1. Easy - 4Key (1,35 stars, 557 notes)
2. Hard - 4Key (2,74 stars, 1657 notes)
3. Normal - 4Key (2,08 stars, 1110 notes)
4. TheGesk's Insane - 4Key (3,59 stars, 1987 notes)

SpinForWin wrote:

Привет!

Измени название bg на что-нибудь другое, чтобы глазу было приятнее.
Я бы на твоем месте снизил громкость хитсаундов до ~25

Easy

00:14:199 (14199|3) - без лишних слов http://puu.sh/ogJC3/ccfbcb46cb.jpg
00:36:809 - отсюда 00:46:918 - до сюда, почему бы не ставить ноту на каждую белую линию? Пошатает sr, но будет менее скучно. Нет
01:44:634 - отсюда 01:54:743 - до сюда ^ Нет
01:13:983 - добавь ноту. Окей
01:15:287 - ^ Окей
01:17:570 - ^ Окей
02:21:808 - ^ Окей
02:23:112 - ^ Окей
02:24:417 - ^ Окей
02:26:047 - ^ Окей
04:23:275 - ЛН здесь начинается. Окей
04:24:579 - ? http://puu.sh/ogLab/7a0727f0a3.jpg Окей

Normal

00:41:701 - зачем две ноты? Надо
01:15:450 - ноту? Окей
01:39:091 - добавить ноту? Окей
02:13:656 - ноту Окей
02:21:971 - ^ Окей
02:50:340 (170340|3,170503|0,171645|0,171808|1,172786|2,172949|1,173112|3,174090|3,174253|2,174416|1,175721|2) - может эти и последующие ЛНы сделаешь нотами? Нормал как никак. Окей
04:23:275 - тут ЛН начинается. Окей
04:24:579 - ? http://puu.sh/ogLLH/3756cbd6c2.jpg Окей

Hard

01:15:450 - добавь ноту.Окей
01:23:439 - отсюда 01:32:569 - до сюда, я не понимаю то как ты расположил ЛНы и две ноты на одной линии (даблами же они зовутся?). Советую тебе перемапать этот отрывок. Нет

theGesk's Insane

Как же я ору с блюющих тянок... Ой, т.е. все в порядке. Ну или я слепой.

Another Lie wrote:

Greetings, i'm here to give some of my advice (i don't know if my advice is good or not)

Hard

00:47:407 (47407|0) - can you remove it? i saw your drums using 2 note, so it will better if you remove it Okay
00:52:135 (52135|2) - ^ Okay
01:12:026 - add 1 more note (for drum) Okay
01:58:656 (118656|2,119145|0) - could you remove those? (i'm not hear drum pitch) Okay
02:45:775 (165775|1) - ^ Nope,won't remove this one
04:21:155 (261155|3,261237|2,261318|1,261400|2,261481|3,261563|1,261644|2) - remove those, and make like TheGesk''s Insane (opinion) Okay

That's all i can advice, i hope that will be most help for you
Good day

Nice diff

Dellvangel wrote:

Mayuri <3

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

В общем вам привезли пачку модов от алюминия для вашей мапы, получите, распишитесь owo

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:
(notice that columns are following like 1 2 3 4 for 4K diffs)

Easy

Inside :3

00:10:331 (10331|2) - вот это дело перемести лучше в третий столбец, чтобы компенсировать баланс нот ибо в 4м столбце у тебя на протяжении двух тактов нет ни одной ноты
Здесь 00:11:695 или здесь 00:12:376 - добавь в четвёртый столбец ЛН и закончи его тут 00:13:058 - соответственно согласно музыке, для изи диффы это хорошее заполнение предыдущей пустоты
Отсюда 00:19:855 до 00:20:833 - тоже можно добавить ЛН для выделения барабанной дроби короткой, в четвёртый столбец так же желательно (чому ты всегда его пропускаешь)
00:26:049 - акцент, добавь дополнительную ноту, здесь уж в третий столбец она пойдёт
00:36:157 (36157|2) - перекидываешь её во второй столбец и добавляешь ноту в третий столбец здесь 00:36:483 - чтобы так же выделить акцент
00:53:603 (53603|3) - начало для этого ЛНа здесь 00:53:277 - выдели лучше звук аккорда им вместо драмов, удобнее для игры
01:07:135 (67135|3) - нет никакого дополнительного бита для этой ноты, перемести её лучше сюда 01:07:787 - сохранив столбец т.к. там есть окончание дроби+бочка
01:16:592 - куда ноту отсюда забрал? поставь в четвёртый столбец для баланса, рабочий тут слышно + ритм сохраняется
01:18:222 - добавь ноту во второй столбец, акцент опять же
Часть отсюда 01:23:439 досюда 01:32:569 - лучше было бы подогнать под ритм барабанов, на твоё усмотрение ибо тут вообще для новичка не особо будет понятно - что он играет
01:54:743 - ноту во второй или третий столбец бистра, там также акцент
02:05:178 - ацент, ну ты понял, третий столбец ждёт твоей ноты
02:15:612 - а здесь её ждёт второй столбец по той же причине
02:39:090 - на этот раз без неё оказался первый столбец, восстанови справедливость
02:44:308 - то же самое, первый и третий столбцы к твоим услугам, добавляй
03:40:884 (220884|0) - начало этого ЛНа здесь 03:41:047 - ибо там дробь и начинается

Для этой диффы вроде всё, конец не стал трогать, вроде более менее понятен.

