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Jona
Hello! Here is my mod (sorry for late >w<)
Also sorry for not modding kantan and futsuu, I suck at modding easier diffs ;w; (I don't see any mistakes on them)

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:59:920 - k
  2. 01:01:048(157,158) - d k
  3. 01:48:641 - k
  4. 02:28:341 - d
  5. 03:28:341 - K
  6. 03:35:333(686,687) - switch to d K (for variation, you have d k d three times in a row here)
[Lundle's Oni]
  1. 00:59:017 - k d k?
  2. 02:15:258 - k
[Oni]
  1. 00:43:679(40,141,142,143) k ddk or 00:44:807(146,147,148) ddk. Just ideas for better flow (and it sounds better imo)
  2. 00:50:784 - Remove? (no sound)
  3. 00:54:732(196,197) - d k
  4. 01:01:950(232,233) - d k
  5. 01:48:641 - Same as first point
  6. 02:06:912 - ddkdkkd, current stream sounds wierd because 02:07:138 should be a kat
  7. 03:04:205(828,829,830) - ddk

Hope my mod was useful, good luck on ranking!! :)
newyams99
Hi, from request :D

What a nice song~ Nice difficulties too <3

General

Add "usagiuta" to the tags since it is the romanized version of the source name 兎唄. Also add "amamitou" (or is it "amamidou"?) I can't read the last kanji x.x for甘味党 and add "wataame" for 綿飴.

Mainly, I thought the audio volume was a bit much, specifically the 100% audio volume at the kiai and the high volume at the quiet parts. Perhaps reduce the audio volume by 10 or even 20% universally?

03:28:341 - This ending would look awesome with a kiai imo (but that's very subjective of me and it's a personal preference =_=).

Julie's Kantan

Change HP to 7 for a better HP curve.

00:27:890 (26,27,28,29,30,31) - Despite this being one of the quieter sections in the song, it's pretty close in difficulty to the kiai time imo. There are 2 three-hit 1/1 rhythms in a row here and it may be difficult (and aren't featured in the kiai). However, the biggest problem is that it's exactly the same rhythm - not colour pattern - as the Futsuu for more than 8 beats (that's just a rule I made myself), which isn't good in terms of the difficulty curve with the Futsuu. Maybe you could change 00:28:341 (27) to k and move it to 00:26:536 for a bit of a recovery time till the next 1/1 rhythm? You may want to change 00:26:085 (24) to k as well if you accept this suggestion. Same thing at 01:32:852 (26,27,28,29,30,31).
Also, adding a 4/1 gap somewhere around this area may not be a bad idea (00:37:814 (41) is a possibility).

00:43:228 (48,49,50,51,52) - Similar to the above, this section is close in difficulty to the kiai. Perhaps remove either 00:43:679 (49) or 00:44:581 (51)? Same at 01:48:191 (47,48,49,50,51).

00:47:739 (55,56,57) - The pitch sounds pretty similar to 00:40:521 (44,45,46), perhaps change to match? Same at 01:52:701 (54,55,56).

00:52:251 (63) - I'd remove this hit. First, as a personal preference, especially in the easier difficulties, I like it if there was not a hit in the middle of a buildup or transition into the chorus. I like to listen to the music here. But more importantly, I think that removing this hit would make a good 4/1 break since you have none. Although this is a slow BPM song, your mapping is very continuous (kinda boring) with a minimum of 2/1 snapping between each hit. Which isn't surprising because the song's vocals is on almost every 2/1 beat, but this is one of your opportunities to break that continuous feeling, since there are no vocals. Idk, this might just be me.
Same at 01:57:213 (62).

01:06:687 (83) - Change to k? The pitch is higher than the previous hit in the vocals, and it'll give a good contrast with the next hit. Same at 02:11:649 (83). Same at 03:11:198 (162).

01:40:070 (36,37,38,39) - This is easier than the section previous to this which sounded similar. 01:40:070 (36,37,38,39) is harder than 00:35:108 (36,37,38,39,40) and should be changed to at least match the rhythm. It is also possible to switch these two rhythms's places to make a nice increasing difficulty curve through the song.

02:12:551 (84,85,86) - This is another opportunity to create a 4/1 break rather than have a 1/1 rhythm. Not only for the same reasoning as
00:52:251 (63), but you have a 1.5/1 rhythm coming up at 02:14:356 (87,88) so you should provide beginners with a strong sense of preparation rather than a rushed one with the 1/1 rhythm you have right now. Remove 02:13:002 (85,86)?

02:26:536 (102) - You can change this to k to show the pitch change from the previous hit if you want to.

02:33:303 (111) - I've noticed you've been making your 1/1 patterns and some 2/1 patterns so that they form a nice contrast with a hit of high emphasis, and you've done very well on that. To keep consistency with that style maybe change this hit to d?

02:40:521 (120) - ^

02:51:348 (131) - I'd personally delete this hit

02:55:860 (137) - Change to d? It'll contrast with the next hit and match the pitch better.

03:34:205 - You could add a k for a difficulty increase from the start.

03:42:777 - I feel like you need a hit here. Perhaps a D.

Nardo's Futsuu

00:23:378 (36) - Although repetitive, it may sound nicer to change this to a k. First, the pitch of the instrumental melody is higher than the previous hit. Second, you can hear a new clap instrument used here (idk what instrument), which is suitable for a k imo. Same at 01:28:341 (181).

00:31:499 - This section up to 00:36:912 is exactly the same as the rhythm in the Muzukashii. The Futsuu might even be harder here due to the hit variations. If this poses an issue, perhaps some collaboration is needed with Canvas to fix this. Same thing for the section at 01:36:461.

00:32:175 (50,51) - This pair 1/2 rhythm sounds exactly the same as 00:33:980 (54,55). I'm guessing you changed the colours for variety and to match the extended vocals at 00:32:175. I'd personally still have it as d d mainly for simplicity for the difficult 1.5/1 rhythm and ease of playing. Your choice. Same at 01:37:137 (196,197).

01:08:491 (135) - Change to k? The pitch of the piano sounds higher than the next and previous hit.

02:23:829 (306,307,308,309) - This is definitely for variety, but it sounds better to be the same as 02:22:025 (301,302,303,304) imo. Well, it matches with the background instrumentals and having a d will be a good contrast to 02:25:183 (310).

03:12:551 (407,408,409) - It might just be me, but I found this kinda weird how the rhythm was specifically matched to the vocals, in the part that is a contrast to the kiai time. Perhaps remove 03:12:777 (408) for a rhythm similar to 03:15:709 (414,415,416)?

03:14:356 (411,412,413) - Same reasoning as above, but instead of removing stuff, how about moving stuff around like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4284707
Just thought that this might be better to have hits at 03:15:258 instead of here for a transition into the next mini-section with the emphasized piano. Also, the vocals are more beautiful at 03:15:258 imo :P

03:27:438 (436) - For the same reasoning as 00:23:378 (36), perhaps change to k? May work on 03:27:890 (438) instead.

Good job on this diff :)

Muzukashii

00:09:393 (1,2,3) - Using 00:13:002 (13,14,15) as a reference for comparison, the pitch of 00:09:844 (3) is much higher and more emphasized than 00:13:454 (15), So you should at least have 00:09:844 (3) as a K imo. You may also want to change 00:09:619 (2) to d.

00:16:611 (26,27,28) - ^ Change 00:16:837 (27) to d and 00:17:063 (28) to K?

00:23:153 (49,50) - Ctrl + G would match the pitch better and match the instrument at 00:23:378 with a k if you do so. Same with 01:28:116 (257,258) and 03:27:438 (655,656).

00:31:499 - I mentioned this in the Futsuu as well, but this section up to 00:36:912 is exactly the same as the rhythm in the Futsuu. The Futsuu might even be harder here due to the hit variations. If this poses an issue, perhaps some collaboration is needed with Nardo to fix this. Same thing for the section at 01:36:461.

00:53:604 (131,132,133) - k d k would match the pitch of the vocals better, although a bit repetitive. Same at 00:59:920 (153,154,155), and 01:00:822 (156,157,158). Especially the former, to keep consistency with 00:52:702 (128,129,130).

00:55:634 - Add a hit here? This is the only place in the kiai where a hit is not matched to the vocals so I felt a weird gap here.

