This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年4月29日 at 12:08:50

Artist: Takahashi Yuu
Title: Hi wa Mata Noboru
Tags: 高橋優 陽はまた昇る ecdonald
BPM: 76
Filesize: 4462kb
Play Time: 03:44
Difficulties Available:

1. ecdonald's Insane (3.96 stars, 649 notes)
2. Insane (4.07 stars, 544 notes)
3. Normal (2.25 stars, 300 notes)

Download: Takahashi Yuu - Hi wa Mata Noboru
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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First map.I will be really happy if this map can be ranked.
如果你发现我的图可以提高的地方请告诉我。
如果觉得这张图烂到爆炸趁早remap的话……也请直说吧……
跪求音效师拯救……

Normal&Insane; by me
ecdonald's Insane: by ecdonald

2016.02.24：submitted
2016.03.01：Normal updated
2016.03.19 : ecdonald's Insane updated
2016.04.28：Insane updated (without hitsound)

Hi from my queue So here are some tips as promised

First thing I noticed your beatmap begins with 2 spinners in successions, try not to do that unless absolutely necessary. One should be ok ( I think ) but I woulnd't do it.
Secondly, a beatmap should consist of a healthy mix of sliders and hitcircles. Yours is mainly hitcircles
What I suggest you do for a start is to remove everything from that map, read this ->
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Beatmapping
and this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Mapping_Techniques , and play some Insane maps to get some inspiration on how a beatmap is made
Combo Colors - You should choose appropriate combo colors to match your beatmap background . I'm not sure if you want to stick to your current background but if you do, white does not suit it. Hurts my eyes ( Personal Opinion ) xp.

http://puu.sh/nqNqn/184d1c3e7a.jpg
Welp, I'm not too sure how to solve these problems , sincere apologies

Well, that should be enough to get you started Good Luck !

Ars Novaa wrote:

Hi from my queue So here are some tips as promised

First thing I noticed your beatmap begins with 2 spinners in successions, try not to do that unless absolutely necessary. One should be ok ( I think ) but I woulnd't do it.
Secondly, a beatmap should consist of a healthy mix of sliders and hitcircles. Yours is mainly hitcircles
What I suggest you do for a start is to remove everything from that map, read this ->
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Beatmapping
and this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Mapping_Techniques , and play some Insane maps to get some inspiration on how a beatmap is made
Combo Colors - You should choose appropriate combo colors to match your beatmap background . I'm not sure if you want to stick to your current background but if you do, white does not suit it. Hurts my eyes ( Personal Opinion ) xp.

http://puu.sh/nqNqn/184d1c3e7a.jpg
Welp, I'm not too sure how to solve these problems , sincere apologies

Well, that should be enough to get you started Good Luck !

thanks a lot for your advice

as you can see , this is my first map , so i really have no idea about how to add hitsounds and how to choose combo colors,so i will fix it soon after learning .

And i have niticed that i use too many hitcircles after i finished half of the beatmap , so i tried my best wo mix sliders in it , but it seems that still not enough , isnt it ?

To be honest , i won't remove everything cause restart it might makes me too tired , so i will fix it and add enough sliders in it . Of course the two beginning spinners .

And another question. Do you think that hitcircles and sliders in my beatmap can be a bit crowded sometimes ? I think it's crowded but have no idea how to make it better ……

My english is really bad so hope you can understand me !

Hello~, from my GD queue really nice song<3

I'd like point out some unrankable issues before I complete making the GD xD

kds pls xd

well, I made GD to the first verse's end and will finish all parts soon


Thanks!

Edit: sorry there was something I forgot to say I think offset is 7,033. I felt 7,053 is too early XD

Hi, from my NM queue

Since it's your first time , I'll point out the more important mistakes. After fixing those I can take a look at it again.

1. When I open AIMod (Ctrl-Shift-A), it says your audio is over the limit. Search online for any compressing software to compress your audio file and replace your current file. Click File -> Open Song Folder to see your files.

