1. Extra (5,85 stars, 635 notes)
2. Fall's Insane (4,6 stars, 443 notes)
3. Mimari's Hard (3,31 stars, 406 notes)
4. Will's Normal (2,33 stars, 314 notes)
5. Zer0's Insane (4,69 stars, 498 notes)

Shiguri wrote:

rank it thx...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................<3

Thank you!! oooooo

• [Extra]

1. 00:33:724 (3) - why not try doing NCs like this to give emphasis to the instrumentals? like NC on 00:34:241 (5,2,4,3) -
2. 00:43:552 (3,4,5,6) - imo the spacing here shouldnt got decreased
3. 00:44:241 - kiai part~
4. 00:44:414 - the synth sound shouldnt be expressed by sliderend, the synth sound is an important sound of the kiai part, consult 00:45:104 (4,5,6) - or 00:46:483 (4,5,6) -
5. 00:45:793 - same above, and 00:47:172 - 00:48:552 - 00:49:931 - 00:51:310 - 00:52:690 - etc...
6. 01:05:621 (1,1) - if you are doing NC on these to emphasis the instrument then you should also NC on 01:06:310 (3) -
7. 01:05:966 (1,2) - the spacing here should be the same as 01:05:621 (1,2) - , the music doesnt sound like the spacing here should be decreased
8. 01:17:000 (4,5,1) - personally i dont like linear flow, is hard for player to play ;w;
9. 02:01:483 - same thing what ive mentioned in 00:33:724 (3) -
10. 02:12:517 - kiai~
11. 02:56:655 (3) - same 01:05:621 (1,1) - i

• [Insane]

1. 00:44:241 - kiai~
2. 01:15:966 (1,2,3) - why not consist the spacing here, you did it at 01:14:586 (1,2,3) - 01:11:828 (1,2,3) - tho
3. 01:20:104 (1,2,3) - ^
4. 02:12:517 - kiai~
5. 02:22:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part feels inconsistent to me, since you didnt map this before, and came up a little bit sudden

• [Hard]

1. 00:44:241 - kiai~ trying to make my mod looks longer XD
2. 00:52:172 (4,5) - hmm why these are stacked? not like the other part
3. 02:12:517 - kiai
4. 02:42:517 (4,1) - tiny overlap

• [overall]

1. on Extra diff, seems like this map was made by random jumps, so the spacing issue is quite important imo, take a look at 00:45:104 (4,5,6) - and 00:46:483 (4,5,6) - , these 2 parts are the same but the pitch at 00:46:483 (4,5,6) - is lower then 00:45:104 (4,5,6) - , so i would make the spacing 00:46:483 (4,5,6) - smaller then 00:45:104 (4,5,6) - , same as 00:47:862 (4,5,6) - 00:49:241 (4,5,6) - , the spacing 00:49:241 (4,5,6) - should be smaller then 00:47:862 (4,5,6) - since it got a lower pitch, even other parts like 02:12:862 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 02:14:241 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - etc..
2. on insane diff, just one problem that confused me, take a look at 01:24:931 (3,4,5,6) - and 03:15:276 (3,4,5,6) - , the spacing 3>4 at both two part were different, but imo these two part should got the same spacing, since the music sound the same at these two part

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

M4M
well i dont mod Hard diff before, so it might be a little bit useless ;w;, sorry for this

• [Extra]

1. 00:33:724 (3) - why not try doing NCs like this to give emphasis to the instrumentals? like NC on 00:34:241 (5,2,4,3) - Good Idea, but NC's dont really fit with the overall mapset, since i dont have any short combos in it.
2. 00:43:552 (3,4,5,6) - imo the spacing here shouldnt got decreased Its decreased yeah, but they are still kinda far away from each other, and a pattern like that plays really really good.
3. 00:44:241 - kiai part~ Yep, will add later
4. 00:44:414 - the synth sound shouldnt be expressed by sliderend, the synth sound is an important sound of the kiai part, consult 00:45:104 (4,5,6) - or 00:46:483 (4,5,6) - I saw a few mapset who did it the same way I did, i think its alright, and it fits pretty good with the melodics
5. 00:45:793 - same above, and 00:47:172 - 00:48:552 - 00:49:931 - 00:51:310 - 00:52:690 - etc...
6. 01:05:621 (1,1) - if you are doing NC on these to emphasis the instrument then you should also NC on 01:06:310 (3) - yes
7. 01:05:966 (1,2) - the spacing here should be the same as 01:05:621 (1,2) - , the music doesnt sound like the spacing here should be decreased They are still far away from each other, and always long spacing is just weird and uncomfortable to play.
8. 01:17:000 (4,5,1) - personally i dont like linear flow, is hard for player to play ;w; Will consider this
9. 02:01:483 - same thing what ive mentioned in 00:33:724 (3) -
10. 02:12:517 - kiai~
11. 02:56:655 (3) - same 01:05:621 (1,1) - i