01:07:589 (182,183,184) - This triplet and the triplet at the 01:08:717 (187,188,189) make the Muzukashii pretty similar to the more difficult difficulties in terms of rhythm. Perhaps delete the middle note of each of these triplets. To compensate for this loss of difficulty, you may want to add a hit at 01:09:619 instead.

01:58:566 (351,352,353) - k d k would match the pitch of the vocals better, like stated in the last kiai. Same with 02:04:882 (376,377,378) and 02:05:784 (379,380,381).

02:00:145 (357,358,359) - This rhythm might make it difficult to rank this. NOT SAYING THAT THIS IS UNRANKABLE, NOR AM I SAYING THAT YOU SHOULD REMOVE THIS. As you probably know, you should mainly have monocolour triplets in Muzukashiis. If you were to use rhythms like ddk, I'd save it for the last kiai. In fact, you have more ddk rhythms in the second kiai than the third, which is bad for the difficulty curve throughout the song. Basically, I'm suggesting that you should at least make the last kiai as hard as the second kiai, either by removing the ddks in the second kiai , or adding more of them in the third kiai.

02:14:130 (413) - Remove this hit for a break. There is not a significant enough sound here either for it to be here in a Muzukashii.

02:17:063 (425) - How about moving this to 02:17:288? I feel like it flows better by matching to the piano rhythm.

02:25:634 - I personally feel that this is too long without a 1/1 break; you don't have a 1/1 break until 02:29:694, and the rhythm is very complex for a Muzukashii here.

02:54:732 - Add a hit here? You had a hit here to match the piano at 02:51:123 (530).

02:58:115 (549,550,551) - Again, k d k would match the pitch of the vocals better. Same at 03:04:431 (574,575,576), 03:11:649 (604,605,606) and 03:12:551 (607,608,609).

03:28:341 (660) - Change to K for emphasis.

03:35:108 (685,686,687) - Same thing as the first suggestion for this difficulty.

03:40:972 - Have a triplet somewhere around here. You had a triplet near the end of each instrumental section.

Lundle's Oni

00:12:326 (16,17) - At the end of every pattern (I split the patterns where there was more than a 1/2 gap) in the first section you end with a k d. It's totally fine, you're matching to the background instrumentals. But perhaps you could change the endings up a bit and Ctrl + G places like 00:12:326 (16,17) to match the instrumental melody's pitch? Same at 00:19:544 (50,51), 01:17:288 (287,288), 01:24:506 (321,322), 03:30:822 (826,827), 03:38:040 (861,862).

00:36:687 - Add a hit here? You had a hit at 00:34:882 (103) to match the vocals. Same at 01:41:649.

00:55:296 - You should add a hit here, or move 00:55:070 (184) here (change it to d, perhaps). I could notice the missed sound listening to this. How you had it in the third kiai was nice. Same thing at 02:00:258 and 02:07:476.

01:28:792 (341) - Either add a finisher here or remove it on 00:23:829 (70) to keep consistency.

01:29:243 - You could add slightly more hits in the quiet section here for a bit of difference from the first quiet section.

02:27:890 (592) - Change to k? The pitch of the previous and next hit is lower than this hit.

03:23:378 (797,798,799) - k d k would match the vocal pitch better.

03:27:438 (807) - This would sound good as a k to match that high sound in the instrumentals. Alternatively, you could change 03:27:890 (809) to k instead, since it has the exact same sound as 01:28:792 (341).

Oni

What are all these bookmarksssssssss

It wouldn't hurt to add 1/6 rhythms in the instrumental sections to match the melody 8-) It'd sound BEAUTIFUL :D https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4290980

00:09:844 (3) - Same suggestion as the first suggestion in the Muzukashii. However, I don't recommend it as much as in the Muzukashii because there's so much more things that are going on in this difficulty.

00:17:063 (37) - ^

00:12:326 (16,17) - Ctrl + G would sound better if you want to match the instrumental pitch. Same at 00:19:544 (50,51), 01:17:288 (311,312), and 01:24:506 (347,348).

00:40:296 - As an Oni, you should probably have a hit here to match the vocals. Same at 01:45:258, but more optional.

00:43:454 (139,140) - Ctrl + G would sound better to match the vocals. Same at 01:48:416 (449,450).

Kiai time was very well made :D

02:07:025 (549,550) - Ctrl + G may sound better to match the k to the vocals on hit 550.

02:50:220 - Add a hit here? You're matching to the vocals in the next section, so as a transition it may be possible to add a hit. Also, the もしも is referring to the next section, and is not part of the previous.

03:18:867 (907,908) - Unless you were matching more to the piano, Ctrl + G would sound much better.

03:27:438 (936,937) - Ctrl + G to match the k on the clapping instrumentals at 03:27:438?

That's all. Love the ending too :D

説明が不十分なところやわからないところがあれば遠慮せずに PM してください。日本語で再び説明しますので  ;)

Good Luck on rank~ (ノ・ω・)ノ☆ Stolen from EdamaMe411 xD p/4705905/
tina71129
Hi~ Mod request.

Muzukashii
00:18:867 (33,34,35,36,37) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4319264
00:18:867 (33,34,35,36,37) - add d?

Lundle's Oni
00:52:927 (174,175) - d K?
01:57:890 (450,451) - ^

Oni
No#

good luck :)
Topic Starter
toara_fict

-[ Dumpling ]- wrote:

work in progress done

also I didn't mod in a while so sorry if I forget how to or the stuff seems irrelevant. also my modding is slow so some stuff here might have already been changed since I started this post lol

m4m :3

[General]

Seems like the romanised title is actually Shiki Toki Uta (with space?) - look here okay.



[Muzukashii]

uncheck widescreen support... lol

02:01:273 (361,362,363,364,365,366) - change both to blue-red-red? keep. follow vocal

[Oni]

01:10:408 (276,277) - delete these both? imo they don't really fit in well and sound a bit awkward to pla:21:348 (328,329,330) - change to another pattern please, the song here is different to 01:22:251 (333,334,335) - this part :3 hmmm.. keep.

good luck.
Thank you :3

Jona wrote:

Hello! Here is my mod (sorry for late >w<)
Also sorry for not modding kantan and futsuu, I suck at modding easier diffs ;w; (I don't see any mistakes on them)

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:59:920 - k have drum sound.
  2. 01:01:048(157,158) - d k keep
  3. 01:48:641 - k dkdk is better.
  4. 03:28:341 - K some as 00:09:844 (3) -
  5. 03:35:333(686,687) - switch to d K (for variation, you have d k d three times in a row here)^
[Oni]
  1. 00:44:807(146,147,148) ddk. Just ideas for better flow (and it sounds better imo) change ddk.
  2. 00:50:784 - Remove? (no sound) vocal.
  3. 03:04:205(828,829,830) - ddk keep/

Hope my mod was useful, good luck on ranking!! :)
Thanks :3

newyams99 wrote:

Hi, from request :D

What a nice song~ Nice difficulties too <3

General

Add "usagiuta" to the tags since it is the romanized version of the source name 兎唄. Also add "amamitou" (or is it "amamidou"?) I can't read the last kanji x.x for甘味党 and add "wataame" for 綿飴. ah okay. added

Mainly, I thought the audio volume was a bit much, specifically the 100% audio volume at the kiai and the high volume at the quiet parts. Perhaps reduce the audio volume by 10 or even 20% universally? 100%.

03:28:341 - This ending would look awesome with a kiai imo (but that's very subjective of me and it's a personal preference =_=). Hmmm... keep =_=)



Muzukashii

00:09:393 (1,2,3) - Using 00:13:002 (13,14,15) as a reference for comparison, the pitch of 00:09:844 (3) is much higher and more emphasized than 00:13:454 (15), So you should at least have 00:09:844 (3) as a K imo. You may also want to change 00:09:619 (2) to d. nope.keep. I use D is better.

00:16:611 (26,27,28) - ^ Change 00:16:837 (27) to d and 00:17:063 (28) to K?^

00:31:499 - I mentioned this in the Futsuu as well, but this section up to 00:36:912 is exactly the same as the rhythm in the Futsuu. The Futsuu might even be harder here due to the hit variations. If this poses an issue, perhaps some collaboration is needed with Nardo to fix this. Same thing for the section at 01:36:461.

