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OzzyOzrock
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, June 4, 2017 at 5:23:59 PM

Artist: Shiokara-zu
Title: Now or Never
Source: Splatoon
Tags: スプラトゥーン one minute remains 峰岸 透 splatfest callie marie squid kid inkling
BPM: 184
Filesize: 3593kb
Play Time: 00:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.37 stars, 177 notes)
  2. Inker Oni (4.83 stars, 507 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.87 stars, 105 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (2.9 stars, 238 notes)
  5. Oni (3.62 stars, 337 notes)
Download: Shiokara-zu - Now or Never
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~ C O M E B A C K T I M E ~

Track 8 on Disc 1 of "Splatune".

SPLATOON 2 HYPE
Prophecy
Star for you 8-)
Surono

Prophecy wrote:

Star for you 8-)
is not StarForYou, is OsiOjrok, .

maxforyou
Backfire
General
Alright mapset, spread between oni and inner oni is a shame but it almost can't be helped I guess.

Kantan
00:05:919 - Maybe add a kat or a don here, since that's kinda what you did earlier in the map? I dunno, it would be fine either way. Makes it feel less empty.
00:38:854 - In my opinion the tone kind of goes up down up so you could do a don here

Futsuu
I really don't see anything to change other than arbitrary stuff.

Muzu
00:30:865 - Don here and 00:31:517 - here maybe? It doesn't need to be so empty in muzu.
00:53:772 - maybe 1/4 k here and 00:56:381 - ? It wouldn't be that bad for muzu.

Oni
I feel like the kiai at the end where its all like d k d k d k could use ramping up a little more drastically.

Inner Oni
Nothing to say other than lol, honestly. Nice pp map. HP 7?
Fuel
Hi, from my mod queue. that was very long 24 hours i can't count orz :?

d = don, red note
k = kat, blue note
D = don finisher, big red note
K = kat finisher, big blue note

mod
Kantan
00:05:919 - Add a k here? You had one at 00:03:310 (7), and here it's like building up with the drum roll as well.
00:54:180 (6) - Change to k? Seeing as 00:56:789 (12) is k and they match up in the repeated ascending sound.

Futsuu
00:29:071 (82,83,84) - Ctrl+g to make kkd? Assuming this is following the vocal sounds at 00:34:288 (96,97,98) it was kkk no racist xd, and the difference in the 2 7-note patterns occurs around the 6th note so I think that's where the distinction should be.

Muzukashii
00:30:376 - Considering the notes right after follow that ascending synth thingy, add a d here?
00:35:593 - ^

Oni
Nothing to note.

Inker Oni
00:15:702 - I just thought this pattern and the identical one at 00:49:615 were slightly off with the k in a different position, or maybe change 00:26:544 (223,224,225) - to kdd since it appears for the most part that the second of these patterns ends with dkddd.

Really nice set :D

Hope it helps :D
Aldwych
ROUND 2
#MECHANT MOD

[General]

Ok

Has Splatoon Gone too far?

[Kantan]

00:01:028 : aaaaaaaaaaaaaa vire-moi çaaaaaaaaa, pour une kantan je pense pas que ne pas commencer sur un big white tick soit une bonne chose. De plus, ca fera un pattern simmilaire avec l'autre dkdkd

00:17:658 ++ : Je suis pas trop d'accord avec cette section, 'fin imo ca met plus la confusion aux nouveaux joueurs qu'autre chose. Honnêtement, un full 1/1 est simple, suit le background sound et tout et tout.

00:31:028 + : Je comprends pas non plus ces doublés, honettement un full 1/1 k en suivant les sons comme à 00:30:376 serait beaucoup mieux (Idem pour 00:35:593)

00:40:484 ++ : Je vais ignorer ces 3/2 parce que c'est le kiai et que tu as une bonne structure mais c'est tellement meh D:

00:50:919 : Par contre je trouve le spinner trop court pour notre niveau de jeu ça pose pas de problèmes. Pour des débutants.... un peu D:

Pas grand chose à dire sur la kantan elle est simple, ca fonctionne bien, c'est bien construit dans l'ensemble juste quelques parties à retourcher pour la rendre milleure. Pour le moment le SR est un peu trop élevé à mon goût pour une première diff d'un set malgré le BPM assez élevé.

[Futsuu]

00:01:028 : Idem que la kantan, en fait ce k n'a d'intérêt que si tu full k avant aussi.