Normal

Inside :3

00:03:172 (3172|1) - замени на обычную ноту, следуя предыдущему паттерну, ЛН здесь явно не подходит
00:05:899 (5899|1) - аналогично предыдущему, лучше замени на обычную ноту (то, что там идёт между ними нота не значит, что нужен ЛН ибо ты её всё равно не акцентируешь в нормале)
00:17:623 (17623|2) - переставь в первый столбец для баланса со следующим аккордом
00:36:483 - акцент, добавь ноту в третий столбец
00:36:646 (36646|2) - если выполнил предыдущий пункт, переставь эту ноту в первый столбец, чтобы избежать джека тут
00:51:320 - добавь ноту в первый столбец под гитарку, в нормале можно выделить это дело
01:03:059 - добавь во второй/третий столбец под бочку здесь, а то до этого места выделял, а тут обделил
01:13:005 - добавь ноту для акцента, третий/четвёртый столбец
01:15:450 - та же ситуация, добавь в первый
01:16:755 - а здесь во второй, раз уж ты до этого выделял
01:39:091 (99091|1) - удали эту, здесь наоборот никакого акцента нет, в паттерн не вписывается
01:43:982 - добавляй в третий столбец т.к. дальше ты акцентируешь те же самые звуки
01:54:743 - второй столбец ищет ноту, добавь её пожалуйста owo
02:21:971 - добавь в четвёртый столбец, так же акцент
02:44:308 - та же ситуация с первым столбцом, добавляй
02:46:916 - так же добавь в первый столбец ноту
03:03:547 - добавь во второй столбец, рабочий остался без ноты тут
03:20:830 - последнюю ноту наверное забыл докинуть, в третий столбец пожалуйста
04:07:623 - добавь как минимум одну ноту для акцента тут, в первый столбец можно
04:21:359 (261359|0,261522|1,261685|2) - поставь 1/12 и сдвинь эти ноты соответственно 04:21:372 , 04:21:535 , 04:21:698

Таки тут всё.

Hard

Inside :3

00:35:505 (35505|0) - желательно удалить, нет никакого дополнительного звука чтобы акцентировать
00:36:157 (36157|0) - перемести в третий столбец эту и 00:36:320 (36320|3) - во второй столбец эту, для выделения драмов очень даже подойдёт т.к. звук тоже повторяется
00:54:581 (54581|0) - нет никакого добавочного звука, чтобы ставить здесь аккорд, лучше перемести её сюда 00:54:663 - тут как раз недостаёт звука тома
00:56:619 - добавь сюда ЛН и закончи его тут 00:57:353 - для дополнительного выделения звука
01:11:537 - добавь ноту в третий столбец, здесь ещё тарелку выделить надо
01:16:755 - аналогичная ситуация, добавь в первый или четвёртый столбец
01:17:081 (77081|3) - а вот эта нота тут будет лишняя, рекомендовал бы убрать
01:43:982 - здесь так же недостаёт одного звука для тарелки, добавь, перемести эту ноту 01:43:819 (103819|0) - в третий столбец, а там 01:43:982 - добавь в первый
02:21:808 (141808|1,141808|0) - перемести ноты во второй и четвёртый столбец, затем добавь одну ноту 02:21:971 - тут в первый столбец, чтобы все акценты выделить и паттерн сохранить
02:23:112 (143112|1) - та же ситуация, перекинь эту ноту в первый столбец, а потом добавь ноту 02:23:275 - тут во второй столбец
02:24:580 - ну и с этим моментом можешь так же поступить, либо ещё отзеркалить его, чтобы не повторялся паттерн
02:36:319 (156319|3) - можешь убрать эту ноту, здесь нет дополнительного звука чтобы акцентировать
02:59:797 (179797|2,179878|1) - предлагаю поменять здесь ноты местами, чтобы трипл в конце было более удобно играть
03:42:841 - добавь ноту в первый столбец для акцента
03:46:917 - так же, только во второй столбец
04:13:860 (253860|2) - не знаю, что у тебя тут забыла третья нота, но ей тут явно не место, так что лучше удали
04:21:155 - снова ставишь 1/12 и подгоняешь ноты под музыку, желательно на 50% плэйбеке минимум, также добавь ноту сюда, где я поставил начало тайм кода ибо тут и начинается пианинка

Здесь тоже закончил.

Ну а дальше берёшь и собираешь моды пока не ранкнешь это дело.
Удачи тебе в этом owo

Protastic101 wrote:

Hello~ From my queue (which I'm too lazy to link to). Do I want to do a full mod? I'll try to do a long mod. I like the song but length and ughhhh. I'm a lazy modder.
Oh my god, screw my homework, I'm done.