00:53:604 (131,132,133) - k d k would match the pitch of the vocals better, although a bit repetitive. Same at 00:59:920 (153,154,155), and 01:00:822 (156,157,158). Especially the former, to keep consistency with 00:52:702 (128,129,130). was changed

00:55:634 - Add a hit here? This is the only place in the kiai where a hit is not matched to the vocals so I felt a weird gap here. no.

01:07:589 (182,183,184) - This triplet and the triplet at the 01:08:717 (187,188,189) make the Muzukashii pretty similar to the more difficult difficulties in terms of rhythm. Perhaps delete the middle note of each of these triplets. To compensate for this loss of difficulty, you may want to add a hit at 01:09:619 instead. keep.

02:00:145 (357,358,359) - This rhythm might make it difficult to rank this. NOT SAYING THAT THIS IS UNRANKABLE, NOR AM I SAYING THAT YOU SHOULD REMOVE THIS. As you probably know, you should mainly have monocolour triplets in Muzukashiis. If you were to use rhythms like ddk, I'd save it for the last kiai. In fact, you have more ddk rhythms in the second kiai than the third, which is bad for the difficulty curve throughout the song. Basically, I'm suggesting that you should at least make the last kiai as hard as the second kiai, either by removing the ddks in the second kiai , or adding more of them in the third kiai. rank. not unrank

02:17:063 (425) - How about moving this to 02:17:288? I feel like it flows better by matching to the piano rhythm.

02:58:115 (549,550,551) - Again, k d k would match the pitch of the vocals better. Same at 03:04:431 (574,575,576), 03:11:649 (604,605,606) and 03:12:551 (607,608,609). again

03:28:341 (660) - Change to K for emphasis. keep

03:35:108 (685,686,687) - Same thing as the first suggestion for this difficulty.^



Oni

What are all these bookmarksssssssss

It wouldn't hurt to add 1/6 rhythms in the instrumental sections to match the melody 8-) It'd sound BEAUTIFUL :D https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4290980 I know 1/6 sounds. However, I don't use 1/6 1/8. this fidd is 'Oni' not 'Inner'

00:09:844 (3) - Same suggestion as the first suggestion in the Muzukashii. However, I don't recommend it as much as in the Muzukashii because there's so much more things that are going on in this difficulty. some Muzu

00:17:063 (37) - ^ ^

00:40:296 - As an Oni, you should probably have a hit here to match the vocals. Same at 01:45:258, but more optional. nope.

Kiai time was very well made :D

02:50:220 - Add a hit here? You're matching to the vocals in the next section, so as a transition it may be possible to add a hit. Also, the もしも is referring to the next section, and is not part of the previous. No

03:18:867 (907,908) - Unless you were matching more to the piano, Ctrl + G would sound much better. no

That's all. Love the ending too :D :D

説明が不十分なところやわからないところがあれば遠慮せずに PM してください。日本語で再び説明しますので  ;) thanks :3

Good Luck on rank~ (ノ・ω・)ノ☆ Stolen from EdamaMe411 xD p/4705905/
Thankssss (ノ・ω・)ノ☆

-Eternal Love- wrote:

Hi~ Mod request.

Muzukashii
00:18:867 (33,34,35,36,37) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4319264
00:18:867 (33,34,35,36,37) - add d? kk


good luck :)
thanks.

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Nardoxyribonucleic

newyams99 wrote:

Hi, from request :D

What a nice song~ Nice difficulties too <3

Nardo's Futsuu

00:23:378 (36) - Although repetitive, it may sound nicer to change this to a k. First, the pitch of the instrumental melody is higher than the previous hit. Second, you can hear a new clap instrument used here (idk what instrument), which is suitable for a k imo. Same at 01:28:341 (181). I see your point, but I would prefer keeping the note as d to mark the end of this louder session and provide variation.

00:31:499 - This section up to 00:36:912 is exactly the same as the rhythm in the Muzukashii. The Futsuu might even be harder here due to the hit variations. If this poses an issue, perhaps some collaboration is needed with Canvas to fix this. Same thing for the section at 01:36:461. The issue is resolved now as Canvas made the part a bit harder.

00:32:175 (50,51) - This pair 1/2 rhythm sounds exactly the same as 00:33:980 (54,55). I'm guessing you changed the colours for variety and to match the extended vocals at 00:32:175. I'd personally still have it as d d mainly for simplicity for the difficult 1.5/1 rhythm and ease of playing. Your choice. Same at 01:37:137 (196,197). Yeah, matching the extended vocal is my rationale.

01:08:491 (135) - Change to k? The pitch of the piano sounds higher than the next and previous hit. Fixed as the pitch is relatively high.

02:23:829 (306,307,308,309) - This is definitely for variety, but it sounds better to be the same as 02:22:025 (301,302,303,304) imo. Well, it matches with the background instrumentals and having a d will be a good contrast to 02:25:183 (310). This is not only for variety but also for the relatively higher pitch at 02:24:732 (309) -

03:12:551 (407,408,409) - It might just be me, but I found this kinda weird how the rhythm was specifically matched to the vocals, in the part that is a contrast to the kiai time. Perhaps remove 03:12:777 (408) for a rhythm similar to 03:15:709 (414,415,416)? It actually serves as a contrast to 03:14:356 (411,412,413) -

03:14:356 (411,412,413) - Same reasoning as above, but instead of removing stuff, how about moving stuff around like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4284707
Just thought that this might be better to have hits at 03:15:258 instead of here for a transition into the next mini-section with the emphasized piano. Also, the vocals are more beautiful at 03:15:258 imo :P Refer to ^

03:27:438 (436) - For the same reasoning as 00:23:378 (36), perhaps change to k? May work on 03:27:890 (438) instead. Hmm, I would like to focus on the drums there.

Good job on this diff :)

Good Luck on rank~ (ノ・ω・)ノ☆ Stolen from EdamaMe411 xD p/4705905/
Thanks for the mod~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/mxCG9.rar
Nofool
hi' requested via pm

Oni could probably be renamed to Inner Oni, even lundle's Oni already provide Inner's level patterns :s Issue is that only one long pattern + the last kiai are way harder than the rest.

[Julie’s Kantan]
HP7, too easy to pass
- delete - 00:49:995 (59,61) - et - 00:52:251 (63) - ? le problème de la diff est le gros manque de break pour l’instant, ça en rajoutera un juste avant le kiai. Un spinner de - 00:51:348 - à - 00:52:702 - serait pas mal aussi. Même chose avant les autres kiais (pas besoins pour le 3ème).
- 01:05:333 (81) - j’sais que c’est pour faire une fin de kiai un peu différente mais bon, j’aurais delete perso, ça fait bizarre d’avoir une note là par rapport aux autres spots identiques du kiai qui en ont pas. Même chose pour les autres kiais (nécessaire pour le deuxième imo, enchainer kdddd et kdd c’un peu lourd j’pense hue).
- 01:41:423 - rajoutes un k ici ou delete celui de - 00:36:461 (39) - ? Pour plus de cohérence (je préfère la deuxième option).
- 02:21:574 - 02:28:796 - pour cette partie réutilise le même rythme qu’à - 02:14:356 - ? Pas trop de sens de suivre les ¾ puis le piano en ½ après.
- 3ème kiai, à ta place je resterais sur des triplets, les quintuplés passent mal imo.
- 03:25:634 - 03:27:438 - spot intéressant pour un spinner.

[Nardo’s Futsuu]
- move - 00:51:799 (93) - to - 00:51:687 - ? Interesting rhythm to follow. Same at - 01:56:649 -.
- 01:34:205 (191) - possibly delete this ? logic with - 00:29:243 -.
- 02:22:702 (303) - , - 02:24:506 (308) - hmm I would remove those 2, previous part sounds much better imo.

[Muzukashii]
- 00:13:905 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - try d_k_d_ _ _ k _ _ _ d_kkk_k_d ? which will be kinda reversed at - 00:21:123 -. Same at the end of the map.
- 00:45:709 (108) - remove ? logic with – 00:38:491 -.
- 01:20:446 (229,230,231) - change to kkk ?
- 01:29:243 - 01:36:461 – make this part less denser, like for - 00:24:281 -. Currently it’s almost as dense as at – 01:43:679 – while the rhythm is really different.
- 01:43:679 - same here tho, why is this part so much more dense than - 00:38:717 - ?... almost as dense as the following kiai, which makes it way less powerful than it could be.
- 01:57:438 (350) - remove ? that’s too much imo, and you did it at - 00:52:476 -.
- 02:48:641 (523,524,525,526) – k k d instead of kk kd ? better stick to the ½ rhythm here.

