New cool timing.

Download: Trey Parker - America, Fuck Yeah (Galkan92) [Easy].osu

Download: Trey Parker - America, Fuck Yeah (Galkan92) [Normal].osu

Download: Trey Parker - America, Fuck Yeah (Galkan92) [Hard].osu

Here we go~

All of them are suggestion, exceptions will be signalized.
Hitsound Modding~
Oh god, so much sounds o-o'

First of all, for all difficults, decrease the volume, it's too high :3
Easy

Normal

Hard

Phew! Thats it! Good luck~

Yo

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

1. I got offset: 9,573. (Yours feels a bit late)
2. I don't think "Team World Police" needs to be in the tags, since those are already in the source
3. Delete the .osb file, since there isn't a storyboard so it isn't being used

[EASY]

00:58:808 (1) - Push this 1/4 forward? (and make it 1/4 shorter too if you do this). It sounds like you've pushed it 1/4 too far back.

[NORMAL]

This is one tough normal. I guess I can't criticise it much for that though, especially since there is an easy, but this is a pretty hard normal.

Increase circle size by 1 notch? Might work better that way IMO.

00:09:579 (x) - This is just begging for a beat to be put here. Maybe you could put a beat down there?
00:32:167 (8) - New combo here maybe. This combo has been going on for a while.
00:41:520 (1) - Move this 1/4 forward? (and make it 1/4 shorter too if you do this.
01:13:108 (1) - This beat is unsnapped

[HARD]

00:15:226 (11) - Move this away from (10), since spacing here currently doesn't make much sense. I'd turn on distance snap and move it. Much easier that way. Add a new combo on (11) as well.
00:41:520 (1) - Like in Normal, move this 1/4 forward and make it 1/4 shorter?
00:47:343 (10) - Add a new combo
00:54:049 (1) - And remove this new combo too

Even though this map isn't nothing too special, it is fairly solid, even though it is flawed. Your new combo's didn't make much sense, but they did their job mostly, so I didn't point it out too much. Not too bad.

Starred
fuck yeah

Applied. I wasn't able to fix map, 'cause I hadn't my video card but now is ok.

[General]
For me 85 sounds way to slow for this song 170 sounds better to me so change the BPMs that have 75 to 170 please and the 75,50 to 171. (It's not that important unless you want faster sliders/faster metronome though)
If you do that change the slider velocities, change the slider tick rate and recalculate the slider lengths on all the difficulties.

I kinda wished the Normal background was on all difficulites. (Although if you like it this was keep it)

The hitsounds felt somewhat random and could be placed at more fitting places, like wistles would be great to when he says "Fuck Yeah"

[All difficulites]
The timing should be the same on all difficulties.

[Easy]
Why does this have spinner in the intro when the others don't? I think it's better it's on every difficulty or on none.

Just because it's a easy doesn't mean you have to have very very slow sliders, I think faster sliders would be better here.

All the breaks in this difficulty just feels unfitting, can't you map those parts too?

00:18:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is a bit tricky to follow for an easy. I think it's better if you remove these circles and make a long slider that starts where (1) was and ended where (7) was

[Normal]
You forgot to remove Team World Police from tags here.

Those 1/8 short repeating sliders is unfitting in my opinion and I wish you organized it a bit better.

00:28:631 (3) - I suggest you remove the repeats arrows and add circles were the circles was.

00:51:749 (7) - This sounds far better as a 1/4 long slider without any repeats.

01:13:108 (1) - This beat is unsnapped (I know doomsday said this too but you haven't fixed this.)
To fix it, move it to the closest white tick.

01:54:552 (1) - This 9 second slider is very boring and tiering imo. I know it fit's but I kinda wish you had something more fun here.

[Hard]
You forgot to remove Team World Police from tags here too.

00:14:337 (9,10) - Remove (10) and move (9) 1/4 forward on the timeline and add a circle were (9) started before.

00:24:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The spacing during this part makes no sense, please distance snap them.

01:25:982 (2) - Remove this, it's on (1) and that isn't allowed.

01:42:212 (3) and 01:43:703 (3) - What with the 1/8 here, move it 1/8 forward on the timeline.