Column 1|2|3|4

General

[Song Setup]
OD 8 for Easy? Uh, maybe reduce that to 7 since that's a pretty cruel OD rate for that difficulty. Done
Same as above for Normal. Done
Maybe lower OD of HD to 7.5 and increase HP to 7.5 Done
Increase HP of Insane to 8? Done
[Timing and Stuff]
00:13:058 - I believe the bpm here is actually 93, but I'm a rhythmically challenged idiot, so I'd get other input on that. I don't think it is,but i'll re-check later
[Aimod Here with a Special TV Offer]
EZ diff 03:10:395 (190395|0) - Hi, please make me a short note because I am currently an LN shorter than 10ms There was an LN? 0w0.
[box=Easy]Comment (Sorry if I stole your color or came too close to it): Quick note too, this is all just my opinion. I'm just going to say here that I think this difficulty is undermapped. It's basically just 4 and a half minutes of tapping a key every other beat, with the exception of 02:49:525 to 03:05:177 where it's a note every beat with a few 1/2 notes in there. Like, I enjoy playing EZ difficulties, and there's nothing wrong to catering to beginning players, but this is to the point where it's repetitive and not really that fun to play. There's only that one dense part I mentioned above, but there are other parts where it could be a little denser, like during your first and second kiai's. Basically, this mod is just focusing on making the EZ a little less easy but still playable for beginners (hopefully). If you want to keep this difficulty as is, completely disregard this mod, because there are no technical errors (at least when I looked through it), so there's nothing that is an absolute must. This is all my subjective opinion.

00:00:786 to 00:10:331 - For this part, I suggest just following the three piano notes in the beginning of each measure. It's a little confusing for me since you map the part I mentioned, plus the piano notes on the upbeat (blue tick), like 00:01:638 (1638|1,2320|2) and others. If you accept this, do the following suggestions below (or something like it). Nope
00:00:956 and 00:01:297 - Add note for piano. Nope
00:03:683 and 00:04:024 - ^^ Nope
00:06:070 and 00:06:411 and 00:06:751 - ^^ Nope
00:09:138 and 00:09:479 and 00:09:990 and 00:10:161 - ^^ Nope
00:01:638 (1638|1,2320|2,3001|3,4365|2,5047|1,5729|0,7092|1,7774|3,8456|2) - Remove these. These are the musical phrases that come after the 3 piano notes in the beginning of each measure. Keep them if you're fine with layering this on top of the other part I mentioned above.
00:20:181 and 00:20:507 - I think you should add notes here to represent the drum sound. Nope
00:20:833 (20833|0,21485|1,22138|2,22790|3,23442|0,24094|2,24746|1,25398|3) - Make these LN's because they're sustained (end them where the notes meet). I even think you could add a note at the start of each of them to represent the drum. Nope
00:26:049 to 00:36:483 - Add notes on every downbeat for the drums. Nope
00:31:266 (31266|1) - You could probably make this an LN to represent the muffled piano note that's held in the background. End at 00:32:570 Nope
00:33:875 (33875|2) - ^^ end at 00:35:179 Nope
00:35:179 (35179|0) - I definitely think you should make this an LN since the guitar is held out here. End it at 00:36:483 Nope
00:35:994 and 00:36:320 - Add notes for the drum. I think it's accented heavily enough to warrant a small 1/2 burst. Added only 1st note
00:36:483 or 00:36:483 (36483|3,36483|2) - Make/Add LN here to represent the guitar. End at 00:36:809 (where it actually ends) or 00:37:135 (so it's not a super short surprise LN). Nope
00:36:483 to 00:46:918 - Like I said before about adding notes on all the downbeats and not just the first and third. Nope
00:41:701 - Suggest an LN here for the muffled piano sound and end at 00:43:005. I'm actually starting to think these LN's only last 2 beats though...
00:44:309 - Add LN for the same reason as above. Last one measure. As I was looking at this though, I thought it might just be easier to make these doubles rather than use an LN. What do you think? Sorry,i don't wanna add LN here
00:45:614 - ^^ Sorry,i don't wanna add LN here
00:46:429 and 00:46:755 - Add notes to make a short 1/2 burst for the drums. Done
00:46:918 - Make double, there's a quiet crash here. No,thanks
00:53:603 and 00:53:929 and 00:54:255 and 00:54:418 and 00:54:581 - Add notes. I think the toms are loud enough here to have notes. No,thanks
00:57:353 to 01:07:787 - In this section, the rhythm's like [0 - 1(Rest) - 1& (Note) - 2] I hope that makes sense. Probably not. Have a picture. I'm just suggesting you map the note that's on the upbeat of 2.No,thanks
01:12:842 - Add a note here, drum sound. No,thanks
01:23:439 to 01:32:569 - Add notes on every downbeat? No,thanks
01:32:569 (92569|3,92569|1) - Make one of these an LN and end at 01:33:384 to represent the strings sound. Done
01:33:384 to 01:33:873 - Add notes on all white and red ticks for the drum sound? Looking at it though, it essentially becomes the same thing as normal here, so I dunno. No,thanks
01:44:308 to 01:54:743 - Add notes on all downbeats. No,thanks
02:01:428 and 02:01:754 and 02:02:080 and 02:02:243 and 02:02:406 - Add notes for drum. Added most of them
02:03:873 - Fairly large piano sound here, suggest adding a note. Done
02:05:178 to 02:15:612 - Basically what I said about that rhythm where there are notes on the upbeat of 2 and downbeat of 2. You know, the picture up there somewhere. I'm being too vague aren't I? Probably you right now trying to understand my ramblings No,thanks
02:15:612 to 02:26:047 - ^^ No,thanks
02:26:047 (146047|0,146699|2,147351|1) - Make all of these LN's? There's a sustained sound there. Maybe add a note on each LN too? So like this but not in that specific way. No,thanks
02:43:166 and 02:43:329 - Add notes. There's a drum kick. No,thanks
03:02:079 and 03:02:242 - Add notes, drum kick. Seriously, is there an easier way to copy and paste times? Also, there's a few other times this same sound is heard within this section of the song, so I'd suggest adding notes for those too. No,thanks
03:07:786 - Add an LN here that ends at 03:08:764 cause there's a sustained sound, and I think it flows a little better if you keep following that sound rather than drop it in this measure. Done
03:19:852 (199852|2) - Why's this here? Is it to represent those piano notes? It feels a little out of place imo. Maybe remove this and try adding notes at 03:20:178 to represent the piano chord here. Done
03:24:743 and 03:25:396 - Add notes for the piano chord. Done
03:28:656 and 03:29:146 and 03:29:635 and 03:29:961 - Add notes. I feel like the piano in this measure is especially important compared to the rest of the instruments and it's accented, so I think you should add the notes here to accent the piano. Done
03:31:265 to 03:41:699 - Basically same stuff I said about that drum where I attached the picture cause there are notes on the upbeat and downbeat of beat 2. So, suggest adding those. Hey, if I'm being way too confusing here, tell me I'm an idiot and need to clarify ok? I feel like I'm not explaining these things well enough... Well i tryed to follow drums on 2/1 and i still think it's good option
03:52:134 to 04:02:569 - I feel like since this is the ending of the song, you could get away with making this part a little harder than the rest of the song (not by too much though). So, there are crashes on 03:52:786 and 03:54:091 and 03:55:395 and etc. so I think you could add doubles there. That's pretty much it. Not too hard right? Done
04:08:656 and 04:08:873 - Add notes, drum tom(?) that's pretty loud. It's a 1/3 snap. No,thanks

