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GeneralNeed to work on consistent patterns with the same sound. If you have the same sound 4 times, you could make them alternate 1 2 1 2, where 1 is a pattern and 2 is a different pattern. Or 1 1 1 1 where they are all the same. I have noticed you seem to be pretty random with the patterns you do with rhythms that occur back to back, i.e. 1 2 2 3.
[Bliss]00:09:756 (1) - This slider looks REALLY bad. Try something like
this, but touched up a bit more.
!!!00:15:337 (1) - ^
This. !!!00:23:709 (1,2,3,4) - You could make this a little more interesting. Maybe something like
this. !!!00:29:290 (1,2,3,4) -
This flows better and looks better imo.
!!!00:34:872 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make the arch nicer.
!!!00:35:918 (6) - - Move this up a little.
This. !!!00:43:244 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The song doesn't increase intensity, maybe slightly, yet you are increasing the spacing like it does. I recommend spacing it consistently or not using such a big increase overall. (Plus it doesn't look very good.
) Something like
this if you want it spaced like you had before. Blue = 1.25 Red = 1.50 Yellow = 1.75.
!!!00:47:866 (3) - Remove this note.
!!!00:50:221 - Missing note on strong downbeat.
!!! 00:51:616 (1) - Looks bad.
!!!00:52:663 - Missing note on strong sound. Maybe stack it on 00:52:837 (1) - .
!!!00:52:837 (1) - Missing note on strong sound.
!!!00:54:058 - ^
!!!00:53:360 (2,3,4,1) - Try to move it so they don't overlap as much.
!!! 00:54:668 (2,3) - Raise these a few pixels up.
!!!00:54:756 (3,4) - I would do it like
this. Sounds better and goes with the song better imo.
!!!00:56:500 - ^
Same concept. !!!00:56:849 - Missing note on strong sound.
!!!01:01:384 - Missing note on downbeat.
!!!01:05:831 (2) - You have a note here, but not 01:07:227 - when it is the same sound. Try to keep things consistent throughout the map.
!!!01:07:314 (2) - Blanket this nicer.
!!!01:11:849 - Missing note on strong sound.
!!!01:12:546 - Missing note on downbeat.
!!!01:12:982 (2) - Remove this.
!!!01:14:988 - Missing note on strong sound.
!!!01:16:384 - ^
!!!01:28:854 - This was fun!
01:29:988 - I would add a
slider here to emphasize the voice after the stream.
!!!01:47:517 - You put a triplet here, but I don't hear a sound for one. But you don't put triplets on
these, where there is a sound for triplets.
!!!01:56:500 (3) - I would do
this to make it look better.
!!!02:07:663 (3,4,5,6) - I was going to say to blanket the (6) better and remove the (5), but the pattern overall isn't very good imo. Try something like
this. !!!02:21:965 (5) - This is just straight up off the screen lol....
!!!02:30:860 (2,4) - Not sure what sound you are mapping here. I would do
this. Fits a lot better. Pattern could use a touch up.
!!!02:32:779 (1,2,3,4) - You can think of something more creative than that!
!!!02:36:267 (5) - Extend this to the red tick.
!!!02:37:488 - Missing note on strong beat.
!!!02:40:889 (3) - I would remove this note but i see why you placed it.
!!!02:45:860 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can think of something more creative than that!
!!!02:47:256 (1,2,3,4) - You just had a nice set of notes on the same sound literally 2 seconds before then you do this. Do it like you did before!
!!!02:55:628 (1) - This is ugly.
!!!02:59:465 (5) - I would ctrl+g this and move it towards 02:59:290 (4) - a little more to emphasize the vocal.
!!!03:01:384 - Missing note on strong downbeat.
!!!03:04:174 - Missing note on strong downbeat.
!!!03:11:500 (3,4) - I would space these a little more.
!!!03:31:732 (8) - This is ugly. You can make a much better looking slider with only 3 points.
Example. !!!03:37:314 (2) - ^
!!!03:49:087 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The (2) slider seemed to have thrown you off. Extend the (2) 1 tick, delete 03:49:087 (3) - and move the rest back 1 tick.
Here is what mine looks like beat wise.
!!!!!!03:51:442 (1) - Off the screen.
!!!04:12:546 (1) - Ugly.
Remade easier and better. !!!04:13:767 (1) - ^
!!!04:54:407 (1,2) - These are hanging too long. Either extend or reduce 1 tick.
!!!04:59:988 (1,2) - ^
!!!05:02:081 (3,4) - Move these to the white ticks.
!!!!!! = Not that important.
!!! = You should consider.
!!! = You should do.
^Obviously all based on my own opinion.
Pretty good map none the less. Look forward to seeing it improve!