2. So, the difficulty of this map is around 4.5*, or Insane
Around this star level , the following difficulty settings are highly recommended:
HP Drain Rate: 5 around 6
Circle Size: 3 around 4
Approach Rate: around 9
Overall Difficulty: 6 around 7
The reason for these settings is they can disrupt gameplay if they're set too high or too low.

3. If you want your mapset to become ranked, you'll have to create more difficulties. Every mapset should have more than 2 difficulties (unless over 5 minutes), with at least one under 3 stars, more difficulties are recommended though. (Normally, it's spread like Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane). To create a new difficulty, click File->Create new difficulty. Those are the criteria for a mapset to become ranked.

4. Add hitsounds. No mapset can become ranked without hitsounds. Try adding some claps to your notes. Select the note, on the right side click clap, it should be highlighted now. This song has some claps itself so it should be fairly straightforward to match the claps to the music. Examples:
00:26:000 (1) - add a finish to this note
00:26:789 (5) - add a clap to this note
00:28:368 (5) - add a clap to this note
Sounds better right? Keep it up!

5. Background image. The background image did not show up for me, probably because of the name of the image. Click File -> Open Song Folder and change the name of the image to something like "bg".

Hope this helps! I'll take a look again once you've done the above. Happy mapping!

warpgenius wrote:

Hi, from my NM queue

Since it's your first time , I'll point out the more important mistakes. After fixing those I can take a look at it again.

1. When I open AIMod (Ctrl-Shift-A), it says your audio is over the limit. Search online for any compressing software to compress your audio file and replace your current file. Click File -> Open Song Folder to see your files.

2. So, the difficulty of this map is around 4.5*, or Insane
Around this star level , the following difficulty settings are highly recommended:
HP Drain Rate: 5 around 6
Circle Size: 3 around 4
Approach Rate: around 9
Overall Difficulty: 6 around 7
The reason for these settings is they can disrupt gameplay if they're set too high or too low.

3. If you want your mapset to become ranked, you'll have to create more difficulties. Every mapset should have more than 2 difficulties (unless over 5 minutes), with at least one under 3 stars, more difficulties are recommended though. (Normally, it's spread like Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane). To create a new difficulty, click File->Create new difficulty. Those are the criteria for a mapset to become ranked.

4. Add hitsounds. No mapset can become ranked without hitsounds. Try adding some claps to your notes. Select the note, on the right side click clap, it should be highlighted now. This song has some claps itself so it should be fairly straightforward to match the claps to the music. Examples:
00:26:000 (1) - add a finish to this note
00:26:789 (5) - add a clap to this note
00:28:368 (5) - add a clap to this note
Sounds better right? Keep it up!

5. Background image. The background image did not show up for me, probably because of the name of the image. Click File -> Open Song Folder and change the name of the image to something like "bg".

Hope this helps! I'll take a look again once you've done the above. Happy mapping!

Thanks a lot for your advice ! I didnt add hitsounds because i really have no idea about where to add which kind of hitsound , so your words do help me !

ecdonald wrote:

Hello~, from my GD queue really nice song<3

I'd like point out some unrankable issues before I complete making the GD xD

The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps for ranked, so please change to the 192kbps one ;w;
03:23:630 (3) - this sliderend is unsnapped
and how about adding kiai time?

kds pls xd

well, I made GD to the first verse's end and will finish all parts soon

data

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38895
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 6
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Hi wa Mata Noboru
TitleUnicode:陽はまた昇る
Artist:Takahashi Yuu
ArtistUnicode:高橋優
Creator:Mikako
Version:Insane
Source:
Tags:高橋優 陽はまた昇る ecdonald
BeatmapID:911453
BeatmapSetID:421407

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

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Thanks!

Edit: sorry there was something I forgot to say I think offset is 7,033. I felt 7,053 is too early XD

Really happy that you like this song and recieve my request !

