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[Normal]
00:15:655 (2)I'd consider blanketing like this
or consider doing this. Whichever suits you more.
In both cases, make sure the second slider is copied, and ctrl j+h'd from the 1st slider. Also, make the sliders symmetrical.
00:22:766 (1,2)Again, make your sliders symmetrical. For (1), put the anchor points to (x|y): Head: 316|156, Mddle: 344|100, Tail: 316|44. Then copy the second slider, ctrl+h and ctrl+j
00:24:544 (1)Symmetrical slider It's okay there
00:45:210 (3)I'd consider moving this to the previous white tick at 00:44:988 since she says "things" and a note should be here... Then put a note at 00:45:432. So it will become something like this. Changed
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00:48:544
00:50:321
00:55:432
00:57:210 These are all melodious beats but no notes are put in it. Consider putting sliders or notes here, or make similiar patterns from the ones pointed above.
01:00:655 (2)Move this note to 01:00:692 instead so that it matches 1/3 instead of 1/12. It doesn't o:
01:04:210 (2)Move to 01:04:247 why ? I think you made an error
01:07:210 (1,2,3)Make the patterns similiar to the patterns before instead as this will catch even a hard player off-guard.
00:15:655 (2)I'd consider blanketing like this
or consider doing this. Whichever suits you more.
In both cases, make sure the second slider is copied, and ctrl j+h'd from the 1st slider. Also, make the sliders symmetrical.
00:22:766 (1,2)Again, make your sliders symmetrical. For (1), put the anchor points to (x|y): Head: 316|156, Mddle: 344|100, Tail: 316|44. Then copy the second slider, ctrl+h and ctrl+j
00:24:544 (1)Symmetrical slider It's okay there
00:45:210 (3)I'd consider moving this to the previous white tick at 00:44:988 since she says "things" and a note should be here... Then put a note at 00:45:432. So it will become something like this. Changed
00:46:766
00:48:544
00:50:321
00:55:432
00:57:210 These are all melodious beats but no notes are put in it. Consider putting sliders or notes here, or make similiar patterns from the ones pointed above.
01:00:655 (2)Move this note to 01:00:692 instead so that it matches 1/3 instead of 1/12. It doesn't o:
01:04:210 (2)Move to 01:04:247 why ? I think you made an error
01:07:210 (1,2,3)Make the patterns similiar to the patterns before instead as this will catch even a hard player off-guard.
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[Advanced]
Distance snap fixed
00:18:321 (3)Fix the overlap. Completely readable imo
00:31:655 (1)This overlap with the previous note makes it sloppy... Consider this. yeah
00:58:321 (5)NC
Distance snap fixed
00:18:321 (3)Fix the overlap. Completely readable imo
00:31:655 (1)This overlap with the previous note makes it sloppy... Consider this. yeah
00:58:321 (5)NC
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[Hard]
00:20:988 (1,2)The slider from 2 is symmetrical, so I advise you to copy 2's slider, flip it ctrl+h and j to replace 1's slider.
01:04:544 (4,5,6,7)This part is even tricky for insane players... Consider this Waiting for other opinions, I really think it's fine
01:12:544 (1,2)Consider this instead. ?
01:19:655 (1,2)These sliders are too tricky. Consider a clearer flow like this I think it's fine again (;
00:20:988 (1,2)The slider from 2 is symmetrical, so I advise you to copy 2's slider, flip it ctrl+h and j to replace 1's slider.
01:04:544 (4,5,6,7)This part is even tricky for insane players... Consider this Waiting for other opinions, I really think it's fine
01:12:544 (1,2)Consider this instead. ?
01:19:655 (1,2)These sliders are too tricky. Consider a clearer flow like this I think it's fine again (;
Thanks !