Ahhh, I feel like I'm forcing what I think is a good map onto you, but that's not my intention, so I'm sorry if that's what it looks like. Please, no kudosu if you decide not to apply most of my mod. As I said, this is all up to you, so I won't be sad or anything if you choose to reject a lot or everything. Also, basically what I said in the mod somewhere, if I'm too vague about something, just tell me I'm dumb and should be better with words and clarify XD

1. There are a problem you need to solve.
   In your map,kiai's open and closed all used timing points to control,It's risky for dq or unrank.
   try to make inherited points to control them.
2. Third Kiai should end in 04:03:873 -

1. 00:11:695 (11695|3,13016|2) - awful setting,LN end time should be same as a new note or keep from at least 1/4,try to fix it.
2. 00:13:058 - 00:26:049 - make sure again that BPM is true and every note you catched is suit music,some notes listened fast,and oftenly they should in 1/4 lines and not 1/16,recheck them and fix them(Of course if you rechecked many times and make sure it's good working,plz ignore this xD)
3. 00:18:071 (18071|3,18153|2,18225|0,18225|1) - sounds like overmapped,I don't suggest to show music with overmapped notes in Hard diff.
4. 00:20:100 (20100|0,20181|3) - I haven't listened any drum sounds in there,remove them?
5. 00:25:398 - hmm sound is higher than 00:24:746 - but you only set a LN without any notes,3 notes are better I think.
6. 00:56:619 (56619|2) - should start in 00:56:864 - ,it's a new rhythm start time.
7. why your first kiai is much easier than before? It looks like a Normal not Hard lol,try to add some notes in first kiai
8. 01:23:439 - there should be double notes to show the music,every 8/1 lines should do this after.
9. oh..second kiai has same question with first,more considering
10. 03:10:396 - surely you don't want to SV change so plus a inherited point to up the speed,but now the timing point like not work,reduce them I think it's better because of useless.
11. 03:21:646 (201646|3) - 7 second LN isn't suitable,try to use more LN to show it or remove it to rearrange the notes
12. Third kiai has same problem with first and second.
13. there are some same questions which I mentioned,recheck them xD

1. 00:01:297 - 00:04:024 - 00:06:751 - 00:09:479 - use 3 notes to show music is better,and 00:10:331 - 4 notes
2. 00:24:746 - why not 3 notes? jack is ok at all
3. there are many same patterns in diff,like 00:36:646 (36646|0,36646|3,36809|1,36809|2,36972|0,36972|3,37135|1,37135|2,37299|0,37299|3,37462|1,37462|2,37625|0,37625|3,37788|1,37788|2) - yep it's ok but more patterns is more fun to play
4. 02:46:916 - add a note here,same vocal you used 3 notes but there not
5. 04:05:422 - miss a rhythm,add a note in 2
6. 04:21:155 (261155|3,261237|2) - overmapped,delete them.

[Crz]Sword wrote:

NM from my queue
I'm busy so I only mod HD and MX...so sorry ;w;
0 1 2 3
[General]

1. There are a problem you need to solve.
   In your map,kiai's open and closed all used timing points to control,It's risky for dq or unrank.
   try to make inherited points to control them. Made them and moved kiai's on them
2. Third Kiai should end in 04:03:873 -

Thanks,done
[HD]