Mikako wrote:

:o

Ars Novaa wrote:

Hi from my queue So here are some tips as promised

First thing I noticed your beatmap begins with 2 spinners in successions, try not to do that unless absolutely necessary. One should be ok ( I think ) but I woulnd't do it.
Secondly, a beatmap should consist of a healthy mix of sliders and hitcircles. Yours is mainly hitcircles
What I suggest you do for a start is to remove everything from that map, read this ->
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Beatmapping
and this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Mapping_Techniques , and play some Insane maps to get some inspiration on how a beatmap is made
Combo Colors - You should choose appropriate combo colors to match your beatmap background . I'm not sure if you want to stick to your current background but if you do, white does not suit it. Hurts my eyes ( Personal Opinion ) xp.

http://puu.sh/nqNqn/184d1c3e7a.jpg
Welp, I'm not too sure how to solve these problems , sincere apologies

Well, that should be enough to get you started Good Luck !

thanks a lot for your advice

as you can see , this is my first map , so i really have no idea about how to add hitsounds and how to choose combo colors,so i will fix it soon after learning .

And i have niticed that i use too many hitcircles after i finished half of the beatmap , so i tried my best wo mix sliders in it , but it seems that still not enough , isnt it ?

To be honest , i won't remove everything cause restart it might makes me too tired , so i will fix it and add enough sliders in it . Of course the two beginning spinners .

And another question. Do you think that hitcircles and sliders in my beatmap can be a bit crowded sometimes ? I think it's crowded but have no idea how to make it better ……

My english is really bad so hope you can understand me !

Well to answer some of your questions. Just note its based off my personal opinion so some might not agree with me.

For combo colors, pick what you think would blend in with your background . Hitsounds can be added on points during a song which have emphasis on the vocals/beats depending on your preference, but zero hitsounds is definitely a no.

Also , just a friendly tip, never be afriad to remap. For my first map ( which still happens to be unranked ), I had to remap it 5-6 times, with 4 difficulties and 3 mins worth of stuff to put in there. I'm not sure if other first time mappers had to remap or not but I know I had to. I also was lazy but this actually shows how dedicated and passionate you are to getting that particular map ranked and looking back, all those remaps helped me to improve as a mapper as I learnt more and more from each remap. In other news, I think I might want to remap it again :')

Also about the overcrowding part, you could try using Distance Snap which makes the distance between notes standardised so it won't seem too crowded...

Good Luck

NO KUDOSU

warpgenius wrote:

Hi, from my NM queue

Since it's your first time , I'll point out the more important mistakes. After fixing those I can take a look at it again.

1. When I open AIMod (Ctrl-Shift-A), it says your audio is over the limit. Search online for any compressing software to compress your audio file and replace your current file. Click File -> Open Song Folder to see your files.

2. So, the difficulty of this map is around 4.5*, or Insane
Around this star level , the following difficulty settings are highly recommended:
HP Drain Rate: 5 around 6
Circle Size: 3 around 4
Approach Rate: around 9
Overall Difficulty: 6 around 7
The reason for these settings is they can disrupt gameplay if they're set too high or too low.

3. If you want your mapset to become ranked, you'll have to create more difficulties. Every mapset should have more than 2 difficulties (unless over 5 minutes), with at least one under 3 stars, more difficulties are recommended though. (Normally, it's spread like Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane). To create a new difficulty, click File->Create new difficulty. Those are the criteria for a mapset to become ranked.

4. Add hitsounds. No mapset can become ranked without hitsounds. Try adding some claps to your notes. Select the note, on the right side click clap, it should be highlighted now. This song has some claps itself so it should be fairly straightforward to match the claps to the music. Examples:
00:26:000 (1) - add a finish to this note
00:26:789 (5) - add a clap to this note
00:28:368 (5) - add a clap to this note
Sounds better right? Keep it up!

