-shuko wrote:

国人麻婆我就写中文了
[Another]
00:42:353 (1,2) - overlap
00:42:787 (2,3,4) - 同上
01:04:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - 间距不一致
01:32:642 (2) - 间距不一致

ego_17 wrote:

i hope this count as mod )

beginer
i think you shoud check ds sometimes you use 1.1 but mos of the time its 1 (try smlaller grid)
like here : thx for remind
00:10:445 (4,1) - distanse fixed
00:19:463 (4,1,2) - distanse fixed
00:21:544 (3) - try not to use various slider speed on easy next time ) ok, but i feel its rly suit the music! will change if necessary
00:22:931 (1,2) - i think you can rearrange some previous notes to make this flow better like - http://puu.sh/kSqDF/075c091c3b.jpg
thx i fixed these flows a little
00:41:659 (5,1) - try to fif this overlap fixed a little
00:44:781 (5,1) - ds fixed
00:57:613 (2) - i think its out of gred fixed
00:57:613 (2,3) - not a good flow for easy
01:04:896 (2,3) - there is too many circles for easiest diff fixed
01:48:249 (6,1) - this may unfrendly for new players fixed

this easy looks to hard for me try use les circles nex time

thx a lot, it rly helps since i not play easy for many years.

normal
00:22:931 (6) - new combo added
00:35:590 (4,1) - 00:38:365 (4,1) - not a good choise of flow for normal
00:41:139 (4,2,3) - slider hides 2 circles - hard to read
i think this 4 circles is to hard for normal, but mb its only me
00:48:596 (6,1,2) - also hard to read
01:01:428 (8,1) - ^ i do understand ur suggetions , will change if necessary

much better than easy diff )

standard
00:41:486 (1,2,3,4) - this sleder 00:06:284 (3) - feels out of place - try to move it up (takes a litle remaping) fixed
00:23:451 (2,3) - mb add circle betwin them ? (00:26:226 (2,3) - 00:29:000 (2,3) - 00:31:775 (2,3) - feels no sounds there
01:46:168 (1) - up a litle done
01:48:943 (1,2) - i think there is no need to keep DS, or replace previous slider to keep this on grid thx, fixed

hyper
looks fine
00:26:746 (4) - blanket better
01:04:203 (8,1) - note mised/ mb intentional// added
01:08:885 (4,5) - blanket better will remap this part later
01:43:047 (4,5) - ^fixed alittle

buhei wrote:

Extra

1. 00:00:648 (4) - remove whistleたらいいと思うубирал уже　00:00:388 (1,3) - ここに入れませんか？это устраивает
2. 00:12:180 - このnormalhitはなんか違う так убирал
3. 00:25:706 - ここにclap入れましょうтеперь есть)
4. 00:28:480 - 00:31:255 - うえのと同じですтоже дабавил
5. 00:50:763 (1) - このポションあまり好きじゃないな、もっと遠い場所へ移動しましょうか？даа
6. 00:59:174 (3) - softclapのほうがよっかたと思うясно, чесно не умею хитсаунд
7. 01:00:388 (1,2,3) - CTRL+Gはどうだ？ знаю, что здесь плохо flow бывает, буду пересделать скоро
8. 01:04:550 (4) - これはちょっと見えないと思うでしたか、もっと遠い場所へ移動しませんか？Я сомневаюсь что такой джамп играбелен. еще подумаю
9. 01:11:486 (1) - もっと近くに？ладно
10. 01:17:989 (1) - このリズムは違うと思う угу, точно
11. 01:49:636 (4,5,6) - 流石rs god mapper、私は死亡を選べる！ыыы, подумаю
12. 01:50:503 (1,2) - これを01:50:763 (2) - に移動したらいいと思うстоят

私の負けた！

• 
  add in tags NextNaix
  check AiMod(in all difficults)

• 
  сделай CS = 2.5
  00:28:480 --- 00:29:000 - ты пропустил слайдер > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3858117

• 
  00:12:873 (8) - ctrl-g не очень играбильно
  01:50:330 (3,4) - в место этого скучного конца , я предлагаю сделать вот так > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3858157

• 
  сделай CS = 4.5 (5 это перебор)
  00:26:052 (2) - пододвинь ближе к слайдеру

Xelasto wrote:

Incoming mod from the Gentleman's Modding Queue!

