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2015-10-09 00:21 Bathory Witch: hi, i'm looking for people who test and mod maps
2015-10-09 00:21 Bathory Witch: don't you mind help me?
2015-10-09 00:26 Aia: Sure I can
2015-10-09 00:26 Bathory Witch: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/665576 Keri Hilson - I like]
2015-10-09 00:27 Bathory Witch: so I mapped easy normal hard spread but hard is still wip because i have to map the last 30 seconds or something about it
2015-10-09 00:29 Aia: mm?
2015-10-09 00:30 Bathory Witch: so how do you think
2015-10-09 00:30 Bathory Witch: when will you have time to mod it
2015-10-09 00:36 Aia: I'm not a good modder
2015-10-09 00:37 Bathory Witch: but krfabitchwy said you're a good modder
2015-10-09 00:37 Aia: uh
2015-10-09 00:37 Aia: I have 10 kudosu earned
2015-10-09 00:37 Aia: llol
2015-10-09 00:38 Aia: And when the maps are super easy like this
2015-10-09 00:38 Aia: I don't think I will find anything
2015-10-09 00:38 Bathory Witch: all kudosu i ernd was on krfawy's maps xd
2015-10-09 00:38 Bathory Witch: hm okay
2015-10-09 00:39 Bathory Witch: but i would appreciate if you could say me your opinion on the map
2015-10-09 00:39 Aia: I can find something in this hard diff quicklly
2015-10-09 00:39 Aia: Don't needk d
2015-10-09 00:39 Bathory Witch: would be awesome if you check
2015-10-09 00:40 Aia: 01:26:650 (1,2,3,4) -
2015-10-09 00:40 Aia: This rhythm seems weird
2015-10-09 00:41 Aia: It's not mapped to any sound in the song
2015-10-09 00:41 Aia: 01:31:090 (1) -
2015-10-09 00:41 Aia: I think this should not be a spinner
2015-10-09 00:42 Aia: No real sound to it to make the spinner fit there
2015-10-09 00:42 Aia: 01:35:050 (4,5,6,7) - saw this exact same pattern before in the map
2015-10-09 00:42 Bathory Witch: you know
2015-10-09 00:42 Bathory Witch: thats true
2015-10-09 00:42 Aia: hmm? ^^
2015-10-09 00:42 Bathory Witch: yes i copypasted it
2015-10-09 00:43 Bathory Witch: copypaste is my style xD
2015-10-09 00:43 Aia: uhhh
2015-10-09 00:43 Aia: okay..
2015-10-09 00:43 Bathory Witch: do you think ar is too low in this hard?
2015-10-09 00:43 Aia: Yes.
2015-10-09 00:44 Aia: Put it to at least 7
nhlx
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2015-10-09 01:03 Bathory Witch: hej, szukam osób które mogłyby mi pomóc z jedną mapką, miałbyś ochotę przetestować i zmodować?
2015-10-09 01:03 Raikozen: ok
2015-10-09 01:04 Raikozen: pokaż, bo akurat miałem iść spać
2015-10-09 01:04 Bathory Witch: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/665576 Keri Hilson - I like]
2015-10-09 01:04 Bathory Witch: mam wyczucie xD
2015-10-09 01:04 Raikozen: średnio znam się na łatwych mapach
2015-10-09 01:04 Raikozen: bo moduję rzeczy które mają zazwyczaj 5,5*+
2015-10-09 01:04 Raikozen: ale mogę zobaczyć
2015-10-09 01:05 Bathory Witch: fuck
2015-10-09 01:05 Bathory Witch: byłoby mi bardzo miło :(
2015-10-09 01:05 Raikozen: czekaj
2015-10-09 01:05 Raikozen: resztkami siły zobaczę
2015-10-09 01:05 Raikozen: jak to się gra
2015-10-09 01:05 Bathory Witch: ACTION czeka
2015-10-09 01:05 Raikozen: ACTION is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/795548 Keri Hilson - I like [Hard Krfawego i Bathorego]] +DoubleTime
2015-10-09 01:07 Raikozen: zauważyłem parę ohydnych copy&pastów, proszę zremapuj
2015-10-09 01:07 Raikozen: ale
2015-10-09 01:07 Raikozen: ALE
2015-10-09 01:07 Raikozen: tak to jest
2015-10-09 01:07 Raikozen: przyjemne
2015-10-09 01:08 Raikozen: 02:33:850 (1) - zmniejsz SV
2015-10-09 01:08 Raikozen: tu muzyka zwalnia tempo, i to czuć
2015-10-09 01:08 Raikozen: 02:41:530 (1) - nie bylbym do końca pewien co do tego
2015-10-09 01:08 Bathory Witch: hm czuje
2015-10-09 01:08 Raikozen: chociaż masz
2015-10-09 01:08 Raikozen: z tyłu taki
2015-10-09 01:09 Raikozen: bardzo cieniutki syntezator
2015-10-09 01:09 Raikozen: to może ujść
2015-10-09 01:09 Raikozen: 03:01:690 (3) - troche mniej okrągłe zrób
2015-10-09 01:09 Raikozen: rzuca się w oczy
2015-10-09 01:10 Raikozen: tak ciupinkę tho
2015-10-09 01:10 Raikozen: nie przesadź
2015-10-09 01:10 Raikozen: podoba mi się, typowy ładny hardzik
2015-10-09 01:11 Raikozen: wgl skąd mnie wyczaiłeś
2015-10-09 01:11 Raikozen: krfawy ci powiedział o mnie? XD
2015-10-09 01:12 Bathory Witch: owszem :)
2015-10-09 01:12 Bathory Witch: nie jestem fejmem jak on no to chuja wykombinuje sam :(
2015-10-09 01:12 Raikozen: nie musisz być fejmem
2015-10-09 01:12 Raikozen: możesz pisać w mod queue
2015-10-09 01:12 Raikozen: spamować
2015-10-09 01:12 Raikozen: dobijać się każdą meblościanką
