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Vert

Joined October 2013

Vert 2016-01-29T07:14:22+00:00

moonlightleaf wrote:
[Vert's Lv11]

00:19:482 (7,8) - 换一下位置好换了，并且调整了一下间距

00:27:003 (4) - 嘛,我是觉得加速减速都要NC,看你这一些都加了

00:43:024 (9,1) - 改了搞一下 as 01:03:951 (10,1) - 这么没看懂，我这看没问题啊

thanks for modding!

我自己改了一下kiai，原来连打间距太小了，改大了一些然后修了一下细节

我这么萌我不能死

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480,272,94931,1,2,1:2:0:0:
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Otosaka-Yu

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Joined August 2013

Otosaka-Yu 2016-02-02T04:09:03+00:00

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nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

nika mika 2016-02-07T16:31:57+00:00

哇小性药prpr
简单难度不会摸太难的摸不动orz

[LV.11]
00:10:327 (2,1) - 你要么把2尾静音要么干脆就弄一整个……我感觉这里最后的两个音不合曲
00:19:155 (1,2) - 我推荐把1拉长到2的时点，当然那样你的梗可能就没了……不过这里00:19:319 - 不好听
00:26:022 (7,8,2,1,2,3) - 不考虑包个blanket吗www
00:33:869 (4) - 我觉得这里用顺flow的4个note接到00:34:196 (1) - 比较好
00:38:120 (1,2) - ……用这个梗不挺好吗00:39:428 (1,2) -
00:40:327 (4,5,6,7,8) - 形状可以修改一下（
00:40:981 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:43:024 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
00:55:041 (5,1) - 是不是歪了
好像后面几个都是歪的
不对，这边的三连全是歪的
00:55:940 (8,9,10) - 考虑用9和后面的00:56:430 (1) - 叠
01:23:896 (1,2,3,4) - 用01:21:280 (1,2,3,4) - 这样的？
另外考虑在01:25:133 - 加一个圈
01:30:109 (1) - 和01:29:782 (5,6) - 排成三角（我推荐把6放开点）
01:41:553 (5,6,7) - 一个折返盖掉重音就行了
01:47:438 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ……害人不浅

欧袜丽
这个flow比好久之前的新世界简直像是两个人做的

nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

nika mika 2016-02-07T16:38:12+00:00

啊对了忘记说，性药请你可以不要全图1/2whistle咩（

liaoxingyao

864 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

liaoxingyao 2016-02-11T02:34:28+00:00

nika mika wrote:
[LV.11]
00:10:327 (2,1) - 你要么把2尾静音要么干脆就弄一整个……我感觉这里最后的两个音不合曲 2尾已经换到了10%
00:19:155 (1,2) - 我推荐把1拉长到2的时点，当然那样你的梗可能就没了……不过这里00:19:319 - 不好听这个不了ba
00:26:022 (7,8,2,1,2,3) - 不考虑包个blanket吗www ~~blanket到底是什么啊~~暂时先不考虑辣
00:33:869 (4) - 我觉得这里用顺flow的4个note接到00:34:196 (1) - 比较好
00:38:120 (1,2) - ……用这个梗不挺好吗00:39:428 (1,2) - haihaoba
00:40:327 (4,5,6,7,8) - 形状可以修改一下（You say de hao,But I no naodong
00:40:981 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
00:43:024 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ ^
00:55:041 (5,1) - 是不是歪了
好像后面几个都是歪的
不对，这边的三连全是歪的
00:55:940 (8,9,10) - 考虑用9和后面的00:56:430 (1) - 叠不了吧(
01:23:896 (1,2,3,4) - 用01:21:280 (1,2,3,4) - 这样的？噫...这里其实我想摆正方形的就不改了
另外考虑在01:25:133 - 加一个圈加了感觉怪怪的..
01:30:109 (1) - 和01:29:782 (5,6) - 排成三角（我推荐把6放开点）其实我这里我就是摆成三角的hhhhh ~~虽然摆歪了~~
01:41:553 (5,6,7) - 一个折返盖掉重音就行了？？不了吧
01:47:438 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ……害人不浅 You say de hao，不过其实以前的更坑这个算是改良版了...

