlapped this? it is bad to see and hard to read. Fixed
02:21:834 (2,3) - use this rhythm Changed and a little difference from yours

[regular(normal)]
00:22:003 (2,3) - It is hard to play. 00:22:003 (2) - reverse this. Kept, will change if other modders point out this
00:29:250 (3,4) - don't break flow. my suggestion Ok, changed
01:20:823 (2,3) - I don't know why you made this rhythm. try this I'll consider, as I follow drum here, I'll change if someone also point it out
01:23:520 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:25:037 (5,1) - blanket miss. Fixed
01:30:935 - this vocal is end at 01:31:947 - . how about make a slider? No, I followed finish hitsound here, and I've try a slider but not feeling good
02:03:127 (6,7) - rhythm is good, but 02:03:295 (7) - is not strong. make a slider at 6. Nice

[pro(hard)]
00:22:003 (4,1) - why you stacked them? It is hard to play, you didn't use stack like this. don't stack. Fixed
00:29:587 (3,4) - ^ moved (4) a little down, I just prefer this stack and only make a little change
00:32:958 (4,5,6,1) - triple and jump? it's verrrrrry hard.don't make triple and make reverse slider. Fixed
01:14:756 (1) - Is NC necessary? Sure as finish
01:16:273 (3,4,5) - flowbreak. make this. Fixed
01:20:992 (2,4) - stack.Fixed
01:50:149 (2,3) - I could.'t read because of flow. I think, 01:50:149 (2) - after this slider, 01:50:823 (3) - Its tail sould be head. how about ctrl G at 3? Fixed

[M@ster(Insane)]
00:10:205 (1) - remove NC. Fixed both
00:10:374 (3) - NC
00:16:441 (4,5) - awkward stack. don't stack it.. Fixed
00:18:127 (4) - If you do ctrl g at this slider, map's flow could be better. Nice
00:44:082 (5) - NC and 00:43:744 (1) - remove NC Fixed
00:55:711 (4,5) - this flow is very difficult. you should put 00:55:879 (5) - other way. I stack it with (3)
01:40:542 (4) - stack at 1's tail. Fixed
01:51:497 (5) - NC Fixed
02:07:340 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - OMG. This overlap pattern is very hard to read. I can't read them. Could you change into other pattern? Sure, changed~

Good luck

Thanks a lot for modding~

-Irina Avaron- wrote:
前面DALAO基本摸得都差不多了，没啥摸的xD
[General]
SB不错（羡慕曲子也很不错
[M@ster]
其实也没什么改的有点个人建议：
00:41:722 (1,2,3,4,5) - 3改到2的位置（间距听起来要加大一些这一段的话是副歌之前算是平静的一段吧，所以我开着DS做的，间距就不变了
00:55:542 (3,4,5) - 4,5位置换一下比较舒服把(5)和(3)stack了然后改了下形状
01:06:666 (4,5) - 位置换一些舒服一点（间距改完会变很大 No, 目前我觉得还好
02:02:958 (5,6,7,8) - 滑条改成跳好一些位置也有点难受三连打完如果跳的话有点难度，先这样
01:59:419 (4) - 这个NOTE一下子就让光标定住了顺着FLOW往下走吧好

其他没什么能摸的了
祝起飞

感谢摸图~~~

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2016-06-04T14:45:41+00:00

From my queue

雖然你只想我看Setz's M@ster+,但是我都想連其他難度一起看,當我想給一些建議吧

[General]

我其實覺得將 "Debut" "Pro" "Regular" diff name 改為 "E@sy" "Norm@l" 與 "H@rd" 好些, 不但可以用iM@S梗, 還覺得 "E@sy" 與 "Norm@l" 比 "Debut" 與 "Regular" 較清楚的標明出難度的順序.