00:01:354 : Imo, je trouve ce pattern un peu trop long pour un futsuu, mainteant il est assez compliqué de bien le split je le reconnais :/

00:17:495 : Idem que la kantan, disons que tu suis pas fan de ce que tu suis ici alors que tu peux faire beaucoup plus simple :D

00:57:441 : Je trouve ca dommage que pour ces triplés t'as pas fait des changement en fonction de la musique (genre au début un full d et à la fin un full k par exemple)

J'ai pas grand chose à dire non plus, les notes sont correctes, la structure aussi, juste un peu too much pour un futsuu tho.

[Muzukashii]

00:17:006 Je suis toujours pas fan, mais sur une muzu ca passe mieux i guess

00:27:441 : Comparé à la futsuu et la Oni, je trouve qu'on a un spread issue, imo ca manque un peu de notes ici surtout pour une muzukashii, surtout si tu fait des comparaisons. Par exemple à 00:30:049 tu peux largement mettre un peu plus.

00:48:310 : C'est pas censé être dkd ici? Comparé à ce qu'on a après. Oo

00:57:441 : Idem que la futsuu, ca manque de progression :D

RàS.

[Oni]

00:00:050 : à Partir de la Oni, pourquoi tu map pas ça?

00:11:300 : Comparé à tes autres triplé, celui-là commence sur du 1/2, c'est un peu bizzare, si tu veux être plus cohérent, commence le sur du 1/1 (00:11:463 par exemple).

00:36:734 : Idem surtout que un triplé à 00:36:897 est bien mieux.

Noice

[Inner Oni]

Mfw je passe de la Oni à la Inner Oni : http://i.imgur.com/EqQOTR9.jpg

00:18:963 : Ce break ici est pas sexy, encore il serait 1/2 loin, ok, mais la... D:

00:27:767 : Comparé aux autres diff du set, le rythme que tu utilise est différent et je le trouve surtout assez bof surtout lorsque tu peux utiliser les vocals pour utiliser différent patterns (genre des doublés).

00:29:886 : Imo un triplé ici serait pas mal, disons que le 1/2 à 00:30:049 est pas top imo, surtout que c'est la ou le "stream" commence musicalement.

00:32:984 : Ah bah la c'est mieux, ce genre de rythme est plus cool!

00:35:185 : Idem qu'au dessus, j'aurais ajouté un d.

00:44:561 : Vu que le mélodie déscends un peu avant et que y'a aucun changement, je serais parti sur un triple d, à voir.

Oké c'est très le deathstream!

[SPLATOON INTENSIFIES]
Skylish
Holy sh!T 2C1 feeling unwell maps:(

Hi, ozzy, from your awful, evil, sorrowful BN check queue.

[General]

-Uncheck Widescreen Supp.

[Kantan]

> 00:01:028 (1) - delete it, it is a confusing note.

> 00:05:919 - add k ?

> 00:42:115 (76) - / 00:44:724 (82) - / 00:47:332 (88) - shift these notes 1/2 backwards to match the synth and the base.

[Futsuu]

> 00:07:549 (23) - / 00:10:158 (31) - / 00:12:767 (39) - shift these notes 1/2 backwards to match the vocal

> 00:17:495 (53,54,55) - For this pattern, I do not sure what you are mapping...

> 00:28:093 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - it is the place you put 7*1/4. I do not think it suits the music at all for the second half part. Try this:

> 00:33:310 (95) - ^ simlar case: same rhythm, different notes

[Muzu]

> 00:14:886 - add a d here, you have this note in Futsuu

> 00:16:028 - move this note 1/2 forwards to follow the consistency of Futsuu

> 00:29:886 - (also applied to similar cases)follow the consistency of Futsuu if you adopt my change

> 00:48:310 (189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196) - same situation in 00:14:397 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69) -

[Oni]

> The off-beat pattren at 00:17:006 (95) - are irritating... It gives a virtual feel...

> Overall speaking this is good! :)

[Inker Oni]

> 00:18:963 - add d? It sounds empty here.

> The death stream kkkkkkkkkkk is not ideal, but it is reasonable and I can tell how you map though. It is fine.

> 00:35:430 (283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300) - wanna try dkk kdd dkk kdd (etc.) ? to show a differences from the previous similar pattern

JEEZZZZZZZZ , this time I am dead.