2015-10-09 01:12 Raikozen: albo tak jak ja
2015-10-09 01:13 Raikozen: zrób ładną 7,2* mapę maraton
2015-10-09 01:13 Raikozen: którą zagra cookiezi
2015-10-09 01:13 Raikozen: :^)
2015-10-09 01:13 Bathory Witch: na razie wszystkie te cholerne queue są do japońckich
2015-10-09 01:13 Raikozen: ehh
2015-10-09 01:13 Bathory Witch: Raiko, ja robię grywalne mapy
2015-10-09 01:13 Raikozen: no ja
2015-10-09 01:13 Raikozen: z reguły też
2015-10-09 01:13 Bathory Witch: nie bawię się w rakowanie jak hanzer albo priti :(
2015-10-09 01:13 Raikozen: jedyne raki jakie mam
2015-10-09 01:14 Raikozen: to 280bpm deathstream mapy
2015-10-09 01:14 Raikozen: 8 gwiazdek itd
2015-10-09 01:14 Raikozen: w mapowanie hanzerowych dwójek nigdy się nie bawiłem i nie zacznę
2015-10-09 01:14 Raikozen: bo to nie w moim stylu
2015-10-09 01:14 Bathory Witch: cóż, miło słyszeć xD
2015-10-09 01:14 Raikozen: jeżeli chcesz raka
2015-10-09 01:14 Bathory Witch: czy możesz rzec coś na temat normala i easy
2015-10-09 01:14 Bathory Witch: nie nie chce XD
2015-10-09 01:15 Raikozen: który bije pritiego i hanzera razem wziętych
2015-10-09 01:15 Raikozen: to polecam jenny
2015-10-09 01:15 Raikozen: wuv u
2015-10-09 01:15 Raikozen: i ogólnie jenny
2015-10-09 01:15 Raikozen: i shiro
2015-10-09 01:15 Raikozen: za takie mapy powinno ci kudosu odejmować
2015-10-09 01:15 Raikozen: czy coś
2015-10-09 01:15 Bathory Witch: boję się tego szukać tak szczerze, wiesz? :(
2015-10-09 01:15 Raikozen: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/474326 kors k - Wuv U]
2015-10-09 01:16 Raikozen: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/744549 Wagakki Band - Tengaku]
2015-10-09 01:16 Raikozen: nie musisz już
2015-10-09 01:16 Raikozen: te dwa cuda
2015-10-09 01:16 Raikozen: wystarczą żebyś trafił na onkologię
2015-10-09 01:16 Bathory Witch: super
2015-10-09 01:16 Bathory Witch: wyczuwam że oszczam się ze szczęścia
2015-10-09 01:16 Raikozen: co do normal/ez
2015-10-09 01:16 Raikozen: nie umiem mapować/modować
2015-10-09 01:16 Raikozen: sory :(
2015-10-09 01:16 Bathory Witch: o Boże serio
2015-10-09 01:17 Raikozen: serio
2015-10-09 01:17 Bathory Witch: no dobra w sumie mało kto umie xD
2015-10-09 01:17 Bathory Witch: chyba że jesteś Paps/Nickelony/Krfawy
2015-10-09 01:17 Raikozen: ta
2015-10-09 01:17 Raikozen: albo euny
2015-10-09 01:17 Raikozen: euny to jest kurwa troll
2015-10-09 01:17 Bathory Witch: co ty nie powiesz
2015-10-09 01:17 Raikozen: czekam na dzien kiedy zmapuje normalna piosenke
2015-10-09 01:17 Bathory Witch: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/732225 Akatin - sugoi Fukkireta wwwww]
2015-10-09 01:17 Raikozen: *kościotrup.jpg*
2015-10-09 01:18 Bathory Witch: nie domyśliłbym się Raiko xD
2015-10-09 01:18 Raikozen: a wgl priti
2015-10-09 01:18 Raikozen: mapuj ek
2015-10-09 01:18 Bathory Witch: tak w ogóle to masz jeszcze jakieś uwagi co do harda?
2015-10-09 01:18 Raikozen: jak już mówiłem
2015-10-09 01:18 Raikozen: copypaste
2015-10-09 01:18 Raikozen: w dwóch momentach był
2015-10-09 01:18 Raikozen: zremapuj
2015-10-09 01:18 Raikozen: nie przejdzie takie coś
2015-10-09 01:19 Bathory Witch: w sensie te sekcje całe?
2015-10-09 01:19 Raikozen: ta
2015-10-09 01:19 Bathory Witch: :(
2015-10-09 01:19 Bathory Witch: czemu ma nie przejść
2015-10-09 01:19 Raikozen: gdybys nazywał się andrea
2015-10-09 01:19 Raikozen: to może by uszło
2015-10-09 01:19 Raikozen: ale
2015-10-09 01:19 Raikozen: eh
2015-10-09 01:19 Bathory Witch: Andrea robi takie rzeczy od dawna ale moje lepiej się gra xD
2015-10-09 01:19 Bathory Witch: więc powinno przejść :(
2015-10-09 01:20 Raikozen: meh nie wiem
2015-10-09 01:20 Raikozen: tak wygląda dla mnie
2015-10-09 01:20 Raikozen: strasznie kłuje w oczy
2015-10-09 01:20 Raikozen: może to tylko ja idk
2015-10-09 01:21 Bathory Witch: nie wiem, popytam się jeszcze
2015-10-09 01:21 Bathory Witch: kopsniesz posta z rozmową w temacie?
2015-10-09 01:21 Raikozen: ok
Krfawy
Pomijając fakt że zapewniłem dobrej jakości mp3, całą sekcję czasową (timing i offset), kolory combo (włączając w to slajdery), ustawienia w mapie oraz to że testowałem tę mapę przez pół roku i stworzyłem patterny typu 01:17:050 (1) - slajder w Normalu bądź 00:39:130 (2) - takowy obiekt w Easy to jeszcze zwracałem uwagę na wiele aspektów włączając w to design, strukturę, zrozumiałość czy też flow mapy oraz patterny. Co więcej, samodzielnie zrobiłem hitsoundy do całego mapsetu i poprawiałem ewentualne problemy z nimi związane. Już za wyżej wspomniane rzeczy można mi przydzielić kudosu więc wal śmiało, hehehe.