[M@ster]

00:11:553 (8,1) - 我什樣解釋好…雖然那種跳梗能玩得到、我亦有用類似的梗,但是不建議那樣做,比起之前的跳突然間伸出來很怪, 更加不要從來個純角反轉慢滑條,否則會很難打
:::
01:14:756 (1,2) - 感覺Finish不適合
01:14:924 (2) - 感覺三連很不適合,試試單音,移到 X:294 Y:234 看看
01:16:778 (2) - 如果 01:16:862 (3) - 沒有能突出的聲音的話三連打就夠了
:::
01:17:452 (5,1) - 建議將跳放大以突出 01:17:789 (1) - 的 Finish
01:57:228 - 在Insane的話建議不要忽略那鋼琴聲
02:23:688 (8,9) - 雖然滑條會踩著大白線,但我反而那rhythm較適合
:::

[Setz's M@ster+]
Since i never seen setz ever speak Chinese, i guess i'll mod English for this diff orz

Hmmmm.... The clap hitsound is too loud and does not fit the song which is so calm and not rich in drums, maybe change another hitsounds or tune that down? :3
Intro to 00:08:857 - Just some suggestion though, I think NC for 2 downbeats fits better because the part is kinda soft and parts like 00:02:115 (1) - kinda NC spam and does not fit well, except the last 2 notes because it seems you gonna highlight them

If you don't understand what i mean, I actually mean you can remove NC at 00:02:115 (1) - 00:04:812 (1) - 00:07:509 (1) -
00:42:396 (4,5) - This feels better for me:
:::
00:50:486 (7,8,9,10) - Since you mainly mapped the chime sounds on the previous jump pattern, I think you can try to use kick sliders instead of streams so it can emphasize the chime sounds better
:::
01:25:795 (7,1) - Not sure are you doing this on purpose, but same spacing plz
01:33:632 (7,8,9,10,1) - same as 00:50:486 (7,8,9,10) -

GL~

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-06-04T16:40:11+00:00

KuranteMelodii wrote:
From my queue

雖然你只想我看Setz's M@ster+,但是我都想連其他難度一起看,當我想給一些建議吧 Thanks a lot~

[General]
我其實覺得將 "Debut" "Pro" "Regular" diff name 改為 "E@sy" "Norm@l" 與 "H@rd" 好些, 不但可以用iM@S梗, 還覺得 "E@sy" 與 "Norm@l" 比 "Debut" 與 "Regular" 較清楚的標明出難度的順序.
嗯，的确这个问题好多Modder提出来了，本来我是考虑用游戏的难度等级，这样看的话我改了好了~

[M@ster]

00:11:553 (8,1) - 我什樣解釋好…雖然那種跳梗能玩得到、我亦有用類似的梗,但是不建議那樣做,比起之前的跳突然間伸出來很怪, 更加不要從來個純角反轉慢滑條,否則會很難打 Fixed~
:::
01:14:756 (1,2) - 感覺Finish不適合换成了clap感觉好了一点
01:14:924 (2) - 感覺三連很不適合,試試單音,移到 X:294 Y:234 看看之前的话用的单音不过有Modder提出来那个位置还是能听出来3连比较好，这里先keep了
01:16:778 (2) - 如果 01:16:862 (3) - 沒有能突出的聲音的話三連打就夠了 Fixed~
:::
01:17:452 (5,1) - 建議將跳放大以突出 01:17:789 (1) - 的 Finish Fixed~
01:57:228 - 在Insane的話建議不要忽略那鋼琴聲 Fixed~
02:23:688 (8,9) - 雖然滑條會踩著大白線,但我反而那rhythm較適合 Fixed~
:::
GL~

感谢摸图~~一时疏忽忘记了语言的问题

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Setz 2016-06-04T19:46:46+00:00

KuranteMelodii

From my queue

[Setz's M@ster+]
Since i never seen setz ever speak Chinese, i guess i'll mod English for this diff orz lol yeah I dont speak chinese

Hmmmm.... The clap hitsound is too loud and does not fit the song which is so calm and not rich in drums, maybe change another hitsounds or tune that down? :3 hmm, i honestly think it fits, i hear the drums very clearly throughabout the entire song
Intro to 00:08:857 - Just some suggestion though, I think NC for 2 downbeats fits better because the part is kinda soft and parts like 00:02:115 (1) - kinda NC spam and does not fit well, except the last 2 notes because it seems you gonna highlight them

If you don't understand what i mean, I actually mean you can remove NC at 00:02:115 (1) - 00:04:812 (1) - 00:07:509 (1) -
Double measure comboing is really crappy to play with HR, thats why i want to keep this as is.
00:42:396 (4,5) - This feels better for me:

did somehting similar
00:50:486 (7,8,9,10) - Since you mainly mapped the chime sounds on the previous jump pattern, I think you can try to use kick sliders instead of streams so it can emphasize the chime sounds better
01:25:795 (7,1) - Not sure are you doing this on purpose, but same spacing plz fixed
01:33:632 (7,8,9,10,1) - same as 00:50:486 (7,8,9,10) - I prefer the streams for both of these places. the chimes themselves are not so loud that they need kick slider for emphasis

thanks for the mod!