1. 00:11:695 (11695|3,13016|2) - awful setting,LN end time should be same as a new note or keep from at least 1/4,try to fix it. Changed
2. 00:13:058 - 00:26:049 - make sure again that BPM is true and every note you catched is suit music,some notes listened fast,and oftenly they should in 1/4 lines and not 1/16,recheck them and fix them(Of course if you rechecked many times and make sure it's good working,plz ignore this xD) Moved some notes,BPM should be okay
3. 00:18:071 (18071|3,18153|2,18225|0,18225|1) - sounds like overmapped,I don't suggest to show music with overmapped notes in Hard diff. I don't think it is
4. 00:20:100 (20100|0,20181|3) - I haven't listened any drum sounds in there,remove them? Done
5. 00:25:398 - hmm sound is higher than 00:24:746 - but you only set a LN without any notes,3 notes are better I think. Changed
6. 00:56:619 (56619|2) - should start in 00:56:864 - ,it's a new rhythm start time.Thanks,done
7. why your first kiai is much easier than before? It looks like a Normal not Hard lol,try to add some notes in first kiai Changed
8. 01:23:439 - there should be double notes to show the music,every 8/1 lines should do this after. Changed
9. oh..second kiai has same question with first,more considering Changed
10. 03:10:396 - surely you don't want to SV change so plus a inherited point to up the speed,but now the timing point like not work,reduce them I think it's better because of useless. I think i want to SV change
11. 03:21:646 (201646|3) - 7 second LN isn't suitable,try to use more LN to show it or remove it to rearrange the notes Changed
12. Third kiai has same problem with first and second. Changed
13. there are some same questions which I mentioned,recheck them xD

well I will finish MX mod after 1 hour xD


great map and gl!

[Crz]Sword wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:01:297 - 00:04:024 - 00:06:751 - 00:09:479 - use 3 notes to show music is better,and 00:10:331 - 4 notes
   I think it is too much but can add third note here 00:10:331
2. 00:24:746 - why not 3 notes? jack is ok at all
   jack+ln , I think it is too hard for this level, (it's kinda hard-insane , not extra-insane)
3. there are many same patterns in diff,like 00:36:646 (36646|0,36646|3,36809|1,36809|2,36972|0,36972|3,37135|1,37135|2,37299|0,37299|3,37462|1,37462|2,37625|0,37625|3,37788|1,37788|2) - yep it's ok but more patterns is more fun to play
   rearranged notes a bit to be less repetitive
4. 02:46:916 - add a note here,same vocal you used 3 notes but there not
   added
5. 04:05:422 - miss a rhythm,add a note in 2
   can't hear anything here
6. 04:21:155 (261155|3,261237|2) - overmapped,delete them.
   why overmapped?

great map and gl!

sahuang wrote:

Thoka my waifu
I doubt your tags are incorrect

AnatOWJIya wrote:

sahuang wrote:

Thoka my waifu
I doubt your tags are incorrect

Right spelling is Tohka -w-

EYA- wrote:

Держи звездочку *

Syadow- wrote:

hi hi NM req from Ly0 and Syadow's MANiA QUEUE
feel free to reject, sorry for late mod ;w;
[notice][hard]
00:19:936 (19936|2,20263|2,20507|2,20833|2) - over col 3, move 00:19:936 (19936|2) - to 2 n 00:20:018 (20018|1) - 3 done
start 00:11:695 - until 00:21:485 - nope
00:23:931 - add note done
00:26:049 - ^ done
00:27:353 - 00:28:657 - 00:29:962 - why only 1 note but 00:31:266 - double note ? because of special sound on this timing
00:32:570 - 00:33:875 - etc. ^
00:35:994 (35994|1,35994|2,36157|2,36157|1,36320|1,36320|2,36483|3,36483|0) - not same sound, plz re arrange done
00:58:657 - add note done
01:16:755 (76755|1,76755|0,77081|0,77162|1,77244|2,77244|3,77407|3,77488|2,77570|1,77570|0,77733|0,77814|1,77896|2,77978|3,78059|0,78141|1) - plz re arrange done
01:23:439 - until 01:32:569 - i think all double note at 1/1 beat cuz before 01:23:439 u used double note for there sound , idk if overmap or not fit for this diff just my suggestion I don't think i'll fit diff
01:33:384 - add note same with 01:33:710 - done
01:33:873 - add note done
01:42:841 - add note I think there's no need for it
01:43:330 - ^ done
02:32:569 - ^ done
03:09:090 (189090|3) - LN release in 03:10:069 - Don't actually think it is,cause of 2 sounds,but i'll do it
04:02:406 (242406|0,242406|2) - why u used jack here ? re arrange Done
Please recheck again maybe i missed something cuz long map ;w; n balance right n left hands
Good luck Nice map xD

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Привет Толя
мод(м4м)

sweet

[EZ]

00:30:614 (30614|3) - в 1
00:31:266 (31266|1) - в 4
00:35:994 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5988677
00:46:918 - добавь ноту здесь
00:55:233 (55233|1,55722|2) - ctrl + g
01:33:873 - ноту добавь в 3 колонку
01:54:091 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5988696
02:01:428 (121428|3,121428|0,121754|2,122080|1,122406|2,122569|3) - либо только лн, либо ноты
02:07:786 (127786|0,128438|1,129091|2,129743|3,130395|0,131047|1,131699|2,132351|3) - может разнообразишь ?
02:15:612 (135612|1) - в 3
02:33:873 (153873|3,154525|2,155177|1,155829|0,156482|3,157134|2,157786|1,158438|0) -
02:51:645 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5988713
02:54:579 (174579|0,175069|1,175395|2,175884|3,176373|0,176699|1,177025|2,177351|3) -
03:08:275 (188275|0) - в 4


[NM]