Good luck on rank (of coz you can get it ranked)!
_handholding
from your modding queue

Kantan
  1. 00:29:397 (55) - I thought this played better on 00:29:234 as 00:29:234 just feels so clickable
  2. 00:34:615 (64) - ^
futsuu
  1. 00:01:028 (1) - Since this isnt part of the main tune youre following I think its ok to delete this
  2. 00:06:571 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - I think youre trying to follow the background melody here but I think its better to follow the vocals as they are more noticeable and they more fun to follow for beginner players, arent they..? how does this rhythm look http://puu.sh/o41fB/84ecffb8f8.jpg I also think having the rhythm switch over to red ticks makes the pattern feel more upbeat. ofc apply similar changes to the patterns after if you do decide to follow the vocals
  3. 00:17:495 (53,54,55) - I think you should just move 1/2 beat across and follow a similar rhythm you used in your Kantan as this sounds forced
Muzu
  1. 00:15:865 (65,66) - i would delete these because reasons but I imagine theres a reason why you added these 2 notes
  2. 00:39:180 (143,144,145,146,147,148) - How about do this? http://puu.sh/o41Yp/4d9bfb1034.jpg I think capturing the triplet plays great for a muzu and you still get that nice build up to the kiai
Oni
  1. 00:37:549 (194) - Change to k. It matches the music also because you've used a k here 00:39:506 (204) -
  2. 00:55:240 (301) - move to 00:54:914 ?
I hope this mod was useful in any way, GL!
Topic Starter
OzzyOzrock
@backfire and envictus, uhh I changed some stuff wahoo

Aldwych wrote:

ROUND 2

[Kantan]

CHANGED KIAI RHYTHMS WAHOOOO

[Futsuu]

THEY WILL SUFFER THE OFF BEAT NOTES.

The intro is long but I think the simpleness really makes it far, and the ending was gonna be d k d but that was too hard...


[Muzukashii]

00:27:441 : Comparé à la futsuu et la Oni, je trouve qu'on a un spread issue, imo ca manque un peu de notes ici surtout pour une muzukashii, surtout si tu fait des comparaisons. Par exemple à 00:30:049 tu peux largement mettre un peu plus. Muzu buffed at 00:30:702

00:48:310 : C'est pas censé être dkd ici? Comparé à ce qu'on a après. IT'S A BREAK AAAA

00:57:441 : Idem que la futsuu, ca manque de progression :D

RàS.
NO CHANGE FOR INNER AND ONI I'M SORRY GOOD MOD THO GREAT QUESTIONS JE VEUX ETRE UN OISAEIUEIU

Skylish wrote:

Holy sh!T 2C1 feeling unwell maps:(

Hi, ozzy, from your awful, evil, sorrowful BN check queue.

[General]

-Uncheck Widescreen Supp.

[Kantan]

> 00:01:028 (1) - delete it, it is a confusing note. This meme note will live on!

> 00:05:919 - add k ? I prefer to add a break as there isnt one for a while after this.

> 00:42:115 (76) - / 00:44:724 (82) - / 00:47:332 (88) - shift these notes 1/2 backwards to match the synth and the base. Good idea!

[Futsuu]

> 00:07:549 (23) - / 00:10:158 (31) - / 00:12:767 (39) - shift these notes 1/2 backwards to match the vocal I prefer to keep a standard basic rhythm for now.

> 00:17:495 (53,54,55) - For this pattern, I do not sure what you are mapping... There are small sounds in the background that provide variation instead of mapping the same verse again

> 00:28:093 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - it is the place you put 7*1/4. I do not think it suits the music at all for the second half part. Try this: This part is meant to be very simple in all diffs.

[Muzu]

> 00:14:886 - add a d here, you have this note in Futsuu Adjusted Futsuu instead.

> 00:16:028 - move this note 1/2 forwards to follow the consistency of Futsuu Keeping the double

> 00:29:886 - (also applied to similar cases)follow the consistency of Futsuu if you adopt my change

> 00:48:310 (189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196) - same situation in 00:14:397 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69) - Adjusted Futsuu instead.

[Oni]

> The off-beat pattren at 00:17:006 (95) - are irritating... It gives a virtual feel... It's the squeaky sounds, they do that 8-)

> Overall speaking this is good! :)

[Inker Oni]

> 00:18:963 - add d? It sounds empty here. I wanna emphasize the sqeaky sounds, I'm weird.

> The death stream kkkkkkkkkkk is not ideal, but it is reasonable and I can tell how you map though. It is fine.

> 00:35:430 (283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300) - wanna try dkk kdd dkk kdd (etc.) ? to show a differences from the previous similar pattern Noooo

JEEZZZZZZZZ , this time I am dead.

Good luck on rank (of coz you can get it ranked)!
Thanks for the mods! Good feedback on certain things I might look at.

