Hello!
[Normal]
Its good. Some suggestions regarding the patterns
00:48:423 (5) - NC
00:49:315 (6) - extend it to start at 00:49:137 - this is where all the sounds are drum and vocal
00:51:993 (2,3) - try a pattern like this http://puu.sh/hF8c1/6634718d7a.jpg
[Hard]
Why is the spacing sometimes so small? The inconsistancy makes it harder to read, especially when there is one immediately followed by the other, for example compare space between 1,2 and 2,3 here 00:18:066 (1,2,3)
I'm not going to point out all of these places but they are mostly in the beginning before the kiai
00:16:098 - add a circle here
00:47:351 (1,2,3) - NC on 00:48:423 instead
01:11:992 (5,1) - add a triple between this - its weird that theres nothing here, theres vocal and piano in the music
01:21:456 (5) - NC
[Insane]
Its ok. Some parts have confusing spacing
00:11:813 (1,2,3,1) - try moving 1,2,3 down a bit - 3,1 is too close to each other, it looks like 1/2 but is actually 1/1
00:15:205 (1,2,1) - add a circle at 00:16:098, try placing them like this http://puu.sh/hF39o/01fed0c82d.jpg - i think there should be a sound here.
00:19:137 (4) - NC - to help reading this next part
00:42:172 (4,5,6,7,8) - try a placement like this http://puu.sh/hF4mq/17abbb6905.jpg - small jump on the drums but big jump on nothing in the music?
00:47:351 (1,2,3,4) - NC on 00:48:423 instead
00:54:672 (6,7,1) - try moving 1,2,3 up and to the right - this is confusing since first 2 is on 1/2 and next one is 1/1, does it really have to be stacked like this?
01:12:171 - add something here - same as Hard diffiuclty
01:21:099 (7) - NC
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Total time spent on mod: 1:30 ~ 1:45
Interesting song choice, even though its an anime song it has some nice complexity to it!
Good luck!
LEGEND
BLUE = Suggestions/comments
BLACK = Real problems
FORMAT
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Comments
00:00:00 - change - reason
If there is a reason, please read that before trying the changes!
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Total time spent on mod
Final comments
BLUE = Suggestions/comments
BLACK = Real problems
FORMAT
Diff Name
Comments
00:00:00 - change - reason
If there is a reason, please read that before trying the changes!
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Total time spent on mod
Final comments
[Normal]
Its good. Some suggestions regarding the patterns
00:48:423 (5) - NC
00:49:315 (6) - extend it to start at 00:49:137 - this is where all the sounds are drum and vocal
00:51:993 (2,3) - try a pattern like this http://puu.sh/hF8c1/6634718d7a.jpg
[Hard]
Why is the spacing sometimes so small? The inconsistancy makes it harder to read, especially when there is one immediately followed by the other, for example compare space between 1,2 and 2,3 here 00:18:066 (1,2,3)
I'm not going to point out all of these places but they are mostly in the beginning before the kiai
00:16:098 - add a circle here
00:47:351 (1,2,3) - NC on 00:48:423 instead
01:11:992 (5,1) - add a triple between this - its weird that theres nothing here, theres vocal and piano in the music
01:21:456 (5) - NC
[Insane]
Its ok. Some parts have confusing spacing
00:11:813 (1,2,3,1) - try moving 1,2,3 down a bit - 3,1 is too close to each other, it looks like 1/2 but is actually 1/1
00:15:205 (1,2,1) - add a circle at 00:16:098, try placing them like this http://puu.sh/hF39o/01fed0c82d.jpg - i think there should be a sound here.
00:19:137 (4) - NC - to help reading this next part
00:42:172 (4,5,6,7,8) - try a placement like this http://puu.sh/hF4mq/17abbb6905.jpg - small jump on the drums but big jump on nothing in the music?
00:47:351 (1,2,3,4) - NC on 00:48:423 instead
00:54:672 (6,7,1) - try moving 1,2,3 up and to the right - this is confusing since first 2 is on 1/2 and next one is 1/1, does it really have to be stacked like this?
01:12:171 - add something here - same as Hard diffiuclty
01:21:099 (7) - NC
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Total time spent on mod: 1:30 ~ 1:45
Interesting song choice, even though its an anime song it has some nice complexity to it!
Good luck!