• [Insane]

1. 00:44:241 - kiai~
2. 01:15:966 (1,2,3) - why not consist the spacing here, you did it at 01:14:586 (1,2,3) - 01:11:828 (1,2,3) - tho To make the section not so boring and repetive.
3. 01:20:104 (1,2,3) - ^
4. 02:12:517 - kiai~
5. 02:22:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part feels inconsistent to me, since you didnt map this before, and came up a little bit sudden I used the same amount of circles here as well 02:16:655 - so its not inconsistent

• [Hard]

1. 00:44:241 - kiai~ trying to make my mod looks longer XD
2. 00:52:172 (4,5) - hmm why these are stacked? not like the other part Cause I couldnt place them elsewhere and be satisfied with it D:
3. 02:12:517 - kiai
4. 02:42:517 (4,1) - tiny overlap Intentional

• [overall]

1. on Extra diff, seems like this map was made by random jumps, so the spacing issue is quite important imo, take a look at 00:45:104 (4,5,6) - and 00:46:483 (4,5,6) - , these 2 parts are the same but the pitch at 00:46:483 (4,5,6) - is lower then 00:45:104 (4,5,6) - , so i would make the spacing 00:46:483 (4,5,6) - smaller then 00:45:104 (4,5,6) - , same as 00:47:862 (4,5,6) - 00:49:241 (4,5,6) - , the spacing 00:49:241 (4,5,6) - should be smaller then 00:47:862 (4,5,6) - since it got a lower pitch, even other parts like 02:12:862 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 02:14:241 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - etc.. I'll ask some1 about that, lokks fine to me though.
2. on insane diff, just one problem that confused me, take a look at 01:24:931 (3,4,5,6) - and 03:15:276 (3,4,5,6) - , the spacing 3>4 at both two part were different, but imo these two part should got the same spacing, since the music sound the same at these two part Good catch, fixed!

sorry i really cant mod hard diff so i do an overall mod
hope this was helpful lol
and~ this was my map for M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/436611
GL~

• General

1. here is 16:9 ratio bg
2. and here is 192kbps mp3. if you want to using this for your map, offset must be 190 but.... check my mods first you know lol
   
   add 86

   

• Normal

1. 00:58:035 (1,3) - those overlap can make confuse for newest players since lowest diff.
2. 02:14:586 (4,5) - too much for a normal fren, since is the easy diff in the set
3. 02:17:345 (4,5) - same etc probably need to be change i guess.

• Insane

1. 02:22:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i try to make like your past patterns. its fine to make other but current one you know.. so linear for me. here is code
   

   88,310,142172,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   208,257,142345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   104,330,142517,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   163,190,142690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   119,349,142862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   79,184,143035,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   131,366,143207,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   26,243,143379,1,0,0:0:0:0:

   SPOILER

   

• Extra

1. 00:42:862 (1,4,5) - and 00:43:035 (2) - this tail. ->> isnt need to add whistle for there? you added past parts like 00:34:069 (4,1,3) - them. and you ignored for here. i think better to add whistle for there.
2. 01:14:241 (4,5) - ctrl g better to play i guess
3. 01:25:621 (6) - add drum finish for here will help sounds better
4. 02:56:655 (3) - put nc for make same with your past same part >> 01:06:310 (1) -

Euny wrote:

m4m❤! here is my map

• General

1. here is 16:9 ratio bg Thanks
2. and here is 192kbps mp3. if you want to using this for your map, offset must be 190 but.... check my mods first you know lol
   
   add 86

   

• Normal

1. 00:58:035 (1,3) - those overlap can make confuse for newest players since lowest diff. Okay
2. 02:14:586 (4,5) - too much for a normal fren, since is the easy diff in the set I dont think so acutally. I'll ask some guys about that
3. 02:17:345 (4,5) - same etc probably need to be change i guess.