01:42:563 (1) - Move this 1/4 forward on the timeline,

01:45:545 (2,3) - Why two circles here? I think one is enough

01:54:552 (1) - Same thing as in normal.


Ok... almost a page now, that's enough modding. (For now at least)
I think there is a bit too much that needs to be improved for me to give a star right now.
I liked the part after the first break on hard though.

Keep working, get more mods and I think this will be ranked some day.

Xgor wrote:

The hitsounds felt somewhat random and could be placed at more fitting places, like wistles would be great to when he says "Fuck Yeah"

I might wrong understood Dragvon in some cases, I'll look on it later. Change-able

Xgor wrote:

General
The timing should be the same on all difficulties.

It is. Easy has additional timing sections (I mean I deleted them from [Normal] and [Hard]) 'cause ShaggoN made it if I would want to map intro. I used only spinners there. ?

Xgor wrote:

[Easy]
Why does this have spinner in the intro when the others don't? I think it's better it's on every difficulty or on none.

I feel 2 easy spinners as intro don't fit on Normal+ maps. Denied

Xgor wrote:

Just because it's a easy doesn't mean you have to have very very slow sliders, I think faster sliders would be better here.

And just because it's Easy they can't be fast. They aren't so slow after all. Denied

Xgor wrote:

All the breaks in this difficulty just feels unfitting, can't you map those parts too?

If you say so. Accepted

Xgor wrote:

00:18:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is a bit tricky to follow for an easy. I think it's better if you remove these circles and make a long slider that starts where (1) was and ended where (7) was

You've got to be bloody kidding me. Instead of this I've added distance snaps here. Denied

Xgor wrote:

[Normal]
You forgot to remove Team World Police from tags here.

My mistake. Accepted

Xgor wrote:

Those 1/8 short repeating sliders is unfitting in my opinion and I wish you organized it a bit better.

Where do you see 1/8 slider here? ó.ó Denied

Xgor wrote:

00:28:631 (3) - I suggest you remove the repeats arrows and add circles were the circles was.

You mean "where reverse arrows used to be"? Accepted

Xgor wrote:

00:51:749 (7) - This sounds far better as a 1/4 long slider without any repeats.

For me it sounds the same, but it looks better indeed. Accepted

Xgor wrote:

01:13:108 (1) - This beat is unsnapped (I know doomsday said this too but you haven't fixed this.)
To fix it, move it to the closest white tick.

I've changed it once and now again AIMod says that isn't snapped. And it's already on white tick. (It can't be snapped at all, 'cause it's first object after break ó.ó) ?

Xgor wrote:

01:54:552 (1) - This 9 second slider is very boring and tiering imo. I know it fit's but I kinda wish you had something more fun here.

It's spinner. And what you want to do here? Streams? Denied

Xgor wrote:

[Hard]
You forgot to remove Team World Police from tags here too.

Weird, I thought I removed them already. Accepted

Xgor wrote:

00:14:337 (9,10) - Remove (10) and move (9) 1/4 forward on the timeline and add a circle were (9) started before.

Okay. Accepted

Xgor wrote:

00:24:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The spacing during this part makes no sense, please distance snap them.

Okay. Accepted

Xgor wrote:

01:25:982 (2) - Remove this, it's on (1) and that isn't allowed.

I did this but I'm not sure... in Editor before change it didn't look good but it suited with hitsounds. Change-able

Xgor wrote:

01:42:212 (3) and 01:43:703 (3) - What with the 1/8 here, move it 1/8 forward on the timeline.

Better. Accepted

Xgor wrote:

01:42:563 (1) - Move this 1/4 forward on the timeline

Got it. Accepted

Xgor wrote:

01:45:545 (2,3) - Why two circles here? I think one is enough

Done. Accepted

Xgor wrote:

01:54:552 (1) - Same thing as in normal.

I'm sorry but I couldn't map this fragment harder. And I don't want to make this [Insane]. Denied

[Easy]

You should map it until the end, uh.