5. Background image. The background image did not show up for me, probably because of the name of the image. Click File -> Open Song Folder and change the name of the image to something like "bg".

Hope this helps! I'll take a look again once you've done the above. Happy mapping!

Now i think i have tried my best to do with my beatmap, and i added a Normal Diff,although it seems too much difficult for a "normal" diff, from what the AiMod said.

还是先讲一些基本的东西

combo color不能两个都是白的 打图皮肤做成这样随意 作图的话请搞几个有一定区别的颜色 然后用nc把图分成一小段一小段 看着会很有条理
歌曲在适当的地方加个kiai会更爽 用快捷键ctrl+shift+p增加绿线设置kiai开启/关闭就行
虽然现在作图的人都不怎么重视音效，但从头到尾都是hitnormal实在是他妈的太吵 在timing界面改一下音效吧 具体怎么加音效可以看看贴吧精品区
四维我不知道你是不是故意的 不提了
song setup里调掉一些设置 比如enable countdown和widescreen support（没sb不需要开这个）

节奏我觉得先不提也差不多 凑合听得过去 真要讲的话就是适当地安排一些滑条 但是这个讲起来也有点麻烦

排列方面 除了串 其他的note互相都不要碰到 然后歌曲激烈的地方跳大点 相对平缓的地方间距就小点 对于新手来说排版先做干净 再往合理了做会比较容易上手

就这么多吧先 editor基础操作还是有教学贴的 贴吧或者forum中文板块都有

Hello~, sorry for my lateness>< I finished the GD! add pls


Good luck for rank!

ecdonald wrote:

Hello~, sorry for my lateness>< I finished the GD! add pls

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214,205,125980,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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267,344,204927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,221901,12,4,224927,0:0:0:0:

Good luck for rank!

Reeeeeally happy to hear that you have finished it !

And a reeeeeally great GD !

Have updated! And now I think there must be something I can do with my beatmap! I think I have got some insprition to make it easier to be ranked! From yours!

[General]

1. 倒计时和预览时间和ecdonald的gd不一致。
2. 请调节绿线音量，70%

[Normal]

1. 压到Normal的icon吧.

[Insane]

1. 既然你选了3.6SV，那就请不要用0.5x当标准间距，这样只会显得你的物件堆成一坨且滑条速度和整体违和
   (同一个音乐没什么变化的地方，打滑条和打note时的移速偏差过大)
   例如00:34:138 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
   
   间距控制应该是跟随音乐变化而变化。
   00:35:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 例如这部分，音乐激昂了起来，整体使用大间距会更加贴合音乐。
   00:44:006 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 和^相比，这部分是相对比较缓和的，使用和^部分更小的间距会更好，这里推荐是用正常的标准间距。
   03:07:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 最柔弱的部分放最少但最抓住重点的物件就好，同时间距相对缩小，如果柔弱部分和标准或是激昂部分都下这么满，那就无法体现出歌曲的变化了。
   
2. 物件不要堆在一起，这样很没有美感...
   
   img

   
3. 下节奏前选择好要跟的音轨，或是在一堆音轨中抓出重点。
   00:13:348 (1,2,3,4,5) - 如果你是跟人声，那么00:14:269 - 漏了音，这些地方请多加检查。
4. Overmap不一定是最好的选择。
   00:18:085 (4,5,6,7,8) - 像是这里，下一个从00:18:085 - 开始到00:18:480 - 结束的滑条则可以完美抓住吉他了。
   00:19:138 - 既然要跟吉他音轨，那就不要跟一半漏一半了。例如这里就漏了一个吉他的音。
   00:20:322 - 漏了人声

[Other]
前几天写一半发生了点事放置了几天...现在没有思路了，就先写这么点吧。
太久没写了代码都不会用了

从贴吧来的水摸，我是小尼玛。

先说说主难度吧。

首先说bpm，如果你每张图都用1/6做基础节奏，那还不如改一下timing然后用1/4。

其次是下节奏，这歌人声和吉他差不多同步，吉他是主体，鼓声比较少，所以跟吉他音可以。但是你在很多没有音的地方也放了note，我建议你重新听一遍节奏，再觉得哪些位置要放note。