Jeżeli w Hardzie 00:19:450 (1,2,3) - takie stakowanie występuje praktycznie wszędzie (wszystkie triple) to 00:52:330 (1,2,3) - pominięto je tutaj oraz 02:01:450 (1,2,3) - tutaj. Trochę poprawiliśmy też wcześniejsze stacki bo był z tym niezły bajzel. Chyba nienawidzę mapowania bo trzeba zachowywać coraz więcej systematyczności i ostro mnie to irytuje. ;_; A tak w ogóle to mam nadzieję że moje patterny 02:33:850 (1,2) - tutaj ci się podobają. \w/ I jak będzie więcej skarg to faktycznie użyj AR7. :<

Teraz szukajmy dalej modów a potem może znajdziemy jakiegoś miłego nominującego bądź też panią. D:
cyprianz5
Easy
- Nie widzę żadnych błędów

Normal
- Nie widzę żadnych błędów

Hard Krfawego i Bathorego
- Nie podobają mi się te slidery:
01:06:250 (3)
02:15:370 (3)
Pomimo, że prawdopodobnie są rankedable, to są według mnie brzydkie :D
Wszystkie inne są okej.

- Nazwa diffa powinna być zmieniona na coś typu "Collab", czy co tam chcecie.



Subiektywne sugestie:
Zwiększyłbym CS do 3.5,
Zmniejszyłbym OD do 5.5 lub 6,
Zwiększyłbym głośność hitsoundów,
Zwiększyłbym SV w momentach Kiai (wiem, że nie chce Wam się mapować tych partów znowu, ale w refrenie są dużo bardziej nahype'owane momenty, więc wydaje mi się, że gracz powinien poczuć tam jakieś boosty do speeda :D)



Nie widzę nic więcej, myślę że mapka szybko dostanie ranka :D
Powodzenia
Alheak
Hey M4M for Krfawy

[General]
  1. Would be great if you could find a 192kbps .mp3
  2. I would have put the preview point at 00:45:490 - , just before the chorus
[Easy]
  1. Be careful of overlaps like 01:30:490 (3,4) - , 02:42:010 (2,4) - etc, they don't look good and can be confusing for beginners
  2. 02:36:490 (4,5) - Im not a fan of stacks in Easy, they are actually quite hard to read for beginners, they should be introduced
  3. 02:47:050 (4,5) - Blankets would look nice here
[Normal]
  1. Like Easy, be careful of overlaps like 00:33:370 (5,6) - and 00:37:210 (6,2) - that ruin the general look of your map
[Hard]
  1. 00:19:810 (2,3) - Recheck the DS here
  2. 00:27:490 (2,3) - ^
  3. 01:36:610 (2,3) - ^
Good mapset, nice song, tho I'd have cut it since it's a bit repetitive and kinda long, but yeah this is a collab so everyone needs some room to map

Good luck for rank!
Xenans
Easy
-Note that most of these suggestions about the sliders were made under the assumption that you used curved sliders for sliders without ticks in them, and that when you used a linear slider, you made sure it had a bump or angle switch where the tick is. I also made the assumption that you used curved sliders when you needed to flow with a harsh angle, instead of using linear sliders.

-01:22:810 (3) - This slider should probably be curved because it would then fit your choice of making all sliders without ticks in them be curved. Even if it is at the top of the screen, you could make it curve downwards. This applies to 02:31:930 (3) - as well, but that one fits the section better since you seem to use a lot of linear sliders in that section between the kiais. This also applies to 03:26:650 (3) - and that one doesn't fit the section since the other sliders without ticks in them are all curved
-02:49:210 (1) - I think that this note should be stacked under the slider end, like how the other notes were stacked before it
-03:14:650 (4) - This slider should have a bump in its path, like most other linear sliders in the song. This applies to 03:31:930 (2) - as well.
-03:28:090 (2) - This slider doesn't match the other linear sliders, most of the other ones use red anchors solely, while this one has 2 whites and 1 red. I dont see anything such as vocals to fit this pattern so maybe it would be best to make it fit the rest

A bit nit-picky, but I find it hard to mess up an easy difficulty so I'm being really attentive.

Normal
-It seems that many of your sliders aren't matched up linearly perfectly. This seems to be done on purpose, although it does make the map a bit irregular. You may have done this because you wanted to make it less linear of a flow, but since there is slider leniency, it doesn't really matter and could be considered to look worse.

-01:17:050 (1) - I don't think this slider needs to become irregular like that, there is the kiai emphasis, but you don't repeat this on the other kiai starts. If you did this sort of slider on other kiai starts, it could make map more interesting, but as it stands, this slider is kinda weird.
-02:34:810 (2) - This note. It could probably be moved somewhere else to make the spacing easier to read because the slider after this note is further away on the timeline than most other notes, but it is stacked so it could be a bit misleading.
-03:12:250 (1) - You put the sharp curve on this slider because of the vocals, but there are at least two other sliders before this one that you could also do the same to. For example, 03:08:410 (1,4) - could also have the same effect applied to them.

