-KamGami- wrote:

Suuliin beatmap yum uu

Магадгүйээ ;w;

I actually want to ask m4m but wooow I see all the god modder there and I'am just a potato
good map!~

lol
anyway thanks

nice map
take my star !

thank you!












i want delete this scoure lol, it's nofx, why im choose this D:

thank you BANGKE

SpectorDG wrote:

BG by Spy

BG (Searched) by Spy

give kudos for SY

;^)

short irc i guess

thanks jin

"Arcwinolivirus' M4M-only contract"

A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.

Song: syzfonics - Never Ending (SpectorDG)
Number of difficulties modded in my map: 2 - 4K: Awakened,Insane

Note:
• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I do not bite rawr.
• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• No problem!

Column:
      _ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

[EXHAUST]

[ADVANCED]

[Overall]
SDVX Gravity Wars yay! have some stars as well~! Keep it up~
Goodluck and thank you for the contract, until next time

~ END OF CONTRACT ~

arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus' M4M-only contract"

A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.

Song: syzfonics - Never Ending (SpectorDG)
Number of difficulties modded in my map: 2 - 4K: Awakened,Insane

Note:
• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I do not bite rawr.
• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• No problem!

Column:
      _ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

[EXHAUST]

SPOILER

00:04:301 (4301|0) - move to 4 since the piano sound here has different pitch than 00:03:968 (3968|0,4634|0) - also the stair pattern fits here as the pitch of piano changes, smooth and flawless. ok

00:18:801 (18801|3) - remove? since the sound here is as much as the same with 00:18:884 (18884|2) - which is a hihat. Also there is no strong piano chord sound occured here like 00:18:301 (18301|0,18301|1,18301|3,18468|0,18468|2,18468|3) - which awkward if the note is not removed. ok

00:23:864 - I hear hihats here. Since this is the hardest difficulty you might want to add note for it as well. If applied, add to these time as well: 00:25:127 - , 00:27:654 - ye im before think this, but im not sure now .. i don't wanna add hithats on this part

00:25:811 (25811|2) - (optional) Remove? Though I know this is for piano but it seems quite inconsistent as for this part. I listened to this a couple of time in 25% playback rate and it feels it doesn't seems right. While the piano sound at 00:24:535 (24535|1,24575|3) - is quite different but seems matching with the piano sound. If applied, apply it here as well: 00:27:575 - just no XD

00:32:390 (32390|1) - you could extend this until 00:33:338 - because of the raising sound isn't done yet. oki

00:48:180 (48180|3) - move to 3 so it won't be so much stack at 00:48:022 (48022|3,48180|3,48180|0,48338|0,48338|3,48496|3,48496|0) - moved

00:48:654 (48654|0) - move to 3 as well. Same reason. ^

00:52:996 (52996|2,53075|3) - swap column to avoid 00:52:680 (52680|2,52838|2,52996|2) - rearranged

00:53:390 (53390|0,53390|1,53469|3,53469|2) - Ctrl H for more comfortable jumptrill part. just i need some hard suggestion there ... ok rearranged

00:53:548 (53548|0,53654|1,53759|0,53759|2,53864|3,53864|1,53969|2,54075|3,54180|2,54285|1) - cool stuff! I like the way you did these. thanks

00:57:969 (57969|3,57969|0,58075|3,58075|0,58180|0,58180|3,58285|1,58285|3,58285|0,58390|2,58390|1,58496|1,58496|2) - seems hard to execute as we have stacks with jumps. Might suggest something like this for comfortability: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4879273 good suggestion!
• Much easier to execute as it doesn't have any 3 or more stacks in the pattern.
• Since pitch varies, different positioning of notes like this fits.

01:20:420 (80420|1,80570|2,80720|3,80870|1,81020|2,81170|3,81320|1,81470|2) - you could have map for the 1/4 melody. Still you decide~ i love it

01:26:420 (86420|2) - add note to 4 since strong impact sound. Just you did at 01:28:820 (88820|3,88820|0) - added

01:27:020 (87020|3) - ^ to 1 or 2 same reason. ^

01:27:620 (87620|1) - remove. As the similar sounds like 01:28:820 (88820|3,88820|0,89270|0,89270|3) - only have 2-noter keypresses. Also its the same as 01:30:020 (90020|3,90020|2) - removed thanks

01:45:938 - with that [2,3] it seems a quite awkward. Suggesting this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4879289 i think current pattern is fine
• Pretty much comfortable and neat to see.
• Easy to execute.

[ADVANCED]

SPOILER

00:11:301 (11301|2) - move to 4 for better execution and it wont be awkward with 00:11:634 (11634|2) - ok

00:40:601 (40601|1) - move to 1 ^ ok :v

01:23:420 (83420|0) - move to 3 ok :v :v

seems really cool advance! thank you <3

[Overall]
SDVX Gravity Wars yay! have some stars as well~! Keep it up~
Goodluck and thank you for the contract, until next time

~ END OF CONTRACT ~

thank you for mod and stars arcwin <3

EXHAUST

00:21:968 - quite sure this is rather mindblockable, I would suggest these variants added into it

Example:

34 13 12 34 24 12

or in other words, you can just shift 00:22:184 (22184|2,22184|1,22508|1,22508|2,22832|1,22832|2) - to 13 OR 23 OR 24 OR 14, prolonged repetitive patterns are mindblockable in a sense after the player plays it too much

01:01:206 (61206|2,61285|0,61364|1,61443|3,61522|2,61601|1,61680|0,61759|2,61838|3,61917|1,61996|0,62075|3,62154|2,62233|1,62311|0) - Think you can go for a build up in terms of difficulty here by either increasing the note density or making some trills instead of rolls(stairs)

01:02:390 - Same thing i wanted to point out here for the "mindblockable" issue

01:26:420 (86420|2,86495|1,86570|0,87020|0,87095|1,87170|2) - Not sure if there's a need to do the stairs here, don't really hear a grace on the synths and I suspect that to have ghost notes, i may be wrong though