[Lundle’s Oni]
- 00:24:732 - that breaks doesn’t make sense it you don’t add at least one more on this part. What about removing - 00:27:438 (78,79,81) - and add k at - 00:28:566 - ?
- 01:29:694 - ^.
- 02:15:258 (532) - remove ? Makes it more clear that you follow the piano.

[Oni]
- 00:47:514 (158) - remove ? logic with - 00:40:296 -.
- 01:21:348 (328,329) - remove ? nothing here in the first part of the song, also this way you don’t repeat kkd 2 times in a row.
- 01:25:860 (351,352) - ^.
- 01:29:243 - from here to the second kiai, as pointed in the muzu, those parts should be more similar to - 00:24:281 - to the first kiai.. you are adding to many notes while you don’t really need it.
- 02:16:386 (604) - maybe change this to d ? To not have 3 kkd k d in a row.
- 02:42:326 (733) - this probably doesn’t need a finisher lol.
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good luck'
Nardoxyribonucleic

Nofool wrote:

hi' requested via pm

Oni could probably be renamed to Inner Oni, even lundle's Oni already provide Inner's level patterns :s Issue is that only one long pattern + the last kiai are way harder than the rest.

[Nardo’s Futsuu]
- move - 00:51:799 (93) - to - 00:51:687 - ? Interesting rhythm to follow. Same at - 01:56:649 -. Yes, but it would be too hard combining the previous 1/1+1/2 pattern.
- 01:34:205 (191) - possibly delete this ? logic with - 00:29:243 -. It serves as an addition of notes after the 1st kiai, so I think it would be fine.
- 02:22:702 (303) - , - 02:24:506 (308) - hmm I would remove those 2, previous part sounds much better imo. As the guitar rhythm becomes denser, I prefer using more notes here.
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good luck'
Thanks for the mod~ :)
snowball112
Mod from Canvas' Request

Kantan
- 00:11:649 (3,4,5) I think ddd fits better here, strengh of sound on last note is not enough imo to justify use of k. Plays out well if you use the monopattern here with the contrast of kkd after.
- 00:18:867 (13,14,15) ^

- 00:25:183 (23) d?

- 00:28:341 (27,28) ctrl+g. Music feels stronger on the second note here, not the third imo.

- 00:29:694 (29,30,31) dkk

- 00:34:205 (35) k? Fits better imo. Would also be good if you change 00:35:108 (36,37,38,39,40) to dkdkd.

- 00:39:619 (43,44,45,46) d dkd and 00:42:326 (47) d? k feels too much imo.

- 00:43:228 (48,52) ctrl+g. Sounds better imo.

- 02:22:476 (96,97) dk

- 02:25:183 (100,101,102,103,104,105) d kkk d K? I think this sounds better with the piano.

- 02:31:499 (108,109,110) dkk. Fits better to the instruments imo.

- 02:33:303 (111) d and 02:35:108 (113) k feel nicer to play for me.

Mostly optional stuff, I think the changes fit better to the song overall.

Other diffs look fine imo, good luck on rank!
Topic Starter
toara_fict

Nofool wrote:

hi' requested via pm

Oni could probably be renamed to Inner Oni, even lundle's Oni already provide Inner's level patterns :s Issue is that only one long pattern + the last kiai are way harder than the rest.


[Muzukashii]
- 00:13:905 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - try d_k_d_ _ _ k _ _ _ d_kkk_k_d ? which will be kinda reversed at - 00:21:123 -. Same at the end of the map.
- 00:45:709 (108) - remove ? logic with – 00:38:491 -.
- 01:20:446 (229,230,231) - change to kkk ?
- 01:29:243 - 01:36:461 – make this part less denser, like for - 00:24:281 -. Currently it’s almost as dense as at – 01:43:679 – while the rhythm is really different. some change
- 01:43:679 - same here tho, why is this part so much more dense than - 00:38:717 - ?... almost as dense as the following kiai, which makes it way less powerful than it could be.some change too.
- 01:57:438 (350) - remove ? that’s too much imo, and you did it at - 00:52:476 -.
- 02:48:641 (523,524,525,526) – k k d instead of kk kd ? better stick to the ½ rhythm here.

[Oni]
- 00:47:514 (158) - remove ? logic with - 00:40:296 -.
- 01:21:348 (328,329) - remove ? nothing here in the first part of the song, also this way you don’t repeat kkd 2 times in a row.
- 01:25:860 (351,352) - ^.
- 01:29:243 - from here to the second kiai, as pointed in the muzu, those parts should be more similar to - 00:24:281 - to the first kiai.. you are adding to many notes while you don’t really need it.
- 02:16:386 (604) - maybe change this to d ? To not have 3 kkd k d in a row.
- 02:42:326 (733) - this probably doesn’t need a finisher lol.
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good luck'
Sorry late, all fix :3
Really thanks _(:3JL Update
nyanmi-1828
Hi~ :) From my Queue~

ほかの方のmodと被っていたりしたらすみません。
Inner Oni
01:47:063 - Delete 音がないので消したほうがいいと思います
01:50:672 - ^

他の難易度も見ましたが直すべき点は見つけられませんでした。

とてもいいマップだと思います! :)

Good luck~ :D
Topic Starter
toara_fict

nyanmi-1828 wrote:

Hi~ :) From my Queue~

ほかの方のmodと被っていたりしたらすみません。
Inner Oni
01:47:063 - Delete 音がないので消したほうがいいと思います 前後修正しました :3
01:50:672 - ^ ^

他の難易度も見ましたが直すべき点は見つけられませんでした。

とてもいいマップだと思います! :)

Good luck~ :D
Thanks :3
Julie
Oh gawd, sorry wasn't able to fix thing sooner due to school and made you guys repeat the same thing ;w;!!!

Thanks a lots for all the great mods x3

-Sh1n1-

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Julie's Kantan


  1. 00:31:499 (32,33,34,35) - I think that you are keeping consistency with 00:24:281 (22,23,24,25) - following vocal, right? but 00:34:205 (35) - should be k because have the same sound as 00:32:401 (33) -, vocal here isn't important. I don't hear the same ;w;, it kinda go down for me.
  2. 00:40:972 (45) - should be d 'cause 00:40:972 (45,46) - have the same sound, also consistency with 00:47:739 (55,56,57) - Fixed~ Nice spot :D
  3. 01:05:333 (81) - 02:10:295 (80) - following your previous patterns, you should delete such notes.Oki~
  4. 01:08:491 (86) - why k? there is a piano sound but at 01:08:717 -, is the same sound as 01:07:589 (85) - imo.01:08:491 (86) -There is more chord in the piano then 01:08:717 -. Also if you listen closely, 01:08:491 (86) - piano chord aren't the same as 01:07:589 (85) - , but higher pitch.
  5. 01:11:649 (91) - to make more simple, also to follow only general sounds, it should be k Yeah gotta admit it can be tricky, fixed~
  6. 01:39:167 (35) - should be k, same explanation as the first point. (00:31:499 (32,33,34,35) -) Same reason
  7. 01:41:423 - Did you miss a k here? consistency with 00:35:108 (36,37,38,39,40) - Added
  8. 02:22:927 (97) - sounds better at 02:23:829 - 'cause 02:23:378 - 02:23:829 - 02:24:281 - are more important, furthermore there are some parts when you didn't follow piano, it could count as consistency too lol Yeah they are important, nearly all the piano sound are really clear, but I can't go following all piano though. It will make it too hard for kantan.
  9. 02:37:814 (117,118,119) - two options here, to enphasize 02:39:619 (119) - could be k or change 02:37:814 (117,118,119) - to ddk to difference with 02:40:521 (120) -, now if you don't want to enphasize 02:39:619 (119) - you shouldn't enphasize 02:35:108 (113) -. it's unfair lool Not sure why ddk, um changed the 11 to k. Sorry.
  10. 02:50:446 (130,131,132,133) - in my personal opinion all notes should be k but previously you did 02:49:544 (129) - as k too and feels weird to have the same note with different sounds too close, but to add variety I strongly recommend you to hold Ctrl+G at 02:51:348 (131,132) - Changed this 02:52:251 (130) - into d instead
  11. 02:54:055 (134,135,136) - since the beginning I feel this pattern weird because at 02:54:055 - there is a high vocal pitch, this is more like my style but when I have high sounds I usually add little breaks after such sounds and to enphasize this high sound sometimes I made 1/1 triplet before, so... you should move 02:54:506 (135) - to 02:53:604 - furthermore at 02:54:055 - start an intense part,right? What about adding d at 02:56:311 -? it might sounds nicer following voice, imoFixed
  12. from 02:57:664 - to 03:12:100 - loool I mean that you want to difference with the last 2 kiais but seriously, it's toooooo overmapped xd tbh I like how you want to add variety on this kiai, so, after hear lot of times I think that you can keep 03:02:175 (146,147,148,149,150) - and 03:09:393 (158,159,160,161,162) - because voice is more calm at this 5-plets but at 02:59:468 (142,143,144) - and 03:06:686 (154,155,156) - voice is more intense, so, to enphasize this intense voice you should delete 02:59:017 (141) - and 03:06:235 (152) - and this kiai is perfect now *-*/ Fixed x3
  13. 03:14:356 (165,166) - you were following this kind of piano sound with kLower pitch piano.
  14. 03:17:965 (170) - should be d same as 03:13:905 (164,165,166) - and at 03:19:318 (172) - there is a little cymbal sound, feels better with k imo The piano chord are different in both and changed that 172 to k for the bell sound.
  15. Did you miss a D at 03:42:777 - as higher diffs?Oups I did xD