Beginner

00:09:058 (3) - Improve this blanket. Make it look perfect. fixed
00:13:914 (4,5) - Change 4's shape so It doesn't overlap 5? remaped
00:20:850 (2,3) - I'm pretty sure you can space 3 farther away fixed
00:21:544 (3,1) - Make 1 blanket 3? done
00:28:827 - Why an empty pause? Please no
00:45:128 (1,2) - Blanket? seems not
00:49:289 (1,2,3,4) - Don't do long streams of notes. Put at least 1 slider in there remaped here and same before
01:00:388 (4,1) - Blanket much better. ok
01:29:521 - While this is not bad, do you HAVE to spend the ENTIRE kiai time doing "note,note,slider"? Switch it up a bit. im quite agree u , i ll fix it
01:40:619 - ^
posting.php?mode=quote&f=10&t=179834&p=4610884#
Just try to improve you shapes and get rid of overlaps.Nice job! Well, i gonna remap a lot of this diff, thx

Normal

00:03:162 (4,5) - Don't overlap PLEASE.
00:03:509 (5) - New combo ok
00:09:058 (2) - NC (new combo) here and NOT on 1 fixed
00:20:156 (4) - Please use a different shape. sure , ill try
00:26:746 (3) - Make this blanket 1 ok
00:28:480 (1) - Make this blanket 4 ok
00:31:255 (5) - NC fixed
00:32:295 (7) - Improve blanket fixed
00:35:937 (1,2,3,4) - Don't start this from on TOP of 00:35:590 (4) Please make start infront of 4 i will try to change this part
00:36:457 (4,2) - Stack the end of 2 onto 4 ok
00:38:711 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing. Start in front of 4 ok
00:39:232 (4,1) - Blanket? sure
00:41:139 (4,1,2,3,4) - Do not overlap these. will fix it
00:42:353 (5) - NC fixed
00:45:128 (1) - Curve less done
00:44:781 (10,3) - Stack? ok
00:47:208 (4) - Blanket 3 better it is
00:52:064 (4) - NC added
00:53:451 (7) - NC ok
00:54:839 (1,2,3) - Are you sure normal mode players could even do this? not, let me ask s1 else
00:56:746 (2,3) - Position these straight under 1 fixed a little
00:59:000 (4) - NC added
01:05:417 (3) - Remove this note. Unnecessary l will see how to work on it
01:18:422 (1,3) - Stack
01:19:116 (2,3) - Blanket better
01:21:197 (1,2) - ^ this part patterns seems bad, will try remap
01:23:971 (5) - NC added
01:26:746 (1) - Add a clap? seems not good
01:29:521 - While there is no problem with this part, are you ABSOLUTELY SURE that normal mode players could do this? It seems way too hard. seems , i will think about it
01:49:636 (2,4) - Stack

This is a nice difficulty. The biggest problem is that slider shape and placement is kinda odd. That's all
thx,ur mod helped a lot, i will remap it a lot and more care about the blanket problems

Standard

00:00:735 (3) - Blanket better fixed
00:02:122 (6) - Make this blanket 4 ok
00:02:815 (1,2,3,4) - Do NOT do this. This is way too confusing for standard mode. This goes for all the rest like this ok，i will fix it
00:03:509 (4) - Blanket better done
00:07:324 (5) - Move this down so it doesn't touch the slider above fixed
00:13:914 (6) - NC added
00:15:301 (8,9,10) - Don't put 8 and 9 in front of 10 like that fixed
00:18:769 (6) - NC added
00:23:451 (2,3) - Once again, these pauses without spaces in between are REALLY tricky. Don't use them. will fix it later
00:27:787 (7,1,2,3) - Don't overlap mark. w8 to fix
00:40:272 (3) - Curve more done
00:40:619 (4) - Blanket 2 this 1 stay
00:42:353 (1) - Stack with 00:41:139 (5) fixed
00:45:128 (1) - This is unbelievably difficult for standard mode. Completely remap this. mark. w8 to fix
00:46:515 (5) - NC ok
00:47:902 (9) - NC ok
00:49:289 (1,1) - Stack fixed
00:58:133 (6) - Blanket 5 fixed
01:23:971 (8) - NC added
01:41:313 (3) - Blanket better nop. seems fine
01:42:700 (7) - Blanket 6 done
01:46:168 (1,4) - Don't overlap ok
01:47:729 (5) - Fix blanket fixed

This difficulty has some problems. First, it's REALLY REALLY REALLY hard for a standard mode. Just rename it to hard. (Don't worry, hyper modes are generally harder than hard modes) Second, some of the combos are too long. Third, the beginning is super confusing. And fourth, Quite a few blankets are off. This difficulty needs some work before it can get ranked, but it's getting there. Keep working at it!