01:34:595 (94595|2,94670|1,94745|2) - these are horribly soft, don't think you really need to put notes here since they are practically not very audible but it's your choice ultimately

01:37:220 - Not really that supportive of these kind of patterning mostly due to mindblockability, mostly talking about those 34 23 12 and 12 23 34 patterns which you can vary more, 12 12 12 34 34 34 patterns should be fine on the other hand

01:43:552 (103552|3,103552|2,103620|2,103620|3,103688|1,103688|0,103757|0,103757|1,103825|2,103825|3,103893|2,103893|3,103961|1,103961|0,104029|1,104029|3,104029|0) - quite a rude ending for SS-players here (emphasis: specifically the SS-players), personally would suggest to go with jump/handstreams towards a jumptrill at the tail here to make it easier to SS but it is fine as it is if you don't really want to do that


ADVANCED

00:17:301 - are you going for 2 note chords for piano chords? if so then this should be 2 notes

00:24:338 (24338|2,24496|0) - would prefer if you went for stricter PR in the less dense part of the song, make these a hammer since the pitches of notes are the same

00:26:390 (26390|0,26548|1,26706|2) - uggghhh PR

00:28:917 (28917|1,29075|2,29233|0,29390|1,29548|3) - same thingy

00:57:969 (57969|2,58075|2,58180|2,58285|1,58390|0,58496|0,58601|0) - 3 note 1/3 is probably too hard for this skill level tbh

01:02:390 (62390|3) - uhhh not too sure about this, i guess you can make this slightly more difficult since it's a build up from the previous 1/4 streams, think you can opt with some more difficult patterns that consists of 1/3 jacks like 33211344211 etc. up to you also

01:05:645 - isn't there supposed to be a note here

01:15:245 - also here

01:34:595 (94595|2,94670|1,94745|2) - same thing i've mentioned on EXH

NOV

00:23:233 - not sure why you didn't opt for PR but yea, do it if you want i guess

00:33:338 - could've done the guitars instead of a rather mundane pattern tbh, but i guess easier patterns can fit well too

rest should a o k

didn't really bother to check the hitsounds as of now sadly

Evening wrote:

EXHAUST

00:21:968 - quite sure this is rather mindblockable, I would suggest these variants added into it

Example:

34 13 12 34 24 12 // okay it's better, rearranged

or in other words, you can just shift 00:22:184 (22184|2,22184|1,22508|1,22508|2,22832|1,22832|2) - to 13 OR 23 OR 24 OR 14, prolonged repetitive patterns are mindblockable in a sense after the player plays it too much

01:01:206 (61206|2,61285|0,61364|1,61443|3,61522|2,61601|1,61680|0,61759|2,61838|3,61917|1,61996|0,62075|3,62154|2,62233|1,62311|0) - Think you can go for a build up in terms of difficulty here by either increasing the note density or making some trills instead of rolls(stairs) // rearranged

01:02:390 - Same thing i wanted to point out here for the "mindblockable" issue // nahh, i think current 1/3's fine

01:26:420 (86420|2,86495|1,86570|0,87020|0,87095|1,87170|2) - Not sure if there's a need to do the stairs here, don't really hear a grace on the synths and I suspect that to have ghost notes, i may be wrong though // renoted

01:34:595 (94595|2,94670|1,94745|2) - these are horribly soft, don't think you really need to put notes here since they are practically not very audible but it's your choice ultimately // i don't want delete this XD

01:37:220 - Not really that supportive of these kind of patterning mostly due to mindblockability, mostly talking about those 34 23 12 and 12 23 34 patterns which you can vary more, 12 12 12 34 34 34 patterns should be fine on the other hand // rearranged

01:43:552 (103552|3,103552|2,103620|2,103620|3,103688|1,103688|0,103757|0,103757|1,103825|2,103825|3,103893|2,103893|3,103961|1,103961|0,104029|1,104029|3,104029|0) - quite a rude ending for SS-players here (emphasis: specifically the SS-players), personally would suggest to go with jump/handstreams towards a jumptrill at the tail here to make it easier to SS but it is fine as it is if you don't really want to do that // rearranged


ADVANCED

00:17:301 - are you going for 2 note chords for piano chords? if so then this should be 2 notes // my bad XD added

00:24:338 (24338|2,24496|0) - would prefer if you went for stricter PR in the less dense part of the song, make these a hammer since the pitches of notes are the same // i think it's really no need 1/8 and 1/6 pattern on this part

00:26:390 (26390|0,26548|1,26706|2) - uggghhh PR // just rearranged

00:28:917 (28917|1,29075|2,29233|0,29390|1,29548|3) - same thingy // ^

00:57:969 (57969|2,58075|2,58180|2,58285|1,58390|0,58496|0,58601|0) - 3 note 1/3 is probably too hard for this skill level tbh // okay okay rearranged, no jacks there

01:02:390 (62390|3) - uhhh not too sure about this, i guess you can make this slightly more difficult since it's a build up from the previous 1/4 streams, think you can opt with some more difficult patterns that consists of 1/3 jacks like 33211344211 etc. up to you also // not bad, rearranged

01:05:645 - isn't there supposed to be a note here // added :v

01:15:245 - also here // ^

01:34:595 (94595|2,94670|1,94745|2) - same thing i've mentioned on EXH it's fine

NOV

00:23:233 - not sure why you didn't opt for PR but yea, do it if you want i guess

00:33:338 - could've done the guitars instead of a rather mundane pattern tbh, but i guess easier patterns can fit well too

rest should a o k

didn't really bother to check the hitsounds as of now sadly

okay thank you for modding zen <3

хурдан ранкэд болосой XD

hooFLIZE wrote:

хурдан ранкэд болосой XD

харин тэгээсэй билээ :v

Evening wrote:

IRC

10:42 SpectorDG: ohayo zen
10:43 Evening: elo
10:43 *SpectorDG is away: no request please
10:43 *SpectorDG is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/350094 Camellia - Bangin' Burst [EXHAUST Lv.16]] <osu!mania> |4K|
10:43 SpectorDG: oo lol
10:43 *SpectorDG is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/899136 syzfonics - Never Ending]
10:43 Evening: o wo?
10:43 Evening: oh
10:43 SpectorDG: we can go now ?
10:43 SpectorDG: :D
10:43 Evening: yea lemme see
10:43 Evening: ok what the fuck
10:43 Evening: bss is bugging out lmao
10:43 Evening: exhaust has 0 notes now
10:43 Evening: and it links to some random map
10:43 Evening: hold on...
10:44 Evening: ok i got it :d
10:45 SpectorDG: LUL
10:46 Evening: oh god the ending aaa
10:46 SpectorDG: ye
10:46 SpectorDG: i need more good suggestion ;w;
10:46 SpectorDG: on last part
10:46 SpectorDG: and some 1/3
10:47 Evening: i mainly have problems at 1:43
10:47 Evening: the transition
10:47 Evening: lemme try again though
10:47 Evening: ok idon't have problems after the 2nd try 
10:47 Evening: sooooo
10:47 Evening: idk
10:48 Evening: mmmmm
10:48 SpectorDG: problems : rearrange 1/3 pattern
10:48 SpectorDG: so it's ok
10:48 SpectorDG: GG
10:48 Evening: i mean
10:48 Evening: it should be ok for people like me at this level
10:49 Evening: but like people who play 5* stuff
10:49 Evening: idk if they will very mad 
10:49 SpectorDG: 1 star 2 star 3 star 5 star
10:51 Evening: yea the spike is wooo
10:52 Evening: now i kinda feel bad because the gap might be large
10:52 Evening: ssssssss
10:52 Evening: i think i can let this pass anyways
10:54 Evening: so uh the main issue left on EXH is the last piano thingy
10:54 Evening: i'd suggest http://puu.sh/otus5/ed519aa8ac.jpg
10:54 Evening: starting on 3 for the stream is kinda weird idk
10:54 SpectorDG: uhh
10:54 SpectorDG: okay
10:55 SpectorDG: just i think
10:55 SpectorDG: last need more hard
10:55 SpectorDG: i mean that 1/8
10:56 Evening: well, it's just awkward lol
10:56 Evening: not that hard ;;
10:56 Evening: you can do like 43243123 idk
10:56 Evening: 43243123[14]
10:56 SpectorDG: okay re-arranged
10:56 Evening: ssss that's awkward too
10:56 Evening: fugg
10:57 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/otuA8/204d88bbab.jpg used
10:57 Evening: ah ok
10:57 Evening: yea idk, anything other than that is wierd :x
10:58 SpectorDG: 01:01:127 - what do you think this /
10:58 SpectorDG: it's ok /
10:58 Evening: yea looks fine
10:59 SpectorDG: im still using speaker so
10:59 SpectorDG: 01:26:420 - maybe it's need 3 notes
10:59 SpectorDG: 01:27:020 - ^
10:59 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/otuJ0/249f7069ea.jpg
10:59 Evening: hmm
11:00 Evening: you can use that i guess
11:00 SpectorDG: okay
11:00 SpectorDG: 01:43:484 - need more hard on this
11:00 SpectorDG: like a 00:21:968 -
11:01 Evening: eh (?)
11:01 SpectorDG: just i mean
11:01 SpectorDG: can we rearrange this?
11:01 Evening: which one
11:02 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/otuRe/fc6352f3c3.jpg
11:02 Evening: well i mean like, both are kinda same in difficulty if you plan to swap
11:02 SpectorDG: why not this?
11:02 Evening: oh wow 
11:02 Evening: lemme see
11:03 Evening:  where did you put that
11:03 SpectorDG: 01:43:552 -
11:04 Evening: yea that's horrible to play aaa
11:04 Evening: keep it as it is
11:05 SpectorDG: okay XD
11:05 SpectorDG: any problems?
11:05 Evening: other than that it should be okidoki
11:05 Evening: lemme see the other diffs
11:06 SpectorDG: YEEY <3 XD
11:07 *SpectorDG is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/899135 syzfonics - Never Ending [ADVANCED]]
11:07 SpectorDG: 01:45:938 - 1/6 owo
11:07 Evening: hm?
11:07 Evening: oh, 1/6 and 1/8 and above should be fine for sounds like that
11:07 SpectorDG: better than 1/4 i guess
11:08 SpectorDG: ohh okay
11:09 Evening: 01:18:620 (78620|1,78920|0,79220|2,79670|2) -  hmm do you want differentiate the synths from the drum sound thingies
11:09 Evening: i think you can if you put miniLNs and stuff
11:11 SpectorDG: maybe i can add 1/2 LNs there
11:11 Evening: 01:25:520 (85520|1,85595|2,85670|0,85745|1,85820|2) -  isn't this 1/2 early
11:14 SpectorDG: hmm
11:18 SpectorDG: 01:25:595 (85595|2,85670|0,85745|1) - maybe it's no need
11:18 Evening: eh?
11:18 Evening: 01:24:470 (84470|2,84545|1,84620|0,84695|1,84770|2) -  i'm referencing this
11:18 Evening: because you started the stream on 1/2
11:18 SpectorDG: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
11:18 Evening: aaaaaa
11:18 SpectorDG: i wan't buy new headphones
11:19 SpectorDG: speaker rip
11:19 Evening: rip
11:19 SpectorDG: 01:25:670 - http://puu.sh/otvHs/b058c6c0ec.jpg
11:20 Evening: o wo)!
11:22 Evening: 01:37:220 - think you can add some jacky jacks here(?)
11:22 Evening: just to boost the difficulty here a little
11:22 SpectorDG: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5000598
11:22 Evening: 01:02:390 -  something like this for 1:37 would be cool
11:23 SpectorDG: i think current pattern is fine
11:23 SpectorDG: if i added this pattern
11:23 SpectorDG: it's almost ADVANCED+
11:24 Evening: well the thing is that the gap between ADV and EXH is quite large
11:24 SpectorDG: after people hate this diff ;w;
11:24 Evening: (?????)
11:26 SpectorDG: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5000628 right?
11:26 Evening: yea something like that
11:26 Evening: the thing for EXH is that it has 3 note jacks while doing 2 note jacks here would be a good difficulty spread
11:28 SpectorDG: okay
11:28 SpectorDG: re-arranged
11:28 Evening: yea should be a o k now
11:28 Evening: i'll look at the thingy in a bit after you update
11:28 SpectorDG: ye
11:30 SpectorDG: updated
11:30 *SpectorDG is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/899137 syzfonics - Never Ending [NOVICE]]
11:30 Evening: hmmm