然后就是排列，你这个图的排列我感觉是很难rank的，note间距不合音乐，而且flow过于单调，基本是在绕圈，给人的感觉就是，你大部分的note都能连成一个大滑条。这部分你可以参考其他人的图，把排列改一改。

至于那个GD，在排列上感觉还好，不过也有在没音的地方放note的问题。

lkx_Shore wrote:

[*]下节奏前选择好要跟的音轨，或是在一堆音轨中抓出重点。
00:13:348 (1,2,3,4,5) - 如果你是跟人声，那么00:14:269 - 漏了音，这些地方请多加检查。
[*]Overmap不一定是最好的选择。
00:18:085 (4,5,6,7,8) - 像是这里，下一个从00:18:085 - 开始到00:18:480 - 结束的滑条则可以完美抓住吉他了。
00:19:138 - 既然要跟吉他音轨，那就不要跟一半漏一半了。例如这里就漏了一个吉他的音。
00:20:322 - 漏了人声

我有个问题想请教一下。
因为这首歌歌手唱的时候，怎么说呢，他唱的节奏比较快，所以我想如果他唱的每个音都下note的话会感觉note太多了，所以就出现了00:20:322 - 这里三个音，我只下了一个滑条，这种处理思路不可以么？
00:14:269 - 这里的那个音也是类似的情况，我选择了在前一个相对的重音下note。
如果不可以的话，那么有什么不漏音的比较巧妙的方法么？

诶呀这个代码我完全不会用……

Mikako wrote:

我有个问题想请教一下。
因为这首歌歌手唱的时候，怎么说呢，他唱的节奏比较快，所以我想如果他唱的每个音都下note的话会感觉note太多了，所以就出现了00:20:322 - 这里三个音，我只下了一个滑条，这种处理思路不可以么？
00:14:269 - 这里的那个音也是类似的情况，我选择了在前一个相对的重音下note。
如果不可以的话，那么有什么不漏音的比较巧妙的方法么？

诶呀这个代码我完全不会用……

其实唱得快不快没有任何关系，你听的时候分清是长音还是短音就好了，短音下note长音下滑条。不过这里你只能怪歌手没完全唱到线上，这种去看其实很多，在线上照下就好。

00:20:322 - 是短音，下note
00:20:454 - 是长音，下滑条
00:14:269 - 有音就下，如果觉得全是note比较难排，可以前面4个note换成滑条而后面下note，也就是现在的情况下只在00:14:269 - 补个note。也有两个note一组排成3部分的排法...看你的难度来进行选择了

lkx_Shore wrote:

Mikako wrote:

我有个问题想请教一下。
因为这首歌歌手唱的时候，怎么说呢，他唱的节奏比较快，所以我想如果他唱的每个音都下note的话会感觉note太多了，所以就出现了00:20:322 - 这里三个音，我只下了一个滑条，这种处理思路不可以么？
00:14:269 - 这里的那个音也是类似的情况，我选择了在前一个相对的重音下note。
如果不可以的话，那么有什么不漏音的比较巧妙的方法么？

诶呀这个代码我完全不会用……

其实唱得快不快没有任何关系，你听的时候分清是长音还是短音就好了，短音下note长音下滑条。不过这里你只能怪歌手没完全唱到线上，这种去看其实很多，在线上照下就好。

00:20:322 - 是短音，下note
00:20:454 - 是长音，下滑条
00:14:269 - 有音就下，如果觉得全是note比较难排，可以前面4个note换成滑条而后面下note，也就是现在的情况下只在00:14:269 - 补个note。也有两个note一组排成3部分的排法...看你的难度来进行选择了

