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Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri] - Sendan Life

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Settia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年3月23日 at 21:12:49

Artist: Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri]
Title: Sendan Life
Source: ガラスの花と壊す世界
Tags: vocaloid Chukka やしきん yashikin Glass no Hana to Kowasu Sekai GARAKOWA Restore the World Vitreous Flower Destroy the World D.backup
BPM: 227
Filesize: 9496kb
Play Time: 03:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2.57 stars, 403 notes)
  2. Expert (5.65 stars, 756 notes)
  3. Extra (6.57 stars, 847 notes)
  4. Hard (3.58 stars, 598 notes)
  5. Insane (4.78 stars, 725 notes)
  6. Light Insane (3.88 stars, 650 notes)
  7. Melia (7.32 stars, 904 notes)
  8. Normal (1.57 stars, 199 notes)
Download: Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri] - Sendan Life
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by Me
Lyrics
近未来ってそう思うんじゃない
人が人を棄てるような時代
無惨に折り重なって
痛い痛いと一斉に鳴いた
妄想が不毛なように
誰も私を取り込もうとしない
不安に目を逸らして
有象無象テンション合わせる

綺麗な顔を歪めて
二度と来ない昨日に手を伸ばして
消えてく明日は蜃気楼に
なってしまった世界は夜に向かう

Bye-Bye
望遠鏡の焦点合わして
水平線の消点探した
漏れた溜息が苦くても
水銀灯の照明落として
降参なんて冗談じゃないって
ほんの一瞬だけ笑った

もうずっと独りきりで
生きた世界も終わりそうなんで
剪断寸前の人生も
洗い浚い一斉に焼いた
もう今日が昨日のようで
見てる視点も俯瞰になっていた
瞬きの度に
右往左往大衆は揺れる

乾いた髪を束ねてくれた
あの日交わした約束は
今の私には羞恥心だった
って言ったって遅いよ夜は明けた

Baby
Rockin'and Rollin'揺らして
全方角に照準合わして
はち切れそうな深層心理を
無情で非情な世界自体を
変えたいなんて夢見たって
ほんの一瞬だけでよかった

Bye-Bye
ボーターレスの現代社会で
障害なんて当然無害で
海と月以外見えない世界へ
大人になっても連れて行くよ

望遠鏡の焦点合わして
水平線の消点探した
漏れた溜息が苦くても
水銀灯の照明落として
降参なんて冗談じゃないって
ほんの一瞬だけ笑った
History
2016/1/27 thanks 100fav!!
2016/2/10 added Expert
2016/2/15 added Easy,Normal
2016/2/21 wtf 200fav!!
2016/3/21 300fav why
2016/3/31 Remap Melia
2016/4/15 Remap Extra
2016/4/17 400fav is this real?
2016/4/26 Remap Expert
2016/5/1 500fav ha
2016/?/? 600fav @
[ Haru ]
This is awesome! Really rare to see Garakowa's soundtrack. All the best in mapping this set :) :) :)
Topic Starter
Settia

iFioa wrote:

This is awesome! Really rare to see Garakowa's soundtrack. All the best in mapping this set :) :) :)
thank you!! :) :)
wolfenstian
Juuuuust a few little things!
Extra:
SPOILER
I know this map doesn't seem to be 100% complete but...
This map seems to stick to the lower half of the mapping area (specifically the lower left)
03:16:951 the BSD should be at 1/6 for this to fit
02:40:407 kiai time should end here
Melia:
SPOILER
00:56:001 could be centered
02:40:407 (as I said before) kiai time should end
none of the BSD options can fit 00:41:728 & 03:16:882 at the same time
I hope this was helpful! :D
Topic Starter
Settia

wolfenstian wrote:

Juuuuust a few little things!
Extra:
SPOILER
I know this map doesn't seem to be 100% complete but...
This map seems to stick to the lower half of the mapping area (specifically the lower left)
03:16:951 the BSD should be at 1/6 for this to fit I'm catching drum sound. so no change
02:40:407 kiai time should end here fix!
Melia:
SPOILER
00:56:001 could be centered fix!
02:40:407 (as I said before) kiai time should end fix!
none of the BSD options can fit 00:41:728 & 03:16:882 at the same time same as before
I hope this was helpful! :D

thank you for modding! that was helpful! :)
Vanillas
ranked it, plz! :)
Alexmrmongolo69
peppy pls
rank this :D
Ritalityxx
why not ranked?? :(
Topic Starter
Settia
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Nezzar
good luck :P
Topic Starter
Settia

clp012345 wrote:

good luck :P
only 6misses :shock: thank you for testplay!
SaiiN
Realy cool beatmap !!
The Expert diff is very awsome for the lower ranked players like me :3
I realy hope youll finish this diff :)
VINXIS
rank wen
Topic Starter
Settia
won't D:
Rizia
pro
Topic Starter
Settia