11:31 Evening: also, might want to credit the original artist of the bg
11:31 Evening: http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=55232865
11:31 Evening: well in the description of course
11:32 SpectorDG: yea spy find this BG
11:35 SpectorDG: no problems at NOVICE ;^)
11:35 Evening: not really
11:35 SpectorDG: joke XD
11:35 Evening: im quite worried about the last part
11:35 Evening: the speedup being only LNs
11:37 Evening: well would suggest something like this http://puu.sh/otwAz/faf2aa8ae6.jpg
11:37 Evening: they are on 1/1s
11:38 Evening: after that you can just do single LN stuff http://puu.sh/otwCt/cb40965ebe.jpg
11:38 SpectorDG: not bad okay
11:39 Evening: should be  a o k  now
11:40 SpectorDG: okay updating
11:40 *Evening is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/902755 syzfonics - Never Ending [BASIC]]
11:40 Evening: a
11:40 Evening: one moree
11:40 SpectorDG: last part LN?
11:40 Evening: not really
11:40 Evening: 00:08:634 (8634|0,9301|2) - for simplicity, do you want to make the LN end end at the note here
11:41 Evening: 00:21:968 (21968|1,22400|3,22832|0) - 4/3 is kind of a weird beat tbh, i think 1/1 would do better for beginners
11:41 Evening: or just a single LN throughout
11:42 SpectorDG: 00:21:968 - okay for this
11:43 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/otwRc/38ebfa2f1b.jpg
11:43 Evening: oki
11:43 Evening: yea it's fine if you don't shift the 8:634 thingy
11:44 SpectorDG: nahhh i will keep this
11:45 Evening: 00:34:285 (34285|3) - mmm add a 1/2 after this?
11:45 Evening: like this whole section is 1/1 which is quite bland
11:45 Evening: 00:36:496 (36496|2,36811|1,37127|3) - like you can add 1/2s in between for guitar thingy
11:45 Evening: and yea, so on
11:46 Evening: well if you have problems with speaker thingy i can point out every one of these if you'd like to add 
11:47 SpectorDG: 00:34:285 - NOVICE don't have 1/2 there
11:47 Evening: well yea, it has a changing note count thing to represent the kick and snare
11:48 Evening: which is less boring than a 1/1 1 note thingy
11:48 SpectorDG: hmm
11:48 SpectorDG: 00:36:496 (36496|2,36811|1,37127|3) - maybe i can add good 1/1 LN's ther
11:48 SpectorDG: there
11:49 Evening: yea, LNs would be good too
11:49 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/otxaW/85e641a41d.jpg
11:49 Evening: yep
11:50 Evening: just do that for all the guitary thingy
11:51 SpectorDG: gimme more
11:52 Evening: 00:35:075 -  there is one guitar here
11:52 Evening: idk how you want to map it
11:52 Evening: 00:36:496 (36496|2,36811|1) - 1/1LNs for both
11:52 Evening: 00:36:496 (36496|2,36811|1) -  same here
11:52 Evening: woops
11:52 Evening: 00:37:601 - *
11:53 Evening: 00:39:022 (39022|2,39338|0) -  1/1s
11:53 Evening: 00:40:127 -  1 guitar thingy here
11:53 Evening: 00:41:548 (41548|2,41864|0) - 1/1s
11:55 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/otxph/2cc115cf6b.jpg
11:55 Evening: o  ye you can do that
11:56 SpectorDG: yea added all
11:58 Evening: 00:41:548 (41548|2,41864|0) - eeeh would be good if this was 1/1
11:58 Evening: i mean like, you can do something fancy here to differentiate it from the other LNs around
11:58 Evening: like 141423231414
11:58 Evening: etc
11:59 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/otxCl/b190897cde.jpg
11:59 SpectorDG: lol wrong SS
11:59 SpectorDG: link*
11:59 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/otxE8/b503f04b4a.jpg
11:59 SpectorDG: can i update first?
12:00 Evening: yeap
12:00 SpectorDG: updated
12:03 SpectorDG: i have 10 minutes now
12:03 Evening: 00:53:548 (53548|1) - uh this thingy
12:03 Evening: 10 minutes?
12:03 SpectorDG: yea
12:03 SpectorDG: juvia gived me 10 minutes XD
12:03 SpectorDG: she waiting me 1 hours
12:03 Evening: a
12:03 SpectorDG: she want shopping with me
12:04 Evening: you can just ask me to post on the thread lol
12:04 SpectorDG: it's almost finished
12:04 Evening: ye
12:04 SpectorDG: 10 minutes is enough
12:04 SpectorDG: XD
12:04 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/otxTE/14f96e905d.png
12:04 Evening: aaa fix the thingy
12:04 Evening: 00:53:548 (53548|1) - 
12:05 SpectorDG: LN ?
12:05 Evening: yea
12:05 Evening: 1/1 LN
12:05 Evening: something like 141423231414 would be nice
12:05 Evening: if you want to differentiate it from the LNs around it
12:05 SpectorDG: yea
12:06 Evening: 01:26:420 (86420|3,86420|0,87020|1,87020|2) - mm LNs here?
12:06 Evening: 01:34:070 (94070|2) -  and make this an LN to accent it somewhat
12:07 SpectorDG: 01:26:420 (86420|3,86420|0,87020|1,87020|2) - added LN's
12:08 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/oty5s/5357d021c4.jpg
12:08 Evening: yee
12:08 Evening: 01:44:029 (104029|0) - add one more note here?
12:08 Evening: the rest should be a o k
12:08 SpectorDG: added
12:09 SpectorDG: [http://puu.sh/oty89/62fec25911.png GG/WP]
12:09 Evening: :d?
12:10 Evening: 01:37:220 -  wait what
12:10 *Evening is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/899135 syzfonics - Never Ending [ADVANCED]]
12:10 Evening: i meant 2 note jacks maximum :x
12:10 SpectorDG: i will update first
12:10 SpectorDG: 5 minute XD
12:10 Evening: o 
12:11 SpectorDG: update first
12:11 Evening: ye
12:12 SpectorDG: updated
12:13 *SpectorDG is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/899135 syzfonics - Never Ending [ADVANCED]]
12:14 Evening: ye something like http://puu.sh/otyol/fbdfd3ed3f.jpg
12:14 Evening: maximum 2 jacks basically
12:16 SpectorDG: re-arranged
12:16 Evening: woo
12:18 SpectorDG: updated :3
12:19 Evening: 01:38:907 (98907|2,99005|2) -  eh what happened here  ,_,
12:19 Evening: i thought it's AAB pattern
12:19 Evening: suddenly AABB ,___,
12:19 SpectorDG: ohh no
12:20 SpectorDG: FIXED XD
12:20 Evening: o wo)b
12:20 SpectorDG: again updated :3
12:21 Evening: okiiiiii
12:21 Evening: lemme bobls