Nice map, but every difficulty seems to have a re-occurring problem. Fixing them will take some time and more mods. However, your map does have good flow and is fun. Just work at the problems I listed and don't give up. yep,i really not good at Ez Normal. I will force on these diffs, and try to fix them as i can

Gordon123 wrote:

привет(немного приболел на днях,но вот он мод)
[General]

• 
  add in tags NextNaix done
  check AiMod(in all difficults)

[Beginer]

• 
  сделай CS = 2.5 я тоже так думал
  00:28:480 --- 00:29:000 - ты пропустил слайдер > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3858117 пересделал

[Hyper]

• 
  00:12:873 (8) - ctrl-g не очень играбильно я изменил 00:12:526 (7) - , теперь лучшее
  01:50:330 (3,4) - в место этого скучного конца , я предлагаю сделать вот так > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3858157 да, хорошая идеа

[Extra]

• 
  сделай CS = 4.5 (5 это перебор) стоят, ещё посмотрю
  00:26:052 (2) - пододвинь ближе к слайдеру да, отлично)

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крч,доведи до ранка лол)
Good Luck

sodarose wrote:

M4M

我是新人，所以写的不一定全都听
检查AImod 好
[Extra]
00:00:388 (1,2,3,4,5) - 间距怎么怪怪的 没问题，又检查了一遍
00:05:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:16:775 (5,1,2,3) - 叠一起 没太懂
00:18:769 (1,4,5,6,7,8) - Blanket。00:19:636 (8) - 往右放 稍微修饰了下
00:23:971 (4,9) - 没叠好 好
01:02:122 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 最好不要单纯用note来表现1/3
01:26:746 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ 这两处先保留，等梗

[Hyper]
这个质量有点低。而且和下一个难度的gap有点大。建议remap成一个4星左右的Insane
因为这个难度是两年前做的，会考虑remap

[Standard]
可以用ar6 改了
00:45:128 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 不建议低难度放这么长的单点 mark ,等修改
其他低难度同上

GL

sodarose wrote:

[Aya's Extra]
00:15:214 (3) - 前后间距不一致，很难看
00:17:035 (1,2,3,4) - 为什么这里的间距特别大
01:02:122 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 建议这段用note+滑条表现 好
00:33:682 (13,14,15) - 为什么这里的间距特别大，间距乱变会显得乱
01:04:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段让我感觉放的很随便 我改改
01:24:665 (4) - 前后间距不一致
01:26:052 (4) - ^

这个diff给我的感觉就是一直在放梗，不考虑整体性，显得比较乱。两段kiai中间的那段特别明显

Hi,as your requires，i think maybe i can have a try
style：drum'n'bass
bpm:173
diff： Ex and Aya's Ex
link : https://osu.ppy.sh/b/758189
thx~

CptSqBany wrote:

[Extra]

[General]

Two diffs with high CS? Well that would be a no no from me but i dunno...

[Mapping and NCs]

00:20:156 - I had a little problem on reading that... i will try if there is some easier way for this part
00:49:723 (2) - NC ok
00:53:971 (2) - NC mb not, seems a little .. odd
00:57:613 (1,2) - Nonsense in comparition with (3,4) truely,im not very satisfied with this part. w8 for fix
01:02:122 - same as in previous mod here, dont make snakes! w8 for farther revise
01:18:422 - That's too fast imo seems it is ，thx for remind
01:19:896 (1) - Delete that circle thx for remind
01:26:746 - ehh w8 for revise\:D/

Overally. I love both of these diffs. I'm with you guys! Good luck! :3

CptSqBany wrote:

[Aya's Extra]

[General]

Nah

[Mapping and NCs]

00:00:735 (4) - I would NC here ok
00:03:162 (1) - and delete NC here ^
00:03:509 (3) - and NC here ^
00:05:937 - ^ same combo pattern here ^
00:19:636 (5,1) - that is problematic to read change to the slider
00:20:156 (5) - NC! ok
00:24:318 (6) - NC ^
00:25:706 - ^ same here ^
and in next the same ^
00:30:214 (11,12) - closer please ok
00:42:353 (7) - that is too overlappy change
00:42:353 (7) - also NC here ok
01:00:388 - This pattern is definitely to hard. Its too hard to read and even if it is readable its too hard to play!
01:02:122 - looks like a stream but it isnt a stream, so make shapes with these, not a snake like in streams well
01:07:324 - please avoid situations like here. Avoid having a long time without a slider.. Slider = fingers rest
01:18:422 (1,2,3,4) - too hard to read fix some
01:37:844 - 01:40:619 - Omg I love this pattern! I love you <3

I gotta say... This diff is just awesome, it's really good! Great job here!