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Shiny Spoon

82 posts

Joined December 2013

Shiny Spoon 2016-06-05T14:54:40+00:00

[Setz's M@ster+]

00:32:958 (5,6,7,8) - Awkward curve, I suggest flipping that so it goes up works in flow of the 4 beforehand

00:42:733 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These might not actually need to be NC'd as much. (Im unsure)

00:46:778 (1,2) - Although its a downbeat, you could possibly get away with a NC on the 2, because theres a pause in the movement and music.

00:57:902 (2,3) - For an insane this could be hard to read for people?

01:01:273 (7) - This one kick slider is really unneeded, just make it two hit circles.

01:33:127 (4,5,6,7) - ...? Why this spacing at all? It seems just like random PP mapping spacing to me, very unneeded in an insane, especially considering the speed of the map and song combined, this makes for a very bad and unexpected patten in which fluctuates the flow that you had to an unreasonable proportion.

[M@ster]

00:10:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Jumps feel rather unnecessary (probably just me)

00:33:295 (1) - This isn't spaced properly with the others, if this was intentional I have no idea, but if it is...why?

[Final Thoughts]

Solid insanes, I love it! All of it! The song is absolutely adorable and combined with the amazing storyboards makes me want to map it my self haha. I wish you good luck on this map in the future. I loved modding it, and listening. Although its little, I tried my best.

Good luck!

- Spoon

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-06-05T15:21:26+00:00

Shiny Spoon wrote:

[M@ster]

00:10:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Jumps feel rather unnecessary (probably just me) Make a little change, make DS lower and replace (7) (8) with a slider.

00:33:295 (1) - This isn't spaced properly with the others, if this was intentional I have no idea, but if it is...why? lol, I've watched it for a long time and have the same feeling. I'm thinking about it~~

[Final Thoughts]

Solid insanes, I love it! All of it! The song is absolutely adorable and combined with the amazing storyboards makes me want to map it my self haha. I wish you good luck on this map in the future. I loved modding it, and listening. Although its little, I tried my best. That's OK, I do not care whether a mod is short or not. You just pay your time modding my map and that's enough.

Good luck!

- Spoon

Thanks a lot for modding~

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Setz 2016-06-05T17:09:56+00:00

Shiny Spoon

Shiny Spoon wrote:
[Setz's M@ster+]

00:32:958 (5,6,7,8) - Awkward curve, I suggest flipping that so it goes up works in flow of the 4 beforehand it actually plays perfectly with the up and down motions you are making from the previous pattern.

00:42:733 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These might not actually need to be NC'd as much. (Im unsure) NC is fine here

00:46:778 (1,2) - Although its a downbeat, you could possibly get away with a NC on the 2, because theres a pause in the movement and music. its just a 1/1 gap, no need to spam NC here

00:57:902 (2,3) - For an insane this could be hard to read for people? but this is an insane+ , i think its ok

01:01:273 (7) - This one kick slider is really unneeded, just make it two hit circles. kick slider is fine, emphasizes the drum and vocal on the white tick.

01:33:127 (4,5,6,7) - ...? Why this spacing at all? It seems just like random PP mapping spacing to me, very unneeded in an insane, especially considering the speed of the map and song combined, this makes for a very bad and unexpected patten in which fluctuates the flow that you had to an unreasonable proportion. ???????? I used similar, or actually bigger spacing at 00:10:542 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - and that was fine? also its not just random PP mapping, it fits with the sounds in the musiuc

thanks for the mod!

Chihara Minori

1,235 posts

Joined December 2013

Chihara Minori 2016-06-08T15:18:48+00:00

M4M Here~

E@sy:
• 00:40:711 (4) - light up curve
• 02:10:374 (3,4) - this light curve wont hurt anyone (p)

Norm@l:
• 01:09:700 (4) - x476 y104
• 01:27:396 (4) - do same thong that you do at 00:56:891 (2)
• 02:18:127 - add note
• 02:20:823 - ^

H@rd:
• 00:02:452 (4) - increase the curve a bit
• 00:09:025 (1) - the current one is good actually, just giving an alternate (p)
• 00:11:553 (4) - x360 y56
• 00:29:587 (3,4) - if you want to make it as a trap just stack them
• 01:13:576 (3) - increase the curve a bit
• 01:19:980 (4) - light down curve
• 01:51:497 (4) - ctrl+g, little miss reading here