no reply=fixed
谢谢nika的摸

nika mika wrote:
啊对了忘记说，性药请你可以不要全图1/2whistle咩（

~~不，不可以~~

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

[Crz]Makii 2016-03-01T07:46:02+00:00

性药爷爷快飞了这图太好玩了~~停不下来~~
我能水摸一下咩( 打的时候有些不大舒服的地方想提一下=w=
LV.11:

SPOILER

01:09:509 - 01:14:659 - 这段时间都是单调的折返滑条。。考虑下01:11:798 -这里把条变成4个1/4单点重叠在下一个1的头上，然后01:14:414 - 这里摆4个间距较小的note与下一个1成一个小的变间距连打？柑橘这样音也能体现出来变化(
01:15:395 (9) - 这个折返我打的时候感觉略长了如果把折返缩短一半，加两个短的间距近的滑条会不会更丰富一点
01:16:703 (9) - ^
01:47:438 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - boom~~这梗我是没希望打了~~

祝早日起飞=w=

liaoxingyao

864 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

liaoxingyao 2016-03-02T05:02:30+00:00

[Crz]Sword wrote:
性药爷爷快飞了这图太好玩了~~停不下来~~
我能水摸一下咩( 打的时候有些不大舒服的地方想提一下=w=
LV.11:
SPOILER
01:09:509 - 01:14:659 - 这段时间都是单调的折返滑条。。考虑下01:11:798 -这里把条变成4个1/4单点重叠在下一个1的头上，然后01:14:414 - 这里摆4个间距较小的note与下一个1成一个小的变间距连打？柑橘这样音也能体现出来变化(
01:15:395 (9) - 这个折返我打的时候感觉略长了如果把折返缩短一半，加两个短的间距近的滑条会不会更丰富一点
01:16:703 (9) - ^
01:47:438 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - boom~~这梗我是没希望打了~~
祝早日起飞=w=

虽然是no change不过还是谢谢sword的摸

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2016-03-05T04:09:32+00:00

小学生

[General]

感觉没有normal 前两个难度差的有点多

[lv4]

00:01:498 (2) - 前后间距差这么多前面都碰上了把gs关了好好按ds摆好
00:28:964 (4,1) - 碰到了点丑移开
00:37:139 (2) - 可以把下一个滑条blanket下好看
00:47:602 (5) - 换成一个圈不然有点难
00:48:910 (1) - 好像跟前面挨着太近了动一下像这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4659438
00:51:689 (2) - 别放1/2 那里空着就空着这个圈去了
01:06:893 (1) - 不要用1/2折返就放1/1就可以了
01:22:261 (4) - 不要1/2滑条放个圈就可以
01:38:283 (1,2,3,4,1) - 你这形状真丑而且我觉得01:39:264 (4,1) - 这两个碰到不好建议01:38:283 (1,2,3,4) - 向右边凸起也顺点
01:41:553 (2) - 这里别跟琴放1/1的滑条就可以不然低难度节奏不好读的
01:43:351 (5) - 这个圈删了
01:44:496 (3) - 换成圈
01:45:967 (6) - 删

[lv6]
算了我晚点再看看我还是觉得有点难了

[lv8]

00:19:155 - 这个音我觉得放滑条尾不好建议你改改这里的节奏
00:21:117 (1) - 可以blanket下前面那个滑条
00:39:755 (2,3,4,5) - 这四个节奏都不一样但是距离看着差不多而且我看你00:40:408 (4,5) - 这种都放得比较远所以建议这里00:39:755 (2,3) - 这两个放远点
00:41:062 (2) - 统一下前后ds
00:42:697 (4) - 这个不用放1/4的折返滑条我觉得放一个1/2的滑条就可以
00:48:910 (1) - 干嘛nc
00:53:324 (4) - 用1/4的折返就可
00:54:795 - 这里节奏不应该是这样吗 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4659536
00:57:411 (3) - ^
01:08:365 (2) - 放两个圈不是挺好这样我觉得挺不好玩的
01:19:973 (1) - 干嘛用3/4 滑条尾没音建议用1/2或者1/1的滑条
01:23:242 (3) - 可以blanket下上面的
01:46:131 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这段用1/3干嘛请换成1/2或者1/4谢谢