Lily Bread wrote:

M4M from queue

看一下AIMOD
http://puu.sh/op7IB/f518d07798.png
这几个都是unrankable的点，改掉吧 好

[Beginner]
还是AImod，3个DS问题
http://puu.sh/op7LT/69140abb71.png改了

01:29:174 - 这个音还是挺重的，考虑跟一下 加了个note

[Normal]
00:58:306 (3) - 滑条尾没对齐时间轴 改了
00:54:839 (1) - 不要做1/2和更长的多次折返...无论在什么难度这样都是很别扭的 好的，谢谢
01:24:665 (6,7,8) - 这附近的几个1/3单点..在normal里有点危险，建议还是老老实实用单次折返。好的

[Standard]
00:21:544 (1,1) - 仔细看看这两个，感觉很别扭..转盘刚开始没多久下一个物件就出来了。把AR调高一点点可能会好一些 感觉改高AR可行
00:27:787 (7,1) - 这个叠的不太好，有点难看 是不太好

00:54:839 (1) - 同normal
01:22:758 (3) - 同上，而且你这里比normal更简单...改了
01:38:191 (3) - ^
01:39:578 (6) - ^

01:01:428 (8,1) - 小毛病，轻微的刮蹭
01:35:070 (1,3) - ^
这个难度不太好，我还是大改下，或者re吧
你说hyper在remap，所以我就跳过了

[N Ass]
难度名是怎么回事

00:59:000 (1) - 滑条自身边界不清晰，有点unrankable
太乱不看

[Aya's Extra]
注意一下最好不要overmap，因为这曲子本身的节奏已经很丰富了，能跟全就挺好
比如 - 00:24:665 (3,4) - 00:25:359 (3,4,5) - 等等

00:49:636 - 这附近有点不在节奏上，一种比较舒服的下法是这样: http://puu.sh/op9bp/a376abb1fb.jpg，只跟鼓点

后面紧跟着的几个二连的地方也类似..你也可以尝试一下跟钢琴
自创节奏不违和的话也不是不行..别的还不算违和的地方我就不说了
总体不错

[Extra]
01:09:058 (2) - 这个的结尾和 - 01:09:318 (3,4,5,6) - 构成一个五连，你这样摆就看不出结构了..而且这样是不是太难了一点..算了EX我也打不动，还是你自己看吧 盒饭说这好玩!我要劲量保留:3
太难，看不出什么，不过看起来还行的样子

[Chordzi's Love]
节奏没什么问题..太难所以看不动。看上去不错

gl

100bit wrote:

hey
small mod because i can't make normal mods xd

Song and beatmaps

Add "NextNaix" and "Chordzi" to tags

Beginer

Rename to "Beginner", it's more correct
00:18:769 (1) - remove nc
00:31:255 (1) - ^
00:54:839 (1) - ^
01:07:324 - add circle
01:29:174 (1) - move to x=144?
nice diff^^

Normal

If you name diffs as "hyper", "standart", etc, maybe rename to "Advanced"?
00:00:388 (1,2) - remove stack?
00:05:937 (1,2) - ^
00:24:839 - add circle
00:27:613 - ^
00:30:388 - ^
00:33:162 - ^
01:23:971 (5) - nc

Standart

00:45:821 (1) - remove nc
00:57:266 (3,4) - remove stack
01:07:151 - add circle?
01:25:532 (3) - make 2 sliders instead one
01:38:191 (3) - ^
01:39:578 (6) - ^
01:50:850 - add circle?
01:51:544 - ^

Hyper

i can't mod this, but...
00:23:278 (2,3) and 00:26:052 (2,3) and 00:28:827 (2,3) and 00:31:602 (2,3) - i think, it's not a good idea for this stacks
00:45:821 (1) - remove nc
01:08:711 (7) - nc
01:12:873 (1,2,3,4) - omg very strange stack
01:24:318 (3) - move to x=48 y=208 ?
01:39:232 (4) - reverse?
01:51:804 (1) - end in 01:54:145

N Ass

Set correct kiai time, please;)
I think, you don't need this diff, because you have "Aya's Extra"=5.09*

Aya's Extra

Set correct kiai time, please;)

Chordzi's Love

Set kiai time, please;)

jonawaga wrote:

M4M from my queue~

General~

1. You should probably make a difficulty between Standard and Hyper to even out the Spread. You don't have any three star difficulties. yes，you‘re right, im tring to increase the difficulty of standard
2. The tags must be consistent in every difficulty. Every difficulty must have the creator of every guest difficulty in the tags. (Check AiMod.) ok
3. The colors are also inconsistent. k
4. Disable widescreen support in every difficulty because you have no storyboard.ok

Beginer~

1. It should be "Beginner"
2. Imo, this would look better in a lower DS. sure
3. 00:18:769 (3,4) - Blanket is noticeably messy. Fix it. done
4. 00:25:359 (3,1) - ^ done
5. 00:59:000 (3,4,5) - You should follow ds here. fixed
6. 01:01:081 (5,1) - Overlaps, and consider making it a blanket. yes fixed ,but overlap,donno if it availabe in Easy
7. 01:07:324 - Add something here for consistency with other diffs. ok add reverse slider here
8. 01:29:174 - You should use DS here. done
9. 01:34:376 (4,1,2) - Overlaps.