Rizia wrote:

pro
i wanna be pro like you :idea:
Ayano-
If this turns out to be ranked it's gonna be so epic.
chai tea
MAAAANNNN
i have tried mapping this 1000 times and it was just like......
Easy- 6.58*
Normal- 7.89*
Insane- 9.18*
Extra- 10.18*
The Special- like 11+*
(Than i gave up)
AWESOME JOB DOE!!!!!!!!
midori_wah
i wan rank
buny
very good map
Topic Starter
Settia
thank you for the star :idea:
chai tea
Dear Settia, jks
Are GD's open for a 6-8* or 2-4*
thx
SnowNiNo_
although this map isnt for rank but ill still give a star ><
PatZar

Rizia wrote:

pro
sahuang
Rank it :) someone has just ranked the same song so just do it :D
Topic Starter
Settia

sahuang wrote:

Rank it :) someone has just ranked the same song so just do it :D
OK
SnowNiNo_

Settia wrote:

sahuang wrote:

Rank it :) someone has just ranked the same song so just do it :D
OK
wat seriously ><?
i want a GD \:D/
Myko

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

wat seriously ><?
i want a GD \:D/
if I remember correctly what Settia told me back when I asked for a GD (and if it's still up to date) the mapset is destined to be Settia's maps only =/

I wish as well, don't worry. but oh well
Rizia
really for rank?? :idea: :idea: :idea:
Topic Starter
Settia

Rizia wrote:

really for rank?? :idea: :idea: :idea:
yes! but i don't know it can be ranked :?
FaiVillager
Would like a mod? ;w;
It was your map that made me did my job on this nice song lol
Topic Starter
Settia

FaiVillager wrote:

Would like a mod? ;w;
It was your map that made me did my job on this nice song lol
i want a lot of mod :idea:

but not yet completed Easy and Insane :?
DiscoTheBudgie
Great job!

this has to get ranked!
SnowNiNo_
lets have your first mod :D
well if you dont want to change the metadata spread, BNs will told you to change it anyway (maybe?

  • [Metadata spread]
  1. CS : easy>2.5 normal>3 insane>4, so the spread will be 2.5>3>3.5>4>4>4>4
  2. AR(i dont prefer AR10 on Melia diff) : normal>6 insane>9 expert>9.2 extra>9.5 Melia>9.8, so the spread will be 4>6>8>9>9.2>9.5>9.8
  3. OD : normal>5 hard>7, so the psread will be 3>5>7>8>>8.5>9>9.5
  4. HP : original spread is fine, but i suggest 2>3>4>5>6>6.5>7