00:10:331 (10331|2) - измени на лн
00:35:505 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5988743
00:41:864 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5988747 больше разнообразия :/ чего все так однотипно
00:45:125 (45125|1,45288|2) - ctrl + g
00:53:603 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5988757
00:55:722 (55722|1) - в 1
01:02:570 (62570|3) - во 2
01:20:668 (80668|0) - во 2
01:31:265 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5988779
01:45:939 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5988785
01:49:362 (109362|0,109525|1) - ctrl + g
01:51:482 (111482|0) - в 3
01:52:134 (112134|1,112297|0) - ctrl + g
02:16:264 (136264|3,136428|2,136591|0,136591|1,136754|3,137080|2,137243|0,137243|1,137569|3,137732|2,137895|0,137895|1) -
02:28:167 (148167|3,148493|1) - удаляй

посмотрел дальше диффу и скажу одно Толя, ты можешь сделать эту диффу намного лучше, если есть желание
EZ и NM далеко не в идеальном состояние, хотя EZ выглядит куда лучше

примешь мод и потом изменишь на более точный тайминг

[TimingPoints]
781,681.818181818182,4,2,1,40,1,0
786,-47.8468899521531,4,2,1,40,0,0
13052,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
13058,-50,4,2,1,40,0,0
18222,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
18225,-50,4,2,1,40,0,0
26045,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,0
57352,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,0
57353,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
83439,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,0
83439,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
125178,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,0
125178,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
148656,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,0
148656,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
190393,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
190396,-50,4,2,1,40,0,0
211265,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,0
211265,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
243873,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
254308,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,0
259362,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
259362,-50,4,2,1,40,0,0

Старайся, старайся и еще раз старайся, удачи !

eyes wrote:

Привет! Ловите рандомный мод

mod

[Hard]

00:35:990 (35990|2,35990|1,36153|0) - Принял
01:31:265 - поставь здесь лны, как эти - 01:29:471 (89471|0,90123|2,90775|3) Принял
01:58:819 - поставь ноту на 3 Принял
02:28:656 (148656|2) - перемести на первую колонку Принял
03:10:719 - 03:11:371 - 03:11:534 - упущены звуки Отказано
04:21:155 (261155|2,261237|3,261318|1,261400|2,261481|3,261563|1,261644|2) - неправильный снап Принял

Удачи!

[TimingPoints]
781,681.818181818182,4,2,1,40,1,0
781,-47.8468899521531,4,2,1,40,0,0
12997,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
12997,-50,4,2,1,40,0,0
18216,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
18222,-50,4,2,1,40,0,0
26042,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,0
57346,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
83433,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
125172,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
148650,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
190393,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
190393,-50,4,2,1,40,0,0
211262,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,1
211262,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
243870,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0

Starting at 04:21:357 - with Beat Snap Divisor in 1/8 it should look like this:


Note: The 3rd note is snapped to 1/12 at 04:21:506 -

Feerum wrote:

Greetings

No kds

AnatOWJIya asked me to test play the beatmap.
While the test play i did notice something is wrong.

I really doubt the timing are correct how they are now. He showed me a Mod from Shana (Hi Shana ></) where it got "fixed"
What Shana did is overall correct but at the same time wrong.

A lot of unnecessary timing points got added to fix the offset every time. while just the offset at the beginning was pretty off.
After some time in the beatmap i figured out what the, hopefully, correct timing should be.

[TimingPoints]
781,681.818181818182,4,2,1,40,1,0
781,-47.8468899521531,4,2,1,40,0,0
12997,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
12997,-50,4,2,1,40,0,0
18216,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
18222,-50,4,2,1,40,0,0
26042,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,0
57346,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
83433,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
125172,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
148650,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
190393,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
190393,-50,4,2,1,40,0,0
211262,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,1
211262,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
243870,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0

I noticed it only because of the notes at the end which where really really wrong snapped.
The notes arround 04:21:316 - should be like this:

Starting at 04:21:357 - with Beat Snap Divisor in 1/8 it should look like this:


Note: The 3rd note is snapped to 1/12 at 04:21:506 -

With this the timings and the notes at the end should be correct now.
Wish you good luck with the beatmap!

AJIekceu wrote:

BEEEEEEEEP BEEEEEEEEEEEP

HopmaJI

00:22:129 (22129|2) - что-то мне подсказывает, что тут Клап пропущен
02:20:335 - где нота? Если опираться на аналогичный момент на 01:12:509 - , то ты пропустил ударный звук. Подозреваю что эта 02:20:172 (140172|0) - вниз опустилась по каким-то причинам
Честно говоря не знаю, чему именно следовать. Только ударным как в первом припеве, или выделить (эмм... Что это за инструмент? Я слишком аутист чтобы описывать звуки) как во втором припеве и пропустить первый ударный. В обоих случаях свои плюсы и минусы (исполнения в том числе). Но если ты больше выделяешь ударные, то, я считаю, тебе бы надо так же сделать и во втором припеве
И насколько я осведомлен, то ставить хсы на одну ноту нельзя, нет? Если нет то так и скажи, вдруг я немного остался в 2014 (02:20:498 (140498|1) - )
02:24:574 - потерялась нота
02:24:900 (144900|3,145063|2,145226|0,145389|1,145552|2,145715|0,145878|1,146041|2,146041|3) - намеренное повторение первого припева? Я предлагаю вот что:
02:24:248 (144248|3) - во вторую колонку (1|2|3|4), 02:24:411 (144411|1,144574|0) - Ctrl+G, 02:24:085 (144085|0) - в третью. Пропущенную ноту 02:24:574 - - в чевертую колонку. После всего этого 02:26:041 (146041|3,146694|0) - Ctrl+H. Конечно теряется паттерн с ЛНами 4-2-3-1, но тем не менее.
Насколько адекватно сие предложение решать тебе, я порю дичь несу
03:24:740 (204740|3,205066|2) - Ctrl+G, чтобы с предыдущим не совпадало (по крайней я не вижу смысла их повторять, зацикленности в песне нет, так что не надо пожалуй)
03:31:262 - первые два блока ну прям идентичны. Третий и четвертый уже различаются между собой. Если уж с повторениями, то в четвертом блоке вот эту 03:35:664 (215664|0) - на третью, а 03:35:827 (215827|1,215827|2) - сдвинуть на одну влево
04:08:272 (248272|0,248354|1) - может на одну вправо все-таки? Просто указательный плец правой руки вообще без действий остается, плюс в первая колонка была уже буквально недавно задействована. Да и это удобнее, я думаю
Вот ближе к концу я так расставил