Kisses wrote:

from your modding queue

Kantan
  1. 00:29:397 (55) - I thought this played better on 00:29:234 as 00:29:234 just feels so clickable I might look at that! For now I want it similar to Futsuu.
  2. 00:34:615 (64) - ^
futsuu
  1. 00:01:028 (1) - Since this isnt part of the main tune youre following I think its ok to delete this IT'S THE MEME NOTE THO
  2. 00:06:571 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - I think youre trying to follow the background melody here but I think its better to follow the vocals as they are more noticeable and they more fun to follow for beginner players, arent they..? how does this rhythm look http://puu.sh/o41fB/84ecffb8f8.jpg I also think having the rhythm switch over to red ticks makes the pattern feel more upbeat. ofc apply similar changes to the patterns after if you do decide to follow the vocals It was never an intention to follow vocals anywhere except Inker Oni. It just kinda goes with the rhythm I made. But I may look to change it to vocal mapping after all.
  3. 00:17:495 (53,54,55) - I think you should just move 1/2 beat across and follow a similar rhythm you used in your Kantan as this sounds forced Alright, changed.
Muzu
  1. 00:15:865 (65,66) - i would delete these because reasons but I imagine theres a reason why you added these 2 notes Yeah the reason they arent present earlier is due to having to force a break.
  2. 00:39:180 (143,144,145,146,147,148) - How about do this? http://puu.sh/o41Yp/4d9bfb1034.jpg I think capturing the triplet plays great for a muzu and you still get that nice build up to the kiai Yeah but Oni does that :P
Oni
  1. 00:37:549 (194) - Change to k. It matches the music also because you've used a k here 00:39:506 (204) - Two different sounds.
  2. 00:55:240 (301) - move to 00:54:914 ? Reworked the ending.
I hope this mod was useful in any way, GL!
Thanks for the mod :* (GET IT)
Shinzo-
[Muzukashii]
00:05:919 - maybe you can add spinner or slider since you even youse and jumpy 1/4 in oni... so maybe for spread tho
00:14:397 (61) - maybe change to k for high pitch
00:15:702 (64,65,66) - k d k ? better for pitch imo
00:21:897 (86) - change to d ? for pitch maybe
00:27:115 (105) - delete for a break ?
00:44:561 (169,170,171) - k d k ? for reverse pattern with 00:41:952 (156,157,158,159,160,161,162) -
00:45:376 (175) - change to d for pitch ? and 00:45:702 (176,177) - to k d
00:59:071 (39) - change to k for consistency with 00:53:528 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - etc ?
[Oni]
00:06:408 (37) - change to d for the reverse pattern of 00:05:919 (32,33,34) - ?since you do that on 00:03:310 (14,15,16,17,18,19) - maybe you already know this so i know maybe this will be rejected xD
00:11:300 (63) - move to 00:11:218 - ?
00:21:734 (117) - move to 00:21:816 - ? and change 00:21:897 (118) - to d ... idk just suggestion
00:26:789 (142,143,144) - maybe change to k ? just like 00:06:245 -
00:32:414 (170) - maybe better to move this to 00:32:251 - ? just my opinion
00:51:571 (278,279,280) - maybe change to k ? and also change 00:51:897 (281) - to d ... better IMO
[Inner Oni]
00:05:511 (53) - maybe change this to k ? so you can change 00:03:799 (32) - to d ? well for the kick sound ._. maybe
00:11:789 (110) - change to d ? for consistency with 00:06:571 (66) - ?
00:45:702 (372) - same as above ? for consistency with 00:40:484 (324) -

im sorry that i can't find anything on futsuu and kantan x..x
im still newbie tho here so i hope you could understand if my mod isn't helpfull
Good Luck >w<
Surono
dem squidward chan!!1!!