Beginer NCs~

1. 00:47:902 (3) - NC, you have NCs every 8 beats, and you should probably keep it that way ok
2. 00:49:289 (1) - no NC
3. 01:40:619 (3) - NC fixed

Normal~

1. 00:03:162 (4,1) - Overlap. hold it nope, here music is diffrent from first overlap, ill keep it
2. 00:09:058 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Too many straight sliders.i just want keep it in this part
3. 00:14:607 (1) - NC, this combo is too long well, done
4. 00:20:156 (4) - ^
5. 00:20:156 (4,5) - Fix blanket, or make it look less like a blanket. dont rly understand here,mb i updated then it changes
6. 00:40:619 (3,4) - Blanket?done
7. 00:48:596 (6,1,2) - Flow is very sharp here. well,changed a little
8. 01:19:983 (3) - Stack with 01:18:422 (1) - this. ok ,done
9. 01:33:336 (3,4) - Blanket? done
10. 01:36:110 (3,4) - ^ ^

Standard~

1. Imo, it should be "Hard" or "Advanced"
2. 00:00:388 (1,2,3) - Fix blanket. done
3. 00:03:336 (3,4) - ^mostly fixed
4. 00:06:284 (3,4,5) - Flow is sharp.fixed
5. 00:07:324 (5,6,7) - Fix overlap. ^
6. 00:15:995 (5) - Ctrl+g, then snap it, then Ctrl+g again
7. 00:18:769 (1,2) - Maybe Ctrl+h and readjust this to encourage flow. Example. thx,i agree
8. 00:23:451 (2,3) - The stack could make the player think the objects are closer than they are. keep,this prob,coz i will increase the diff
9. 00:24:492 (5) - A circle is enough here. mark
10. ^ If you do this, also do it 00:27:266 (5) - 00:30:041 (5) - etc.
11. 00:25:706 - Add a clap to emphasize downbeat.
12. ^If you do this, also do it 00:28:480 - 00:31:255 - etc.
13. 00:32:989 - Try a rhythm like this.i will try
14. 00:37:498 (3) - A circle is enough here. If not, remove a hitsound 00:37:671 - here. mark
15. 00:40:272 (3) - ^ ^
16. 00:41:659 (7) - Fix stack. ok
17. 00:43:740 (2,3,4) - There's no need to make this so quiet. yes,i missed this
18. 00:46:688 (7,8) - There's no reason to start this on a red tick. the melody here is like that 0 000 000 000
19. 00:48:596 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Too many straight sliders. mark
20. 00:57:613 (5,6,7) - Fix the overlap. hard to overlap,but i will remake it
21. 01:05:243 - Rhythm should be like this. yes you are right
22. 01:17:382 - The break isn't dragged in other difficulties. Make it consistent. i think need a break for low level players,so did this,lets say how others say
23. 01:32:989 (3,4) - Blanket? think its fine
24. 01:42:526 (6,7) - ^

Standard NCs~

1. 00:13:914 (1,2) - Switch NC, there is much more emphasis on 00:14:607 - this.
2. 00:46:515 (1) - No NC.no,NC make them ez to read the pattern
3. 00:49:289 (1) - No NC.^
4. 00:53:451 (1) - NC^
5. 00:54:839 (3) - No NC.^

Hyper~

1. 00:14:781 (2) - There is no reason to give this note such a jump.
2. 00:15:648 (2) - ^ dont see any problems here
3. 00:18:422 (7) - ^, use DS unless you want to emphasize something with a jump.
4. 00:26:573 (3,4) - Fix blanket.
5. 00:46:688 (2,3,4) - Flow is really sharp.
6. 00:49:289 (1,2,3,4) - ^
7. 00:52:758 (6) - Stack is off.
8. 00:52:758 (6,1) - Fix blanket.
9. 01:08:278 (6,1) - ^
10. 01:16:602 (7,8) - ^

