1. 00:22:795 (3,4) - can neat more
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:53:195 (4,5) - imo clap on these slider head are noisy, i suggest place clap on 00:52:995 - 00:53:795 -
3. 00:54:795 (4,5) - same
4. 00:58:595 (2) - i think you can use s:c1 hitclap here
5. 00:59:795 (4) - head whistle
6. 01:00:395 (1) - ^
7. 01:18:195 (1) - head finish

1. 00:25:395 (5) - nc? rhythm be sparse here

Rizia wrote:

[General]
you should move preview point to 00:58:295 - , so we can listen more preview time fix

[Cappuccino]

1. 00:22:795 (3,4) - can neat more
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:53:195 (4,5) - imo clap on these slider head are noisy, i suggest place clap on 00:52:995 - 00:53:795 -
3. 00:54:795 (4,5) - same
4. 00:58:595 (2) - i think you can use s:c1 hitclap here
5. 00:59:795 (4) - head whistle
6. 01:00:395 (1) - ^
7. 01:18:195 (1) - head finish all fix

[Taeyang's Hard]

1. 00:25:395 (5) - nc? rhythm be sparse here

nice song
good luck

Karen wrote:

hello. m4m with Taeyang.

[Easy]

1. 01:28:395 - increase volume here, the finish sound is hard to hear, also it's unnecessary to mute the spinner. (same for Normal) fix with normal

[Taeyang's Hard]

1. OD6 is enough, 6,2 looks weird
2. 00:05:595 (2) - delete this note or move it to 00:05:795 - , it sounds unnecessary here
3. 00:12:195 (4) - whistle?

[Cappuccino]

1. 00:01:395 (1,2,3) - notice the spacing of these objects, you can find that 00:02:195 (2,3) - this 1/2 rhythm spacing is the same with 00:01:395 (1,2) - this 1/1 rhythm spacing, i suggest to avoid it defer
2. 00:17:395 (1,2,3) - a bit uncomfortable to play i think, that blanket looks forced, suggestion:
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:46:595 (2,3,4) - forced blanket again, suggestion:
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:05:395 (1) - try ctrl+g, looks more comfortable
5. overall this diff needs more improvements on details, like those unnatural blankets and stacks, try to make a balance between flow and aesthetics, but playability always has more priority. all fix others

cute BGs ww
Good luck~

1. 00:00:795 (1,2) - I think that such part should use sliderslide of the long silence.
2. 00:02:795 (1) - add whistle on slider end.
3. 00:04:195 (5) - 00:05:995 (1) - same as above.
4. 00:07:395 (6,8) - add whistle.
5. 00:07:795 (1) - I think remove whistle add finish better.
6. 00:09:195 (1) - add whistle on slider end.
7. 00:10:995 (1) - same as 00:07:795 (1) -
8. 00:11:395 (3,4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try an arrange like this.
   
9. 00:13:595 (5) - add clap and whistle on slider end.
10. 00:13:995 (6) - add whistle.
11. 00:16:395 (3,4) - add whistle on slider head. and remove whistle on slider end at 00:16:395 (3) -
12. 00:17:195 (5) - 00:18:795 (7) - add whistle.
13. 00:19:595 (2) - remove whistle on slider end. and add whistle on slider head.
14. 00:19:995 (3,7) - add whistle.
15. 00:21:795 (5) - add whistle on slider end.
16. 00:22:795 (3,4) - same as 00:16:395 (3,4) -
17. 00:23:595 (5) - 00:25:195 (7) - add whistle
18. 00:27:395 (2,3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try an arrange like this. please check on you are pattern 00:33:795 (2,3) -
    
19. 00:29:995 (6) - add whistle
20. 00:30:595 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
21. 00:31:595 (1) - 00:34:795 (1) - add whistle on slider head and end.
22. 00:36:395 (6) - add whistle
23. 00:36:995 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
24. 00:36:995 (2) - This spacing is really awkward. so move x479 y233 at 00:37:395 (3) -
25. add whistle 00:39:195 - and 00:39:395 - and 00:39:595 -
26. 00:42:795 (8) - 00:43:595 (3) - add whistle
27. 00:45:995 (5) - add whistle
28. 00:47:595 (1) - add whistle on slider head and end.
29. 00:50:795 (1) - add whistle on slider head and remove whistle on slider end.
30. 00:51:195 (2,5) - add whistle
31. 00:52:395 (1) - 00:53:995 (1) - 00:55:595 (1) - add whistle on slider end.
32. 00:58:395 (1,3) - add whistle
33. 01:01:195 (3) - add whistle
34. 01:01:795 (6) - add whistle on slider end.
35. 01:03:195 (4) - changed 1/4 slider repeat more better much.
    
36. 01:03:595 (1) - add whislte on slider head and end.
37. 01:04:395 (3,6) - add whistle.
38. 01:06:795 (1) - add whistle on slider head and end.
39. 01:07:595 (3) - add whistle on slider head and remove whistle on slider end.
40. 01:08:995 (3,4,5) - same as 00:11:395 (3,4,5) -
41. 01:11:195 (4,5) - same as 00:13:595 (5,6) -
42. 01:13:195 (1) - add whislte on slider head and end.
43. 01:14:795 (5) - 01:15:595 (3) - add whistle
44. 01:16:395 (1) - add whislte on slider head and end.
45. 01:17:995 (5) - add whistle
46. 01:23:195 (1,4) - add whistle
47. 01:25:595 (3) - add whistle on slider end. and 01:25:995 (4) - add whistle

Satellite wrote:

Hello.
some hitsound modding

[Cappuccino]

