From My Queue.
[General]
There're only 4 actual mod. It's not enough for a map for approval at all, get at least 4 other mods with proficient quality before pushing it to next stage of ranking process.
You could replace your BG with a .jpg one. It saves a lot of file size.
04:49:583 (1) - unsnapped slider end.
[Illusory Reality]
00:25:513 (2,3) - There's no reason to enhance the spacing here suddenly. There's no support from music.
00:27:606 (5,6) - There's no reason to enhance the spacing here either. You could place a jump between 00:27:780 (6,1) - Since the downbeat at 1 should be emphasized. But for spacing of 6, it should be kept consistent with 00:27:257 (3,4,5) -
00:33:536 (1,3) - Persoanlly disapprove of this overlap pattern.
00:37:722 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing should be similar as 00:34:931 (1,2,3,4) - .They are exactly the same in music.
00:39:641 (5,6,7) - This flow is not nice enough. 7 should be Ctrl+G'ed
00:44:350 (3) - Srsly you have to NC this
00:47:489 (1,2) - This spacing is too large, it could easily be read as 1/2 instead of 1/4.
00:49:059 (1,2) - It makes me sad that some of your 1/2 spacings are even smaller than some 1/4s like 00:49:757 (4,5) - It's really weird and hard to read. Also 00:52:024 (2,3,4) - It's 1/4 between 3 and 4 while it looks exactly the same as the 1/2 between 2 and 3. Additionally you use a 0.7x sv for 4 with no NC :< It could be quite confusing.
00:53:943 (2,1) - Too large with anti-flow.
00:55:513 (6) - Is 0.4x a small change for SV? :<
01:03:536 (3,4) - This is exaggeratedly large.
01:11:596 - Hard to read as 1/4.
01:12:606 (1,2) - Blanket :<
01:12:954 (2,3) - Really Hard to read as 1/4. It's more like a 1/2
01:15:048 (5,1,2) - 1/4 larger than 1/2. Not a nice choice. Also 01:20:629 (5,1,2) - and 01:26:210 (1,2,3) - 1/4 and 1/2 are in the same spacing.
01:23:071 (4,5) - There's really too large.
01:29:001 (3) - You have to NC
And many similar issues so I wont repeat.
01:52:460 (5) - Though overmap is not completely banned according to the RC yet for me it could not be toerlated.
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Yeah I know it's all about style but.... well.
[General]
There're only 4 actual mod. It's not enough for a map for approval at all, get at least 4 other mods with proficient quality before pushing it to next stage of ranking process.
You could replace your BG with a .jpg one. It saves a lot of file size.
04:49:583 (1) - unsnapped slider end.
[Illusory Reality]
00:25:513 (2,3) - There's no reason to enhance the spacing here suddenly. There's no support from music.
00:27:606 (5,6) - There's no reason to enhance the spacing here either. You could place a jump between 00:27:780 (6,1) - Since the downbeat at 1 should be emphasized. But for spacing of 6, it should be kept consistent with 00:27:257 (3,4,5) -
00:33:536 (1,3) - Persoanlly disapprove of this overlap pattern.
00:37:722 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing should be similar as 00:34:931 (1,2,3,4) - .They are exactly the same in music.
00:39:641 (5,6,7) - This flow is not nice enough. 7 should be Ctrl+G'ed
00:44:350 (3) - Srsly you have to NC this
00:47:489 (1,2) - This spacing is too large, it could easily be read as 1/2 instead of 1/4.
00:49:059 (1,2) - It makes me sad that some of your 1/2 spacings are even smaller than some 1/4s like 00:49:757 (4,5) - It's really weird and hard to read. Also 00:52:024 (2,3,4) - It's 1/4 between 3 and 4 while it looks exactly the same as the 1/2 between 2 and 3. Additionally you use a 0.7x sv for 4 with no NC :< It could be quite confusing.
00:53:943 (2,1) - Too large with anti-flow.
00:55:513 (6) - Is 0.4x a small change for SV? :<
01:03:536 (3,4) - This is exaggeratedly large.
01:11:596 - Hard to read as 1/4.
01:12:606 (1,2) - Blanket :<
01:12:954 (2,3) - Really Hard to read as 1/4. It's more like a 1/2
01:15:048 (5,1,2) - 1/4 larger than 1/2. Not a nice choice. Also 01:20:629 (5,1,2) - and 01:26:210 (1,2,3) - 1/4 and 1/2 are in the same spacing.
01:23:071 (4,5) - There's really too large.
01:29:001 (3) - You have to NC
And many similar issues so I wont repeat.
01:52:460 (5) - Though overmap is not completely banned according to the RC yet for me it could not be toerlated.
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Yeah I know it's all about style but.... well.