Hyper NCs~

1. Keep in mind that the downbeat is 00:00:735 - here, not 00:00:388 - here. You can try i will trythis.
2. 00:06:284 - ^ ^
3. 00:11:486 - ^ ^
4. 00:15:474 (1) - no NC
5. 00:15:995 (10) - NC
6. 00:17:035 (7) - no NC
7. 00:17:382 (1) - NC
8. 00:52:064 (4) - NC
9. 01:17:035 (8) - NC yep
10. 01:18:769 (2) - no NC

I'll stop there, the rest is too hard. something i remaped in hyper,so cant check them all
Good Luck~

buhei wrote:

beginer
change diff name to beginner

another
01:41:312 (4) - 这种全得减一次折返

extra
01:26:746 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - not snapped 好

no kd
除Hyper外，全部具有rank水准我看看re下
三个ex都很不错

edit: 01:09:058 (2,3,4,5,6) - 务必保留 好

Battle wrote:

ok sorry for late sry, im also late for replay

[Easy]
00:12:526 (2) - Could curve this upwards for more flow into 3 ye you're right, fixed
00:21:544 (3) - Personally, I found no reason for this slider to be shaped the way it is, nothing special is happening in the music so other than aesthetics it doesn't make much sense fixed a little
00:34:723 (2,3,4,5) - Okay, so by the time 2 shows up, the notes 3,4 have appeared and 5 is on it's way. The flow is really ambiguous here, since you want players to go toward 3, but you made the slider flow toward 4. Making flow clearer here will be better changed the pattern,now seems better
00:43:740 (2) - Again, slider shapes, since it's a stream, you can't really do much to follow the music in terms of shape, so I guess this one is fine? (Not really imo but w/e)i cant see which one
00:53:451 (1,2) - Overlap looks messy, so yeah so yeah
01:01:775 (1) - If you wanted to make this slider more accurate, you would have the slider peak at 01:03:162 - and start going down from there, to go along w/ downbeat quite right
01:26:746 (1) - Slider shapeee, you can sacrifice symmetry for emphasis on 01:28:133 - w/ directional change in the slider
01:29:174 (1,2) - Well, if this were a normal I would be like "Yeah it's acceptable", but this is an Easy, and you never break DS on easy (plus 2 still ended up overlapping with that giant slider so it didn't end up working) i also metioned this,so.. fixed a little
01:48:249 (4,1) - Pretty sure this is supposed to be a blanket, and it's off sooooo so fixed 4 a little

[Normal]
00:03:162 (4,1) - You could not make these overlap, but I guess that's your choice :/ Personally I feel like 4 is not needed at all in both places it appears at the start. It would make more sense to follow the main rhythm in the music, which is like the piano or w/e and ignore all the like "weaker" beats in the background
00:20:156 (1) - I'm pretty sure you know what I'm going to say for this slider shape, so yeah i try to make it looks not so sharp now
00:29:521 (3,4) - There's a lot of things like this, where the notes don't really feel like they lead into each other at all, another case of this is can be seen in something like 00:37:844 (3,4,5,6,1) - where you're constantly making the player make pretty sharp angles and turns just to get to the next notes. I feel like sharp movements should only be reserved for emphasis, lest they get overused and lose their emphasis. thx for ur suggestions,i did ingore these, quite not good at with low diffs
00:46:515 (3,4) - Have to say, this looks really awkward since this isn't a blanket and it's kinda just there lol fixed
00:53:971 (2,3) - It would make more sense to unstack these, 3 is a strong note, and it doesn't really feel right to stop movement on 2 fixed
01:01:081 (7,8,1) - Waaaaaay too confusing, players will easily hit 7,1 instead of 7,8. There's like, 0 clarity here cuz you're trying to follow your w/e pattern with single taps, and then you go back to 7 and stack something under it, but then that isn't really told to the players so it just ends up asdfasdfagsdfg sdfg dg sd (tl;dr, Don't do this) ok, i thought normal ccould do this,but seems not
01:19:983 (3,4,1) - This could be neater visuallyfixed
01:41:313 (3,4) - ^fixed
01:49:636 (2) - Makes no sense, you could map out this part, but you chose to do a slider that doesn't really follow the music i finished this part