Thanks Zenny ♥

SpectorDG wrote:

BG by Spy

Can you remove this word or replace by "Thank Spy for helps me find this BG"
Because Spy is not own this BG

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

SpectorDG wrote:

BG by Spy

Can you remove this word or replace by "Thank Spy for helps me find this BG"
Because Spy is not own this BG

i know i will re-work creator word after

edit : GG time for Never Ending

M4M

I didn't mind that I will icon this but seems fine to be qualify. So sure it's M4M also qualify check.

Turn off widescreen support in BASIC

BASIC

00:33:338 - Should better to add a one more note, here is sounds like some "Starting part"

00:57:969 - Should better to make like NOV. It won't to be hard also fit.

01:03:620 - Same as 00:33:338 -

01:34:070 (94070|2) - Should be finish on 01:34:520 - here because other difficulties are so and it would be get easier.

NOVICE

00:54:180 - Make here like some http://puu.sh/ph6NG/9353a383ba.png And maybe you knew already you should fix other same part too if you follow this.

01:05:270 - Add one. It's too awkward.

01:28:220 (88220|2) - Move to 4, seems more good to feel this part.

ADVANCED

00:08:384 (8384|0) - This note has too faint sound even I can't feel this when I was playing. Remove this one, EXH too.

00:19:051 (19051|0) - ^

01:45:938 - Inconsistency snapping with EXH. It's 1/8

EXHAUST

Same as 00:08:384 - ADV

00:18:968 - 1/8

01:05:645 - Add a note, seems ADV has note too and it's fine to add a one more. Like 01:06:470 -

01:41:848 - Are you sure to use only a note here?

юүүүю ранкэд болчихвол мөн гоё ооо :3 хурдхан ранкэд болооосой~

Fresh Chicken wrote:

M4M

I didn't mind that I will icon this but seems fine to be qualify. So sure it's M4M also qualify check.

Turn off widescreen support in BASIC

BASIC

00:33:338 - Should better to add a one more note, here is sounds like some "Starting part" Added

00:57:969 - Should better to make like NOV. It won't to be hard also fit. Added LN

01:03:620 - Same as 00:33:338 - Added Double

01:34:070 (94070|2) - Should be finish on 01:34:520 - here because other difficulties are so and it would be get easier. My bad, fixed

NOVICE

00:54:180 - Make here like some http://puu.sh/ph6NG/9353a383ba.png And maybe you knew already you should fix other same part too if you follow this. Nice, rearranged this part

01:05:270 - Add one. It's too awkward. Keep this sorry

01:28:220 (88220|2) - Move to 4, seems more good to feel this part. Moved

ADVANCED

00:08:384 (8384|0) - This note has too faint sound even I can't feel this when I was playing. Remove this one, EXH too. Okay removed this note and 00:08:468 (8468|2) - Moved to 1

00:19:051 (19051|0) - ^

01:45:938 - Inconsistency snapping with EXH. It's 1/8 Your right, but im not sure 1/8 pattern on ADVANCED diff. Anyway fixed 1/4

EXHAUST

Same as 00:08:384 - ADV Fixed

00:18:968 - 1/8 Fixed

01:05:645 - Add a note, seems ADV has note too and it's fine to add a one more. Like 01:06:470 - Added

01:41:848 - Are you sure to use only a note here? Why here only 1 note? lol added

Thanks for the check KFC ♥

[ Juvia ] wrote:

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одоо ранкэд болноо /(>w<)/♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

Rebubble

Good job

Evening wrote:

Rebubble

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Good job

Love you guys :*

and Congratz too all GDers . . . o wait it's my first single map qualified ? . . . . LOOL yaaay

Congratz SpectorDG

SpectorDG : thank you Spe ♥

Hi, I don't understand the logic behind the [EXHAUST] ending at 01:39:590 . Why the sudden change to minijacks?
I understand you want to have some variation so here's my suggestion:
or something of sorts.

Also the minijack at 01:44:029 doesn't feel very fun to me, but maybe that's just me.