恩……大概又remap了一次，如果不介意的话，能不能再帮我看看 XD

3.6的sv太吓人......
rank图最多应该只能用三种滑条速度（没记错的话）0.8 0.9 1.0这三个最好合并
感觉这曲子应该是3/4拍，BPM用152比较好
00:07:033 (1) - 这个转盘建议从00:10:190 -开始，00:12:559 - 结束
00:13:348 (1,2,3) - 这么下感觉没有很好地表现曲子，2叠到1下面是不是更能表现那种停顿感？
00:13:875 - 漏音
00:15:454 (5,6) - 跳得太大
00:16:506 (1) - 建议改成三个单点
00:18:875 (5,6,7) - 这种大跳放in合适吗......后面还有很多类似的跳
00:37:822 (2,3,4) - 这个间距逼死强迫症
00:41:506 (7,8,9) - 这个跳意义不明，前面同样的节奏却没跳，这样会很突兀
00:42:032 (1,2,3,4) - 丑，建议统一一下间距
00:50:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 丑，另外强烈推荐学一下四方跳，三角跳，五角跳和六角跳，做跳图思路会清晰很多
00:54:401 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 跳图如果全是这种摆法就不好玩了
01:13:348 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种跳一般1/1才会考虑去放.....
01:26:769 (7) - 这个滑条感觉到01:27:296 - 这里就够了
01:34:664 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 丑
跳图的话还需要积累更多更有趣的摆法哟
一起加油吧♪(^∇^*)
good luck

kanor wrote:

3.6的sv太吓人......
rank图最多应该只能用三种滑条速度（没记错的话）0.8 0.9 1.0这三个最好合并
感觉这曲子应该是3/4拍，BPM用152比较好
00:07:033 (1) - 这个转盘建议从00:10:190 -开始，00:12:559 - 结束
00:13:348 (1,2,3) - 这么下感觉没有很好地表现曲子，2叠到1下面是不是更能表现那种停顿感？
00:13:875 - 漏音
00:15:454 (5,6) - 跳得太大
00:16:506 (1) - 建议改成三个单点
00:18:875 (5,6,7) - 这种大跳放in合适吗......后面还有很多类似的跳
00:37:822 (2,3,4) - 这个间距逼死强迫症
00:41:506 (7,8,9) - 这个跳意义不明，前面同样的节奏却没跳，这样会很突兀
00:42:032 (1,2,3,4) - 丑，建议统一一下间距
00:50:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 丑，另外强烈推荐学一下四方跳，三角跳，五角跳和六角跳，做跳图思路会清晰很多
00:54:401 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 跳图如果全是这种摆法就不好玩了
01:13:348 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种跳一般1/1才会考虑去放.....
01:26:769 (7) - 这个滑条感觉到01:27:296 - 这里就够了
01:34:664 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 丑
跳图的话还需要积累更多更有趣的摆法哟
一起加油吧♪(^∇^*)
good luck

谢摸！

不过，这个图我是没想做成跳图的，00:15:454 (5,6) - 这个跳我是真的没觉得有很大啊……
00:18:875 (5,6,7) - 这个跳我用鼠标也能打……
至于四方跳三角跳之类的，我确实不太会摆，我也确实没想过做跳图，所以也就没在意这个……
现在图里例如00:54:401 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这样的note我基本都是为了踩节奏摆的，说实话我也不知道怎么摆会好玩一点
00:13:875 - 这里的话这一段我是压人声放的物件，所以应该是没漏音？
00:41:506 (7,8,9) - 这里不是跳啊，是打错了还是我理解错了？
3.6sv的话是因为bpm只有76，如果152bpm的话就应该对应着是1.8sv。
至于bpm改成152，我也想过这个问题，不过我刚才试了一下，感觉……很奇怪？

Mikako wrote:

kanor wrote:

3.6的sv太吓人......
rank图最多应该只能用三种滑条速度（没记错的话）0.8 0.9 1.0这三个最好合并
感觉这曲子应该是3/4拍，BPM用152比较好
00:07:033 (1) - 这个转盘建议从00:10:190 -开始，00:12:559 - 结束
00:13:348 (1,2,3) - 这么下感觉没有很好地表现曲子，2叠到1下面是不是更能表现那种停顿感？
00:13:875 - 漏音
00:15:454 (5,6) - 跳得太大
00:16:506 (1) - 建议改成三个单点
00:18:875 (5,6,7) - 这种大跳放in合适吗......后面还有很多类似的跳
00:37:822 (2,3,4) - 这个间距逼死强迫症
00:41:506 (7,8,9) - 这个跳意义不明，前面同样的节奏却没跳，这样会很突兀
00:42:032 (1,2,3,4) - 丑，建议统一一下间距
00:50:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 丑，另外强烈推荐学一下四方跳，三角跳，五角跳和六角跳，做跳图思路会清晰很多
00:54:401 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 跳图如果全是这种摆法就不好玩了
01:13:348 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种跳一般1/1才会考虑去放.....
01:26:769 (7) - 这个滑条感觉到01:27:296 - 这里就够了
01:34:664 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 丑
跳图的话还需要积累更多更有趣的摆法哟
一起加油吧♪(^∇^*)
good luck

谢摸！

不过，这个图我是没想做成跳图的，00:15:454 (5,6) - 这个跳我是真的没觉得有很大啊……
00:18:875 (5,6,7) - 这个跳我用鼠标也能打……
至于四方跳三角跳之类的，我确实不太会摆，我也确实没想过做跳图，所以也就没在意这个……
现在图里例如00:54:401 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这样的note我基本都是为了踩节奏摆的，说实话我也不知道怎么摆会好玩一点
00:13:875 - 这里的话这一段我是压人声放的物件，所以应该是没漏音？
00:41:506 (7,8,9) - 这里不是跳啊，是打错了还是我理解错了？
3.6sv的话是因为bpm只有76，如果152bpm的话就应该对应着是1.8sv。
至于bpm改成152，我也想过这个问题，不过我刚才试了一下，感觉……很奇怪？

3拍子啦听起来确实会有点怪吧2333
00:41:506 (7,8,9) - 这个地方相比其他的地方确实不是跳，只是相对于你这一句里面，因为前面间隔1/6（还是1/4来着）你一溜放下来，在结尾却放了拉开了间距，这会显得有些突兀。
至于跳的话，可以多参考下其他的跳图0w0

以下個人觀點哈

[Insane]

1. 00:13:348 - 00:14:927 - 重音的位置建議放圈，雖然偶爾有地方沒有人聲比如00:19:664 - 但是基本上不會skip（這裡你是skip了），因為基本的節拍好比骨架，也算是節奏遊戲的基礎。當然你可以為了人聲空掉重音好比妹子們大冬天要風度不要溫度，只要你認為人聲更能表現音樂，那就是音樂遊戲了。就這個位置來說似乎沒有這麼多麻煩一般人都會選擇塞爆因為沒有別的干擾項。
   
   同理00:44:927 - 01:16:506 - 等等建議放圈，不過NC按照人聲甩也沒有問題。低難度仍然要跟人聲為了壓難度空掉也可以，不過流行的是空掉人聲……因為鼓點比較穩定和單調，更容易糊均勻一點
   
2. 00:40:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 這一排這麼密是為何……可能你是想進kiai 了所以弄難一點，這個一般補補空拍拉大距離而不是塞爆，整體難度有了就行，節奏不建議overmap …… 可以參考一下前奏比副歌節奏密的圖像 http://osu.ppy.sh/b/425385
   