[Hyper]
00:08:711 (9,10,1) - so like, you basically do this all the time, but like, all your flows look too forced, the ds kinda feels like the only thing controlling spacing of the map, and that's pretty ew
00:10:445 (3,4,5) - Makes no sense considering how all the other times you had 1/1 single taps they weren't spaced like this at all. It emphasizes nothing in the music
00:16:341 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - really hard to follow
00:21:544 - Why didn't you map the 1/3 up to here then put a spinner? it's a 4~ star diff so I don't see why not
00:27:700 - Mmm, kinda dont' see why you ignored the 1/4 here but oh well (even though 00:33:162 (6,7,8) - exists)
00:35:243 (6) - please remove finish on slider head, it really doesn't make much sense
00:36:024 - Kinda weird how the most distinct 1/4 in this section gets ignore
00:38:018 (6) - Remove finish
00:40:792 (6) - z
00:42:006 (11,1) - Spacing? This should be emphasized, not RIGHT next to 11
00:53:971 (2,4) - Stack?
01:20:156 - Shouldn't there be a note here to make a double to go along w/ music?
I'll stop with this diff here, flow feels way too sharp everywhere, the gimmick of stacking later things w/ things in the present kinda feels executed poorly, and that's mainly due to the fact that everything is so sharp that it's just bleh well ,thx for ur all suggestions, i will take care it, and kinda remap

[Aya's Extra]
00:02:815 (4,5) - This anti-jump kinda looks awkward, cuz like, nothing is really like too significant soooo
00:19:116 (2,3) - Can easily be mistaken for 1/4 with the way you've been spacing things
00:22:931 (1,2) - I would stack these, unlike 00:23:798 (5,1) - it makes less sense since like, the pause created by the slider end feels more natural
00:28:307 (1,2,3) - Mm, disagree with this overmapping, mainly due to this rhythm being pretty consistent in the section, so altering it feels ew
00:49:289 (7) - zz I don't really get why you chose to make this a 1/2 slider, ignoring the very strong beat on 00:49:463 - , but w/e
01:03:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ?
01:15:474 (7,1) - Emphasis or no??? You have large spacing for 1/2 but then you have small space for actually significant notes?

I'm sorry, I can't really mod this, it's making me too salty : ( ( ( (

standard

hyper

CET 6 wrote:

Hello~



以下是来自对称强迫症患者的mod （没必要自称强迫症啊，有些地方工整还是必须的，是我偷懒了


Beginner

Aimod的东西一定要改 都改了,还修复了一个Another timing bug

打起来没问题

低难度因为物件较少 间距要求严格 要有创新比较难 我认为低难度一张不错的图至少要求工整 其中一个很重要的就是对称和相似物件的运用

1. 00:00:735 (1,3,4,1) - 这4个slider目测全不不同，不能说有什么错，但如果用同一个倾斜的的滑条，或是倾斜度成比例的滑条会有助于工整
2. 00:11:833 (1,2,3,4) - 这里你设置的击打的节奏是相同的，试试相同滑条，比如00:11:833 (1,3) - 用一样的滑条的话能给人一种对称的感觉，位置可以再调整
3. 00:14:607 (4,5,1,3) - 就给人一种前后呼应的感觉 很好
4. 可以根据这种意识来试试做easy和normal
谢谢提醒, 因为开着DS做反而不会摆了，忽略了对称的问题，已经劲量修改了！

Normal

我觉得CS3好些

还是关于对称工整意识的问题...

1. 00:45:128 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的音乐节奏做对称非常合适 而且做对称打起来看起来也不错 但是我觉得你排列的不够精致有些随意了 说不好听点 像是排节奏的草稿= = 搞了下，感觉好多了
2. 00:54:839 (1,2,3,4,1) - 最怕这种毛毛虫排列 看起来很乱的 改的时候懒得想梗搞成这样，十分抱歉
后面的不用说了，我自己re

小结

easy、normal 音乐节拍相似的地方用对称或相似滑条是做出看起来不错的rankable图的一个小技巧

我认为在easy、normal 没有这种意识的话 到Hard就会导致图出现很多毛毛虫排列 那样一定程度上看起来缺乏技术含量


先说这些 求进一步指导

-Dave Strider- wrote:

m4m!

standard

00:00:388 (1,2) - i dont think this goes well with the music, try something like this instead?
00:05:937 (1,2) - ^
00:11:486 (1,2) - ^ there are more but im lazy ;w; thx , but mb not fit in this level
00:14:607 (1) - remove the NC here done
01:04:550 (1,2,3,4) - this doesn't really look like it goes with the song imo the rhythm here is fine

hyper

00:35:937 (11) - NC here?
00:38:711 (10) - ^
00:41:486 (10) - ^
00:42:353 (1) - remove NC (then put NC on 00:43:740 (2) )
01:00:388 (9) - NC here?
01:31:429 (11) - ^
01:34:203 (10) - ^
01:36:978 (10) - ^
01:42:527 (11) - ^
01:45:300 (10) - ^
01:48:075 (10) - ^
01:49:116 (2) - remove this, make 01:48:943 (1) a slider to 01:49:289 and put a note on 01:49:463 ? sounds better imo

i cant really mod another's or extra's that well, sorry good luck though!