Possibly you could just nerf the ending all together since the map is currently a bit overrated (sr not your fault ofc, but the eding is quite hard compared to the rest of the map).

or something of sorts.

Also the minijack at 01:44:029 doesn't feel very fun to me, but maybe that's just me.

Possibly you could just nerf the ending all together since the map is currently a bit overrated (sr not your fault ofc, but the eding is quite hard compared to the rest of the map).[/spoilerbox]
Definitely agreed with the last note. If you move row 4 to 3 it would already make a lot more sense.

(what the actual fuck bb code)

In addition, pretty sure 2.99* [ADVANCED] -> 5.02* [EXHAUST] is too wide a gap between difficulties

Hi.

Additional to the Mod above i would like to mention following things:

[EXHAUST]
From 00:23:233 - to 00:28:917 -
I'm pretty sure you have a LOT of Wrong snapped notes in here.
Gonna point out and how it should (probably) be snapped.

00:23:233 (23233|2,23272|3) - 1/12 means 00:23:272 (23272|3) - to 00:23:259 -

00:24:496 (24496|0,24535|1,24575|3) - 1/12, you can hear the last note is already too late.

00:25:759 (25759|3,25811|2,25864|1) - Are also wrong, should be 1/8, starting 00:25:798 -

00:26:390 (26390|0,26548|1,26706|2,26864|3) - These all should be 1/12 beat up, all are too early.

00:28:285 (28285|3,28325|1,28364|0) - Should also be 1/12

Additional to these wrong snapped notes, one more thing:
01:34:595 (94595|2,94670|1,94745|2,94820|1) - What are you following with these notes, they have literally absolute no sound, for me, these are ghost notes and should be removed. There is a really really really REALLY quiet echo but i could hear this only with 100% Volume ingame and on desktop.


Oki that's all from my side.
Good luck here

The issues above seem valid to me. Please address them accordingly!


Also, I'd like to mention that the mapset's difficulty spread is rather unbalanced, specifically the ending patterns in each difficulty. Here's a rather brief mod about said things I just pointed out.

These few suggestions are mainly stuff about diff progression across all diffs. Take them as you will, but it's pretty much to cover the spread issue in the map.

Again, please address these suggestions accordingly. Any kind of feedback or suggestion from the community is much appreciated.

Good luck.

Seems all problems has been arrested

However, I would like to ask you to change hitsound of the chorus part
(Because using soft-finish.wav for snare sound is really annoyed)

You can add soft-hitclap.wav for them insteal of soft-hitfinish.wav
So that would be more suitable and comfortable

(What I mean: It's on 2/4 and 4/4 of the chorus
01:03:920 - 01:04:520 - 01:05:120 - 01:05:720 - 01:06:320 - 01:06:920 - 01:07:520 - 01:08:120 - 01:08:720 - 01:09:320 - 01:09:920 - 01:10:520 - 01:11:120 - 01:11:720 - 01:12:320 - 01:12:920 - 01:13:520 - 01:14:120 - 01:14:720 - 01:15:320 - 01:15:920 - 01:16:520 - 01:17:120 - 01:17:720 - 01:18:320 - 01:18:920 - 01:19:520 - 01:20:120 - 01:20:720 - 01:21:320 - 01:21:920 - 01:22:520 - And the after of chorus part: 01:23:120 - 01:23:720 - 01:24:320 - 01:24:920 - 01:25:520 - 01:26:120 - )

And for all diffs: 00:23:233 - remove this green timing
If it's 1.0x; there is no changing for this BPM

And I take 190 BPM as average for your map:
So with that: 00:00:635 - 190 / 180 = 1.05555556 (= 1.06x)

Also, I'm highly recomended you to fix the big gap from ADVANCED to EXHAUST (2.0 gap)
Solutions:
1. Raise ADVANCED to 3.5*
2. Decrease EXHAUST to 4.5*
3. Make a difficult between it; and name it as EXHAUST; your current EXHAUST now have to change to GRAVITY

That's all
Best of luck

Fixed some stuff . . thank you for check guys

Added 4sr EXHAUST

HELLO GRAVITY

Spector did PM me ingame for the new Exhaust.

thanks for IRC fee!

[-Seiryuu-] wrote:

irc

15:27 [-Seiryuu-]: spe you free right now?
15:27 SpectorDG: yea
15:27 SpectorDG: we can irc now?
15:28 SpectorDG: i rearranged last parts
15:28 [-Seiryuu-]: oh zen told you?
15:28 [-Seiryuu-]: yeah i know but
15:28 SpectorDG: yea
15:28 [-Seiryuu-]: i have different ideas
15:28 [-Seiryuu-]: so uh
15:28 [-Seiryuu-]: first part
15:28 [-Seiryuu-]: 01:37:220 (97220|1,97220|0,97320|0,97320|1) - keeping these jacks at 3 note jumpjacks should work better like last time
15:29 [-Seiryuu-]: up to you to reject it, i'll wait for your reply before proceeding
15:30 SpectorDG: [http://puu.sh/pjLWf/ec93bb9817.jpg yea i won't |12|12| |34|34| jacks on this part]\
15:30 [-Seiryuu-]: so you're keeping it?
15:30 SpectorDG: i need like a [http://puu.sh/pjLXg/0377e2eff8.jpg this]
15:30 [-Seiryuu-]: nononono i mean
15:30 [-Seiryuu-]: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5333905 you could just keep it like last time]
15:31 [-Seiryuu-]: because it emphasises the rhythm better
15:31 SpectorDG: triples?
15:32 [-Seiryuu-]: yeah
15:33 SpectorDG: okay
15:33 SpectorDG: [http://puu.sh/pjM3T/91e0152333.jpg rearranged]
15:33 [-Seiryuu-]: alright then
15:33 [-Seiryuu-]: for the next section
15:34 [-Seiryuu-]: 01:39:590 -
15:34 [-Seiryuu-]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5333908
15:34 [-Seiryuu-]: suggest using patterns like these
15:34 SpectorDG: wow
15:36 [-Seiryuu-]: just take your time thinking about it
15:37 SpectorDG: okay nice
15:37 SpectorDG: rearrangefd
15:38 [-Seiryuu-]: alright
15:38 [-Seiryuu-]: then the last part
15:38 [-Seiryuu-]: 01:43:416 - from here onwards
15:38 [-Seiryuu-]: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5333918 change to this]
15:38 [-Seiryuu-]: the triple at the end isn't needed imo
15:40 SpectorDG: ayyyy
15:40 [-Seiryuu-]: i guess that's it then
15:40 SpectorDG: okay .. no need triples last part
15:40 [-Seiryuu-]: yE
15:40 SpectorDG: im rearranged all
15:40 [-Seiryuu-]: welp
15:41 [-Seiryuu-]: go ahead and get your bubble from zen then
15:41 [-Seiryuu-]:
15:41 SpectorDG: please post it thread
15:41 [-Seiryuu-]: ah sure

