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Camellia - farewell to today

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Alumetorz
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, 28 August 2023 at 21:04:11

Artist: Camellia
Title: farewell to today
Tags: avena electronic instrumental drumstep featured artist priti sudden shower CTCD-009 asaya ooya 大箭将也 cametek かめるかめりあ kamelcamellia
BPM: 170
Filesize: 9060kb
Play Time: 05:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. valediction feat. Avena (6,09 stars, 1564 notes)
Download: Camellia - farewell to today
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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August 28th, 2023: Updated metadata (artist unicode and tags) for loved process. Didn't touch anything else.

03:45:964 - 04:08:552 - Avena's awesome guest part
I had to remove LordRaika's mania difficulty, because of inactivity and I want to push this for rank, but I can send it to you if you message me.
Akiyama Mizuki
Holy shit, this is great...
Ora
This is a work of art, gj Alu :-)
Topic Starter
Alumetorz

bbj0920 wrote:

Holy shit, this is great...

Ora wrote:

This is a work of art, gj Alu :-)
thanks guys!
Frostmourne
with love <3 wubwub
Topic Starter
Alumetorz

FrostxE wrote:

with love <3 wubwub
<3
midori_wah
This is the map that I love so much, but I can't pass it ;-;. No hate doe.
-kevincela-
finallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Asphyxia
Another Alu masterpiece, such an amazing map
Ameth Rianno
Rank it please >.>
Topic Starter
Alumetorz
thanks a lot for the positive comments! <3

Ameth Rianno wrote:

Rank it please >.>
yes, i plan to do so!
Secretpipe
don't forget to add tags

kd pleaaaaase
Jinjin
IRC modding with Raika
01:47 LordRaika: jinnnnnn :D/
01:48 iJinjin: eyy =w=/
01:48 LordRaika: do u mind testing my new 6star map?
01:48 *LordRaika is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/891797 Camellia - farewell to today]
01:48 iJinjin: not wamed up ;w; but sure o/
01:48 LordRaika: okkkk >w< it has some easy difficulty curve
01:49 iJinjin: okie :3
01:49 LordRaika: from easy, to middle and get to real high density
01:49 iJinjin: also i resurrected tldne ~
01:49 LordRaika: some said, it will still hard... but easy because the acc is high because of lots of easy part :D hahahaa
01:49 LordRaika: great,... i probably will jst final check and jst bubble >w<
01:49 iJinjin: okie >w<
01:49 *iJinjin is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/891797 Camellia - farewell to today [LordRaika's Judgement]] <osu!mania> |7K|
01:49 iJinjin: ooh nice hitsounds :D
01:50 LordRaika: wait until u hear the growling vocal
01:54 LordRaika: ^^b
01:55 LordRaika: what do u think of this 6star
01:55 iJinjin: very nice map :3/
01:56 LordRaika: still.. some easy part, i think is too easy :D but i really like it , having a curve likee increasing difficulty overall
01:56 iJinjin: yee
01:56 iJinjin: 01:27:611 i think this might be too difficult tho ;w;
01:56 iJinjin: 01:27:611 -
01:56 iJinjin: triple brackets are rip
01:56 iJinjin: :v
01:56 LordRaika: ah the trill
01:57 iJinjin: you can maybe mix up the brackets and hands
01:57 iJinjin: :D
01:57 LordRaika: the trill.... i think is mostly hardddddd on right hand
01:57 LordRaika: jin
01:57 LordRaika: how bout here
01:57 LordRaika: 03:43:229 - i think this is fine
01:57 LordRaika: u dont miss it, jst a bit 200
01:57 iJinjin: yee that one's good
01:57 iJinjin: i thought the same thing
01:57 iJinjin: make it similar to that pattern
01:57 iJinjin: :3/
01:57 LordRaika: and
01:57 LordRaika: what IF i make it a bit random and some of it,.. have jack?
01:58 iJinjin: jacks are fine
01:58 LordRaika: will it.. like hard only on the jack>
01:58 iJinjin: in this bpm
01:58 LordRaika: and
01:58 LordRaika: just one more thing....
01:59 iJinjin: http://puu.sh/mPtBD/89ceb31caa.jpg you can prob even do these kinds of patterns
02:00 LordRaika: [http://puu.sh/mPtD4.jpg will this be ok?] it has the constant 1/2 but the 1/4 is different with little jack
02:00 LordRaika: oohh so this mini jack double 1/4 is fine as well? :D
02:00 iJinjin: yeah that looks good too
02:00 iJinjin: yup minijack is fine :)
02:00 iJinjin: but that pattern also looks good
02:00 iJinjin: haha
02:00 LordRaika: that looks really vibro-ing fun :D
02:01 iJinjin: :D
02:01 LordRaika: yay
02:01 LordRaika: i will go with vibro >w< its easier
02:01 iJinjin: >w<
02:01 LordRaika: u jst need speed... the above of my example MIGHT mind blocking because of 1/2 anchor >_<
02:01 LordRaika: just in case XD
02:01 iJinjin: hahaha
02:01 iJinjin: sounds good :D
02:02 LordRaika: tq jin ^^b