-Dave Strider- wrote:

m4m!

standard

00:00:388 (1,2) - i dont think this goes well with the music, try something like this instead?
00:05:937 (1,2) - ^
00:11:486 (1,2) - ^ there are more but im lazy ;w;
00:14:607 (1) - remove the NC here
01:04:550 (1,2,3,4) - this doesn't really look like it goes with the song imo

hyper

00:35:937 (11) - NC here?
00:38:711 (10) - ^
00:41:486 (10) - ^
00:42:353 (1) - remove NC (then put NC on 00:43:740 (2) )
01:00:388 (9) - NC here?
01:31:429 (11) - ^
01:34:203 (10) - ^
01:36:978 (10) - ^
01:42:527 (11) - ^
01:45:300 (10) - ^
01:48:075 (10) - ^
01:49:116 (2) - remove this, make 01:48:943 (1) a slider to 01:49:289 and put a note on 01:49:463 ? sounds better imo

i cant really mod another's or extra's that well, sorry good luck though!

6th wrote:

Hello! m4m

[Beginner]
00:20:156 (1,2) - Make a complete slider instead. Actually tapping here 00:20:850 - doesn't fit so well if you listen carefully.
00:56:746 - Try at least to change slider's direction here ?
01:28:133 - ^
01:23:683 - Blanket could be improved
01:32:295 (1) - Wrongly snapped

[Normal]
00:31:255 (1) - Increase spacing
00:36:110 (4,5,6) - I suggest reducing spacing a tiny bit between circles to make it easier to play.
00:54:492 - Don't ignore this
00:54:839 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't really flow well for a Normal difficulty :/
00:59:000 - I feel like this part is more intense but it's easier than before in terms of density.
01:20:503 (4) - Jump is too harsh here
01:29:174 - Break is not long enough
01:50:503 (1) - Should end on blue tick according to what you're mapping.

[Standard]
00:09:752 (2,3) - That stack looks a bit random
00:19:463 (3) - Extend it to cover the whole sound ?
00:21:544 (1) - Too short.
00:46:688 (2,3,4) - Try making the pattern regular, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5241794
00:53:451 (4,5) - Too curved... could flow better. 00:54:145 (6,7,8) - makes it strange because it's suddenly linear.
01:02:469 (3) - That jump is really exagerated
01:37:844 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uninteresting to play imo. Map it as Normal.

[Hyper]
01:00:388 (9) - NC
01:40:272 (8) - This is a bit surprising tbh, I'd have converted it to 2 sliders repeat slider works well here imo
00:50:330 - Since you're ignoring it I'd have extended 00:49:463 (6) - to blue tick
00:59:000 (7,1) - NCs

[Another]
A lot of patterns, stacks and SV changes are really forced just to look cool at the expense of playability.

Good luck!

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6th wrote:

Hello! m4m

[Beginner]
00:20:156 (1,2) - Make a complete slider instead. Actually tapping here 00:20:850 - doesn't fit so well if you listen carefully.
00:56:746 - Try at least to change slider's direction here ? dont rly undersstand you ,will out of DS
01:28:133 - ^
01:23:683 - Blanket could be improved done
01:32:295 (1) - Wrongly snapped fixed

[Normal]
00:31:255 (1) - Increase spacing
00:36:110 (4,5,6) - I suggest reducing spacing a tiny bit between circles to make it easier to play. well , remake them 1.1x remain this
00:54:492 - Don't ignore this fixed
00:54:839 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't really flow well for a Normal difficulty :/ thx, i will consider it
00:59:000 - I feel like this part is more intense but it's easier than before in terms of density. reamin
01:20:503 (4) - Jump is too harsh here fixed some
01:29:174 - Break is not long enough
01:50:503 (1) - Should end on blue tick according to what you're mapping. yes ,right

[Standard]
00:09:752 (2,3) - That stack looks a bit random i feel it fit the music
00:19:463 (3) - Extend it to cover the whole sound ? seems good
00:21:544 (1) - Too short.
00:46:688 (2,3,4) - Try making the pattern regular, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5241794 yep, fixed
00:53:451 (4,5) - Too curved... could flow better. 00:54:145 (6,7,8) - makes it strange because it's suddenly linear. fixed
01:02:469 (3) - That jump is really exagerated i know this, but broke the pattern
01:37:844 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uninteresting to play imo.Map it as Normal. will consider how to remap this
remaped this part
Good luck!