M@ster:
• 00:15:261 (4) - x346 y284
• 00:15:767 (1) - light up curve
• 01:17:789 (1) - light curve (p)
• 01:18:464 (3) - another light down curve
those jumps touching me ~

Setz's M@ster:
its set(s) already ~

This map will be ranked soon, good luck~

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-06-09T03:09:34+00:00

eclipselotus wrote:
M4M Here~

E@sy:
• 00:40:711 (4) - light up curve done
• 02:10:374 (3,4) - this light curve wont hurt anyone (p) done

Norm@l:
• 01:09:700 (4) - x476 y104 done
• 01:27:396 (4) - do same thong that you do at 00:56:891 (2) done
• 02:18:127 - add note done
• 02:20:823 - ^ done

H@rd:
• 00:02:452 (4) - increase the curve a bit done
• 00:09:025 (1) - the current one is good actually, just giving an alternate (p) ok
• 00:11:553 (4) - x360 y56 not looking good, keep
• 00:29:587 (3,4) - if you want to make it as a trap just stack them fixed
• 01:13:576 (3) - increase the curve a bit done
• 01:19:980 (4) - light down curve done
• 01:51:497 (4) - ctrl+g, little miss reading here done

M@ster:
• 00:15:261 (4) - x346 y284 done
• 00:15:767 (1) - light up curve done
• 01:17:789 (1) - light curve (p) done
• 01:18:464 (3) - another light down curve done
those jumps touching me ~ www

Setz's M@ster:
its set(s) already ~

This map will be ranked soon, good luck~

Thanks a lot for modding~

Ashton

Ashton 2016-06-09T03:44:24+00:00

Monster

M4M

00:02:452 (5,6,7) - I think stack would flow better

00:15:093 (3) - maybe make this note slightly close too the slider? It'll flow better

00:31:104 (2,3,4,5,6) - consider rearranging the notes, it flows awkward

00:42:396 (3,4) - hard to read notes, maybe making them further apart?

00:46:441 (4,5) - ^

01:41:216 (2,3) - switch places of these notes around, otherwise it'll confuse players (like me) who usually play 4*s

sorry for this pathetic mod sorry sorry sorry prob wont' even use one of these, your map is just too good

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-06-09T03:52:38+00:00

Whirl wrote:
Monster lol, the diff name is Master actually.

M4M

00:02:452 (5,6,7) - I think stack would flow better ? already stack

00:15:093 (3) - maybe make this note slightly close too the slider? It'll flow better um, I think it flows well when test play, so keep

00:31:104 (2,3,4,5,6) - consider rearranging the notes, it flows awkward sure that may confuse some player, but I just like the jump, so keep

00:42:396 (3,4) - hard to read notes, maybe making them further apart? No, as Insane diff, I think it's common to stack notes.

00:46:441 (4,5) - ^ ^

01:41:216 (2,3) - switch places of these notes around, otherwise it'll confuse players (like me) who usually play 4*s ^

sorry for this pathetic mod sorry sorry sorry prob wont' even use one of these, your map is just too good

Thanks a lot for modding~

WooWooWoo_old

116 posts

Joined January 2015

WooWooWoo_old 2016-06-11T21:16:13+00:00

Hi, Vanillas ~

[H@rd]
00:40:374 (1,2) - there is strong beat at 00:41:048 - So it's a good spot for slider, because sound at 00:41:385 - is weak for playing single circle. Try this

Img

00:51:329 (2,3) - A bit weird because there is nothing at 00:51:666 - reverse and strong beat 00:51:834 - is sliderend. Try 1/1 slider + 1/2 slider or circle. For example

Img

00:57:228 - strong beat is here. I suggest to move slider 00:57:059 (4) - to white tick

01:00:935 (5) - I think there is not real reason for reverse here. Common slider is better for me. (same places 01:02:284 (3) -01:45:430 (3) -) There are many good places for reverse sliders in the song. And in my opinion the reverse is thing that should not be abused.

02:18:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it sounds a bit off. I suggest to do this. The cursor is at 02:19:812 - (object 5)

Img

00:07:846 (4) - I think 2 circles instead slider is better. This allows players to feel the sound of a bell

01:08:351 (5) - Possibly off-screen objects. It is better to move somewhere

[~~Ins@ne~~ M@ster]
I don't think that 02:23:267 (5) - really need. it's confusing.

