00:01:069 (1,2,3) - the slider is a bit too curvy and out of place, I would do something like
this00:02:127 (4,1,2) - blanket it properly like
this00:03:892 (1,2) - this is better but still I would fix blanket
00:06:716 (1,2,3) -
this just looks better as a whole, also it feels snappier.
00:10:951 (1) - the tip just looks questionable, I wouldn't do that unless it's a 90 degree angle direction change, try
this instead
00:11:657 (3,4,1) - very hard to tell that they are 3/4 sliders, overlap them and also blanket it properly
00:15:892 (3,4,5) - if you are going to curve it do it properly, don't just copy and paste, treat it as if it is one slider, go for something like
this00:19:068 (6,1) - if you're going to make 1 angled, might as well do it to 6 and straighten the triple. like
this00:23:657 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - can you make hitsound more consistent?
00:23:657 (1) - too curvy, straighten it a bit more like
this00:26:480 (1) - ^
00:27:892 (1,4) - ^, also copy and paste one slider, so they match it curvature
00:29:304 (1) - Symmetry problem, also try different slider shape
00:30:716 (1) - ^
00:41:304 (4,1) - not sure if these two should blanket but either blanket it, wind mill it, or don't overlap it at all. 00:41:657 (5,2) - this you windmill it so I suggest you do the same with 00:41:304 (4,1) -
00:43:068 (5,1) - proper blanket plz
00:44:127 (1) - copy 00:44:833 (1) -, ctrl h and then replace the existing slider at 00:44:127 (1) - overall looks better imo:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4706928 00:45:539 (5,6,1) - spacing too large, slider leniency can be abused but at this star difficulty this is too large, I mean it is larger than your previous jumps which are 1/2 apart.
00:54:363 (1,2) -
this looks better imo
01:00:363 (1) - I perfer
this, which is just a slight change
01:04:951 (2) - curve
or make it overlap with 01:04:598 (1) -. IF you overlap it do the same with 01:06:010 (1,2) -
01:08:480 (8,1) - ^ wts with the inconsistent spacing
01:14:392 (8,1) - ^ if you're going to space them this far out at least do it like
this just to make it look a bit better (yea copy 7, paste and ctrl j to get 1)
01:24:363 (1,2,3) - make these parallel
01:27:186 (1,2) - try
this