先把这些回了下次看主难度

liaoxingyao

864 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

liaoxingyao 2016-03-05T15:09:53+00:00

ZZHBOY wrote:
小学生 zzhsb

[General]
感觉没有normal 前两个难度差的有点多 LV4不就是NM。。
[lv4]
00:01:498 (2) - 前后间距差这么多前面都碰上了把gs关了好好按ds摆好
00:28:964 (4,1) - 碰到了点丑移开
00:37:139 (2) - 可以把下一个滑条blanket下好看
00:47:602 (5) - 换成一个圈不然有点难
00:48:910 (1) - 好像跟前面挨着太近了动一下像这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4659438
00:51:689 (2) - 别放1/2 那里空着就空着这个圈去了
01:06:893 (1) - 不要用1/2折返就放1/1就可以了
01:22:261 (4) - 不要1/2滑条放个圈就可以这个我觉得挺好诶
01:38:283 (1,2,3,4,1) - 你这形状真丑而且我觉得01:39:264 (4,1) - 这两个碰到不好建议01:38:283 (1,2,3,4) - 向右边凸起也顺点
01:41:553 (2) - 这里别跟琴放1/1的滑条就可以不然低难度节奏不好读的
01:43:351 (5) - 这个圈删了
01:44:496 (3) - 换成圈
01:45:967 (6) - 删
[lv6]
算了我晚点再看看我还是觉得有点难了我还是不懂哪里难了之前找ttm他还说有点简单

[lv8]
00:19:155 - 这个音我觉得放滑条尾不好建议你改改这里的节奏
00:21:117 (1) - 可以blanket下前面那个滑条
00:39:755 (2,3,4,5) - 这四个节奏都不一样但是距离看着差不多而且我看你00:40:408 (4,5) - 这种都放得比较远所以建议这里00:39:755 (2,3) - 这两个放远点
00:41:062 (2) - 统一下前后ds
00:42:697 (4) - 这个不用放1/4的折返滑条我觉得放一个1/2的滑条就可以还好吧
00:48:910 (1) - 干嘛nc 后面那个NC取消了
00:53:324 (4) - 用1/4的折返就可
00:54:795 - 这里节奏不应该是这样吗 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4659536
00:57:411 (3) - ^
01:08:365 (2) - 放两个圈不是挺好这样我觉得挺不好玩的
01:19:973 (1) - 干嘛用3/4 滑条尾没音建议用1/2或者1/1的滑条
01:23:242 (3) - 可以blanket下上面的
01:46:131 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这段用1/3干嘛请换成1/2或者1/4谢谢
先把这些回了下次看主难度

~~87 我明天看看~~ edited
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谢谢ZZH

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2016-03-07T03:08:25+00:00

继续来看啦 no kd

[lv10]

cs5太小了 4.5就可以了
另外建议od和hp降到7
00:19:646 (7) - 这里是1/4? 好好听下不要放错节奏
00:31:744 (2,3) - 这里感觉叠一起不好也许可以小跳一下
01:07:220 (3,4) - 01:07:874 (7,8) - 这两对可以ctrl+g下感觉会好打点
01:36:485 (3,4) - 这里不是1/4 不要放1/4 不跟就用长滑条带过
01:36:975 (1,2) - 这里空着好莫名不跟的话全建议把01:36:975 (1,2) - 删了
01:49:400 (1) - 太远了放172 168附近就可

[lv11]