>Inner Oni
* 00:05:756 - and I know this why katkatkatkat.. same think must taktaktaktaktkat. oraorao
* 00:08:039 - over with emphasize sir!! :U dkd instead. katkatk just block that flow, let me say this.. 00:06:734 - from here you can see the varies mirror. ddk kdk, kkd dkd :^V
* 00:08:609 - you need kat for for contrasting de instrument sir? flow vocal just ooooo. so you can emphasize that.. I just cri with 00:08:691 - this sound if kdddk..
* 00:10:729 - dem sir.. cus instrument not high too
* 00:11:299 - and dem this did kkddk?!?!? but okay if you accept before.. here kdkdk more works with dub sounds, 00:11:299 - tongduntong
* 00:13:256 - now its started high.. keep this
* 00:13:745 - okay I saw this.. maybe from first.. kdddk, kdkdk, and here kkddk. cus here on 3rd notes is high than the on begining part
* 00:16:191 - emphasize with kat? de stop vocal is 00:16:272 - here
* 00:17:577 - I think here is good for kdd.. I was breathink and not telling reaSON dem lel
* 00:20:185 - ... dont think I point this for varies sir.. I cri, but kdd is yeah for emphasize. 00:20:104 - and before. wupp~
* 00:21:897 - idk with this.. why dd/ xdddd
* 00:22:794 - aaa
* 00:26:544 - kkd? just for consistent before if u accept.. about stop.. I think is still able to hit. since has follow the sounds, prefer sounds..
* 00:27:115 - and dem this part mixed with dudududu.. but same think/feels.. kat is life, kat is life bcus high on feeling.. snare drum.. dem
* 00:30:946 - I just think is not high, but potential as high. cus 00:30:294 - this has normal sounds.
* 00:31:191 - from here kkk ddd? a. ,
* 00:31:843 - note,note,note,note_note,note
* 00:32:577 - don for slow vocal..? dem my mom was said the BG " wahh, dracula with glaseess " wat de dem...
* 00:33:310 - that don at right, move to here? I not see this well. just laaaaaa and tuw du du, tuw du du.. but from 00:33:963 - here yeah!
* 00:35:430 - and from here.. like before, my weird... word suggestion
* 00:38:365 - and 00:39:017 - kdk, so that next ddk ddk emp-
* and kiai.. same like previous suggestion but kiai has given additional pattern? okok!
* 00:51:897 - if you want don for same emphasize on 00:51:571 - and last stream

>Onki
this yeah good..
* 00:59:071 - kkkkd for last better emphasize..

>Muzukas
dem variaton nicesuu.. but 00:17:006 (69) - from here.. aa fine?
00:58:746 (37,41) - kat

>property
* KKd, wrong caps. edit: last of song.., current is ddD. lazy to ctrl c & v. kkD

>Ka
* okey I fine with this. 00:59:397 - okey kat.

maybe.. on first begining of Oni try fill blue tick for stream? so like futsuu, has x x xxx x x and spread kantan like muzu. long and have rest. idk with my word

cya sir! edit when will posting: dem, idk with my mod.. cus is dem ozi style, like increasing.. but now I not see the kraji trap things xd
Prophecy
Here you're evil devil Satan lovely Ozzy

[General]
- Remove "WideScreen Support" because you don't have a SB

[Inner]
NO PLEASE. I can't play it well (actually I can play but I really don't know how to check this)

[Onzzy]
00:27:033 - add a d here, ddddk
00:40:403 - add a k here, kkkkd. to make a difference between Muzu
00:51:816 - add a d here, same as above
00:59:071- kkkkd to emphasize!

[Muzu]
00:40:158 (149) - here, you can hear a sound lol, kkk is better, the beginning part is lack 1/4 (I think)
00:58:746 (37) - k
00:59:398 (41) - k, higher pitch

[Futsuu]
00:50:919 (1) - I don't really fine with this Spinner, check how you map at 00:48:310 (91,92,93) - , it should be same.
00:59:398 (19) - same as Muzu, k

[Kantan]
Fine for me! why many 1/2.



[]
anyway, the spread is fine.
Prophecy

Surono wrote:

>property No this difficulties as well.
Surono
wat propersich. i just typing ur famus things. grwat mapper desu~

edit: dem you Douvle post D:
Topic Starter
OzzyOzrock

Surono wrote:

dem squidward chan!!1!!