• Insane

1. 02:22:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i try to make like your past patterns. its fine to make other but current one you know.. so linear for me. here is code I'll try to think of something else
   

   88,310,142172,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   208,257,142345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   104,330,142517,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   163,190,142690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   119,349,142862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   79,184,143035,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   131,366,143207,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   26,243,143379,1,0,0:0:0:0:

   SPOILER

   

• Extra

1. 00:42:862 (1,4,5) - and 00:43:035 (2) - this tail. ->> isnt need to add whistle for there? you added past parts like 00:34:069 (4,1,3) - them. and you ignored for here. i think better to add whistle for there. ok
2. 01:14:241 (4,5) - ctrl g better to play i guess Would kill the flow to the next slider though, which is more akward to play
3. 01:25:621 (6) - add drum finish for here will help sounds better meh, i dont really like it
4. 02:56:655 (3) - put nc for make same with your past same part >> 01:06:310 (1) - fixed on my own way~

throws star foyuuuuuuuuuuufren

Yoges wrote:

Ehh just take 2 stars... There's nothing inherently "wrong" with your mapping but you could do with trying to carry the music better in the Insane and Extra diffs as it feels a tad bit bland to play.

100bit wrote:

Hey, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
And yep, I am just learning. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate.

Song and beatmaps

none...

Normal

Fix Distance Spacing mistake in 02:38:035 (2,3) (from AIMod) Fixed
00:33:207 (1,2) - make sliderpoints away from each other I like the way they look
00:45:621 (3) - ^
00:49:759 (1,3) - identical sliders Why? no
00:52:517 (1,4) - ^
00:58:035 (1,3) - don't overlap fixed
01:05:017 (1) - start in 01:05:104 Its fine the way it is
02:01:483 (1) - make sliderpoints away from each other
02:02:517 (2) - ^
02:37:345 (1,4) - ^
02:46:310 (2) - ^
02:42:862 (1,3) - identical sliders
02:55:362 (1) - start in 02:55:448

Advanced

Fix Distance Spacing mistake (from AIMod)
00:37:345 (1,2) - don't stack ok
01:09:069 (1) - make like in %image% I like mine more

01:21:483 (1) - make sliderpoints away from each other
02:05:621 (1,2) - don't stack yep
02:18:379 (2) - make sliderpoints away from each other
02:30:448 (1) - ^
02:59:414 (1) - ^
03:09:069 (1) - ^

I can mod Hard, but i don't have time, sorry for this...
Good luck!
{end of mod}

Feb wrote:

yooooosgeht
extra hab ich am anfang der woche angeschaut, kann also sein, dass manches schon anders ist

von deiner queue
background ist 1 pixel in der weite zu wenig lel - hast gefixed glaub
farbe 3 is bissl dunkel im kontrast zum bg. vllt bissl helleres braun?
01:50:448 - würde den von den hitsounds leiser drehen, im gegensatz zum rest ist das hier schon sehr leise in der musik
da du nicht viel schwierigen rhythmus eingebaut hast sind die meisten diffs i.O. hab mir also gedacht, dass ich mir mal die hitsounds anschaue und das man da noch was drehen kann Ich finds eig. ganz gut so

hitsounds

01:50:448 - durch die section wäre auf allen heads ne whistle nötig, um den nicht vorhanden beat auszugleichen,
warum benutzt du überhaupt keine finishes? finish
mit so einem finish würden stellen wie 00:48:379 (1) - 00:47:000 - 00:49:759 - 00:55:276 - 00:58:035 - davon profitieren. Natürlich nur an Stellen, wo der Downbeat stärker betont wird also woanders, also die, die ich markiert hab.
der rest scheint stabil zu sein. Ich werde mal nach einem guten suchen :p

Extra

ar9 würde hier sogar reichen, ar9.3 ist schon irgendwie recht schnell imo, auch von der art des songs her würde eher 9 passen, vor allem weil so ziemlich alles aus slider besteht. 9.2 wäre aber auch i.O. 9.2 denn

00:55:276 - wäre besser wenn du hier consistency zeigst und nen 1/2 slider hinhaust vorallem spielt sich's bisschen weird, weil sich das ganze spielt wiederholt und sich dadurch auf das hier 00:44:241 - bezieht. Das ist da beabsichtigt so, da das nämlich die 2. Hälfte der Kiai ist, damit es sich nicht andauernd gleich spielt.
01:25:448 (5,6) - ctrl+g würde besser flown für die zwei objects. Stimmt
02:23:552 - dasselbe hier am anfang. Ein Slider würde hier mehr sinnergeben, mit der selben begründung. Seleb Begründung
02:33:207 - Ich denke es wär hier angebrachter wenn du für die combo weniger spacing verwendest, da der Song auch nicht mehr durch 02:34:586 - 02:35:276 - die starken beats gepusht wird. Stimmt
02:45:621 - ^same Jo
02:51:483 (3,4,5) - wäre schöner wenn du die hier ctrl+g dann hättest du 02:51:828 - 02:52:000 - die zwei beats hier clickable und nicht nur durch nen slider covered. Ich lass das mal so wegen der Consisctency her
03:08:379 - note note slider? 03:08:552 - misst halt quer den beat hier. und gewöhnlich coverst du davon alle, also ists bisschen confusing dass dus hier nicht machst. Wenn das mehr erwähnen wird es geändert

dein consistent mapping dkddkdkdd

Insane

00:46:138 - warum skippst du son starken beat mit nem 1/1 slider? happens all the time, aber scheint so als sei es gewollt (warum aber lol) Weil ich da mehr den Melodics folge, mal sehen was die weiteren Modder dazu sagen werden.