00:19:645 (4,5) - 干你娘这里不是1/4
00:40:735 (1,2) - 也许可以不用放这里和00:41:716 (8,1) - 一样的距离会好点
00:44:005 (3,4,5,6) - 三分拍也放近点不然不好打
00:49:237 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:53:324 (3) - 这里没1/8的声音别强行塞
01:03:787 - 这里的鼓也不是1/8好吗应该是1/6 而且这里有折返滑条别挤一起
01:37:956 (5,6,7,8) - 这四个没有用滑条的必要建议换成圈
01:47:438 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 太急把了别放那么远放进点
01:49:564 (1) - 这个完全可以不跟跟了反而音乱建议删了

懒看排列了

改完喊我

liaoxingyao

864 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

liaoxingyao 2016-03-07T04:42:49+00:00

ZZHBOY wrote:
继续来看啦 no kd

[lv10]
cs5太小了 4.5就可以了没更新？
另外建议od和hp降到7
00:19:646 (7) - 这里是1/4? 好好听下不要放错节奏
00:31:744 (2,3) - 这里感觉叠一起不好也许可以小跳一下
01:07:220 (3,4) - 01:07:874 (7,8) - 这两对可以ctrl+g下感觉会好打点这个spring说不改
01:36:485 (3,4) - 这里不是1/4 不要放1/4 不跟就用长滑条带过
01:36:975 (1,2) - 这里空着好莫名不跟的话全建议把01:36:975 (1,2) - 删了
01:49:400 (1) - 太远了放172 168附近就可
[lv11]
00:19:645 (4,5) - 干你娘这里不是1/4 其实我没跟琴声不过我还是改了
00:40:735 (1,2) - 也许可以不用放这里和00:41:716 (8,1) - 一样的距离会好点
00:44:005 (3,4,5,6) - 三分拍也放近点不然不好打感觉还好
00:49:237 (3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
00:53:324 (3) - 这里没1/8的声音别强行塞朋友你能不能听下kick
01:03:787 - 这里的鼓也不是1/8好吗应该是1/6 而且这里有折返滑条别挤一起 ..建议你看看KK的anima 我放开了点
01:37:956 (5,6,7,8) - 这四个没有用滑条的必要建议换成圈为什么啊
01:47:438 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 太急把了别放那么远放进点
01:49:564 (1) - 这个完全可以不跟跟了反而音乱建议删了
懒看排列了

改完喊我

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[Emiria]

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[Emiria] 2016-03-09T02:44:35+00:00

小学生这是要飞了？！
~~我还想上车~~

CoLouRed GlaZeE

282 posts

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CoLouRed GlaZeE 2016-03-11T12:12:42+00:00

小学生这是要飞了？！

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2016-03-12T12:10:18+00:00

seems fine for me, bubbled~!

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

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Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2016-04-30T03:43:48+00:00

ZZH叫我来的

[Mofeng's LV.4]
用CS3.5 - 3.7会有更好的难度分配
01:02:970 (1) - 转盘可以从01:02:643开始
01:30:436 (1,3,1,3) - 这些可以换成1/2折返，反正打起来是一样的

[LV.6]
00:30:109 (5) - 间距
00:54:141 (2) - 之后相似的节奏都没有再用过1/3，这里还是用1/2吧

[Dynamix's LV.8]
AR有点虚高，用8.3就行
01:03:951 (4) - 其实这里再加个repeat也没有问题
01:08:201 (1,2) - 实在是不太美观，可以把01:08:201 (1) 挪到 01:07:220 (3,4) - 这里然后再摆之后的
01:41:062 (2) - 间距再远一些跟之后的1/3能有对比

[Spring's LV.10]
00:34:523 (3) - 用1/6
01:07:547 (5,6) - 离得有点太近了
01:41:226 (2,3,4,5) - 这里离01:40:899 (1) 再远一些
01:43:842 (3,4) - 超级难读，最好不要stack

[LV.11]
01:00:517 (1) - NC去掉
01:24:795 - 这里感觉缺一个音，可以放圈到01:24:877 (4) 头上
01:37:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里非常容易断，建议你用两个1/8的折返滑条代替
01:42:861 (1,2,3,4) - 间距再小一点