00:14:514 (4,1) - Spacing.
00:18:043 (1,2) - Instead of using 1/4 here, make (1) shorter by 1/4.
00:22:631 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Unreasonable spacing change. It's just stupid, replace with spacing value 1,2x.
00:29:337 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing.
00:31:455 (4,1) - Spacing.
00:31:455 (4,1) - Another spacing change...
00:42:043 (1) - Move 1/1 forward.
00:49:808 (2,1) - Spacing.
00:51:220 (2,1) - Spacing.
00:52:631 (2,1) - Spacing.
00:54:043 (2,1) - Spacing.
00:55:455 (2,1) - Spacing.
00:56:867 (2,1) - Spacing.


[Normal]

Nothing though, but sometimes the patterns are boring (because of the repetitive song).


[Hard]
00:19:455 (5) - Make 1/4 shorter. Sounds better.
00:35:514 (4,5) - Inconsistent timing.
00:40:455 (7) - Stack on vanishing (2)/(5)?
00:45:220 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:53:690 (3,4) - Spacing.
01:44:142 (1) - Expand to the next white tick.

It's better now though.
can't star it since I starred it already

Miliard

I liek that.

Star

oh hi

[Easy]
00:27:925 (2,3) - spacing
00:41:690 (1) - spinner should end on 00:44:161
00:44:867 (1) - delete slider, add note
00:45:220 (2) - add note
00:46:278 (2) - new combo
00:52:631 (2) - spacing?

[Normal]
why you not map first seconds like in easy?
00:12:396 (1) - ugly slider
00:34:984 (1) - spacing, a bit down, compare to (2)
00:41:690 (1) - like in easy
01:30:041 - big mess here with combo, this one to 11th is too big and next (1,2) combo too small, try to make (1,2,3,4) combo
example:
01:30:041 (1) - new combo
01:31:452 (5) - new combo
01:32:864 (9) - new combo
and next... try in all that part
01:41:335 (3) - new combo, and fix the slider

[Hard]
00:32:161 (9) - new combo
00:41:690 (1) - like in easy and normal
00:50:514 (6) - new combo
00:51:749 (11) - ^
00:54:749 (6) - ^
00:56:161 (11) - ^
01:13:101 ~ 01:33:946 - comparing to normal diff - good combos in this part 1,2,3,4,5,6 is ok
01:34:982 (1) - but why you short it again to 1,2,3? stay with 1,2,3,4,5,6

so.. good map, only sometimes boring when the patterns are similar
good luck with your 1st beatmap

sup,

[Easy]
0:22:631 (1) - why you put new combo right there? delete it imo :)
0:26:514 (1) - move it little bit towards down
0:33:572 (1, 2) - move the second circle to make it look like mirrored 0:27:925
0:31:455 (4) - redirect that slider towards the circle
0:34:984 (1) - new combo
0:36:043 (1) - ...and delete it from here :p
0:36:043 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) - anyway, this section isnt easy friendly, move 2 and 4 a little bit towards other circles
0:47:690 (1) - delete combo

[Normal]
1:34:982 - 1:41:335 - delete new combos from the (3, 4) sections (compare combos in normal and hard :p)

[Hard]
0:24:043 (1) - move new combo from 0:24:043 to 0:23:514 imho


[General]
nice map as a first one, good luck with it ;)

Hello there.

[Hard]
I think you overused the normal claps, especially in the second half of the map. Try using less of them, it will sound alot better. I also recommed overall difficulty +1 to make it easier to read.
00:09:574 (1) - This slider doesn't go along with the music
00:49:808 (4) - This beat should be further from the previous one
01:13:100 - The map gets very repetitive here, try more different patterns
01:43:615 (2,3) - Place this stack closer to the previous slider

Normal
01:15:923 (5) - New combo
01:18:747 (4) - ^
01:20:158 (8) - ^
01:22:982 (4) - ^
01:24:394 (8) - ^

Easy
00:46:278 (3,4,5) - I'd space these further from each other. Might cause some confusion for new players.