Drumpling

-[ Dumpling ]- wrote:

[Julie's Kantan]

uncheck widescreen support.... slap Ouch!! *use chopstick to poke back*

00:14:807 (8) - move to 00:15:709 ? I think it makes use of the melody more. also I think 00:16:160 (10) - feels awkward to play by itself. Ohh nice, fixed~
00:15:258 (9) - I think you can change to don since this is actually a similar sound to 00:16:160 (10) - . Hmm, the lower chord is the same but not the higher one, and I'm matching the higher one xD
00:22:025 (18) - should delete, imo it feels a bit like overkill and makes 00:22:476 (18,19,20) - feel bland. Fixed
01:05:333 (81) - can probably be removed, if you're going to have all dons here than just 01:05:784 (82,83,84) - will suffice. Remove from previous mods
01:29:243 (22) - hmm.. this probably doesn't need a finisher, since the intensity of this sound is the same as the others that follow this part. Yeah, totally agree, I don't know why I
02:01:724 (68) - change colour? it's different to 01:58:115 (63) -Hmm, different from 63? I'm kinda keeping them all consistent, like this one 00:56:762 (68,69) - .
02:08:942 (78) - same The vocal is kinda different, how to say xD. Um above part, had the same amount of word, while here is different (omg I forgot the word in english ;w;)
02:09:844 (79,80,81,82,83) - same as before the same part. ^
02:59:017 (141) - delete? I think this combo is too long. Deleted from previous mods
03:02:626 (146) - imo same I'll keep this for the difficulty to of last kiai to be a bit harder
03:06:235 (151) - ^ Deleted from previous mods
03:09:844 (156) - ^ I'll keep this for the difficulty to of last kiai to be a bit harder
03:42:777 - add a note here, every other diff has one here.Haha forgot, added from previous mods

hmm.. it's alright but I think you need more breaks in this diff. I think you mapped too much of the melody .___.

newyams99

newyams99 wrote:

Julie's Kantan

Change HP to 7 for a better HP curve. Fixed

00:27:890 (26,27,28,29,30,31) - Despite this being one of the quieter sections in the song, it's pretty close in difficulty to the kiai time imo. There are 2 three-hit 1/1 rhythms in a row here and it may be difficult (and aren't featured in the kiai). However, the biggest problem is that it's exactly the same rhythm - not colour pattern - as the Futsuu for more than 8 beats (that's just a rule I made myself), which isn't good in terms of the difficulty curve with the Futsuu. Maybe you could change 00:28:341 (27) to k and move it to 00:26:536 for a bit of a recovery time till the next 1/1 rhythm? You may want to change 00:26:085 (24) to k as well if you accept this suggestion. Same thing at 01:32:852 (26,27,28,29,30,31).
Also, adding a 4/1 gap somewhere around this area may not be a bad idea (00:37:814 (41) is a possibility). Fixed, also I nerfed a bit those 2 calm part, just notice 5 notes at the same times might really be too hard and unfitting for the mood.

00:43:228 (48,49,50,51,52) - Similar to the above, this section is close in difficulty to the kiai. Perhaps remove either 00:43:679 (49) or 00:44:581 (51)? Same at 01:48:191 (47,48,49,50,51). Fixed~ :D

00:47:739 (55,56,57) - The pitch sounds pretty similar to 00:40:521 (44,45,46), perhaps change to match? Same at 01:52:701 (54,55,56). I think I fixed it with the previous mods~

00:52:251 (63) - I'd remove this hit. First, as a personal preference, especially in the easier difficulties, I like it if there was not a hit in the middle of a buildup or transition into the chorus. I like to listen to the music here. But more importantly, I think that removing this hit would make a good 4/1 break since you have none. Although this is a slow BPM song, your mapping is very continuous (kinda boring) with a minimum of 2/1 snapping between each hit. Which isn't surprising because the song's vocals is on almost every 2/1 beat, but this is one of your opportunities to break that continuous feeling, since there are no vocals. Idk, this might just be me.
Same at 01:57:213 (62). Nah, agree, fixed xD. Also you teach me something new, I'll keep that in mind :D!

01:06:687 (83) - Change to k? The pitch is higher than the previous hit in the vocals, and it'll give a good contrast with the next hit. Same at 02:11:649 (83). Same at 03:11:198 (162). All fixed~

01:40:070 (36,37,38,39) - This is easier than the section previous to this which sounded similar. 01:40:070 (36,37,38,39) is harder than 00:35:108 (36,37,38,39,40) and should be changed to at least match the rhythm. It is also possible to switch these two rhythms's places to make a nice increasing difficulty curve through the song. Fixed~

02:12:551 (84,85,86) - This is another opportunity to create a 4/1 break rather than have a 1/1 rhythm. Not only for the same reasoning as
00:52:251 (63), but you have a 1.5/1 rhythm coming up at 02:14:356 (87,88) so you should provide beginners with a strong sense of preparation rather than a rushed one with the 1/1 rhythm you have right now. Remove 02:13:002 (85,86)?Fixed from previous mod~

02:26:536 (102) - You can change this to k to show the pitch change from the previous hit if you want to. This is kinda tricky, since I want the stream to be consistent sound, but I get your point, I'm going to consider this xD.

02:33:303 (111) - I've noticed you've been making your 1/1 patterns and some 2/1 patterns so that they form a nice contrast with a hit of high emphasis, and you've done very well on that. To keep consistency with that style maybe change this hit to d? Fixed

02:40:521 (120) - ^ Fixed

02:51:348 (131) - I'd personally delete this hit Deleted

02:55:860 (137) - Change to d? It'll contrast with the next hit and match the pitch better.Fixed, better with the next note~

03:34:205 - You could add a k for a difficulty increase from the start. Fixed

03:42:777 - I feel like you need a hit here. Perhaps a D. Yeah fixed from previous mod, I had no idea how come there was no note there xD

NoFool

Nofool wrote:

[Julie’s Kantan]
HP7, too easy to pass Fixed from newyams99 mods~
- delete - 00:49:995 (59,61) - et - 00:52:251 (63) - ? le problème de la diff est le gros manque de break pour l’instant, ça en rajoutera un juste avant le kiai. Un spinner de - 00:51:348 - à - 00:52:702 - serait pas mal aussi. Même chose avant les autres kiais (pas besoins pour le 3ème). J'ai deleter le 59, pis fixed des affaire qui provient des mods precedent. Je ne crois pas je vais add un spinner, j'aime mieux donner un bon break pour cette partie ^^
- 01:05:333 (81) - j’sais que c’est pour faire une fin de kiai un peu différente mais bon, j’aurais delete perso, ça fait bizarre d’avoir une note là par rapport aux autres spots identiques du kiai qui en ont pas. Même chose pour les autres kiais (nécessaire pour le deuxième imo, enchainer kdddd et kdd c’un peu lourd j’pense hue). Yep, deleted par les mod precedent~
- 01:41:423 - rajoutes un k ici ou delete celui de - 00:36:461 (39) - ? Pour plus de cohérence (je préfère la deuxième option). Hmm, j'ai deleter celui la 00:37:814 (38) - a la place, pour pas que les beginner perd le rhythm dans le vocal.
- 02:21:574 - 02:28:796 - pour cette partie réutilise le même rythme qu’à - 02:14:356 - ? Pas trop de sens de suivre les ¾ puis le piano en ½ après. Bon, j'avoue que ses notes 02:15:032 (83,85) - vont causer du trouble pour les nouveau joueurs, j'ai deleter pour l'instant.
- 3ème kiai, à ta place je resterais sur des triplets, les quintuplés passent mal imo. Je l'ai nerf a l'aide des mods precedent.
- 03:25:634 - 03:27:438 - spot intéressant pour un spinner. J'ai mis un 1/4 break a la place, j'espère ca fait l'aiffare ^^.

snowball

snowball112 wrote:

[box=Kantan]- 00:11:649 (3,4,5) I think ddd fits better here, strengh of sound on last note is not enough imo to justify use of k. Plays out well if you use the monopattern here with the contrast of kkd after. Fixed from previous mod^^
- 00:18:867 (13,14,15) ^ ^

- 00:25:183 (23) d? The vocal isn't the same as the previous notes, is higher pitch and I also kept them consistent.

- 00:28:341 (27,28) ctrl+g. Music feels stronger on the second note here, not the third imo. Fitting the vocal, I think I kinda understand your poiunt, since the piano is less audible here, but is still the same amount of chord xD.

- 00:29:694 (29,30,31) dkk Deleted the triplet from previous mod ^^

- 00:34:205 (35) k? Fits better imo. Would also be good if you change 00:35:108 (36,37,38,39,40) to dkdkd. I fixed that 5 ntoes from the pevious mods x3

- 00:39:619 (43,44,45,46) d dkd and 00:42:326 (47) d? k feels too much imo. ^

- 00:43:228 (48,52) ctrl+g. Sounds better imo. I think I fixed some stuff from the previous mods, so there isn't any 5 notes anymore xD

- 02:22:476 (96,97) dk Hmm, I kinda hear the piano in a different way.

- 02:25:183 (100,101,102,103,104,105) d kkk d K? I think this sounds better with the piano. The piano is higher pitch on the last notes. But I think I get your point. The piano stream is consistent, so I removed that triplet, hope it play better~

- 02:31:499 (108,109,110) dkk. Fits better to the instruments imo. Matching the real piano pitch.

- 02:33:303 (111) d and 02:35:108 (113) k feel nicer to play for me. Fixed from previous mods~

Mostly optional stuff, I think the changes fit better to the song overall.

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By the way toara-san, I kept on deleting the whole folder and re-download to make sure, but I still see this :

http://puu.sh/ouJnv/f98bd68df7.png

I wonder if anyone have the same problem, if other have this problem too, try deleting the difficulty and redo it so it so it change the creator name in the file OR (the easy way) try edit the name of the file. (I usually prefer doing it the hard way, just in case nothing go wrong xD, since all these file are generated by osu itself).
Topic Starter
toara_fict

Julie wrote:

By the way toara-san, I kept on deleting the whole folder and re-download to make sure, but I still see this :

http://puu.sh/ouJnv/f98bd68df7.png

I wonder if anyone have the same problem, if other have this problem too, try deleting the difficulty and redo it so it so it change the creator name in the file OR (the easy way) try edit the name of the file. (I usually prefer doing it the hard way, just in case nothing go wrong xD, since all these file are generated by osu itself).
wawawa I didn't notice _(:3JL

Thanks Julie-san :3

Fixed & Update :3 ~
Lundlerol

Jona wrote:

Hello! Here is my mod (sorry for late >w<)
Also sorry for not modding kantan and futsuu, I suck at modding easier diffs ;w; (I don't see any mistakes on them)

[Lundle's Oni]
  1. 00:59:017 - k d k?
  2. 02:15:258 - k

Hope my mod was useful, good luck on ranking!! :)
sry no,change.
thx mod.
Lundlerol

newyams99 wrote:

Hi, from request :D

What a nice song~ Nice difficulties too <3


Lundle's Oni

00:12:326 (16,17) - At the end of every pattern (I split the patterns where there was more than a 1/2 gap) in the first section you end with a k d. It's totally fine, you're matching to the background instrumentals. But perhaps you could change the endings up a bit and Ctrl + G places like 00:12:326 (16,17) to match the instrumental melody's pitch? Same at 00:19:544 (50,51), 01:17:288 (287,288), 01:24:506 (321,322), 03:30:822 (826,827), 03:38:040 (861,862).

00:36:687 - Add a hit here? You had a hit at 00:34:882 (103) to match the vocals. Same at 01:41:649.

00:55:296 - You should add a hit here, or move 00:55:070 (184) here (change it to d, perhaps). I could notice the missed sound listening to this. How you had it in the third kiai was nice. Same thing at 02:00:258 and 02:07:476.

01:28:792 (341) - Either add a finisher here or remove it on 00:23:829 (70) to keep consistency. done.

01:29:243 - You could add slightly more hits in the quiet section here for a bit of difference from the first quiet section.

02:27:890 (592) - Change to k? The pitch of the previous and next hit is lower than this hit. done

03:23:378 (797,798,799) - k d k would match the vocal pitch better.

03:27:438 (807) - This would sound good as a k to match that high sound in the instrumentals. Alternatively, you could change 03:27:890 (809) to k instead, since it has the exact same sound as 01:28:792 (341).

That's all. Love the ending too :D

説明が不十分なところやわからないところがあれば遠慮せずに PM してください。日本語で再び説明しますので  ;)

Good Luck on rank~ (ノ・ω・)ノ☆ Stolen from EdamaMe411 xD p/4705905/
thx,mod.
Lundlerol

-Eternal Love- wrote:

Hi~ Mod request.


Lundle's Oni
00:52:927 (174,175) - d K?
01:57:890 (450,451) - ^


good luck :)
sry,no change
thx mod.
Lundlerol

Nofool wrote:

hi' requested via pm

Oni could probably be renamed to Inner Oni, even lundle's Oni already provide Inner's level patterns :s Issue is that only one long pattern + the last kiai are way harder than the rest.

[Lundle’s Oni]
- 00:24:732 - that breaks doesn’t make sense it you don’t add at least one more on this part. What about removing - 00:27:438 (78,79,81) - and add k at - 00:28:566 - ? done.
- 01:29:694 - ^.
- 02:15:258 (532) - remove ? Makes it more clear that you follow the piano.
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

good luck'
thx mod
Lundlerol
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256,192,202927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,203378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,206987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,160,211499,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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224,160,211950,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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224,160,212401,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,212626,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,160,212852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,213078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,213190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,213303,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,160,213529,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,160,213754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,213980,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,214093,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,214205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,160,214431,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,160,214657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,160,215333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,160,215559,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,160,215784,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,160,215897,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,160,216010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,216235,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,128,216461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,216799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,216912,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,160,217138,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,160,217363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,217589,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,160,217702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,217814,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,160,218040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,160,218266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,160,218604,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,160,218717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,160,218942,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,160,219168,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,160,219506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,160,219619,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,160,219844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,160,220070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,160,220183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,160,220296,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,160,220408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,160,220521,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,160,220747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,160,220972,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,221198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,192,221423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,221649,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,221875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,222326,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,222777,1,4,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
toara_fict
k all update
kouzuki_karen
romanised artist rename 'Kurousagi ru' --> 'Kurousagi Uru' ?

w


nvm, but on website it appears wrong :)

Topic Starter
toara_fict

-[ Dumpling ]- wrote:

romanised artist rename 'Kurousagi ru' --> 'Kurousagi Uru' ?

w


nvm, but on website it appears wrong :)

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Labyr
早くrankさせろ ☆
Topic Starter
toara_fict

Labyr wrote:

早くrankさせろ ☆
BNどころかmodderすら集まらん ウンチ
5urface
M4M for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/433022

General

Do you think it would be possible to find a background image with 1366x768 resolution? (Not a requirement as the current resolution is rankable, just nice to have the maximum allowed resolution for optimal quality)
Pretty good mapset already :3