Fixed last part and rearranged some patterns

thanks sei

and current mp3 is fine
new mp3 really lower than mine I already checked, 192kbps is enough

ok (again)

Evening wrote:

ok (again)

do people read this

14:52 SpectorDG: zen
14:52 SpectorDG: are you free now
14:52 Evening: a bit
14:52 SpectorDG: ?
14:52 *SpectorDG is away: no req
14:52 SpectorDG: we can go little irc?
14:52 *SpectorDG is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/899135 syzfonics - Never Ending]
14:53 SpectorDG: about new EXH
14:53 Evening: uh what happen again
14:53 Evening: oh dq
14:53 Evening: rip
14:53 SpectorDG: DQ : HS Problems and last part
14:54 SpectorDG: if it's looks fine
14:54 Evening: eeh think the last part is fine but ehh ok
14:54 SpectorDG: i want re-qualfy this
14:54 Evening: lemme redl
14:54 SpectorDG: ok
14:54 Evening: 01:43:484 (103484|3,103484|2,103552|2,103552|1,103620|1,103620|0,103688|3,103688|2,103757|1,103757|2,103825|1,103825|0,103893|2,103893|3,103961|1,103961|2,104029|1,104029|3,104029|0) - wo
14:54 Evening: that is ****hard**** to play
14:55 SpectorDG: yea
14:55 SpectorDG: sei already noticed this
14:55 SpectorDG: im planning re-arrange this
14:55 SpectorDG: gimme suggestion hueee >w<
14:55 Evening: hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
14:56 SpectorDG: [http://puu.sh/pjKCv/6a00f9472e.png better jacks here]
14:57 Evening: wow
14:57 Evening: noo pls
14:57 Evening: no
14:57 SpectorDG: ofc not this XD
14:58 Evening: uhhhhh
15:01 Evening: http://puu.sh/pjKNf/ecc07b8bbe.jpg
15:01 Evening: suggesting this i guess
15:01 Evening: idk how to make the pattern go harder from a jumptrill without it being tooooo hard
15:01 SpectorDG: let mee see
15:02 SpectorDG: it's started here 01:41:848 - ?
15:02 Evening: yeap
15:04 Evening: also what about wh1teh's suggestion
15:04 SpectorDG: uhh ...
15:05 SpectorDG: i don't want decrease - 5sr
15:05 Evening: :\
15:06 Evening: well then i can't really help you lol
15:06 Evening: either jumptrill all the way or do that, jacks are really awkward at the last part
15:06 SpectorDG: hmm
15:06 SpectorDG: 01:43:484 - maybe i can keep that sounds
15:07 SpectorDG: 01:41:848 - start |1|2|34
15:07 SpectorDG: |12|34|
15:07 SpectorDG: 01:43:484 - still going here
15:08 Evening: uh
15:08 Evening: screenshot o3o
15:10 SpectorDG: okay
15:10 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/pjLaJ/f861ef35ec.jpg
15:10 SpectorDG: i mean never ending |12|34| patterns here 01:41:848
15:11 Evening: uhh
15:11 SpectorDG: 01:43:484 - and |12|34| here too
15:11 Evening: i guess it's fine
15:12 SpectorDG: lemme update first
15:13 SpectorDG: updated
15:13 Evening: what about wh1teh's suggestion btw
15:14 SpectorDG: why not
15:14 SpectorDG: i like that
15:14 Evening: you applied on exhaust?
15:15 SpectorDG: GRAVITY*
15:15 Evening: o 3o i don't really see it
15:15 SpectorDG: let me update :3
15:24 SpectorDG: zen
15:24 SpectorDG: testplay it grv?
15:24 SpectorDG: updated
15:24 Evening: o ok
15:25 Evening: sei wants to irc i think
15:25 SpectorDG: ok
15:27 Evening: lol rip ending
15:28 SpectorDG: rip
15:43 SpectorDG: okay
15:43 SpectorDG: zen
15:43 SpectorDG: we can go now
15:43 SpectorDG: updated all
15:44 Evening: what did sei change
15:44 SpectorDG: update it gravity
15:44 SpectorDG: rearranged some patterns and last part
15:52 Evening: 00:57:285 (57285|1) -  ugh idk i can't hear this instrument
15:54 SpectorDG: really?
15:54 Evening: idk can you
15:54 SpectorDG: yea i hear
15:54 Evening: eeh then it's ok i guess
15:54 SpectorDG: i hear guitar
15:54 Evening: i have bad ears lol
15:54 SpectorDG: lel just your headphones bad 00:54:496 - and there really need 2 notes?
15:55 SpectorDG: maybe 1 note is enough?
15:55 SpectorDG: i guess
15:55 SpectorDG: what is your opinion
15:55 *SpectorDG is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/996296 syzfonics - Never Ending [GRAVITY]]
15:55 Evening: isn't it for the snare
15:55 Evening: like snare for 2 notes
15:55 SpectorDG: it's play for really hard ;w;
15:56 Evening: o 3o??
15:57 SpectorDG: rearranged something http://puu.sh/pjMZN/89f8d676fa.jpg
15:58 Evening: o oki
15:58 SpectorDG: same here 00:55:759 - ^
15:58 SpectorDG: 00:57:022 - ^
15:58 Evening: looks fine
15:58 SpectorDG: okay EXH time
15:58 SpectorDG: anyway update first
15:59 SpectorDG: okay
15:59 *SpectorDG is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/899136 syzfonics - Never Ending [EXHAUST]]
16:01 Evening: uggggggh so tired
16:02 SpectorDG: ;w;