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Hakurei Yoru 2016-04-30T04:44:30+00:00

臭奶呆

liaoxingyao

864 posts

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Topic Starter

liaoxingyao 2016-04-30T04:45:30+00:00

Hakurei Yoru wrote:
臭奶呆

你在大声什么啦

liaoxingyao

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Topic Starter

liaoxingyao 2016-04-30T04:50:17+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
ZZH叫我来的 @ZZHGIRL

[Mofeng's LV.4]
用CS3.5 - 3.7会有更好的难度分配
01:02:970 (1) - 转盘可以从01:02:643开始这个保留
01:30:436 (1,3,1,3) - 这些可以换成1/2折返，反正打起来是一样的这样得重摆好多东西啊..

[LV.6]
00:30:109 (5) - 间距
00:54:141 (2) - 之后相似的节奏都没有再用过1/3，这里还是用1/2吧

[Dynamix's LV.8]
AR有点虚高，用8.3就行
01:03:951 (4) - 其实这里再加个repeat也没有问题总感觉会被挑..先保留好了
01:08:201 (1,2) - 实在是不太美观，可以把01:08:201 (1) 挪到 01:07:220 (3,4) - 这里然后再摆之后的
01:41:062 (2) - 间距再远一些跟之后的1/3能有对比

[Spring's LV.10]
00:34:523 (3) - 用1/6
01:07:547 (5,6) - 离得有点太近了
01:41:226 (2,3,4,5) - 这里离01:40:899 (1) 再远一些
01:43:842 (3,4) - 超级难读，最好不要stack

[LV.11]
01:00:517 (1) - NC去掉
01:24:795 - 这里感觉缺一个音，可以放圈到01:24:877 (4) 头上
01:37:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里非常容易断，建议你用两个1/8的折返滑条代替
01:42:861 (1,2,3,4) - 间距再小一点这个还好我觉得

no reply=fixed
谢谢lfj大大

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

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Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2016-05-03T03:52:11+00:00

啊

Pata-Mon

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Pata-Mon 2016-05-03T04:09:02+00:00

啊

Ayachi-

2,261 posts

Joined November 2013

Ayachi- 2016-05-03T04:09:32+00:00

WTF

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

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[Crz]Makii 2016-05-03T04:10:48+00:00

性药怒飞std

liaoxingyao

864 posts

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Topic Starter

liaoxingyao 2016-05-03T04:28:03+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
啊

啊
感谢lfj大大

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

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yf_bmp 2016-05-03T04:40:13+00:00

nbnb 恭喜性药

those

3,136 posts

Joined November 2010

those 2016-05-03T04:41:35+00:00

[11]
01:03:787 (7) - risky http://puu.sh/oErp2.png
01:42:861 (1,2,3,4) - first time in the entire map using this 1/6 pattern, probably not a good idea. This could work http://puu.sh/oErSm.png

liaoxingyao

864 posts

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Topic Starter

liaoxingyao 2016-05-03T04:41:40+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
nbnb 恭喜性药

nbnb
谢谢爱抚

hehe

1,959 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2016-05-03T04:42:53+00:00

those wrote:
[11]
01:42:861 (1,2,3,4) - first time in the entire map using this 1/6 pattern, probably not a good idea. This could work http://puu.sh/oErSm.png

in my opinion, perfectly readable and fine, its a pretty common technique. i agree with the other point though, otherwise great map, congrats!

7ambda

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Joined January 2015

7ambda 2016-05-03T05:14:03+00:00

Nice diff names.