Kantan

No issues to be found (by me at least)

Futsuu

As expected of Nardo I found nothing to complain about ^^

Muzukashii

Looks fine :3
I could start nitpicking about some don vs kat choices but that mostly comes down to mapping style and I don't want to butcher yours so this diff is fine as is

Oni

00:54:055 (176,177,178) - I would move this triplet up 1/2 beat and change the dons and kats around a little:
00:55:070 (182) - Move this one up to 00:54:844 - if you applied the previous change
00:56:311 (187,188) - Ctrl + G
00:57:213 (190,191) - ^
The reason I'm moving all those triplets is for consistency and playability
01:01:048 (207,208,209,210) - same as 00:54:055
01:02:288 (214) - same as 00:55:070
01:26:649 (329) - move to 01:26:875
01:59:130 (454) - move to 01:59:356
02:00:032 (459) - move to 02:00:258
02:01:273 (464,465) - Ctrl + G
02:02:175 (467,468) - ^
02:06:348 (487) - same as above
02:07:251 (492) - ^
02:58:679 (698) - same
03:05:897 (738) - ^


Inner Oni

01:07:589 (262,263) - Ctrl + G?
01:09:393 (271) - k
01:13:905 (288) - k
01:17:288 (309,310) - Ctrl + G
01:24:506 (344,345) - ^
I'd map this vocal section a little bit differently:
  • 01:30:596 (371,372,373,374,375,376,377) - dkkdkdk (1/2 notes)
    01:32:400 (378,379,380,381,382,383,384) -ddkdkdk (1/2 notes)
02:35:559 (709) - d
02:38:040 (718,719) - Ctrl + G
02:51:348 (749) - d
03:18:867 (896,897) - Ctrl + G


The mapset is very solid already, with the issues in the higher difficulties ironed out it should be very close to ranking.
Good luck =)
Lundlerol

5urface wrote:

M4M for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/433022

General

Do you think it would be possible to find a background image with 1366x768 resolution? (Not a requirement as the current resolution is rankable, just nice to have the maximum allowed resolution for optimal quality)
Pretty good mapset already :3

Oni

00:54:055 (176,177,178) - I would move this triplet up 1/2 beat and change the dons and kats around a little:
00:55:070 (182) - Move this one up to 00:54:844 - if you applied the previous change
00:56:311 (187,188) - Ctrl + G
00:57:213 (190,191) - ^
The reason I'm moving all those triplets is for consistency and playability
01:01:048 (207,208,209,210) - same as 00:54:055
01:02:288 (214) - same as 00:55:070
01:26:649 (329) - move to 01:26:875
01:59:130 (454) - move to 01:59:356
02:00:032 (459) - move to 02:00:258
02:01:273 (464,465) - Ctrl + G
02:02:175 (467,468) - ^
02:06:348 (487) - same as above
02:07:251 (492) - ^
02:58:679 (698) - same
03:05:897 (738) - ^
sry, no change. i followed long tone vocal

The mapset is very solid already, with the issues in the higher difficulties ironed out it should be very close to ranking.
Good luck =)
thx mod..
crim
Topic Starter
toara_fict

5urface wrote:

M4M for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/433022

General

Do you think it would be possible to find a background image with 1366x768 resolution? (Not a requirement as the current resolution is rankable, just nice to have the maximum allowed resolution for optimal quality)
Pretty good mapset already :3

Muzukashii

Looks fine :3
I could start nitpicking about some don vs kat choices but that mostly comes down to mapping style and I don't want to butcher yours so this diff is fine as is



Inner Oni

01:07:589 (262,263) - Ctrl + G? nope.
01:09:393 (271) - k a little change.
01:13:905 (288) - k a little change.
01:17:288 (309,310) - Ctrl + G Hmmm.. keep ><
01:24:506 (344,345) - ^ ^
I'd map this vocal section a little bit differently:
  • 01:30:596 (371,372,373,374,375,376,377) - dkkdkdk (1/2 notes) quiet part, no change
    01:32:400 (378,379,380,381,382,383,384) -ddkdkdk (1/2 notes) ^
02:35:559 (709) - d follow piano
02:38:040 (718,719) - Ctrl + G follow piano
02:51:348 (749) - d follow piano
03:18:867 (896,897) - Ctrl + G 03:19:318 (897) - have a high pitch sounds


The mapset is very solid already, with the issues in the higher difficulties ironed out it should be very close to ranking.
Good luck =)

thanks. update ~
kouzuki_karen
loved pls
Topic Starter
toara_fict

-[ Dumpling ]- wrote:

loved pls
w
pisu

newyams99 wrote:

Hi, from request :D

What a nice song~ Nice difficulties too <3

General

Add "usagiuta" to the tags since it is the romanized version of the source name 兎唄. Also add "amamitou" (or is it "amamidou"?) I can't read the last kanji x.x for甘味党 and add "wataame" for 綿飴.

Mainly, I thought the audio volume was a bit much, specifically the 100% audio volume at the kiai and the high volume at the quiet parts. Perhaps reduce the audio volume by 10 or even 20% universally?

03:28:341 - This ending would look awesome with a kiai imo (but that's very subjective of me and it's a personal preference =_=).

Julie's Kantan

Change HP to 7 for a better HP curve.

00:27:890 (26,27,28,29,30,31) - Despite this being one of the quieter sections in the song, it's pretty close in difficulty to the kiai time imo. There are 2 three-hit 1/1 rhythms in a row here and it may be difficult (and aren't featured in the kiai). However, the biggest problem is that it's exactly the same rhythm - not colour pattern - as the Futsuu for more than 8 beats (that's just a rule I made myself), which isn't good in terms of the difficulty curve with the Futsuu. Maybe you could change 00:28:341 (27) to k and move it to 00:26:536 for a bit of a recovery time till the next 1/1 rhythm? You may want to change 00:26:085 (24) to k as well if you accept this suggestion. Same thing at 01:32:852 (26,27,28,29,30,31).
Also, adding a 4/1 gap somewhere around this area may not be a bad idea (00:37:814 (41) is a possibility).

00:43:228 (48,49,50,51,52) - Similar to the above, this section is close in difficulty to the kiai. Perhaps remove either 00:43:679 (49) or 00:44:581 (51)? Same at 01:48:191 (47,48,49,50,51).

00:47:739 (55,56,57) - The pitch sounds pretty similar to 00:40:521 (44,45,46), perhaps change to match? Same at 01:52:701 (54,55,56).

00:52:251 (63) - I'd remove this hit. First, as a personal preference, especially in the easier difficulties, I like it if there was not a hit in the middle of a buildup or transition into the chorus. I like to listen to the music here. But more importantly, I think that removing this hit would make a good 4/1 break since you have none. Although this is a slow BPM song, your mapping is very continuous (kinda boring) with a minimum of 2/1 snapping between each hit. Which isn't surprising because the song's vocals is on almost every 2/1 beat, but this is one of your opportunities to break that continuous feeling, since there are no vocals. Idk, this might just be me.
Same at 01:57:213 (62).

01:06:687 (83) - Change to k? The pitch is higher than the previous hit in the vocals, and it'll give a good contrast with the next hit. Same at 02:11:649 (83). Same at 03:11:198 (162).

01:40:070 (36,37,38,39) - This is easier than the section previous to this which sounded similar. 01:40:070 (36,37,38,39) is harder than 00:35:108 (36,37,38,39,40) and should be changed to at least match the rhythm. It is also possible to switch these two rhythms's places to make a nice increasing difficulty curve through the song.

02:12:551 (84,85,86) - This is another opportunity to create a 4/1 break rather than have a 1/1 rhythm. Not only for the same reasoning as
00:52:251 (63), but you have a 1.5/1 rhythm coming up at 02:14:356 (87,88) so you should provide beginners with a strong sense of preparation rather than a rushed one with the 1/1 rhythm you have right now. Remove 02:13:002 (85,86)?

02:26:536 (102) - You can change this to k to show the pitch change from the previous hit if you want to.

02:33:303 (111) - I've noticed you've been making your 1/1 patterns and some 2/1 patterns so that they form a nice contrast with a hit of high emphasis, and you've done very well on that. To keep consistency with that style maybe change this hit to d?