Seems pretty good, but your like i mentioned before, the sliders are a bit irregular in terms of positioning so you should keep tha tin mind.

Hard
-What is with that title. What. Also, your use of irregular sliders is irregular. You seem to be using them to accentuate the vocals, but you aren't using them often enough to be consistent

-00:24:250 (4) - This note is spaced too far from the slider. Other notes with the same beat pattern don't have this jump, why should this one?
-00:42:010 (6) - This one is a bit subjective. I don't think I chose the first case in which this occurred, but your triples are spaced closer together than your sliders that follow right after each other, even though the beats follow a similar pattern. You could either move the slider patterns closer together, or move them further away so that they maintain the slider velocity flow and are more different from the triple patterns. I mention this because you sometimes have triples, triples into sliders, sliders that last onto the red and then follow onto another slider, or sliders with a note between them. These all add rhythm by using a blue tick, but they are a bit inconsistent. Maybe I'm just being stupid and you can ignore this me for this one.


Nice map ;)
Yoges
Yo, M4M courtesy of Krfawy

[General]
Offset is really off. More correct offset is 227. You look like a new mapper so here are some tips on finding correct offset and fixing offset issues.
Tips
  1. After You've found the timing go to where your uninherited timing point is (red point) and slow the playback rate down to 25% and play through that part a couple of times. Listen out for where the first note (the note your timing point is meant to be on) is located. Try to pause on the exact instant the note starts. Then open the timing setup panel, select your uninherited timing point and click the "Use current time" button under the where the bpm and offset values are. You now have a fairly accurate offset. You can also adjust the offset value manually if you think the place you paused at was a bit too soon or late.
  2. Fixing incorrect offset involves a few more steps. Do everything I said above ^^^ but this time make note of the old offset and your new offset. Your offset was 250, the new offset I found was 227. Take the old one away from the new one and then you get what you have to adjust everything by. In this case its -23ms. Go to the timing setup panel and select all the timing points by hitting Ctrl+A then put -23 as the "Move offsets by" value, click "move" and "ok". You're not done yet. You also have to snap all the notes and the preview points back to the grid. Just go to the compose tab, hit Ctrl+A again and just drag everything back to the grid like so. Offsets that are 1-5ms off are usually tolerable, anything above 7ms is very untolerable. The delay becomes really noticeable especially on hards and insanes+.

Your offset was off by 23ms :P

Correct all the offsets before applying the mods as I'm using the offset I've given you.
[Easy]
00:21:347 (3) - Move that a tiny bit to the left so it looks nicer. Something like (8,148) would be good.
00:56:387 (3,4,1,2) - Curved anticlockwise motion here would fit much nicer with the music. The linear flow just doesn't feel right.
01:30:467 (3,4) - That doesn't look nice. Just do something like this to get rid of that overlap.
01:38:147 (3) - Move that a bit to the right (508,236)
01:46:307 (4,1,2) - That flow doesn't feel nice at all. A path like this would feel much nicer.
02:06:467 (4,1,2) - Similar to 00:56:387
02:12:707 (3) - Move a little to the left (16,152)
02:41:987 (2,4) - Overlap doesn't look nice.
02:58:787 (3,4) - ^
03:22:307 (4) - Rotate this 45 anticlockwise through selection center for better flow.

[Normal]
00:33:347 (5,6) - Overlap
01:42:467 (5,6) - ^
03:09:827 (3,4) - ^

Nothing I could notice with the hard because I can't make hards >.<
Topic Starter
Bathory Witch

Xenans wrote:

Easy
-Note that most of these suggestions about the sliders were made under the assumption that you used curved sliders for sliders without ticks in them, and that when you used a linear slider, you made sure it had a bump or angle switch where the tick is. I also made the assumption that you used curved sliders when you needed to flow with a harsh angle, instead of using linear sliders.

-01:22:810 (3) - This slider should probably be curved because it would then fit your choice of making all sliders without ticks in them be curved. Even if it is at the top of the screen, you could make it curve downwards. This applies to 02:31:930 (3) - as well, but that one fits the section better since you seem to use a lot of linear sliders in that section between the kiais. This also applies to 03:26:650 (3) - and that one doesn't fit the section since the other sliders without ticks in them are all curved
-02:49:210 (1) - I think that this note should be stacked under the slider end, like how the other notes were stacked before it
-03:14:650 (4) - This slider should have a bump in its path, like most other linear sliders in the song. This applies to 03:31:930 (2) - as well.
-03:28:090 (2) - This slider doesn't match the other linear sliders, most of the other ones use red anchors solely, while this one has 2 whites and 1 red. I dont see anything such as vocals to fit this pattern so maybe it would be best to make it fit the rest

A bit nit-picky, but I find it hard to mess up an easy difficulty so I'm being really attentive.

Normal
-It seems that many of your sliders aren't matched up linearly perfectly. This seems to be done on purpose, although it does make the map a bit irregular. You may have done this because you wanted to make it less linear of a flow, but since there is slider leniency, it doesn't really matter and could be considered to look worse.

-01:17:050 (1) - I don't think this slider needs to become irregular like that, there is the kiai emphasis, but you don't repeat this on the other kiai starts. If you did this sort of slider on other kiai starts, it could make map more interesting, but as it stands, this slider is kinda weird.
-02:34:810 (2) - This note. It could probably be moved somewhere else to make the spacing easier to read because the slider after this note is further away on the timeline than most other notes, but it is stacked so it could be a bit misleading.
-03:12:250 (1) - You put the sharp curve on this slider because of the vocals, but there are at least two other sliders before this one that you could also do the same to. For example, 03:08:410 (1,4) - could also have the same effect applied to them.