>Inner Oni
* 00:05:756 - and I know this why katkatkatkat.. same think must taktaktaktaktkat. oraorao
* 00:08:039 - over with emphasize sir!! :U dkd instead. katkatk just block that flow, let me say this.. 00:06:734 - from here you can see the varies mirror. ddk kdk, kkd dkd :^V
* 00:08:609 - you need kat for for contrasting de instrument sir? flow vocal just ooooo. so you can emphasize that.. I just cri with 00:08:691 - this sound if kdddk..
* 00:10:729 - dem sir.. cus instrument not high too
* 00:11:299 - and dem this did kkddk?!?!? but okay if you accept before.. here kdkdk more works with dub sounds, 00:11:299 - tongduntong
* 00:13:256 - now its started high.. keep this
* 00:13:745 - okay I saw this.. maybe from first.. kdddk, kdkdk, and here kkddk. cus here on 3rd notes is high than the on begining part
* 00:16:191 - emphasize with kat? de stop vocal is 00:16:272 - here
* 00:17:577 - I think here is good for kdd.. I was breathink and not telling reaSON dem lel
* 00:20:185 - ... dont think I point this for varies sir.. I cri, but kdd is yeah for emphasize. 00:20:104 - and before. wupp~
* 00:21:897 - idk with this.. why dd/ xdddd
* 00:22:794 - aaa
* 00:26:544 - kkd? just for consistent before if u accept.. about stop.. I think is still able to hit. since has follow the sounds, prefer sounds..
* 00:27:115 - and dem this part mixed with dudududu.. but same think/feels.. kat is life, kat is life bcus high on feeling.. snare drum.. dem
* 00:30:946 - I just think is not high, but potential as high. cus 00:30:294 - this has normal sounds.
* 00:31:191 - from here kkk ddd? a. ,
* 00:31:843 - note,note,note,note_note,note
* 00:32:577 - don for slow vocal..? dem my mom was said the BG " wahh, dracula with glaseess " wat de dem...
* 00:33:310 - that don at right, move to here? I not see this well. just laaaaaa and tuw du du, tuw du du.. but from 00:33:963 - here yeah!
* 00:35:430 - and from here.. like before, my weird... word suggestion
* 00:38:365 - and 00:39:017 - kdk, so that next ddk ddk emp-
* and kiai.. same like previous suggestion but kiai has given additional pattern? okok!
* 00:51:897 - if you want don for same emphasize on 00:51:571 - and last stream

>Onki
this yeah good..
* 00:59:071 - kkkkd for last better emphasize..

>Muzukas
dem variaton nicesuu.. but 00:17:006 (69) - from here.. aa fine?
00:58:746 (37,41) - kat

>property
* KKd, wrong caps. edit: last of song.., current is ddD. lazy to ctrl c & v. kkD

>Ka
* okey I fine with this. 00:59:397 - okey kat.

cya sir! edit when will posting: dem, idk with my mod.. cus is dem ozi style, like increasing.. but now I not see the kraji trap things xd
i lost response... but i add only stuff about ending :( dem... dracula..

Prophecy wrote:

Here you're evil devil Satan lovely Ozzy

[General]
- Remove "WideScreen Support" because you don't have a SB It makes no difference actually

[Onzzy]
00:27:033 - add a d here, ddddk No need for 5plet
00:40:403 - add a k here, kkkkd. to make a difference between Muzu ^
00:51:816 - add a d here, same as above ^
00:59:071- kkkkd to emphasize! Surono suggested, I applied

[Muzu]
00:40:158 (149) - here, you can hear a sound lol, kkk is better, the beginning part is lack 1/4 (I think) Rather not have 1/4
00:58:746 (37) - k Surono
00:59:398 (41) - k, higher pitch ^

[Futsuu]
00:50:919 (1) - I don't really fine with this Spinner, check how you map at 00:48:310 (91,92,93) - , it should be same. It is very different musically.
00:59:398 (19) - same as Muzu, k. Surono
Thanks Property! :^)
Prophecy

Surono wrote:

wat propersich. i just typing ur famus things. grwat mapper desu~

edit: dem you Douvle post D:

ok, sorry lol
bank78952
hi o/
oh evil map D: //runs
[General]
Uncheck widescreen support
[Inker oni]
00:21:897 (188) - k is better?
00:23:854 (203) - k to follow vocal?
it's pure evil map //runs
[Oni]
00:08:528 (48,49) - k for follow vocal?
[Muzukashii]
00:42:441 (159,160,161) - k ?
00:42:767 (162) - d ?
00:47:658 (185,186,187) - k ?
00:47:984 (188) - d ?
Futsuu and kantan are fine for me im newble modder D:
no kuds if not helpful
HimemiyaChikane
Hi for BN check.

[Inker Oni]
This diff is so awesome that I can't find a place to fix it!

[Oni]
00:07:060 (40) - delete?
00:09:669 (54) - ^
00:17:332 - add d?
00:19:941 - ^
00:22:549 - ^

[Muzukashii]
00:15:865 (65,66) - delete?
00:49:778 (193,194) - ^

I can't mod Kantan and Futsuu,sorry.

A excellent map in my view!Good luck for ranking!
Akiyama Mizuki
placeholder #2

NOW OR NEVER IKUTSU MONO NOW OR NEVER MEMORY WO o shit wrong song

Kantan
nothing to really poke at.

Futsuu
w00t you gotta watch out for that density at the end

MuzuCA$Hii
density is kinda too much at the beginning and the end part, but I guess it's okay because the spread works

Oni
nothing to really poke at.