02:40:521 (120) - ^

02:51:348 (131) - I'd personally delete this hit

02:55:860 (137) - Change to d? It'll contrast with the next hit and match the pitch better.

03:34:205 - You could add a k for a difficulty increase from the start.

03:42:777 - I feel like you need a hit here. Perhaps a D.

Nardo's Futsuu

00:23:378 (36) - Although repetitive, it may sound nicer to change this to a k. First, the pitch of the instrumental melody is higher than the previous hit. Second, you can hear a new clap instrument used here (idk what instrument), which is suitable for a k imo. Same at 01:28:341 (181).

00:31:499 - This section up to 00:36:912 is exactly the same as the rhythm in the Muzukashii. The Futsuu might even be harder here due to the hit variations. If this poses an issue, perhaps some collaboration is needed with Canvas to fix this. Same thing for the section at 01:36:461.

00:32:175 (50,51) - This pair 1/2 rhythm sounds exactly the same as 00:33:980 (54,55). I'm guessing you changed the colours for variety and to match the extended vocals at 00:32:175. I'd personally still have it as d d mainly for simplicity for the difficult 1.5/1 rhythm and ease of playing. Your choice. Same at 01:37:137 (196,197).

01:08:491 (135) - Change to k? The pitch of the piano sounds higher than the next and previous hit.

02:23:829 (306,307,308,309) - This is definitely for variety, but it sounds better to be the same as 02:22:025 (301,302,303,304) imo. Well, it matches with the background instrumentals and having a d will be a good contrast to 02:25:183 (310).

03:12:551 (407,408,409) - It might just be me, but I found this kinda weird how the rhythm was specifically matched to the vocals, in the part that is a contrast to the kiai time. Perhaps remove 03:12:777 (408) for a rhythm similar to 03:15:709 (414,415,416)?

03:14:356 (411,412,413) - Same reasoning as above, but instead of removing stuff, how about moving stuff around like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4284707
Just thought that this might be better to have hits at 03:15:258 instead of here for a transition into the next mini-section with the emphasized piano. Also, the vocals are more beautiful at 03:15:258 imo :P

03:27:438 (436) - For the same reasoning as 00:23:378 (36), perhaps change to k? May work on 03:27:890 (438) instead.

Good job on this diff :)

Muzukashii

00:09:393 (1,2,3) - Using 00:13:002 (13,14,15) as a reference for comparison, the pitch of 00:09:844 (3) is much higher and more emphasized than 00:13:454 (15), So you should at least have 00:09:844 (3) as a K imo. You may also want to change 00:09:619 (2) to d.

00:16:611 (26,27,28) - ^ Change 00:16:837 (27) to d and 00:17:063 (28) to K?

00:23:153 (49,50) - Ctrl + G would match the pitch better and match the instrument at 00:23:378 with a k if you do so. Same with 01:28:116 (257,258) and 03:27:438 (655,656).

00:31:499 - I mentioned this in the Futsuu as well, but this section up to 00:36:912 is exactly the same as the rhythm in the Futsuu. The Futsuu might even be harder here due to the hit variations. If this poses an issue, perhaps some collaboration is needed with Nardo to fix this. Same thing for the section at 01:36:461.

00:53:604 (131,132,133) - k d k would match the pitch of the vocals better, although a bit repetitive. Same at 00:59:920 (153,154,155), and 01:00:822 (156,157,158). Especially the former, to keep consistency with 00:52:702 (128,129,130).

00:55:634 - Add a hit here? This is the only place in the kiai where a hit is not matched to the vocals so I felt a weird gap here.

01:07:589 (182,183,184) - This triplet and the triplet at the 01:08:717 (187,188,189) make the Muzukashii pretty similar to the more difficult difficulties in terms of rhythm. Perhaps delete the middle note of each of these triplets. To compensate for this loss of difficulty, you may want to add a hit at 01:09:619 instead.

01:58:566 (351,352,353) - k d k would match the pitch of the vocals better, like stated in the last kiai. Same with 02:04:882 (376,377,378) and 02:05:784 (379,380,381).

02:00:145 (357,358,359) - This rhythm might make it difficult to rank this. NOT SAYING THAT THIS IS UNRANKABLE, NOR AM I SAYING THAT YOU SHOULD REMOVE THIS. As you probably know, you should mainly have monocolour triplets in Muzukashiis. If you were to use rhythms like ddk, I'd save it for the last kiai. In fact, you have more ddk rhythms in the second kiai than the third, which is bad for the difficulty curve throughout the song. Basically, I'm suggesting that you should at least make the last kiai as hard as the second kiai, either by removing the ddks in the second kiai , or adding more of them in the third kiai.

02:14:130 (413) - Remove this hit for a break. There is not a significant enough sound here either for it to be here in a Muzukashii.

02:17:063 (425) - How about moving this to 02:17:288? I feel like it flows better by matching to the piano rhythm.

02:25:634 - I personally feel that this is too long without a 1/1 break; you don't have a 1/1 break until 02:29:694, and the rhythm is very complex for a Muzukashii here.

02:54:732 - Add a hit here? You had a hit here to match the piano at 02:51:123 (530).

02:58:115 (549,550,551) - Again, k d k would match the pitch of the vocals better. Same at 03:04:431 (574,575,576), 03:11:649 (604,605,606) and 03:12:551 (607,608,609).

03:28:341 (660) - Change to K for emphasis.

03:35:108 (685,686,687) - Same thing as the first suggestion for this difficulty.

03:40:972 - Have a triplet somewhere around here. You had a triplet near the end of each instrumental section.

Lundle's Oni

00:12:326 (16,17) - At the end of every pattern (I split the patterns where there was more than a 1/2 gap) in the first section you end with a k d. It's totally fine, you're matching to the background instrumentals. But perhaps you could change the endings up a bit and Ctrl + G places like 00:12:326 (16,17) to match the instrumental melody's pitch? Same at 00:19:544 (50,51), 01:17:288 (287,288), 01:24:506 (321,322), 03:30:822 (826,827), 03:38:040 (861,862).

00:36:687 - Add a hit here? You had a hit at 00:34:882 (103) to match the vocals. Same at 01:41:649.

00:55:296 - You should add a hit here, or move 00:55:070 (184) here (change it to d, perhaps). I could notice the missed sound listening to this. How you had it in the third kiai was nice. Same thing at 02:00:258 and 02:07:476.

01:28:792 (341) - Either add a finisher here or remove it on 00:23:829 (70) to keep consistency.

01:29:243 - You could add slightly more hits in the quiet section here for a bit of difference from the first quiet section.

02:27:890 (592) - Change to k? The pitch of the previous and next hit is lower than this hit.

03:23:378 (797,798,799) - k d k would match the vocal pitch better.

03:27:438 (807) - This would sound good as a k to match that high sound in the instrumentals. Alternatively, you could change 03:27:890 (809) to k instead, since it has the exact same sound as 01:28:792 (341).

Oni

What are all these bookmarksssssssss

It wouldn't hurt to add 1/6 rhythms in the instrumental sections to match the melody 8-) It'd sound BEAUTIFUL :D https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4290980

00:09:844 (3) - Same suggestion as the first suggestion in the Muzukashii. However, I don't recommend it as much as in the Muzukashii because there's so much more things that are going on in this difficulty.

00:17:063 (37) - ^

00:12:326 (16,17) - Ctrl + G would sound better if you want to match the instrumental pitch. Same at 00:19:544 (50,51), 01:17:288 (311,312), and 01:24:506 (347,348).

00:40:296 - As an Oni, you should probably have a hit here to match the vocals. Same at 01:45:258, but more optional.

00:43:454 (139,140) - Ctrl + G would sound better to match the vocals. Same at 01:48:416 (449,450).

Kiai time was very well made :D

02:07:025 (549,550) - Ctrl + G may sound better to match the k to the vocals on hit 550.

02:50:220 - Add a hit here? You're matching to the vocals in the next section, so as a transition it may be possible to add a hit. Also, the もしも is referring to the next section, and is not part of the previous.

03:18:867 (907,908) - Unless you were matching more to the piano, Ctrl + G would sound much better.

03:27:438 (936,937) - Ctrl + G to match the k on the clapping instrumentals at 03:27:438?

That's all. Love the ending too :D

説明が不十分なところやわからないところがあれば遠慮せずに PM してください。日本語で再び説明しますので  ;)

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