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fartownik
[Easy]

You should map it until the end, uh.

00:14:514 (4,1) - Spacing.
00:18:043 (1,2) - Instead of using 1/4 here, make (1) shorter by 1/4.
00:22:631 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Unreasonable spacing change. It's just stupid, replace with spacing value 1,2x.
00:29:337 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing.
00:31:455 (4,1) - Spacing.
00:31:455 (4,1) - Another spacing change...
00:42:043 (1) - Move 1/1 forward.
00:49:808 (2,1) - Spacing.
00:51:220 (2,1) - Spacing.
00:52:631 (2,1) - Spacing.
00:54:043 (2,1) - Spacing.
00:55:455 (2,1) - Spacing.
00:56:867 (2,1) - Spacing.


[Normal]

Nothing though, but sometimes the patterns are boring (because of the repetitive song).


[Hard]
00:19:455 (5) - Make 1/4 shorter. Sounds better.
00:35:514 (4,5) - Inconsistent timing.
00:40:455 (7) - Stack on vanishing (2)/(5)?
00:45:220 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:53:690 (3,4) - Spacing.
01:44:142 (1) - Expand to the next white tick.

It's better now though.
can't star it since I starred it already
Pally_old
Miliard
Mr Gaddy
I liek that.
1miko1
Star
klubek
oh hi

[Easy]
00:27:925 (2,3) - spacing
00:41:690 (1) - spinner should end on 00:44:161
00:44:867 (1) - delete slider, add note
00:45:220 (2) - add note
00:46:278 (2) - new combo
00:52:631 (2) - spacing?

[Normal]
why you not map first seconds like in easy?
00:12:396 (1) - ugly slider
00:34:984 (1) - spacing, a bit down, compare to (2)
00:41:690 (1) - like in easy
01:30:041 - big mess here with combo, this one to 11th is too big and next (1,2) combo too small, try to make (1,2,3,4) combo
example:
01:30:041 (1) - new combo
01:31:452 (5) - new combo
01:32:864 (9) - new combo
and next... try in all that part
01:41:335 (3) - new combo, and fix the slider

[Hard]
00:32:161 (9) - new combo
00:41:690 (1) - like in easy and normal
00:50:514 (6) - new combo
00:51:749 (11) - ^
00:54:749 (6) - ^
00:56:161 (11) - ^
01:13:101 ~ 01:33:946 - comparing to normal diff - good combos in this part 1,2,3,4,5,6 is ok
01:34:982 (1) - but why you short it again to 1,2,3? stay with 1,2,3,4,5,6

so.. good map, only sometimes boring when the patterns are similar
good luck with your 1st beatmap ;)
rEdo
sup,

[Easy]
0:22:631 (1) - why you put new combo right there? delete it imo :)
0:26:514 (1) - move it little bit towards down
0:33:572 (1, 2) - move the second circle to make it look like mirrored 0:27:925
0:31:455 (4) - redirect that slider towards the circle
0:34:984 (1) - new combo
0:36:043 (1) - ...and delete it from here :p
0:36:043 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) - anyway, this section isnt easy friendly, move 2 and 4 a little bit towards other circles
0:47:690 (1) - delete combo

[Normal]
1:34:982 - 1:41:335 - delete new combos from the (3, 4) sections (compare combos in normal and hard :p)

[Hard]
0:24:043 (1) - move new combo from 0:24:043 to 0:23:514 imho


[General]
nice map as a first one, good luck with it ;)
Lesjuh
Hello there.

[Hard]
I think you overused the normal claps, especially in the second half of the map. Try using less of them, it will sound alot better. I also recommed overall difficulty +1 to make it easier to read.
00:09:574 (1) - This slider doesn't go along with the music
00:49:808 (4) - This beat should be further from the previous one
01:13:100 - The map gets very repetitive here, try more different patterns
01:43:615 (2,3) - Place this stack closer to the previous slider

Normal
01:15:923 (5) - New combo
01:18:747 (4) - ^
01:20:158 (8) - ^
01:22:982 (4) - ^
01:24:394 (8) - ^

Easy
00:46:278 (3,4,5) - I'd space these further from each other. Might cause some confusion for new players.