The diffname that makes OnosakiHito pretty mad
00:05:267 (50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - ddkdkdkk or ddkdkdkd would fit better imo (I'd suggest the latter)
00:30:049 (246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270) -
How about making it like
d ddk dkd ddk dk
d ddk kkd ddk kk
d
00:35:267 (282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300) - ^

damn the set is pretty sweet already, get BNs
Midnaait
modding because i need kds

d=don k... you know this stuff
// //= Suggestion

[General]

Go disable widescreen support kek
Use these BG coordinates, Callie's head is a bit covered by the playfield lol

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"allBGsforthissongarebad.jpg",0,50


[Kantan]

00:37:549 - Add a d here? It is not too difficult and follows the melody and a kick
00:39:180 (73) - // Change to d? The melody goes lower here //
00:50:919 - This spinner is weird imo, but it's okay

[Futsuu]

00:26:626 - Remove for consistency with previous pattern?
00:50:104 - ^
00:50:919 (1) - Same as kantan

[Muzukashii]

00:17:169 - Move this 1/2 to the right, follows the vocals
00:17:495 - // You can move this 1/2 to the right as well if you did ^ //
Same for the rest of this part, but keep if you want some variety
00:50:919 (1) - Spinner blah

[Oni]

Help idk how to mod Oni

00:40:403 - // You can add a kat here, it's not a difficult pattern for an Oni and follows the snares //

[Inker Oni]

Noice :)

ok.
yassu-
M4M

Kantan
・so fast ! change to SV1.20

・dkdkd is so hard?

・00:37:549 add d There is a noticeable sound.

・00:38:854 delete There is no noticeable sound.

Futsuu
・so fast ! change to SV1.2 or 1.3?

・OD change to 4.5?

・00:03:473 change to k fit to sounds

・00:14:886 delete 00:25:321 00:48:799 pattern

・00:20:756 change to d fit to voices

・00:54:343 change to k fit to sounds

・00:56:299 delete 00:05:430 pattern

・00:59:397 change to d fit to sounds

Muzukashii
・00:11:463 delete break

・00:21:897 delete break

・00:24:995(95,96) delete break and 00:14:560 00:24:995 pattern

・00:34:778 change to k fit to voices

・00:31:680(117,118,119,120,121,122) change to dkd kkd fit to sounds

・00:59:397 change to d ^

Oni
・OD change to 5.5?

・00:14:805 delete fit to following Muzukashii.

・00:25:240 delete ^

・00:48:718 delete ^

・00:24:669 delete 00:14:234 pattern

・00:47:658(251,252,253) change to k fit to sounds

・00:54:180 change to k ^

Inner Oni
・00:35:104 change to k fit to voices

・00:43:093 change to d 00:40:484 pattern

・00:45:702 change to d ^

・nice map ;3

good lack~ :D
Topic Starter
OzzyOzrock

bank78952 wrote:

hi o/
oh evil map D: //runs
[General]
Uncheck widescreen support
[Inker oni]
00:21:897 (188) - k is better?
00:23:854 (203) - k to follow vocal?
it's pure evil map //runs
[Oni]
00:08:528 (48,49) - k for follow vocal?
[Muzukashii]
00:42:441 (159,160,161) - k ?
00:42:767 (162) - d ?
00:47:658 (185,186,187) - k ?
00:47:984 (188) - d ?
Futsuu and kantan are fine for me im newble modder D:
no kuds if not helpful
didn't agree with any as far as what im following but thanks!

HimemiyaChikane wrote:

Hi for BN check.

[Inker Oni]
This diff is so awesome that I can't find a place to fix it!

[Oni]
00:07:060 (40) - delete?
00:09:669 (54) - ^
00:17:332 - add d?
00:19:941 - ^
00:22:549 - ^

[Muzukashii]
00:15:865 (65,66) - delete?
00:49:778 (193,194) - ^

I can't mod Kantan and Futsuu,sorry.

A excellent map in my view!Good luck for ranking!
Oni made me consider some things, but otherwise the changes kind of disrupt some structure.

bbj0920 wrote:

placeholder #2

NOW OR NEVER IKUTSU MONO NOW OR NEVER MEMORY WO o shit wrong song

Kantan
nothing to really poke at.

Futsuu
w00t you gotta watch out for that density at the end

MuzuCA$Hii
density is kinda too much at the beginning and the end part, but I guess it's okay because the spread works

Oni
nothing to really poke at.