Seems pretty good, but your like i mentioned before, the sliders are a bit irregular in terms of positioning so you should keep tha tin mind.

Hard
-What is with that title. What. Also, your use of irregular sliders is irregular. You seem to be using them to accentuate the vocals, but you aren't using them often enough to be consistent

-00:24:250 (4) - This note is spaced too far from the slider. Other notes with the same beat pattern don't have this jump, why should this one?
-00:42:010 (6) - This one is a bit subjective. I don't think I chose the first case in which this occurred, but your triples are spaced closer together than your sliders that follow right after each other, even though the beats follow a similar pattern. You could either move the slider patterns closer together, or move them further away so that they maintain the slider velocity flow and are more different from the triple patterns. I mention this because you sometimes have triples, triples into sliders, sliders that last onto the red and then follow onto another slider, or sliders with a note between them. These all add rhythm by using a blue tick, but they are a bit inconsistent. Maybe I'm just being stupid and you can ignore this me for this one.


Nice map ;)
I maked sliders look like as they look because I just wanted it like it. It isn't like that because I wanted to follow music more, I think they follow music normally now so it's ok for me. D: Also I was following beats in Hard and later vocals so that's why it can be not same for you all the times. Also I used different (but the same) spacing for two objects and another spacing for streams but it's has been the same forever. Thanks for checking!

Yoges wrote:

Yo, M4M courtesy of Krfawy

[General]
Offset is really off. More correct offset is 227. You look like a new mapper so here are some tips on finding correct offset and fixing offset issues.
Tips
  1. After You've found the timing go to where your uninherited timing point is (red point) and slow the playback rate down to 25% and play through that part a couple of times. Listen out for where the first note (the note your timing point is meant to be on) is located. Try to pause on the exact instant the note starts. Then open the timing setup panel, select your uninherited timing point and click the "Use current time" button under the where the bpm and offset values are. You now have a fairly accurate offset. You can also adjust the offset value manually if you think the place you paused at was a bit too soon or late. Krfawy's offset is better, sorry. :(
  2. Fixing incorrect offset involves a few more steps. Do everything I said above ^^^ but this time make note of the old offset and your new offset. Your offset was 250, the new offset I found was 227. Take the old one away from the new one and then you get what you have to adjust everything by. In this case its -23ms. Go to the timing setup panel and select all the timing points by hitting Ctrl+A then put -23 as the "Move offsets by" value, click "move" and "ok". You're not done yet. You also have to snap all the notes and the preview points back to the grid. Just go to the compose tab, hit Ctrl+A again and just drag everything back to the grid like so. Offsets that are 1-5ms off are usually tolerable, anything above 7ms is very untolerable. The delay becomes really noticeable especially on hards and insanes+.

Your offset was off by 23ms :P

Correct all the offsets before applying the mods as I'm using the offset I've given you.
[Easy]
00:21:347 (3) - Move that a tiny bit to the left so it looks nicer. Something like (8,148) would be good. Fixed
00:56:387 (3,4,1,2) - Curved anticlockwise motion here would fit much nicer with the music. The linear flow just doesn't feel right. I like it it is more.
01:30:467 (3,4) - That doesn't look nice. Just do something like this to get rid of that overlap. Fixed
01:38:147 (3) - Move that a bit to the right (508,236) Fixed
01:46:307 (4,1,2) - That flow doesn't feel nice at all. A path like this would feel much nicer. I like it it is more.
02:06:467 (4,1,2) - Similar to 00:56:387 I like it it is more.
02:12:707 (3) - Move a little to the left (16,152) Fixed
02:41:987 (2,4) - Overlap doesn't look nice. Fixed
02:58:787 (3,4) - ^ Fixed
03:22:307 (4) - Rotate this 45 anticlockwise through selection center for better flow. Fixed

[Normal]
00:33:347 (5,6) - Overlap Fixed
01:42:467 (5,6) - ^ Fixed
03:09:827 (3,4) - ^ Fixed

Nothing I could notice with the hard because I can't make hards >.<
Thanks for modding. :)
George
EZ
00:17:530 (3) - This slider may overlap the graph at the bottom of the screen, so people might tell you to move it up more
00:19:930 (2) - I would make the slant in the slider a bit wider instead of keeping it so small
01:30:490 (3,4) - I would try to remove the overlap here since its small and ugly
02:36:490 (4,5) - I would recommend deleting the hitcircle and moving / reshaping the slider since new players cant grasp the idea of 1/2 so easily
02:40:330 (4,5) - ^ (No need to change the slider)
02:46:810 (3) - Delete this circle
02:48:250 (5) - ^

can you plz call me back later once you get a few mods on normal and hard since I'm kind of a cunt and don't want to do them
Squichu
Hey there!
the blonde one requested a mod for this, so here goes. -
feel free to disagree with any suggestion! c:

General
  1. consider disabling the countdown? it's not extremely disturbing, but (imo) sounds better without countdown
  2. how about increasing hitsound volume in Kiai sections? the music gets louder so the hitsounds should be adjusted, I think
Easy
  • //note: each suggestion applies to copy-pasted parts, too!
  1. 00:29:530 (4,1,2) - movement here seems really awkward, kinda 'forced'. maybe you like one of these suggestions - http://puu.sh/kZJ8t.jpg | http://puu.sh/kZJeq.jpg
  2. 00:34:330 (4) - both, rhythm and lyrics, would be better emphasized if you split this slider into circle + shorter slider (so the downbeat is clickable)
  3. 00:41:050 (4) - consider rotating this slightly (~45°) and moving it further down to match the previous movement better
  4. 00:53:050 (4) - works better with the beat if you remove the reverse and add a circle on the downbeat instead
    if you do that, don't forget to move the NC to the downbeat!
  5. 01:24:730 (1,2) - try two 1/1 slider instead? that'd emphasize the lyrics pretty nicely, because she stresses each word and atm you're ignoring the third one (cause long slider)
  6. 01:30:490 (3,4) - move the slider a little further down+right, the sliderborder is pretty close to the circle atm. looks untidy :c
  7. 01:49:690 (3) - the sliderend overlaps with the default HP bar, consider moving or rotating the slider to avoid that.
    usually that's not much of an issue, but because of the reverse arrow this might cause readability problems > better to avoid that
  8. 02:34:810 (2,3,4,5) - now this rhytm seems a little off. it's kinda unexpected and the 1/2 beats can be very confusing for beginners. especially because of the stack, it makes the pattern harder to read, so it might be better to unstack (4,5). (same goes for the following 1/2 stacks)
    but considering everything, I'd prefer if you change the rhythm up like this - http://puu.sh/kZKVr.jpg
    (I deleted (2) and extended (1), then replaced the circles with a repeat-slider. the tick change shouldn't be a problem if the DS is consistent between the objects, because there is enought time to read the time-distance, even for newbies. also, I deleted the reverse of (5) and added another circle on the downbeat to emphasize it better (and moved the NC here, too).)
  9. 02:38:170 (1,2,3,4) - similar here, I'd prefer this rhythm for the same reasons as stated ^ - http://puu.sh/kZLfF.jpg
  10. 02:56:890 (1,2) - please curve (2) differently so it doesn't overlap with (1). causes confusion (and doesn't look good, imo. xD)
    or consider moving (1,2), you could smoothen the movement a lot by that. - http://puu.sh/kZLpa.jpg
  11. 03:03:130 (4,1,2) - same here with (4) and (2). you can just move (2) further up to fix that
  12. 03:30:010 (4,1,2) - here it would be better to unstack (4) and (2), because it looks very confusing to beginner players. (2) clearly visible when they reach the end of (4) so they probably are overwhelmed by the amount of stuff going on. :/
  13. 03:34:330 (5) - last downbeat should be clickable, imo. consider removing the reverse and adding a circle?
Normal
  1. 00:35:530 (3,4) - leaving a break in-between feels a little weird while playing, cause the vocals are pretty strong.. I think it plays very nice if you delete (4) and add a reverse to (3), but I understand that you want to map the sound at 00:36:250 -. maybe you can turn (4) into a 1/2 slider?
  2. 00:41:050 (6) - there's a pretty strong beat on the first red tick, consider using this rhythm instead - http://puu.sh/kZM3R.jpg or http://puu.sh/kZM5d.jpg
    (first suggestion is easier to play, but the second emphasizes vocals better and it has the same sound clickable you mapped before)
  3. 00:56:890 (8) - movement could work better if you ctrl+j (8) and rotate it slightly so it looks like this: http://puu.sh/kZMie.jpg
  4. 01:06:250 (2,3) - you're ignoring some strong beats here, try this maybe- http://puu.sh/kZMnZ.jpg
  5. 01:16:090 (8,9,1,2) - you could try to improve movement here, you'd just have to move the objects a little - http://puu.sh/kZMr1.jpg
    -
  6. sidenote- you might want to change your NC pattern, because there are some long combos (example 03:31:210 (10) - ) which is a little too much in Normal (imo)
Magical blonde Hard
  1. overall note- some 1/4 are spaced with 0.6 DS and some with 0.3 DS which looks a bit confusing. I think the spacing of 1/4 beats shoud be consistent in a Hard diff, otherwise they _might_ be mistaken for 1/8. (it's unlikely, but still. xD)
  2. 00:16:090 (3,4) - is there any reason for a jump here? seems rather random to me. (except for symmetry maybe, but that's not really noticeable, cause slider vs circles..) I prefer standard DS here.
    if you want to keep the jump, there should be one here, too 00:18:010 (3,4) - cause it's the same rhythm
  3. 00:31:930 (4) - downbeat should be clickable, imo. remove the reverse and add a circle?
  4. 00:34:330 (6) - similar to ^. short slider + circle might work better
  5. 01:23:290 (3) - is this missing a reverse? cause there's a sound on the red tick afterwards
  6. 02:41:530 (1) - doesn't feel intuitive to play. :c and the sound the reverses emphasize is completely ignored with the following slider.. so I'd suggest removing the reverses and using a simple 4/4 (?) slider (this thing: http://puu.sh/kZNUV.jpg ).
  7. 02:45:370 (1) - same here as ^
  8. 02:49:330 (1) - the spinner should end earlier, imo. so the "and the world" vocals can be mapped just like before (01:54:490 (5,6,7) - and 00:45:610 (1,2,3) - )
  9. 03:34:810 (5) - as in Easy. remove reverse and add a circle on the downbeat?
welp, that's it from me. hope I could help a little.
and good luck, the song is awesome!
//squee
streeteelf
No siema :v