Akasha-

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined April 2013

Akasha- 2016-05-03T05:39:27+00:00

WTF

liaoxingyao

864 posts

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Topic Starter

liaoxingyao 2016-05-03T05:39:53+00:00

Kuo Kyoka wrote:
WTF

WTF

[ A v a l o n ]

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Joined July 2014

[ A v a l o n ] 2016-05-03T06:50:42+00:00

WTF i'm surprised

Karen

2,860 posts

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Karen 2016-05-03T10:02:44+00:00

those wrote:
[11]
01:03:787 (7) - risky http://puu.sh/oErp2.png

this is the only one weird thing in this diff in my opinion

Spring diff
01:50:054 - it should be clickable right?
some spacing issues 00:15:558 (4,1,2) - 00:17:029 (9,1,2) - 00:26:676 (2,3,4) -
00:45:313 (3,4) - is there any deeper reason for not emphasizing the downbeat 00:45:313 (3) -
00:50:545 (3,4) - ^
01:47:111 (8,9) - ^
00:52:915 - pretty empty
01:18:992 (3,4) - confusing spacing, it's almost the same with 01:18:665 (1,2) -

小学生图好啊，教教我

Fycho

Global Moderator

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Fycho 2016-05-03T16:06:15+00:00

those wrote:
[11]
01:03:787 (7) - risky http://puu.sh/oErp2.png

Karen wrote:
Spring diff
some spacing issues 00:15:558 (4,1,2) - 00:17:029 (9,1,2) - 00:26:676 (2,3,4) -
01:18:992 (3,4) - confusing spacing, it's almost the same with 01:18:665 (1,2) -

These concerns mentioned on the thread seem valid to me, please figure them out!

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,122 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2016-05-03T23:46:59+00:00

[LV. 11]
--00:13:270 There should be an emphasis here, make the downbeat clickable please.
--01:06:076 (7,8,1,2,3) - Such things should be avoided as you have stack leniency 0.7. Spacing here at 01:06:157 (8,1) - isn't exactly the same as 01:06:076 (7,8) - due to that. You may just try something like this. http://puu.sh/oFmoq/9fd82fe793.jpg
--01:47:438 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - I appreciate your idea but it is somehow weird to play.

gl requalifying

liaoxingyao

864 posts

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Topic Starter

liaoxingyao 2016-05-04T04:47:23+00:00

those wrote:
[11]
01:03:787 (7) - risky http://puu.sh/oErp2.png
01:42:861 (1,2,3,4) - first time in the entire map using this 1/6 pattern, probably not a good idea. This could work http://puu.sh/oErSm.png

Karen wrote:
those wrote:
[11]
01:03:787 (7) - risky http://puu.sh/oErp2.png
this is the only one weird thing in this diff in my opinion

Spring diff
01:50:054 - it should be clickable right?
some spacing issues 00:15:558 (4,1,2) - 00:17:029 (9,1,2) - 00:26:676 (2,3,4) -
00:45:313 (3,4) - is there any deeper reason for not emphasizing the downbeat 00:45:313 (3) -
00:50:545 (3,4) - ^
01:47:111 (8,9) - ^
00:52:915 - pretty empty
01:18:992 (3,4) - confusing spacing, it's almost the same with 01:18:665 (1,2) -

小学生图好啊，教教我

Fycho wrote:
those wrote:
[11]
01:03:787 (7) - risky http://puu.sh/oErp2.png
Karen wrote:
Spring diff
some spacing issues 00:15:558 (4,1,2) - 00:17:029 (9,1,2) - 00:26:676 (2,3,4) -
01:18:992 (3,4) - confusing spacing, it's almost the same with 01:18:665 (1,2) -
These concerns mentioned on the thread seem valid to me, please figure them out!

Crystal wrote:
[LV. 11]
--00:13:270 There should be an emphasis here, make the downbeat clickable please.
--01:06:076 (7,8,1,2,3) - Such things should be avoided as you have stack leniency 0.7. Spacing here at 01:06:157 (8,1) - isn't exactly the same as 01:06:076 (7,8) - due to that. You may just try something like this. http://puu.sh/oFmoq/9fd82fe793.jpg
--01:47:438 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - I appreciate your idea but it is somehow weird to play.

gl requalifying

all fixed
thanks guys~

ZZHBOY

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ZZHBOY 2016-05-04T05:16:25+00:00

饶命啊

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liaoxingyao

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Topic Starter

liaoxingyao 2016-05-04T05:17:23+00:00