1. 00:00:795 (1,2) - I think that such part should use sliderslide of the long silence.
2. 00:02:795 (1) - add whistle on slider end.
3. 00:04:195 (5) - 00:05:995 (1) - same as above.
4. 00:07:395 (6,8) - add whistle.
5. 00:07:795 (1) - I think remove whistle add finish better.
6. 00:09:195 (1) - add whistle on slider end.
7. 00:10:995 (1) - same as 00:07:795 (1) -
8. 00:11:395 (3,4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try an arrange like this.
   - sorry it's follow vocal
9. 00:13:595 (5) - add clap and whistle on slider end.
10. 00:13:995 (6) - add whistle.
11. 00:16:395 (3,4) - add whistle on slider head. and remove whistle on slider end at 00:16:395 (3) -
12. 00:17:195 (5) - 00:18:795 (7) - add whistle.
13. 00:19:595 (2) - remove whistle on slider end. and add whistle on slider head.
14. 00:19:995 (3,7) - add whistle.
15. 00:21:795 (5) - add whistle on slider end.
16. 00:22:795 (3,4) - same as 00:16:395 (3,4) -
17. 00:23:595 (5) - 00:25:195 (7) - add whistle
18. 00:27:395 (2,3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try an arrange like this. please check on you are pattern 00:33:795 (2,3) -
    
19. 00:29:995 (6) - add whistle
20. 00:30:595 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
21. 00:31:595 (1) - 00:34:795 (1) - add whistle on slider head and end.
22. 00:36:395 (6) - add whistle
23. 00:36:995 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
24. 00:36:995 (2) - This spacing is really awkward. so move x479 y233 at 00:37:395 (3) -
25. add whistle 00:39:195 - and 00:39:395 - and 00:39:595 -
26. 00:42:795 (8) - 00:43:595 (3) - add whistle
27. 00:45:995 (5) - add whistle
28. 00:47:595 (1) - add whistle on slider head and end.
29. 00:50:795 (1) - add whistle on slider head and remove whistle on slider end.
30. 00:51:195 (2,5) - add whistle
31. 00:52:395 (1) - 00:53:995 (1) - 00:55:595 (1) - add whistle on slider end.
32. 00:58:395 (1,3) - add whistle
33. 01:01:195 (3) - add whistle
34. 01:01:795 (6) - add whistle on slider end.
35. 01:03:195 (4) - changed 1/4 slider repeat more better much.
    
36. 01:03:595 (1) - add whislte on slider head and end.
37. 01:04:395 (3,6) - add whistle.
38. 01:06:795 (1) - add whistle on slider head and end.
39. 01:07:595 (3) - add whistle on slider head and remove whistle on slider end.
40. 01:08:995 (3,4,5) - same as 00:11:395 (3,4,5) - - sorry it's follow vocal
41. 01:11:195 (4,5) - same as 00:13:595 (5,6) -
42. 01:13:195 (1) - add whislte on slider head and end.
43. 01:14:795 (5) - 01:15:595 (3) - add whistle
44. 01:16:395 (1) - add whislte on slider head and end.
45. 01:17:995 (5) - add whistle
46. 01:23:195 (1,4) - add whistle
47. 01:25:595 (3) - add whistle on slider end. and 01:25:995 (4) - add whistle

GL ~

Karen wrote:

Recheck, don't kudosu this post.

Cappuccino

1. 00:01:395 (1,2,3) - uh this is so noticable but you rejected it in my previous mod so up to you, 00:02:195 (2,3) - such a big jump isn't needed i think
2. 00:05:995 (1) - try ctrl+g, more fun imo.
3. 00:19:595 (2,3) - enlarge the spacing since it looks so small comparing with your large spacings before this 00:18:595 (6,7,1,2) -
4. 00:27:395 (2,3) - this looks too near while you made a jump at 00:27:795 (3,4) - this
5. 00:32:395 (3) - the rhythm here is strange, you added clap on 00:32:595 - and also the vocal which should be emphasized is on 00:32:595 - this tick too, so try another rhythm like
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:32:895 (6) - remove this note since it's badly overmapped i think
7. 00:33:295 - then why skip this?
8. 00:48:595 (3,5) - this looks ugly, try overlap them less or just stack them
9. 00:55:595 (1,2,3) - stack them as well for consistency with 00:52:395 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
10. 01:01:595 (5) - i know you wanted to stack this with a slider tail but that destroys the flow i think, moving this to another place like (368,322) would be better i think
11. 01:01:595 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - in this part, your flows are all with the same direction (from left to right), which is kinda weird to play, try to use various kinds of flows to make your map more interesting instead of spamming one
12. 01:26:195 (1,2,3) - just personal opinion, these 3 sliders skipped some interesting 1/4 beats ;w; .. i like now sorry... bb
13. 00:22:795 (3) - remove the slider body whistle

hmm flow still has the space of being improved i my opinion, but this map has reached the standard of ranked maps in my opinion, so poke me back after you reply this mod, let's see what we can do.

Karen wrote:

pyon pyon~

Satellite wrote:

recheck and looks good! so Qualified!

Congrats on 1st <3

Shioi wrote:

앙 모아띠

Taeyang wrote:

굳 츄카츄카~!

Down wrote:

ㅊㅊㅊㅊ

Karen wrote:

Congratz again!
looking forward to more moe moe maps from you :3

Gloria Guard wrote:

축하드려요 ~

guineaQ wrote:

옹

뒷세계(?)에 오신걸 환영합니다.

Len wrote:

우와 친목 조진다 너도나도 다와서 축하한다고하네 부럽다........

Aco wrote:

Congraz

alacat wrote:

<3