   主要還是你各個部分的排版沒有區分度，所以節奏密度就等於難度了……其實你完全可以想跳就跳想疊就疊的
   
3. 00:43:348 (5) - 建議1/3滑條帶1/6圈兩個，其他所有超長滑條同理。除非特別有必要，超長滑條很浪費節奏……給人的感覺好比做數學題一堆阿拉伯數字裏面摻了兩個繁體字一樣格格不入，基本上一首普通的Insane的99%是用1/4，1/2，1/1拼起來的。1/4或者堆疊，1/2隨意，1/1大距離或者堆疊。
   
4. 從音樂看的分組……00:13:611 - 00:13:743 - 00:13:875 - 00:14:006 - 四個一組的人聲。00:15:717 - 00:15:980 - 00:16:243 - 三個一組的人聲。00:16:506 - 00:16:769 - 00:17:033 - 00:17:296 - 00:17:559 - 00:17:822 - 六個一組的人聲。
   
   然後就是讓排版貼合分組了……前面四個你空了00:13:875 - 極度不科學的東西。。00:16:506 (1,2,3) - 也是建議六個圈或者兩個長滑條。擺的樣式也是應該讓人感覺到“這是一組的”像這樣↓↓↓ …… 網絡比較渣就用百度了不要介意哈
   
5. 額外加的NC，對稱。當然這種排版雖然顯眼但是比較死板，排全程會有點枯燥……http://pan.baidu.com/s/1skDc8cX
   
6. 額外加的NC，antijump，同向……這個雖然也很顯眼但是沒什麼難度……http://pan.baidu.com/s/1nvzTLcX
   
7. 這個方面像你的00:22:822 (5,6) - 00:25:190 (1,2,3) - 02:02:296 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 就有這種“分組”的感覺，但是被你全程散亂的節奏和几乎全程DS的排版給淹沒了……具體的講
   
8. 00:19:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 建議全部圈。或者00:20:454 (5) - 既然是滑條，那麼00:20:717 (6,7) - 也滑條。同時建議不要DS，DS是你排版單一的主要原因，你可以選擇直接拉大DS難度上升，也可以選擇同時削減節奏把更多的圈換滑條維持整體難度。
   
9. 00:27:559 (1,2,3) - 前面兩個也折返或者後面的折返也換滑條加圈。
   
10. 00:30:717 (1,2,3,4) - 就沒必要一樣了，當然一樣是可以的不過音樂一樣你是擺一樣的梗，不一樣你還是擺一樣的梗……那壓力會比較大
    
11. 00:51:769 (3) - 這個應該和00:52:032 (4,5,6) - 不一樣
    

還沒做完啊唉

只有兩個顏色看的我頭疼……

现在这个remap之后的看起来很好呀，快做个更难的~我超喜欢高桥优

N i M a Z i wrote:

现在这个remap之后的看起来很好呀，快做个更难的~我超喜欢高桥优

我能力不够啊

要不要来做一个extra的GD（躺

加油^^

Hi, from my modding queue~ Just a quick look for Normal here.

[Normal]

1. When making a curved slider, using 4 or more anchors like 00:19:664 (1,2) - 03:18:874 (7) is really uncommon and old-fashioned nowadays. Curved sliders with 3 anchors are now the most common one.
2. 00:14:927 (1,1) - 01:22:822 (2,4) - Try not to overlap in any way that can decrease the readability, in Normal you should make objects clearly visible so they will be more friendly towards players.
3. 00:22:032 (4) - Repeat sliders with 2 or more reverses kinda ruins the flow, this kind of slider exists in older maps in order to make things more challenging, but these maps nowadays use to emphasize more with the flow so yeah.
4. 00:35:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This can be more friendly towards players, mostly players in this level are not comfortable handling clicking 5+ objects in a row, in this case I would just change 00:35:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6) into 3 1/3 sliders.
5. 01:33:875 (1) - Usually we use long sliders to emphasize some sound that last very long, it could be anything, but not like this where a long slider suddenly came out of nowhere and as a result it skipped to many important beats(vocals/instruments).

There's a lot of improvement that can be done here, I only just pointed some of them. hope that helped and good luck~

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