Very nice mania map by raika. Hope it goes to rank soon ^^
Vygatron
sexi map i love it keep it up raikoman proud of you fam
midori_wah
Nice to see this map back and running for ranking. :D
Flask
oh my goodness.
Rido
omg both diffs are fkn awesome! take my stars

edit: you might add "shudden shower" to the tags
AncuL
why arent we approving this

edit: for lordraika's diff

02:53:729 (173729|6) - move to the left hand please. not comfortable

01:06:081 (66081|1,66170|3,66258|5,66346|2,66434|4,66523|1,66611|5,66699|2,66787|4,66876|1,66964|5,67052|2,67140|4,67229|1,67317|3,67405|5,67493|2,67581|4,67670|1,67758|3) - consider ctrl+h for the note to match with the ln
LordRaika

AncuL wrote:

why arent we approving this
soon?


edit: for lordraika's diff

02:53:729 (173729|6) - move to the left hand please. not comfortable
i will rearrange this , but i will keep the fact that the single note is always on right hand.

01:06:081 (66081|1,66170|3,66258|5,66346|2,66434|4,66523|1,66611|5,66699|2,66787|4,66876|1,66964|5,67052|2,67140|4,67229|1,67317|3,67405|5,67493|2,67581|4,67670|1,67758|3) - consider ctrl+h for the note to match with the ln
errr... actually its perfectly intentional to have 1 hand shield LN and the other hand hit note....
because holding note and hitting extra note on the same hand is harder....
Thanks for the check :D


self mod and major change :
update the SFX hitsound into SB sample instead, to prevent echoing sound if hitting the SFX note unperfectly
Aras
LN hype owo owo owo owo
Star shaped shuriken thrown
Avena
spaghetti body WHOAAAAAA tudududu
Akali
m4nudes

General

wow camellia

nothing against the "futuristic city wallpaper" google searches but this one seems a bit too bright for a cool bg

swap c2 and c3 for better contrast


vandalisation ft Prit

00:01:140 (5) - could be 3/4 to signify the 00:01:405 - sample, or just use a note here

00:06:081 (2,3,4,5) - seem kinda too big for this intro

00:06:787 (5) - as 1:140

00:07:670 (3) - same, this time could be 1/4 slider?

00:09:964 (1) - curved for no reason only drums here

00:12:434 (5) - 3/4 or note for that sample again for variety

00:19:846 (1) - rotate 30CW, ctrl+G, move lower (so the start is with the flow implied by previous 1/4 slider) I remembered about this on my second play but somehow still sliderbroke here. Alternatively use shape like http://puu.sh/qUWYs.jpg with sharp turn I think this allows for better reaction to slowdown

00:32:199 (1) - seems like free 100 fiesta maybe http://puu.sh/qUXit.jpg (with good blanket obv)

00:32:729 (2) - is fine but kinda sounds like two samples and different from other 3 sliders

00:46:317 (1,2,3,4,5) - could swap NCs in all of those for visuals and no follow points between patterns (aesthetics who cares)

01:30:081 (1,2,1,2) - rotate 15 CW? kinda smoother attack from previous doughnut slider

01:34:670 (1) - don't like ignoring the synth could go http://puu.sh/qUXB1.jpg technical on this bitch (done better obv)

01:40:317 (1,2,3,4) - sliders are fine but maybe https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5982114 kinda fits here for pressure and stuff

01:45:964 (1) - like before, no mercy, do a stream

01:57:258 (1) - harder to introduce one here, still think about this

02:02:905 (1,2,3,4) - again kinda cool jumpstram material

02:08:552 (1) - even harder to make one without destroying everything but I think it's worth for that sexy synth passage :o

02:11:199 (4,5) - this felt weird, NC and ctrl+G maybe?

02:19:846 (1) - well rip I guess you won't bother with THIS many :c

02:25:493 (1,2,3,4) - again, could place the streams somehow vertically between 02:26:199 (1,2) - for a cool pattern

02:31:140 (1) - :?

02:39:258 (2,3,4,5,1) - same esthetic combo thing in this section.