Other than that everything looks fine~

Hitsounds Re-check




Yay! That's it! Star

Thanks guys! ^_^

Hi
[General]
Try to have a better .mp3 o_o'
Delete the useless .osb file and Full submit

[Easy]
00:24:749 (2,4,6) - Remove clap
00:25:102 (3,5) - Add Clap

[Normal]
00:51:749 (7) - Stack this slider with (5,6)
01:45:896 (1) - Move 1/4 earlier and extand by 1/4

[Hard]
00:25:808 (8) - BAD

K' Star~~

KuraiPettan wrote:

[General]
Try to have a better .mp3 o_o'
Delete the useless .osb file and Full submit

MP3 quality is fine, surely better than THIS. My MP3 has just a bit lowered volume.
There's no .osb at all so I don't know where you see it. (I don't know why, but it was auto-creating itself but I already fixed it) Denied

KuraiPettan wrote:

[Easy]
00:24:749 (2,4,6) - Remove clap
00:25:102 (3,5) - Add Clap

[Normal]
00:51:749 (7) - Stack this slider with (5,6)
01:45:896 (1) - Move 1/4 earlier and extand by 1/4

Hell's no, that sounds worse after this. Denied

KuraiPettan wrote:

[Hard]
00:25:808 (8) - BAD

I don't know where you see a fault here Denied

Anyway thanks for star.

Also, I won't accept any hitsounds modding for now. They're finished already.

1st offset 9,583
2nd offset 73,090
others look fine
slider tick rate 2 sounds great so add that to all diffs

Thanks for this fix and for star

poof!

Good luck :3

ohshit
i've been waiting for this beatmap since fucking team america

[General]

1. Hitvolume seems to be a bit too loud. Can you decrease it? Just a tick or two would be fine.
2. Timing should be the same for every difficulty, even for unused sections.

[Easy]

1. I've always disliked half-mapped difficulties.

00:49:112 - I'd like the spacing to be more consistent from this point and on.

[Normal & Hard]

1. Add spinners like in [Easy]?

Well, I think this map can still be improved... but it's good enough.

Pop for a bit~

Hitsounds have already their volume turned down and yet they are too loud for you?
Ok, I will map rest of song on [Easy] though I think it's not necessary. If players want to get more points, they should learn harder diffs.
And those spinners... I know they suit to the music but I don't feel they suit on all difficulties. That's the reason I deleted those "additional" timing sections.

Can't do it now (and in nearest days) 'cause my video card is broken

Update.

Please don't bubble it yet. I still consider few changes. (e.g. hitsound modding 2nd half on [Easy])
Also, why do not box and spoilerbox work on Scoreboard listing?

Galkan92 wrote:

Ok, I will map rest of song on [Easy] though I think it's not necessary. If players want to get more points, they should learn harder diffs.

It's not only for that... not every map exists only for the sake of scoring, because that would be sad and pointless. It's for having a complete and good mapset. I actually think the second half of Easy came out better than the first half!

Great job, by the way. It's more solid to me now. Just take a look at what I pointed on Easy (also at 01:52:787 (1,2,3) for inconsistent spacing), and I'll return the bubble.

Galkan92 wrote:

Also, why do not box and spoilerbox work on Scoreboard listing?

Because they're not meant to be used there. Just get rid of the spoilerbox.

Okay, final hitsound check i hope @.@

<Easy>
01:13:795 (2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2) - Whistle in the first note of them also.
01:30:737 (2,2,2,2,2,2,2,...) -Whistle like the previous section. And remove Claps!
01:43:440 (2) - Claps in the first and last notes
01:44:843 (2) - Claps in both.

Now get it ranked /o/

Finished.

Rebubbled.

TEST FOR GENS


[TimingPoints]
1806,1153.84615384615,3,1,0,51,1,0
5121,1142.85714285714,4,1,0,52,1,0
9573,705.882352941176,4,1,0,52,1,0
26527,705.882352941176,4,1,0,52,1,0
49128,705.882352941176,4,1,0,52,1,0
73095,705.882352941176,4,1,0,52,1,0
106964,705.882352941176,4,1,0,52,1,0
112816,705.882352941176,4,1,0,52,1,0
113550,705.882352941176,4,1,0,52,1,0
114110,705.882352941176,4,1,0,52,1,0
123265,705.882352941176,4,1,0,52,1,0

ranked sorry for the wait

FUCK YEAH

FUCK YEAH