16:02 SpectorDG: no problemo here~
16:02 SpectorDG: fee irc'd this
16:02 Evening: 00:57:969 (57969|3) -  do you plan to make this easier than grav
16:03 SpectorDG: maybe it's not easier than grv
16:03 Evening: looks like the same difficulty
16:03 Evening: 01:02:390 (62390|2) -  make this easier i guess, http://puu.sh/pjNeV/baf60bb5f1.jpg
16:04 SpectorDG: it's same of 00:21:968 - this part
16:05 SpectorDG: so can i rearrange this too ? 00:21:968 - ?
16:05 Evening: yeap
16:05 Evening: just trying to make it easier than gravity lol
16:05 Evening: the pattern here is already harder than chorus
16:06 SpectorDG: so it's good http://puu.sh/pjNk7/ff5981e806.jpg ?
16:06 Evening: looks fine o _o
16:06 SpectorDG: okay :v
16:06 Evening: but then again i don't really play at this star rating so idk
16:08 SpectorDG: other problem/
16:08 SpectorDG: ?
16:08 SpectorDG: okay
16:08 Evening: 01:37:220 (97220|0) - uhh
16:08 Evening: make this 134 or 14?
16:08 Evening: starting with 1 note a bit weird
16:08 SpectorDG: i copy adv
16:08 Evening: same for ADV and GRV actually
16:09 Evening:  o wo
16:09 SpectorDG: i rearranged adv
16:09 SpectorDG: because i maked 4sr here o wo
16:09 Evening: make that note there a chord ? , w,?
16:10 SpectorDG: wait
16:12 SpectorDG: [http://puu.sh/pjNC8/fb3ac3e90c.jpg maybe this]
16:13 Evening: adv?
16:13 SpectorDG: EXH
16:13 Evening: o
16:13 Evening: uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
16:14 Evening: well, i mean like, this part should be harder than all of the jack parts before it 
16:14 Evening: _should_
16:14 SpectorDG: okay rearranged before
16:14 SpectorDG: owo
16:15 SpectorDG: current patterns are fine i guess http://puu.sh/pjNHu/02f31ebe3d.jpg
16:15 Evening: 01:37:220 (97220|0) -  i mean make this a chord , w,
16:16 SpectorDG: ok
16:16 Evening: same as adv and grav
16:16 Evening: grav make 3 note chord there , w,
16:17 SpectorDG: you mean triples chords right?
16:17 SpectorDG: or now im drunk ?
16:17 Evening: o 3o?!?
16:17 Evening: yea triples chord
16:18 SpectorDG: [http://puu.sh/pjNPt/a449f8571f.jpg o wo]
16:18 SpectorDG: i need relax hhh
16:18 Evening: ww
16:19 SpectorDG: :
16:19 SpectorDG: :v
16:21 Evening: uh what about blocko's mod , _,
16:21 SpectorDG: applied
16:21 SpectorDG: but im not sure last LN's
16:22 Evening: You can map the piano chords in the ending as 2-note chords instead of short jacks and streams under high BPM to really highlight that piano. It would also make the progression across difficulties much less jarring.  p wp?
16:22 SpectorDG: 01:37:220 - i think it's really fine
16:22 Evening: oh
16:22 Evening: Turn these long notes up to 4 notes to map the violin more accurately. idk what he mean , w,
16:22 Evening: you fixed?
16:23 SpectorDG: 01:00:496 (60496|3,60811|2) - Turn these long notes up to 4 notes to map the violin more accurately. ?
16:23 SpectorDG: fixed
16:23 SpectorDG: 01:00:496 - see that
16:25 Evening: idk what he mean so
16:25 Evening: oki then
16:26 *SpectorDG is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/899135 syzfonics - Never Ending [ADVANCED]]
16:26 SpectorDG: 01:37:220 - i told you im rearranged this
16:26 Evening: did you replace with feerum's mp3
16:27 SpectorDG: no
16:27 Evening: , w,?
16:27 SpectorDG: i already talked about new mp3
16:27 SpectorDG: for KK
16:27 Evening: so now what
16:28 SpectorDG: current mp3 is fine
16:28 Evening: , -,
16:28 Evening: did you tell feerum
16:28 SpectorDG: feerum's mp3 lower than mine
16:28 SpectorDG: i already checked
16:29 Evening: , w,
16:32 Evening: eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh
16:35 Evening: isn't like
16:36 Evening: infinite lower than gravity
16:36 Evening: shouldn't gravity be infinite idk
16:37 SpectorDG: updating
16:37 SpectorDG: done
16:37 Evening: o wo
16:37 Evening: you changing gravity to infinite?
16:38 SpectorDG: no
16:38 Evening: , w, !??
16:38 Evening: doesn't infinite come after exhaust
16:38 SpectorDG: no need infinite
16:38 *SpectorDG is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/711786 Yooh - LegenD.]
16:39 Evening: .     w .) o ok
16:39 *SpectorDG is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/789827 penoreri - Preserved Valkyria]
16:39 SpectorDG: really no need
16:39 SpectorDG: it's SDVX 3
16:39 SpectorDG: so no need inf
16:39 SpectorDG: but im sometimes make inf :P
16:39 *SpectorDG is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/798950 P*Light - 2 MINUTES FIGHTERS]

thanks zenny