PRITI

not doing the coolest part of the song yourself in 2016

I feel this section should use more syncopated slider starts but w/e, is consistent

03:51:434 (5) - 2 notes here

03:53:023 (1,2) - space out

03:58:670 (1,2) - space out

04:01:493 (1,2) -

04:04:317 (1,2) - natural angle with bigger spacing feels better than overlap like this

___________________

04:36:434 (1,2) - stream candidate imo

04:49:140 (7) - this thing again

05:04:493 (4,5,6,7) - map please

good shit go౦ԁ sHit:ok_hand: thats :heavy_check_mark: some good:ok_hand::ok_hand:shit right:ok_hand::ok_hand:there:ok_hand::ok_hand::ok_hand: right:heavy_check_mark:there :heavy_check_mark::heavy_check_mark:if i do ƽaү so my self :100: i say so :100: thats what im talking about right there right there (chorus: ʳᶦᵍʰᵗ ᵗʰᵉʳᵉ) mMMMMᎷМ:100: :ok_hand::ok_hand: :ok_hand:НO0ОଠOOOOOОଠଠOoooᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒ:ok_hand: :ok_hand::ok_hand: :ok_hand: :100: :ok_hand: :eyes: :eyes: :eyes: :ok_hand::ok_hand:Good shit
Topic Starter
Alumetorz

Akali wrote:

hugh mungus mod
m4nudes

General

wow camellia

nothing against the "futuristic city wallpaper" google searches but this one seems a bit too bright for a cool bg

swap c2 and c3 for better contrast


vandalisation ft Prit

00:01:140 (5) - could be 3/4 to signify the 00:01:405 - sample, or just use a note here i tried that when i mapped first, but it's too awkward. keeping it simple for the beginning

00:06:081 (2,3,4,5) - seem kinda too big for this intro changed

00:06:787 (5) - as 1:140 changed

00:07:670 (3) - same, this time could be 1/4 slider? changed, but not the 1/4s bit

00:09:964 (1) - curved for no reason only drums here well uh, it's randomly curved just like most other curved sliders in that intro

00:12:434 (5) - 3/4 or note for that sample again for variety

00:19:846 (1) - rotate 30CW, ctrl+G, move lower (so the start is with the flow implied by previous 1/4 slider) I remembered about this on my second play but somehow still sliderbroke here. Alternatively use shape like http://puu.sh/qUWYs.jpg with sharp turn I think this allows for better reaction to slowdown doneso

00:32:199 (1) - seems like free 100 fiesta maybe http://puu.sh/qUXit.jpg (with good blanket obv) fuck that curved slider, i made it straight now. looks cooler and plays better

00:32:729 (2) - is fine but kinda sounds like two samples and different from other 3 sliders changed

00:46:317 (1,2,3,4,5) - could swap NCs in all of those for visuals and no follow points between patterns (aesthetics who cares) k did that to every part

01:30:081 (1,2,1,2) - rotate 15 CW? kinda smoother attack from previous doughnut slider na it's gucci

01:34:670 (1) - don't like ignoring the synth could go http://puu.sh/qUXB1.jpg technical on this bitch (done better obv) no, too hard for that part and also blue tick stream and also i like it that way but mainly keeping it for playability

01:40:317 (1,2,3,4) - sliders are fine but maybe https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5982114 kinda fits here for pressure and stuff this is good, but i prefer mine

01:45:964 (1) - like before, no mercy, do a stream i disagree sorry

01:57:258 (1) - harder to introduce one here, still think about this etc

02:02:905 (1,2,3,4) - again kinda cool jumpstram material

02:08:552 (1) - even harder to make one without destroying everything but I think it's worth for that sexy synth passage :o i just noticed it's 1/6s synth so another reason i don't wanna map streams there

02:11:199 (4,5) - this felt weird, NC and ctrl+G maybe? i think it's fine

02:19:846 (1) - well rip I guess you won't bother with THIS many :c nah bruh LOL i would have if i agreed though

02:25:493 (1,2,3,4) - again, could place the streams somehow vertically between 02:26:199 (1,2) - for a cool pattern

02:31:140 (1) - :?

02:39:258 (2,3,4,5,1) - same esthetic combo thing in this section.

PRITI

not doing the coolest part of the song yourself in 2016

I feel this section should use more syncopated slider starts but w/e, is consistent

03:51:434 (5) - 2 notes here

03:53:023 (1,2) - space out

03:58:670 (1,2) - space out

04:01:493 (1,2) -

04:04:317 (1,2) - natural angle with bigger spacing feels better than overlap like this

___________________

04:36:434 (1,2) - stream candidate imo i wanna keep it fast paced with sliders here

04:49:140 (7) - this thing again fuck this thing

05:04:493 (4,5,6,7) - map please emphasis on drums tho

good shit go౦ԁ sHit:ok_hand: thats :heavy_check_mark: some good:ok_hand::ok_hand:shit right:ok_hand::ok_hand:there:ok_hand::ok_hand::ok_hand: right:heavy_check_mark:there :heavy_check_mark::heavy_check_mark:if i do ƽaү so my self :100: i say so :100: thats what im talking about right there right there (chorus: ʳᶦᵍʰᵗ ᵗʰᵉʳᵉ) mMMMMᎷМ:100: :ok_hand::ok_hand: :ok_hand:НO0ОଠOOOOOОଠଠOoooᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒ:ok_hand: :ok_hand::ok_hand: :ok_hand: :100: :ok_hand: :eyes: :eyes: :eyes: :ok_hand::ok_hand:Good shit
thanks for the mod, gonna mod your map in a couple of days. too busy rn
Avena
no fix ty
Vattux
alu mapping 8-)
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