The diffname that makes OnosakiHito pretty mad
00:05:267 (50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - ddkdkdkk or ddkdkdkd would fit better imo (I'd suggest the latter)
00:30:049 (246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270) -
How about making it like
d ddk dkd ddk dk
d ddk kkd ddk kk
d
00:35:267 (282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300) - ^

damn the set is pretty sweet already, get BNs
did the inker oni change!

Midnaait wrote:

modding because i need kds

d=don k... you know this stuff
// //= Suggestion

[General]

Go disable widescreen support kek
Use these BG coordinates, Callie's head is a bit covered by the playfield lol

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"allBGsforthissongarebad.jpg",0,50


[Kantan]

00:37:549 - Add a d here? It is not too difficult and follows the melody and a kick
00:39:180 (73) - // Change to d? The melody goes lower here //
00:50:919 - This spinner is weird imo, but it's okay

[Futsuu]

00:26:626 - Remove for consistency with previous pattern?
00:50:104 - ^
00:50:919 (1) - Same as kantan

[Muzukashii]

00:17:169 - Move this 1/2 to the right, follows the vocals
00:17:495 - // You can move this 1/2 to the right as well if you did ^ //
Same for the rest of this part, but keep if you want some variety
00:50:919 (1) - Spinner blah

[Oni]

Help idk how to mod Oni

00:40:403 - // You can add a kat here, it's not a difficult pattern for an Oni and follows the snares //

[Inker Oni]

Noice :)

ok.
removed that futsuu for consistency, changed bg location more, and those parts mentioned in muzu are meant to follow the bg rhythm, to vary it a little :B

yassu- wrote:

M4M

Kantan
・so fast ! change to SV1.20

・dkdkd is so hard?

・00:37:549 add d There is a noticeable sound.

・00:38:854 delete There is no noticeable sound.

Futsuu
・so fast ! change to SV1.2 or 1.3?

・OD change to 4.5?

・00:03:473 change to k fit to sounds

・00:14:886 delete 00:25:321 00:48:799 pattern

・00:20:756 change to d fit to voices

・00:54:343 change to k fit to sounds

・00:56:299 delete 00:05:430 pattern

・00:59:397 change to d fit to sounds

Muzukashii
・00:11:463 delete break

・00:21:897 delete break

・00:24:995(95,96) delete break and 00:14:560 00:24:995 pattern

・00:34:778 change to k fit to voices

・00:31:680(117,118,119,120,121,122) change to dkd kkd fit to sounds

・00:59:397 change to d ^

Oni
・OD change to 5.5?

・00:14:805 delete fit to following Muzukashii.

・00:25:240 delete ^

・00:48:718 delete ^

・00:24:669 delete 00:14:234 pattern

・00:47:658(251,252,253) change to k fit to sounds

・00:54:180 change to k ^

Inner Oni
・00:35:104 change to k fit to voices

・00:43:093 change to d 00:40:484 pattern

・00:45:702 change to d ^

・nice map ;3

good lack~ :D
made some breaks, made some color changes to vary nicely, and made some other changes. fitting voices is not my priority, but some rhythms were modified a little. thanks!

finally xd
Stefan
(´・ω・)

[NICE PUN M8]
00:01:354 - 00:06:571 - this is obligatory my personal opinion for this stream, barely a request to change it: I find the switch from ddkkddkk.. to dkkkdkkkk.. sorta weird, also the 2nd loop with dkddkdkkk... feels odd. for 00:02:658 - 00:03:881 - I tried kkddkkdd.. since the music had some reversal feeling from 00:01:354 - 00:02:577 - to 00:02:658 - 00:03:881 - . Another idea would be kdddk instead of dkkkd.
00:19:126 (167) - Shouldn't the note be on 00:18:963 - instead? I feel the break comes too early and kicks you out of the flow.
00:57:441 - since it's the end it obviously should be different - which happened here. for my person, I tried kkkdk, the kkk fits pretty well to the light sound while I don't find dkk soooo natural.

[Oni]
00:17:006 (95,96,97,98,99,100) - It's hard to declare what you're following with the dk k ddk rhythm, personally. I had kdk kddk in my mind: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/9LGTuFxW.png It goes well with the vocals. (Repeat this for the other three loops)

cute

[Muzukashii]
00:17:006 (69,70,71) - well. It's the same like Oni: move 00:17:495 (71) - to 00:17:658 - and add k on 00:17:332 - . Repeat this.

the begin of the map bothers me personally but it's objectively fine.

[Futsuu/Kantan]
Yeah, leave it like that. That's okay.


TOO BAD I SUCK
wish I could bubble this already..
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