Other than that everything looks fine~
Dragvon
Hitsounds Re-check

Easy
All ok

Normal
• 00:09:572 (1) - Switch Claps with Finish
Aside that, all okay ^-^

Hard
• 00:25:808 (8) - Finish in the last note
• 00:28:631 (3,4,5,6) - Remove Claps from the first note of each slider
• 00:34:984 (1) - Claps
• 00:47:690 (2,4) - Remove Claps
• 00:50:690 (2) - ^ or Remove from (1),(2) and (3) to fit the next notes
• 01:13:982 (5,5,5,5,5) - Remove Whistle from these ones
• 01:21:041 (3,3,3,3) - ^
• 01:20:158 (1,1,1,1) - Remove Claps of the second note of each slider
• 01:30:923 (5,5,5,5,5,5,5,5) - No Whistles

Yay! That's it! Star
Topic Starter
Galkan
Thanks guys! ^_^
Kurai
Hi
[General]
Try to have a better .mp3 o_o'
Delete the useless .osb file and Full submit

[Easy]
00:24:749 (2,4,6) - Remove clap
00:25:102 (3,5) - Add Clap

[Normal]

00:51:749 (7) - Stack this slider with (5,6)
01:45:896 (1) - Move 1/4 earlier and extand by 1/4

[Hard]
00:25:808 (8) - BAD

K' Star~~
Topic Starter
Galkan

KuraiPettan wrote:

[General]
Try to have a better .mp3 o_o'
Delete the useless .osb file and Full submit
MP3 quality is fine, surely better than THIS. My MP3 has just a bit lowered volume.
There's no .osb at all so I don't know where you see it. (I don't know why, but it was auto-creating itself but I already fixed it) Denied

KuraiPettan wrote:

[Easy]
00:24:749 (2,4,6) - Remove clap
00:25:102 (3,5) - Add Clap

[Normal]

00:51:749 (7) - Stack this slider with (5,6)
01:45:896 (1) - Move 1/4 earlier and extand by 1/4
Hell's no, that sounds worse after this. Denied

KuraiPettan wrote:

[Hard]
00:25:808 (8) - BAD
I don't know where you see a fault here :roll: Denied

Anyway thanks for star.

Also, I won't accept any hitsounds modding for now. They're finished already.
ztrot
1st offset 9,583
2nd offset 73,090
others look fine
slider tick rate 2 sounds great so add that to all diffs
Topic Starter
Galkan
Thanks for this fix and for star :)
ztrot
poof!
arien666
Good luck :3
Nakata Yuji
ohshit
i've been waiting for this beatmap since fucking team america
Gens
[General]
  1. Hitvolume seems to be a bit too loud. Can you decrease it? Just a tick or two would be fine.
  2. Timing should be the same for every difficulty, even for unused sections.
[Easy]
  1. I've always disliked half-mapped difficulties.
00:49:112 - I'd like the spacing to be more consistent from this point and on.

[Normal & Hard]
  1. Add spinners like in [Easy]?
Well, I think this map can still be improved... but it's good enough.

Pop for a bit~
Topic Starter
Galkan
Hitsounds have already their volume turned down and yet they are too loud for you?
Ok, I will map rest of song on [Easy] though I think it's not necessary. If players want to get more points, they should learn harder diffs.
And those spinners... I know they suit to the music but I don't feel they suit on all difficulties. That's the reason I deleted those "additional" timing sections.

Can't do it now (and in nearest days) 'cause my video card is broken :o
Topic Starter
Galkan
Update.

Please don't bubble it yet. I still consider few changes. (e.g. hitsound modding 2nd half on [Easy])
Also, why do not box and spoilerbox work on Scoreboard listing?
Gens

Galkan92 wrote:

Ok, I will map rest of song on [Easy] though I think it's not necessary. If players want to get more points, they should learn harder diffs.
It's not only for that... not every map exists only for the sake of scoring, because that would be sad and pointless. It's for having a complete and good mapset. I actually think the second half of Easy came out better than the first half!

Great job, by the way. It's more solid to me now. Just take a look at what I pointed on Easy (also at 01:52:787 (1,2,3) for inconsistent spacing), and I'll return the bubble.
Derekku

Galkan92 wrote:

Also, why do not box and spoilerbox work on Scoreboard listing?
Because they're not meant to be used there. Just get rid of the spoilerbox.
Dragvon
Okay, final hitsound check i hope @.@

<Easy>
01:13:795 (2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2) - Whistle in the first note of them also.
01:30:737 (2,2,2,2,2,2,2,...) -Whistle like the previous section. And remove Claps!
01:43:440 (2) - Claps in the first and last notes
01:44:843 (2) - Claps in both.

Now get it ranked /o/
Topic Starter
Galkan
Finished.
Gens
Rebubbled.
Larto
TEST FOR GENS


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ztrot
ranked sorry for the wait
Topic Starter
Galkan
FUCK YEAH :D
ztrot
FUCK YEAH
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