[Easy]
  1. Nie za wysokie SV jak na Easy?
  2. 00:29:530 (4,1,2) - dziwny flow
  3. 01:09:370 (1,2) - kocyk do poprawy :v
  4. 01:24:730 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:46:330 (4,1,2) - kolejne dziwne flow
  6. 01:55:450 (1,2) - z tego można 1 slider zrobić
  7. 02:10:810 (1,2) - ^
  8. 02:18:490 (1,2) - kocyk
  9. 02:36:010 (3,4) - zmień na slider?
  10. 02:39:850 (3,4) - ^
[Normal]
  1. 00:40:570 (5,6) - dziwny kocyk moim zdaniem trochę
  2. 01:04:810 (7) - Przesuń na x:103 y:268 dla lepszego flow
  3. 01:23:290 (6) - Lekki skok moim zdaniem zbędny
  4. 01:58:810 (7) - Ja bym dał go w pionie zagięty trochę jak 01:57:850 (5) dla lepszego flow.
  5. 02:20:650 (5) - x:196 y:122 i 02:20:890 (6) - x:282 y:95 - lepsze flow
  6. 02:27:850 (3,4) - popraw kocyk
  7. 02:41:770 (2) - x:148 y:350
  8. 02:49:450 (1) - Dziwne, że spinner jest dłuższy niż w Easy chociaż mogłyby być takie same.
  9. 03:35:290 (1) - Moim zdaniem lepiej na dole gdyby się kończyło, bo tak dość mocno zmuszasz do kanciastego ruchu w górę.
[Hard (nie chce mi się pisać pełnej nazwy :v)]
  1. 01:09:370 (1,2) - Ctrl+J i przesuń na x:224 y:51
  2. 01:23:050 (1,2,3) - Ja bym użył piątki zamiast trójki przesunięte bliżej kolejnego obiektu.
Niezbyt wielki mod, ale jeszcze dodać mogę, że opcjonalnie na koniec można dać spinner ( 03:35:410 - 03:36:730 ). Sry za takie opóźnienie, ale kompletnie zapomniałem. :P Powodzenia. o3o
Euny
req from krfwdsfhglsdlafgdhjklsdjksdlsdlkjgbldkjfy

  • Normal
  1. 01:17:050 (1) - this slider really easy to gives confuse for newest players. i think you should fix. also it make crash flow
  2. 01:42:490 (5,6) - isnt looks bit close?? move (6) a bit right
  3. 02:26:170 (1) - again same as first mod
  4. 03:31:450 (1,2) - make same shape them. it will be help for good reading when play
  • Hard Krfawego i Bathorego
  1. 00:35:530 (2) - too much slider points for this song part i think you should less that points
  2. 02:45:850 (2,3) - i think you can avoid those
  3. 02:48:730 (2) - you better for change this second slider point for white
other's are looks fine to me gl with this set
Topic Starter
Bathory Witch
Squirrel you wrote so many i cant even respond |*| i did almost everything, thank you! :D
streeteelf nie chce mi się odpisywać. :v
Euny thank you! did everything but Krfawy wants his slider as now.-> 02:48:730 (2)
Pereira006
[Easy]

Hitsound:

00:25:210 (4) - the begin, you don't need whistle, you can see you diff normal, that don't have whistle, so if you wanna keep consistency, remove whistle
00:40:570 (3) - ^ same happen
00:48:250 (3) - Another inconsistency as you style, this slider don't have normal on sampleset and soft on addition, but Diff Normal have, if you wanna keep consistency, add normal on sampleset and soft on addition this object
00:55:930 (2) - ^ same
00:59:770 (3) - I know there no vocal, but I feel the instrument is soo strong here, is make sense add whistle IMO
01:11:290 (3) - missing whistle
01:57:370 (3) - same happen before
02:08:890 (3) - same happen as 01:11:290 (3)
02:54:970 (3) - begin same happen before

there lot inconsistency hitsound

Gameplay:

00:34:330 (4) - Missing NC, because as you style, you put NC every 8/1, look like this missing NC
00:38:650 (1,2) - inconsistency spacing

did you copy-paste on 01:32:410 at 02:33:850 from on 00:15:610 at 01:24:730 ? I mean copy-paste only rhythm is fine but placement, is make me worry, you can't just CTRL + C -> Ctrl + V -> Ctrl + h -> Ctrl + j and leave that... would be nice if you change placement only part on 01:32:410 at 02:33:850 or begin.

The play and follow song look good but copy-paste of placement dunno

[Advanced]

look pretty good, but my problem is again copy-past of placement, same happen as Easy.

[Hard Krfawego i Bathorego]

I don't know this name are allowed, should be Collab Hard, again play look good but copy-past placement same thing happen before
[]
My bigger problem is copy-paste of placement, would be nice if change placement, also the hitsound need improve expect Hard.
Normal and advance made by creator, that should be consistency. Example on Normal 01:05:530 (1) - on begin that addition is soft but on Advanced is auto, no only this part there more parts example and I can't find wich more correct for you. Try be more consistency Hitsound.
Any question or you don't understand my english ask me on in-game and I will explain my best

I will give star icon butt right now try get more opinion BN to look this map if is fine will bubble if is not, you will change placements and get more mods 3-4.
Call me when you done everthing.
good luck
Topic Starter
Bathory Witch
00:34:330 (4) - this will continue vocal and this work fine now, it not missing combo
00:59:770 (3) - em it's not powerful so not need whistle imo

"I mean copy-paste only rhythm is fine but placement, is make me worry, you can't just CTRL + C -> Ctrl + V -> Ctrl + h -> Ctrl + j and leave that..." Andrea used it a lot, for example in map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/123174 and it is very good. also no statement in Ranking Criteria that is urankable to copy&pasta so my pattern good because nice to play and work and good rhythms. :-/

Fixed rest. Nerfed whistle and tried to consistent in evey diff. Let me ask more people for mod. Thanks for mod Pereira! :D

ed: Irrev confirmd:
Pereira006
alright then, No need more mod if copy-paste is fine, just made me worry lol and sometime I forget :P anyway, all look good and nice map

Bubble

Good luck
Nozhomi
Ok will try to check this before the end of the week ^^' just a reminder.
4 days later~

[General :]
  1. Metadata : What the hell is that source ?
  2. Timing : Ok
  3. AiMod : Ok
  4. SB : /
  5. Other: Are you sure about keeping Countdown enable ?

