Illusory Reality
00:27:780 (6) - you should move this to (232, 368) for looks and better play in my opinion
00:55:513 (6) - make this faster speed (1.4x) and change the slider accordingly
01:04:321 - place a spinner here. I don't like empty space unless it's a short break, and the spinner fits in my opinion
01:07:548 (3) - move this to (200, 332)
01:08:943 (3) - move this to (48, 272)
01:16:617 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this section feels awkward but I'm sure that's just how the map's flow is supposed to be
01:21:675 (4) - move this to (172, 300)
01:24:466 (1,2,3) - this feels a bit awkward to put there, maybe use something other than a triplet.
01:28:129 (2) - move this to (160, 224)
01:32:141 (1) - make this a slower slider (like 0.8x) and move the slider closer to the stream
01:33:710 (1) - move this to (344, 52)
01:44:350 (8) - move this to (204, 144)
01:52:373 (4,5,6) - awkward triplet
01:58:129 (2) - move this to (352, 104)
01:58:303 (3) - move this to (256, 160)
02:33:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the triangles feel odd, I would space them a bit more.
02:56:210 - imo a stream would be really good here, the beats are pronounced enough to make one
02:57:780 (3) - move this to (472, 244)
03:06:501 (7,8,9) - ctrl + g
03:17:315 (3) - move this to (104, 312)
03:18:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these jumps seem so jumpy so suddenly, maybe try spacing them more gradually instead of so suddenly
03:40:338 (1) - extend the spinner to 03:42:954 -
03:55:164 (2,3,4) - awkward triplet
04:08:768 (2,3,4,5) - this stream looks messy
04:19:931 (2,3,4,5) - ^
overall the map should have more pronounced hitsounds in my opinion
I love how it plays out though so nice job! c: don't be mad at my nitpicky things though ^^"
00:55:513 (6) - make this faster speed (1.4x) and change the slider accordingly
01:04:321 - place a spinner here. I don't like empty space unless it's a short break, and the spinner fits in my opinion
01:07:548 (3) - move this to (200, 332)
01:08:943 (3) - move this to (48, 272)
01:16:617 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this section feels awkward but I'm sure that's just how the map's flow is supposed to be
01:21:675 (4) - move this to (172, 300)
01:24:466 (1,2,3) - this feels a bit awkward to put there, maybe use something other than a triplet.
01:28:129 (2) - move this to (160, 224)
01:32:141 (1) - make this a slower slider (like 0.8x) and move the slider closer to the stream
01:33:710 (1) - move this to (344, 52)
01:44:350 (8) - move this to (204, 144)
01:52:373 (4,5,6) - awkward triplet
01:58:129 (2) - move this to (352, 104)
01:58:303 (3) - move this to (256, 160)
02:33:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the triangles feel odd, I would space them a bit more.
02:56:210 - imo a stream would be really good here, the beats are pronounced enough to make one
02:57:780 (3) - move this to (472, 244)
03:06:501 (7,8,9) - ctrl + g
03:17:315 (3) - move this to (104, 312)
03:18:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these jumps seem so jumpy so suddenly, maybe try spacing them more gradually instead of so suddenly
03:40:338 (1) - extend the spinner to 03:42:954 -
03:55:164 (2,3,4) - awkward triplet
04:08:768 (2,3,4,5) - this stream looks messy
04:19:931 (2,3,4,5) - ^
overall the map should have more pronounced hitsounds in my opinion
I love how it plays out though so nice job! c: don't be mad at my nitpicky things though ^^"