Я че то уже не помню как так получилось, но это именно то, чего не хватает - больше разнообразия в паттернах. У тебя лоибо лесенки, либо 1-3-2-4, либо лесенка например 1-2-3-4-2-3-1-2-3-4 и т.д.
Можешь сам что-нибудь еще попробовать :moonface:

Xapq

00:26:042 - -> 00:33:868 - вот стоит разнообразить хоть немного (я не говорю ремаппать это все, просто два-три паттерна расставить еще дополнительных)
Пощади игроков. у тебя слишком много нот в первой колонке. 01:03:868 (63868|0) - во вторую, 01:04:194 (64194|1,64357|2) - на одну влево, 01:04:520 (64520|0) - в третью, 01:04:846 (64846|2,65172|1) - Ctrl+H
02:43:161 (163161|2,163324|1) - хмммМММ, может быть даже надо Ctrl+H. Три лесенки подряд, две из которых в одну сторону - не комильфо. Так хоть уравняем
03:49:359 (229359|0) - потерял свисток

На этом все, более I have no idea.
Удачи тебе в скором ранке :moonface:

Protastic101 wrote:

no kds
I need to learn to be on time with my mods

col 1|2|3|4

*boop*

General

1. The hitsounding is nice and all, but honestly, you should probably have a kick and finish sample somewhere as that's one of the most important sounds from a drum. Try this one for the kick http://puu.sh/suicq.wav . As for the finish, I'd rename the current soft-hitfinish to something else and just use the default soft-hitfinish
2. I don't really think the cowbell is fitting here. What I think you're looking for is a rim hit. Try this one http://puu.sh/suiTU.wav
3. Also, please turn up your hitsound vol. I can't hear them even with music/effect 80/100. Maybe 60% is better?

Difficulties

[Easy]00:01:292 - 00:04:019 - 00:06:746 - 00:09:474 - I think it's better to have notes here as these places are accented by the piano hit, and the player would probably expect to hit a note there.
00:17:562 - Why not add a note here for the change in pitch of the violins?
00:35:987 (35987|3,36313|1) - Seeing as you've only been using 2/1 rhythms, this 1/2 is really way too fast for the player to expect. I'd suggest removing them and just keeping it at 1/1.
00:46:911 (46911|1,47237|0) - This is just my personal preference, but I think control J (make sure to move the hitsound too) would make this roll play a bit nicer as the minitrill at 00:46:585 (46585|1,46748|2,46911|1) - might throw some people off.
00:54:574 - No note here for the tom? The 3/2 silence seems out of place since the pauses have only been 1/1 long.
01:07:128 (67128|2,67781|3) - Again, just personal preference, but I think it'd look nicer if the LN were in 4 and the short note in 3.
01:14:139 - I'd really suggest having a note here for the cymbal. It's a really prominent sound and it doesn't make too much sense to just leave it out in favor of the snare.
01:15:444 - Same as the above.
01:16:748 - ^^ that
01:33:378 (93378|0) - You've mapped using 1/2 bursts before this like at 01:17:726 (77726|3,77889|2,78052|1) - , so why don't you do it now? I'd consider trying this or something instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6659180
02:05:824 (125824|3,127128|2) - Shouldn't these notes be doubles since you map the snare using doubles here?
02:16:748 - As I mentioned a few lines above, I'd really consider adding notes for the crashes here since they're easily audible.
02:24:900 (144900|0) - Rather than just using this one LN, I'd try something like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6659191 Alternatively, you can use short notes to represent the 1/2 LNs as i think the 1/2 LNs might be a little difficult.
02:27:998 (147998|0) - Again, you've mapped 1/2 before, so why not map it here?
02:28:650 (148650|3,149302|2,150607|1,151911|2,153215|0) - Make all these doubles if you want to be consistent, since it makes no sense to begin mapping the same snare sounds at 02:34:520 - using doubles when the sound hasn't changed at all.
02:37:781 (157781|3) - I'd consider making this a double and moving it up to 02:37:944 - for the snare.
02:39:737 (159737|1,161041|0,162346|2,163650|0,164955|1,166259|0) - Again, be consistent with your chord sizes. Make these all doubles since you've been mapping snares using doubles here.
02:49:520 - Just stick with one chord size throughout this entire section for the snare/crashes. I really don't understand why you always start these out using singles only, and then add jumps midway through. Like, there's no change in pace of the music to support suddenly mapping the snares with doubles instead of singles. Also, the crashes like at 02:50:661 (170661|0,171965|0,173270|1,174574|0) - are way more important than the snares, yet you choose to emphasize the snares rather than the cymbals.
03:01:911 (181911|0) - I don't really understand why you have this note accenting a guitar when the snare at 03:02:237 - is more predictable based off what you've previously mapped.
03:06:150 (186150|2,186476|3) - I think it'd serve to emphasize the trumpets if you switched columns here, so the shorter LN is in 4 and the longer in 3. I think it's because leaving a column space between notes serves to signify the start of a new musical phrase.
03:29:632 (209632|1,209958|0) - Similar to what I said above, I'd control J this cause otherwise a newer player may mistake this as a simple 1/2 right -> left roll.
03:29:958 - I'd also consider having an LN here and ending at 03:31:262 - to represent the violin run.
03:41:696 - I'ma recommend here what I mentioned a few lines above about adding notes for the crashes like at 03:42:838 - 03:45:446 -
03:50:990 (230990|2) - I'd consider ending this at 03:51:642 - and starting a new LN in 2 to represent the change from snare roll to tom roll
03:52:131 - Also, I'd really suggest using a double note here to represent the crash as it's louder than the snare but gets accented with less.
04:09:088 - Definitely add a note here, the LN release doesn't do the crashes and outro here any justice.
04:23:272 (263272|0) - Just my opinion, but I think ending LNs look nicer in [1] and [4] rather than [1][3], but again, that's just my preference.

