Ongaku wrote:
dont kick me plsIllusory Reality I only pointed out some blankets that stuck out a lot, there are still some that needs fixing, but not too big.
- 00:16:617 (2,1) - Dude, you have to blanket these. Since the future notes will bother other stuff, just curve slider 00:16:094 (1) - a bit and move 00:16:617 (2) - to stack underneath 00:19:582 (2) - . Shouldn't be too hard. k
- 00:34:059 (3) - Feels kind of uncomfortable when the slider ends on a drum beat, so instead of making it a slider, see if you can make it into two circle notes. Something like this:
You can still blanket 00:34:582 (6) - and it still flows correctly, so no harm in taking this into consideration. I'm following the offbeat guitar twang. I do this many times during the map. I find it absurdly plain and boring to follow the drums no matter what.- 00:36:850 (3) - Same thing here as above.
- 00:39:641 (5) - Same thing here.
- 00:45:920 (6) - You should copy slider 00:46:443 (2) - and control+g it to make it seem more neat! did something different
- 00:46:443 (2) - You should try to make this look EVEN MORE nicer. By making the stream 00:47:838 (2,3,4,5) - blanket the end of slider 00:47:489 (1) - , you can put 00:48:187 (6) - underneath slider 00:47:489 (1) - and make it look nice. Then, you can put 00:48:361 (7) - under 00:48:187 (6) - to make it look like a blanket!(#1) Plus, you can move 00:48:710 (9) - and shape it to blanket 00:47:489 (1) - and stack the slider's end on 00:47:838 (2) - . Just something to make it look even more clean.(#2) This ruins the momentum from 1 to the stream. I did fiddle around with a bit, though.
- 00:50:106 (7) - I recommend just making a slider with just one red point, since most people can't see it and will just be pointless red points. you can see the sliderball twitching if you don't use a monocolor sliderball.
- 00:50:106 (7,3,4,5) - Why not stack these?
- 00:58:652 (1,6) - Fix the blanket.
- 00:59:524 (7,9) - Fix the blanket.
- 01:01:268 (7) - Same thing with 00:50:106 (7) -
- 01:04:234 - You should add a spinner here. Or just make it a break to show that sexy background. no
- 01:13:303 (3,7) - Fix blanket.
- 01:15:920 (4,5,6) - Try blanketing these notes under 01:16:268 (7) - ? Would look nice.
- 01:20:629 (5) - Extend the red point a tiiiiny bit, since its a bit unnoticeable.
- 01:26:210 (1) - Hmm... Why make it an entire 1/1 slider when you can emphasize beat 01:26:559 - more just by adding a note? What you did here isn't a bad thing, just you could emphasize the song more here.
- 01:45:920 (7) - Same thing here with 00:50:106 (7) -
- 01:51:588 (4,1) - Try making the DS between these notes the same as 01:51:239 (4,1) - . Would feel weird if you did something there, then not do it here.
- 02:01:007 (4,5) - If you made the DS different for these, why not for 02:01:356 (2,3) - and 02:01:705 (2,3) - ?
- 02:11:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You missed a beat 02:11:472 - . If it was intentional, ignore this one.
- 02:16:617 (5,3) - Why not blanket these?
- 02:46:617 (3) - Fix the anchor points on these.
- 02:58:652 (1,2) - Try making the middle of these sliders align.
- 03:21:675 (2,6) - Try blanketing these.
- 03:33:885 (2,5) - You saw this coming. Try blanketing 03:34:582 (5) - over 03:33:885 (2) - . There are two ways I think you can try doing:
- 03:43:652 (2,6) - Try blanketing these.
- 03:56:210 (2,5) - Fix blanket.
- 03:56:908 (5,3) - Fix stack.
- 04:12:954 (2,1) - Fix blanket.
- 04:24:117 (2,4) - Fix blanket.
- 04:26:298 (2,3) - Why don't you make the DS here different as you did with 04:26:821 (4,1) - ?
- 04:33:013 (1,2,3) - This feels weird because 04:33:187 (2) - has the emphasis when 04:33:013 (1) - doesn't, but they're the same sliders. With 04:33:361 (3) - , its the same beat as 04:33:187 (2) - , so it should be 1/4 like 04:33:187 (2) - . Also, 04:33:013 (1) - doesn't have to necessarily be 1/4, but 04:33:187 (2,3) - should though, unless you plan on changing it.
- 04:39:815 (2,6) - Fix blanket.
Ok Done! \o) Nice map!!!111!!1!
my eyes literally start burning from trying to fix blankets, but i tried
anything not mentioned is done or fiddled with.