???

Hard

01:22:862 (1) - könntest vllt die Form bisschen weiter nach rechts verlagern, dann würde das ende nicht so cringy aussehn. Jo

k works

adv

in der diff hast du ständig starke beats am sliderende, wodurch sich das ganze schlecht spielt, für uns natürlich nicht, aber starke beats klickbar machen halte ich für ne selbstverständlichkeit. In einer Advanced oder Normal ist das keine Selbstverständlichkeit
00:55:966 - 00:58:724 - 01:01:483 - das kommt ja am ende genauso vor.
02:16:138 - in der section eig ständig, also hab ich mal nur 1 davon rausgepickt.
02:27:690 - downbeat am sliderend? 1. du brichst hier halt consistency 2. downbeat am sliderende spielt sich scheiße in lower diffs. 3. bcs stone cold said so

Der rest in der sektion sieht so aus als hätte dich jemand gedrillt, dass fix zu mappen, denn nachdem letzten punkt brichst dadurch, dass du das aufm sliderend stoppen lässt hier 02:29:414 - an plötzlich ganz anders zu mappen Ich wurde nicht gezwungen dazu, hab das geändert damit sich neuere Spieler besser an neuere Spielarten gewöhnen können, wenn du verstehst was ich meine.

normli

ar4 ist schon recht hoch tbh für ne easy und hart zu readen, ist da auch nich wirklich, ar 3 reicht locker imo Ist auch eine Normal und keine Easy

02:34:586 - unused greenline Jo
02:59:414 - unused greenline ^

warum mappst du die 2 "kiai" also 02:12:517 - usw. komplett anders im vergleich zu deiner vorherigen also 00:44:241 - hier? kann ich grad nicht nachvollziehen, aber vllt ists ja was ganz simples lel Weil das dort DnB ist und die Kicks und Snares daduch anders. Hab ich in jeder Diff doch komplett anders gemappt den Part.

nice diff ansonsten

ja dein style ist halt recht straightforward, daher findet man selten mal was schlechtes rip

thxhthxdfksaölf
mein mapchen https://osu.ppy.sh/s/444877
lass maln sternchen da o/

Chujitsu wrote:

Ohaaai! For me Extra was hard to play because it was like " I need to put objects on every tick", maybe just cuz I'm noobie I cant pass this >_< but here what I see on this diff

Extra

00:42:172 (5) - 00:56:310 (6) - move it up pls, its hard to hit o,o Okay
00:46:138 (3) - on this slider you have 2 loud claps and you can hit only one One whistle and one clap. Wouldnt be a problem anyway
01:51:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try to ctrl+ g this part (same to this 01:57:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) ) That would kill the flow
01:58:552 (8,1) - it's 2big jump between this objects, before you made it not that big >,< Fixed
02:14:414 (3,4) - big jump Reduced distance a bit
02:18:035 (1) - it's placed low and hard to hit Moved it up
02:26:138 (8,1) - try to place from 1 in another place so it's going to emphasize music, try same here 02:27:690 (1) - I think its pretty good already.
02:33:552 (3) - try to place here 1\2 slider and here too 02:34:241 (5) - and put here 02:33:897 (4) - and on the next red tick circle That wouldnt fit good with the melodics
03:12:862 (4,5) - try to put them from this place to 03:15:621 (5,6,7) - and its sounds nice >:3 Would be inconsistent with the rythms I did before

Insane

02:39:241 (3) - 02:42:000 (3) - loud clap is on the middle of slider I know, thats why there is a costum slidertick sound. Will change it though if one more suggests it.
02:50:448 (4,5) - ctrl+g o.o No

hard

00:46:655 (4) - hard to click as for me ._. The flow is good though
00:52:172 (4,5) - to high placed ; - ; Okay
02:45:276 (4,5) - try to move it up just a little Okay
02:49:414 (4,5) - again both 2high >.< right under hp its hard to click for peole who just started game Yup

pretty song, I like it ^ ,^ good luck with this map~ I hope it's not last great song which you bring to osu~

Strategas wrote:

[Extra]

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5170962 only hundred I got from this slider 01:59:414 (4) - (it's fine tho just brain lagged or something)

you could raise the od, the rhythm is very simple here and easy to acc 8,5 now

00:42:690 (8,1,2) - this spacing is weird to play, spacing out 1 and 2 more can help, something like 02:10:966 (8,1,2) - is okay, because the distance change wasn't so drastic I reduced the spacing between (8,1) instead so it will feel more natural to play.. another thing that is weird about 00:42:862 (1,2,3) - is that right before this section you had put emphasis on snares by having paterns like 00:33:552 (2,3,4,5) - I wasnt focusing on snares there, more on melodics., but at 00:42:862 (1,2,3) - you do the opposite by putting pressure on the kick drums instead. applies to 02:11:138 (1,2,3) - aswell I dont consider the beast there strong or important enough to put jumps or increase the distance there, its supposed to be a build-up for the main part.

00:49:586 (6) - putting this around 163,251 will have better emphasis on the downbeat But it will play kinda weird, my current placement goes better with the flow of the patterns before.

01:58:379 (7,8,1) - I know you're trying to emphasize but it's still a bit too much for this section imo, would suggest pulling that next patern closer Yes

well I noticed you mapped a lot of stuff according to the intensity of the song instead of seperate beats, but stuff like 02:14:586 (4) - 02:31:138 (5) - still feels unnecesarry large spaced for almost inaudible notes, it should be much more like 02:14:931 (7) - . also if you listen to 02:13:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 02:15:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you can hear the difference in intensity you could utilize with your spacing, instead of sticking to the similar spacing Reduced the spacing a bit in those patterns

it's actually fun to play, but maybe too much 1/2 spam at some places

[Insane]


00:38:724 (1) - I actually disagree with the spinner here, this whole part till 00:44:241 (1) - has interesting rhythm and utilizing that would be really good I actually like the idea of having a build-up only in Extra, if one more will point that out I'll change it.
02:07:000 (1) - ^

03:04:586 (4,5,6,7,1) - uh you didn't even have 5bursts in extra I kinda did, as kicksliders.

seems good

[Hard]

00:55:276 (1,2,3,4) - creating this linear motion isn't very comfortable to play imo http://i.imgur.com/AwaUAF7.png Did something else.

01:22:000 (2,3) - pretty weird positioning fom slider and forces weird flow, you could ctrl h and then put it back, I actually think that the flow is good here
02:43:379 (2,3) - same happens

02:44:241 (1,2,3) - visual spacing? push 3 more away from 1 Yes

02:45:276 (4,5) - this is so far spaced aswell for some reason, you don't do this before I actually did

[Advanced]

01:20:104 (1,2) - blanket ? xd Yes

01:50:448 (1,2,3) - here I understand you follow vocal on the red tick but at 01:53:207 (1,2,3) - the 2 doesn't really make much sense because it doesn't have the vocal Its some rythm I made up to fill the empty spaces, I think thats not really a problem.
01:58:724 (1,2,3) - ^

[Normal]

01:56:828 (2) - move this to 01:56:655 - ? atm sounds out of place for me, and I think it would follow the rhythm better Then the break would be kinda long.

if you apply some things, remember to check the whole diff for it, because it might repeat
nice song and set, gl

Asserin wrote:

~Hello!

Extra

1. 00:43:035 (2) - This pleace is medium for that imo, if you will change it a little and use higher distance it should work better Okay
2. 00:43:552 (3,4,5,6) - Why 00:43:552 (3,4) - have other ds then 00:43:897 (5,6) - ??? Imo 3 and 4 should be closer and 5,6 should have higher distance I did that since it goes up like a pyramide, it looks and plays cool
3. 00:43:897 (5,1) - Correct blanked baka Okay
4. 01:03:897 (3) - Stack it on 01:02:862 (5) - cus it can be confusing a little Okay
5. 01:02:862 (5,7) - Blanet baka Okay
6. 01:05:621 (1,2,1,2) - Wat ? XD 01:05:621 (1,2) - And 01:05:966 (1,2) - Have same rhythm so why you changed distance so much ? ;-; You should keep same distance for same rhythm :d Did something
7. 02:11:310 (2) - Same like earlier (i mean 1st point) Okay
8. 02:17:172 (3,1) - wrgbujsikdnofd Lucas wtf XD Its ugly ! Make little discance there ;-; And correct blanket baka XD http://puu.sh/pFPM8/ee190e2b59.jpg Okay!

Normal

1. 02:53:207 (4,2) - Overlap is bad idea :/ it easy to make it better! Okay