[Normal]00:17:888 - I think it'd be a nice idea to add a 1/2 LN here to represent the growing sound of the cymbal.
00:35:661 (35661|3) - I'd consider leaving this note out since there's really not a sound there to warrant it, unlike the drum roll beginning at 00:35:824 -
00:36:476 - tbh, I feel like this section would be better off going with density than speed. What I mean is that rather than use 1/2, I'd just consider making it all 1/1, but using doubles on the 2nd and 4th beats, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6698738
01:07:128 - Don't you normally use 2/1 LNs for drum rolls in this diff? Why not use one here?
01:23:270 (83270|3,83433|0) - I'd consider moving these notes to [1] and [2] respectively as I think it's easier to hit short notes when you aren't holding an LN down at the same time.
01:44:302 - This here I don't really understand. At 00:36:476 - , you mapped using only 1/2 notes, and this section here is pretty much the same thing, but you added doubles on the offbeats now. I'd stick with one or the other in this case.
02:02:889 (122889|1,122889|2,123052|0) - I'd consider flipping the notes here so the accent comes on the cymbal.
02:02:563 - 02:03:541 - I'd also recommend doubles here for the crash.
02:05:172 - This is the kiai, but why does it feel so empty? I understand the drums aren't very active here, but I'd really consider adding LNs for the violin as currently, it feels like playing an Easy right now.
02:20:498 - Why not have a note here for the snare?
02:50:661 - 02:51:965 - 02:53:270 - 02:54:574 - 02:55:878 - 02:57:346 - Again, I'd really suggest using doubles for all the crashes as they're easily noticeable in the music.
03:08:514 (188514|1,188596|0,188677|2,188759|3) - You haven't used 1/4 in the map at all so far, barring the 92bpm stuff, so I don't see any reason why you'd map this here using 1/4 when similar places were just mapped with 1/2. I think it'd be best to just use an LN here to represent it, starting from 03:08:433 - to 03:08:759 - with a double at the end for the crash

[Hard]00:26:042 - Here, I think it's better to remove the 1/2 and just use doubles every 1/1, because when the music gains intensity at 00:36:476 - , the diff actually loses chart density as a result, which I don't think makes much sense.
00:46:422 (46422|0,46422|1,46585|3,46585|2,46748|2,46748|1,46911|0,46911|1) - for this, I don't think the minijack at 00:46:585 (46585|2,46748|1,46748|2,46911|1) - feels too natural to play imo. I'd consider arranging the chords to be like [13][24] or [14][23] like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6698844
01:58:650 (118650|2,118813|2) - Idk, these jacked notes came as a bit of a surprise to me, and I really can't hear a reason for them, since all the sounds are pretty different.
02:10:878 - It feels like you're missing a note here, as I instinctively hit a key here due to the way the music is set up.
02:16:911 (136911|3) - I think it'd be nice to leave a 1/1 pause between the crash and the next note as it serves to emphasize the loudness of the crash drowning out the other sounds.
03:30:610 (210610|2,211262|3) - Just my opinion, but I think it'd look nicer if the LN was in 4 and the short note in 3, as it'd kind of feel like the LNs are holding in all the notes between them. But that makes no sense, so idm whatever you do lol

[Gesk's Insane]00:35:987 (35987|1,35987|3,36150|0,36150|2,36150|1,36313|2,36313|1,36313|3,36476|2,36476|3,36476|0) - I'd consider jacking these hands together as it's easier to read, at least in my opinion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6698895
00:51:476 - If you're mapping the piano here, you're missing a note and should add one.
01:08:433 (68433|2,68433|1) - I think it's fine to make this note single as the sound there is more like a hihat and doesn't need a double imo
02:47:237 - this jump-hand-jump spam is a bit difficult to read and hit imo. I'd try something like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6698921
03:51:642 (231642|1,231723|3,231805|1,231887|3,231968|1,232050|3) - tbh, I think a roll would be better here as the toms get lower in pitch. Maybe something like this would work https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6698931
04:01:914 (241914|0,241914|1,242077|1,242077|2,242240|1,242240|0,242403|0,242403|2) - For these notes, I'd try to jack them just so it's easier to play imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6698937

I will go over the hitsounds once you have applied the diff check.