[Mapping / Rhythm :]

- Normal :

  1. 00:27:130 (1) - Move it to 100:116 to adjust perfectly spacing.
- Advanced :

  1. 01:54:490 (4,1) - This overlap looks really bad in play, because it cover a little 01:55:450 (1) - start. Stack them or separe them completly.
  2. 03:00:730 - This strong beat should be clicked to emphasis the vocal, like you did on other kiai.
- Bathory & Perv's Hard :

  1. 02:33:850 (1,2) - I don't understand why you clearly skip vocal on 02:34:330 - / 02:36:010 - when you map it just after when the intensity is the same. Makes no sense.

[Hitsound :]
  1. Ok

The map is k, I won't say anything about copy-paste patterns since they're ofc not unrankable, BUT that's not because someone did it than that's the good example to follow. It was a style, but clearly more "diversity" on patterns is nice nowadays. So just don't be lazy for your next map and avoid copy-paste patterns.
Call me back when you fix adressed issues.
Mukyu~
Topic Starter
Bathory Witch
Source is movie of German OST for move. Video, site film.
Countdown: Yes, is sound good when enabled.

Normal: Fixed, 01:43:930 (1) - this too.
Advanced: Fixed.
Hard: Fixed.

Thanks!
Nozhomi
Hard : 02:34:330 - what about this one ? Since you did it for 02:36:010 - would have more sense to do both. Also you totally broke the spacing between them.

About souce, I see the point but since the music have also it own clip https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fpoIxKkJ1G4 with a different version (not movie ver.), I still think you should not put it into source. Ask a QAT about this before pushing this set futher.
Krfawy
I think *THIS* is enough to ensure. o/
shARPII
After digging a little bit, I think it's fine to keep the movie as source: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/I_Like_%2 ... on_song%29
The song has been created for the movie and then, added in a new album release as bonus track.

For me, the source should be the movie/game/album which release the song for the first time so it makes sense here.
Topic Starter
Bathory Witch
I thenk those sliders are good and follow they spacing song and vocal so no change Nozhomi. :o

I watch was move and was nice. :D
Nozhomi
Fine I don't have more to add here.
GL during qualified phase~
IamKwaN
May I ask why L in like isn't capitalized?

There should be another source regarding to current title other than those mentioned above, I guess. Would be appreciated if you could provide it.
Smokeman

Bathory Witch wrote:

"I mean copy-paste only rhythm is fine but placement, is make me worry, you can't just CTRL + C -> Ctrl + V -> Ctrl + h -> Ctrl + j and leave that..." Andrea used it a lot, for example in map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/123174 and it is very good. also no statement in Ranking Criteria that is urankable to copy&pasta so my pattern good because nice to play and work and good rhythms. :-/
something something, dont justify your mapping based on old maps, something something...

Sure it's not unrankeable, but regarding the quality put in ranked maps this past year, you should be able to guess some sort of quality standard (or quality minimum) as an unwritten rule.

If this wasn't the case then i could just start mapping circles only on white ticks and call it an easy dif. Do the same with some circles on the red ticks, call it a normal and i got myself a "rankable" map. I bet this kind of map would be the most boring thing you could play but... 2007 mapping kinda made the same thing right /s ?

and btw pls dont compare copy pasting the EXACT SAME THING MULTIPLE TIMES (4-5 mb?) to fill in the same verse and the chorus, with "copy paste" styles of people like andrea.

This is ridiculous...
Krfawy
Nie wiem kto bardziej z naszego duetu na to zasługuje, ale i tak jedynie w ten sposób mogę skomentować jak bardzo zjechaliśmy z tytułem. :|

Shiirn
When a mapper maps something, there should be an intended experience that they want to provide for the player. This varies wildly depending on the mapper's personal investment into the song, how much they like it, and how much they understand it, but when you get right down to it, every single map from every single mapper has origins based in the thought process of "I want the player to feel like this while playing".

I can safely guess in this case it was "I want the players to fall asleep."



Because repeating the same thing over and over is a very effective lullaby.
IamKwaN
Please give me a response regarding to my post here within the next 24 hours or else I have to temporarily pull this set out of the Qualified session until a valid metadata proof is given by you.
semaphore

IamKwaN wrote:

Please give me a response regarding to my post here within the next 24 hours or else I have to temporarily pull this set out of the Qualified session until a valid metadata proof is given by you.
oh boy
IamKwaN
Krfawy told me the mapper would be away from keyboard for a while, so let's wait for the creator to have the metadata fixed (aka change the Title to I Like) before moving it forward. Good luck with requalification.
riffy
In case you need proofs, here you can have one. It's official VEVO YT channel, so it is pretty trustworthy.
IamKwaN
Or this from the movie official website:



o/
Topic Starter
Bathory Witch

Krfawy wrote:

Yes is good comment on I how mistake title L in title here.

ed: Masz zmapować tego Harda szybciej matołku.
Nozhomi
Ok name is fixed, rest was and still fine.

Bub~
Myxo
We talked a bit ingame about general things. Now to get specific:

[Hard]

  1. 02:33:850 (1,1) - This is the calmest section of the song and the music is almost silent (there is only a few sounds), so I really don't think these slidershapes fit here. It would be better to go for something simple here, like curved sliders or wave sliders for example.
  2. 03:35:290 - Remove the Normal Finish, please. The music is fading here and there is no sound to support such a strong hitsound here. Same applies for the other diffs.
Yep, that's it already.

As I already said ingame, this map is filled with unique slidershapes one might argue they don't fit the music too well. However I think the concept is fine, especially for a first map, since the map is very simplistic otherwise.
Nozhomi
Ok saw about settings with Despe about Normal. Everything should be fine (again).

Poi~
Myxo
Qualified!
Krfawy
No nareszcie! Jak przyjdziesz do domu to znajdziesz prezent! :D
Topic Starter
Bathory Witch
Dzięki za browary. o/
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