01:14:756 - is right place for 01:14:924 (2) - reverse slider. So in other words i suggest to swap 01:14:756 (1,2) -

00:34:812 (2) - Common slider sounds better here

Try to move 00:42:733 (5) - reverse slider to 00:42:396 - for better following vocal

[Norm@l]
00:41:722 (2) - i'm not sure about strong beat at the slider end. Try this

Img

01:20:486 (1,2,3,4) - (and 01:24:025 (3,4) - ) I think it sounds a bit off. I suggest to take your rhythm from Hard. It applies here as well

01:40:374 (2,3,4,5) - a bit awkward to read this pattern. If you want to follow vocals here then try this

Img

[E@sy]
00:46:778 (1,2) - Rather stack these two to facilitate playing

00:58:913 (1,2) - I'm not sure about hitsound at sliderend(1). better to remove it. Also you acn try something with reverse slider here. Just like this

Img

02:21:834 (2,3) - I don't think this reverse slider is the best option. Maybe try this:

Img

Great map, nice work you did. Good luck with everything!
P.S. Storyboard is awesome

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Vanillas 2016-06-12T04:52:46+00:00

WooWooWoo wrote:
Hi, Vanillas ~

[H@rd]
00:40:374 (1,2) - there is strong beat at 00:41:048 - So it's a good spot for slider, because sound at 00:41:385 - is weak for playing single circle. Try this I'll keep here, as It's a soft part of the song and I really want to follow vocal here to show the soft part.
Img
00:51:329 (2,3) - A bit weird because there is nothing at 00:51:666 - reverse and strong beat 00:51:834 - is sliderend. Try 1/1 slider + 1/2 slider or circle. For example Keep too. As there is drum at 00:51:666 - though not very clear, I'll follow it.
Img

00:57:228 - strong beat is here. I suggest to move slider 00:57:059 (4) - to white tick Keep here, Though I do not like strong beat when there is tail of slider, but actually I just wanna put the slider just for flow XD

01:00:935 (5) - I think there is not real reason for reverse here. Common slider is better for me. (same places 01:02:284 (3) -01:45:430 (3) -) There are many good places for reverse sliders in the song. And in my opinion the reverse is thing that should not be abused.
reverse here as I followed vocal here, not rhythm, so I'll keep

02:18:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it sounds a bit off. I suggest to do this. The cursor is at 02:19:812 - (object 5) um, keep as I think it's alright.
Img

00:07:846 (4) - I think 2 circles instead slider is better. This allows players to feel the sound of a bell I think a slider fits the bgm here.

01:08:351 (5) - Possibly off-screen objects. It is better to move somewhere Ok ,fixed

[~~Ins@ne~~ M@ster]
I don't think that 02:23:267 (5) - really need. it's confusing. followd music here, keep

01:14:756 - is right place for 01:14:924 (2) - reverse slider. So in other words i suggest to swap 01:14:756 (1,2) - um, I think rhythm now fits the song well if you use 50% rate and listen carefully, so I keep

00:34:812 (2) - Common slider sounds better here keep here

Try to move 00:42:733 (5) - reverse slider to 00:42:396 - for better following vocal I'll consider, not feeling good after trying this rhythm

[Norm@l]
00:41:722 (2) - i'm not sure about strong beat at the slider end. Try this um, as the note is actually follow vocal, so I'll keep
Img

01:20:486 (1,2,3,4) - (and 01:24:025 (3,4) - ) I think it sounds a bit off. I suggest to take your rhythm from Hard. It applies here as well
OK, That's great
01:40:374 (2,3,4,5) - a bit awkward to read this pattern. If you want to follow vocals here then try this Fixed, nice idea
Img

[E@sy]
00:46:778 (1,2) - Rather stack these two to facilitate playing Fixed

00:58:913 (1,2) - I'm not sure about hitsound at sliderend(1). better to remove it. Also you acn try something with reverse slider here. Just like this As I followed vocal here, and also there is nothing at 01:00:261, so I'll keep
Img

02:21:834 (2,3) - I don't think this reverse slider is the best option. Maybe try this: Great~ just make a little change, replace (4)(5)(6)with repeater.
Img

Great map, nice work you did. Good luck with everything!
P.S. Storyboard is awesome

Thanks a lot for modding~

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