  • [Melia]
  1. 00:39:812 - mute
  2. 00:41:067 (2,3) - awkward sapcing, make the flow/spacing more consistent with 00:41:332 (3,1,2,3) -
  3. 00:41:728 (3,1) - make this more spaced, is easier for player to read
  4. 00:43:314 (2,3,4,5) - make the spacing 2>3 more larger then 4>5, since thw pitch at 2>3 is much higher
  5. 00:44:239 (2,3,4) - larger spacing
  6. 00:45:957 (6,7) - inconsistent with the other part, other part all got sliders but 2 stacked notes here, but i think this is fine XD
  7. 00:47:543 (2,3,4,5) - same as 00:43:314 (2,3,4,5) -
  8. 00:51:508 (1) - make the slider nicer :o
  9. 00:58:578 - mute
  10. 01:09:217 (2) - oh god dont do this on the hardest diff lol, you are missing sound here like 01:09:482 - 01:09:878 - , consult the other part youve mapped 02:06:574 - and 03:07:896 -
  11. 01:10:671 - dont ignore the drum sound here, you should map here since is the hardest diff
  12. 01:13:975 (2) - same as 01:09:217 (2) -, missing sound 01:14:107 -
  13. 01:14:768 (1) - ^, missing sound 01:14:900 -
  14. 01:24:482 - mute
  15. 01:24:283 - "suggestion", from the start of the kiai part to 01:32:741 - , since the vocal was getting higher and higher, so if you map the spacing bigger and bigger will pretty fit the music, and will be better to play either(?
  16. 01:50:715 (1,2,3) - dont stack all together, make a little spacing
  17. 01:59:173 (1,2) - inconsistent spacing, way to small
  18. 02:16:750 (1) - unnecessary NC
  19. 02:22:631 - mute
  20. 02:37:499 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - dont you think the spacing here was smaller then other part? make it bigger~
  21. 02:56:794 (1) - NC off
  22. 02:58:380 (1,1,1) - same as 01:50:715 (1,2,3) -
  23. 03:17:609 - mute
  24. 03:32:213 (1,2) - since the flow after was jumpy, this feels really weird..
  25. 03:34:063 (1) - NC off
  26. 03:34:327 (1,2) - make the spacing bigger ?
  27. 03:40:935 (1) - unnecessary NC
  28. 03:46:750 (1) - ^
  29. 03:49:393 (1) - ^
  • [Extra]
  1. 00:41:464 (1) - NC off
  2. 00:48:865 (1) - ^
  3. 00:50:451 (1,2) - consist the spacing with other part
  4. 01:10:142 (3) - delete, no sound here
  5. 01:10:671 - missing a note
  6. 01:12:257 (3) - move 3 to 01:12:125 - to match the vocal, and 01:12:257 - there was no sound here
  7. 01:13:314 (3) - same as 01:10:142 (3) -
  8. 01:14:371 (3) - ^
  9. 01:17:279 (3,4) - same as 00:50:451 (1,2) -
  10. 01:22:433 (1,1) - unnecessary NC
  11. 01:24:482 - mute
  12. 01:27:852 (3) - hmm this sound pretty weird to me lol, i usually do a kickslider as a note in order to emphasized the second note, that is 01:27:984 (4) - , but 01:27:984 (4) - doesnt need to be emphasized imo
  13. 01:29:504 (7) - same above
  14. 01:41:067 (1,1) - unnecessary NC
  15. 01:50:715 (2) - NC
  16. 01:56:794 (4,1) - i think 01:56:926 (1) - should be more emphasized, make the spacing 4>1 larger?
  17. 02:04:988 (1) - NC off
  18. 01:22:169 (1,1,1,2,3) - if you make this part similar with 02:21:376 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - will be interesting and consistent
  19. 02:23:689 - mute
  20. 02:48:601 (1) - NC off
  21. 03:22:433 (4,5) - spacing is to small for kiai part
  22. 03:23:094 (2,3) - ^
  23. 03:26:794 (1) - make the slider more symmetrical
  24. 03:34:063 (1) - unnecessary NC
  25. 03:39:085 (4,5) - make the spacing more consist with other part
  26. 03:47:543 (3,1) - not good blanket, 03:47:940 (1) - should be at 56 331
  • [Expert]
  1. 01:07:367 - you should swap this part with Melia diff
  2. 01:28:777 (2) - this feel inconsistent with the kiai since you are mapping 1/2 and notes, but a 1/1 slider here..
  3. 01:53:887 (1,2,3) - consist the spacing here
  4. 01:56:794 (4,1) - same as what ive mentioned in Extra diff
  5. 01:58:380 (2,3) - consist the spacing with other part
  6. 02:22:896 - mute
  7. 02:22:169 (3) - seems like you are NC at white tick here so you should NC here either
  8. compare 02:21:376 (1,1,1,2,3,4,1,1) - and 01:22:169 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - , same part but different combo usage, you should make it consistently
  9. 02:27:984 (2) - same as 01:28:777 (2) -
  10. 02:43:975 (3) - oh dude this slider is ugly ;w;
  11. 03:12:125 (1) - same as what ive mention at Melia's 01:09:217 (2) -, missing beat at 03:12:389 -
  12. 03:44:107 (2,3) - consist the spacing with other part
  13. 03:45:297 (4) - no good slider :p
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:41:993 (2) - NC
  2. 00:42:257 (3,4,5) - make this part same as 00:43:314 (2,3,4) - , fit the music more imo
  3. 00:58:116 (1) - NC off
  4. 01:20:583 (1) - ^
  5. 02:01:684 (2,3) - awkward spacing
  6. 02:36:178 (1) - no good slider
  7. 03:25:605 (2,1) - bad overlap
  8. 03:39:614 (1,2,3) - consist the spacing
  9. 03:40:671 (1,2,3) - ^
  • [Overall]
  1. inconsistent NCs, take a look at Melia diff, 01:22:169 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - and 02:21:376 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - , same part but different combo usage, you need to fix these stuff so the map would look nicer, same as 01:39:349 (2) - 02:38:556 (2) - 03:32:477 (1) - , and 01:40:935 (1) - 02:40:142 (5) - 03:34:063 (1) - , check the other diff for the same part to see if the NC is consistent
wont mod HS problem, took me so long ;w;
maybe you need a SB lol
GL ranking~ :)
headphonewearer
rank pls!!!!
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